UNIT 6 Section Ⅴ Writing——写一篇太空生活日志-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版2019）

Unit 6　Space and beyond Section Ⅴ Writing——写一篇太空生活日志 内容索引 模仿写作　学范文 1 40分写作限时练 2 模仿写作　学范文 返回 原文呈现 In space，even the most straightforward，everyday tasks can be quite difficult for astronauts who are spending months on board a spacecraft.In this zero gravity world，there is no up or down，and while sleeping on the ceiling might sound like fun，astronauts need to be strapped to sleeping compartments to protect themselves from injury. Although not many people enjoy doing housework，astronauts need to find the self-discipline to keep the small interior of their spacecraft clean；even using a vacuum cleaner to stop dust from getting into the air filters.A vacuum cleaner also comes in handy for fetching items that are floating around out-of-reach! Astronauts also need to keep themselves clean.To do this，they use special soap and shampoo which do not need to be rinsed off with water.After brushing their teeth，they spit into a towel. With no gravity to push against，astronauts’ bones and muscles can become weak.In order to stay fit，astronauts have to exercise on a regular basis. And while some food items，such as cakes and fruit can be eaten in more or less the same way that they are on Earth，water needs to be added to much of the food that is eaten in space.Nonetheless，a menu for a hungry astronaut can still be varied and balanced，often including soup，prawn sandwiches，as well as fruit yoghurt.And as salt and pepper would simply float away，astronauts are provided with these in liquid form. Carrying out these everyday tasks effectively helps the astronauts stay healthy and focus on their work in space—after all，imagine what would happen if they caught a cold and started to sneeze! 名师圈点 学语言 亮点表达上，第一段使用who引导的定语从句；最后一段使用动名词短语作主语；最后一句给读者以想象的空间，结尾风趣幽默且意味深刻。 逻辑衔接上，第二段使用了although引导的让步状语从句，even和also的使用令句子之间衔接更顺畅。第三段使用also使两个自然段紧凑，逻辑清晰。 知结构 本单元要求写一篇日记记录太空生活，应以第一人称记叙一天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情。文章开篇对事件进行总体描述，或开门见山直入主题；主体部分按照一定顺序展开叙述；结尾做出总结，发表个人感想。 情境任务写作 假定你是李华，有幸参加了一个太空旅行项目，已经在太空生活了几天。请你用英语写一篇80词左右的日记，向地球上的朋友们简单介绍一下你在太空的第一天的生活场景，包括吃饭、锻炼以及睡觉等几个方面。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 仿写程序步骤 1．一仿结构布局合理 明确体裁话题 日记，过去某一天所发生的事情 确定时态人称 以一般过去时为主；以第一人称为主 布局文章架构 第一段：应开门见山，直入主题； 第二段：按时间先后描述这一天发生的事情，注意详略得当； 第三段：发表一下自己的感受以及对太空生活的看法。 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①由于没有地心引力，地球上最简单的日常工作在太空中可能会非常困难。(as 引导原因状语从句) ____________________，the most straightforward daily tasks on the earth can be very difficult in space. ②起床后，我开始吃早餐。它包括一些面包和一袋果汁。 After getting up，I began to have breakfast.It consisted of _________________ _________________. ③工作了两个小时后，我需要锻炼一段时间来保持肌肉强壮。 After I worked for two hours，I _______________________________ to keep my muscles strong. As there is no gravity some bread and a bag of fruit juice needed to work out for some time 3．三仿句式高级表达 ④用独立主格结构改写句①。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ ⑤用非限制性定语从句改写句②。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ ⑥用动词-ing形式短语作时间状语改写句③。 ___________________________________________________________________________________ There being no gravity，the most straightforward daily tasks on the earth can be very difficult in space. After getting up，I began to have breakfast，which consisted of some bread and a bag of fruit juice. Having worked for two hours，I needed to work out for some time to keep my muscles strong. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 There being no gravity，the most straightforward daily tasks on the earth can be very difficult in space. After getting up，I began to have breakfast，which consisted of some bread and a bag of fruit juice.I had to fetch a straw to drink the juice，or otherwise it would float around in the spacecraft.Having worked for two hours，I needed to work out for some time to keep my muscles strong.I tied my feet to a special machine so that I wouldn’t float away.When it was time to go to bed，I went into a small cupboard，got into a sleeping bag and tied it to the wall.I think I must look like a big sausage.It is so funny，isn’t it? Living in space is rather difficult but fun.I enjoy it very much. 精彩素材积累 首段： 1．As there is no gravity，life in space can be very different from that on the earth. 由于没有重力，太空中的生活与地球上的生活大不相同。 2．Some most straightforward daily tasks on the earth can be very difficult in space. 地球上一些最简单的日常任务在太空中可能会非常困难。 主体： 1．During the visit，we first had the experience of flying in a simulated spaceship in the city space museum. 在参观过程中，我们首先在城市空间博物馆里体验了在模拟宇宙飞船里飞行的感觉。 2．Life in space is wonderful and challenging! 太空生活真是奇妙又有挑战性！ 3．Although I was very tired today，I felt very excited. 尽管我今天很累，但我感觉很兴奋。 结尾： 1．It is difficult，but I enjoy it very much. 这很难，但我非常喜欢它。 2．The experience helps stimulate our enthusiasm for learning science and space. 这种经历有助于激发我们学习科学和太空的热情。 