专题09 应用文写作-2025年高考英语模拟专项突破精题精选（新高考）

专题09应用文写作 应用文写作解题技巧及题型讲解 审题立意 确定体裁：仔细阅读题目要求，判断应用文的具体类型，如书信、通知、日记、报道、演讲稿等，不同体裁在格式、语言风格和内容侧重点上有所不同。 明确对象：明确写作的对象是谁，根据与对方的关系确定合适的语言风格和语气。比如写给朋友的信可以语言较为随意、亲切；而写给长辈、上级或不太熟悉的人，语言则要更正式、礼貌。 梳理要点：认真分析题目中给出的要点，确保文章内容完整、切题。可以将要点逐一列出，在写作时逐一展开论述，避免遗漏重要信息。 谋篇布局 搭建框架：根据体裁和要点，快速列出文章的大致框架，包括开头、中间和结尾的主要内容。开头部分要引入主题，中间部分详细阐述要点，结尾部分进行总结或提出期望等。 段落安排：合理安排段落，使文章层次清晰。每段围绕一个中心思想展开，段落之间注意过渡自然，可使用一些连接词或过渡句来增强文章的连贯性，如firstly, secondly, in addition, moreover, finally等.。 语言表达 词汇运用：选择准确、恰当、得体的词汇来表达自己的意思。尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇，避免因使用生僻词而出现拼写或用法错误。同时，注意词汇的丰富性，可适当运用一些近义词、反义词来使文章更具文采。句式选择：运用多样化的句式，如简单句、复合句、并列句等，使文章更有节奏感。可以使用一些常见的句式结构，如定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句等，来提升文章的档次，但要注意句式的正确性和合理性，避免出现语法错误。 语言风格：根据应用文的类型和写作对象，保持语言风格的一致性。一般来说，应用文的语言要求简洁明了、通俗易懂，避免使用过于复杂或晦涩的语言。 检查修改 语法错误：检查文章中是否存在语法错误，如主谓一致、时态一致、词性误用、句子成分残缺等，确保句子结构完整、语法正确。 拼写错误：仔细检查单词的拼写，避免因粗心而出现拼写错误，影响文章的整体质量。 标点符号：正确使用标点符号，使句子的表达更加准确、清晰。注意句号、逗号、问号、感叹号等标点符号的用法和位置。 内容要点：再次核对文章是否涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，是否有遗漏或重复的内容，确保文章内容完整、切题。 高考模拟再现（应用文写作） （一） （2024·河北石家庄·一模）假定你是李华，校英文报计划增设“Window of Art”栏目，介绍中西方优秀艺术家及作品。请你给编辑写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．表达看法； 2．提出建议。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear editor, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （二） （2024·江苏淮安·一模）假定你是李华，上周末你们班到阳光生态农场开展研学活动，请你给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动过程； 3. 你的感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Study Tour to the Sunshine Eco-Farm _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） （2024·浙江杭州·一模）假定你是李华，上学期你校发起了一项活动，倡议每个班级都养绿植(greenery )。请你给曾经的外教Linda写一封邮件介绍相关情况，内容包括： 1.活动内容； 2.活动的效果和反响。 注薪 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Linda, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （四） （2024·安徽·一模）假如你是李华，你的外教想要了解在刚刚过去的暑假，你和同学们是如何安排暑期生活的，并请你负责问卷调查。请你结合调查结果给外教写封信，内容包括： (1) 调查情况介绍； (2) 你选择的方式和理由。 注意： (1) 词数80词左右； (2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） （2024·福建宁德·一模）假设你是学生会干部李华，学校即将举办一场主题为“汉字的魅力”（The Charm of Chinese Characters）的文化展览，你打算邀请国际学生Emma参加。请撰写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 对Emma的邀请； 2. 介绍活动的主要内容和安排 注意：1.写作词数应为 80 个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Emma, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （六） （2024·江西·一模）假定你是李华，你刚刚参加了以“Have a More Peaceful World”为主题的国际中学生论坛。请你给英国朋友Jim写一封邮件分享此次经历，内容包括： 1. 分享你的经历； 2. 你的感想。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） （2024·山东·一模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）表示理解； （2）提出建议。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Frank, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （八） （2024·河南信阳·一模）假定你是李华，你校将于11月 15 日在校园内举办一场关于“古诗词鉴赏”的讲座。外教 Peter对中国古诗词非常感兴趣，请用英语写一封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括： 1. 讲座的时间和地点； 2. 讲座的目的和内容； 3. 发出邀请。 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇：古诗词鉴赏 ancient Chinese poetry appreciation Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （九） （2024·湖北·一模）假定你是李华，上周五你校组织了校园农场的丰收活动。请你给新西兰朋友Leo写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括: 1. 丰收场景； 2. 你的感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Leo, I’m writing to share with you a harvesting activity on our campus farm last Friday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （十） （2024·湖南永州·一模）假定你是李华, 上周六你参加了学校举行的以“保护海洋”为主题的创意作品大赛。请你给英国朋友 Ryan 写一封邮件分享这次经历, 内容包括: 1. 参赛过程（包括你的参赛作品等）； 2. 你的感受。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m writing to share with you our school’s creative work competition I participated in last Saturday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （十一） （2024·广东佛山·一模）假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校一年一度的体育节。请你给英国好友George写封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： 1. 你参加的体育项目； 2. 你的感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear George, Is everything going well? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'd love to hear about any sports events you've participated in. Yours, Li Hua （十二） （2024·重庆·模拟预测）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“Technology Changes Life”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 科技对生活的影响； 2. 你受到的启发。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Technology Changes Life Good morning, everyone! I'm thrilled to be here today to discuss how technology has profoundly shaped our lives. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题09应用文写作 应用文写作解题技巧及题型讲解 审题立意 确定体裁：仔细阅读题目要求，判断应用文的具体类型，如书信、通知、日记、报道、演讲稿等，不同体裁在格式、语言风格和内容侧重点上有所不同。 明确对象：明确写作的对象是谁，根据与对方的关系确定合适的语言风格和语气。比如写给朋友的信可以语言较为随意、亲切；而写给长辈、上级或不太熟悉的人，语言则要更正式、礼貌。 梳理要点：认真分析题目中给出的要点，确保文章内容完整、切题。可以将要点逐一列出，在写作时逐一展开论述，避免遗漏重要信息。 谋篇布局 搭建框架：根据体裁和要点，快速列出文章的大致框架，包括开头、中间和结尾的主要内容。开头部分要引入主题，中间部分详细阐述要点，结尾部分进行总结或提出期望等。 段落安排：合理安排段落，使文章层次清晰。