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专题07 书面表达 1. （23-24年上海市崇明区8校联考七上期末真题） Write at least fifty words according to the topic “The hero in my heart”(每个人心目中都有自己的英雄，这个英雄可能是警察、消防员、医生……甚至是你的家人或朋友，请以“我心中的英雄”为题写少于50个词的短文，要求意思明确、内容连贯，标点符号不计字数。注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。The following questions are provided as are ference(以下问题可供参考) 1. Who is the hero in your heart? 2. Why do you admire (钦佩) him or her? 3. What can you learn from him or her? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 2. （23-24年上海市金山区七上期末真题） Write at least60 words about“ How to stay healthy”.(以“怎样保持健康”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格)。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 3. （23-24年上海市浦东新区七上期末真题） Write at least 60 words about the topic “My friend’s birthday party. ” When was the birthday party? What did you do at the party? How was the party? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 4. （23-24年上海市青浦区七上期末真题） Write at least 50 words on the topic “An unforgettable school activity”. (请以“一次难忘的校园活动为题，写一篇不少于 50 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Questions for reference: 1. What was the school activity? 2. What did you do during the school activity? 3 What have you learnt from the school activity? 提示: 1.不得出现学校名称和学生姓名等个人真实信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄或借用本试卷内的语篇内容不得分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 5.（23-24年上海市松江区七上期末真题） Write at least 50 words about the topic“My changes”,请以“我的改变”为题，写一篇不少于 50 个单词的短文。转眼间，你已经进入初中第二年了，你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗?这一年多在你身了哪些变化? 请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。 要求: 1.你发生了哪些变化?(至少两个方面) 2.这些变化给你带来了什么影响? 3.对于自己发生的变化，你的感受如何? (注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 6.（23-24年上海市徐汇中学七上期末真题） Write a short passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A New Year Party”.( 以《一场新年派对》写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 新年马上就要来临了，你和你的同学们正在策划年派对。你们准备在派对上吃些什么呢?又准备做些什么活动呢?并谈谈你注意:文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________. 7.（22-23年上海市第三女子中学七上期末真题） Write at least 60 words on the topic “plan a/an festival for our school”.我们学校已经有了丰富多彩的校园六节，除此之外，你还想拥有什么节日? 请为学校出谋划策。 Questions for reference: 1. What festival are you going to have? Why? 2. When and where are you going to have it? 3. What time are you going to have it? 4. What are you going to do? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 8.（22-23年上海市洪山中学七上期末真题） Write a passage in at least 50 words on the topic“Signs around us”.(根据题目“我们身边的标志”写一篇不少于 50 词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested questions: 1. Where can you find signs? 2. What do different signs tell us? 3. What do you think of signs? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 9.（22-23年上海市建平中学七上期末真题） Write at least 50 words on the topic “An unforgettable birthday”(以“一个难忘的生日”为题，写一篇不 少于 50个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Birthdays in Life In next month’s Champion Special, Lynn Zhou wants to invite students to write about an unforgettable birthday in their lives. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 10.（22-23年上海市民办新虹桥中学七上期末真题） 你拥有健康的生活方式吗?你为了健康的生活方式有做出过哪些改变,你是如何保持健康的生活方式的? 请以“My healthy lifestyle”为主题，写一篇不少于 60 个单词的短文。 My healthy lifestyle _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 11.（21-22年上海市奉贤区七校七上期末真题） Write at least 50 words on the topic“How to Keep Healthy”.(请以“怎样保持健康”为题写一篇不少于 50 词的短文。) Suggested questions: Do you think health is very important? What should you do if you want to stay healthy? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 12.（21-22年上海市七上期末真题） Write at least 50 words on the topic “A Small Change I made在你的生活中，你有做出过什么样的小改变吗?是什么原因促使你做出了这样的改变?这个小改变又给你带来了怎样的影响呢?请以我做出的一个小改变”为题,写一篇不少于 50词的短语，标点符号不占格。(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) The following sentence patterns are for reference only (以下句型仅供参考) It is/was ... for me.. .…… It/ Doing sth. makes my life........ I decided to……. A Small Change I made ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13.