学以致用 假定你是李华，你的朋友Jim给你来信，想通过你所观看的太空生活影片和新闻报道来了解宇航员，请根据提示信息，对宇航员在太空中的情况进行介绍。 1．宇航员漂浮使骨头开始变得又软又薄； 2．在太空中，没有重力的牵引，血液会流向上半身和头部； 3．宇航员回到地球必须休息，以便他们的身体有时间制造新的血液和水。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， I’m writing to introduce to you how the astronauts stay healthy in space. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Living in space is not the same as living on Earth.As astronauts float in space，they do not use their legs much and their lower backs begin to lose strength，causing the bones getting weak and thin，which is very bad for astronauts’ bodies. 返回 Yours， Li Hua _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________ The heart and blood change in space，too.In space，there being no gravity，the blood moves to the upper body and head.Water in the body also does the same thing，which makes the astronauts’ faces look puffy.When the astronauts come back to Earth，they have to rest so their bodies have time to make new blood and water.If they don’t，they can feel very weak.They might even faint! Hoping you can have a knowledge of the life in space. 40分写作限时练 返回 Ⅰ.应用文写作(共15分) 假定你是李华，上周五你校邀请王教授开展了饮食与健康的专题讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。内容包括： 1．讲座目的； 2．主要内容； 3．听众反响。 注意：1．写作词数应为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A Lecture on Diet and Health With the purpose of raising students’ awareness of the importance of a healthy diet，Professor Wang，a famous nutritionist，was invited to give a lecture on diet and health at our school last Friday. During the lecture，Professor Wang covered a wide range of topics related.He emphasized the significance of balanced nutrition，the role of vitamins and minerals，and the impact of unhealthy eating habits on our overall well-being.He also provided practical advice on how to make healthier food choices and maintain a healthy weight. The lecture was highly spoken of.Many students mentioned that they were inspired to make changes to their own eating habits. Ⅱ.读后续写(共25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 After staying at home and taking care of her baby for nearly two years，Rebecca found it hard to make a decision between accepting an attractive offer from her former employer and going on looking after her son Tony at home.She talked，with her husband David，about sending Tony to a childcare center.David gave it a careful thought and decided to leave his job for a year to take care of Tony before he could be sent to a kindergarten，promising to be a super Dad and househusband.It was good news for Rebecca but she knew her husband too well.It would take David some time to get used to finicky(细致的) jobs of taking care of Tony.So she told David she wanted hourly updates on how Tony was handling his day away from Mom. David was adapting quickly.He texted updates throughout the day，getting hourly instructions from Rebecca.It seemed that David was enjoying his new role and Tony liked the company of Dad，although they often got the home messy.What Rebecca didn’t expect is that David became famous on social media as Super Dad，because people liked watching the videos he posted. One day，he sent his usual text updates and included a photo of Tony in his car seat during their trip to Walgreens.Rebecca’s reply was to correct Tony’s position in the car seat.And she reminded David that the straps(肩带) were too loose and the chest clip was too low.David laughed at his nagging(絮叨的) wife and rolled his eyes before tightening the car seat and fixing the chest clip. Fifteen minutes later，Rebecca’s phone rang with a call from her husband，“Honey，we had a car accident.We are fine，but the car is going to be totaled (彻底毁坏).” 注意：1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Less than three miles from their house，David told Rebecca a woman had pulled into traffic to turn left._________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ David hadn’t had enough time to stop.He tried to stop the car at nearly 50 miles an hour before knocking into the front passenger side door of her SUV.The proper use of the car seat saved baby Tony’s life.Even with the impact of the two cars，Tony was safe and sound.He was even able to continue with his sleep and then spend the next two hours playing with nurses in a nearby hospital.David wasn’t so lucky.He had his foot broken in three places and got three dislocated toes. Rebecca was so thankful that her husband took the extra one minute to put Tony in his car seat safely.___________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ She couldn’t imagine how different the outcome could have been.David had never expected there could be any good having a nagging wife.He posted pictures of his car on social media to educate people about the importance of proper use of car seats.He hoped his car would be a reminder of the safety of babies in cars to other parents.David，the Super Dad，got more likes from his fans. 返回 谢 谢 观 看 ！ 返回 $$