每段围绕一个中心思想展开，段落之间注意过渡自然，可使用一些连接词或过渡句来增强文章的连贯性，如firstly, secondly, in addition, moreover, finally等.。 语言表达 词汇运用：选择准确、恰当、得体的词汇来表达自己的意思。尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇，避免因使用生僻词而出现拼写或用法错误。同时，注意词汇的丰富性，可适当运用一些近义词、反义词来使文章更具文采。句式选择：运用多样化的句式，如简单句、复合句、并列句等，使文章更有节奏感。可以使用一些常见的句式结构，如定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句等，来提升文章的档次，但要注意句式的正确性和合理性，避免出现语法错误。 语言风格：根据应用文的类型和写作对象，保持语言风格的一致性。一般来说，应用文的语言要求简洁明了、通俗易懂，避免使用过于复杂或晦涩的语言。 检查修改 语法错误：检查文章中是否存在语法错误，如主谓一致、时态一致、词性误用、句子成分残缺等，确保句子结构完整、语法正确。 拼写错误：仔细检查单词的拼写，避免因粗心而出现拼写错误，影响文章的整体质量。 标点符号：正确使用标点符号，使句子的表达更加准确、清晰。注意句号、逗号、问号、感叹号等标点符号的用法和位置。 内容要点：再次核对文章是否涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，是否有遗漏或重复的内容，确保文章内容完整、切题。 高考模拟再现（应用文写作） （一） （2024·河北石家庄·一模）假定你是李华，校英文报计划增设“Window of Art”栏目，介绍中西方优秀艺术家及作品。请你给编辑写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．表达看法； 2．提出建议。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear editor, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear editor, I’m extremely delighted to hear that our school English newspaper is planning to add the column “Window of Art”. I firmly believe this is an excellent idea. This column will offer us a precious opportunity to deepen our understanding of art. I suggest that the column could not only introduce both Chinese and Western artists and their renowned works but also provide some background information about the creation process and the artistic styles. Moreover, it would be wonderful to have some students’ comments or reviews about the artworks. Maybe we could even organize some art-related competitions or activities based on the content of this column. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校报编辑写封信，就其计划增设“Window of Art”栏目，介绍中西方优秀艺术家及作品一事给出自己的看法和建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：delighted→ happy/glad 计划：plan to→ intend to 宝贵的：precious→ valuable 此外：moreover→ what’s more 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Maybe we could even organize some art-related competitions or activities based on the content of this column. 拓展句：Maybe we could even organize some art-related competitions or activities which are based on the content of this column. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m extremely delighted to hear that our school English newspaper is planning to add the column “Window of Art”.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】I suggest that the column could not only introduce both Chinese and Western artists and their renowned works but also provide some background information about the creation process and the artistic styles.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） （二） （2024·江苏淮安·一模）假定你是李华，上周末你们班到阳光生态农场开展研学活动，请你给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动过程； 3. 你的感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Study Tour to the Sunshine Eco-Farm _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 A Study Tour to the Sunshine Eco-Farm Last weekend, our class had a study tour to the Sunshine Eco-Farm, eager to learn about sustainable agriculture and foster a deeper understanding of environmental protection. The day began with a brief introduction to the farm, followed by a hands-on experience in planting vegetables and feeding cows. We also learned how to turn food and animal waste into nutrient-rich soil. After a hearty lunch entirely sourced from the farm, we visited the solar-powered greenhouses, where we saw various crops growing without chemical fertilizers. This experience was both exciting and enriching. I was thrilled to see firsthand how technology can be applied in agriculture, and it fueled my passion for protecting our environment as well. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英文报写一篇报道，介绍到上周末阳光生态农场开展的研学活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 培养：foster→develop 完全：entirely→completely 激动：thrilled→excited 热情：passion→enthusiasm 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：I was thrilled to see firsthand how technology can be applied in agriculture, and it fueled my passion for protecting our environment as well. 拓展句：Not only was I thrilled to see firsthand how technology can be applied in agriculture, but also it fueled my passion for protecting our environment as well. 【点睛】[高分句型1] We also learned how to turn food and animal waste into nutrient-rich soil. (运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语) [高分句型2] After a hearty lunch entirely sourced from the farm, we visited the solar-powered greenhouses, where we saw various crops growing without chemical fertilizers. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句) （三） （2024·浙江杭州·一模）假定你是李华，上学期你校发起了一项活动，倡议每个班级都养绿植(greenery )。请你给曾经的外教Linda写一封邮件介绍相关情况，内容包括： 1.活动内容； 2.活动的效果和反响。 