（21-22年上海市普陀区七校七上期末真题） Write at least 60 words on the topic “A trip to...”(以“A trip to...”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 注意:文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Use the following points as areference. (以下内容仅供参考) 1. Where did you travel in the past? How did you go there? Who did you travel with? 2. What did you do and see there? What do you think of the trip? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 14.（21-22年上海市实验学校七上期末真题） . Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “How to eat healthily”.(以“怎样保持饮食健康”为 题写一篇不少于 50 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考) 1 .Do you think eating healthily is important? 2.How do you keep healthy? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！7 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题07 书面表达 1. （23-24年上海市崇明区8校联考七上期末真题） Write at least fifty words according to the topic “The hero in my heart”(每个人心目中都有自己的英雄，这个英雄可能是警察、消防员、医生……甚至是你的家人或朋友，请以“我心中的英雄”为题写少于50个词的短文，要求意思明确、内容连贯，标点符号不计字数。注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。The following questions are provided as are ference(以下问题可供参考) 1. Who is the hero in your heart? 2. Why do you admire (钦佩) him or her? 3. What can you learn from him or her? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】例文 The hero in my heart Who is the hero in my heart? When it comes into my mind, it must be my brother. The reason why I consider him as someone I admire is not just that he is polite and knowledgeable in life, What moves me most is the thing that happened days ago. I remember one day, my brother and I happened to see a kid lying on the ground who seemed very sick. I didn’t know what to do at that time. But my brother's behavior moved me. Firstly, he kept calm and called 120. Then he looked after the kid until the doctors arrived. In the end, the kid was saved successfully. My brother sets a good example to me and his spirit will encourage me to move on. 【解析】 【详解】 「总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文;② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的 逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你心目中的英雄是谁: 第二步，介绍你钦佩他/她的原因; 第三步，最后介绍你从他/她那学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ① consider..as.把……视为… ②) see sb doing sth 看到某人正在做某事 ③ in the end 最后 [高分句型] ①The reason why I consider him as someone I admire is not just that he is polite and knowledgeable in life. ( 定 语从句和表语从句) ②Then he looked after the kid until the doctors arrived.(时间状语从句) 2. （23-24年上海市金山区七上期末真题） Write at least60 words about“ How to stay healthy”.(以“怎样保持健康”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格)。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】How to stay healthy It's important to stay healthy because without good health, people nearly can do nothing. I think there are severalways to stay healthy. First, good healthy eating habit is very important. we should eat three healthy meals every dainstead of junk food. We'd better eat slowly. Second, we should have good habits, such as, having enough sleep sodon't stay up too late, wash our hands in time, brush our teeth at least twice every day, drink enough water. don'smoke and so on. Last but not least, it's very iortant to laugh every da 【解析】 【详解】1.题干解读 这篇作文要求我们以 How to stay healthy 为题，介绍生活中如何保持健康。“健康这一话题非常贴近学生们的日常生活，教材中接触过的与此有关的词汇、短语和句型也比较多，学生们对此比较熟悉，因此写起来非常得心应手。审题可知，短文应分为两部分:首先引导健康话题，点明健康的重要性:接下来具体介绍生活中应如果保持健康，这是文章的主体部分。短文应用一般现在时态、第一人称来叙述。 2.例文点评:这是一篇优秀的作文，短文有以下几个优点:首先文章内容完整、充实，叙述清晰、条理。短文开门见山，先点明了健康的重要性，然后引入主题“如何保持健康”;接下来进行了具体的介绍，用 First,Second,Last but not least分成了三个部分，使表达很有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。以简单句结构为主，穿插了并列句、宾语从句和复合句，还使用了非谓语动词。 3.高分亮点: 短语: stay healthy; eating habit; instead of; such as; stay up; in time; at least; and so on; Last but not least. 句型: It's important to stay healthy because without good health, people nearly can do nothing; I think therare several ways to stay healthy; Second, we should have good habits, such as, having enough sleep so don'stay up too late, wash our hands in time, brush our teeth at least twice every day, drink enough water, don't smoke and so on.. 3. （23-24年上海市浦东新区七上期末真题） Write at least 60 words about the topic “My friend’s birthday party. ” When was the birthday party? What did you do at the party? How was the party? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】例文 My friend Zhang Wei's birthday party was last Saturday evening. We all gathered at a local restaurant to celebrate. At the party, we enjoyed a feast of delicious food, played fun games, and exchanged gifts. We even had surprise cake cutting ceremony for Zhang Wei. The party was fantastic. There was laughter and joy all around. Everyone had a great time celebrating Zhang Wei's special day. It was a memorable evening filled with love and friendship. 【解析】 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇话题作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍朋友生日聚会的时间; 第二步，具体阐述在聚会上进行的一些活动; 第三步，对生日聚会进行评价。 [亮点词汇] ①have a great time 玩得开心 ②be filled with 充满 [高分句型] ①We all gathered at a local restaurant to celebrate.(不定式表目的) ②There was laughter and joy all around.(there be句型) 4. （23-24年上海市青浦区七上期末真题） Write at least 50 words on the topic “An unforgettable school activity”. (请以“一次难忘的校园活动为题，写一篇不少于 50 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Questions for reference: 1. What was the school activity? 2. What did you do during the school activity? 3 What have you learnt from the school activity? 提示: 1.不得出现学校名称和学生姓名等个人真实信息，否则不予评分。 2.照抄或借用本试卷内的语篇内容不得分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】范文: An Unforgettable School Activit We have taken part in many interesting and meaningful school activities during the past three years. I think that students’ participation in sports makes us healthy and beneficial to physical and mental development. Last spring sports meeting, I took part in the 1000-meter race in our school. The purpose of the activity is to encourage students to do exercise, I thought it was nothing, but in the middle of the race, I found it difficult to breathe and couldn't run any more. But when I heard the cheers from the students, I persisted and finally got the fifth place. Although I didn't get a good place, I was very happy that I could stick to it. I thought this was an unforgettable activity for me. Because I believe that as long as I work hard, I have nothing to regret. 【解析】 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材:本文为 一篇记叙文，为材料作文; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”; ③ 提示:提示问题已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体介绍校园活动的益处; 第二步，介绍自己最难忘的校园活动; 第三步，介绍自己从这次活动中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ① take part in 参加 ② as long as 只要 [高分句型] 1 1 think that students’participation in sports makes us healthy and beneficial to physical and mental development. (that引导的宾语从句) 2 But when I heard the cheers from the students, I persisted and finally got the fith place. (when 引导的时间状语从句) 3 Although I didn't get a good place, I was very happy that I could stick to it. (although 引导的让步状语从句) 5.（23-24年上海市松江区七上期末真题） Write at least 50 words about the topic“My changes”,请以“我的改变”为题，写一篇不少于 50 个单词的短文。转眼间，你已经进入初中第二年了，你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗?这一年多在你身了哪些变化? 请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。 要求: 1.你发生了哪些变化?(至少两个方面) 2.这些变化给你带来了什么影响? 3.对于自己发生的变化，你的感受如何? (注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. My changes 【答案】例文 My changeI am in Grade 8 now and I have changed a lot since I became a middle school student. I used to be thin aneshort, but now I'm taller than before. I used to be very shy. But I made many friends by learning with other together. I realized the importance of communication. And I become more and more outgoing now. l used to like playing basketball, but now I prefer swimming. I believe that I will make more progress in the future I think some good changes can help me realize my dream. With these good changes, I believe I will be even better in the next one year. 【解析】 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文;② 时态:时态主要为一般现在时;③ 提示:根据提示介绍自己发生的变化，可适当发挥，注意语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己发生的变化; 第二步，这些变化给你带来的影响: 第三步，对于这些变化你感受如何。