专题07 读后续写之助人为乐-【妙笔生花】2025年高考英语写作常考文体提分秘籍

专题07 读后续写之助人为乐 *** 考情分析 *** 年份 卷别 类别 话题 2024 2024年新高考I&II卷 人与社会 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 2022 2022年浙江6月卷 人与社会 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 2020 2020年新高考I&II卷 人与社会 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 *** 写作指导 *** 【题型分析】 助人为乐是中华民族的传统美德，也是高考“读后续写”中常见的题材。它传达的温暖和正能量常常触动人心，帮助学生们培养积极向上的情感。因此，在续写中，助人为乐的主题总能带来正面影响，深受出题者的青睐。 助人为乐类的故事情节在续写中，可以涉及生活、学校和家庭等多个方面，常见的情感描写包括面对困难时的无助和困惑，帮助者的关怀和行动，受助者的感激与温暖，问题解决后的喜悦，以及主题升华带来的感悟。这些情感层层递进，能够引导读者深刻理解助人为乐的意义。 【写作方法】 高考读后续写中的助人为乐主题，可以通过以下六步实现精彩的表达： 第一步：提炼六个要素，获取主旨大意 阅读文本时，先提取六个基本要素：谁（Who）、何时（When）、何地（Where）、做什么（What）、为什么（Why）以及如何（How）。在理解了这些要素之后，可以提炼出故事的核心情节，进一步推测出作者的写作意图。 第二步：理清故事脉络，把握情感变化 叙述类文章通常包含情节发展线（plots）和情感变化线（emotions）两条主线。考生可以使用思维导图或结构图来梳理故事的脉络和情感的起伏，这样在续写时，既能符合原文逻辑，也能更准确地传达出情感变化的过程。 第三步：分析段落首句，精心设计问题 在续写段落时，段首句是理解续写逻辑的重要线索。考生可以分析两个段首句之间的关系，比如是否是顺承、转折或因果。然后设计小问题，例如：段首句揭示了什么信息？第一个段落应该从哪里展开？如何衔接到下一个段落？这些小问题将帮助考生更自然地过渡到下一段，使整篇故事浑然一体。 第四步：设计结尾情节，拔高价值取向 设计结尾时，要紧扣故事主线，合理展开想象，设计出打动人心的结尾情节。结尾可以通过受助者的反思、帮助者的感悟等方式升华主题，展现出助人为乐的人生价值。这不仅提升了故事的情感层次，也增强了读者对助人为乐主题的认同感。 第五步：列出关键词汇，续写连贯句群 在续写情节时，考生可以在草稿纸上列出一些关键词汇，涵盖原文中的主要人物、事件以及情感词。按事件发生顺序整理出情节脉络，并通过这些关键词构建出连贯的句群，确保续写内容的流畅性和一致性。 第六步：润色词句，誊写成文 写好草稿后，考生可以通过语法和词汇修饰，润色句式，使续写内容更加符合原文的语言风格，同时确保句子结构更加优美。最后，用清晰流畅的书写将故事誊写在答题纸上，使整体内容规范、美观。 故事情节构建支架 在续写助人为乐主题时，情节构建可以分为以下三步： 第一步：困难描写--消极情绪+困境场景 情感表现：无助、困惑、焦急、失望、恐惧、沮丧 肢体动作：握紧双手、眉头紧锁、叹气、双肩垂下、深吸一口气 第二步：助人过程呈现（找到方法+行动细节） 助他型：主动发现他人困难——克服障碍——提供帮助 他助型：请求援助——寻求指导——得到帮助 第三步：圆满结局（感激+感动+升华） 情感表达：欣慰、温暖、感激、开心、满足、释然 主题升华：传递善意、收获成长、记忆深刻、互相成就 *** 素材宝库 *** 困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境） （1）消极情绪 感到 1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)=a wave of...=a feeling/sense of...一阵... 2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...) 3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb 因...颤抖 tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...) 流泪： 1. Tears blurred one's eyes.      2. One's eyes got misty.   3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊 4. ...be close to tears几乎要哭了 5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下 助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链） （1）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法 某人想到/明白...; 有了主意 1. It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句 2. (idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind 3. One's mind began to race （2）动作链  Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子（锯子），从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的杰克顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。【八省联考】 皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华） （1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折 1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before 从句=It took some time before从句不久, ...      2. for an instant/moment一瞬间 （2）有了结果 1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句 2. But on second thoughts, ...但是转而一想，... 3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙 （3）感谢 1. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手).（2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三） 2. Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldn’t thank him enough (非常感谢他)and everyone involved in for what they did for her. （2020届山东省泰安市高三第二轮复习质量检测（二模）英语试题） （4）感动 1. Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. （2020.7高考山东卷） 2. He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about him (如此关心他) and said he was willing to work.（2021广州2月联考） 3. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words (感动得说不出话来). I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest. （2021年1月八省联考） 4. I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀). （2021年1月八省联考） 5. Stunned and moved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the note, feeling a pang of guilt about my previous thought that all people were indifferent.（2021年1月八省联考） （5）升华 1. From then on,  I made up my mind to pass on “love”  to others. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand. ” 从那以后,我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。俗话说:“玫瑰予人，手留余香。” 2. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that Mexican family offered me. 从那天起,每次遇到需要帮助的人,我都会向他们伸出援手,希望能把墨西哥家庭对我的善意传递下去。 3. From that day on, Lily clearly realized the importance of devotion, and she made up her mind that she would offer a helping hand to those in need in the future. 从那天起,Lily清楚地意识到奉献的重要性,她下定决心,将来遇到有需要帮助的人,她会主动伸出援助之手。 4. From then on, Tom made up his mind to help someone who needs help. Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future. 从那时起,Tom决定帮助需要帮助的人。只有这样,将来才会有越来越多的人互相帮助。 *It hit/struck/occurred to/dawned on sb that +感悟 5. It dawned on/occurred to me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better. 我恍然大悟，那一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大，而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。 6. Sometimes, a small act of kindness can be powerful enough to make a huge difference. 有时,一个小小的善行会有足够的力量产生巨大的影响。 7. With one small gesture,you may not only spread love, but also positively influence others’ lives. 一个小小的行为,不仅能传递爱,还能积极地影响他人的生活。 8. As the saying goes, “Rose given, fragrance in hand.”It turns out that their efforts not only helped those in need, but also gave themselves the sweet taste of helping others. 俗话说, “赠人玫瑰，手留余香。”原来他们的努力不仅帮助了有需要的人，而且让他们尝到了帮助他人的甜蜜。 9. She felt warmth in the cold day and believed there was kindness in every corner. 在寒冷的天气里她感到了温暖, 相信每个角落都有善意。