专题17 应用文写作书信类- 2025年高考英语二轮热点题型归纳与变式演练（北京专用）

热点题型·写作攻略 专题17 应用文写作书信类 关注应用文写作评分标准的三个维度（内容、语言、结构），明确达到各档分数所需要求，循序渐进地学习各类信件（建议信、申请信、邀请信、介绍信、推荐信、道歉信、感谢信、求助信、咨询信）和非信件（通知、欢迎辞、倡议书、演讲），注意审题、构思，在用词用句合理的前提下体现高中语法和高中词汇短语，同时要注意不同话题的词句积累。 审题最关键！避免出现理解上的偏差。看清写作意图是什么，在第一段交代清楚。不漏内容要点。内容的发挥要体现积极乐观的态度。技术层面要注意交际性、写信意图表达及时、分段合理、书写整洁、标点正确、语言质量够高（高端词汇+地道句型）。 年份 类型 命题形式 写作内容 2024 建议信 提纲式 介绍中国的发展成就的建议 2023 建议信 提纲式 “绿色北京”为主题的社团活动的建议 2022 邀请信 提纲式 英语写作的线上经验交流 2021 道歉信 提纲式 因故不能赴约 2020 求助信 提纲式 请求推荐一名外籍指导教师 一、开头段：灵活地去写四种内容： How are you doing? How is everything going? How is life treating you? I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old boy currently studying in XXX middle school. I am Li Hua, who... 3、写信背景（写信的缘由） I heard that ... My teacher told me... I am informed that... I learned that...我得知... I read in your newspaper/ micro-blog /website that... You said in your last letter that... Now, I am writing to do sth. Now, I am writing this letter to do sth. Now, I am writing these few lines to do sth. 七种最常见书信的“写信目的”部分的最佳写法 自荐信：Now, I am writing to apply for the job/position. 感谢信:Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt gratitude to you. 邀请信：Now, I am writing to invite you to join/enjoy/suffer/experience the....(as our guest/ judge/ instructor). 建议信：Now, I am writing to give you a hand. 求助信：Now, I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/ do me a favor. 道歉信:Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt apology to you. 告知信:Now, I am writing to tell you about the details. 二、中间段：具体问题（主题句）+具体分析（拓展句） 写法一： There are four main reasons why I am fit for the position/job. To begin with, ... Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,... 写法二： I have three main advantages. First and foremost,...Additonally,...Last but not least,... 写法三： I have the confidence that I can handle the job. Firstly,... Secondly, ...Thirdly,... 感谢信：写对方为你所做的事 Every time I （看照片、看录像、看那段时间的日记、回忆那段经历）, I just can't help thinking of you/ what you have done for me. It was so kind of you to （对方做的第一件事）. Besides, you （对方做的第二件事）, which really surprised me. Actually, I shall always remember （对方做的第三件事）, considering that,（第三件事情的意义）. Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and I will cherish them forever. 邀请信：描述具体的活动内容，如活动主题、意义、地点、时间、参加者和其它事项； Here are some details for the activities. To begin with, （活动主题或活动目的，如：the theme of the contest is "human and the nature", which is undoubtedly not only entertaining but also instructive. ）Moreover, （活动的地点和时间，如it will be in room 501 from 2:00 to 5:00 on the afternoon of June 15th.） What's more,（活动人员，如：ten outstanding competitors will take part in the contest.）Finally, （其他信息，如：if you need any further information, please call me at 44876655. ） 建议信：写给对方的具体建议 写法一： There are several simple suggestions for you. To begin with, ... Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,... 写法二： Immediate and effective measures must be put into practice. First and foremost,... Additonally,...Last but not least,... 写法三： The following suggestions carried out, things would probably become much better. Firstly,... Secondly,... Thirdly,... 求助信：写具体需要帮助的事项 Hopefully you would be so kind as to give me some suggestions/help on the following problems. To begin with,（困难一）,which has annoyed me for quite a long time. Moreover,（困难二）, for personally I lack the very basic experience on this matter. Finally,... 常用句型：（做某事有困难） 1、I have trouble in doing sth. 2、I find it extremely hard for me to do sth. 3、Doing sth is another terrible headache for me. 道歉信：描述不能或没能做到某事（如：赴约、还书、提供某种帮助）的原因 一般要以记叙文的形式写出以下三个内容： 1: 不能做某事的缘由； 2：对方能够谅解你的理由I’m sure if you were me, you would make the same choice. 3：衷心希望对方能够谅解； 三、结尾段：想写好第三段，就要背过各种客套话！ 自荐信： Hopefully the chance would be offered to me. If chosen/elected, I would dedicate all my energy and wisdom to the company/activity/club/class. Thank you for reading my letter/ listening to my speech in such a hot summer. Looking forward do your reply at your earliest convenience./ I won't let you down.（我不会让你们失望） 感谢信： I, on behalf of my whole family/class/school, would like to thank you again (for what you have done) (for me/us). May you be blessed (in everything you do). 我代表我的全家再次向你所做的一切向你表达感谢。祝你万事如意！ 邀请信： We are sincerely looking forward to your coming. My schoolmates/family and I would feel much honored if you could make it. I would like to meet you at the school gate and please drop me a line or give me a call to let me know your decision soon. Thank you. 我们衷心期望您能大驾光临。如果您能来，同学们和我将非常的荣幸。我会在校门口迎接您，请回信或打电话告诉我您的决定。谢谢。 建议信： Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know as soon as possible. I'm sure you can solve your problem before long. helpful --- of great help beautiful--- of great beauty difficult -- of great difficulty different –- of great difference useful --- of great use harmful --- of great harm 求助信： Hopefully your kind and timely help would be offered to me. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. 道歉信： Hopefully you would accept my sincere apologize. 题型01 邀请信 【题型诠释】 题型02 倡议信 【题型诠释】 题型03 告知信 【题型诠释】 题型04 求助信 【题型诠释】 题型05 推荐信 【题型诠释】 【高考真题】 【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2023北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【2022年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因； 2．交流时间和其他相关事项。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2021年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表达歉意并说明原因； 2.提出建议并给出理由。 注意： 1词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2020年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括： 1. 条件及要求； 2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。 注意：1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【最新模考】 【2024年北京市朝阳区高三一模】44．假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际，你们学校开展了一次以“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动。你校国际部交换生 Jim 对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1.活动目的； 2.活动安排。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：全国防灾减灾日—National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2024年北京市房山区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim计划明年来北京上大学学习中文，特发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 表示欢迎； 2. 推荐他上哪所大学； 3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。 注意：1. 词数100 词左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2024年北京市延庆区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周将要举办“科技嘉年华”活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动安排。 科技嘉年华 Science and Technology Carnival 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, LiHua 【2024年北京市海淀区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。六月十四日是世界献血者日(World Blood Donor Day)，你在京学习的英国好友Jim决定当天去献血，并询问你的意愿。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.你的答复及理由； 2.提醒注意事项。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 9 April 2024 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【2024年北京市西城区高三二模】44．假设你是郑州外国语学校高三学生李华，临近毕业，你们班的英语老师请每位同学给新高一学弟学妹写封英文邮件，邮件内容包括： 1. 你的建议； 2. 你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear fellow students, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 热点题型·写作攻略 专题17 应用文写作书信类 关注应用文写作评分标准的三个维度（内容、语言、结构），明确达到各档分数所需要求，循序渐进地学习各类信件（建议信、申请信、邀请信、介绍信、推荐信、道歉信、感谢信、求助信、咨询信）和非信件（通知、欢迎辞、倡议书、演讲），注意审题、构思，在用词用句合理的前提下体现高中语法和高中词汇短语，同时要注意不同话题的词句积累。 审题最关键！避免出现理解上的偏差。看清写作意图是什么，在第一段交代清楚。不漏内容要点。内容的发挥要体现积极乐观的态度。技术层面要注意交际性、写信意图表达及时、分段合理、书写整洁、标点正确、语言质量够高（高端词汇+地道句型）。 年份 类型 命题形式 写作内容 2024 建议信 提纲式 介绍中国的发展成就的建议 2023 建议信 提纲式 “绿色北京”为主题的社团活动的建议 2022 邀请信 提纲式 英语写作的线上经验交流 2021 道歉信 提纲式 因故不能赴约 2020 求助信 提纲式 请求推荐一名外籍指导教师 一、开头段：灵活地去写四种内容： 1、问候 How are you doing? How is everything going? How is life treating you? 2、自我介绍 I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old boy currently studying in XXX middle school. I am Li Hua, who... 3、写信背景（写信的缘由） I heard that ... My teacher told me... I am informed that... I learned that...我得知... I read in your newspaper/ micro-blog /website that... You said in your last letter that... 4、写信目的 Now, I am writing to do sth. Now, I am writing this letter to do sth. Now, I am writing these few lines to do sth. 七种最常见书信的“写信目的”部分的最佳写法 自荐信：Now, I am writing to apply for the job/position. 感谢信:Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt gratitude to you. 邀请信：Now, I am writing to invite you to join/enjoy/suffer/experience the....(as our guest/ judge/ instructor). 建议信：Now, I am writing to give you a hand. 求助信：Now, I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/ do me a favor. 道歉信:Now, I am writing to show/ express my heartfelt apology to you. 告知信:Now, I am writing to tell you about the details. 二、中间段：具体问题（主题句）+具体分析（拓展句） 自荐信：写自己的优势 写法一： There are four main reasons why I am fit for the position/job. To begin with, ... Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,... 写法二： I have three main advantages. First and foremost,...Additonally,...Last but not least,... 写法三： I have the confidence that I can handle the job. Firstly,... Secondly, ...Thirdly,... 感谢信：写对方为你所做的事 Every time I （看照片、看录像、看那段时间的日记、回忆那段经历）, I just can't help thinking of you/ what you have done for me. It was so kind of you to （对方做的第一件事）. Besides, you （对方做的第二件事）, which really surprised me. Actually, I shall always remember （对方做的第三件事）, considering that,（第三件事情的意义）. Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and I will cherish them forever. 