读后续写 how to design reasonable plot 导学案-2025届高三英语二轮复习

读后续写讲评课How to design reasonable plots学案 1、 原文部分 The event that stands out in Tom’s memory happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old. He was at home with his elder sister Jane. Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices. At first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below their apartment often became loud, but he soon realized this time it was different.       “Quick! Quick! Remove the motorcycles from the shop.” someone yelled. Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick cloud of smoke greeted him. The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.       Jane, who had been playing the violin in her room, hurried to the living room. They rushed out of the door and along the corridor（走廊）through the smoke. They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane stopped in her track. She turned around and headed back the way they came. Tom had no idea what she was doing, but he followed suit.         Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them, who they called Mary. Jane began banging on Mary’s door, but got no answer. As the smoke thickened around them, Tom could see many of their neighbors—some still in their pyjamas（睡衣）—running for safety. The thought of fear crossed his mind.      “She would have run for safety like everyone else!” Tom cried. However, Jane refused to give up. “I know Mary’s still inside.” She said she was familiar with Makcik’s daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping. She pounded the door. “Go downstairs. Go now! Go!” 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph1: Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Paragraph 2: Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. 2、 语料素材储备 步骤一：语言输入 【1】Step 1: 完成下列完形填空（10m）2018金华十校联考英语试题 Scarlet was out late that night. She waited in a dark alley and listened for signs of life. But all she 1 was the traffic on New York’s streets. She yawned and turned to look 2 at her house across the street. The orange glow(光)in the upstairs window told her that 3 went wrong. As she started to run back down the alley, one window 4 and with a huge “whoosh!”, flames 5 into the night sky. “My 6 !” Scarlet screamed silently. She 7 into the house through an open window. Smoke had started to fill the room 8 it was hard to see. However, the sound of her babies’ cries 9 her. Gently, Scarlet 10 the first baby, ran back outside and laid it on the 11 . She came back for her second child 12 . Now the flames were already dancing down the stairs. She 13 feel their hot breath on her back as she escaped through the window with her second baby. She returned 14 more times for the others. The fire was all around her now, 15 at her like a wild animal. It burned her ears and her eyelids(眼睑)and the skin on her legs. She could barely see. 16 , she was able to carry her last child out before the roof and walls fell. Scarlet’s home was no more there. When the fire was out, a fire fighter walked over to the six cats on the sidewalk across the street 一 the mother and her five babies. The mother was 17 burned. He was quite clear 18 the story went — she had gone into the burning house again and again and returned with a baby 19 each time. “Now,” he thought, “it’s my 20 to save her.” 1. A. saw B. heard C. smelt D. felt 2. A. back B. out C. down D. away 3. A. everything B. nothing C. something D. anything 4. A. heated B. broke C. shut D. expanded 5. A. shot B. flowed C. disappeared D. poured 6. A. house B. neighbors C. food D. babies 7. A. dashed B. walked C. rolled D. wandered 8. A. bu B. and C. because D. though 9. A. scared B. warned C. guided D. attracted 10. A. gave up B. held up C. woke up D. picked up 11. A. stairs B. floor C. sidewalk D. roof 12. A. in no time B. on time C. at the same time D. at one time 13. A. would B. should C. could D. might 14. A. two B. three C. four D. five 15. A. staring B. smiling C. waving D. roaring 16. A. Obviously B. Importantly C. Reasonably D. Fortunately 17. A. slightly B. hardly C. badly D. nearly 18. A. where B. why C. when D. how 19. A. in her arms B. in her mouth C. on her head D. on her back 20. A. turn B. right C. way D. fault Step 2: 原文语言学习：从原文中找出下列汉语的英语表达。 1.火焰冲向夜晚的天空。 2.烟雾已经填满了房间，几乎看不见。 3.她孩子的声音指引了她。 ______________________________________________________ 4.火焰已经烧到了楼梯上，她甚至能感受后背都是发烫的。 5.火已经把她包围着，像一头野兽一样对她咆哮着。已经烧到了她的耳朵，眼睑，和腿上的皮肤。 