专题15 提纲作文- 2025年高考英语二轮热点题型归纳与变式演练（北京专用）

热点题型·写作攻略 专题15 提纲作文 关注应用文写作评分标准的三个维度（内容、语言、结构），明确达到各档分数所需要求，循序渐进地学习各类信件（建议信、申请信、邀请信、介绍信、推荐信、道歉信、感谢信、求助信、咨询信）和非信件（通知、欢迎辞、倡议书、演讲），注意审题、构思，在用词用句合理的前提下体现高中语法和高中词汇短语，同时要注意不同话题的词句积累。 审题最关键！避免出现理解上的偏差。看清写作意图是什么，在第一段交代清楚。不漏内容要点。内容的发挥要体现积极乐观的态度。技术层面要注意交际性、写信意图表达及时、分段合理、书写整洁、标点正确、语言质量够高（高端词汇+地道句型）。 年份 类型 命题形式 写作内容 2024 建议信 提纲式 介绍中国的发展成就的建议 2023 建议信 提纲式 “绿色北京”为主题的社团活动的建议 2022 邀请信 提纲式 英语写作的线上经验交流 2021 道歉信 提纲式 因故不能赴约 2020 求助信 提纲式 请求推荐一名外籍指导教师 一、结构要清晰 第一段要开门见山，直接拿出主题。给大家举个例子，比如，写我的妈妈，第一段直接就说 My mother is a worker. She is beautiful and she is a good mother. 明确自己的观点。 第二段就要说，她为什么是一个好妈妈。1. She works hard. 2. She is very strict with me. 3. She always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble. 详细说出妈妈的优点。 第三段得出结论。大家可以发表自己的观点，也可以提出建议和希望。如，I love my mother. I love my family！ 二、时态要准确 英语作文除了结构，还有一个是阅卷老师最敏感的，那就是时态，这也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键。要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一致、数要一致、首尾要呼应。再根据内容要求，现确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生，比如记叙一件事要用一般过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时；对于未来的憧憬要用一般将来时；过去的事情对现在造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成时。一定不能乱用乱配。 三、短语运用要灵活 同学们在写作文的时候，要尽量使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。当然，定语从句、宾语从句等句型，在关键的时候用上一两个，会增添你文章的文采。在英语中存在很多简单又能表达很多意思的短语。这些短语的运用可以使作文更加原汁原味。 四、写全要点 近年的各地高考英语提示性作文比较多，也就是说写作内容几乎都有要点提示，确切地说就是给出写作提纲，这种作文，同学们一定记住不要逐字翻译，但是提示点必须在文章中有所体现。文章写得再好，如果缺少了要点就会扣分的。所以要点也就是文章的第二段内容，同学们要把提示点写全，然后围绕提示点充分发挥，丰富自己所写的内容。 题型01 活动介绍类 【题型诠释】 首段： (1) I’m pleased to know that you’re greatly interested in ... ,so I’d like to share a piece of good news that there will be a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information. (2) It’s my great honor to invite you to enter a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information about it. (3) It’s time for us to say goodbye to our school life soon.Surprisingly,there is a/an... prepared for us.Now,let me offer you some information about it. 主体段： 1.时间&地点：The ... will be held in Classroom 302 at 3o’clock in the afternoon on June 8th,2019. 2.内容： (1)主题句：There will be various meaningful activities included in it. (2)要点:First of all，You will be invited to .../You will be given a chance to ... .which will ... After that,It will be more than interesting for you to .../It will impress you a lot to ...   so that ... At last,doing sth. will play an important part in ... .So ... 尾段： That’s all.I firmly believe that if you join in it,you will ... . That’s all.I sincerely hope that you can come and share the happiness/fun with us. 题型02 写人叙事类 【题型诠释】 首段： (1) 朋友：A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life. Let me introduce him to you. (2) 父母：If you ask me who is the most important one to me,without doubt,the answer is my ... . Let me introduce him to you . (3) 老师：In both my life and study,my ... teacher is special to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character. 主体段： 1.外貌：... is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair and big eyes. 2.性格：...is an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her./ ... is very kind to others and easy to get on with./is so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him. 3.爱好：She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me. 4.事例： （1）Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet trouble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail. At the same time, she shares her good ways of studying with me. （2）My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, not only teaches us how to learn, but also teaches us how to be a person. I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven, that was to copy others’ homework. Ms Li knew that. Instead of being angry with me, she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future. （3）Last term, I failed my exam. I was so that that I cried sadly in my room. When my mother came from work late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up.That evening, when I woke up at night, my mother was still working. I was deeply moved. Then I made up my mind to study harder than before. 尾段： As a sunshine teenager, Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn from./I will treasure the friendship forever.   Now I understand my father’s love to me. I will never forget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased. He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love him forever.  题型03 咨询建议类 【题型诠释】 首段： I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing... .Don’t worry about it! Here are some useful suggestions I ‘d like to share with you. 主体段： 1.主题句：Actually,if you are careful, you’ll find various simple ways to help you solve the problem. 2.要点： First and foremost, It’s +adj/n.+for/of sb. to do ....So that... In addition,you are supposed to do ... ,which can notonly ... but also ... What’s more,you had better (not) do ... ,because ... Last but not least,I suggest you (should) do ... ,from which,you’re able to do ... 尾段： With these suggestions carried out,I firmly believe you will improve ... a lot. I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of great help. Looking forward to your earliest reply. 题型04 观点看法类 【题型诠释】 首段： With the development of the science and technology/society,...is becoming more and more serious./the problem about ...is under a heated discussion/ ... has become a hot topic.As for that,There are different opinions among people. 主体段： On the one hand,some people hold the idea that ... .The reasons are as follows.First, ....Second, ... .Last, ... . On the other hand,others disagree.They suppose that ... .Because ... .More importantly, .... 