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焦点09 书面表达 备战2025年中考英语新课标（核心素养）一轮复习之题型特训 【基础题】 A 俗话说得好：“身体是革命的本钱”。我们每个人都是自己健康的第一责任人。那么在日常生活中，我们可以从哪些方面来爱护自己的身体呢？为此学校组织了一次演讲比赛，主题为“我的健康我做主”。请你参考以下思维导图，写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括： 1. 阐述健康的重要性；         2. 讲述自己的相关经历及感受； 3. 提出相关的建议。 要求： 1. 词数不少于 80 词，首尾句已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名； 3. 参考词汇仅供参考。 Dear teachers and students, Good morning! Today the topic of my speech is “Everyone should be responsible for his health”.________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you very much for your attention! B 为了丰富校园生活，学校英语社团开展了征文活动。假定你是李华，请根据下面表格内容提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的日常劳动情况，并谈谈劳动给你带来的益处，词数90左右。 Name Li Hua From Class 1, Grade 9 Some labor activities At home set the table wash the dishes ... At school water flowers tidy the lab ... Benefit (益处) develop good working habits ... 要求： 1. 必须涵盖所有提示内容，可适当拓展； 2. 语句流畅，语义连贯，书写无误； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ C 假如你是某中学英文报的小记者，最近你就“食物浪费有多严重？”这一问题在校食堂展开调查，发现中学生食物浪费现象触目惊心。请你用英语写一份倡议书，号召全校学生珍惜粮食，勤俭节约，杜绝“舌尖上的浪费”。 要点： 1. 描述食物浪费这一现象； 2. 提出如何减少食物浪费的建议； 3. 发出倡议。 要求： 1. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 2. 词数80左右。 参考词汇：leftovers剩菜剩饭 get the right amount of food取适量食物 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【提升题】 A 假如下周英语课上，老师要求你们围绕“科技改变生活”这一主题进行发言，你打算介绍你的一款小米智能音箱。请你根据以下图文提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，为口语课上的发言做准备。 长宽高：108mm×108mm×88mm 重量：564g 颜色和材质：黑色，塑料 功能（functions）： *提供路况、天气等信息 *播放音乐、讲故事等 *语音控制其他家电（household appliances） 要求： 1. 发言稿需包括图中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺； 3. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Today I’d like to introduce my Xiaomi Smart Speaker to all of you.___________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B 春节贺岁片《热辣滚烫》备受关注，女主角杜乐莹的扮演者贾玲成功减掉整整100斤，付出了巨大的艰辛和努力，苦苦坚持练习拳击，最终成功减肥，她实现了“我想赢一次”的愿望。银幕最后字幕部分展现了贾玲一年中减肥日记，再次把减肥话题带到人们日常聊天中。英语课上，大家也就减肥这个话题进行了讨论，是通过节食减肥好呢？还是通过锻炼减肥好？请你用英语以“Will you lose weight by dieting or by exercising?”为题写一篇短文，表达一下你的观点，以及你打算怎样减肥。 要求：120词左右，文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。 Will you lose weight by dieting or by exercising? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ C “假期是一条神奇的时光隧道，可以偷回一点点空闲时光。”假设你是李华，寒假即将来临，请你给你的笔友Tom写一封信，告诉他你寒假的安排，并询问他的寒假计划。内容包括： 计划 1. 完成学校作业，复习上学期的知识，预习下学期的内容。 2. 阅读一些有趣的书籍，提高阅读能力。 3. 参加一些体育锻炼，如跑步、打球等，保持身体健康。 4. 和家人一起为春节准备各种事宜。走亲访友，享受节日的欢乐。 5. ……（至少一条） 要求： 1. 内容须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 4. 字数：90字左右。 参考词汇：预习preview Dear Tom, How time flies! The winter holiday is coming.____________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your winter holiday plans? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Li Hua 【拔高题】 A 假如你是李华，你们学校的美国交换生Tim要到一位中国朋友家吃晚饭，他不懂中国的做客礼仪，向你寻求建议；请你根据下面内容提示，给他写一封回信。 内容包括： 1. 见面礼仪：准时到朋友家，第一次见面时微笑、握手； 2. 餐桌礼仪：用筷子就餐，就餐时不能用筷子指着别人，就餐时不可以多说话，当吃饱时有礼貌的回绝等。 3. 离开时要对主人表示感谢。 参考词汇：握手shake hands；筷子chopsticks；指向point at 要求： 1. 词数80—100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Tim, I’m glad to hear that you’ve been invited to a Chinese friend’s house for dinner. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs.__________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     Best wishes, Li Hua B 2024年12月24日，中央广播电视总台《2025年春节联欢晚会》官宣四地分会场，重庆从众多城市中脱颖而出，向世界彰显国际风范。重庆，这座充满魅力的山城，在岁月的流转中不断发生着变化。请结合你的观察和感受，描述重庆在各个方面的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。 要求： 1.80-120 词； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Environment· less pollution · plant trees· fresher, cleaner, clearer Transportation· ring roads, subway · convenient, efficient · various, faster Living conditions· taller and brighter buildings · medical care · satisfy people’s needs ... _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ C 户外运动能够丰富学生的课余生活，开拓他们的视野，但是许多中学生并不重视户外运动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。 