【2】Step 1: 完成下列完形填空（10m）（2016年全国1卷） Larry works with Transport Drivers, Inc. One morning in 2009, Larry was 41________along I65 north after delivering to one of his 42 _________. Suddenly, he saw a car with its bright lights on. 43_________he got closer, he found 44_________vehicle upside down on the road. One more look and he noticed 45 shooting out from under the 46__________vehicle. Larry pulled over, set the brake and 47_______the fire extinguisher (灭火器). Two good bursts from the extinguisher and the fire was put out. The man who had his bright lights on 48__________and told Larry he had 49___________an emergency call. They 50________ heard a woman’s voice coming from the wrecked (毁坏的) vehicle. 51________the vehicle, they saw that a woman was trying to get out of the broken window. They told her to stay 52_________ until the emergency personnel arrived, 53_______ she thought the car was going to 54__________. Larry told her that he had already put out the fire and she should not move 55_______she injured her neck. Once fire and emergency people arrived, Larry and the other man 56_________ and let them go to work. Then, Larry asked the 57__________if he was needed or 58_______ to go. They let him and the other man go. One thing is 59_________—Larry went above and beyond the call of duty by getting so close to the burning vehicle! His 60_________ most likely saved the woman’s life. 41. A. walking B. touring C. traveling D. rushing 42. A. passengers B. colleagues C. employers D. customers 43. A. Since B. Although C. As D. If 44. A. each B. another C. that D. his 45. A. flames B. smoke C. water D. steam 46. A. used B. disabled C. removed D. abandoned 47. A. got hold of B. prepared C. took charge of D. controlled 48. A. came down B. came through C. came in D. came over 49. A. returned B. received C. made D. confirmed 50. A. then B. again C. finally D. even 51. A. Starting B. Parking C. Passing D. Approaching 52. A. quiet B. still C. away D. calm 53. A. for B. so C. and D. but 54. A. explode B. slip away C. fall apart D. crash 55. A. as if B. unless C. in case D. after 56. A. stepped forward B. backed off C. moved on D. set out 57. A. woman B. police C. man D. driver 58. A. forbidden B. ready C. asked D. free 59. A. for certain B. for consideration C. reported D. checked 60. A. patience B. skills C. efforts D. promise 【3】关于火灾的一些英语描述 火烧巴黎圣母院 （Flames and smoke rise from Notre Dame Cathedral as it burns in Paris, April 15） (以下材料来自China Daily) 1. A major fire has engulfed the medieval cathedral of Notre-Dame in Paris, one of France's most famous landmarks. · engulf：吞没，吞噬 The flat is engulfed in flames. 2. Massive fire ravages cathedral. The task overnight is to bring the fire under control. The blaze is fully extinguished. · ravage：=destroy 毁坏，损坏 · bring /keep the fire under control 控制火情 · blaze=flame 火焰 · extinguish 熄灭，压制 · 灭火器：extinguisher · 灭火：extinguish the fire=put out the fire 美国加州火灾蔓延 (以下材料来自China Daily) 1. The Bay Area in California awoke Wednesday to a scene straight out of Mars. 本周三（9月9日），加州旧金山湾区景象恍若火星。 · a scene straight out of Mars 火星里的场景。 E.g : 我醒来，发现自己似乎置身于火星当中，周围一片红光。 ______________________________________________________________________________ I awoke, only to find myself in a scene straight out of Mars, with glow all around me. 2. Orange and even red skies blanketed San Francisco, Oakland and Berkeley, and ash rained down, with wildfires raging far in the distance. 橘色甚至红色的天空笼罩在旧金山、奥克兰和伯克利上空，灰烬四处飘散，野火在远处肆虐。 · blanket：覆盖，遮盖，笼罩=cover E.g：迷雾笼罩这树林，我彻底迷路了。 ______________________________________________________________________________ With a thick mist now blanketing the trees, I got thoroughly lost. · ash rained down 灰烬四处飘落 · rage：蔓延，猖獗 =sweep through The fire raged for more than two hours. 3. "When the smoke and ash get even thicker close to the wildfires, it can cut the sunlight out completely, making it look like the dead of night," CNN meteorologist Judson Jones said. 美国有线电视新闻网（CNN）气象学家贾德森·琼斯说：“当大火附近的烟雾和灰烬变得更浓时，就会遮天蔽日，白昼如夜。” 4. Residents turned on lights, looking into a rust-colored sky that made it look like nighttime. 居民们打开灯，窗外铁锈色的天空看起来就像夜晚。 形容大火的场面 · the smoke and ash get even thicker · it can cut the sunlight out completely, making it look like the dead of night · looking into a rust-colored sky that made it look like nighttime 澳大利亚山火肆虐 (以下材料来自China Daily) 1. The sky glows red as bushfires continue to rage in Mallacoota, Victoria, Australia, December 31, 2019. · glow 发光 E.g 树叶在秋日的晨曦中泛出红黄色的光。 ______________________________________________________________________________ The fallen leaves glowed red and yellow in the morning sunlight. 其他关于火灾的描述 1. Smoke still hung thick over the south-east of the country on Wednesday evening. 烟雾依然笼罩在上方。 2. The fire was contained =controlled 火被控制住了。 3. 失去控制 out of control. 4. The thick smoke choked us and stung（刺痛，灼痛）our eyes. 烟雾使我们窒息，刺痛我们的眼睛。 步骤二：原文品读 The event that stands out in Tom’s memory happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old. He was at home with his elder sister Jane. Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices. At first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below their apartment often became loud, but he soon realized this time it was different.       “Quick! Quick! Remove the motorcycles from the shop.” someone yelled. Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick cloud of smoke greeted him. The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.       Jane, who had been playing the violin in her room, hurried to the living room. They rushed out of the door and along the corridor（走廊）through the smoke. They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane stopped in her track. She turned around and headed back the way they came. Tom had no idea what she was doing, but he followed suit.         Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them, who they called Mary. Jane began banging on Mary’s door, but got no answer. As the smoke thickened around them, Tom could see many of their neighbors—some still in their pyjamas—running for safety. The thought of fear crossed his mind.      “She would have run for safety like everyone else!” Tom cried. However, Jane refused to give up. “I know Mary’s still inside.” She said she was familiar with Makcik’s daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping. She pounded the door. “Go downstairs. Go now! Go!” 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph1: Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Paragraph 2: Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. Step 1: 原文语言学习 1. 空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。 ______________________________________________________________________________ 2. Tom打开门去看下究竟，扑面而来的是一阵浓烈的烟雾。 ______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 他们冲出房间，在烟雾里沿着走廊跑。 ______________________________________________________________________________ 4. 烟雾在他们周围越来越浓烈。 ______________________________________________________________________________ 5. 跟着做，学做 ______________________________________________________________________________ 6. 害怕的想法划过脑海。 ______________________________________________________________________________ 7. 火势越来越大。 ______________________________________________________________________________ Step 2: 范文赏析 参考范文1 Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane’s hand tightly. By then, both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible. Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Tom burst out crying.      Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane’s mind. She told them Mary must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough, Mary was lying in bed, unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom’s joy was immense. 范文语言学习 1. 因为害怕，某人如同钉在地上。 ______________________________________________________________________________ Frozen with fear, sb stood rooted to the spot. 2. 咳嗽，眼睛刺痛 ______________________________________________________________________________ sb were coughing and the eyes were stung 3. 捂住鼻子，挡住呛人的烟雾。 ______________________________________________________________________________ Sb shielded (covered) one’s nose from the choking smoke. 4. 不省人事，昏迷 ______________________________________________________________________________ unconscious 5. 恢复过来，醒过来 ______________________________________________________________________________ come to oneself. 参考范文2   Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. It sounded like a wild animal was roaring at them. Within seconds the corridor was full of choking smoke. It stung their eyes and left them gasping for breath. At this point, Tom began to panic, for he could barely make out his sister through the smoke. Coughing and rubbing his eyes, he crouched down beside her, not knowing what to do. Totally overwhelmed by fear, he was close to tears. But Jane kept pounding on the door and shouted, “Quick! Open the door! The flat is on fire...”     Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help. Together they pounded at the door with their fists. After trying in vain to wake up the old lady, they managed to break it down. In an instant, Jane and Tom rushed in, followed by their neighbors, only to find Makcik lying unconscious in bed. In record time, they carried her out, headed towards the stairway, and then dashed downstairs. What a narrow escape! When the fire fighters come to their rescue, all of them breathed a sigh of relief. What made Tom proud was that a few days later, his elder sister was given an award for her bravery and quick action. 范文语言学习 1. 大火听起来如同野兽一样，对他们咆哮。 ______________________________________________________________________________ It sounded like a wild animal was roaring at them. 2. 