专题09 读后续写 (解读+变式+技巧+模拟) -2025年1月“八省联考”英语真题完全解读与考后提升

2025年1月“八省联考”英语真题完全解读与考后提升 专题09 读后续写 (解读+词汇+变式+技巧+模拟) 原卷版 真题变式方向：词形转换，高频词快，野生动物保护，人与自然/社会，生活故事 ( 原题呈现 ) 读后续写关键词：记叙文,人与自然/社会,野生动物保护，生活故事，女孩子挑战自我，接触陌生人 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night. 在费城开会，想参加动物筹款活动。 I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off. 本想待在室内，后来决定出门去剧院。 It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers — very big, tough-looking bikers. 天黑出发，剧院门口遇到一群骑手。 I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men — all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club — standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event? 孤身遇骑手，心生警惕起疑惑。 A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over. 确定地方正确，决定进剧院躲避骑手。 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150个左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 答案解析 ) 【解析】 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在费城参加会议期间，看到酒店附近剧院有一场关于动物救助站救助流浪狗的纪录片放映及筹款活动，作者因喜爱动物想去参加，却在剧院外看到一群看起来凶巴巴的摩托骑手，犹豫后还是进入剧院，希望电影结束时骑手们已离开。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句 “我匆匆走进剧院，却发现里面有更多的骑手。” 可知，第一段可描写作者进入剧院后，面对更多骑手时内心的忐忑、不安，以及所采取的试图让自己安全、不引人注意的行动，比如找角落座位、紧紧抓包、频繁观察骑手等，展现当时紧张氛围。 ②由第二段首句“电影开始时，我意识到这些骑手是一个动物救援组织。” 可知，第二段可描写电影播放过程中作者看到骑手们被纪录片触动的表现，以及中场休息时骑手们与作者友好互动的情景，体现出骑手们外表与内心的反差，突显温暖主题。 2. 续写线索：进入剧院，遇到更多骑手——内心恐惧找座躲避——电影开场，知晓骑手身份——观影中骑手真情流露——中场休息友好交流 3. 词汇激活： 行为类： ①紧握：clutch/grab/grasp/seize ②偷看：peek at/steal a look at/glance at ③支持：support/back/uphold/advocate 情绪类： ①感动：moved/touched/affected ②羞愧：ashamed/embarrassed 【点睛】【高分句型1】Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和what引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语作状语和宾语补足语) ( 考点变式 ) 一、高频词类转换 1. abandon vt.→adj. ____________ 2. rest n.→adj. ____________ 3. particular adj.→adv. ____________ 4. danger n.→adj. ____________ 5. enthusiastic adj.→ n. ____________ 6. hopeful adj.→adv. ____________ 22 / 22 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 二、考纲识词知意 1.conference n. ____________ 2.documentary n. ____________ 3.shelter n. ____________ 4.urge n. ____________ 5.fundraising n. ____________ 6.block n. ____________ 7.desert vt. ____________ 8.tough-looking adj. ____________ 9.motorcycle n. ____________ 10.neighborhood n. ____________ 11.indicate vt. ____________ 12.pound vt. ____________ 13.misread vt. ____________ 14.nevertheless adv. ____________ 三、高频词块默写 1.feel an urge to do sth ____________ 2.gather up ____________ 3.set off ____________ 4.manage to do ____________ 5.in shock ____________ 6.in this case ____________ 7.instead of ____________ 8.by the time ____________ 四、真题单句填空 1. I was in Philadelphia for a conference _________ I saw an ad in the hotel. 2. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters _________ were helping to save _________(abandon) dogs across the country. 3. I love animals, and I felt an urge _________(go) to this fundraising event. 4. However, _________ of my co-workers would go with me, and I _________(worry) about walking on the street alone at night. 5. I resigned myself to _________(spend) the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and _________(bore). 6. The theater _________ the event was taking place was only about five _________(block) from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly _________(danger). So I decided _________(brave) it. 7. I _________(gather) up my wallet and room key and set off. It was already getting dark _________ the streets were nearly deserted. 8. I managed _________(find) the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped _________ shock. 9. In front of the theater _________(be) a group of bikers — very big, tough-looking bikers. 10. I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. _________, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood and there were twenty large men _________(stand) before me. 11. Warning _________(bell) began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event? 12. A sign outside the theater told me that I _________(be) in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of _________(walk) through that crowd of bikers. 13. I finally decided that I would be _________(safe) inside the theater. _________(hopeful), the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over. ( 2024年新课标I卷 ) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry." 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 深度剖析 ) 一、知故事大意 阅读材料讲述了作者在费城出差时，看到一则关于当地动物救助组织的纪录片宣传广告。由于不愿独自一人外出，作者本打算在酒店房间度过这个晚上。然而，在感到无聊后，作者鼓起勇气前往剧院观看纪录片，但在剧院前遇到了一个由许多大块头骑士组成的团体。作者一开始感到非常紧张，认为自己可能会遇到麻烦，甚至有点后悔自己的决定。尽管如此，作者最终决定进入剧院，希望能安全观看电影。续写部分要求构思作者进入剧院后发生的事情，特别是揭示摩托车骑士的真实身份，以及作者是如何从恐惧转向安心。 二、审篇章段落 阅读材料由五段组成，各段段落大意如下： 第一段：作者在费城参加会议时，看到一个关于动物救助的纪录片广告，想去观看募捐活动，但由于没有同事陪伴，且担心独自外出，犹豫是否前往。 第二段：作者回到酒店后感到无聊和不安，决定克服恐惧，前往剧院。剧院距离酒店只有五个街区，周围环境看起来不危险，于是决定出发。 第三段：天色已晚，街道几乎空无一人。作者找到了剧院所在的街道，但转角后却被眼前的一群看起来强壮威猛的摩托车骑行者吓到。 第四段：虽然作者知道许多摩托车爱好者是友善的人，但此时作为一个独自女性，身处陌生的街区，面对一群身穿标志的摩托车骑行者，作者感到非常害怕，并开始怀疑自己是否来错了地方。 第五段：尽管感到害怕，作者看到剧院的标志确认自己来对了地方。她决定进入剧院，希望里面会更安全，并祈祷摩托车骑行者会离开。 三、定叙事结构 从结构上看，文章采用了“设悬念—解谜”的叙事方式。阅读材料部分通过详细描写作者的心理活动，尤其是对这群骑士的恐惧，制造了紧张氛围。而续写部分则要求合理构思情节解开这个谜团，让整个故事从紧张转为轻松，传递出一个积极向上的信息。续写部分要继续延续这个悬念并最终解答，保证故事有完整的闭环。 情节发展 故事细节 开端 (Beginning) 在费城的一家酒店，作者看到关于动物救助的募捐广告，决定去剧院观看。 发展 (Development) 在到达剧院时，作者看到一群摩托车骑士站在剧院门外，感到紧张和不安。 高潮 (Climax) 她决定进入剧院，但在剧院内，她发现里面有更多摩托车骑士，这让她更加困惑和不安。 结局 (Ending) 当电影开始后，作者发现这些摩托车骑士实际上是一个动物救助组织的成员，他们是来支持这次募捐活动的。 四、构写作思路 1.续写第一段写作思路 续写第一段的段落开头语是“我匆匆进入剧院，结果发现剧院里还有更多的摩托车骑士。”这暗示作者原本的恐惧没有完全消失，她进入剧院后发现情况并没有改善，反而有更多的骑士。这一段我们需要保持文章的紧张气氛和悬疑感，可通过环境的描写、作者的心理活动，以及骑士们的举止，来继续加强这种悬疑氛围。  2.续写第二段写作思路 续写第二段的段落开头语是“在电影开始后，我意识到这些骑士其实是一个动物救助组织的成员。” 在这一段的续写中，我们需要揭示这些骑士其实是参与动物救援活动的志愿者。可以通过对影片内容的描述、骑士们的行为等，让读者逐渐意识到他们并不是“坏人”，而是为了公益事业而聚集在一起。通过这个转折，消除之前的紧张氛围，并传达一种温暖和正能量。 步骤 分析 结果 找出矛盾冲突 故事中的主要矛盾是主人公的兴趣和安全担忧之间的对立，以及对陌生人外表的恐惧和内心勇气的冲突。主人公热爱动物，想去支持募捐活动，但她害怕独自一人前往陌生环境并面对看似威胁的骑士群体。 矛盾集中在兴趣与恐惧的对立以及偏见与真实情况的反差，通过勇气的表现推动情节发展，体现成长与突破自我。 分析情感转折 情感的转折从主人公初步犹豫到最终进入剧院，表现她对恐惧的克服。开始时她因骑士们的外表感到震惊和恐惧，但在克服内心的矛盾后，她选择了信任和坚持。最终，她发现骑士们实际上是动物救援组织的成员，这一情感转变突出了对陌生人和环境的重新认识。 情感转折体现在从不安与犹豫到勇气与突破，再到偏见消解后的温暖感动，推动了故事的情感递进和主题的升华。 推导主题 故事通过主人公从恐惧到勇气的成长，以及对骑士群体偏见的改变，探讨了勇气的力量和打破偏见的重要性。主人公不仅突破了自身的心理障碍，还感受到了陌生人善意的温暖，从中领悟到不应以貌取人。 主题为“勇气与善意”，强调克服内心恐惧的重要性以及通过行动理解和接纳他人的必要性，从而展现人际互动中信任与共鸣的力量。 ( 满分范文欣赏 xinshangshang ) 【满分范文01】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were sitting in groups, some talking in low voices while others quietly sipped on their drinks. Their tough appearance didn’t seem to match the peaceful atmosphere inside the theater. As I walked in, one of them smiled at me, which made me feel unexpectedly calm. I nervously scanned the room, but instead of angry looks, I was met with friendly glances. Still, I couldn’t shake the feeling that I was out of place. But then, the lights went down, and the film began.  When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The documentary showed their incredible efforts to save abandoned dogs, often risking their own safety to rescue animals from dangerous situations. The bikers appeared on screen, helping with the transportation and care of the dogs. I felt a wave of relief and admiration wash over me. They weren’t the tough, scary people I had first thought; instead, they were heroes, working to make the world a better place for the helpless animals.    【满分范文02】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. The room was dimly lit, and several large men in leather jackets sat scattered across the rows, their presence as imposing as it had been outside. I hesitated for a moment at the door, unsure whether I should stay or leave. The air felt heavy with uncertainty. As I stepped in, a couple of the bikers looked up and nodded at me, but none of them seemed threatening. Despite their tough appearance, they were quietly chatting among themselves, and I couldn’t shake the feeling that they weren’t as dangerous as they looked. Still, my heart was racing, and I tried to stay calm, hoping the situation would resolve itself soon. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The documentary showed images of these men working together to rescue abandoned dogs and bring them to safety. They were shown lovingly feeding and caring for the animals, their tough, rugged personalities blending seamlessly with their gentle actions. I couldn’t help but feel a sense of relief wash over me as I watched the film, realizing that these bikers were there for a noble cause. The fear I had felt earlier faded, replaced by a deep respect for their dedication and kindness.  【满分范文03】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. A wave of panic swept over me as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia. The leather jackets, heavy boots, and impolite stares made my heart pound even faster. Holding my wallet tightly I quickly seated myself at the back of the theater, trying to remain unnoticed. However, no sooner had I settled in than I noticed a biker carefully adjusting the projector and another gently petting a small dog by his side. Their unexpected actions planted a seed of doubt in my mind-maybe I had misjudged them. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. With the documentary on, the theater was filled with the soft music, and the bikers watched the film attentively. The documentary started with a story about how they had been traveling across states, rescuing dogs from tough situations. At the sight of scenes, my previous panic gave way to respect. After this experience, not only did I learn the lesson of not judging a person by 'their appearance, but also I was lucky enough to encounter a group of people contributing to making the world better for animals. 【满分范文04】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My heart sank and I felt like I had walked into a lion's den. They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every corner of the place. I quickly found an empty seat in a corner, trying to make myself as inconspicuous as possible. I kept stealing glances at them, still feeling extremely nervous. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They were here for the same reason as I was to support the animal shelters. They had organized this event to raise funds and awareness for the abandoned dogs. As I watched them watching the film with such passion and care in their eyes, I felt ashamed of my initial judgment. I was touched by their love for animals and glad that I hadn't let my fear stop me from coming. 【满分范文05】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. When I looked around the room and saw them sitting all over the seats, talking and laughing loudly, my heart sank. Fear took over me in an instant, so I held my wallet really tight and tried my best to go unnoticed. I carefully advanced, one step at a time, and eventually found my seat. My gaze quickly shifted from one biker to another and I spotted a cute dog paw print on their insignia. What kind of people were they on earth? Overwhelmed by a mixture of confusion and worry, I waited for the film to start. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. A huge wave of relief swept over me when I saw the rescue people in the documentary were wearing the same insignia with the tough-looking bikers. The film vividly showed  how much the bikers had done to save these animals. Seeing their hard work and dedication, I was deeply touched but feel a bit ashamed of my earlier fear. During the break, one of them even smiled at me and handed me a booklet about their rescue work. As the film ended and I walked out of the theater, I looked back at the bikers with newfound respect and admiration. 