参考词汇： habit, spend, colorful, develop, progress,… 要求： 1.短文必须包括所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 At present, only a few students do some outdoor activities after class. Here are several reasons.________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 焦点09 书面表达 备战2025年中考英语新课标（核心素养）一轮复习之题型特训 【基础题】 A 俗话说得好：“身体是革命的本钱”。我们每个人都是自己健康的第一责任人。那么在日常生活中，我们可以从哪些方面来爱护自己的身体呢？为此学校组织了一次演讲比赛，主题为“我的健康我做主”。请你参考以下思维导图，写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括： 1. 阐述健康的重要性；         2. 讲述自己的相关经历及感受； 3. 提出相关的建议。 要求： 1. 词数不少于 80 词，首尾句已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名； 3. 参考词汇仅供参考。 Dear teachers and students, Good morning! Today the topic of my speech is “Everyone should be responsible for his health”.________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you very much for your attention! 【答案】 Dear teachers and students, Good morning! Today the topic of my speech is “Everyone should be responsible for his health”. As the saying goes, “Health is wealth.” Keeping healthy has a positive effect on our life. I have a deeper understanding of its importance now. Last month, I had a bad cold and I felt uncomfortable. But my father was safe, because he kept regular exercise. So after I recovered, I practised running every morning with my father. After two months’ exercise, I felt stronger and more energetic. A healthy body benefits us. Besides regular exercise, here are some useful tips to keep fit. Firstly, eat well. We need to keep a balanced diet. Moreover, enough sleep is also important. It makes our bodies full of energy and our minds awake. If we pay more attention to the tips, we will live a healthier life. That’s all! Thank you very much for your attention! 【难度】0.85 【知识点】意见/建议、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ① 本文是一篇讲稿。 ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”,讲述过去的经历时用“一般过去时”。 ③ 提示：参考已给出的要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接给出的开头，表示健康很重要； 第二步，讲述自己过去的经历及自己的感受和行动； 第三步，给出保持健康的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①As the saying goes俗话说 ②has a positive effect on对……有积极的影响 ③practised running练习跑步 ④keep fit保持健康 ⑤full of energy充满能量 [高分句型] ① But my father was safe, because he kept regular exercise. (because引导的原因状语从句) ② If we pay more attention to the tips, we will live a healthier life. (If引导的条件状语从句) B 为了丰富校园生活，学校英语社团开展了征文活动。假定你是李华，请根据下面表格内容提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的日常劳动情况，并谈谈劳动给你带来的益处，词数90左右。 Name Li Hua From Class 1, Grade 9 Some labor activities At home set the table wash the dishes ... At school water flowers tidy the lab ... Benefit (益处) develop good working habits ... 要求： 1. 必须涵盖所有提示内容，可适当拓展； 2. 语句流畅，语义连贯，书写无误； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My name is Li Hua. I’m in Class 1, Grade 9. I’m glad to introduce my daily labor activities. I help my mother cook meals, set the table and wash the dishes at home, because I think each member of a family should share the housework. As a student, it’s our duty to make our school clean and beautiful. So I often clean the classroom, tidy the labs and water flowers. By doing labor activities, I can not only develop good working habits but also understand the importance of labor. 【难度】0.85 【知识点】个人信息 【详解】【总体分析】 题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 时态：一般现在时。 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏表格中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。 【写作步骤】 第一步，自我介绍及自己参与的日常劳动活动。 第二步，描述在家和在校进行的具体劳动活动。 第三步，阐述劳动带来的益处并总结。 【亮点词汇】 ①as a student 作为一个学生 ②It’s one’s duty to do sth. 做某事是某人的责任 【高分句型】 I can not only develop good working habits but also understand the importance of labor. (not only…but also…不仅……而且……，用于连接两个并列的成分) C 假如你是某中学英文报的小记者，最近你就“食物浪费有多严重？”这一问题在校食堂展开调查，发现中学生食物浪费现象触目惊心。请你用英语写一份倡议书，号召全校学生珍惜粮食，勤俭节约，杜绝“舌尖上的浪费”。 要点： 1. 描述食物浪费这一现象； 2. 提出如何减少食物浪费的建议； 3. 