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be 过去常常 ② realize one's dream 实现某人的梦想③ prefer doing sth 更喜欢做某事 [高分句型] ① I have changed a lot since I became a middle school student.(since 引导的时间状语从句) 2 ) I believe that I will make more progress in the future.(that 引导的宾语从句) 6.（23-24年上海市徐汇中学七上期末真题） Write a short passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A New Year Party”.( 以《一场新年派对》写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 新年马上就要来临了，你和你的同学们正在策划年派对。你们准备在派对上吃些什么呢?又准备做些什么活动呢?并谈谈你注意:文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】例文: A New Year Party Chinese New Year is coming soon. My classmates and I are making a plan for the New Year party. In that afternoon, we will order some pizza, fried chicken, hamburgers and drinks from fast food restaurants. After eating, we will enjoy the talent show. Students and teachers from all grades have to give performances, like singing, dancing or stand-up comedy. We will also play games, and the winners can get some prizes. I think the New Year party will be successful and we will have a good time on that day. 【解析】 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;③提示:题干所给提示内容不得遗漏，可适当发挥，注意无单词拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己正在和同学准备新年派对; 第二步，介绍派对的食物以及活动内容; 第三步，总结表达自己的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①order 订购 ②give performances 演出 [高分句型] I think the New Year party will be successful and we will have a good time on that day. 7.（22-23年上海市第三女子中学七上期末真题） Write at least 60 words on the topic “plan a/an festival for our school”.我们学校已经有了丰富多彩的校园六节，除此之外，你还想拥有什么节日? 请为学校出谋划策。 Questions for reference: 1. What festival are you going to have? Why? 2. When and where are you going to have it? 3. What time are you going to have it? 4. What are you going to do? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】Having delicious food will make people happy and relaxed so let's have an international food festival. We're going to have it next month in the playground. It will begin at 9 o'clock in the moring. We will sell food from different countries, such as Chinese food, English food, Japanese food and so on. All the money we raise will be donated to the students in the poor areas. We hope the money will be helpful. 【解析】 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:一般将来时; ③提示:写作提示已给出，考生应注意要运用一般将来时，适当增加细节，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明你想拥有的节日和原因:第二步，具体阐述举办该节日的时间、地点及活动; 第三步，说明举办该节日的目的。 [亮点词汇] ①happy and relaxed 快乐又放松 ②intermational 国际的 ③donate 捐赠 ④helpful 有帮助的 [高分句型] Having delicious food will make people happy and relaxed so let's have an international food festival. ②All the money we raise will be donated to the students in the poor areas.(定语从句，被动语态) 3 We hope the money will be helpful.(省略 that 的宾语从句) 8.（22-23年上海市洪山中学七上期末真题） Write a passage in at least 50 words on the topic“Signs around us”.(根据题目“我们身边的标志”写一篇不少于 50 词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Suggested questions: 1. Where can you find signs? 2. What do different signs tell us? 3. What do you think of signs? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】例文: Signs around usSigns are everywhere around. We can find them in a park, in the countryside, on a road and at school. Thereare many different kinds of signs, For example, warning signs tell us things we must not do. All these signs arimportant to us. When we are in the streets, we can see a lot of public signs. They have different meanings anddifferent colors. It's very important to know their meanings because they tell us what to do and what not to do. 【解析】 【详解】 [总体分析] 1 题材:本文是一篇记叙文; ②时态:时态为一般现在时; ③提示:写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍在哪里能看到标志以及这些标志告诉我们什么。 第二步，表达自己对这些标志的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①many different kinds of许多不同种类 ②be important to 对……重要 2 different meanings 不同的意思 9.（22-23年上海市建平中学七上期末真题） Write at least 50 words on the topic “An unforgettable birthday”(以“一个难忘的生日”为题，写一篇不 少于 50个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Birthdays in Life In next month’s Champion Special, Lynn Zhou wants to invite students to write about an unforgettable birthday in their lives. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】例文: An unforgettable birthday An unforgettable birthday in my life is my birthday party. On that day, I had a big birthday party with myfriends. My parents cooked lots of delicious food and bought a big cake for us. My friends gave me many presentsWe ate the food, sang some songs, danced and talked together. We also played a lot of games. We also went to the park together in the afternoon. We flew kites there, took pictures and so on. We had a good time that day.I knew that my family and friends always brought happiness to me. I'll never forget that day. I also want to thank my family and my friends for their dedication to me. 【解析】 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文; ②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主; ③提示:要求以“一个难忘的生日”为题进行写作，可适当发挥，注意语句连贯，表述清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，表达难忘的生日是哪一次;第二步，介绍在生日那天是如何度过的; 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①fly kites 放风筝 ②take pictures 拍照 ③have a good time 玩得开心 [高分句型] I knew that my family and friends always brought happiness to me. (that 引导的宾语从句) 10.（22-23年上海市民办新虹桥中学七上期末真题） 你拥有健康的生活方式吗?你为了健康的生活方式有做出过哪些改变,你是如何保持健康的生活方式的? 请以“My healthy lifestyle”为主题，写一篇不少于 60 个单词的短文。 My healthy lifestyle _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】范文 My healthy lifestyle Being healthy is very important to each of us, and a good lifestyle can keep us sports. And I also ate a lot of junk food. But now I have changed a lot. Every day, I get up early and run for an hour. Every meal I keep a balanced diet, and I eat many green vegetables and fruit, which are good for my health. In my spare time, I take part in a lot of activities, such as swimming, dancing and travelling with my friends. What's more, I also like reading in my free time. Reading can not only make me peaceful and relaxed, but also open up my mind. I hope everyone can have a healthy lifestyle, because it will make us happier. 【解析】 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:介绍自己健康的生活方式，具体包括健康的生活方式有哪些，自己做了什么改变以及是如何保持 的;注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤1] 第一步，介绍健康和健康生活方式的重要性，以及自己过去的一个生活方式; 第二步，介绍自己健康的生活方式有哪些，以及自己是如何保持的; 第三步，倡导大家都拥有健康的生活方式。 [亮点词汇] ① keep a balanced diet 保持均衡饮食 ② take part in 参加 3 not only ... but also 不仅……而且… [高分句型] ①I eat many green vegetables and fruit, which are good for my health. (which 引导的非限制性定语从句) ②I hope everyone can have a healthy lifestyle, because it will make us happier.(because 引导的原因状语从句) 11.（21-22年上海市奉贤区七校七上期末真题） Write at least 50 words on the topic“How to Keep Healthy”.(请以“怎样保持健康”为题写一篇不少于 50 词的短文。) Suggested questions: Do you think health is very important? What should you do if you want to stay healthy? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】As we all know, health is very important to everybody. Without health, we can't study or work well But do you know how to stay healthy? Here are some suggestions. Firstly, we should keep a good mood. Keeping a good mood can make us healthy and wealthy. Secondly, we should have enough sleep every day. Don't stay up late at night and get up early in the morning. Thirdly, we should develop a good eating habit. We should eat more fresh fruits and green vegetables, less meat and no junk food. Last but not least, doing sports every day is necessary to stay healthy. I hope everybody can stay healthy and be happy everyday, 【解析】 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇说明文，要求对如何保持健康提出自己的观点和建议; ②)时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”; ③ 提示:题目中已经给出写作提示，需要围绕提示进行写作，具体内容可以适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步:开篇点题指出健康的重要性，并提出如何保持健康，引出下文; 第二步:对如何保持健康，有条理地提出自己的建议; 第三步:最后进行简单的总结。 [亮点词汇] ① as we know 众所周知 ② keep a good mood 保持好的心情 ③ stay up late 熬夜 ④ develop a good eating habit 培养一个好的饮食习惯 [高分句型] 19/20①) Firstly...Secondly...Thirdly...Last but not least...(这些顺序词的使用使文② Keeping a good mood can make us healthy and wealthy.