【满分范文06】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My heart sank and I felt panic washing over me, regretting that I should have rushed back to the hotel. But soon, surprised and amazed, I noticed that they were all in an orderly manner. Some were chatting quietly about the dogs (that) they had rescued, presenting a rather harmonious atmosphere. Taking a deep breath, I managed to find an empty seat as far away from them as possible. Still nervous as I was, I tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. Little had I known that they were here for the same reason as me - to support the local animal shelters. With the film being played, the scenes where the tough-looking bikers endeavored to save the abandoned dogs came into my view. Instantly, my previous fear was replaced by considerable guilt and shame as I realized what the insignia stood for. Touched by their passion and kindness, I approached them after the film and expressed my admiration and respect. It was through this brave adventure that I got acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers, who were tough outside but tender inside. 【满分范文06】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. The dim glow of the theater lights illuminated rows of leather-clad figures, their insignias catching the faint gleam as they murmured among themselves. I froze for a moment, the anxiety in my chest threatening to turn me around. Yet, I steeled myself and slid into a seat at the back, my heart pounding like a drum. The rumble of their voices blended with soft laughter, an unexpected contrast to their intimidating appearances. As I stole glances at the bikers, something unexpected caught my eye: a scruffy dog nestled at one man’s feet, its tail wagging contentedly. Another biker leaned down to scratch behind its ears, his rugged hands moving with surprising tenderness. Had I misjudged them completely? Still on edge, I waited silently, curiosity mingling with nervous anticipation, as the lights dimmed and the screen lit up. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The screen illuminated scenes of these bikers navigating harsh conditions to save dogs abandoned in alleys or tied up in desolate backyards. Their rugged hands, capable of steering powerful motorcycles, now cradled fragile lives with astonishing care. My fear melted into admiration as their compassion unfolded before me, each rescue a testament to their courage. One scene showed a biker comforting a trembling dog, his soothing voice soft enough to calm even my own apprehensions. By the time the credits rolled, my perception of these men had shifted entirely. Gathering my courage, I approached one of them. “Thank you for what you do,” I said, my voice trembling. He grinned and replied, “We just do what’s right.” Walking back to my hotel, I realized that courage is not only about facing danger but also about breaking through fear to understand the goodness in others. 【满分范文07】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They gathered together in front of the screen, chatting with laughter. It seemed that they had made an appointment and decided to stir up trouble. The moment they approached, I got almost choked, hard to breath. Why did they come here? What did they want to do? Will they rob me? I clutched my wallet tightly, slipped my way to a dark corner and crouched down in the rear row. The light dimming down, I had no choice but to watch the film with a frightened heart. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The tough guys wearing insignia road their bikes across the city blocks like superheroes in the Marvel movies. Unable to contain my emotion, I was touched to tears. When the light lit up, I couldn’t help standing up and clapping for their incredible deeds. Laughter and cheer filled up the whole theater as if celebrating the victory of rescue. How shameful I felt for my holding prejudice toward this group of gentle bikers. It was not until then that I really understood “don’t judge a book by its cover”. ( 名校好题 调研 ) 续写线索：将要下雨--做好准备--提供热饮--义卖受欢迎--雨停--教练宣布好消息--作者感悟 【调研01】（24-25高三上·新疆乌鲁木齐·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 This summer my swim team had to run the Snack Stand to raise money for swim meets and equipment. But Coach Edward called us all together and said, “I just got word that the Snack Stand will be canceled through August.” No Snack Stand meant no money for swim meets! Coach Edward continued, “I’m just not sure what’s going to happen. For now, let’s jump into that pool and get swimming!” The next morning, practice felt really weird. None of us were swimming our best, and even though Coach Edward was smiling as usual, we could tell he was worried. When we got out of the pool for a break, Daniel, captain of our swimming team, said, “I’ ve been wondering if we can’t run the Snack Stand, maybe we can think of other ways to raise money.”“Good idea,” we all agreed. At first, Coach Edward wasn’t sure about doing a big fundraiser. But once he saw how much we all wanted to help, he said, “OK! Let’s go for it!” That’s when we started brainstorming ideas for the Big Stand. “We could have a Fun in the Sun Lemonade Stand,” I suggested. “I could bring my karaoke machine from home, and the songs could be about swimming and water, “said one team member. So many kids offered to make fish cookies. We spent so much time getting everything ready and were positive that it would be a grand success. I was squeezing lemons for lemonade the day before our big event when I saw a very dark cloud outside the kitchen window. “Uh-oh! That’s not a rain cloud, is it?” I asked my mom. “Rain would be a disaster! It could ruin everything.” “You know what they say,” she answered. “Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst. ”“Hmm,” I said. The next day, as soon as arriving at the pool grounds, Daniel and I set up our Fun in the Sun Lemonade Stand. We had stacks of cups, and a fancy drink filled with lemonade. The weather started out just fine. Even more people than we’d expected sang songs, and gobbled cookies. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Unluckily, a few clouds suddenly turned into a bunch of dark ones. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After a while, the rain let up, the sun popped back out, and Coach Edward made a fantastic announcement. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写线索：提出成立科学俱乐部--协调人印象深刻--获得批准--组织会议--获得成功--新计划 【调研02】（24-25高三上·甘肃白银·期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In the town of Eastview, the local community center had recently launched a “Neighbors Helping Neighbors” program aimed at building closer community ties and providing support to those in need. The program included a range of services such as meal deliveries, tutoring for students, and assistance with minor home repairs. Volunteers from the community were encouraged to sign up and contribute their skills and time to help improve the lives of their neighbors. Julia, a recent college graduate who had moved back to Eastview, decided to volunteer for the program. She saw it as a perfect opportunity to give back to the community that had supported her upbringing. Julia chose to focus on tutoring, as she had always excelled in math and science. She hoped to help students who were struggling in these subjects, providing them not just with academic support, but also with confidence in their abilities. On her first day as a tutor, Julia met with three students at the community center. She quickly established close ties with them, making the sessions interactive and fun. The Students, who had initially been apprehensive about the subject matter, began to show great interest. “Math can actually be fun when you understand it!” one of the students exclaimed, a smile spreading across his face as he solved a problem correctly. Julia’s success with the tutoring sessions spread through the community, and soon more students began to sign up. Seeing the positive impact she was making, Julia felt motivated to do more. She thought about other ways she could contribute to the “Neighbors Helping Neighbors” program, considering starting a science club. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Excited about the idea, Julia proposed the science club t to the volunteer program coordinators. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the program coordinators’ approval, Julia began organizing the first meeting of the science club. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写线索：感觉难以置信——医护人员为他安排——术后反应——感激 【调研03】（24-25高三上·辽宁沈阳·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 At 29 years old, Ephraim is very proud of the life he is living at the present time- he has a beautiful wife as well as two young sons and holds a steady job at the natural gas company. What he does at work is filling gas tanks of all kinds of vehicles. He has come to accept himself. However, he still remembers his hard childhood, which is full of teasing and bullying(欺凌). He still remembers that when he walked down the street, people would stare at his face. Why? This is because of the fact that Ephraim was born with a cleft lip(兔唇). He only attended school until he was 7 years old before he quit and never went back. Why did he do so? The reason was that the school children were so cruel to him. As a result of this, he would rather stay at home than deal with those school children bullying him because of his cleft condition. As Ephraim grew up, he gradually learned to be at peace with his cleft lip. And he did not know that his cleft lip could be fixed until recently. It was only a few weeks ago that Ephraim learned that an operation to repair his cleft lip was a possibility and that it could be done completely free of charge. An unknown gentleman visited the natural gas company where Ephraim has been working for years. And the gentleman told Ephraim about an organization which is called Operation Smile. He said the organization provides free cleft operations. The gentleman left Ephraim the phone number for Operation Smile before he said goodbye to Ephraim. As soon as the gentleman left, Ephraim called the number and learned about the upcoming medical group in Mbombela, which is a seven-hour bus journey from his home. 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Overjoyed, Ephraim made the bus trip alone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After a short operation, Ephraim was resting in his room with his amazing new smile. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写线索：谦卑地回应—继续传递爱心—当地记者采访—分享给老人送餐事迹—老人也加入活动—感悟 【调研04】（24-25高三上·四川·阶段练习）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Rhiannon Menn launched a movement to deliver lasagna (千层面) and love to struggling neighbors. Rhiannon Menn is the founder of Lasagna Love, a global nonprofit that connects neighbors through homemade meal delivery. In March 2022, she and her husband owned a design and building company, but their projects were put on hold. Rhiannon felt helpless and wondered what she could do to be useful. It didn’t take her long to decide. “Cooking is my happy place,” she says, She ordered groceries online and got to work. She and her daughter, Cimorene, then three, made extra pans of lasagna, and Rhiannon posted in a local moms’ group on social media, offering to drop off a free home-cooked meal to anyone who wanted one. Some people requested a meal, Even more wanted to help Rhiannon feed those who were struggling. Rhiannon created a spreadsheet for each volunteer, matching them with families who’d requested a meal. Word of what she was doing spread quickly on social media. Someone offered to create an online portal (门户网站) to manage the volunteers and meal requests. This automated system freed Rhiannon to do what she really loves: Cook and reach people in need. Volunteer chefs log in to the portal and input how many meals they’d like to deliver that week. The system matches them with nearby families requesting a meal, and the volunteer texts the family to set up a delivery time. The organization is called Lasagna Love, but volunteers can deliver any home-cooked meal they’d like. Rhiannon’s recipe is her own homemade lasagna, making it healthier with grated zucchini and yellow squash. “I’ve shared my recipe, but volunteers are welcome to use their own recipes for any dishes they’d like to make,” she says. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As years passed. Lasagna Love’s reach expanded beyond Rhiannon’s hometown, across the nation and even internationally. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When interviewed by the local journalist, Rhiannon Menn smiled with pride. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写线索：描述设计理念--合作制作垃圾桶--加传感器装饰--回收垃圾桶得赞赏--意识到团队合作的重要性 【调研05】（24-25高三上·山东济宁·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Our class recycling project will start next week. You can choose to do it alone or in pairs,” Mr. Lee, the science teacher, announced, “Your goal is to design a recycling corner that will increase recycling rates in our classroom. The best idea will be adopted school-wide.” The classroom erupted into enthusiastic chatter as students paired up and began their discussions. Being a nature and animal lover, Lucy’s dream was big. She imagined birds and fish thriving (茁壮成长) in a plastic-free environment, inspired by her hours spent observing wildlife at her favorite lake. “The first step toward a plastic-free habitat is fostering a recycling habit,” she thought, “I’m sure I can come up with a brilliant idea for the project!” Her daydreaming was interrupted by a light tap from her best friend, Max. “Do you still have that book on recycling? I’m sure there are many helpful tips that we could use for this project. Shall we work on this together?” Max inquired expectantly. Lucy recalled having read the library book the previous night and placing it on her bedside table. “Um ...” she hesitated, “I returned it this morning... and I’m thinking of working on this project alone.” “Oh, I see,” Max walked away, disappointed. The next day, Lucy started working on her project, a smart dustbin. Yes, she had a unique concept for the recycling bin but she struggled to construct it. The design required a standard of workmanship that was simply beyond her capability. Frustrated, she went for a walk downstairs. “Lucy?” she heard a familiar voice and looked up, surprised to find Max standing there. He had never witnessed her looking so disheartened before; she was walking heavily along with a discouraged expression, sighing deeply. Concerned, he called out to her. “What happened?” he asked gently. Guilt-ridden, she admitted lying about the book and apologized sincerely. Max forgave her readily. “Well, if you need a partner, all you have to do is ask!” Max replied, smiling. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 She did so, then excitedly described her design concept of the recycling bin. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Lucy and Max’s hard work paid off. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写线索：担忧又渴望加入--加入讨论--同学们认可--感到自信和融入--与同学建立联系--彼此改变--感悟 【调研06】（24-25高二上·四川·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 John was a shy child and often found himself alone at school. He used to suffer a lot. He rarely discussed anything in and after class or interacted with his teachers. It seemed that he preferred to stay in his own world. However, his classmates didn’t understand his quietness or interests and often didn’t invite him to take part in activities on purpose. In reality, however, John felt very lonely and was eager to connect with others, but didn’t know how to break down the barriers. He was dying to turn to someone for help. Sadly, John’s parents were too busy with daily chores (家务) to notice the change in him as he became quieter and more distant. Even when John gathered his courage to share his feelings, he was simply comforted by words like, “Go and get it. We know you can do it.” However, John was totally confused about how to pull himself out of this current situation. Sometimes, at home, he had no choice but to play his favorite jigsaw (拼图) in silence and avoid interacting with his parents. Gradually, he began to wonder if he was doing something wrong or if he really wasn’t good at making friends. He felt sad and started not to communicate with others. Luckily, John’s English teacher noticed his trouble and decided to step in to help. The teacher organized a class project after a math test, which seemed quite challenging for most students, but not for John. The teacher required the students to work together in groups to solve the problems and then he would invite someone to present their critical ideas on behalf of (代表) the group. The teacher then intentionally placed John in a group that was likely to give him confidence and encouraged him to show his strengths. 注意： 1. 续写总词数应为150左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1 At first, John hesitated, unsure of how to help. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 At the end of the project, John formed new connections with his classmates. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写线索：定期见面--分享讨论--支持鼓励--小说出版--送礼物表达感激--珍惜友情——迈向生活的新篇章 【调研07】（24-25高三上·陕西咸阳·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In the city of Oakridge, there was a small café — The Cozy Corner — known for its warm atmosphere and rich coffee. It was a favorite spot for the locals, where stories were shared and friendships formed over steaming cups and tasty snacks. One rainy afternoon, a man in his early thirties named Jack entered the café. He shook the raindrops off his umbrella and looked around to find a seat. Alice, one of the regular patrons (老主顾), watched curiously as he settled into a corner table, pulling out a notebook and a pen. A waitress approached with a warm smile. “Welcome! What would you like to drink?” she asked. Jack looked up, his eyes reflecting a sense of gratitude (感激). “Just the coffee, thanks,” he replied. As days turned into weeks, Jack started frequenting The Cozy Corner. He was always alone, drinking his coffee and writing something quickly in his notebook. He rarely spoke to anyone. One day, Alice stepped into the café again, sitting at the table next to Jack’s. She was leafing through a book with a thoughtful expression, occasionally taking a look at Jack’s table. A moment later, Alice gathered her courage and approached Jack. “Excuse me,” she began hesitantly, “I couldn’t help but notice you’ve been coming here a lot. You seem to be working on something important.” Jack looked up, surprised but curious, “Yes, I suppose I am. I’m trying to write a novel.” Alice’s eyes widened, “Really? That’s amazing! I’m Alice. Actually, I love reading novels. May I ask what your story is about?” Jack paused for a moment, and then nodded, “It’s about a man who loses everything and finds himself in a new city, struggling to rebuild his life. It’s a bit of a journey of self-discovery.” “I’d love to share ideas if you’re open to them,” Alice smiled. Jack’s eyes softened, “That sounds incredible. I’d like that. Thank you.” 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 From that day on, Jack and Alice met at the café regularly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Several months later, Jack’s novel was published. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写线索：站在家门口——敲门——妈妈开门——承认错误——沟通——拥抱 【调研08】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lucy was only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Heaving wandered in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand. She sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand, noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?” “Oh yes... but I don’t have money on me” she replied. “That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man. “Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Lucy cried silently. “What is it?” asked the man kindly. “Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Lucy. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thank me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were baby. Can you remember the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?” Lucy sat there speechless and numb with shock; she remembered mother’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.” On the way home Lucy made up his mind to make an apology to her mother for his rudeness as soon as she arrived home. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway, Lucy took a deep breath. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 续写线索：Lily的支持--逐渐恢复--分享经历--敞开心扉--Jessica反思--起勇气道歉--接受道歉--重新开始【调研09】（24-25高三上·重庆·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Having recently transferred to the high school, Emily felt like a ghost drifting through the hallways — unseen and unheard. Struggling to adapt to her new environment, she found herself isolated. A group of popular girls, led by Jessica, frequently made fun of her. They even threw insults at her intelligence, as if excelling in school was something to be ashamed of. To avoid adding more stress to her already overworked parents, Emily bottled up her feelings, swallowing the daily suffering like bitter medicine. One gray afternoon, after the final bell had rung and the last echoes of chatter had faded, Emily found her books and notebooks scattered in a dirty bin. With embarrassment burning her cheeks, tears welled up in her eyes, blurring her vision as she knelt to gather her belongings. Just then, Lily, a classmate who had always noticed Emily’s struggles but never intervened, approached and knelt beside her. “They’re just trying to feel better by making others feel worse,” Lily said softly, her voice like a gentle breeze on a suffocating day. Then, she handed Emily her notebooks, offering an understanding smile. Though touched by Lily’s kindness, Emily still felt the shadow hanging over her. Jessica and her friends tripped Emily in the hallways, pushed her in the lunch line, and even hid her gym shoes, laughing as she crazily searched for them. Each incident added to the weight pressing down on Emily’s chest. She began pretending to be sick, hoping to escape the torture that turned her school life into a daily nightmare. In an English class, the teacher assigned an essay titled “My Wish”. Emily poured her heart into the assignment and wrote about her longing for a true friend and the pain of feeling like an outsider, baring her soul on the page, exposing the raw wounds and the bullying she had endured. The teacher, noticing the weight of her words, realized what Emily had been going through. The school responded swiftly, taking measures to address the effects of bullying and organizing counseling sessions to help Emily rebuild her confidence. Throughout this time, Lily stayed by Emily’s side, becoming her pillar of strength. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Emily’s recovery began to show signs of progress with Lily’s support. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Also, the school’s ban on bullying made Jessica and her friends reflect. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $$2025年1月“八省联考”英语真题完全解读与考后提升 专题09 读后续写 (解读+词汇+变式+技巧+模拟) 解析版 真题变式方向：词形转换，高频词快，野生动物保护，人与自然/社会，生活故事 ( 原题呈现 ) 读后续写关键词：记叙文,人与自然/社会,野生动物保护，生活故事，女孩子挑战自我，接触陌生人 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night. 在费城开会，想参加动物筹款活动。 I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off. 本想待在室内，后来决定出门去剧院。 It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers — very big, tough-looking bikers. 天黑出发，剧院门口遇到一群骑手。 I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men — all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club — standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event? 孤身遇骑手，心生警惕起疑惑。 A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over. 确定地方正确，决定进剧院躲避骑手。 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150个左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 答案解析 ) I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every corner of the place. My heart sank even further. I quickly found an empty seat in the back row, trying to make myself as inconspicuous as possible. I clutched my bag tightly, constantly glancing around, praying that nothing bad would happen. Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. Were they going to cause trouble? The tension in the air was palpable, and I regretted my decision to come alone. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They had come to support the fundraiser for the local animal shelters. As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. They were as moved as I was by the heartwarming and heartbreaking stories. During the intermission, some of them even came over to me, smiling kindly and asking if I was enjoying the film. Their tough exteriors hid big, soft hearts. I felt ashamed of my initial fear and was truly grateful that I had decided to come. We spent the rest of the evening sharing our love for animals and discussing ways to help. 【解析】 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在费城参加会议期间，看到酒店附近剧院有一场关于动物救助站救助流浪狗的纪录片放映及筹款活动，作者因喜爱动物想去参加，却在剧院外看到一群看起来凶巴巴的摩托骑手，犹豫后还是进入剧院，希望电影结束时骑手们已离开。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句 “我匆匆走进剧院，却发现里面有更多的骑手。” 可知，第一段可描写作者进入剧院后，面对更多骑手时内心的忐忑、不安，以及所采取的试图让自己安全、不引人注意的行动，比如找角落座位、紧紧抓包、频繁观察骑手等，展现当时紧张氛围。 ②由第二段首句“电影开始时，我意识到这些骑手是一个动物救援组织。” 可知，第二段可描写电影播放过程中作者看到骑手们被纪录片触动的表现，以及中场休息时骑手们与作者友好互动的情景，体现出骑手们外表与内心的反差，突显温暖主题。 2. 续写线索：进入剧院，遇到更多骑手——内心恐惧找座躲避——电影开场，知晓骑手身份——观影中骑手真情流露——中场休息友好交流 3. 词汇激活： 行为类： ①紧握：clutch/grab/grasp/seize ②偷看：peek at/steal a look at/glance at ③支持：support/back/uphold/advocate 情绪类： ①感动：moved/touched/affected ②羞愧：ashamed/embarrassed 【点睛】【高分句型1】Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和what引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语作状语和宾语补足语) ( 考点变式 ) 一、高频词类转换 1. abandon vt.→adj. ____________ 2. rest n.→adj. ____________ 3. particular adj.→adv. ____________ 4. danger n.→adj. ____________ 5. enthusiastic adj.→ n. ____________ 6. hopeful adj.→adv. ____________ 【参考答案】 1. abandoned 2. restless 3. particularly 4. dangerous 5. enthusiast 6. hopefully 1 / 37 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 二、考纲识词知意 1.conference n. ____________ 2.documentary n. ____________ 3.shelter n. ____________ 4.urge n. ____________ 5.fundraising n. ____________ 6.block n. ____________ 7.desert vt. ____________ 8.tough-looking adj. ____________ 9.motorcycle n. ____________ 10.neighborhood n. ____________ 11.indicate vt. ____________ 12.pound vt. ____________ 13.misread vt. ____________ 14.nevertheless adv. ____________ 【参考答案】 1.会议2.纪录片3. 遮蔽物，庇护处4. 强烈的欲望，冲动；推动力5. 资金筹集，募捐6.一块（木料、石头等）；（四面临街的）街区；大楼；座，幢；障碍物7. 离弃，舍弃8. 外表强硬的9. 摩托车10. 街坊；接近；街区11.表明12. 连续重击，猛打；（心脏）剧烈地跳动13. 误解；看错；读错14. 然而，不过 三、高频词块默写 1.feel an urge to do sth ____________ 2.gather up ____________ 3.set off ____________ 4.manage to do ____________ 5.in shock ____________ 6.in this case ____________ 7.instead of ____________ 8.by the time ____________ 【参考答案】 1.感觉有干……冲动2.收拾好3.出发；点燃4.设法做到 5. 惊讶地6. 在这种情况下7.代替，而不是8.到……时候为止 四、真题单句填空 1. I was in Philadelphia for a conference _________ I saw an ad in the hotel. 2. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters _________ were helping to save _________(abandon) dogs across the country. 3. I love animals, and I felt an urge _________(go) to this fundraising event. 4. However, _________ of my co-workers would go with me, and I _________(worry) about walking on the street alone at night. 5. I resigned myself to _________(spend) the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and _________(bore). 6. The theater _________ the event was taking place was only about five _________(block) from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly _________(danger). So I decided _________(brave) it. 7. I _________(gather) up my wallet and room key and set off. It was already getting dark _________ the streets were nearly deserted. 8. I managed _________(find) the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped _________ shock. 9. In front of the theater _________(be) a group of bikers — very big, tough-looking bikers. 10. I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. _________, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood and there were twenty large men _________(stand) before me. 11. Warning _________(bell) began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event? 12. A sign outside the theater told me that I _________(be) in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of _________(walk) through that crowd of bikers. 13. I finally decided that I would be _________(safe) inside the theater. _________(hopeful), the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over. 【参考答案】 1. when 2. that/which, abandoned 3. to go 4. none, was worried 5. spending, bored 6. where, blocks, dangerous, to brave 7. gathered, and 8. to find, in 9. were 10. However, standing 11. bells 12. was, walking 13. safer, Hopefully ( 2024年新课标I卷 ) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry." 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do. Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus to Prague, I’ll be late for the conference which is so important that I can’t afford to miss it!” I explained. “May I have your phone number? I will call you and return the money I owe you. I promise I will keep my word or you keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. “Just keep your promise, Sir.” A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him. We chatted happily on the way to the airport. I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down. I also gave him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight. We became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter. 【解析】 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一次因风暴延误的旅途中，匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶最后一班去布拉格的公共汽车。司机冈特不熟悉车站位置，通过电话求助后顺利抵达。到达时作者却发现自己没带现金，尝试用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功，而车站的取款机也故障了。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我跑回到冈特那里，告诉他这个坏消息。”可知，第一段可描写作者留下冈特的电话，承诺会还钱给对方，冈特同意，最终作者及时登上了公共汽车。 ②由第二段首句内容“四天后，当我回到维也纳时，我按照承诺给冈特打了电话。”可知，第二段可描写作者付费给冈特，并向对方表示感激，两人成为了好朋友。 2.续写线索：作者给出解决办法——承诺还钱——冈特同意——作者登上公共汽车——履行承诺还钱——两人成为朋友 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①拒绝：reject/refuse ②给某人拥抱：give sb. a hug/embrace sb. ③记下，写下：write down/set down 情绪类 ①难以置信地：in disbelief/incredibly/unbelievably ②开心地：happily/joyfully 【点睛】【高分句型1】He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的限制性定语从句） ( 深度剖析 ) 一、知故事大意 阅读材料讲述了作者在费城出差时，看到一则关于当地动物救助组织的纪录片宣传广告。由于不愿独自一人外出，作者本打算在酒店房间度过这个晚上。然而，在感到无聊后，作者鼓起勇气前往剧院观看纪录片，但在剧院前遇到了一个由许多大块头骑士组成的团体。作者一开始感到非常紧张，认为自己可能会遇到麻烦，甚至有点后悔自己的决定。尽管如此，作者最终决定进入剧院，希望能安全观看电影。续写部分要求构思作者进入剧院后发生的事情，特别是揭示摩托车骑士的真实身份，以及作者是如何从恐惧转向安心。 二、审篇章段落 阅读材料由五段组成，各段段落大意如下： 第一段：作者在费城参加会议时，看到一个关于动物救助的纪录片广告，想去观看募捐活动，但由于没有同事陪伴，且担心独自外出，犹豫是否前往。 第二段：作者回到酒店后感到无聊和不安，决定克服恐惧，前往剧院。剧院距离酒店只有五个街区，周围环境看起来不危险，于是决定出发。 第三段：天色已晚，街道几乎空无一人。作者找到了剧院所在的街道，但转角后却被眼前的一群看起来强壮威猛的摩托车骑行者吓到。 第四段：虽然作者知道许多摩托车爱好者是友善的人，但此时作为一个独自女性，身处陌生的街区，面对一群身穿标志的摩托车骑行者，作者感到非常害怕，并开始怀疑自己是否来错了地方。 第五段：尽管感到害怕，作者看到剧院的标志确认自己来对了地方。她决定进入剧院，希望里面会更安全，并祈祷摩托车骑行者会离开。 三、定叙事结构 从结构上看，文章采用了“设悬念—解谜”的叙事方式。阅读材料部分通过详细描写作者的心理活动，尤其是对这群骑士的恐惧，制造了紧张氛围。而续写部分则要求合理构思情节解开这个谜团，让整个故事从紧张转为轻松，传递出一个积极向上的信息。续写部分要继续延续这个悬念并最终解答，保证故事有完整的闭环。 情节发展 故事细节 开端 (Beginning) 在费城的一家酒店，作者看到关于动物救助的募捐广告，决定去剧院观看。 发展 (Development) 在到达剧院时，作者看到一群摩托车骑士站在剧院门外，感到紧张和不安。 高潮 (Climax) 她决定进入剧院，但在剧院内，她发现里面有更多摩托车骑士，这让她更加困惑和不安。 结局 (Ending) 当电影开始后，作者发现这些摩托车骑士实际上是一个动物救助组织的成员，他们是来支持这次募捐活动的。 四、构写作思路 1.续写第一段写作思路 续写第一段的段落开头语是“我匆匆进入剧院，结果发现剧院里还有更多的摩托车骑士。”这暗示作者原本的恐惧没有完全消失，她进入剧院后发现情况并没有改善，反而有更多的骑士。这一段我们需要保持文章的紧张气氛和悬疑感，可通过环境的描写、作者的心理活动，以及骑士们的举止，来继续加强这种悬疑氛围。  2.续写第二段写作思路 续写第二段的段落开头语是“在电影开始后，我意识到这些骑士其实是一个动物救助组织的成员。” 在这一段的续写中，我们需要揭示这些骑士其实是参与动物救援活动的志愿者。可以通过对影片内容的描述、骑士们的行为等，让读者逐渐意识到他们并不是“坏人”，而是为了公益事业而聚集在一起。通过这个转折，消除之前的紧张氛围，并传达一种温暖和正能量。 步骤 分析 结果 找出矛盾冲突 故事中的主要矛盾是主人公的兴趣和安全担忧之间的对立，以及对陌生人外表的恐惧和内心勇气的冲突。主人公热爱动物，想去支持募捐活动，但她害怕独自一人前往陌生环境并面对看似威胁的骑士群体。 矛盾集中在兴趣与恐惧的对立以及偏见与真实情况的反差，通过勇气的表现推动情节发展，体现成长与突破自我。 分析情感转折 情感的转折从主人公初步犹豫到最终进入剧院，表现她对恐惧的克服。开始时她因骑士们的外表感到震惊和恐惧，但在克服内心的矛盾后，她选择了信任和坚持。最终，她发现骑士们实际上是动物救援组织的成员，这一情感转变突出了对陌生人和环境的重新认识。 情感转折体现在从不安与犹豫到勇气与突破，再到偏见消解后的温暖感动，推动了故事的情感递进和主题的升华。 推导主题 故事通过主人公从恐惧到勇气的成长，以及对骑士群体偏见的改变，探讨了勇气的力量和打破偏见的重要性。主人公不仅突破了自身的心理障碍，还感受到了陌生人善意的温暖，从中领悟到不应以貌取人。 主题为“勇气与善意”，强调克服内心恐惧的重要性以及通过行动理解和接纳他人的必要性，从而展现人际互动中信任与共鸣的力量。 ( 满分范文欣赏 xinshangshang ) 【满分范文01】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were sitting in groups, some talking in low voices while others quietly sipped on their drinks. Their tough appearance didn’t seem to match the peaceful atmosphere inside the theater. As I walked in, one of them smiled at me, which made me feel unexpectedly calm. I nervously scanned the room, but instead of angry looks, I was met with friendly glances. Still, I couldn’t shake the feeling that I was out of place. But then, the lights went down, and the film began.  When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The documentary showed their incredible efforts to save abandoned dogs, often risking their own safety to rescue animals from dangerous situations. The bikers appeared on screen, helping with the transportation and care of the dogs. I felt a wave of relief and admiration wash over me. They weren’t the tough, scary people I had first thought; instead, they were heroes, working to make the world a better place for the helpless animals.    