发出倡议。 要求： 1. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 2. 词数80左右。 参考词汇：leftovers剩菜剩饭 get the right amount of food取适量食物 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Students,   Recently, I conducted a survey on food waste in our school dining hall. The results were alarming. Many students leave a lot of leftovers, which is a big waste. To reduce this, I suggest we all try to get the right amount of food and avoid taking more than we need. Let’s cherish every grain of rice and be mindful of our consumption. Together, we can make a difference and stop wasting food.   Let’s act now! Sincerely, A concerned student 【难度】0.85 【知识点】节约与浪费 【详解】[总体分析] ①本文是一则倡议书。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意格式。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己发现学生在学校食堂留下很多剩饭剩菜的现象； 第二步，建议学生盛取适量的食物并珍惜每一粒米； 第三步，呼吁大家行动。 [亮点词汇] ①conducted a survey进行调查 ②a big waste巨大的浪费 ③make a difference产生影响 [高分句型] ①Many students leave a lot of leftovers, which is a big waste. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②Let’s cherish every grain of rice and be mindful of our consumption. (祈使句) 【提升题】 A 假如下周英语课上，老师要求你们围绕“科技改变生活”这一主题进行发言，你打算介绍你的一款小米智能音箱。请你根据以下图文提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，为口语课上的发言做准备。 长宽高：108mm×108mm×88mm 重量：564g 颜色和材质：黑色，塑料 功能（functions）： *提供路况、天气等信息 *播放音乐、讲故事等 *语音控制其他家电（household appliances） 要求： 1. 发言稿需包括图中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺； 3. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Today I’d like to introduce my Xiaomi Smart Speaker to all of you.___________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Today I’d like to introduce my Xiaomi Smart Speaker to all of you. It’s my “best friend” at home. It’s 108mm×108mm×88mm in size, which is not too large or too small, just the right size that can be easily placed on a table or shelf. It is shaped like a box and weighs around 564g. It’s black and made of plastic. This smart speaker is really useful. It can meet different needs. For example, I can get my information on traffic and weather conditions with it. I can listen to music and stories with it as well. With its clear sound, it offers me wonderful listening experiences. Besides, it’s more than just a speaker. It allows me to control other house hold appliances such as the air conditioner and TV by simply using my voice. My Xiaomi Smart Speaker has brought me so much pleasure. It saves my time and has made my life easier than ever. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】发明与创造、科学技术、通讯工具、通讯技术 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：发言稿需包括图中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍小米智能音箱的外观，重量、颜色、材质等。 第二步，具体介绍小米智能音箱的功能。 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①at home在家 ②be made of由……制成 ③listen to music听音乐 ④such as例如 [高分句型] ①It’s 108mm×108mm×88mm in size, which is not too large or too small, just the right size that can be easily placed on a table or shelf.（which引导的定语从句） ②It allows me to control other house hold appliances such as the air conditioner and TV by simply using my voice..（动词不定式作宾语补足语） B 春节贺岁片《热辣滚烫》备受关注，女主角杜乐莹的扮演者贾玲成功减掉整整100斤，付出了巨大的艰辛和努力，苦苦坚持练习拳击，最终成功减肥，她实现了“我想赢一次”的愿望。银幕最后字幕部分展现了贾玲一年中减肥日记，再次把减肥话题带到人们日常聊天中。英语课上，大家也就减肥这个话题进行了讨论，是通过节食减肥好呢？还是通过锻炼减肥好？请你用英语以“Will you lose weight by dieting or by exercising?”为题写一篇短文，表达一下你的观点，以及你打算怎样减肥。 要求：120词左右，文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称。 Will you lose weight by dieting or by exercising? _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Will you lose weight by dieting or by exercising? When it comes to weight loss, I firmly believe that losing weight by exercising is a more suitable way. Because getting more exercise not only makes us healthier and stronger, but also keeps our mind healthy. It is a good way to help with our studies and help us overcome difficulties in daily life as well. However, losing weight by dieting will make people get sick easily, which will influence our normal life. In the new year, I decide to do more exercise to keep in good shape. First, I plan to play basketball with my classmates after school at least three times a week. Second, I will take part in some outdoor activities on weekends, such as going hiking, climbing the mountains and so on. In a word, if I want to lose weight, I will do more exercise. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】方法/策略、健康与运动、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。 ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时。 ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明你的观点。 第二步，具体阐述在新的一年里你打算怎样保持一个健康的体型。 第三步，书写结语。再次强调自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ②at least至少 ③take part in参加 ④in a word总而言之 [高分句型] ①However, losing weight by dieting will make people get sick easily, which will influence our normal life. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ②In a word, if I want to lose weight, I will do more exercise. (if引导条件状语从句) C “假期是一条神奇的时光隧道，可以偷回一点点空闲时光。”假设你是李华，寒假即将来临，请你给你的笔友Tom写一封信，告诉他你寒假的安排，并询问他的寒假计划。内容包括： 计划 1. 完成学校作业，复习上学期的知识，预习下学期的内容。 2. 阅读一些有趣的书籍，提高阅读能力。 3. 参加一些体育锻炼，如跑步、打球等，保持身体健康。 4. 和家人一起为春节准备各种事宜。走亲访友，享受节日的欢乐。 5. ……（至少一条） 要求： 1. 内容须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 4. 字数：90字左右。 参考词汇：预习preview Dear Tom, How time flies! The winter holiday is coming.____________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your winter holiday plans? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tom, How time flies! The winter holiday is coming. I have made some plans. First, I will finish my schoolwork and review last term’s knowledge and preview next term’s content. Then, I plan to read some interesting books to improve my reading ability. Besides, I will do sports like running and playing ball games to keep healthy. Moreover, I will help my family prepare for the Spring Festival, visit relatives and friends and enjoy the festival fun. I will also learn to cook a delicious dish. What about your winter holiday plans? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Li Hua 【难度】0.65 【知识点】家人和亲人、计划、假日活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：本文以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍自己的寒假计划，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，表示自己寒假有一些计划； 第二步，详细介绍自己的寒假计划； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①made plans制定计划 ②plan to do sth.计划做某事 ③do sports做运动 ④prepare for准备…… [高分句型] ①First, I will finish my schoolwork and review last term’s knowledge and preview next term’s content.（and连接动词短语） ②I will do sports like running and playing ball games to keep healthy.（动名词作介词宾语） 【拔高题】 A 假如你是李华，你们学校的美国交换生Tim要到一位中国朋友家吃晚饭，他不懂中国的做客礼仪，向你寻求建议；请你根据下面内容提示，给他写一封回信。 内容包括： 1. 见面礼仪：准时到朋友家，第一次见面时微笑、握手； 2. 餐桌礼仪：用筷子就餐，就餐时不能用筷子指着别人，就餐时不可以多说话，当吃饱时有礼貌的回绝等。 3. 离开时要对主人表示感谢。 参考词汇：握手shake hands；筷子chopsticks；指向point at 要求： 1. 词数80—100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 Dear Tim, I’m glad to hear that you’ve been invited to a Chinese friend’s house for dinner. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs.__________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Tim, I’m glad to hear that you’ve been invited to a Chinese friend’s house for dinner. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs.   Firstly, it’s important to arrive on time. When you first meet your friend’s family, smile and shake hands as a sign of respect and friendliness.    At the dinner table, you’ll be expected to use chopsticks. Remember, never point at anyone with your chopsticks as it’s considered rude. Also, try not to talk too much while eating. If you’ve had enough food, politely refuse more by saying something like, “Thank you, but I’m full.”    Before you leave, be sure to thank your host for the wonderful meal and their hospitality.    