(用动名词形式作主语) 12.（21-22年上海市七上期末真题） Write at least 50 words on the topic “A Small Change I made在你的生活中，你有做出过什么样的小改变吗?是什么原因促使你做出了这样的改变?这个小改变又给你带来了怎样的影响呢?请以我做出的一个小改变”为题,写一篇不少于 50词的短语，标点符号不占格。(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) The following sentence patterns are for reference only (以下句型仅供参考) It is/was ... for me.. .…… It/ Doing sth. makes my life........ I decided to……. A Small Change I made ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: A Small Change I made I didn't like sports, so running was very difficult for me. I decided to change this bad habit. I start running every morning. Slowly, I'm very good at running. Now I like playing basketball very much. If l have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. Doing sports makes us very healthy. 【解析】 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”; ③) 提示:根据所给提示以“A Small ChangeImade”为题，写一篇作文介绍你的小改变。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的小改变: 第二步，具体阐述是什么原因促使你做出了这样的改变: 第三步，介绍这个小改变给你带来了怎样的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth 决定做某事 ②be good at 擅长 ③like doing sth 喜欢做某事 [高分句型] 2 IfI have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketbal. (if引导的条件状语 从句) ②Doing sports makes us very healthy.(动名词作主语) 13.（21-22年上海市普陀区七校七上期末真题） Write at least 60 words on the topic “A trip to...”(以“A trip to...”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 注意:文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Use the following points as areference. (以下内容仅供参考) 1. Where did you travel in the past? How did you go there? Who did you travel with? 2. What did you do and see there? What do you think of the trip? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】例文 A trip to the FarmLast Sunday my parents and I went to the farm. We went there by bus. It took us fifty minutesto get there. When we got there, we saw many animals and strawberries.The farmer showed us around the farm. He taught me how to milk the cow. With his help, llearnt to milk the cow, After that, I rode the horse. In the afternoon, I went fishing and picked somestrawberries. How happy we were! All in all, we had a good time there. I wanted to go there agai! 【解析】 【详解】 [总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文; ② 时态:时态一般过去时; ③ 提示:写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏“提示信息”中以前你去旅游的地方，怎样去的，和谁去的以及你在旅行中看到和你对旅行的看法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“上周六我父母和我去了农场。”来引出重点介绍的内容;第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“去农场乘坐的交通工具;在农场所看到的事物和所做的 事情;我对旅行的感触”几方面重点介绍我的农场旅行的具体情况; 第三步，书写结语。表达“我想要再去那里。”的强烈愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① by bus 乘公共汽车 ② show sb around 带某人参观 [高分句型] 2 When we got there, we saw many animals and strawberries.(when当……时候，引导时间状语从句。) ② How happy we were!(感叹句:How +形容词+主语+谓语动词) 14.（21-22年上海市实验学校七上期末真题） . Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “How to eat healthily”.(以“怎样保持饮食健康”为 题写一篇不少于 50 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考) 1 .Do you think eating healthily is important? 2.How do you keep healthy? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】例文 How to keep healthy A healthy diet is very important to us because it can keep us fit and healthy. I have a healthy diet. I have some bread and milk for breakfast. For lunch, l eat plenty of fresh vegetables and some meat. I also have a lot of rice noodles. For dinner, I usually have some fish and soup. We should all have a healthy diet because it is veryimportant. 【解析】 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇话题作文: ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:要求以“How to keep healthy”为题，结合提示问题进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍保持健康的原因; 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己是如何保持健康的: 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①have a healthy diet 有健康的饮食 ②plenty of许多 ③a lot of许多 [高分句型] ①A healthy diet is very important to us because it can keep us fit and healthy.(because 引导的原因状语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！18 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$