（受别人帮助） 10. It is love that makes the world go round and Tom felt it deep in his little heart. Tom在他小小的心灵深处感受到,是爱使世界运转。 11. It was the special experience that made me realize that helping others is a valuable virtue.  正是这次特别的经历使我明白了帮助别人是一种重要的美德。 12. This kind act has a lasting influence on me.I always give others a helping hand if possible.  这种善意的行为对我产生了持久的影响。我总是尽可能地帮助别人。 13. He had never expected that his small act of kindness would benefit him so much. 他从来没有想到这个小小的善举会让他受益良多。 14. Whether rich or poor, we should be happy to do something for society. Thus we can learn that giving is the source of happiness.  无论贫富,我们都应该乐于为社会做点什么。因此,我们可以了解到给予是幸福的源泉。 *** 片段写作 *** ①归还老人丢失的手套 With a tender heart, I spotted the gloves he cherished, lost and alone on the bench. As I handed them back, his eyes, a window to his soul, sparkled with surprise and gratitude. "Thank you," he whispered, his voice quivering slightly, as he gently squeezed my hand—a silent testament to the joy of giving. In that moment, I felt the warmth of compassion, understanding that small gestures have immense impact. 心怀柔情，我瞥见了他珍视的手套，遗失在长椅上，孤单无援。当我递还它们时，他的眼睛，灵魂之窗，因惊讶和感激而闪烁。“谢谢你，”他轻声说，声音微微颤抖，同时轻轻握住我的手——这是给予之乐的无声证明。在那一刻，我感受到了同情的温暖，明白小小的举动有着巨大的影响。 ②水手买花赠餐厅客人 In the dull and silent restaurant, the sailor, with a heart full of benevolence, approached the elderly woman, her flowers a vibrant burst of color amidst the annoying day. He purchased every bloom, his smile as warm as the sun, and handed them out to diners. Their faces lit up, a chorus of "Thank you" filling the air, as the room transformed into a haven of warmth and goodwill. The sailor's eyes twinkled with the satisfaction of a deed well done, knowing that a simple act could ignite such a collective sense of happiness. 在单调而又无声的餐厅里，那位水手怀着满心的善意，走向那位老妇人，她的花朵在令人恼火的日子里显得格外鲜艳。他买下了每一朵花，他的微笑像阳光一样温暖，并将它们分发给用餐者。他们的脸上洋溢着光彩，"谢谢你"的声音此起彼伏，整个房间转变成了一个充满温暖和善意的避风港。水手的眼睛闪烁着对善行的满足，他知道一个简单的行为能点燃如此强烈的集体幸福感。 ③年轻男子帮助迷路父亲回家 My heart swelled with gratitude as the young man gently guided my lost father to our doorstep. His kind gesture, a beacon of hope in the twilight, spoke volumes of his character. "I'm in your debt," I uttered, my voice thick with emotion, as I clasped his hand firmly. The sincerity in his eyes and the gentle smile on his face reassured me of the humanity's inherent goodness. In that moment, I realized the depth of kindness in strangers, a reminder that compassion knows no bounds. 当那位年轻人轻轻地将我迷路的父亲带到我们的门前时，我的心充满了感激。他亲切的举动，在黄昏中成为了希望的灯塔，充分展现了他的品格。"我欠你的情，"我声音充满情感地说，同时紧紧地握住他的手。他眼中的真诚和脸上温柔的微笑让我确信了人性的固有善良。在那一刻，我意识到了陌生人的深厚善意，这是一个提醒，同情心没有界限。 ④我们帮助邻居修复被暴风雨破坏的花园 As I surveyed the neighbor's garden, ravaged by the storm, a wave of empathy surged within me. We rallied with determination, our hands working diligently to restore the once vibrant haven. "We're in this together," I declared, my voice steady, reflecting our collective spirit. The neighbors' weary faces brightened with each replanted flower, their smiles a testament to our shared effort. The experience taught us the power of unity and the resilience of nature and community. 当我审视着邻居家被暴风雨摧毁的花园时，内心涌起了一阵同情。我们带着决心集合起来，我们的手勤奋地工作，恢复了曾经生机勃勃的避风港。"我们同在于此，"我坚定地说，我的声音反映了我们的集体精神。邻居们疲惫的脸上随着每朵重新种植的花而变得明亮，他们的微笑证明了我们共同努力的成果。这次经历教会了我们团结的力量以及自然和社区的韧性。 ⑤出租车司机免费送我去机场赶会议 Anxiety gripped me as I realized the taxi fare was beyond my reach. The driver, sensing my distress, offered a lifeline with a simple, "No charge, off you go." His words, a gentle breeze in the storm, eased my frantic heartbeat. I stammered my thanks, my eyes welling with gratitude as I hurried into the airport, his kind deed a lesson in humanity's capacity for kindness. 当我意识到出租车费超出了我的支付能力时，焦虑感笼罩了我。司机察觉到我的困境，用一句简单的话提供了救生索："不用付费，快去吧。" 他的话语，就像暴风雨中的一缕和风，缓解了我狂乱的心跳。我结结巴巴地感谢他，当我匆忙进入机场时，我的眼睛充满了感激之情，他的善举是关于人性中善良潜能的一课。 ⑥同学帮助我适应新学校 Feeling like a fish out of water in the new school, I was greeted by a classmate's warm smile, a lifebuoy in the overwhelming sea of faces. "Welcome, let me show you around," she said, her voice a soothing melody amidst the chaos. Her friendly guidance steered me through the corridors, her patient explanations like a map through the unfamiliar territory. I watched her kind eyes, a mirror reflecting the spirit of community. It dawned on me that every new beginning is a chance to find connections and kindness in unexpected places. 在新学校里感到格格不入，我被一位同学温暖的微笑所迎接，就像在令人不知所措的人海中的救生圈。"欢迎，让我带你参观一下，"她的声音在混乱中成为舒缓的旋律。她友好的引导带我穿过走廊，她耐心的解释就像在不熟悉的领域中的地图。我注视着她那仁慈的眼睛，那是反映社区精神的镜子。我突然意识到，每一个新的开始都是一个在意想不到的地方找到联系和善意的机会。 ⑦墨西哥家庭帮我修理车 Stranded by my car's breakdown in a Mexican village, I was enveloped by a sense of despair. A local family, noticing my plight, approached with open arms and kind words, "No worries, we can help." Their hands, skilled and swift, worked in harmony to mend my vehicle. The father's reassuring nod and the mother's gentle smile were like a balm to my anxious heart. As they waved goodbye, I was left with a profound sense of gratitude and the realization that kindness knows no borders. 在墨西哥村庄里，我的汽车抛锚了，我被绝望感包围。一户当地家庭注意到了我的困境，他们伸出双臂，用亲切的话语走来："别担心，我们可以帮忙。"他们熟练而迅速地动手修理我的车辆。父亲那令人安心的点头和母亲那温柔的微笑就像对我焦虑心灵的安慰剂。当他们挥手告别时，我心中充满了深深的感激之情，并意识到善良无国界。 ⑧给被困路上旅客面包和衣服度过暴风雪 As the winter storm raged, I watched the stranded tourists with a heavy heart, their shivering forms a stark contrast to the cozy warmth of my home. Driven by compassion, I gathered loaves of bread and warm clothes, and offered them with a gentle, "Please, take these to ward off the chill." Their eyes, initially dulled by the cold, brightened with surprise and gratitude. The simple act of sharing taught me the true meaning of empathy and the power of small gestures to bring comfort in the face of adversity. 