【满分范文02】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. The room was dimly lit, and several large men in leather jackets sat scattered across the rows, their presence as imposing as it had been outside. I hesitated for a moment at the door, unsure whether I should stay or leave. The air felt heavy with uncertainty. As I stepped in, a couple of the bikers looked up and nodded at me, but none of them seemed threatening. Despite their tough appearance, they were quietly chatting among themselves, and I couldn’t shake the feeling that they weren’t as dangerous as they looked. Still, my heart was racing, and I tried to stay calm, hoping the situation would resolve itself soon. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The documentary showed images of these men working together to rescue abandoned dogs and bring them to safety. They were shown lovingly feeding and caring for the animals, their tough, rugged personalities blending seamlessly with their gentle actions. I couldn’t help but feel a sense of relief wash over me as I watched the film, realizing that these bikers were there for a noble cause. The fear I had felt earlier faded, replaced by a deep respect for their dedication and kindness.  【满分范文03】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. A wave of panic swept over me as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia. The leather jackets, heavy boots, and impolite stares made my heart pound even faster. Holding my wallet tightly I quickly seated myself at the back of the theater, trying to remain unnoticed. However, no sooner had I settled in than I noticed a biker carefully adjusting the projector and another gently petting a small dog by his side. Their unexpected actions planted a seed of doubt in my mind-maybe I had misjudged them. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. With the documentary on, the theater was filled with the soft music, and the bikers watched the film attentively. The documentary started with a story about how they had been traveling across states, rescuing dogs from tough situations. At the sight of scenes, my previous panic gave way to respect. After this experience, not only did I learn the lesson of not judging a person by 'their appearance, but also I was lucky enough to encounter a group of people contributing to making the world better for animals. 【满分范文04】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My heart sank and I felt like I had walked into a lion's den. They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every corner of the place. I quickly found an empty seat in a corner, trying to make myself as inconspicuous as possible. I kept stealing glances at them, still feeling extremely nervous. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They were here for the same reason as I was to support the animal shelters. They had organized this event to raise funds and awareness for the abandoned dogs. As I watched them watching the film with such passion and care in their eyes, I felt ashamed of my initial judgment. I was touched by their love for animals and glad that I hadn't let my fear stop me from coming. 【满分范文05】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. When I looked around the room and saw them sitting all over the seats, talking and laughing loudly, my heart sank. Fear took over me in an instant, so I held my wallet really tight and tried my best to go unnoticed. I carefully advanced, one step at a time, and eventually found my seat. My gaze quickly shifted from one biker to another and I spotted a cute dog paw print on their insignia. What kind of people were they on earth? Overwhelmed by a mixture of confusion and worry, I waited for the film to start. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. A huge wave of relief swept over me when I saw the rescue people in the documentary were wearing the same insignia with the tough-looking bikers. The film vividly showed  how much the bikers had done to save these animals. Seeing their hard work and dedication, I was deeply touched but feel a bit ashamed of my earlier fear. During the break, one of them even smiled at me and handed me a booklet about their rescue work. As the film ended and I walked out of the theater, I looked back at the bikers with newfound respect and admiration. 【满分范文06】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My heart sank and I felt panic washing over me, regretting that I should have rushed back to the hotel. But soon, surprised and amazed, I noticed that they were all in an orderly manner. Some were chatting quietly about the dogs (that) they had rescued, presenting a rather harmonious atmosphere. Taking a deep breath, I managed to find an empty seat as far away from them as possible. Still nervous as I was, I tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. Little had I known that they were here for the same reason as me - to support the local animal shelters. With the film being played, the scenes where the tough-looking bikers endeavored to save the abandoned dogs came into my view. Instantly, my previous fear was replaced by considerable guilt and shame as I realized what the insignia stood for. Touched by their passion and kindness, I approached them after the film and expressed my admiration and respect. It was through this brave adventure that I got acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers, who were tough outside but tender inside. 【满分范文06】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. The dim glow of the theater lights illuminated rows of leather-clad figures, their insignias catching the faint gleam as they murmured among themselves. I froze for a moment, the anxiety in my chest threatening to turn me around. Yet, I steeled myself and slid into a seat at the back, my heart pounding like a drum. The rumble of their voices blended with soft laughter, an unexpected contrast to their intimidating appearances. As I stole glances at the bikers, something unexpected caught my eye: a scruffy dog nestled at one man’s feet, its tail wagging contentedly. Another biker leaned down to scratch behind its ears, his rugged hands moving with surprising tenderness. Had I misjudged them completely? Still on edge, I waited silently, curiosity mingling with nervous anticipation, as the lights dimmed and the screen lit up. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The screen illuminated scenes of these bikers navigating harsh conditions to save dogs abandoned in alleys or tied up in desolate backyards. Their rugged hands, capable of steering powerful motorcycles, now cradled fragile lives with astonishing care. My fear melted into admiration as their compassion unfolded before me, each rescue a testament to their courage. One scene showed a biker comforting a trembling dog, his soothing voice soft enough to calm even my own apprehensions. By the time the credits rolled, my perception of these men had shifted entirely. Gathering my courage, I approached one of them. “Thank you for what you do,” I said, my voice trembling. He grinned and replied, “We just do what’s right.” Walking back to my hotel, I realized that courage is not only about facing danger but also about breaking through fear to understand the goodness in others. 【满分范文07】 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They gathered together in front of the screen, chatting with laughter. It seemed that they had made an appointment and decided to stir up trouble. The moment they approached, I got almost choked, hard to breath. Why did they come here? What did they want to do? Will they rob me? I clutched my wallet tightly, slipped my way to a dark corner and crouched down in the rear row. The light dimming down, I had no choice but to watch the film with a frightened heart. When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The tough guys wearing insignia road their bikes across the city blocks like superheroes in the Marvel movies. Unable to contain my emotion, I was touched to tears. When the light lit up, I couldn’t help standing up and clapping for their incredible deeds. Laughter and cheer filled up the whole theater as if celebrating the victory of rescue. How shameful I felt for my holding prejudice toward this group of gentle bikers. It was not until then that I really understood “don’t judge a book by its cover”. ( 名校好题 调研 ) 续写线索：将要下雨--做好准备--提供热饮--义卖受欢迎--雨停--教练宣布好消息--作者感悟 【调研01】（24-25高三上·新疆乌鲁木齐·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 This summer my swim team had to run the Snack Stand to raise money for swim meets and equipment. But Coach Edward called us all together and said, “I just got word that the Snack Stand will be canceled through August.” No Snack Stand meant no money for swim meets! Coach Edward continued, “I’m just not sure what’s going to happen. For now, let’s jump into that pool and get swimming!” The next morning, practice felt really weird. None of us were swimming our best, and even though Coach Edward was smiling as usual, we could tell he was worried. When we got out of the pool for a break, Daniel, captain of our swimming team, said, “I’ ve been wondering if we can’t run the Snack Stand, maybe we can think of other ways to raise money.”“Good idea,” we all agreed. At first, Coach Edward wasn’t sure about doing a big fundraiser. But once he saw how much we all wanted to help, he said, “OK! Let’s go for it!” That’s when we started brainstorming ideas for the Big Stand. “We could have a Fun in the Sun Lemonade Stand,” I suggested. “I could bring my karaoke machine from home, and the songs could be about swimming and water, “said one team member. So many kids offered to make fish cookies. We spent so much time getting everything ready and were positive that it would be a grand success. I was squeezing lemons for lemonade the day before our big event when I saw a very dark cloud outside the kitchen window. “Uh-oh! That’s not a rain cloud, is it?” I asked my mom. “Rain would be a disaster! It could ruin everything.” “You know what they say,” she answered. “Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst. ”“Hmm,” I said. The next day, as soon as arriving at the pool grounds, Daniel and I set up our Fun in the Sun Lemonade Stand. We had stacks of cups, and a fancy drink filled with lemonade. The weather started out just fine. Even more people than we’d expected sang songs, and gobbled cookies. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Unluckily, a few clouds suddenly turned into a bunch of dark ones. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After a while, the rain let up, the sun popped back out, and Coach Edward made a fantastic announcement. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 Unluckily, a few clouds suddenly turned into a bunch of dark ones. Rain started to fall. and people began to scatter. Some of us quickly took out prepared umbrellas and attached them to our table to cover our lemonade stand and make a nice dry area for keeping the cookies dry. In response to the chilly rain, some of us started serving hot tea and coffee alongside our cookies. Even a new sign was pulled out. reading Fun in the Rain Hot Drinks Stand. The warm drinks were a big hit — and they went perfectly with the cookies from the bake sale. After a while, the rain let up, the sun popped back out, and Coach Edward made a fantastic announcement. He announced that we had raised enough money to cover our swim meets expenses. He thanked everyone for their efforts and resilience, saying that even though the weather had been challenging, the team had shown true spirit and teamwork. We cheered and hugged each other, feeling proud of our accomplishment. Coach Edward reminded us that teamwork wasn’t just about winning races, but also about overcoming obstacles together. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的游泳队一直在泳池场地开小吃摊，为游泳比赛和设备筹集资金。然而某天爱德华教练告诉小吃摊将关闭维修。为此队员们想到了义卖活动，大家也一起帮忙售卖。活动当天，生意很好，虽然下了大雨，但是他们早有准备，最后赚够了钱。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“不幸的是，几朵云突然变成了一堆乌云”可知，第一段可描写作者他们为了应对下雨所采取的措施等内容。 ②由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿，雨停了，太阳又出来了，爱德华教练宣布了一个好消息”可知，第二段可描写教练宣布好消息以及作者的感悟。 2.续写线索：将要下雨——做好准备——提供热饮——义卖受欢迎——雨停——教练宣布好消息——作者感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①筹集：raise/collect ②拥抱：hug/embrace ③克服：overcome/get over 情绪类 ①感谢：thank/show gratitude to ②毅力：resilience/ perseverance 【点睛】[高分句型1] He announced that we had raised enough money to cover our swim meets expenses. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] He thanked everyone for their efforts and resilience, saying that even though the weather had been challenging, the team had shown true spirit and teamwork. (运用了现在分词saying作状语、that引导的宾语从句以及even though引导的让步状语从句) 续写线索：提出成立科学俱乐部--协调人印象深刻--获得批准--组织会议--获得成功--新计划 【调研02】（24-25高三上·甘肃白银·期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In the town of Eastview, the local community center had recently launched a “Neighbors Helping Neighbors” program aimed at building closer community ties and providing support to those in need. The program included a range of services such as meal deliveries, tutoring for students, and assistance with minor home repairs. Volunteers from the community were encouraged to sign up and contribute their skills and time to help improve the lives of their neighbors. Julia, a recent college graduate who had moved back to Eastview, decided to volunteer for the program. She saw it as a perfect opportunity to give back to the community that had supported her upbringing. Julia chose to focus on tutoring, as she had always excelled in math and science. She hoped to help students who were struggling in these subjects, providing them not just with academic support, but also with confidence in their abilities. On her first day as a tutor, Julia met with three students at the community center. She quickly established close ties with them, making the sessions interactive and fun. The Students, who had initially been apprehensive about the subject matter, began to show great interest. “Math can actually be fun when you understand it!” one of the students exclaimed, a smile spreading across his face as he solved a problem correctly. Julia’s success with the tutoring sessions spread through the community, and soon more students began to sign up. Seeing the positive impact she was making, Julia felt motivated to do more. She thought about other ways she could contribute to the “Neighbors Helping Neighbors” program, considering starting a science club. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Excited about the idea, Julia proposed the science club t to the volunteer program coordinators. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the program coordinators’ approval, Julia began organizing the first meeting of the science club. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 Excited about the idea, Julia proposed the science club to the volunteer program coordinators. She outlined a plan where students could engage in simple yet exciting experiments, triggering a deeper interest in science. The coordinators were impressed by her ideas and gave her the green light. “This could really inspire these kids and perhaps even spark a lifelong passion for science,” Julia thought, thrilled at the prospect of expanding her contribution to the community. With the program coordinators’ approval, Julia began organizing the first meeting of the science club. She gathered materials for experiments that could be safely conducted with items commonly found at home, ensuring accessibility for all students. The club’s opening session was a hit, drawing a curious and enthusiastic crowd. The success of the session confirmed Julia’s belief in the potential of hands-on learning. Encouraged by the students’ excitement, she planned to introduce more complex projects, aiming to challenge them while keeping the activities enjoyable and educational. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了她作为社区志愿者，在“Neighbors Helping Neighbors”项目中利用自己的数学和科学专长辅导学生，并取得显著成效的故事。Julia不仅让辅导变得生动有趣，还激发了学生们的兴趣。随后，她考虑启动科学俱乐部以进一步扩大贡献。 【详解】1. 段落续写 ①由第一段首句内容“朱莉娅对这个想法很感兴趣，她向志愿者项目协调员提议成立科学俱乐部。”可知，第一段可描写协调员和朱莉娅的反应。 ②由第二段首句内容“在项目协调人的批准下，朱莉娅开始组织科学俱乐部的第一次会议。”可知，第二段可描写组织科学俱乐部的第一次会议的经过与结果。 2. 续写线索：提出成立科学俱乐部——协调人映像深刻——获得批准——组织第一次会议——获得成功——新的计划。 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①概述：outline/summarize ②参与：engage/involve ③计划：plan/schedule 2. 情绪类 ①兴奋的：exciting/exhilarating ②热情的：enthusiastic/ebullient 【点睛】[高分句型1]She outlined a plan where students could engage in simple yet exciting experiments, triggering a deeper interest in science.(运用了where引导的定语从句) [高分句型2]She gathered materials for experiments that could be safely conducted with items commonly found at home, ensuring accessibility for all students.(运用了that引导的定语从句) 续写线索：感觉难以置信——医护人员为他安排——术后反应——感激 【调研03】（24-25高三上·辽宁沈阳·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 At 29 years old, Ephraim is very proud of the life he is living at the present time- he has a beautiful wife as well as two young sons and holds a steady job at the natural gas company. What he does at work is filling gas tanks of all kinds of vehicles. He has come to accept himself. However, he still remembers his hard childhood, which is full of teasing and bullying(欺凌). He still remembers that when he walked down the street, people would stare at his face. Why? This is because of the fact that Ephraim was born with a cleft lip(兔唇). He only attended school until he was 7 years old before he quit and never went back. Why did he do so? The reason was that the school children were so cruel to him. As a result of this, he would rather stay at home than deal with those school children bullying him because of his cleft condition. As Ephraim grew up, he gradually learned to be at peace with his cleft lip. And he did not know that his cleft lip could be fixed until recently. It was only a few weeks ago that Ephraim learned that an operation to repair his cleft lip was a possibility and that it could be done completely free of charge. An unknown gentleman visited the natural gas company where Ephraim has been working for years. And the gentleman told Ephraim about an organization which is called Operation Smile. He said the organization provides free cleft operations. The gentleman left Ephraim the phone number for Operation Smile before he said goodbye to Ephraim. As soon as the gentleman left, Ephraim called the number and learned about the upcoming medical group in Mbombela, which is a seven-hour bus journey from his home. 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Overjoyed, Ephraim made the bus trip alone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After a short operation, Ephraim was resting in his room with his amazing new smile. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 Overjoyed, Ephraim made the bus trip alone. Even when he was on the bus, he still couldn’t believe that the news the gentleman told him was true. But at the same time, he was full of expectations. As soon as he arrived at the destination, he saw a large number of people who looked just like him. After an all-round health evaluation, Ephraim learned his operation was scheduled for that very day. After a short operation, Ephraim was resting in his room with his amazing new smile. And he gladly gave everyone that he saw two thumbs up. Ephraim said that he was looking forward to going home to show his new smile to his wife and their two little boys. He was so grateful to all the Operation Smile medical volunteers who helped him. And he added that he was most thankful to the gentleman who told him that the operation was possible. 【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Ephraim因为天生兔唇，童年时经常被人嘲笑和欺凌，以至于他七岁就辍学了。随着他长大，他学会了以平和的心态看待自己的缺陷。就在几周前，一位男士参观他工作的公司时告诉他，有一个叫Operation Smile的机构提供免费的兔唇修补手术，这位男士还给Ephraim留下了这家机构的电话。这位男士离开后，Ephraim立即拨打了电话。 【详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段首句内容“欣喜若狂的Ephraim独自一人搭乘巴士前往目的地。”可知，第一段可描写Ephraim在去Operation Smile途中的心理活动以及他到达机构后医护人员对他的安排。 ②由第二段首句内容“手术后不久，Ephraim带着他那令人惊叹的新笑容在房间里休息。”可知，第二段可描写Ephraim手术后的反应以及感激之情。 2.续写线索：感觉难以置信——医护人员为他安排——术后反应——感激 3.词汇激活 行为类 充满了：be full of/be filled with 相信：believe/be convinced 展示：show/display 帮助：help/assist 情绪类 高兴地：gladly/cheerfully 感激的：grateful/appreciative 【点睛】[高分句型1] Even when he was on the bus, he still couldn’t believe that the news the gentleman told him was true.（运用了when引导时间状语从句，that引导宾语从句，省略了that的定语从句） [高分句型2] He was so grateful to all the Operation Smile medical volunteers who helped him.（运用了who引导定语从句） 续写线索：谦卑地回应—继续传递爱心—当地记者采访—分享给老人送餐事迹—老人也加入活动—感悟 【调研04】（24-25高三上·四川·阶段练习）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Rhiannon Menn launched a movement to deliver lasagna (千层面) and love to struggling neighbors. Rhiannon Menn is the founder of Lasagna Love, a global nonprofit that connects neighbors through homemade meal delivery. In March 2022, she and her husband owned a design and building company, but their projects were put on hold. Rhiannon felt helpless and wondered what she could do to be useful. It didn’t take her long to decide. “Cooking is my happy place,” she says, She ordered groceries online and got to work. She and her daughter, Cimorene, then three, made extra pans of lasagna, and Rhiannon posted in a local moms’ group on social media, offering to drop off a free home-cooked meal to anyone who wanted one. Some people requested a meal, Even more wanted to help Rhiannon feed those who were struggling. Rhiannon created a spreadsheet for each volunteer, matching them with families who’d requested a meal. Word of what she was doing spread quickly on social media. Someone offered to create an online portal (门户网站) to manage the volunteers and meal requests. This automated system freed Rhiannon to do what she really loves: Cook and reach people in need. Volunteer chefs log in to the portal and input how many meals they’d like to deliver that week. The system matches them with nearby families requesting a meal, and the volunteer texts the family to set up a delivery time. The organization is called Lasagna Love, but volunteers can deliver any home-cooked meal they’d like. Rhiannon’s recipe is her own homemade lasagna, making it healthier with grated zucchini and yellow squash. “I’ve shared my recipe, but volunteers are welcome to use their own recipes for any dishes they’d like to make,” she says. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As years passed. Lasagna Love’s reach expanded beyond Rhiannon’s hometown, across the nation and even internationally. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When interviewed by the local journalist, Rhiannon Menn smiled with pride. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 As years passed, Lasagna Love’s reach expanded beyond Rhiannon’s hometown, across the nation and even internationally. Volunteers in cities from New York to Tokyo embraced the mission, who have delivered more than 150,000 meals to families in their communities. The simple act of sharing a meal transformed into a global movement, uniting strangers in a common goal of compassion and support. Rhiannon, humbled by the response, continued to lead by example, cooking alongside her growing team and inspiring countless others to spread love through their own kitchens. And many media would like to report it, including a local journalist. When interviewed by the local journalist, Rhiannon Menn smiled with pride. She shared how just last week, a volunteer chef in Tokyo had delivered a lasagna to an elderly couple who had been isolated for months. The couple was so touched by the gesture that they decided to join the movement, baking traditional Japanese dishes to share with their neighbors. Rhiannon felt a deep sense of fulfillment, knowing that her simple act of cooking had blossomed into a global chain of compassion and community support. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。文章介绍了2022年3月，Rhiannon Menn 和丈夫拥有一家设计和建筑公司，但他们的项目被搁置了。Rhiannon感到无助，不知道自己能做些什么来帮上忙，很快她决定创立了 Lasagna Love，一个通过配送自制千层面来帮助困境中邻里的全球非营利组织。并且通过社交媒体发起活动，吸引了众多志愿者加入，建立了在线平台来协调送餐服务。 【详解】1.段落续写 ①由第一段句首内容“随着时间的流逝，Lasagna Love的触角已经从里安农的家乡扩展到了全国甚至世界各地。”可知，第一段可以描写Lasagna Love 成长为一个国际运动，Rhiannon 谦卑地带领团队继续传递爱心，媒体争相报道。 ②由第二段句首内容“当接受当地记者采访时，Rhiannon Menn自豪地笑了。”可知，第二段可以描写Rhiannon Menn 分享她的故事，并展示成就。 2.续写线索：成为国际运动—谦卑地回应—继续传递爱心—当地记者采访—分享给老人送餐事迹—老人也加入活动—感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①欣然接受：embrace/take up/adopt ②转换成：transform into/shift into/turn into ③鼓励：inspire/encourage 情绪类 ①同情 compassion/sympathy ②感动的：touched/moved 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Volunteers in cities from New York to Tokyo embraced the mission, who have delivered more than 150,000 meals to families in their communities.( 运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】 She shared how just last week, a volunteer chef in Tokyo had delivered a lasagna to an elderly couple who had been isolated for months.( 运用了how引导的宾语从句和who引导的限制性定语从句) 续写线索：描述设计理念--合作制作垃圾桶--加传感器装饰--回收垃圾桶得赞赏--意识到团队合作的重要性 【调研05】（24-25高三上·山东济宁·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Our class recycling project will start next week. You can choose to do it alone or in pairs,” Mr. Lee, the science teacher, announced, “Your goal is to design a recycling corner that will increase recycling rates in our classroom. The best idea will be adopted school-wide.” The classroom erupted into enthusiastic chatter as students paired up and began their discussions. Being a nature and animal lover, Lucy’s dream was big. She imagined birds and fish thriving (茁壮成长) in a plastic-free environment, inspired by her hours spent observing wildlife at her favorite lake. “The first step toward a plastic-free habitat is fostering a recycling habit,” she thought, “I’m sure I can come up with a brilliant idea for the project!” Her daydreaming was interrupted by a light tap from her best friend, Max. “Do you still have that book on recycling? I’m sure there are many helpful tips that we could use for this project. Shall we work on this together?” Max inquired expectantly. Lucy recalled having read the library book the previous night and placing it on her bedside table. “Um ...” she hesitated, “I returned it this morning... and I’m thinking of working on this project alone.” “Oh, I see,” Max walked away, disappointed. The next day, Lucy started working on her project, a smart dustbin. Yes, she had a unique concept for the recycling bin but she struggled to construct it. The design required a standard of workmanship that was simply beyond her capability. Frustrated, she went for a walk downstairs. “Lucy?” she heard a familiar voice and looked up, surprised to find Max standing there. He had never witnessed her looking so disheartened before; she was walking heavily along with a discouraged expression, sighing deeply. Concerned, he called out to her. “What happened?” he asked gently. Guilt-ridden, she admitted lying about the book and apologized sincerely. Max forgave her readily. “Well, if you need a partner, all you have to do is ask!” Max replied, smiling. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 She did so, then excitedly described her design concept of the recycling bin. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Lucy and Max’s hard work paid off. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 She did so, then excitedly described her design concept of the recycling bin. “Cool!” Max chirped. Fired up by her brilliant idea, they worked hard together, making spots for paper, plastic, glass, and metal. Over the week, the pair worked tirelessly to build their recycling bin. They included sections for different types of materials and added sensors that would light up when an item was correctly sorted. But if a mistake was made, it flashed red, and a nice robot voice would show the way. They even decorated it with colorful pictures of a clean world without trash, where animals could play. Lucy and Max’s hard work paid off. Their recycling bin wasn’t just a bin; it was a beacon of hope, a call to action, and a testament to partnership and deep love for the planet. On presentation day, their classmates were in awe of their clever design and powerful message. So impressed was Mr. Lee that he advocated for its school-wide adoption. Overjoyed by the positive response, Lucy and Max realized that real change required collective efforts, and their bin stood as tangible evidence that teamwork truly makes the dream work. 【导语】本文以露西和马克斯的合作为线索展开，讲述了科学老师布置了回收项目任务，露西本想独自完成，但在制作过程中遇到困难，最后向好友马克斯求助，两人一起完成了智能垃圾桶的设计。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“她这样做了，然后兴奋地描述了回收箱的设计理念。”可知，第一段可描写露西向马克斯描述了自己的设计理念，马克斯对此表示赞赏，两人一起努力工作，共同制作回收箱，包括为不同类型的材料设置分区，并添加传感器等。 ②由第二段首句内容“露西和马克斯的努力得到了回报。”可知，第二段可描写露西和马克斯的回收箱在展示日上得到了同学们和老师的赞赏，并被建议全校采用，两人意识到团队合作的重要性。 2.续写线索：露西描述设计理念——两人合作制作垃圾桶——添加传感器和装饰——回收垃圾桶得到赞赏——被全校采纳——意识到团队合作的重要性 3.词汇激活： 行为类 ①分类：sort/classify/categorize ②装饰：decorate/ornament ③需要：require/need/call for 情绪类 ①鼓舞：fire up/inspire/stimulate ②狂喜的：overjoyed/ecstatic 【点睛】[高分句型1] Fired up by her brilliant idea, they worked hard together, making spots for paper, plastic, glass, and metal. (运用了过去分词短语作原因状语和现在分词作伴随状语) [高分句型2] So impressed was Mr. Lee that he advocated for its school-wide adoption. (运用了so...that...引导的结果状语从句的倒装结构) [高分句型3] Overjoyed by the positive response, Lucy and Max realized that real change required collective efforts, and their bin stood as tangible evidence that teamwork truly makes the dream work. (运用了连词that(第1个)引导的宾语从句和that(第2个)引导的同位语从句) 续写线索：担忧又渴望加入--加入讨论--同学们认可--感到自信和融入--与同学建立联系--彼此改变--感悟 【调研06】（24-25高二上·四川·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 John was a shy child and often found himself alone at school. He used to suffer a lot. He rarely discussed anything in and after class or interacted with his teachers. It seemed that he preferred to stay in his own world. However, his classmates didn’t understand his quietness or interests and often didn’t invite him to take part in activities on purpose. In reality, however, John felt very lonely and was eager to connect with others, but didn’t know how to break down the barriers. He was dying to turn to someone for help. Sadly, John’s parents were too busy with daily chores (家务) to notice the change in him as he became quieter and more distant. Even when John gathered his courage to share his feelings, he was simply comforted by words like, “Go and get it. We know you can do it.” However, John was totally confused about how to pull himself out of this current situation. Sometimes, at home, he had no choice but to play his favorite jigsaw (拼图) in silence and avoid interacting with his parents. Gradually, he began to wonder if he was doing something wrong or if he really wasn’t good at making friends. He felt sad and started not to communicate with others. Luckily, John’s English teacher noticed his trouble and decided to step in to help. The teacher organized a class project after a math test, which seemed quite challenging for most students, but not for John. The teacher required the students to work together in groups to solve the problems and then he would invite someone to present their critical ideas on behalf of (代表) the group. The teacher then intentionally placed John in a group that was likely to give him confidence and encouraged him to show his strengths. 注意： 1. 续写总词数应为150左右： 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1 At first, John hesitated, unsure of how to help. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 At the end of the project, John formed new connections with his classmates. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 At first, John hesitated, unsure of how to help. Nervous but excited, he was afraid of expressing his ideas, yet eager to engage. However, as the group began discussing the project, he found himself knowing how to solve the problems other struggled with. Then bravely he talked with group members and his insights were invaluable to the team. Gradually, his classmates started to take notice of his talents and began asking for his ideas. Seeing the joyful expressions on his classmates’ faces, John started to feel less isolated and a wave of confidence swept over him.       At the end of the project, John formed new connections with his classmates. They invited him to join more group activities, and he no longer felt so distant. Instead, he became more outgoing and started participating actively in class. This newfound sense of belonging and encouragement gave him the confidence to open more. Finally, John realized that his journey from loneliness to friendship taught him the importance of taking the first step confidently. Sometimes, all it takes us is someone who supports and encourages you. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个内向的男孩John不懂得如何与人交往，在学校总是独来独往，从而受到了同学们的孤立，而父母也因家务繁忙，无暇顾及他的需求，他感到孤独和苦恼。幸运的是，他的英语老师注意到了他的处境，组织了班级活动来帮助他，而John在这个活动中不仅找到了自信，也和同学们建立了友谊，走出了困境。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“起初，John犹豫了一下，不知道该怎么帮忙。”可知，第一段可描写John在活动中如何帮助同学们解决问题，得到了同学们的认可，找到了自信。 ②由第二段首句内容“在项目结束时，John与同学们建立了新的联系。”可知，第二段可描写活动后John和同学们的改变，以及John的感悟。 2. 续写线索：犹豫、无措——担忧又渴望加入——发现了自己的能力、加入讨论——同学们的认可——感到了自信和融入——与同学建立联系——彼此的改变——有了自信、变得更加开朗——感悟——点明主题 3. 词汇激活： 行为类： ①参加：engage/participate ②解决：solve/tackle ③注意到：take notice of/notice/spot ④鼓励、激励：encourage/inspire 情绪类： ①渴望的：eager/desired ②高兴的：joyful/happy 【点睛】【高分句型1】However, as the group began discussing the project, he found himself knowing how to solve the problems other struggled with.（运用了以连词as引导的时间状语从句和省略了关系代词的定语从句。） 【高分句型2】Finally, John realized that his journey from loneliness to friendship taught him the importance of taking the first step confidently.（运用了以连接词that引导的宾语从句。） 