专题07 书面表达题型【考题猜想】-2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期期末考点大串讲（2024冀教版）

命学科网 考点大串讲 WW.ZXXK.COM 通教材，过考点，练好题 七年级上期期末考点大串讲(2024翼教版) 专题07书面表达 (原卷版) 1.亲爱的同学，你已经成为一名七年级的新生，开启了新的人生旅程。在这里，你结识新朋友、学 习新课程、参加丰富多彩的活动。请根据下列提示，以“My new school life”为题，选择或自拟三个方面介 绍一下你的初中生活。 Friends Teachers My new school life Lessons Activities 或自拟) 要求： 1.文中不得提及真实校名、人名等信息。 2.内容全面，语言通顺，条理清晰。 3.词数90词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My new school life I like my new school life.Let me tell you something about it. 2.请你介绍一种你最喜欢的颜色，并描述这种颜色会给你带来什么感觉。 要求： 1.条理清晰，语义连贯，可适当发挥： 1 ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 而学科网 考点大串讲 VWW.ZXXK.COM 通教材，过考点，练好题 2.80词左右。 3.两个多月以来，同学们已经慢慢适应了初中的学习与生活。校园给你留下了哪些美好印象？你和 同学相处得如何？你养成什么好习惯，又打算改掉什么坏习惯呢？请以“My school life'”为题，介绍一下你 目前的情况和将来的打算吧！ 要求： 1.语句通顺，表达完整，意思连贯； 2.涵盖所有问题，可以适当增加细节信息： 3.文中不得提及真实校名，人名等信息： 4.书写工整，不少于100个词，开头已给出，不计入词数。 My school life am happy to become member of our school. 4.假如你是李华，进入初中你结交了来自美国的笔友Mk,请你根据提示向大家介绍一下他。并且请 他给我们一些学习英语的好建议。 提示： 1.What's his favourite colour? 2.What does he look like? 3.What are his hobbies? 4.How can we learn English well'?(至少两点) 2 ©⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 命学科网 考点大串讲 WWW.ZXXK.CO网 通教材，过考点，练好题 tall,handsome,read books,play sports,watch English movies,listen to English songs,write emails... 要求： 1.包含所给提示的全部要点，提示词可选用，可适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校。 3.词数60词左右。 My Best Friend This is my friend Mike. He from America 5.假如你是Tom,来自南京的Daniel想认识你作为他的笔友，他写了一封信给你，内容如下。请你 写一封回信给他。（回信中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。回信须包含所有内容要点，可以适当发挥。 字数70词左右。) Dear Tom. I am Daniel from Nanjing.I am 14 years old and I like basketball.Can you tell me anything about yourself and your hobbies? I am in a new school now.I like it.What is your school like?What about your school days? Yours, Daniel 你的回信： Dear Daniel. Thank you for your letter. 3 ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 而学科网 考点大串讲 VWW.ZXXK.COM 通教材，过考点，练好题 Yours, Tom 6.作为初一新生，同学们已经熟悉了自己的学校和校园生活。阳光中学正在举办以“ly School Life”为题的演讲比赛，假如你是Simon,也想参加此次比赛，请根据下列要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍 自己的校园生活。 What's in your school?(classroom building,playground,...) What subject do you like best? What do you often do after class? … 注意事项： 1.80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2包含提示信息内容并适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意： 3.不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 My School Life Hello, everyone! My name is Simon. 7.假如你是Mary,请你根据表格的内容简单介绍你的好朋友李梅。60词左右。 English Joan Favorite food Vegetables and fruit name country China Favorite sport tennis Age 14 Hobby Play the guitar Class Class 6,Grade 7 … 要求：1.语言流畅，条理清晰， 字迹工整； 2.短文必须包括表格中的全部内容，可适当发挥： 3.不少于60词。 Hello！ My name is Mary. ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 命学科网 考点大串讲 WW.ZXXK.COM 通教材，过考点，练好题 8.假如你是我校七年级1班的李华，被选为我校七年级学生代表，接待来自英国赛德伯学校交流师 生的来访。请根据下列表格中的内容提示，用英文向他们介绍你自己和你的学校生活。 自我介绍 来自七(1)班，爱好（举一例并说明理由） 学校介绍 有30个班。又大又漂亮。（自主发挥一点） 老师和同 各自主发挥一点 学 学校活动 .举一例 你的感受 要求：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称： 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，可适当发挥； 3.词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Hello,everyone. Welcome to our school.My name is Li Hua. 9.假设你是Ay,请你根据下面表格中的提示信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的家庭成员。 My Family Amy 13 years old,a middle school student ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 命学科网 考点大串讲 WW.ZXXK.COM 通教材，过考点，练好题 father a doctor,hospital,busy mother an English teacher,middle school sister 3 years On weekends park,walk,fly kites 要求：1.必须包括表格中所有的提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.词数60左右。 lO.家人是生命中最温暖的存在，家庭是永远的心灵港湾。英语周报将举办以“My Happy Family"” 为主题的征文比赛。假设你是Jack,请你根据图片提示，用英语写一篇短文，向英语周报投稿，介绍你的 家庭成员，并表达对家人的爱。 参考信息： age personality ◇性格 My Happy Family appearance 外貌 hobby 要求： 1.根据图片提示，至少介绍2-3个家人的详细信息，要有适当的结尾； 2.卷面整洁，书写工整，标点符号使用正确： 3.