注薪 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Linda, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Linda, I’m delighted to share with you an exciting initiative we’ve launched at our school—“Greenery in Every Classroom.” The project kicked off with each class selecting a variety of plants to cultivate. We began with a special planting session where students enthusiastically potted seeds and saplings. The subsequent weeks were filled with a shared responsibility as we watered our tiny green friends.This hands-on experience with nature has not only brightened our classrooms but also sparked a genuine interest in botany and environmental conservation. The initiative has been met with widespread enthusiasm and even made the headlines in the local newspaper. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给曾经的外教Linda写一封邮件介绍上学期你校发起了一项倡议每个班级都养绿植活动。其内容包括：活动内容和活动的效果和反响。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：delighted→glad 开始： kick off →start 满腔热情地：enthusiastically → passionately 责任：responsibility→duty 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The project kicked off with each class selecting a variety of plants to cultivate. 拓展句：The project kicked off as each class began to select a variety of plants to cultivate. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m delighted to share with you an exciting initiative we’ve launched at our school—“Greenery in Every Classroom.”（运用了省略that或者which的定语从句） 【高分句型2】The subsequent weeks were filled with a shared responsibility as we watered our tiny green friends. （运用了as引导的时间状语从句） （四） （2024·安徽·一模）假如你是李华，你的外教想要了解在刚刚过去的暑假，你和同学们是如何安排暑期生活的，并请你负责问卷调查。请你结合调查结果给外教写封信，内容包括： (1) 调查情况介绍； (2) 你选择的方式和理由。 注意： (1) 词数80词左右； (2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Sir/Madam, In response to your inquiry about how my classmates and I spent our summer vacation, I am delighted to share my findings. The survey revealed a vast variety of activities undertaken by our classmates. Notably, the majority of students, an impressive 45%, chose to learn a new skill, reflecting a strong desire for personal growth. This was closely followed by 30% who opted to preview the upcoming academic year’s courses. Additionally, 15% embarked on travel adventures, while 10% dedicated their time to physical fitness. As for me, I chose to learn a new skill-programming. I believe proficiency in programming can not only broaden my horizons but equip me with a valuable skill set for the future. The process of learning has been both challenging and rewarding, fostering a sense of accomplishment. I hope this summary gives you a glimpse into the summer experiences of us. If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to reach out. Warm regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的外教想要了解在刚刚过去的暑假，你和同学们是如何安排暑期生活的，并请你负责问卷调查，要求考生结合调查结果给外教写封信介绍调查情况以及你选择的方式和理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 高兴的：delighted→pleased 活动：activity→event 各种各样的：a variety of→ a range of 把……奉献给：dedicate→devote 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The survey revealed a vast variety of activities undertaken by our classmates. 拓展句：The survey, which was conducted among our classmates, revealed a vast variety of activities that they had undertaken. 【点睛】[高分句型1]This was closely followed by 30% who opted to preview the upcoming academic year’s courses.(运用了who引导的定语从句) [高分句型2]If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to reach out.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句) （五） （2024·福建宁德·一模）假设你是学生会干部李华，学校即将举办一场主题为“汉字的魅力”（The Charm of Chinese Characters）的文化展览，你打算邀请国际学生Emma参加。请撰写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1. 对Emma的邀请； 2. 介绍活动的主要内容和安排 注意：1.写作词数应为 80 个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Emma, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Emma, I hope this email finds you well. I am thrilled to invite you to our upcoming exhibition themed “The Charms of Chinese Characters”. This cultural event will showcase the rich history and beauty of Chinese characters through various interactive displays. The exhibition will take place next Sunday from 8 am to 12 am in the school auditorium. We have arranged for a series of lectures, including interactive calligraphy workshops, cultural lectures, and engaging games that explore the history and artistry of Chinese characters. The event will also feature live demonstrations and a gallery showcasing beautiful calligraphy art. We would be delighted to have you join us and share this unique experience. We look forward to your positive response. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给国际学生Emma写一封电子邮件，邀请她参加学校即将举办的一场主题为“汉字的魅力”的文化展览。 【详解】1.词汇积累 即将到来的：upcoming→forthcoming 各种各样的：various→a variety of 吸引人的：engaging→attractive 高兴的：delighted→pleased 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am thrilled to invite you to our upcoming exhibition themed “The Charms of Chinese Characters”. 