读后续写 惊涛勇救：少女的无畏之举 讲义-2024届贵州省遵义市高三下学期第二次模拟测试英语试题

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Belinda and Robert Stone were enjoying a peaceful afternoon together in Barbados — their favorite vacation destination. It was a warm afternoon, and they decided it was the perfect time to go for an ocean swim. “We were floating around, saying how enjoyable this was, what a terrific holiday.” said Belinda. “We swam out, not that far but enough to be out of our depth.” The couple — who live in London— are both relatively strong swimmers, Belinda said, so they “felt fully confident” being in the ocean. But they hadn’t considered just how strong the current was that particular day. Although they had visited Barbados several times, they didn’t realize the specific area they swam to was known for its strong riptide (激流). The couple noticed that they were floating in the direction of the neighboring beach, so Belinda decided to swim toward the beach they came from, against the current. She soon realized that her husband was floating behind — and was suddenly too far away to even hear her. She attempted to swim to the shore to get help but struggled to push past the current. “I just couldn’t get anywhere,” said Belinda, 64, who began to scream out for a lifeguard. No one came after a few minutes. Two teenage girls — Emma. 14, and Zoe, 13 — were surfboarding near the shore. They were in Barbados as part of a swimming camp and both experienced in the water. Zoe spotted Belinda, who was about 85 feet away, and heard her cries for help. The two girls quickly reached Belinda, and Zoe helped pull her onto the surfboard. They swam parallel to the shore and brought Belinda to safety. Belinda, grateful but still scared, told them that her husband was stuck farther out in the ocean. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: The girls were the only ones at the water’s edge. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Finally, they made it to shore. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 Belinda 和 Robert Stone 这对来自伦敦的夫妇在巴巴多斯度假时去海里游泳，他们自认为游泳技术不错且未意识到当天海域激流很强。游着游着，Belinda 发现被冲向邻滩，决定逆流回原海滩，却与丈夫分散，她无法靠岸且呼救无果。此时，参加游泳营的少女 Emma 和 Zoe 在岸边冲浪，Zoe 发现并救起了 Belinda，得知其丈夫还在海里，故事续写将围绕两个女孩如何救 Robert 以及后续发展，突出青少年勇敢无畏、乐于助人的精神和善良之举能拯救生命的主题。 故事分析 · 伏笔与回应： i. 伏笔：夫妇虽多次来巴巴多斯，但未察觉此次游泳区域以激流闻名，为他们遭遇危险埋下隐患。 回应：Belinda 与丈夫被激流冲散，难以自救，突出了情况的危急，引发后续女孩施救的情节，推动故事发展，展现了自然环境的不可预测性和危险。 ii. 伏笔：Belinda 和 Robert 自认为游泳能力较强，所以放心游到较深海域，这种过度自信使他们对潜在危险估计不足。 回应：面对强大的激流，他们陷入困境，从而引出两个女孩的救援行动，形成情节的转折，凸显了在自然力量面前人类的渺小以及他人帮助的重要性。 iii. 伏笔：Emma 和 Zoe 参加游泳营且有水上经验，为她们能够勇敢地实施救援提供了合理依据。 回应：在听到 Belinda 的呼救后，她们迅速且果断地行动，凭借自身能力克服激流的困难，成功救起 Belinda 并继续去救 Robert，展现了青少年的勇敢和担当，呼应了前文对她们能力的铺垫，使故事的发展合乎逻辑。 iv. 伏笔：Belinda 被救后告知女孩丈夫还在海里，这为故事的进一步发展设置了悬念和任务。 回应：女孩们毫不犹豫地再次返回危险的海域，体现她们的善良和坚定，持续推动情节走向高潮，展现了人性的光辉和善良的延续，强化了故事的紧张感和情感张力。 v. 伏笔：当时岸边只有两个女孩，意味着救援的重任完全落在她们身上，增加了故事的紧张氛围和戏剧性。 回应：她们独自面对危险，勇敢地承担起拯救他人生命的责任，最终成功救出 Robert，突出了她们的英雄形象和个人力量在关键时刻的伟大作用，使故事更加扣人心弦，升华了主题。 · 续写要点： 2. 第一段：The girls were the only ones at the water’s edge. Without a second thought, Emma and Zoe paddled back out into the rough waters, their eyes scanning the surface for any sign of Robert. The current tugged at their boards, but they fought against it, determined to find him. After what felt like an eternity, they spotted a figure bobbing in the water. It was Robert, looking exhausted and barely able to stay afloat. They quickly reached him and helped him onto the surfboards. With all their strength, they began the arduous journey back to shore, battling the waves and the current every step of the way. 2. 第二段：Finally, they made it to shore. A small crowd had gathered, and Belinda rushed to her husband's side, tears streaming down her face. She hugged the girls tightly, thanking them profusely for their heroic act. The girls, exhausted but with smiles on their faces, said it was nothing. Word of their bravery spread quickly, and they became local heroes. The Stones, forever grateful, promised to stay in touch with the girls and even offered to support their future swimming endeavors. This incident not only saved two lives but also forged a bond between strangers that would last a lifetime, all because of the kindness and courage of two young girls. · 情感线：起初，Belinda 和 Robert 享受假期，心情愉悦轻松；遭遇激流时，感到惊慌和无助；Belinda 被救后，对女孩充满感激，同时为丈夫担忧；女孩们去救 Robert 时，坚定勇敢；Robert 获救后，一家人重聚，无比欣慰；女孩们成为英雄，大家对她们充满敬佩，情感变化丰富，突出了善良与勇敢带来的感动和力量，使故事充满温情与正能量。 · 故事线： 4. Belinda 和 Robert 在巴巴多斯度假去游泳。 4. 因未察觉激流被困，两人分散。 4. 少女 Emma 和 Zoe 救起 Belinda。 4. 得知 Robert 还在海里，女孩们再次出发救援。 4. 成功救回 Robert 到岸边。 4. 续写部分，众人感恩，女孩成为英雄。 · 主旨升华句： 5. In the face of danger, the bravest hearts are often the ones that shine the brightest, illuminating the path to safety for others.（在危险面前，最勇敢的心往往闪耀得最亮，为他人照亮安全之路。） 5. True heroes are not measured by age or strength, but by the kindness and courage that resides within their souls.（真正的英雄不是以年龄或力量来衡量，而是以他们灵魂深处的善良和勇气来衡量。） 5. A single act of selfless kindness can create ripples that spread far and wide, touching lives and inspiring others to be better.（一个无私的善举可以产生涟漪，传播得很远很广，触动生命并激励他人变得更好。） 5. When we reach out to help others in need, we not only save them but also discover the extraordinary power within ourselves.（当我们伸出援手帮助有需要的人时，我们不仅拯救了他们，也发现了自己内心的非凡力量。） 5. In the darkest of times, the light of human kindness has the power to cut through the shadows and bring hope and salvation.（在最黑暗的时刻，人类善良的光芒有能力穿透阴影，带来希望和救赎。） 写作示范 第一篇 The girls were the only ones at the water’s edge. But their hearts were filled with determination. They knew they were the only hope for Robert. Zoe tightened her grip on the surfboard leash, and Emma adjusted her stance. Pushing off, they fought against the current once more. The waves crashed around them, but they kept their focus on the spot where they had last seen Robert. When they finally reached him, he was barely conscious. With great effort, they managed to get him onto the surfboards and started the slow journey back. The girls encouraged each other, their voices cutting through the sound of the ocean. Finally, they made it to shore. People rushed to help, pulling Robert onto the beach. Belinda was by his side in an instant, crying and thanking the girls. The paramedics arrived and took over, checking on Robert's condition. The girls sat on the sand, exhausted but with a sense of accomplishment. The local news picked up the story, and soon the whole town was talking about their bravery. The Stones, once recovered, made sure to honor the girls in a special way. This incident became a symbol of hope and kindness in the community, showing that even the youngest among us can be heroes when it matters most. 第二篇 The girls were the only ones at the water’s edge. Their eyes met, and they nodded, a silent agreement passing between them. They paddled with all their might, the fear of the current drowned out by their concern for Robert. As they neared him, they could see the desperation in his eyes. They called out words of comfort and reassurance as they helped him onto the boards. The journey back was a struggle, with the waves seeming to grow taller and the current stronger. But they held on, their small hands gripping the boards tightly. Finally, they made it to shore. The onlookers erupted in applause as they brought Robert to safety. Belinda embraced her husband, then turned to the girls and hugged them as if they were her own children. The girls' parents were proud and grateful, and the community came together to celebrate their heroic act. From that day on, the story of Emma and Zoe's bravery was told and retold, inspiring others to be brave and kind. It was a reminder that in the face of danger, love and courage will always prevail, no matter how young or inexperienced we may be. 参考答案 The girls were the only ones at the water’s edge. Without hesitation, they turned their surfboard back toward the sea, determined to find Robert. Emma paddled while Zoe kept a watchful eye for any sign of Robert. The current was still strong, but the girls persevered, knowing that every second counted. After a few tense minutes, they spotted Robert struggling against the waves. Emma quickly maneuvered the surfboard towards him, and with Zoe’s assistance, they managed to pull him onto the board. Finally, they made it to shore. Belinda and Robert were both exhausted but relieved to be safe. They hugged the girls tightly, tears of gratitude streaming down their faces. The locals who had witnessed the ordeal applauded the brave actions of the two teenage girls. Emma and Zoe smiled shyly, happy that they had been able to help. The incident had strengthened their bond with the island, and they left Barbados with fond memories of their time spent saving lives. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$