文章中不能出现真实姓名、学校等个人信息： 4.80-120词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello,everyone!My name's Jack.I live in a happy family.Here is a photo of my family.I'm the little boy with short hair,and I like reading books.My grandma is on the left.She is 6 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 命学科网 考点大串讲 WW.ZXXK.COM 通教材，过考点，练好题 11.近期有一篇微博热搜引人瞩目。重庆龙洞镇的7岁女孩傅鑫怡在父亲遭遇车祸后非常积极乐观， 主动承担起照顾瘫痪父亲的责任，让妈妈安心外出打工赚钱。终于经过300多天，因车祸而深度昏迷的父 亲渐渐醒来并逐步好转，她也被评为“感动重庆年度人物”。我校也将进行“美德少年(Virtue Teenager)”的评选。如果你是推荐人，你想推荐你们班的李伟。请你根据所给的提示内容介绍李伟的情 况，并谈谈你的推荐理由。 Age 13 years old Appearance medium height;glasses Personal qualities friendly;caring;be willing to help others Hobbies playing the piano;swimming Time:every Sunday Main story Place:the old people's home Activities:telling stories,doing some cleaning Your opinions(看法) … 写作要求： 1.必须包括所有的提示内容，语句通顺、连贯： 2.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入字数）； 3.不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.条理清楚，语句通畅，意义连贯，书写规范。 Li Wei is one of the most popular students in our class.I would like to recommend him as the Virtue Teenager. ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6学科网 考点大串讲 WW.ZXXK.COM 通教材，过考点，练好题 I2.假如你是校报《阳光周刊》(Sunshine Weekly)的一员，你的一位同学在与同学相处过程中产生 了困惑。请你给她写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。 Dear editor, I had an argument with my best friend last week and we haven't talked with each other for days.I think I am still angry with her.How can she say such rude words to me?I will lose my best friend,right?What can I do? Dear May, can understand how you feel. Sunshine Weekly 13.我们的世界因各种生物而丰富多彩，妙趣横生。它们是我们亲爱的朋友，也是我们守护的珍宝。 国宝大熊猫“花花”是熊猫届的顶流女明星，深受人们的喜爱。请依据以下提示内容，写一篇介绍大熊猫 “花花”的英文稿。 姓名：花花(Huahua) 年龄：3 出生地：四川成都 食物：竹子(bamboo)、以蔬菜、水果 性格：聪明、友好 要求： 1.字数80左右，题目已给出，不计入总字数： 8 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 命学科网 考点大串讲 VWW.ZXXK.COM 通教材，过考点，练好题 2.依据表格内容，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯： 3.·文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、学校等内容。 14.每年的10月4日为世界动物日，动物是人类的朋友。请根据以下提示写一篇不少于70词的短文 介绍你最喜欢的动物，可适当拓展。 提示： (1)Say something about your favourite animal. (2)Why should we protect the animal? (3)How can we protect the animal? 6原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 9 命学科网 考点大串讲 WW.ZXXK.COM 通教材，过考点，练好题 15.根据以下提示要点，写一篇关于你的同学May的生活方式的文章，不少于60词，且语句通畅。 1)13岁，是班上的尖子生，但不健康： 2)经常吃汉堡包：不喜欢吃蔬菜和水果： 3)在两餐之间，她吃许多甜的零食；但很少锻炼： 4)想成为一个舞蹈家，所以要改变自已的生活方式： 5)现在每天跑步：并且不再吃甜的零食。 l6.请以“My favourite shopping mall''为题，写一篇70词左右的英语短文。 要点： 1.你通常乘坐2路公共汽车去那里： 2沿着新华街一直走，在第二个交通信号灯处左拐，它在银行对面： 3在里面你可以买到自己喜欢的各种东西，还能看电影。 My favourite shopping mall 17.假如你是张伟，刚刚度过了一个愉快的暑假，请根据以下信息给你的美国笔友Mik写一封信， 并说说你在新学期有哪些计划打算。 写作要点： 1.很开心度过了一个愉快的暑假。 2.暑假和父母去了新疆。 (1)爬了天山，骑了骡子 1 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 0 七年级上期期末考点大串讲（2024冀教版） 专题07 书面表达 （解析版） 1．亲爱的同学，你已经成为一名七年级的新生，开启了新的人生旅程。在这里，你结识新朋友、学习新课程、参加丰富多彩的活动。请根据下列提示，以“My new school life”为题，选择或自拟三个方面介绍一下你的初中生活。 要求： 1.文中不得提及真实校名、人名等信息。 2.内容全面，语言通顺，条理清晰。 3.词数90词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My new school life I like my new school life. Let me tell you something about it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My new school life I like my new school life. Let me tell you something about it. I have a new friend named Mike in my new school. He wears a pair of glasses. He is good at playing basketball, so we often play basketball together after class. We are good friends now. We have six lessons every day. I like geography best because it’s very interesting. I can learn a lot from it. I hope to travel around the world in the future. After class, we have many activities, such as playing basketball and drawing pictures. We also have a “class farm”. We water the plants there. This helps us learn how to take care of them and about teamwork. My school life is very interesting. I like my new school life very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态是“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山。引出下文具体介绍学校生活。（开头已给出） 第二步，具体阐述。根据提示，从朋友、老师、课程、活动等方面中任选三个方面展开介绍。 第三步，书写结语。总结学校生活，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① wear a pair of glasses 戴眼镜 ② be good at doing sth. 