尾段： As far as I’m concerned,every coin has two sides,and ... is not an exception.As long as wetreat ... properly,it will be of great help. 【高考真题】 【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article. To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view. Looking forward to reading your article! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 很好的：great →wonderful 成就：achievement→ accomplishment 建议：suggestion →advice 此外：In addition → what’s more 2.句式拓展 句式变换 原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 【2023北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”. Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→tip 提供：offer→provide 开展：carry out→conduct 主题：theme→topic 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 【2022年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因； 2．交流时间和其他相关事项。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】Dear Jim, How’s everything? I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay? The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解题导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流 【2021年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表达歉意并说明原因； 2.提出建议并给出理由。 注意： 1词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble. How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend. In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。 【详解】1.词汇积累 通知：tell→inform 麻烦：problem→trouble 怎么样：what about→how about 适合：fit→suit 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I should be available anytime next weekend. 拓展句：I should be available anytime next weekend so that I can go out with you and have a good time. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型3] Please let me know what time suits you best.(运用了what引导的宾语从句) 【2020年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括： 1. 条件及要求； 2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。 注意：1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, How are you doing? I hope everything's OK with you. Our school's drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us? He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching. Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary. Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：drama club (戏剧俱乐部)；plan to do sth.(计划做某事)；in one's place(代替某人)；recommend(推荐)；a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人)；currently (目前)；experienced(熟练的)；both…and…(两者都……)；take care of(照顾)；wear a mask(戴口罩)等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 【最新模考】 【2024年北京市朝阳区高三一模】44．假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际，你们学校开展了一次以“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动。你校国际部交换生 Jim 对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1.活动目的； 2.活动安排。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：全国防灾减灾日—National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, How is everything going? Knowing that you are interested in the “Safety Education into Campus” event, I am glad to share it with you. In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies. First, an expert from a professional rescue team delivered a lecture on how to react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics of evacuation. Besides, we made brochures concerning the practical tips on dealing with disasters and handed them out on campus to further spread the safety knowledge among students. I have prepared an English brochure for you. Hope it will help. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给国际部交换生Jim写邮件，说明“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动的目的和安排。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感兴趣的：be interested in→show interest in 高兴的：glad→delighted 此外：besides→furthermore 处理：deal with→cope with 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies. 拓展句：In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities that aim to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are interested in the “Safety Education into Campus” event, I am glad to share it with you.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】First, an expert from a professional rescue team delivered a lecture on how to react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics of evacuation.（运用了疑问词+to do作宾语和when引导的状语从句，现在分词作状语） 【2024年北京市房山区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim计划明年来北京上大学学习中文，特发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 表示欢迎； 2. 推荐他上哪所大学； 3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。 注意：1. 词数100 词左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】范文： Dear Jim, You couldn’t imagine how happy I am when learning that you’ll come to Beijing to attend college. Welcome to Beijing! I strongly recommend Peking University to you. It offers the best courses of Chinese history and philosophy. Studying with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture. As for preparation, I suggest you surf the Internet for some relevant information about this university, such as its history and development, its academic performance and various departments. Moreover, you had better learn some Chinese in order to communicate with others better on campus. Hope my suggestions will be of some help. If you have any question, just feel free to contact me. I couldn’t wait to see you next semester in Beijing! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写封邮件，欢迎他来北京上大学学习中文，推荐他上哪所大学，建议他做哪些准备工作。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：happy→delighted 提供：offer→provide 专家：expert→specialist 另外：moreover→furthermore 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Studying with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture. 拓展句：If you study with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture. 