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Period 4 Integrated skills
教材听力训练(见课堂授课课件)
Activity 1 细节把握
Read the travel plan about Shanghai on page 9 and do the following exercises.
1.What are their schedules for these two days?
答案 On the first day they will successively visit the Shanghai Tower,Yu Garden,The Bund and the Xuhui District.On the second day they will successively visit Jing’an Temple,Nanjing Road,Shanghai Museum and Shanghai Grand Theatre.
2.What kinds of transportation will they have for these two days?
答案 Train,bus,taxi and bicycle.
Activity 2 文章架构
Read the travel plan about Shanghai on page 9 and do the following exercise.
What does this travel plan consist of?
答案 The city name,tourist attractions,activities,pictures and recommended means of transport.
Activity 3 增分靓句
Appreciate sentences describing activities in a travel plan.Find out the expressions you can use in your writing.
1.Enjoy the view from one of the world’s highest viewing platforms.
2.Have an impressive view of Shanghai’s modern skyline.
3.Make your way to the main hall and admire the 8.8metrehigh statue of the Buddha.
4.Do some souvenir shopping and try the local snacks.
5.Relax by watching an elegant Yue Opera performance.
Activity 4 写作模板
We can use the following outline when making a travel plan.
本单元的写作任务是写一篇旅游计划。旅游计划是一种常见的应用文写作。旅游可分为观光游、文化游、美食游及探险游等不同类型,因此旅游计划也要根据不同的旅游目的进行设计。
篇章结构
第一段:表达目的——分享/提供旅行计划。
第二段:介绍计划——包括时间、地点、活动内容等。
第三段:期待或邀请——总结全文。
注意事项
1.每段要有明确清晰的主题。
2.可用一般现在时代替一般将来时。
3.文章最后要有适当的总结性语言。
常用表达
1.I’m writing to tell you something about my travel plan.
我写信是想告诉你我的旅行计划。
2.I have an exciting travel plan to share with you.
我想和你分享一个令人兴奋的旅行计划。
3.mean/intend/plan to do sth打算/计划做某事
4.decide/be determined to do sth决定做某事
5.wish sb a pleasant journey祝某人旅途愉快
6.When we are tired from work,why not stop and go out to enjoy...?
当我们因工作而感到疲惫时,为什么不停下来,出去欣赏……呢?
7.As far as I’m concerned,the trip is very meaningful.
在我看来,该旅行十分有意义。
8.On the one hand,we can...;on the other hand,it will help us...
一方面,我们可以……;另一方面,它会帮助我们……
假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Mike来信说想在暑假到中国北京旅游,请你写封回信,并在信中为他做一个旅行计划,内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.活动内容。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
第一步 审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是到中国北京旅游的旅行计划,写作时应注意下面几点:
1.确定文体:这是一篇书信。写作时注意书信的写作特点。
2.主体时态:文章应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
3.主体人称:由于是为朋友写一个关于到中国北京旅游的旅行计划,所以人称应该以第二人称为主。
谋篇
第一段:表达意愿——很乐意提供帮助。
第二段:介绍计划——包括时间、地点、活动内容等。
第三段:发出邀请——总结全文。
第二步 遣词造句
[核心词汇]
1.高兴的delighted
2.请求帮助ask for help
3.依我看来in my opinion
4.去,前往make one’s way to
5.世界七大奇迹之一one of the Seven Wonders of the World
6.壮丽的,雄伟的splendid
7.欣赏中国戏剧enjoy Chinese opera
8.理解中国文化understand Chinese culture
[连词成句]
1.我很高兴收到你的来信。
I’m very delighted to receive your letter.
2.你求助关于到北京旅游的事。
You ask for help about traveling to Beijing.
3.你最好欣赏一下中国戏剧和民间音乐。
You’d better enjoy Chinese opera and Chinese folk music.
4.这一定会帮助你更深地了解中国文化。
It will surely help you understand Chinese culture more deeply.
第三步 句式升级
1.用现在分词结构连接句1和句2。
I’m very delighted to receive your letter asking for help about traveling to Beijing.
2.用非限制性定语从句连接句3和句4。
You’d better enjoy Chinese opera and Chinese folk music,which will surely help you understand Chinese culture more deeply.
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
范文赏读
Dear Mike,
I’m very delighted to receive your letter asking for help about traveling to Beijing.
In my opinion,the first place you should make your way to is the Great Wall and that is one of the Seven Wonders of the World.Its splendid scenery is sure to attract you.If you come to Beijing without climbing the Great Wall,it’s just like going to Paris without visiting the Eiffel Tower.In addition,you’d better enjoy Chinese opera and Chinese folk music,which will surely help you understand Chinese culture more deeply.These activities take about two days.
If you need more help,do let me know.I can show you around other places of interest.Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,寒假即将来临,你打算和父母去上海游玩。请给你的好友Mary写一封邮件,分享你的出行计划。
要点:1.1月21日下午2点从济南乘高铁去上海,到达后入住预订酒店,休息一晚;
2.第二天上午参观上海科技馆,下午登上东方明珠塔,欣赏上海全貌;
3.1月23日乘高铁返回。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:高铁highspeed railway;上海科技馆Shanghai Science and Technology Museum;东方明珠塔the Oriental Pearl Tower
参考范文
Dear Mary,
How is everything going?I’m writing to share my travel plan for my winter holidays with you.
I will have a threeday trip to Shanghai with my parents.We will set off from Jinan for Shanghai by highspeed railway at 2∶00 pm on 21 January.Upon arriving in Shanghai,we will live in the hotel that we have booked online in advance.On the second day,we will visit Shanghai Science and Technology Museum in the morning.Besides,we will climb up the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon,from where we will enjoy the whole view of Shanghai.On 23 January,we will take the highspeed railway back.
How about the plan for your winter holidays? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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