擅长做某事 ③ travel around the world 环游世界 ④ such as 比如 ⑤ take care of 照顾 [高分句型] ① I have a new friend named Mike in my new school.（named过去分词作后置定语） ② I like geography best because it’s very interesting.（because引导原因状语从句） 2．请你介绍一种你最喜欢的颜色，并描述这种颜色会给你带来什么感觉。 要求： 1. 条理清晰，语义连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： Green is my favorite color. When I look at green, I feel fresh and relaxed. It also brings me hope and makes me full of energy. So in my daily life, I like wearing green clothes and eating green vegetables. Besides, it’s the color of life, like grass and trees in spring. In art lessons, I love to use green to paint pictures of forests and parks. I wish the world could be a greener place to live. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：围绕一种颜色进行写作，表达自己的喜爱，以及带给自己的感觉。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己最喜欢的颜色是绿色； 第二步，介绍绿色带给自己的感受； 第三步，将绿色与大自然联系，表达愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①make me full of energy使我充满活力 ②in my daily life在日常生活中 ③a greener place to live更环保的居住之地 [高分句型] When I look at green, I feel fresh and relaxed. (when引导时间状语从句) 3．两个多月以来，同学们已经慢慢适应了初中的学习与生活。校园给你留下了哪些美好印象？你和同学相处得如何？你养成什么好习惯，又打算改掉什么坏习惯呢？请以“My school life”为题，介绍一下你目前的情况和将来的打算吧！ 要求： 1. 语句通顺，表达完整，意思连贯； 2. 涵盖所有问题，可以适当增加细节信息； 3. 文中不得提及真实校名，人名等信息； 4. 书写工整，不少于100个词，开头已给出，不计入词数。 My school life I am happy to become a member of our school.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】                                                                        My school life     I am happy to become a member of our school. My school life is very exciting. Our school has many good teachers and lovely students. We can read in the library. After school, we can play football in the sports field.     I get along well with my classmates. My best friend is John. He is good at math and often helps me.       To be a good middle school student, I will develop good habits of living and learning. I will eat healthy food and exercise more. Also, I will listen to the teachers carefully and finish homework on time. I will obey the school rules. What’s more, I will spend less time on computer games because I think it is bad for my health. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示信息介绍自己的校园生活，以及和同学相处情况，有哪些好习惯，又打算改掉哪些坏习惯，作答可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍校园生活； 第二步，介绍和同学相处情况； 第三步，介绍自己准备养成什么好习惯，改掉什么坏习惯。 [亮点词汇] ①play football踢足球 ②get along well with...与……相处融洽 ③on time准时 ④be bad for对……有坏处 [高分句型] ①To be a good middle school student, I will develop good habits of living and learning. (不定式作目的状语) ②I will spend less time on computer games because I think it is bad for my health. (because引导的原因状语从句) 4．假如你是李华，进入初中你结交了来自美国的笔友Mike，请你根据提示向大家介绍一下他。并且请他给我们一些学习英语的好建议。 提示： 1. What’s his favourite colour? 2. What does he look like? 3. What are his hobbies? 4. How can we learn English well? (至少两点) 提示词：tall，handsome，read books，play sports，watch English movies，listen to English songs，write emails... 要求： 1.包含所给提示的全部要点，提示词可选用，可适当发挥。 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校。 3.词数60词左右。 My Best Friend This is my friend Mike. He is from America. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Best Friend This is my friend Mike. He is from America. His favourite colour is blue. Mike is tall and handsome with short brown hair and bright eyes. He enjoys reading books and playing sports. To improve our English, Mike suggests watching English movies and listening to English songs. He also recommends writing emails to practice our writing. These methods will help us learn English well. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文为一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：提示问题已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍Mike的个人信息，包括喜欢的颜色及外貌； 第二步，介绍Mike的爱好； 第三步，介绍Mike关于学习英语的建议。 [亮点词汇] recommend doing sth建议做某事 [高分句型] To improve our English, Mike suggests watching English movies and listening to English songs.（动词不定式作目的状语） 5．假如你是Tom，来自南京的Daniel想认识你作为他的笔友，他写了一封信给你，内容如下。请你写一封回信给他。(回信中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。