【点睛】[高分句型1] You couldn’t imagine how happy I am when learning that you’ll come to Beijing to attend college. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句，省略句和that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] If you have any question, just feel free to contact me. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 【2024年北京市东城区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年世界地球日的主题为“Planet vs. Plastics”，你校将举办相关活动。你的笔友Jim发来邮件，询问该活动的情况。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 活动内容；   2. 你的任务。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim,       I’m glad to share with you the upcoming event at our school.           The theme of this year’s World Earth Day is “Planet vs. Plastics”, focusing on the danger of plastic pollution and our school has organized a series of activities. These include a lecture on plastic pollution, a workshop on how to reuse plastics, and a clean-up campaign. I have been assigned to help organize the clean-up campaign. We will gather in the schoolyard and head to our designated area and work together to pick up any plastic waste that we find. I’m really looking forward to this opportunity.           I hope you can also participate in similar activities in your area to help protect our planet.       Best regards.                                                                Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，就你的笔友Jim发来邮件，询问你校在今年世界地球日将举办以“Planet vs. Plastics”为主题的活动一事，用英文给他回复，介绍此项活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴：be glad to→ be thrilled to 集中精力于：focus on → concentrate on 一系列的：a series of→ a sequence of 帮助：help→ assist 2.句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：I’m glad to share with you the upcoming event at our school. 拓展句：It gives me immense pleasure to inform you about the forthcoming event scheduled at our school. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The theme of this year’s World Earth Day is “Planet vs. Plastics”, focusing on the danger of plastic pollution and our school has organized a series of activities.（运用了现在分词短语作状语） 【高分句型2】We will gather in the schoolyard and head to our designated area and work together to pick up any plastic waste that we find（运用了关系代词that引导的定语从句） 【2024年北京市延庆区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周将要举办“科技嘉年华”活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动安排。 科技嘉年华 Science and Technology Carnival 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, LiHua 【答案】Dear Jim, I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival to be held next week in our school. The aim of this activity is to enrich our school life and arouse our interest in science and technology. During the carnival, there will be a variety of activities, including exhibitions of the latest scientific and technological achievements, lectures by famous scientists, and hands-on experiments. In addition, there will be a science competition, where you can show your creativity and knowledge. I believe this event will be a great opportunity for you to learn more about science and technology and interact with other students. I look forward to seeing you at the carnival. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加学校即将举办的“科技嘉年华”活动。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 目的：aim→ purpose 各种各样的：a variety of → various/all kinds of 著名的：famous → well-known 此外：in addition→ what’s more 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival to be held next week in our school. 拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival which will be held next week in our school. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】In addition, there will be a science competition, where you can show your creativity and knowledge. (运用了where引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】I believe this event will be a great opportunity for you to learn more about science and technology and interact with other students. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 热点题型·写作攻略 专题15 提纲作文 关注应用文写作评分标准的三个维度（内容、语言、结构），明确达到各档分数所需要求，循序渐进地学习各类信件（建议信、申请信、邀请信、介绍信、推荐信、道歉信、感谢信、求助信、咨询信）和非信件（通知、欢迎辞、倡议书、演讲），注意审题、构思，在用词用句合理的前提下体现高中语法和高中词汇短语，同时要注意不同话题的词句积累。 审题最关键！避免出现理解上的偏差。看清写作意图是什么，在第一段交代清楚。不漏内容要点。内容的发挥要体现积极乐观的态度。技术层面要注意交际性、写信意图表达及时、分段合理、书写整洁、标点正确、语言质量够高（高端词汇+地道句型）。 年份 类型 命题形式 写作内容 2024 建议信 提纲式 介绍中国的发展成就的建议 2023 建议信 提纲式 “绿色北京”为主题的社团活动的建议 2022 邀请信 提纲式 英语写作的线上经验交流 2021 道歉信 提纲式 因故不能赴约 2020 求助信 提纲式 请求推荐一名外籍指导教师 第一段要开门见山，直接拿出主题。给大家举个例子，比如，写我的妈妈，第一段直接就说 My mother is a worker. She is beautiful and she is a good mother. 明确自己的观点。 第二段就要说，她为什么是一个好妈妈。1. She works hard. 2. She is very strict with me. 3. She always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble. 详细说出妈妈的优点。 第三段得出结论。大家可以发表自己的观点，也可以提出建议和希望。如，I love my mother. I love my family！ 英语作文除了结构，还有一个是阅卷老师最敏感的，那就是时态，这也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键。要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一致、数要一致、首尾要呼应。再根据内容要求，现确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生，比如记叙一件事要用一般过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时；对于未来的憧憬要用一般将来时；过去的事情对现在造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成时。一定不能乱用乱配。 同学们在写作文的时候，要尽量使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。当然，定语从句、宾语从句等句型，在关键的时候用上一两个，会增添你文章的文采。在英语中存在很多简单又能表达很多意思的短语。这些短语的运用可以使作文更加原汁原味。 近年的各地高考英语提示性作文比较多，也就是说写作内容几乎都有要点提示，确切地说就是给出写作提纲，这种作文，同学们一定记住不要逐字翻译，但是提示点必须在文章中有所体现。文章写得再好，如果缺少了要点就会扣分的。所以要点也就是文章的第二段内容，同学们要把提示点写全，然后围绕提示点充分发挥，丰富自己所写的内容。 题型01 活动介绍类 【题型诠释】 (1) I’m pleased to know that you’re greatly interested in ... ,so I’d like to share a piece of good news that there will be a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information. (2) It’s my great honor to invite you to enter a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information about it. (3) It’s time for us to say goodbye to our school life soon.Surprisingly,there is a/an... prepared for us.Now,let me offer you some information about it. 1.