当冬季风暴肆虐时，我怀着沉重的心情看着被困的游客，他们在寒冷中颤抖的身影与我家的温馨温暖形成了鲜明对比。出于同情，我收集了面包和保暖的衣物，温和地递给他们："请拿这些来抵御寒冷。"他们的眼睛最初因寒冷而黯淡无光，随后因惊讶和感激而明亮起来。分享这个简单行为教会了我同情的真正含义，以及在逆境中带来安慰的小举动的力量。 ⑨帮助伯纳德卖爆米花 Bernard's eyes, once lively, now held a shadow of despair as his popcorn business faced hard times. With a determined heart, I rallied friends to help. "Let's make his popcorn the talk of the town," I encouraged, our voices a chorus of hope. We set up stands, our hands busy popping corn and spreading smiles. The community's response was a warm embrace, and Bernard's relieved grin was the sun breaking through clouds. It was a lesson in resilience and the strength of unity in the face of challenges. 伯纳德的眼睛曾经活泼，现在却笼罩着绝望的阴影，因为他的爆米花生意面临困难时期。我怀着坚定的心，召集朋友们来帮助。"让我们让他的爆米花成为城里的谈资，"我鼓励说，我们的声音是希望的合唱。我们设立了摊位，手忙脚乱地爆玉米和传播微笑。社区的回应是一个温暖的拥抱，伯纳德释然的笑容是云层中透出的阳光。这是关于在挑战面前的韧性和团结力量的一课。 ⑩清洁工拾金不昧归还戒指 The cleaner's heart overflowed with integrity as she found the glinting ring, knowing its worth yet choosing to return it. "This belongs to someone precious," she thought, handing it back with a humble smile. The lady's eyes glistened with tears of gratitude as she clasped the cleaner's hand, her "Thank you" echoing with sincerity. The act reaffirmed the belief in the purity of kindness, a reminder that honesty is the most valuable treasure one can possess. 清洁工在发现那枚闪闪发光的戒指时，内心充满了正直，知道它的价值却选择归还。“这属于某个珍贵的人，”她想着，带着谦逊的微笑递还戒指。女士的眼睛因感激而闪烁着泪光，她紧握清洁工的手，她的“谢谢你”充满了真诚。这一行为重申了对纯真善良的信仰，提醒着诚实是一个人可以拥有的最宝贵的财富。 ⑪孩子们无私捐赠心爱玩具给山区小孩 My heart brimmed with pride as I watched my children tenderly pack their beloved toys for the children in the mountains. "It's okay, we can share," they reassured each other, their innocent faces glowing with selflessness. Handing over the toys, they smiled, a gesture that spoke volumes of their generosity. I was deeply moved by their selfless act, realizing the profound joy that comes from giving without expecting anything in return. 当我看着我的孩子们温柔地为山区的孩子们打包他们心爱的玩具时，我的心充满了骄傲。“没关系，我们可以分享，”他们互相安慰，他们天真的脸上洋溢着无私的光芒。交出玩具时，他们微笑了，这个举动充分表达了他们的慷慨。我被他们无私的行为深深感动，意识到不求回报的给予带来的深刻喜悦。 ⑫目睹司机们默契给过马路盲人让行 A hush of silence fell as the drivers sensed the blind man's cautious steps. In unspoken agreement, they halted their vehicles, creating a path of respect. "After you," the gesture seemed to say, as the man's hesitant smile grew with each confident stride. The collective act of kindness resonated within me, a profound reminder of the quiet strength in our shared humanity. 当司机们察觉到盲人谨慎的步伐时，一片寂静悄然降临。他们心照不宣地停下了车辆，为尊重铺就了一条道路。"您先请，"这个动作似乎在说，当盲人犹豫的微笑随着每一步自信的步伐而增长。这一集体的善行在我内心引起了共鸣，深刻提醒我我们共有的人性中无声的力量。 *** 高考真题精讲 *** 【2024新课标I&II卷】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry." 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do. Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus to Prague, I’ll be late for the conference which is so important that I can’t afford to miss it!” I explained. “May I have your phone number? I will call you and return the money I owe you. I promise I will keep my word or you keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. “Just keep your promise, Sir.” A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure. Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him. We chatted happily on the way to the airport. I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down. I also gave him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight. We became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter. 【解析】 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一次因风暴延误的旅途中，匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶最后一班去布拉格的公共汽车。司机冈特不熟悉车站位置，通过电话求助后顺利抵达。到达时作者却发现自己没带现金，尝试用葡萄牙银行卡支付没有成功，而车站的取款机也故障了。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我跑回到冈特那里，告诉他这个坏消息。”可知，第一段可描写作者留下冈特的电话，承诺会还钱给对方，冈特同意，最终作者及时登上了公共汽车。 ②由第二段首句内容“四天后，当我回到维也纳时，我按照承诺给冈特打了电话。”可知，第二段可描写作者付费给冈特，并向对方表示感激，两人成为了好朋友。 2.续写线索：作者给出解决办法——承诺还钱——冈特同意——作者登上公共汽车——履行承诺还钱——两人成为朋友 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①拒绝：reject/refuse ②给某人拥抱：give sb. a hug/embrace sb. ③记下，写下：write down/set down 情绪类 ①难以置信地：in disbelief/incredibly/unbelievably ②开心地：happily/joyfully 【点睛】【高分句型1】He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的限制性定语从句） 【2022浙江6月卷】 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 I needed to do something in my community (社区) in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did, too. It seemed like a good thing to do. I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need, but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner. We began preparing the food, from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat. Much still needed to be done before dinner was served, but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering. It wasn’t until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner. As the line of people came toward me, I got a little scared. I’d come face to face with the homeless: How should I act? How would they treat me? Would they hate me for having more than they did? While some of the people looked very friendly, some of them looked so dangerous. I didn’t have too much time to worry about it. I was assigned (分配) to serve the salad with the lady next to me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she’d be right there, which I found quite comforting. I had never seen so many people wanting food. They were of all ages and nationalities. Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty. Some looked like they had tally given up on life, while others seemed to be making the best of the situation, smiling and joking. Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat. It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn’t have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. I wanted to make them know that I was really anxious to help them. To my relief, they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile, and I could see their exhaustion in their eyes. I wanted to know what they were going through and I was desperate to know what I could do for them. They nodded gratefully as I pushed my spoon into the pot and took a large spoonful and poured it into their bowls. I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. This experience made me realize that there are so many people in this world who need our help. It also made me realize that our small act of kindness can make them feel warm and make a great difference to them. I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food. I am anxious to urge the world to do everything possible to help those in need. 【解析】 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者为了完成高中毕业所需的社区服务时间，需要在所在的社区做点什么，作者去了施粥所，作者发现准备过程中要做的事情很多，作者看到无家可归的人靠近时心里有点害怕，但是却忙得没有时间去担心这些，作者看到了年龄和国籍各不相同的人，这让作者感到很难过。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当他们朝我走来的时候，我露出了最灿烂、最幸福的笑容。”可知，第一段可描写作者是怎么为无家可归的人施粥。 ②由第二段首句内容“我很高兴我用这种方式赢得了我的服务时间。”可知，第二段可描写作者对这次社区服务的感悟。 2.续写线索：无家可归的人笑——作者舀粥——无家可归的人感激——作者感悟——作者发出呼吁 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①倒：pour/decant ②意识到：realize that/be aware that ③主张：urge sb. to do/advocate sb. to do 情绪类 ①感谢：gratefully/thankfully ②急切的：anxious/eager 【点睛】[高分句型1] This experience made me realize that there are so many people in this world who need our help. (由that引导的宾语从句和who引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food. (由关系代词that引导的定语从句，省略了that和when引导的时间状语从句) *** 名校模拟题提升练 *** 【湖南师大附中 2024 年高二第一次月考】 父亲迷路被送回 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Many years ago, my father, who was 80 at that time, arrived for his regular two-week visit at my home in Karachi. He lived with my elder brother in Lahore most of the time and for ten years had stuck to his habit of going for an-hour-long morning walk to keep fit. Naturally, he was keen to continue his morning walk while with us in Karachi. Our preferred park is a 2km walk from my house and it has a 1km walking track, I could not drive him there every day as I had to leave for the office while at the same time he wanted to set out. Since there were hardly any footpaths in Karachi, my father said he was delighted to walk on the road as he was certain there wouldn't be much traffic in the morning. Though I kept him informed that our house was near the park and was made of red bricks in case he got lost, I was still less confident so I suggested it would be safer if he changed his walk time to the evening. That way I could take him to the park after work. However, my father—a determined person—said that he could not change his routine for just a few days and insisted that he would be leaving the house every day at 7 am and returning by 8 am. So one day when he had not returned by 8:30 am, my wife, Qaisa, phoned me in a panic. Worried, I immediately drove home, taking the same route that my father would have taken for his walk. Not spotting him anywhere, I drove back to the park, in the hope of discovering some trace, but in vain. Totally at a loss for what to do next, I returned home and waited impatiently, walking back and forth in the house. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At 10:35 am the doorbell rang and my father stood outside the door smiling, accompanied by a young man. __________________________________________________________________________      After knowing what had happened, I showed my appreciation of the young man's kindness. ____________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 本文讲述了“我”的80岁父亲有晨起散步的习惯。由于父亲对附近的地形不熟悉，“我”害怕他走失，于是劝说父亲将散步时间改到晚上，但遭到拒绝。有一天父亲如常出门散步，但很晚仍未回来，妻子和“我”十分担心，出门寻找，但仍然一无所获的故事。 思路点拨： 根据第一段首句的内容“到了10点35分，门铃响了，父亲微笑着站在门外，身边有一个年轻人。”可知，这里可以描写一位年轻人将父亲送回来的经过。 根据第二段的首句的内容“知道发生了什么事情之后，我对他的善良表示了感谢。”可知，这里可以描写作者如何对那个年轻人表示感谢，年轻人对此的反应，以及这件事对作者的影响。 续写线索：看到父亲感到高兴  —— 年轻人将父亲送回来的经过 —— 感谢年轻人 —— 年轻人拒绝 —— 对“我”的影响 词汇激活 行为类 紧紧拥抱：hug tightly / embrace tightly 告诉：tell sb. sth. / inform sb. of sth. 迷路：lose one’s way / get lost 礼貌拒绝：refuse politely / turn down politely 安全回家：bring sb safely home / carry home safely 影响：affect / have an influence on / have an effect on 帮助：give sb. a hand / help out 情绪类 如释重负：Enormously relieved / feel a sense of relief 高兴的：delighted / glad / happy 感谢：thanks / gratitude 参考范文 At 10:35 am the doorbell rang and my father stood outside the door smiling, accompanied by a young man. Rushing to the door as fast as I could, I hugged my father tightly and affectionately, with my heart occupied with joy and relief. Enormously relieved, the young man told me that my father had lost his way while returning home after the morning walk. The only description he could provide was that my house was near the park and that the house was made of red bricks. With much effort, and in almost two hours' searching, the young man was able to locate my house. After knowing what had happened, I showed my appreciation of the young man's kindness. I invited him inside to join us for a cup of tea. The man refused politely and said sincerely that he felt so delighted to have brought my father safely home to me that he did not require further thanks. Then he drove the car away without even sharing his name and I have not seen him again. This kind act has a lasting influence on me. I always give others a helping hand if possible, even so many years later. 