充满的了呛人的烟雾 ______________________________________________________________________________ be full of choking smoke 3. 烟雾刺痛双眼，他们只能大口喘气。 ______________________________________________________________________________ The smoke stung their eyes and left them gasping for breath 4. 揉眼睛 ______________________________________________________________________________ rub one’s eyes 5. 蹲下来 ______________________________________________________________________________ crouch down 6. 试着做某事失败了 ______________________________________________________________________________ sb try in vain to do sth / sb try to sth but in vain 步骤三：课后练习 【1】 At first, Surrell didn't see the black smoke or flames shooting from the windows of his neighbors' home. He and his wife were just having a dinner in their own house in Allentown, Pennsylvania, when they heard someone screaming, “The house is on fire!” He went to investigate. That's when he saw two women and a girl crazily at a loss on their porch (走廊). It was his neighbor's house. “The baby's inside there!” one of the women cried. Though the fire department had been called, Surrell, then 64, instinctively(本能地) ran inside. “The baby” was 8-year-old Tiara Roberts, who always called him Uncle Surrell. She was the woman's granddaughter and a playmate of Surrell's three youngest kids, 8, 10, and 12. The other two on the porch were Tiara's aunt and cousin. Entering the burning house was like running into “a bucket of black paint”. The thick smoke caused Surrell to walk blindly around, burned his eyes, and made it impossible for him to breathe. He felt his throat and lungs burned, and every blink stung(蛰) his eyes. The conditions would have been very dangerous for anyone, but for Surrell, who has chronic obstructive pulmonary disease(慢性阻塞性肺病) and was in hospital just half a year ago, they were life-risking. After a few minutes in the smoke-filled house searching but in vain, he ran outside to catch his breath. “Where is Tiara?” he asked desperately.  “The second floor,” her aunt shouted back. Surrell knew he couldn't hold his breath for long. So he uttered a little prayer, “Well, God, this is it. You got to help me, because I'm not coming out without that little girl.” 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右； 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Taking a deep health, he went in a second time. Paragraph 2: Surrell woke up in the hospital a couple of days later.  Step 1: 原文语言学习 1. 黑色的烟雾和火焰从窗户里喷射出来。 ______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 迷茫，不知所措。 ______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 拨打火警电话。 ______________________________________________________________________________ 4. 浓密的烟雾使得Surrell只能瞎走，灼痛他的眼睛，使他不能呼吸。 ______________________________________________________________________________ 5. 他感到喉咙和肺都烧灼了，每一个眨眼都刺痛眼睛。 ______________________________________________________________________________ Step 2: 续写练习（1） Taking a deep health, he went in a second time. Surrell woke up in the hospital a couple of days later.  Step 3: 参考范文 参考答案1： Paragraph 1: Taking a deep breath, he went in a second time. The house was full of heavy smoke. The smoke made it impossible for him to see the surroundings and he just felt his way, calling Tiara his lovely girl repeatedly. “Tiara, where are you?” he cried desperately. But all he could hear was the popping of burning wood. Just at moment, a soft but hopeful voice came. “Uncle, Surrell, I'm in my bedroom.” Without thinking twice, he dashed towards the bedroom, crashed into the door, pulled the little girl up and carried her outside. That was the last thing he remembered. Paragraph 2: Surrell woke up in the hospital a couple of days later. As he woke up, what he first cared about was Tiara's safety. Hearing Tiara was all right, he smiled, coughing and nodding. Having suffered severe burns, he spent another two weeks in the hospital. Tiara recovered soon and was released from the hospital after two days. She and her grandmother went to visit Surrell. Seeing Surrell, Tiara's grandmother couldn't hold back her tears of gratitude. “Thank you, Surrell. Without your timely rescue, my granddaughter would have died in the fire.” She said, holding his hand tightly. “It's a small price to pay and it's my pleasure to do that. Tiaras is my angel.” Surrell held her hand, saying in a hoarse voice.  