拓展句：I am thrilled to invite you to our upcoming exhibition, which is themed “The Charms of Chinese Characters”. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I hope this email finds you well. (运用了省略了引导词that的宾语从句) [高分句型2] We have arranged for a series of lectures, including interactive calligraphy workshops, cultural lectures, and engaging games that explore the history and artistry of Chinese characters. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句) （六） （2024·江西·一模）假定你是李华，你刚刚参加了以“Have a More Peaceful World”为主题的国际中学生论坛。请你给英国朋友Jim写一封邮件分享此次经历，内容包括： 1. 分享你的经历； 2. 你的感想。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Jim, I have just participated in an forum on the theme of “Have a More Peaceful World”. I’m writing to share my experience with you. I first made a specific explanation for the advantages of owning a peaceful world. Then I focused my topic on what we can do to keep the whole world peaceful. After finishing my statement, I answered some questions raised by participants. Undoubtedly, not only did this forum enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizons, but it also inspired me to study much harder to make contributions to keeping the world more peaceful. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写一封邮件分享参加的“Have a More Peaceful World”为主题的国际中学生论坛的经历。 【详解】1.词汇积累 参加：participate in→take part in 具体的：specific→detailed 陈述：statement→presentation 毫无疑问：Undoubtedly→Certainly 2.句式拓展 简单句变复杂句 原句：After finishing my statement, I answered some questions raised by participants. 同义句：After finishing my statement, I answered some questions, which were raised by participants. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Then I focused my topic on what we can do to keep the whole world peaceful (运用了what引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Undoubtedly, not only did this forum enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizons, but it also inspired me to study much harder to make contributions to keeping the world more peaceful.(运用了not only…but also的并列句及部分倒装) （七） （2024·山东·一模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： （1）表示理解； （2）提出建议。 注意： （1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Frank, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Frank, As a fellow student who has the same experience, I understand how overwhelming academic pressure can be. Here are some suggestions that might help you manage it. First of all, it’s crucial to decide on priorities. This way, you can make your schedule well- organized. You can also join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other. Don’t forget to engage in extracurricular activities to refresh yourself and relieve your pressure. All in all, academic pressure is a common challenge, but with proper organization, support and self- care, you can deal with it effectively and stay on track. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你的英国朋友Frank近期因学习压力大感到情绪低落情况给他写一封邮件。其内容包括：表示理解和提出建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 压力：pressure → stress 首先：first of all → to begin with 重要的：crucial → vital 处理：deal with → cope with 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：You can also join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other. 拓展句：It is also advisable that you should join a study group to discuss difficult topics and learn from each other. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 As a fellow student who has the same experience, I understand how overwhelming academic pressure can be. (运用了who引导的定语从句和how引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】 Here are some suggestions that might help you manage it. (运用了that引导的定语从句) （八） （2024·河南信阳·一模）假定你是李华，你校将于11月 15 日在校园内举办一场关于“古诗词鉴赏”的讲座。外教 Peter对中国古诗词非常感兴趣，请用英语写一封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括： 1. 讲座的时间和地点； 2. 讲座的目的和内容； 3. 发出邀请。 注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇：古诗词鉴赏 ancient Chinese poetry appreciation Dear Peter, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, I hope this email finds you in good spirits. I am thrilled to inform you that our school will be hosting a lecture on “Ancient Chinese Poetry Appreciation” on November 15th. The event will start at 8 am in the lecture hall within our campus. The purpose of this lecture is to delve into the depths of Chinese classical poetry, exploring its rich history, unique styles, and profound meanings. Renowned scholars will guide us through a captivating journey, enriching our understanding and appreciation of this cultural treasure. Given your keen interest in Chinese ancient poetry, I sincerely invite you to attend this lecture. Your presence would greatly enhance our discussion and bring a fresh perspective to our exploration. Please let me know by November 10th if you can join us. Looking forward to sharing this literary experience with you! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的学校将于11月 15 日在校园内举办一场关于“古诗词鉴赏”的讲座。外教 Peter对中国古诗词非常感兴趣，要求请用英语写一封邮件，邀请他参加。 【详解】1.词汇积累 兴奋的：thrilled→excited 举行： host→hold 探索：explore→probe into 提高：enhance→promote 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：I am thrilled to inform you that our school will be hosting a lecture on “Ancient Chinese Poetry Appreciation” on November 15th. The event will start at 8 am in the lecture hall within our campus. 拓展句：I am thrilled to inform you that our school will be hosting a lecture on “Ancient Chinese Poetry Appreciation” on November 15th，which will start at 8 am in the lecture hall within our campus. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I am thrilled to inform you that our school will be hosting a lecture on “Ancient Chinese Poetry Appreciation” on November 15th. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) [高分句型2] Renowned scholars will guide us through a captivating journey, enriching our understanding and appreciation of this cultural treasure. (运用了现在分词作状语) （九） （2024·湖北·一模）假定你是李华，上周五你校组织了校园农场的丰收活动。请你给新西兰朋友Leo写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括: 1. 丰收场景； 2. 你的感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Leo, I’m writing to share with you a harvesting activity on our campus farm last Friday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Leo, I’m writing to share with you a harvesting activity on our cam pus farm last Friday. It was such a delightful and memorable experience that I couldn’t wait to tell you about it. At the sight of the farm filled with ripe vegetables and fruits like peppers, tomatoes and grapes, we found it hard to contain our excitement. After receiving some instructions from the teachers, we plunged ourselves into the harvesting activity. We hustled and bustled around, each with a basket in hand, carefully gathering the fruits of our labor. Personally, I collected a variety of vegetables such as carrots, tomatoes and peppers. I even cooked them for my families, though, honestly speaking, they were a bit overcooked. This activity not only brought me the joy of harvest but also taught me the value of labor, making the efforts on the campus farm truly worthwhile. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰朋友Leo写一封邮件分享上周五学校组织的校园农场的丰收活动经历。 【详解】1.词汇积累 令人愉快的：delightful→pleasant 积极地投入……之中：plunge oneself into→throw oneself into 说实话：honestly speaking→to be honest 抑制：contain→hold back 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：At the sight of the farm filled with ripe vegetables and fruits like peppers, tomatoes and grapes, we found it hard to contain our excitement. 拓展句：The moment we saw the farm filled with ripe vegetables and fruits like peppers, tomatoes and grapes, we found it hard to contain our excitement. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We hustled and bustled around, each with a basket in hand, carefully gathering the fruits of our labor.(运用了独立主格结构和现在分词短语作状语) 【高分句型2】This activity not only brought me the joy of harvest but also taught me the value of labor, making the efforts on the campus farm truly worthwhile.(运用了现在分词短语作状语) （十） （2024·湖南永州·一模）假定你是李华, 上周六你参加了学校举行的以“保护海洋”为主题的创意作品大赛。请你给英国朋友 Ryan 写一封邮件分享这次经历, 内容包括: 1. 参赛过程（包括你的参赛作品等）； 2. 你的感受。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m writing to share with you our school’s creative work competition I participated in last Saturday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Ryan, I’m writing to share with you our school’s creative work competition I participated in last Saturday. With the theme of “Ocean Protection”, a great number of competitors from different grades of our school produced a variety of creative works, including posters, T-shirts, handbags, videos and so on. I made an animation video to show the living conditions of fish before and after the sea was polluted, emphasizing the importance of protecting oceans, which received unanimous praise from judges. This contest not only won me an award, but also helped me make many like-minded friends and strengthened my determination to protect the ocean. Small actions as we take, it will, I believe, make a huge difference in our life. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于书信写作。要求考生给英国朋友Ryan写封邮件，分享学校上周六举行的一“保护海洋”为主题的创意作品大赛，介绍参赛过程和感受。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 主题：theme→topic 大量的、许多的：a great number of→plenty of 各种各样的：a variety of→all kinds of 强调：emphasize→highlight 比赛：competition→contest 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句：With the theme of “Ocean Protection”, a great number of competitors from different grades of our school produced a variety of creative works, including posters, T-shirts, handbags, videos and so on. 