内容正文:
写作专练
【写作提纲】
Para1:介绍活动并表明身份(发出邀请的主体)
先表明自己是学生会主席李华,然后引出要介绍的 “中国文化节” 活动,告知同学们活动即将举行,激发他们的兴趣。
Para2:详细描述活动的具体信息
活动时间:明确说明活动具体在下周几以及哪个时间段进行。 活动地点:具体指出活动举办的地点。
活动内容:列举活动包含的各项内容,如传统文化展示(书法、绘画、剪纸等)、传统音乐表演、文化相关的互动游戏等。
Para3:再次表达诚挚邀请并展望活动效果
强调希望同学们都能积极参与此次活动,一起享受探索中国文化的乐趣。
1.We are honored to invite you to take part in the upcoming “Chinese Cultural Festival”.(我们很荣幸邀请您参加即将到来的 “中国文化节”。)
2.The “Chinese Cultural Festival” is bound to be a spectacular event filled with rich cultural connotations.(“中国文化节” 必定会是一场充满丰富文化内涵的精彩活动。)
3.You will be immersed in the unique charm of Chinese culture through various activities at the festival.(通过文化节的各项活动,您将沉浸于中国文化的独特魅力之中。)
4.This event offers a wonderful opportunity to gain a deeper understanding of traditional Chinese culture.(此次活动为深入了解中国传统文化提供了绝佳机会。)
5.Join us in the “Chinese Cultural Festival” and embark on an exciting journey of cultural exploration.(和我们一起参加 “中国文化节”,开启一段激动人心的文化探索之旅。)
6.The festival will showcase a diverse range of Chinese cultural elements, including but not limited to calligraphy, painting, and traditional music.(文化节将展示多种多样的中国文化元素,包括但不限于书法、绘画和传统音乐。)
7.We look forward to seeing you at the “Chinese Cultural Festival” to share the joy and wonder of Chinese culture.(我们期待在 “中国文化节” 见到您,一起分享中国文化的喜悦与奇妙。)
8.Don't miss out on this amazing opportunity to experience the richness and diversity of Chinese culture up close.(不要错过这个近距离体验中国文化丰富性和多样性的绝佳机会。)
9.The “Chinese Cultural Festival” is designed to bring Chinese culture to life and engage everyone in a fun and educational way.(“中国文化节” 旨在以有趣且富有教育意义的方式让中国文化鲜活起来,让每个人都参与其中。)
10.Come and be a part of the “Chinese Cultural Festival” and create unforgettable memories while exploring Chinese culture.(快来成为 “中国文化节” 的一部分,在探索中国文化的同时创造难忘的记忆。)
Dear classmates,
I am thrilled to invite you all to our Chinese Culture Festival, which will take place at the school auditorium next Friday.
The festival will start at 2 p.m, featuring exciting activities like traditional Chinese dance performances, calligraphy workshops, and food tasting stalls. It will be a fantastic opportunity to immerse ourselves in the vibrant culture of China and learn something new. Your participation will undoubtedly make the event more memorable.
We’re looking forward to seeing you there!
Yours,
Li Hua
情绪表达:
1.My heart pounded/thumped wildly in my chest.
2.I gather up/ pluck up/muster up/ summon up my courage.
3.My heart swelled with immense pride that I had never felt before.
人们的反应:
1.Their initial responses were mixed---some were sceptical, some were hesitant while others were....
2.Their responses were overwhelmingly positive.
3.What amazed me was their outpouring enthusiasm for my cards...
转折过度:
1.Reminded of my plan to buy presents for my family, I ..
2.Armed with new-found confidence/courage/resolve, I adjusted my pitch....
3.Each sale felt like a small victory, boosting my confidence with every knock.
主题升华:
1.This experience was not only about money, it was also about a journey of self-growth, proving the value of my hard work and overcoming shyness.
2.It is a critical moment in shaping my character, reminding me that even the most daunting challenges can be overcome with courage and perseverance.
原版范文
Wasting no time, I set off and knocked on doors in my neighborhood. Gathering my courage, I introduced myself as the young representative of the well-known greeting-card company.The initial responses were mixed — some were hesitant, while others were fascinated by the idea of a child engaged in such a venture. As I showcased the high-quality cards and shared the story behind each design, the doubt began to fade away, replaced by genuine interest. Surprisingly, my shy character transformed into enthusiasm, and I found myself engaging in conversations that extended beyond the purpose of sales.
Eventually, I earned over $20, a large sum of money for a 9-year-old kid in 1954. The community’s response exceeded my expectations, and the support I received went beyond mere financial transactions. Neighbors were not just buying cards; they were encouraging a young entrepreneur. This unexpected journey into sales not only alleviated my financial concerns for Christmas but also instilled a sense of accomplishment and self-confidence. It broadened my horizons and laid the foundation for a newfound belief in the possibilities that determination and courage could unfold, regardless of age.