邀请信：描述具体的活动内容，如活动主题、意义、地点、时间、参加者和其它事项； Here are some details for the activities. To begin with, （活动主题或活动目的，如：the theme of the contest is "human and the nature", which is undoubtedly not only entertaining but also instructive. ）Moreover, （活动的地点和时间，如it will be in room 501 from 2:00 to 5:00 on the afternoon of June 15th.） What's more,（活动人员，如：ten outstanding competitors will take part in the contest.）Finally, （其他信息，如：if you need any further information, please call me at 44876655. ） 建议信：写给对方的具体建议 写法一： There are several simple suggestions for you. To begin with, ... Moreover,... What's more,... Finally,... 写法二： Immediate and effective measures must be put into practice. First and foremost,... Additonally,...Last but not least,... 写法三： The following suggestions carried out, things would probably become much better. Firstly,... Secondly,... Thirdly,... 求助信：写具体需要帮助的事项 Hopefully you would be so kind as to give me some suggestions/help on the following problems. To begin with,（困难一）,which has annoyed me for quite a long time. Moreover,（困难二）, for personally I lack the very basic experience on this matter. Finally,... 常用句型：（做某事有困难） 1、I have trouble in doing sth. 2、I find it extremely hard for me to do sth. 3、Doing sth is another terrible headache for me. 道歉信：描述不能或没能做到某事（如：赴约、还书、提供某种帮助）的原因 一般要以记叙文的形式写出以下三个内容： 1: 不能做某事的缘由； 2：对方能够谅解你的理由I’m sure if you were me, you would make the same choice. 3：衷心希望对方能够谅解； 三、结尾段：想写好第三段，就要背过各种客套话！ 自荐信： Hopefully the chance would be offered to me. If chosen/elected, I would dedicate all my energy and wisdom to the company/activity/club/class. Thank you for reading my letter/ listening to my speech in such a hot summer. Looking forward do your reply at your earliest convenience./ I won't let you down.（我不会让你们失望） 感谢信： I, on behalf of my whole family/class/school, would like to thank you again (for what you have done) (for me/us). May you be blessed (in everything you do). 我代表我的全家再次向你所做的一切向你表达感谢。祝你万事如意！ 邀请信： We are sincerely looking forward to your coming. My schoolmates/family and I would feel much honored if you could make it. I would like to meet you at the school gate and please drop me a line or give me a call to let me know your decision soon. Thank you. 我们衷心期望您能大驾光临。如果您能来，同学们和我将非常的荣幸。我会在校门口迎接您，请回信或打电话告诉我您的决定。谢谢。 建议信： Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know as soon as possible. I'm sure you can solve your problem before long. helpful --- of great help beautiful--- of great beauty difficult -- of great difficulty different –- of great difference useful --- of great use harmful --- of great harm 求助信： Hopefully your kind and timely help would be offered to me. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. 道歉信： Hopefully you would accept my sincere apologize. 题型01 邀请信 【题型诠释】 题型02 倡议信 【题型诠释】 题型03 告知信 【题型诠释】 题型04 求助信 【题型诠释】 题型05 推荐信 【题型诠释】 【高考真题】 【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)建议投稿内容； (2)就以上建议简要说明理由。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article. To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view. Looking forward to reading your article! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 很好的：great →wonderful 成就：achievement→ accomplishment 建议：suggestion →advice 此外：In addition → what’s more 2.句式拓展 句式变换 原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. 【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 【2023北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”. Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→tip 提供：offer→provide 开展：carry out→conduct 主题：theme→topic 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 【2022年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因； 2．交流时间和其他相关事项。 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】Dear Jim, How’s everything? I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay? The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解题导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流 【2021年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.表达歉意并说明原因； 2.提出建议并给出理由。 注意： 1词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble. How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend. In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。 【详解】1.词汇积累 通知：tell→inform 麻烦：problem→trouble 怎么样：what about→how about 适合：fit→suit 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I should be available anytime next weekend. 拓展句：I should be available anytime next weekend so that I can go out with you and have a good time. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型3] Please let me know what time suits you best.(运用了what引导的宾语从句) 【2020年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括： 1. 条件及要求； 2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。 注意：1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, How are you doing? I hope everything's OK with you. Our school's drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us? He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching. Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary. Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：drama club (戏剧俱乐部)；plan to do sth.(计划做某事)；in one's place(代替某人)；recommend(推荐)；a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人)；currently (目前)；experienced(熟练的)；both…and…(两者都……)；take care of(照顾)；wear a mask(戴口罩)等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 【最新模考】 【2024年北京市朝阳区高三一模】44．假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际，你们学校开展了一次以“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动。你校国际部交换生 Jim 对此很感兴趣，发来邮件询问。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1.活动目的； 2.活动安排。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：全国防灾减灾日—National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day Dear Jim, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, How is everything going? Knowing that you are interested in the “Safety Education into Campus” event, I am glad to share it with you. In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies. First, an expert from a professional rescue team delivered a lecture on how to react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics of evacuation. Besides, we made brochures concerning the practical tips on dealing with disasters and handed them out on campus to further spread the safety knowledge among students. I have prepared an English brochure for you. Hope it will help. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给国际部交换生Jim写邮件，说明“安全进校园”为主题的教育活动的目的和安排。 【详解】1.词汇积累 感兴趣的：be interested in→show interest in 高兴的：glad→delighted 此外：besides→furthermore 处理：deal with→cope with 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies. 拓展句：In response to the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school organized activities that aim to raise our awareness of self-protection in the face of emergencies. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are interested in the “Safety Education into Campus” event, I am glad to share it with you.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】First, an expert from a professional rescue team delivered a lecture on how to react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics of evacuation.（运用了疑问词+to do作宾语和when引导的状语从句，现在分词作状语） 【2024年北京市房山区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim计划明年来北京上大学学习中文，特发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： 1. 表示欢迎； 2. 推荐他上哪所大学； 3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。 注意：1. 词数100 词左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】范文： Dear Jim, You couldn’t imagine how happy I am when learning that you’ll come to Beijing to attend college. Welcome to Beijing! I strongly recommend Peking University to you. It offers the best courses of Chinese history and philosophy. Studying with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture. As for preparation, I suggest you surf the Internet for some relevant information about this university, such as its history and development, its academic performance and various departments. Moreover, you had better learn some Chinese in order to communicate with others better on campus. Hope my suggestions will be of some help. If you have any question, just feel free to contact me. I couldn’t wait to see you next semester in Beijing! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写封邮件，欢迎他来北京上大学学习中文，推荐他上哪所大学，建议他做哪些准备工作。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：happy→delighted 提供：offer→provide 专家：expert→specialist 另外：moreover→furthermore 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Studying with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture. 拓展句：If you study with leading experts and outstanding schoolmates, you will get a deeper insight into traditional Chinese culture. 【点睛】[高分句型1] You couldn’t imagine how happy I am when learning that you’ll come to Beijing to attend college. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句，省略句和that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] If you have any question, just feel free to contact me. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 【2024年北京市延庆区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校下周将要举办“科技嘉年华”活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动安排。 科技嘉年华 Science and Technology Carnival 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, LiHua 【答案】Dear Jim, I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival to be held next week in our school. The aim of this activity is to enrich our school life and arouse our interest in science and technology. During the carnival, there will be a variety of activities, including exhibitions of the latest scientific and technological achievements, lectures by famous scientists, and hands-on experiments. In addition, there will be a science competition, where you can show your creativity and knowledge. I believe this event will be a great opportunity for you to learn more about science and technology and interact with other students. I look forward to seeing you at the carnival. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】 本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给交换生Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加学校即将举办的“科技嘉年华”活动。 【详解】 1. 词汇积累 目的：aim→ purpose 各种各样的：a variety of → various/all kinds of 著名的：famous → well-known 此外：in addition→ what’s more 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival to be held next week in our school. 拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to the Science and Technology Carnival which will be held next week in our school. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】In addition, there will be a science competition, where you can show your creativity and knowledge. (运用了where引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】I believe this event will be a great opportunity for you to learn more about science and technology and interact with other students. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句) 【2024年北京市海淀区高三一模】44．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。六月十四日是世界献血者日(World Blood Donor Day)，你在京学习的英国好友Jim决定当天去献血，并询问你的意愿。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.你的答复及理由； 2.提醒注意事项。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 9 April 2024 Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jim, Thank you for considering me for such an important cause. I truly appreciate your invitation to join you in donating blood on World Blood Donor Day. However, due to personal reasons, I won’t be able to participate this time. Nonetheless, I fully support your decision to donate blood, as it can save lives. Please remember to eat a healthy meal before donating, stay hydrated, and get plenty of rest afterward. Also, make sure to follow all instructions given by the medical staff during the donation process. Wishing you a successful and rewarding experience! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作，在京学习的英国好友Jim决定在世界献血者日当天去献血，想要询问你的意愿，按要求考生用英文写一封电子邮件回复Jim。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要的：important→significant/crucial 因为：due to→owing to/because of 完全地：fully→completely/totally 拯救：save→rescue 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Please remember to eat a healthy meal before donating, stay hydrated, and get plenty of rest afterward. 拓展句：Before you prepare for the donation, remember to eat a healthy meal, stay hydrated, and get plenty of rest afterward. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Nonetheless, I fully support your decision to donate blood, as it can save lives. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句) 【高分句型2】Also, make sure to follow all instructions given by the medical staff during the donation process. (运用了过去分词作后置定语) 【2024年北京市西城区高三二模】44．假设你是郑州外国语学校高三学生李华，临近毕业，你们班的英语老师请每位同学给新高一学弟学妹写封英文邮件，邮件内容包括： 1. 你的建议； 2. 你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear fellow students, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear fellow students, Congratulations on becoming a part of our wonderful school community. At the request of our English teacher, I’m reaching out to offer you some advice on navigating your time here. First, treasure every moment spent with your teachers and classmates. Your time here will pass quickly, so seize the opportunity to forge meaningful and lasting connections. Secondly, let go of your past achievements or failures. Instead, focus on the tasks at hand. It is the dedication and effort you invest now that will shape your future. Finally, explore what truly sparks your passion. Take English learning for instance. Whether it’s watching movies or reading novels, try to find what genuinely motivates you. Wishing you all a fulfilling and rewarding journey ahead filled with joy, growth, and success. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写出对高一学弟学妹各方面的建议，最后表达美好的祝愿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 珍视：treasure→cherish 抓住：seize → grasp/catch hold of 专注于：focus on→concentrate on 以……为例：take sth. for instance→take sth. for example 2.句式拓展 宾语从句变定语从句 原句：Whether it’s watching movies or reading novels, try to find what genuinely motivates you. 拓展句：Whether it’s watching movies or reading novels, try to find something that genuinely motivates you. 【点睛】【高分句型1】It is the dedication and effort you invest now that will shape your future.（运用了强调句型：It is/was+被强调部分+that+其他部分） 【高分句型2】Finally, explore what truly sparks your passion.（运用了what引导的宾语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$