【2023湛江二模】 奉献爱心，乐于助人 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One New Year’s morning, as we came down to breakfast, with very shiny faces and spendy aprons (围裙), we surprisingly found father alone in the dining room. “Happy New Year, Papa! Where is Mother?” we cried. “A little boy came begging and said they were starving at home, so your mother went to see and-ah, here she is.” As Papa spoke, in came Mamma, looking very cold, rather sad, and very much excited. “Not far away from here, lies a poor woman with a little newborn baby. Six children are huddled（挤在一起）into one bed to keep from freezing, for they have no fire. There is nothing to eat over there, and the oldest boy came here to tell me they were starving on this bitterly cold day. My little girls, will you give them your breakfast, as a New Year’s gift?” We sat silent a minute and looked at the nice, hot porridge（粥）, creamy milk, and good bread and butter; for we were brought up like English children, and never drank tea or coffee, or ate anything but porridge for our breakfast. “I wish we’d eaten it up,” thought I, for I was rather a selfish child, and very hungry. “May I go and help carry it to the poor, little children?” asked Beth, who had the tenderest heart that ever beat under a spendy apron. “I can carry that little pot,” said little May, proudly giving the thing she loved best. “And I shall take all the porridge,” I burst in, heartily ashamed of my first feeling. “You shall put on your things and help me, and when we come back, we’ll get something to eat,”said Mother, beginning to pile the bread and butter into a big basket. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。 We were soon ready and set out. As we made our way back home, I felt a sense of warmth in my heart. 【答案】One possible version : We were soon ready and set out. Mother led the way, carrying the basket of bread and butter, while we followed with our breakfast. I walked behind feeling ashamed for my selfish thoughts earlier. Arriving at the poor woman’s home, we’re met with six children huddled to get her in one bed. Mother quickly set to work, warming the porridge on the stove while Beth and May helped to give away the bread and butter. I watched as they eagerly ate the food ，their eyes shining with gratitude. As we made our way back home, I felt a sense of warmth in my heart. From that day forward, I knew that I would always try hard to help those in need, no matter how small the gesture is. And as we sat down to our own breakfast that day I felt truly grateful for all that we had, and for the opportunity to give to those who had so little. Giving was far more important than taking, which made the biggest difference in people's lives. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题07 读后续写之助人为乐 年份 卷别 类别 话题 2024 2024年新高考I&II卷 人与社会 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 2022 2022年浙江6月卷 人与社会 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 2020 2020年新高考I&II卷 人与社会 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 【题型分析】 助人为乐是中华民族的传统美德，也是高考“读后续写”中常见的题材。它传达的温暖和正能量常常触动人心，帮助学生们培养积极向上的情感。因此，在续写中，助人为乐的主题总能带来正面影响，深受出题者的青睐。 助人为乐类的故事情节在续写中，可以涉及生活、学校和家庭等多个方面，常见的情感描写包括面对困难时的无助和困惑，帮助者的关怀和行动，受助者的感激与温暖，问题解决后的喜悦，以及主题升华带来的感悟。这些情感层层递进，能够引导读者深刻理解助人为乐的意义。 【写作方法】 高考读后续写中的助人为乐主题，可以通过以下六步实现精彩的表达： 第一步：提炼六个要素，获取主旨大意 阅读文本时，先提取六个基本要素：谁（Who）、何时（When）、何地（Where）、做什么（What）、为什么（Why）以及如何（How）。在理解了这些要素之后，可以提炼出故事的核心情节，进一步推测出作者的写作意图。 第二步：理清故事脉络，把握情感变化 叙述类文章通常包含情节发展线（plots）和情感变化线（emotions）两条主线。考生可以使用思维导图或结构图来梳理故事的脉络和情感的起伏，这样在续写时，既能符合原文逻辑，也能更准确地传达出情感变化的过程。 第三步：分析段落首句，精心设计问题 在续写段落时，段首句是理解续写逻辑的重要线索。考生可以分析两个段首句之间的关系，比如是否是顺承、转折或因果。然后设计小问题，例如：段首句揭示了什么信息？第一个段落应该从哪里展开？如何衔接到下一个段落？这些小问题将帮助考生更自然地过渡到下一段，使整篇故事浑然一体。 第四步：设计结尾情节，拔高价值取向 设计结尾时，要紧扣故事主线，合理展开想象，设计出打动人心的结尾情节。结尾可以通过受助者的反思、帮助者的感悟等方式升华主题，展现出助人为乐的人生价值。这不仅提升了故事的情感层次，也增强了读者对助人为乐主题的认同感。 第五步：列出关键词汇，续写连贯句群 在续写情节时，考生可以在草稿纸上列出一些关键词汇，涵盖原文中的主要人物、事件以及情感词。按事件发生顺序整理出情节脉络，并通过这些关键词构建出连贯的句群，确保续写内容的流畅性和一致性。 第六步：润色词句，誊写成文 写好草稿后，考生可以通过语法和词汇修饰，润色句式，使续写内容更加符合原文的语言风格，同时确保句子结构更加优美。最后，用清晰流畅的书写将故事誊写在答题纸上，使整体内容规范、美观。 故事情节构建支架 在续写助人为乐主题时，情节构建可以分为以下三步： 第一步：困难描写--消极情绪+困境场景 情感表现：无助、困惑、焦急、失望、恐惧、沮丧 肢体动作：握紧双手、眉头紧锁、叹气、双肩垂下、深吸一口气 第二步：助人过程呈现（找到方法+行动细节） 助他型：主动发现他人困难——克服障碍——提供帮助 他助型：请求援助——寻求指导——得到帮助 第三步：圆满结局（感激+感动+升华） 情感表达：欣慰、温暖、感激、开心、满足、释然 主题升华：传递善意、收获成长、记忆深刻、互相成就 困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境） 感到 1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)=a wave of...=a feeling/sense of...一阵... 2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...) 3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb 因...颤抖 tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...) 流泪： 1. Tears blurred one's eyes.      2. One's eyes got misty.   3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊 4. ...be close to tears几乎要哭了 5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下 助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链） 某人想到/明白...; 有了主意 1. It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句 2. (idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind 3. One's mind began to race  Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子（锯子），从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的杰克顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。