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强化练(二十一) 一、人与动物(分值:25分)
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(2024·山东潍坊一模)I was eight years old and wasn't aware of all the arrangements being made for our journey as a family to London in 1950.My mother was in great pain and wished to visit specialists in London.My father reluctantly had to sell our property in Queensland.The day before we boarded the ship,Father unwillingly said goodbye to his fiveyearold cattle dog,Spider,who was loved by us all.Father's friend Sandy was to be his guardian while we were overseas,as he had been getting to know Spider for many weeks.
Six weeks later,an air letter arrived from Sandy,giving my father the news that Spider had run away just two weeks after we had sailed.Sandy had advertised constantly on ABC and other regional newspapers.Despite many “sightings”,the dog was never found.It seems Spider just kept running and searching for us.As he was cattle dog,my father thought he would be shot or dingotrapped,because of his appearance.But our family thought that Father held a secret hope that Spider was still alive.
We sailed back to Australia two years later and reestablished our home.My father immediately began his own search for Spider.One cold winter's Saturday morning eight months after our return,my father had a call from an elderly lady living on her own on the outskirts of the town.As she told my father on the telephone,it was “just glimpses of a dingotype dog in the shadows” of her disused tennis court.That was enough for my father to interrupt my homework.
We set off in his blue and black car which he had brought back from England.It was hardly the right vehicle for the rough roads we travelled that day.Five and a half hours later,we found the rundown old property.Sadly,she told my father that the “dingo dog” hadn't been around for a few days.My father had a strange look in his eyes.He put two fingers to his lips and did his special whistle for Spider.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
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Suddenly there was a sound in the bush.
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Once home we had the task of getting all the prickles(刺) off him.
[续写思路]
1.故事梗概:作者一家不得已离开家乡,前往伦敦为妈妈找专家治病。临走时爸爸把宠物狗Spider交给朋友Sandy照顾,可是不久后Sandy告诉爸爸Spider找不到了。两年后,作者一家回到了家乡继续寻找Spider。一天,一位老太太打电话说自家农场出现的一条狗很像Spider,爸爸立即带作者前往。
2.段落续写
①由续写第一段首句内容“突然,灌木丛中传来了声音”以及第二段首句内容“一到家,我们就把它身上所有的刺都弄掉了”可知,第一段可描写Spider从灌木丛中跑了出来,作者和爸爸将它带回了家。
②由续写第二段首句内容“一到家,我们就把它身上所有的刺都弄掉了”可知,第二段可描写Spider得到了作者一家的悉心照顾,成为作者一家不可缺少的成员。
3.续写线索
灌木丛中传来声音——Spider出现——Spider与父亲互动——带Spider回家——将Spider洗干净——从此Spider一直陪伴着家人
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Suddenly there was a sound in the bush.Out of the growth flew this battered dog right into my father's arms.Spider had leaped over the tennis court fence with great force and certainty.My father's eyes shone,and the old lady and I stood there with tears in our eyes.He kept licking my father's face and making choking noises.He smelt dreadful.We wrapped him in an old blanket and I held him on my lap on the way back.He never once took his eyes off my father as we drove home.Every so often I received a lick of gratefulness.
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Once home we had the task of getting all the prickles(刺) off him.Before he was put in a tin tub,we gently cleaned him up with soap.Spider stood stoically through all this as my father also examined his teeth and ears.Spider spent the rest of his days on the front porch,content and satisfied,always in wait for my sister and me coming home from school where he would give us a lot of licks to make sure we were all right.He then waited for my father by the garage door.We never left him anywhere alone again.
二、生活趣事(分值:25分)
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(2024·山东聊城一模)Never in my wildest imagination did I picture myself standing on the back of a running horse.I'm not a cowgirl and don't even ride horses for pleasure.
But I was doing a television fitness show,and someone in the group had the bright idea that we should go to the rodeo(牛仔竞技表演) grounds and ask the trick rider if they could teach me a stunt(特技表演) to do on camera.We could use this short video as the new opening to the show.I agreed the stunt would be eyecatching and prove how flexible a fit person can be.
That was how I ended up at the rodeo grounds with a camera group,watching the remarkable performances of three talented young cowgirls.Once their show was over,we approached them,detailing our ideas for the television show.
The cowgirls asked me which particular stunt I was interested in learning.I especially liked one stunt—one of the girls led a horse to continuously and slowly run around the grounds while one of the other girls ran across the grounds toward a small trampoline(蹦床).It was timed perfectly so that she jumped onto the trampoline,up into the air,and then onto the horse's back.As she landed on its back,she stood up and stretched her arms outward as the horse continued slowly running.It looked impressive.
They talked me through the necessary moves,stressing the timing since I would need to be in the air at the correct time when the horse ran past.I alone would judge the speed of the horse and my own speed to jump onto the horse on time.
It was clearly difficult.I was a little hesitant,afraid of being unable to do that well and slowing down the filming.But I knew the most important thing for me was to concentrate on the task at hand.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
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The first time out,I hit the horse's back part and fell to the ground.
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At 6:00 p.m.,we completed the stunt filming,with my knee injured.
[续写思路]
1.故事梗概:作者正在做一个电视健身节目,有人建议作者去牛仔竞技场学特技,可以在镜头前表演,作为节目的新开场。作者特别喜欢一个特技动作,它看起来令人印象深刻,这就成了作者的拍摄任务。
2.段落续写
①由续写第一段首句内容“第一次出去时,我撞到了马的背部,摔倒在地”可知,第一段可以描写作者失败后的心理活动,接下来的动作调整,直至成功。
②由续写第二段首句内容“下午6点,我们完成了特技拍摄,我的膝盖受伤了”可知,第二段可以描写作者完成拍摄任务后的感悟。
3.续写线索
摔倒在地——一次次尝试——成功做到——完成任务——不后悔——感悟
[范文赏读]
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The first time out,I hit the horse's back part and fell to the ground.“I can do this,”repeating to myself to increase my confidence,I picked myself up and walked back to the starting point.After trying again and again I figured out the timing and could successfully land on the horse's back.Then another challenge came,I needed to stand on the back of the horse with my arms stretched as the horse continued its run.Many attempts were made and finally I did it.
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At 6:00 p.m.,we completed the stunt filming,with my knee injured.I was so excited despite the pain.Though the doctor later reported I must stay in bed for a while because of my knee injury,I had no regrets.I'm not a trick rider,but belief in myself made me one.For me,it was like doing the impossible.And when the viewers watched it,I wanted them to understand that getting into good physical shape meant they could also do the impossible.
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