参考答案2： Paragraph 1: Taking a deep breath, he went in a second time. The darkness was overwhelming. He ran blindly in the blackness, and finally made it to the second floor, where he was met by intense heat. He was already out of breath. “Baby girl, where are you?” he cried desperately. All he could hear was the popping of burning wood. Then a soft but distinct moan emerged. He quickly crawled toward the sound. Finally, he touched something. A shoe, then an ankle. He pulled Tiara toward him and hugged her tight and said, “Uncle's got you.” The last thing he remembered, he was outside. Paragraph 2: Surrell woke up in the hospital a couple of days later. Severe burns suffered and chronic obstructive pulmonary worsened, he spent another two weeks in the hospital. Tiara recovered soon and was released from the hospital after two days. She went to visit Surrell every day, singing songs and telling stories she learned from school. “Thank you for saving my life, my dear uncle.” Tiara said in a sweet voice, kissing him on the cheek. “It's a small price to pay,” Surrell said in a hoarse voice, “but I'd do it again in a heartbeat. 【2】 Steve was the most amazing person in all of Minneapolis, and he was my cousin. By the age of 19, Steve was a star baseball player at the University of Minnesota. I wanted to be exactly like him. So when Steve asked me to go with him on a spring fishing trip in northern Minnesota, I was excited! After planning the trip, we gathered clothes and supplies, and began our great adventure. We reached the Superior National Forest in northern Minnesota by early evening. On our way to the campsite, Steve pointed to a small house faraway in one of the mountains, saying that it was the ranger station (护林站) where the forester worked. Finally, after a long walk, we reached the campsite and set up the camp as the sun was setting. Steve knew all the tricks of an experienced wilderness camper. After we gathered enough wood from the forest, he started the campfire using only stone and steel — no matches. For supper we feasted on freeze-dried beef, wild rice and pea soup. I ate greedily after all that work. Tired enough, we climbed into our sleeping bags early and talked about our plans for fishing the next day. We were still talking quietly when a sudden north wind picked up; the temperature dropped and it began to snow. Steve found a way to increase the temperature inside the tent. He dragged a log (原木) from the forest to the opposite side of the campfire. Then he wrapped (包裹) aluminum foil (铝箔) around the log. The heat from the fire reflected off the foil and into the tent. Soon images of lake fish were filling my dreams. The snow had stopped, but sometime later a powerful wind must have kicked up the flames of our dying fire. I was abruptly awakened by Steve. Our tent was on fire. Frightened, I ran out of the tent immediately. The tent collapsed (倒塌) with Steve inside. Without any thought of endangering myself, I reached into the burning tent and pulled him to the icy lake. Fortunately, we were not seriously hurt. 注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: Later, as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm, we considered our difficult situation.                                                                                               Paragraph 2: Suddenly, we heard a noise in the forest. Step 1: 原文语言学习 1. 我们收拾好衣物、物品，就开始了我们的冒险。 2. 太阳落山 3. 有经验的野外露营者。 4. 饱餐，尽情地吃，大快朵颐 5. 北风骤起，温度下降，开始下雪了。 6. 强风点燃了火焰。 7. 被某人突然叫醒 Step 2: 续写练习（2） Later, as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm, we considered our difficult situation. Suddenly, we heard a noise in the forest. Step 3: 参考范文 Paragraph 1: Later, as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm, we considered our difficult situation. Our campsite was in the deep of the forest, really far away from the highway. We were in the middle of nowhere, wearing only underwear, with our supplies burnt into ashes, including our cellphones. Even Steve was unsure what to do next. The only thing we could do was just sitting in the cold air and wondering how to get out of the forest. Paragraph 2: Suddenly, we heard a noise in the forest. Anxiously we listened and stared into the darkness. A jeep appeared. A forester had spotted the light from the fire and had come to have a check. We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to the ranger station, where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents. Steve and I had many more camping adventures from then on, but it was on this trip that Steve began to treat me more like a friend and equal, rather than a younger cousin. Our friendship continues to this day. 3、 任务学习 Task 1: Fill in the blank to get the main idea of the passage One morning, an apartment was ___________. An old lady Mary____________________ in the house. A girl,Jane and her brother,Tom wanted to______________________.But they _______________the door.So they __________________ from the neighbors.Finally,the old lady __________________. Task2: Choose the theme of the passage A. teamwork and unity(团结) B. honesty and loyalty(忠诚) C. hardwork and perseverance(坚持不懈) D. love and kindness E. the preciousness(珍贵) of life Task 3: What kind of person do you think the characters are? (1).Jane_______________________(2)Tom____________________ (3). Mary______________________ Task 4: Choose which one is more reasonable?Why? Group 1 About Tom (1).Tom became more worried. He shouted to his sister, “ come on! come on! we should get out of here.” But his sister didn't want to give up. (伍亿） (2). .... “Let's bang on the door heavily to wake the lady in the house.” Tom said with a trembling voice. 