I hope these tips will help you have a pleasant dinner. If you have any other questions, feel free to ask. Best wishes, Li Hua 【难度】0.4 【知识点】饮食习俗、中华文化、意见/建议、礼仪与习俗 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回信； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山：引出要向他提供关于中国做客习俗的建议，为下文具体内容做铺垫； 第二步，介绍见面礼仪； 第三步，介绍餐桌礼仪； 第四步，介绍离开时需要注意的事项； 第三步，表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①point at 指着 ②be expected to do sth. 被期望做某事 [高分句型] ①I hope these tips will help you have a pleasant dinner. (宾语从句) ②If you have any other questions, feel free to ask. (if引导的条件状语从句) B 2024年12月24日，中央广播电视总台《2025年春节联欢晚会》官宣四地分会场，重庆从众多城市中脱颖而出，向世界彰显国际风范。重庆，这座充满魅力的山城，在岁月的流转中不断发生着变化。请结合你的观察和感受，描述重庆在各个方面的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。 要求： 1.80-120 词； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Environment· less pollution · plant trees· fresher, cleaner, clearer Transportation· ring roads, subway · convenient, efficient · various, faster Living conditions· taller and brighter buildings · medical care · satisfy people’s needs ... _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Chongqing has witnessed remarkable changes in recent years. In terms of environment, tree planting has made the air fresher and cleaner, while pollution has been greatly reduced. Regarding transportation, the construction of ring roads and subways has made travel more convenient, efficient, and diverse. As for living conditions, taller and brighter buildings have risen, and medical care has been greatly improved, meeting people’s needs. These changes not only enhance the city’s international image but also significantly improve residents’ quality of life, bringing them greater convenience and comfort. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】城市、家乡变化 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“现在完成时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍重庆变化很大，引出主题； 第二步，根据题干表格的要点，详细介绍环境、交通和生活条件三个方面的变化； 第三步，阐明这些变化对居民生活和城市形象的积极影响，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①in terms of在……方面 ②as for至于 [高分句型] These changes not only enhance the city’s international image but also significantly improve residents’ quality of life, bringing them greater convenience and comfort.（not only…but also） C 户外运动能够丰富学生的课余生活，开拓他们的视野，但是许多中学生并不重视户外运动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。 参考词汇： habit, spend, colorful, develop, progress,… 要求： 1.短文必须包括所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 At present, only a few students do some outdoor activities after class. Here are several reasons.________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 At present, only a few students do some outdoor activities after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students don’t have the habit of doing outdoor activities. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet than do some outdoor sports in the playground. However, doing outdoor activities plays an important role in our life. Doing it is good for our eyes. Besides, it can help us build up our body so that we can grow up better. Last but not least, doing outdoor activities can make our life more colorful and meaningful. It is a good idea for school to establish the sport club so that students can do more sports. At the same time, students should develop a good habit of doing exercise. Only by doing this, can we grow up more healthily and make greater progress. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】锻炼/健身（个人）、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题； 第二步，根据题干思维导图的要点，详细描述做户外运动的理由以及好处； 第三步，给出自己的建议，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②play an important role in在某方面起重要作用 [高分句型] ①Besides, it can help us build up our body so that we can grow up better.（结果状语从句） ②Only by doing this, can we grow up more healthily and make greater progress.（倒装句） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$