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强化练(十九) 一、人间友情(分值:25分)
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(2024·河北沧州一模)The peaceful little town Cherrywood Dale was made up of colorful houses,each one home to a warmhearted family.The neighbors were the salt of the earth,always ready to lend a helping hand to one another.However,among them was an exception,an old man named Mr.Johnson,who lived alone in a small cottage.
Mr.Johnson was known for his excellent gardening skills.His gift for gardening had turned his backyard into a beautiful rose garden.However,his passionate devotion to gardening had left him with little time for personal life.His only company was his beloved roses.
Not far from Mr.Johnson's cottage lived a young couple,Tom and Emily.They were the complete opposite of Mr.Johnson—lively and sociable,always up to something new and exciting.Their home was always filled with the sound of laughter and good cheer.They had a young son named Charlie,who was Mr.Johnson's favorite neighbor.Charlie's infectious laughter and boundless energy brought some life to Mr.Johnson's quiet existence.
One day,Charlie decided to surprise Mr.Johnson by decorating his front yard for the upcoming Harvest Festival.He knew how much Mr.Johnson loved autumn and the changing of the leaves.Charlie enlisted the help of his parents and set to work,painting pumpkins(南瓜) and hanging decorations.They were so caught up in their creation that they ended up accidentally stepping on Mr.Johnson's prizewinning roses.
The next morning,Mr.Johnson came out of his cottage and saw the beautiful display,his face shining with delight.But his smile quickly turned into a frown(皱眉) when he saw the destroyed roses.He called over Tom and Emily,who were equally displeased by what had happened.They apologized sincerely,promising to replace the roses,but Mr.Johnson was unmoved.The once friendly neighbors became locked in an uneasy standoff.Charlie was heartbroken,not understanding why Mr.Johnson wouldn't accept their apology.
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Then one afternoon,Emily decided to make the first move.
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Mr.Johnson was moved by the three's sincere understanding.
[续写思路]
1.故事梗概:小镇上住着独居老人Mr.Johnson,终日与心爱的玫瑰花作伴。他的邻居Tom和Emily夫妇很喜欢社交。在丰收节快来临时,这一家人想要给Mr.Johnson一个惊喜,却不小心毁坏了玫瑰花。Mr.Johnson与这一家人的关系也冷淡了许多。
2.段落续写
①由续写第一段首句内容“一天下午,Emily决定迈出第一步”可知,第一段可描写Emily替换并打理玫瑰,Mr.Johnson意识到错误并道歉。
②由续写第二段首句内容“Mr.Johnson被三人的真诚理解所感动”可知,第二段可描写Mr.Johnson和这家人互动,敞开心扉。
3.续写线索
Emily寻找并替换玫瑰——Mr.Johnson意识到错误并道歉——一起照料玫瑰直到玫瑰开放——与Emily一家人互动——敞开心扉
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Then one afternoon,Emily decided to make the first move.She went to local florist's and asked around for the roses that looked like Mr.Johnson's.Immediately she managed to replace the destroyed roses and tended the delicate flowers cautiously with the help of Tom and Charlie.Seeing the thoughtful acts, Mr.Johnson finally realized that he overreacted that day and made an apology for his misbehavior.However,what the family cared most was whether what they did could make for his loss and cheered him up.
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Mr.Johnson was moved by the three's sincere understanding.He made up his mind to take care of the roses together with the family.As the Harvest Festival approached, the flowers unfolded smiles gradually,which revived his garden.Mr.Johnson expressed how he loved the works of art Charlie created.He even invited the whole family to dinner in his cottage where laughter and happiness had never existed before.The roses, though once destroyed, brought Mr.Johnson something more precious—kindness and genuineness as well as an open heart.
二、家庭亲情(分值:25分)
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(2024·浙江义乌模拟)My little sister,Meg,said that she wasn't afraid of the dark anymore and that she'd be OK staying with Aunt Lily in the country.“As long as you're there,Mike,” she had said.Still,Mum was worried.Meg had never slept away from home,away from the city.So I told Mum I could handle everything.
Even though we were only staying overnight,Meg had brought six books—all about fairies(仙女).After we unpacked,Aunt Lily invited us to pick some flowers.As we followed her through the forest,Meg held my hand tightly.But once we reached the sunlit grassland,she let go.“Butterflies!” whispered Meg.She screamed with delight when one flew near her.
Maybe I had nothing to worry about,I thought.I still remembered when I was here last summer,I found some amazing insects,like fireflies(萤火虫) and walking sticks which I'd never seen in the city.
“Fairies are magical.See these beautiful flowers they grow!” she kept telling absolutely everything she knew about fairies.I was glad that if she kept it up until bedtime,then maybe she'd fall right to sleep.
Meg did keep chatting,right through supper.Then the sun began to set.“Does it get really dark out here at night?” she asked.Her eyes were fixed on the window.
“Sure,but we've got plenty of lights inside,” said Aunt Lily.She leaned over and gave Meg a warm smile.But I could tell she was still worried.“I could read to you.”
I hadn't even finished a page when her bottom lip started shaking slightly.“Mike,” she said,her eyes starting to fill.“I want to go home.” I quickly searched through her book for something to keep her from crying.
The book fell open to a page that was dogeared from use,a page that was obviously one of Meg's favorites.The text read:“Among the trees deep in the forest,the lights of fairies gleam(闪烁).” Aha!How could I forget those “tiny fairies” out there?
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“Meg,there's something outside I want to show you,” I whispered.
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“Tiny fairies,Mike!” she said,pressing her forehead against the window.“Everywhere!”
[续写思路]
1.故事梗概:作者的妹妹Meg怕黑,在她自己说不再怕黑时,跟着作者一起到乡下阿姨家过夜。而实际上,她还是有些怕黑。
2.段落续写
①由续写第一段首句内容“‘Meg,外面有样东西我想给你看。’我低声说”可知,第一段可描写作者让妹妹观看夜晚的萤火虫。
②由续写第二段首句内容“‘小仙女,Mike!’她把额头贴在窗户上说,‘到处都是!’”可知,第二段可描写作者的妹妹Meg误认为萤火虫是小仙女,于是忘记了恐惧,安稳入睡。
3.续写线索
带Meg看东西——走到窗前——看到萤火虫——放松——不再恐惧——睡着
[范文赏读]
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“Meg,there's something outside I want to show you,” I whispered.Meg quickly covered her eyes with her hands.“I don't want to look,” she sniffled.“Come to the window,OK?It's something you will like.I'm here.You'll be all right.” I promised.When we finally reached the window,I quietly switched off the lamp.A whisper of cool,damp air sifted through the screen of the open window.Outside,thick chunks of trees reached up into black clouds of leaves and fireflies hovered around like twinkling stars.Meg pressed her hands against the window,pushing herself away.But then she noticed them.Her stiffened arms relaxed.
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“Tiny fairies,Mike!” she said,pressing her forehead against the window,“Everywhere!” They weren't fairies,of course.But the winking lights really existed and were,in my opinion,better than magic.I wanted to tell Meg about these incredible insects that flashed in the dark,signaling to each other.Then I looked down into Meg's shining eyes,and I decided she could learn about fireflies some other time.Meg was so absorbed in the breathtaking scene that she completely forgot her homesickness and soon fell asleep against my shoulder.I guess it turned out that I could handle everything—with a little help from the magical fairies.
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