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应用文写作
假设你是学生会主席李华, 下周五你校将组织一场”中国文化节”活动,请你代表学生会邀请同学们积极参加,内容包括:
1.描述活动时间、地点和内容;
2.表达诚挚邀请。
注意:1.写作词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【写作提纲】
Para1:
先表明自己是学生会主席李华,然后引出
Para2:
活动时间:明确说明活动具体在下周几以及哪个时间段进行。 活动地点:具体指出活动举办的地点。
活动内容:
Para3:
强调希望同学们都能积极参与此次活动,一起享受探索中国文化的乐趣。
【词汇积累】
a spectacular event 一个精彩的活动 rich cultural connotations丰富的文化内涵
be immersed in 沉浸在 the unique charm of Chinese culture中国文化的独特魅力
gain a deeper understanding of 获得更深入的理解
embark on an exciting journey开始一段激动人心的旅程 miss out on 错过;错失
bring Chinese culture to life让中国文化鲜活起来 create unforgettable memories创造难忘的回忆
【好句积累】
1. 我们很荣幸邀请您参加即将到来的 “中国文化节”。
2. “中国文化节” 必定会是一场充满丰富文化内涵的精彩活动。
3. 通过文化节的各项活动,您将沉浸于中国文化的独特魅力之中。
4. 此次活动为深入了解中国传统文化提供了绝佳机会。
5. 和我们一起参加 “中国文化节”,开启一段激动人心的文化探索之旅。
6. 文化节将展示多种多样的中国文化元素,包括但不限于书法、绘画和传统音乐。
7. 我们期待在 “中国文化节” 见到您,一起分享中国文化的喜悦与奇妙。
8. 不要错过这个近距离体验中国文化丰富性和多样性的绝佳机会。
9. “中国文化节” 旨在以有趣且富有教育意义的方式让中国文化鲜活起来,让每个人都参与其中。
10.快来成为 “中国文化节” 的一部分,在探索中国文化的同时创造难忘的记忆。
【连句成篇】
Dear classmates,
Yours,
Li Hua读后续写
I faced a tight budget when I was nine. On November Ist, I used up most of the money I saved. With a small amount of pocket money left before Christmas I didn’t have enough to buy presents for the family.
I was seriously considering going to my dad and asking for an advance on the next year’s pocket money, so I could at least buy gifts for my family members. But then, one evening, I was sitting in my room reading advertisements in the back of a magazine. Several greeting-card companies were telling us how people could make money by selling their cards and stationery (文具). Normally, I would have passed right over the ads, but this time my situation was so difficult that I felt I had nothing to lose.
The ad that attracted me most was one by a well-known greeting-card company in my nation, whose products were of high quality. With my parents’ help, I contacted the company, although they preferred adults or older kids to advertise their products. After my sincere request, they agreed to give me, a nine-year-old boy, a chance.
My sales materials arrived within the week. I had expected something small and neat, but the package looked like a dinosaur’s shoebox it was close to three feet long and nearly a foot wide, full of stuff. There was a thick binder (活页夹) containing a complete selection of the cards and some writing paper, which I would be selling for around $3 per box.
Although my parents supported my try to make money by myself, they had little confidence in my success; after all, instead of an outgoing kid, I was somewhat shy. However, I was determined to have a try to challenge myself.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【词汇积累】
face a tight budget 面临紧张的预算 gather up my courage鼓起勇气
immense pride极大的骄傲 outpouring enthusiasm满腔热情
shape one’s character塑造性格 sceptical怀疑的
【好句积累】
情绪表达:
1. 我的心在我的胸前怦怦直跳。
2. 我鼓起勇气。
3. 我的心充满了我以前从未感到过的巨大的骄傲。
人们的反应:
1. 他们最初的反应都不一样,有些人持怀疑态度,有些人犹豫。
2. 他们的反应非常积极。
3. 让我吃惊的是他们对我的卡片的热情。
转折过渡:
1. 我想起了我打算给家人买礼物的计划。
2. 有了信心/勇气/决心,我调整了我的计划。
3. 每一次交易都感觉像是一个小小的胜利,每一次敲门声都增强了我的信心。
主题升华:
1. 这次体验不仅仅关乎金钱,它也是关于自我成长的旅程,证明了我努力工作和克服害羞的价值。
2. 这是塑造我性格的关键时刻,它提醒我,即使是最艰巨的挑战,也可以用勇气和毅力来克服。
【连句成篇】
Wasting no time, I set off and knocked on doors in my neighborhood.
Eventually, I earned over $20, a large sum of money for a 9-year-old kid in 1954.
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