续写线索：定期见面--分享讨论--支持鼓励--小说出版--送礼物表达感激--珍惜友情——迈向生活的新篇章 【调研07】（24-25高三上·陕西咸阳·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In the city of Oakridge, there was a small café — The Cozy Corner — known for its warm atmosphere and rich coffee. It was a favorite spot for the locals, where stories were shared and friendships formed over steaming cups and tasty snacks. One rainy afternoon, a man in his early thirties named Jack entered the café. He shook the raindrops off his umbrella and looked around to find a seat. Alice, one of the regular patrons (老主顾), watched curiously as he settled into a corner table, pulling out a notebook and a pen. A waitress approached with a warm smile. “Welcome! What would you like to drink?” she asked. Jack looked up, his eyes reflecting a sense of gratitude (感激). “Just the coffee, thanks,” he replied. As days turned into weeks, Jack started frequenting The Cozy Corner. He was always alone, drinking his coffee and writing something quickly in his notebook. He rarely spoke to anyone. One day, Alice stepped into the café again, sitting at the table next to Jack’s. She was leafing through a book with a thoughtful expression, occasionally taking a look at Jack’s table. A moment later, Alice gathered her courage and approached Jack. “Excuse me,” she began hesitantly, “I couldn’t help but notice you’ve been coming here a lot. You seem to be working on something important.” Jack looked up, surprised but curious, “Yes, I suppose I am. I’m trying to write a novel.” Alice’s eyes widened, “Really? That’s amazing! I’m Alice. Actually, I love reading novels. May I ask what your story is about?” Jack paused for a moment, and then nodded, “It’s about a man who loses everything and finds himself in a new city, struggling to rebuild his life. It’s a bit of a journey of self-discovery.” “I’d love to share ideas if you’re open to them,” Alice smiled. Jack’s eyes softened, “That sounds incredible. I’d like that. Thank you.” 注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 From that day on, Jack and Alice met at the café regularly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Several months later, Jack’s novel was published. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 From that day on, Jack and Alice met at the café regularly. Alice commented on Jack’s story to better the plot. They exchanged ideas and shared their personal stories. Through their conversations, Jack revealed that he had lost his job and his home due to a series of unfortunate events. Knowing Jack’s suffering, Alice offered him support and warmth and inspired him to put his thoughts into words. The novel served as a means for Jack to reflect on his experiences and discover optimism during challenging times. Several months later, Jack’s novel was published. He announced the big news at the café, and then he turned to Alice, “I have something for you.” It was a gift box. Inside was a copy of the published novel and a handwritten note: “Your comments have been invaluable to me. This is a symbol of our journey together.” Alice was deeply touched, “Thank you, Jack. I’ll treasure this always.” Their bond grew stronger. As Jack’s writing began to gain recognition, he walked into a new chapter of life. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个小咖啡馆的老主顾Alice在得知一个经常独自来到咖啡馆，边喝咖啡边在笔记本上快速写着什么的男子Jack正在写小说时，非常兴奋，主动提出要和Jack分享想法。之后，他们经常在咖啡馆一起讨论故事情节，交流看法，在Alice的支持和鼓励下，Jack的小说顺利出版，得到了人们的认可，迈向了生活的新篇章，二人也建立了更加深厚的友情。 【详解】1. 段落续写。 ①由第一段首句内容“从那天起，Jack和Alice定期在咖啡馆见面。”可知，第一段可描写二人一起讨论故事，交流思想，以及Alice对Jack的鼓励和支持。 ②由第二段首句内容“几个月后，Jack的小说出版了。”可知，第二段可描写小说出版后Jack对Alice的感激以及未来的发展。 2. 续写线索：定期见面——分享、讨论——支持、鼓励——小说出版——送礼物表达感激——珍惜，深厚的友情——迈向生活的新篇章 3. 词汇激活： 行为类： ①改善、改进：better/improve ②揭示、揭露：reveal/uncover ③激励、鼓励：inspire/encourage ④珍惜、珍视：treasure/cherish 情绪类： ①乐观、积极：optimism/positivity ②被感动、被触动：be touched/be moved 【点睛】【高分句型1】Through their conversations, Jack revealed that he had lost his job and his home due to a series of unfortunate events.(运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】As Jack’s writing began to gain recognition, he walked into a new chapter of life.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句) 续写线索：站在家门口——敲门——妈妈开门——承认错误——沟通——拥抱 【调研08】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lucy was only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Heaving wandered in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand. She sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand, noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?” “Oh yes... but I don’t have money on me” she replied. “That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man. “Come in.” The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Lucy cried silently. “What is it?” asked the man kindly. “Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Lucy. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thank me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were baby. Can you remember the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?” Lucy sat there speechless and numb with shock; she remembered mother’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.” On the way home Lucy made up his mind to make an apology to her mother for his rudeness as soon as she arrived home. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway, Lucy took a deep breath. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】 Nearing the doorway, Lucy took a deep breath. Standing in front of the door, she was afraid whether her mother would forgive her for her rudeness. But when she thought of her mother’s familiar face and the noodle seller’s kind advice, she decided to knock on the door bravely. Her mother opened the door but Lucy was so ashamed that she didn’t know what to say. A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. Lucy couldn’t help crying and said “Sorry, mom, I know I have made a big mistake. I shouldn’t have quarreled with you. I shouldn’t have run away from home. Could you forgive me?” Lucy’s mother was moved, saying “Good girl, never mind, I also should make an apology to you for scolding at you angrily. I am very worried about you. ” Tears rolled down from both of their faces and they hugged each other tightly. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小女孩Lucy和母亲争吵后离家出走，走在街上，觉得饿了，一个卖面条的摊位前停下，摊主人知道情况后，免费请她吃了一碗面并听她倾诉，她很感恩，摊主却告诉她：“我请你吃一碗面，你就感激我，你想想你的妈妈养大你，给你做了多少顿饭呢？”Lucy顿悟，决定回家和妈妈好好沟通。 【详解】1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“快到门口时，露茜深吸了一口气”可知，第一段可描写Lucy在走到家门口进门前的心理活动。 ②由第二段首句内容“她的头发被轻轻地碰了一下，她的思绪又回来了”可知，第二段可描写Lucy和妈妈的谈话，向妈妈真诚地道歉，母女之间的感情得到了更好的沟通。 2. 续写线索：站在家门口——敲门——妈妈开门——承认错误——沟通——拥抱 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①原谅：forgive/ pardon ②想起：think of/ remember ③向……道歉：make an apology to/ say sorry to 情绪类 ①感动：moved / touched ②羞愧：ashamed/ abashed 【点睛】【高分句型1】Standing in front of the door, she was afraid whether her mother would forgive her for her rudeness. (运用了现在分词Standing作状语和whether引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】But when she thought of her mother’s familiar face and the noodle seller’s kind advice, she decided to knock on the door bravely. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 续写线索：Lily的支持--逐渐恢复--分享经历--敞开心扉--Jessica反思--起勇气道歉--接受道歉--重新开始【调研09】（24-25高三上·重庆·阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Having recently transferred to the high school, Emily felt like a ghost drifting through the hallways — unseen and unheard. Struggling to adapt to her new environment, she found herself isolated. A group of popular girls, led by Jessica, frequently made fun of her. They even threw insults at her intelligence, as if excelling in school was something to be ashamed of. To avoid adding more stress to her already overworked parents, Emily bottled up her feelings, swallowing the daily suffering like bitter medicine. One gray afternoon, after the final bell had rung and the last echoes of chatter had faded, Emily found her books and notebooks scattered in a dirty bin. With embarrassment burning her cheeks, tears welled up in her eyes, blurring her vision as she knelt to gather her belongings. Just then, Lily, a classmate who had always noticed Emily’s struggles but never intervened, approached and knelt beside her. “They’re just trying to feel better by making others feel worse,” Lily said softly, her voice like a gentle breeze on a suffocating day. Then, she handed Emily her notebooks, offering an understanding smile. Though touched by Lily’s kindness, Emily still felt the shadow hanging over her. Jessica and her friends tripped Emily in the hallways, pushed her in the lunch line, and even hid her gym shoes, laughing as she crazily searched for them. Each incident added to the weight pressing down on Emily’s chest. She began pretending to be sick, hoping to escape the torture that turned her school life into a daily nightmare. In an English class, the teacher assigned an essay titled “My Wish”. Emily poured her heart into the assignment and wrote about her longing for a true friend and the pain of feeling like an outsider, baring her soul on the page, exposing the raw wounds and the bullying she had endured. The teacher, noticing the weight of her words, realized what Emily had been going through. The school responded swiftly, taking measures to address the effects of bullying and organizing counseling sessions to help Emily rebuild her confidence. Throughout this time, Lily stayed by Emily’s side, becoming her pillar of strength. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Emily’s recovery began to show signs of progress with Lily’s support. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Also, the school’s ban on bullying made Jessica and her friends reflect. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分范文】   Emily’s recovery began to show signs of progress with Lily’s support. One afternoon, as Emily sat alone in the cafeteria, she noticed Lily approaching with her usual warm smile. Lily sat beside her, her presence like a steady anchor in Emily’s turbulent sea. Sharing her own experiences of feeling left out, Lily offered Emily both companionship and empathy. Bit by bit, Emily began to open up, revealing the fears that had weighed her down. For the first time in a long while, she felt a flicker of hope, realizing she didn’t have to carry everything by herself. Also, the school’s ban on bullying made Jessica and her friends reflect. The memories of their past behavior haunted them with every reminder of Emily’s pain. After much contemplation, Jessica finally gathered the courage to apologize to Emily, her friends trailing behind. “Emily, we’re sorry,” Jessica said, her voice trembling with sincerity. Emily looked into their eyes, seeing the regret they carried. She knew forgiveness would take time, but this apology was a tentative first step. As Jessica and her friends walked away, a quiet calm settled over Emily, signaling the beginning of a new chapter, one of healing and understanding. 【导语】本文以人物为线索，文章主要介绍了Emily，一个在新学校感到孤独和受到霸凌的女孩，通过一篇主题为“我的愿望”的作文表达了她的痛苦。她的老师发现了她的遭遇，学校采取措施应对霸凌，并提供心理辅导来帮助她恢复信心。在此过程中，Emily 得到了同学 Lily 的支持，逐渐走出了阴影，并且Jessica 和她的朋友们也因学校的禁令而反思自己的行为。 【详解】1. 段落续写 ①由第一段首句“在Lily的支持下，Emily的康复开始显示出进展的迹象。”可知，本段可描写Lily的支持帮助Emily逐渐敞开心扉，面对恐惧，重燃希望，不再独自承受一切。 ②由第二段首句“此外，学校对欺凌的禁令让Jessica 和她的朋友们反思。”可知，本段可描写Jessica和朋友们因学校反欺凌规定反思自身，向Emily道歉，迈出和解与治愈的第一步。 2. 续写线索：Lily的支持——逐渐恢复——分享经历——敞开心扉——Jessica的反思——鼓起勇气道歉——接受道歉——重新开始 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①提供：offer/provide/give ②向某人道歉：apologize to sb./say sorry to sb. ③走开：walk away/step away 情绪类 ①同情：empathy/sympathy ②恐惧：fear/dread 【点睛】【高分句型1】One afternoon, as Emily sat alone in the cafeteria, she noticed Lily approaching with her usual warm smile.（运用了as引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】Bit by bit, Emily began to open up, revealing the fears that had weighed her down.（运用现在分词短语作状语以及that引导的限制性定语从句） $$