感悟1：__________________________________________________________________ Group 2 About Mary (3). They dashed into the door and found Mary lying on the bed. she seemed to lose consciousness.(胡琴） (4).They saw Mary inside and still was sleeping. But she didn't seem awake. 感悟2：__________________________________________________________________ Group 3 (5) .They gathered together to discuss how to rescue the lady. A strong man came into their sight. “I can use my ability to help her.” he said firmly. Everyone respected his bravery.He broke the door with his back and rushed into the room. Other adults called the hospital at the same time. Finally the lady was rescued successfully. She recovered soon. 感悟3：_____________________________________________________________________ Task 5 ：Choose which one is more reasonable？ 衔接一： （1）.Teamwork is pretty important in our daily life and it can also make a significant difference to society.(熊蔚然） （2）.Thanks to them, the lady was saved from the fire. And they were honored for their bravery and kindness.（马郑悦） （3）.Sticking to your ideas and working with people together, everything can be done perfectly.(雷雨晴） （4）.A few days later, their videos and photos were posted online. Many citizens praised them as true heroes.(龚小梅） 感悟4：全文结尾：_____________________________________________________: 衔接二： （1）.Through continuous trying,Jane failed. But she didn't want to see the elderly being in danger with nobody saving her.(魏婷婷） （2）.They quickly ran out and shouted for help in no time.(熊蔚然） （3）. Tom decided to ask neighbors for help.(张世慧） （4）. “uncle, please help us. Mary was still in.” Jane said. The man agreed and started hitting the door.(龚小梅） 感悟5：第一段尾：____________________________________________________________ 衔接三： （1）.He cried nervously, but he had no idea. So he only followed his sister and pounded the door together.(魏婷婷） （2）. The flames were nearly dancing up the stairs. Tom shouted in a nervous voice, “let's go downstairs.”(马郑悦） （3）. He was afraid and said, “come on!We will be surrounded by the flame.” 感悟6：第一段首:_____________________________________________________________ 衔接四： （1）.They helped Jane to bang on the door. After a while, they broke the door. They went into the room and one of them brought Mary out from the room. After that they took Mary to the hospital. （2）.Finally, they made it and broke into the house. Smoke had filled the room. Jane dashed into the house immediately and found Mary was unconscious.(马郑悦） （3）.They tried hard to beat the door. Luckily, the door was finally opened with their help. Smoke had filled the room and it was hard to see. Jane and Tom searched the room carefully, only to find the poor lady was lying on the bed. She was quickly sent to the hospital. (雷雨晴） 感悟7：第二段首:_____________________________________________________________ Task 6. Appreciate and recite the sample version: With two legs shivering terribly, he stood rooted to the spot. Terrified by the scene, he begged his sister but received no reply. Seeing Jane’s anxious but determined look, he realized he couldn’t persuade her into changing her mind. So he wiped the tears and decided to join her. They backed off several steps, gathered all their strength, and then raised one leg to kick the door heavily. Despite countless attempts, the door was still reluctant to open. Flames shooting up, heavy smoke rolling, and the burning windows crackling, Jane recognized that they had no alternative but to turn to others for help. With their joint efforts, the door was forced open. Immediately Jane charged into the room ,searching every room and screaming, only to find that the poor lady lying in bed unconscious. Without any delay she was carried downstairs and rushed to hospital. To everyone’s relief, she was saved. When the neighbors around applauded for their heroic deed, the two siblings just gazed at each other’s dusty face, giggling and saying proudly, “ Mary is our lovely neighbor. We have just done what we can do.” ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$