【八省联考】 皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华） 1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before 从句=It took some time before从句不久, ...      2. for an instant/moment一瞬间 1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句 2. But on second thoughts, ...但是转而一想，... 3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙 1. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手).（2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三） 2. Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldn’t thank him enough (非常感谢他)and everyone involved in for what they did for her. （2020届山东省泰安市高三第二轮复习质量检测（二模）英语试题） 1. Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. （2020.7高考山东卷） 2. He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about him (如此关心他) and said he was willing to work.（2021广州2月联考） 3. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words (感动得说不出话来). I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest. （2021年1月八省联考） 4. I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀). （2021年1月八省联考） 5. Stunned and moved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the note, feeling a pang of guilt about my previous thought that all people were indifferent.（2021年1月八省联考） 1. From then on,  I made up my mind to pass on “love”  to others. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand. ” 从那以后,我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。俗话说:“玫瑰予人，手留余香。” 2. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that Mexican family offered me. 从那天起,每次遇到需要帮助的人,我都会向他们伸出援手,希望能把墨西哥家庭对我的善意传递下去。 3. From that day on, Lily clearly realized the importance of devotion, and she made up her mind that she would offer a helping hand to those in need in the future. 从那天起,Lily清楚地意识到奉献的重要性,她下定决心,将来遇到有需要帮助的人,她会主动伸出援助之手。 4. From then on, Tom made up his mind to help someone who needs help. Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future. 从那时起,Tom决定帮助需要帮助的人。只有这样,将来才会有越来越多的人互相帮助。 *It hit/struck/occurred to/dawned on sb that +感悟 5. It dawned on/occurred to me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better. 我恍然大悟，那一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大，而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。 6. Sometimes, a small act of kindness can be powerful enough to make a huge difference. 有时,一个小小的善行会有足够的力量产生巨大的影响。 7. With one small gesture,you may not only spread love, but also positively influence others’ lives. 一个小小的行为,不仅能传递爱,还能积极地影响他人的生活。 8. As the saying goes, “Rose given, fragrance in hand.”It turns out that their efforts not only helped those in need, but also gave themselves the sweet taste of helping others. 俗话说, “赠人玫瑰，手留余香。”原来他们的努力不仅帮助了有需要的人，而且让他们尝到了帮助他人的甜蜜。 9. She felt warmth in the cold day and believed there was kindness in every corner. 在寒冷的天气里她感到了温暖, 相信每个角落都有善意。（受别人帮助） 10. It is love that makes the world go round and Tom felt it deep in his little heart. Tom在他小小的心灵深处感受到,是爱使世界运转。 11. It was the special experience that made me realize that helping others is a valuable virtue.  正是这次特别的经历使我明白了帮助别人是一种重要的美德。 12. This kind act has a lasting influence on me.I always give others a helping hand if possible.  这种善意的行为对我产生了持久的影响。我总是尽可能地帮助别人。 13. He had never expected that his small act of kindness would benefit him so much. 他从来没有想到这个小小的善举会让他受益良多。 14. Whether rich or poor, we should be happy to do something for society. Thus we can learn that giving is the source of happiness.  无论贫富,我们都应该乐于为社会做点什么。因此,我们可以了解到给予是幸福的源泉。 ①归还老人丢失的手套 With a tender heart, I spotted the gloves he cherished, lost and alone on the bench. As I handed them back, his eyes, a window to his soul, sparkled with surprise and gratitude. "Thank you," he whispered, his voice quivering slightly, as he gently squeezed my hand—a silent testament to the joy of giving. In that moment, I felt the warmth of compassion, understanding that small gestures have immense impact. 心怀柔情，我瞥见了他珍视的手套，遗失在长椅上，孤单无援。当我递还它们时，他的眼睛，灵魂之窗，因惊讶和感激而闪烁。“谢谢你，”他轻声说，声音微微颤抖，同时轻轻握住我的手——这是给予之乐的无声证明。在那一刻，我感受到了同情的温暖，明白小小的举动有着巨大的影响。 ②水手买花赠餐厅客人 In the dull and silent restaurant, the sailor, with a heart full of benevolence, approached the elderly woman, her flowers a vibrant burst of color amidst the annoying day. He purchased every bloom, his smile as warm as the sun, and handed them out to diners. Their faces lit up, a chorus of "Thank you" filling the air, as the room transformed into a haven of warmth and goodwill. The sailor's eyes twinkled with the satisfaction of a deed well done, knowing that a simple act could ignite such a collective sense of happiness. 在单调而又无声的餐厅里，那位水手怀着满心的善意，走向那位老妇人，她的花朵在令人恼火的日子里显得格外鲜艳。他买下了每一朵花，他的微笑像阳光一样温暖，并将它们分发给用餐者。他们的脸上洋溢着光彩，"谢谢你"的声音此起彼伏，整个房间转变成了一个充满温暖和善意的避风港。水手的眼睛闪烁着对善行的满足，他知道一个简单的行为能点燃如此强烈的集体幸福感。 ③年轻男子帮助迷路父亲回家 My heart swelled with gratitude as the young man gently guided my lost father to our doorstep. His kind gesture, a beacon of hope in the twilight, spoke volumes of his character. "I'm in your debt," I uttered, my voice thick with emotion, as I clasped his hand firmly. The sincerity in his eyes and the gentle smile on his face reassured me of the humanity's inherent goodness. In that moment, I realized the depth of kindness in strangers, a reminder that compassion knows no bounds. 当那位年轻人轻轻地将我迷路的父亲带到我们的门前时，我的心充满了感激。他亲切的举动，在黄昏中成为了希望的灯塔，充分展现了他的品格。"我欠你的情，"我声音充满情感地说，同时紧紧地握住他的手。他眼中的真诚和脸上温柔的微笑让我确信了人性的固有善良。在那一刻，我意识到了陌生人的深厚善意，这是一个提醒，同情心没有界限。 ④我们帮助邻居修复被暴风雨破坏的花园 As I surveyed the neighbor's garden, ravaged by the storm, a wave of empathy surged within me. We rallied with determination, our hands working diligently to restore the once vibrant haven. "We're in this together," I declared, my voice steady, reflecting our collective spirit. The neighbors' weary faces brightened with each replanted flower, their smiles a testament to our shared effort. The experience taught us the power of unity and the resilience of nature and community. 当我审视着邻居家被暴风雨摧毁的花园时，内心涌起了一阵同情。我们带着决心集合起来，我们的手勤奋地工作，恢复了曾经生机勃勃的避风港。"我们同在于此，"我坚定地说，我的声音反映了我们的集体精神。邻居们疲惫的脸上随着每朵重新种植的花而变得明亮，他们的微笑证明了我们共同努力的成果。这次经历教会了我们团结的力量以及自然和社区的韧性。 ⑤出租车司机免费送我去机场赶会议 Anxiety gripped me as I realized the taxi fare was beyond my reach. The driver, sensing my distress, offered a lifeline with a simple, "No charge, off you go." His words, a gentle breeze in the storm, eased my frantic heartbeat. I stammered my thanks, my eyes welling with gratitude as I hurried into the airport, his kind deed a lesson in humanity's capacity for kindness. 当我意识到出租车费超出了我的支付能力时，焦虑感笼罩了我。司机察觉到我的困境，用一句简单的话提供了救生索："不用付费，快去吧。" 他的话语，就像暴风雨中的一缕和风，缓解了我狂乱的心跳。我结结巴巴地感谢他，当我匆忙进入机场时，我的眼睛充满了感激之情，他的善举是关于人性中善良潜能的一课。 ⑥同学帮助我适应新学校 Feeling like a fish out of water in the new school, I was greeted by a classmate's warm smile, a lifebuoy in the overwhelming sea of faces. "Welcome, let me show you around," she said, her voice a soothing melody amidst the chaos. Her friendly guidance steered me through the corridors, her patient explanations like a map through the unfamiliar territory. I watched her kind eyes, a mirror reflecting the spirit of community. It dawned on me that every new beginning is a chance to find connections and kindness in unexpected places. 在新学校里感到格格不入，我被一位同学温暖的微笑所迎接，就像在令人不知所措的人海中的救生圈。"欢迎，让我带你参观一下，"她的声音在混乱中成为舒缓的旋律。她友好的引导带我穿过走廊，她耐心的解释就像在不熟悉的领域中的地图。我注视着她那仁慈的眼睛，那是反映社区精神的镜子。我突然意识到，每一个新的开始都是一个在意想不到的地方找到联系和善意的机会。 ⑦墨西哥家庭帮我修理车 Stranded by my car's breakdown in a Mexican village, I was enveloped by a sense of despair. A local family, noticing my plight, approached with open arms and kind words, "No worries, we can help." Their hands, skilled and swift, worked in harmony to mend my vehicle. The father's reassuring nod and the mother's gentle smile were like a balm to my anxious heart. As they waved goodbye, I was left with a profound sense of gratitude and the realization that kindness knows no borders. 在墨西哥村庄里，我的汽车抛锚了，我被绝望感包围。一户当地家庭注意到了我的困境，他们伸出双臂，用亲切的话语走来："别担心，我们可以帮忙。"他们熟练而迅速地动手修理我的车辆。父亲那令人安心的点头和母亲那温柔的微笑就像对我焦虑心灵的安慰剂。当他们挥手告别时，我心中充满了深深的感激之情，并意识到善良无国界。 ⑧给被困路上旅客面包和衣服度过暴风雪 As the winter storm raged, I watched the stranded tourists with a heavy heart, their shivering forms a stark contrast to the cozy warmth of my home. Driven by compassion, I gathered loaves of bread and warm clothes, and offered them with a gentle, "Please, take these to ward off the chill." Their eyes, initially dulled by the cold, brightened with surprise and gratitude. The simple act of sharing taught me the true meaning of empathy and the power of small gestures to bring comfort in the face of adversity. 当冬季风暴肆虐时，我怀着沉重的心情看着被困的游客，他们在寒冷中颤抖的身影与我家的温馨温暖形成了鲜明对比。出于同情，我收集了面包和保暖的衣物，温和地递给他们："请拿这些来抵御寒冷。"他们的眼睛最初因寒冷而黯淡无光，随后因惊讶和感激而明亮起来。分享这个简单行为教会了我同情的真正含义，以及在逆境中带来安慰的小举动的力量。 ⑨帮助伯纳德卖爆米花 Bernard's eyes, once lively, now held a shadow of despair as his popcorn business faced hard times. With a determined heart, I rallied friends to help. "Let's make his popcorn the talk of the town," I encouraged, our voices a chorus of hope. We set up stands, our hands busy popping corn and spreading smiles. The community's response was a warm embrace, and Bernard's relieved grin was the sun breaking through clouds. It was a lesson in resilience and the strength of unity in the face of challenges. 伯纳德的眼睛曾经活泼，现在却笼罩着绝望的阴影，因为他的爆米花生意面临困难时期。我怀着坚定的心，召集朋友们来帮助。"让我们让他的爆米花成为城里的谈资，"我鼓励说，我们的声音是希望的合唱。我们设立了摊位，手忙脚乱地爆玉米和传播微笑。社区的回应是一个温暖的拥抱，伯纳德释然的笑容是云层中透出的阳光。这是关于在挑战面前的韧性和团结力量的一课。 ⑩清洁工拾金不昧归还戒指 The cleaner's heart overflowed with integrity as she found the glinting ring, knowing its worth yet choosing to return it. "This belongs to someone precious," she thought, handing it back with a humble smile. The lady's eyes glistened with tears of gratitude as she clasped the cleaner's hand, her "Thank you" echoing with sincerity. The act reaffirmed the belief in the purity of kindness, a reminder that honesty is the most valuable treasure one can possess. 清洁工在发现那枚闪闪发光的戒指时，内心充满了正直，知道它的价值却选择归还。“这属于某个珍贵的人，”她想着，带着谦逊的微笑递还戒指。女士的眼睛因感激而闪烁着泪光，她紧握清洁工的手，她的“谢谢你”充满了真诚。这一行为重申了对纯真善良的信仰，提醒着诚实是一个人可以拥有的最宝贵的财富。 ⑪孩子们无私捐赠心爱玩具给山区小孩 My heart brimmed with pride as I watched my children tenderly pack their beloved toys for the children in the mountains. "It's okay, we can share," they reassured each other, their innocent faces glowing with selflessness. Handing over the toys, they smiled, a gesture that spoke volumes of their generosity. I was deeply moved by their selfless act, realizing the profound joy that comes from giving without expecting anything in return. 当我看着我的孩子们温柔地为山区的孩子们打包他们心爱的玩具时，我的心充满了骄傲。“没关系，我们可以分享，”他们互相安慰，他们天真的脸上洋溢着无私的光芒。交出玩具时，他们微笑了，这个举动充分表达了他们的慷慨。我被他们无私的行为深深感动，意识到不求回报的给予带来的深刻喜悦。 ⑫目睹司机们默契给过马路盲人让行 A hush of silence fell as the drivers sensed the blind man's cautious steps. In unspoken agreement, they halted their vehicles, creating a path of respect. "After you," the gesture seemed to say, as the man's hesitant smile grew with each confident stride. The collective act of kindness resonated within me, a profound reminder of the quiet strength in our shared humanity. 当司机们察觉到盲人谨慎的步伐时，一片寂静悄然降临。他们心照不宣地停下了车辆，为尊重铺就了一条道路。"您先请，"这个动作似乎在说，当盲人犹豫的微笑随着每一步自信的步伐而增长。这一集体的善行在我内心引起了共鸣，深刻提醒我我们共有的人性中无声的力量。 【2024新课标I&II卷】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought. That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said. Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry." 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文 【2022浙江6月卷】 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 I needed to do something in my community (社区) in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did, too. It seemed like a good thing to do. I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need, but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner. We began preparing the food, from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat. Much still needed to be done before dinner was served, but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering. It wasn’t until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner. As the line of people came toward me, I got a little scared. I’d come face to face with the homeless: How should I act? How would they treat me? Would they hate me for having more than they did? While some of the people looked very friendly, some of them looked so dangerous. I didn’t have too much time to worry about it. I was assigned (分配) to serve the salad with the lady next to me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she’d be right there, which I found quite comforting. I had never seen so many people wanting food. They were of all ages and nationalities. Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty. Some looked like they had tally given up on life, while others seemed to be making the best of the situation, smiling and joking. Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat. It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn’t have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【湖南师大附中 2024 年高二第一次月考】 父亲迷路被送回 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Many years ago, my father, who was 80 at that time, arrived for his regular two-week visit at my home in Karachi. He lived with my elder brother in Lahore most of the time and for ten years had stuck to his habit of going for an-hour-long morning walk to keep fit. Naturally, he was keen to continue his morning walk while with us in Karachi. Our preferred park is a 2km walk from my house and it has a 1km walking track, I could not drive him there every day as I had to leave for the office while at the same time he wanted to set out. Since there were hardly any footpaths in Karachi, my father said he was delighted to walk on the road as he was certain there wouldn't be much traffic in the morning. Though I kept him informed that our house was near the park and was made of red bricks in case he got lost, I was still less confident so I suggested it would be safer if he changed his walk time to the evening. That way I could take him to the park after work. However, my father—a determined person—said that he could not change his routine for just a few days and insisted that he would be leaving the house every day at 7 am and returning by 8 am. So one day when he had not returned by 8:30 am, my wife, Qaisa, phoned me in a panic. Worried, I immediately drove home, taking the same route that my father would have taken for his walk. Not spotting him anywhere, I drove back to the park, in the hope of discovering some trace, but in vain. Totally at a loss for what to do next, I returned home and waited impatiently, walking back and forth in the house. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 At 10:35 am the doorbell rang and my father stood outside the door smiling, accompanied by a young man. __________________________________________________________________________      After knowing what had happened, I showed my appreciation of the young man's kindness. ____________________________________________________________________________ 【2023湛江二模】 奉献爱心，乐于助人 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One New Year’s morning, as we came down to breakfast, with very shiny faces and spendy aprons (围裙), we surprisingly found father alone in the dining room. “Happy New Year, Papa! Where is Mother?” we cried. “A little boy came begging and said they were starving at home, so your mother went to see and-ah, here she is.” As Papa spoke, in came Mamma, looking very cold, rather sad, and very much excited. “Not far away from here, lies a poor woman with a little newborn baby. Six children are huddled（挤在一起）into one bed to keep from freezing, for they have no fire. There is nothing to eat over there, and the oldest boy came here to tell me they were starving on this bitterly cold day. My little girls, will you give them your breakfast, as a New Year’s gift?” We sat silent a minute and looked at the nice, hot porridge（粥）, creamy milk, and good bread and butter; for we were brought up like English children, and never drank tea or coffee, or ate anything but porridge for our breakfast. “I wish we’d eaten it up,” thought I, for I was rather a selfish child, and very hungry. “May I go and help carry it to the poor, little children?” asked Beth, who had the tenderest heart that ever beat under a spendy apron. “I can carry that little pot,” said little May, proudly giving the thing she loved best. “And I shall take all the porridge,” I burst in, heartily ashamed of my first feeling. “You shall put on your things and help me, and when we come back, we’ll get something to eat,”said Mother, beginning to pile the bread and butter into a big basket. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。 We were soon ready and set out. 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