时间&地点：The ... will be held in Classroom 302 at 3o’clock in the afternoon on June 8th,2019. 2.内容： (1)主题句：There will be various meaningful activities included in it. (2)要点:First of all，You will be invited to .../You will be given a chance to ... .which will ... After that,It will be more than interesting for you to .../It will impress you a lot to ...   so that ... At last,doing sth. will play an important part in ... .So ... That’s all.I firmly believe that if you join in it,you will ... . That’s all.I sincerely hope that you can come and share the happiness/fun with us. 题型02 写人叙事类 【题型诠释】 (1) 朋友：A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life. Let me introduce him to you. (2) 父母：If you ask me who is the most important one to me,without doubt,the answer is my ... . Let me introduce him to you . (3) 老师：In both my life and study,my ... teacher is special to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character. 1.外貌：... is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair and big eyes. 2.性格：...is an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her./ ... is very kind to others and easy to get on with./is so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him. 3.爱好：She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me. 4.事例： （1）Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet trouble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail. At the same time, she shares her good ways of studying with me. （2）My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, not only teaches us how to learn, but also teaches us how to be a person. I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven, that was to copy others’ homework. Ms Li knew that. Instead of being angry with me, she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future. （3）Last term, I failed my exam. I was so that that I cried sadly in my room. When my mother came from work late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up.That evening, when I woke up at night, my mother was still working. I was deeply moved. Then I made up my mind to study harder than before. As a sunshine teenager, Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn from./I will treasure the friendship forever.   Now I understand my father’s love to me. I will never forget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased. He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love him forever.  题型03 咨询建议类 【题型诠释】 I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing... .Don’t worry about it! Here are some useful suggestions I ‘d like to share with you. 1.主题句：Actually,if you are careful, you’ll find various simple ways to help you solve the problem. 2.要点： First and foremost, It’s +adj/n.+for/of sb. to do ....So that... In addition,you are supposed to do ... ,which can notonly ... but also ... What’s more,you had better (not) do ... ,because ... Last but not least,I suggest you (should) do ... ,from which,you’re able to do ... With these suggestions carried out,I firmly believe you will improve ... a lot. I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of great help. Looking forward to your earliest reply. 题型04 观点看法类 【题型诠释】 With the development of the science and technology/society,...is becoming more and more serious./the problem about ...is under a heated discussion/ ... has become a hot topic.As for that,There are different opinions among people. On the one hand,some people hold the idea that ... .The reasons are as follows.First, ....Second, ... .Last, ... . On the other hand,others disagree.They suppose that ... .Because ... .More importantly, .... As far as I’m concerned,every coin has two sides,and ... is not an exception.As long as wetreat ... properly,it will be of great help. 【高考真题】 【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2023北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【2022年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因； 2．交流时间和其他相关事项。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2021年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表达歉意并说明原因； 2.提出建议并给出理由。 注意： 1词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2020年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括： 1. 条件及要求； 2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。 注意：1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【最新模考】 【2024年北京市朝阳区高三一模】44．假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际，你们学校开展了一次以“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动。你校国际部交换生 Jim 对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1.活动目的； 2.活动安排。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：全国防灾减灾日—National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2024年北京市房山区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim计划明年来北京上大学学习中文，特发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 表示欢迎； 2. 推荐他上哪所大学； 3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。 注意：1. 词数100 词左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2024年北京市东城区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。今年世界地球日的主题为“Planet vs. Plastics”，你校将举办相关活动。你的笔友Jim发来邮件，询问该活动的情况。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 活动内容；   2. 你的任务。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2024年北京市延庆区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周将要举办“科技嘉年华”活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动安排。 科技嘉年华 Science and Technology Carnival 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, LiHua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$