拓展句：With the theme of “Ocean Protection”, a great number of competitors from different grades of our school produced a variety of creative works,which included posters, T-shirts, handbags, videos and so on. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I made an animation video to show the living conditions of fish before and after the sea was polluted, emphasizing the importance of protecting oceans, which received unanimous praise from judges.（运用了以连词before and after引导的时间状语从句和以关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。） 【高分句型2】Small actions as we take, it will, I believe, make a huge difference in our life.（运用了以连词as引导的让步状语从句的倒装句和插入语形式。） （十一） （2024·广东佛山·一模）假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校一年一度的体育节。请你给英国好友George写封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： 1. 你参加的体育项目； 2. 你的感想。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear George, Is everything going well? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'd love to hear about any sports events you've participated in. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear George, Is everything going well? I’d like to tell you something about the sports festival in our school. All students took part in the annual sports festival held on the playground last week. I participated in 4x100-meter relay, which was one of the most exciting events. It was with our joint efforts that our class won the first place in this event at last. Not only did we enjoy the speed and passion in the competition, but also we strengthened the team spirit. I'd love to hear about any sports events you've participated in. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于上周你参加了学校一年一度的体育节这一情况，给英国好友George写封邮件分享这次经历。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动的：exciting→ thrilling 共同的：joint→ united 比赛：competition→ match 增强：strengthened→ enhanced 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：All students took part in the annual sports festival held on the playground last week. 拓展句：All students took part in the annual sports festival, which was held on the playground last week. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I participated in 4x100-meter relay which was one of the most exciting events.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Not only did we enjoy the speed and passion in the competition, but also we strengthened the team spirit.（运用了Not only…but also…句型以及Not only位于句首的部分倒装） （十二） （2024·重庆·模拟预测）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以“Technology Changes Life”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 科技对生活的影响； 2. 你受到的启发。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Technology Changes Life Good morning, everyone! I'm thrilled to be here today to discuss how technology has profoundly shaped our lives. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Technology Changes Life Good morning, everyone! I’m thrilled to be here today to discuss how technology has profoundly shaped our lives. Technology has become an indispensable part of our daily lives. It has revolutionized communication, allowing us to stay connected with friends and family by means of video chats, emails, or social media. Moreover, technology has transformed the way we learn. We can access vast amounts of information as long as the Internet is available. Online courses have made learning more accessible and engaging. From my perspective, not only does technology bring convenience and efficiency, but it also inspires us to think differently and be more innovative. It is a powerful tool and a responsibility. So we must use it wisely. Let’s embrace its benefits while guarding against its pitfalls. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Technology Changes Life”为题写一篇发言稿参赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动的：thrilled→ excited 此外：Moreover → What’s more 激发：inspire→ motivate 拥抱：embrace→ hug 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Technology has become an indispensable part of our daily lives. It has revolutionized communication, allowing us to stay connected with friends and family by means of video chats, emails, or social media. 合并句：Technology has become an indispensable part of our daily lives, which has revolutionized communication, allowing us to stay connected with friends and family by means of video chats, emails, or social media. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We can access vast amounts of information as long as the Internet is available.（运用了as long as引导的条件状语从句） 【高分句型2】From my perspective, not only does technology bring convenience and efficiency, but it also inspires us to think differently and be more innovative.（运用了not only…but also的固定句型以及not only位于句首时句子需要部分倒装） 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$