回信须包含所有内容要点，可以适当发挥。字数70词左右。) Dear Tom, I am Daniel from Nanjing. I am 14 years old and I like basketball. Can you tell me anything about yourself and your hobbies? I am in a new school now. I like it. What is your school like? What about your school days? Yours, Daniel 你的回信： Dear Daniel, Thank you for your letter. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tom 【满分优秀范文】： Dear Daniel, Thank you for your letter. I am happy to be your pen friend. I am 14 years old too. I also like playing basketball. I think it is very interesting. I go to school from Monday to Friday. And I have different kinds of subjects at school. I like my school very much. It is big and beautiful. I have many friends at school. They are very nice. I hope you can come to my school one day. Yours, Tom 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：结合对方的来信内容进行回复，不能遗漏要点信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤]   第一步，点明主题。感谢对方的来信，并表示愿意成为对方的笔友； 第二步，具体阐述内容。介绍自己的年龄、业余爱好、学校信息等； 第三步，书写结语。希望对方有一天能来自己的学校。 [亮点词汇]   ①like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ②from...to...从……到…… ③different kinds of不同种类的 ④very much很，非常 [高分句型]   ①I also like playing basketball.（动名词作宾语） ②I hope you can come to my school one day.（hope后接省略引导词that的宾语从句） 6．作为初一新生，同学们已经熟悉了自己的学校和校园生活。阳光中学正在举办以“My School Life” 为题的演讲比赛，假如你是Simon，也想参加此次比赛，请根据下列要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的校园生活。 What’s in your school? (classroom building, playground, ...) What subject do you like best? What do you often do after class? ... 注意事项： 1.80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.包含提示信息内容并适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 3.不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。 My School Life Hello, everyone! My name is Simon. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My School Life Hello, everyone! My name is Simon. Our school is big and really nice. We have two classroom buildings and a large playground. There is a music room, an art room and two computer rooms in the buildings. Of all the subjects, I like English and Chinese best. I learn a lot about the world in the classes. After class, I often do sports. I’m a member of the Football Club. Our school has different kinds of clubs. We can join our favourite clubs and make friends with others. Our school is a perfect place for us to study. I feel very happy at school. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出； 第二步，介绍学校的情况，学习的学科以及课后活动； 第三步，表达对学校的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ①like…best最喜欢 ②do sports做运动 ③kinds of各种各样的 ④make friends with和……交朋友 [高分句型] There is a music room, an art room and two computer rooms in the buildings. （there be句型） 7．假如你是Mary，请你根据表格的内容简单介绍你的好朋友李梅。60词左右。 English name Joan Favorite food Vegetables and fruit country China Favorite sport tennis Age 14 Hobby Play the guitar Class Class 6, Grade 7 … 要求：1. 语言流畅，条理清晰，字迹工整； 2. 短文必须包括表格中的全部内容，可适当发挥； 3. 不少于 60词。 Hello! My name is Mary. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Hello, my name is Mary. Li Mei is my good friend. Now let me tell you something about her. She is a cute girl from China. Her English name is Joan. She is a student and she is 14 years old now. She is in No. 1 Middle School. She is in Class 6, Grade 7. Her favourite colour is green. She likes eating fruit, carrots and tomatoes very much . She thinks they are healthy food. Her favourite sport is tennis. She often plays it with her classmates after school. She also likes playing the guitar in the school band because it is interesting and easy for her. This is my friend Li Mei. Would you like to make friends with her? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。要介绍好朋友李梅； 第二步，分别从好友的名字，国籍，学校，班级，年龄和爱好等方面去叙述。 [亮点词汇] ①favourite colour最爱的颜色 ②healthy food健康的食物 [高分句型] ①She also likes playing the guitar in the school band because it is interesting and easy for her.（“because”引导原因状语从句） 8．假如你是我校七年级1班的李华，被选为我校七年级学生代表，接待来自英国赛德伯学校交流师生的来访。请根据下列表格中的内容提示，用英文向他们介绍你自己和你的学校生活。 自我介绍 来自七(1)班，爱好（举一例并说明理由） 学校介绍 有30个班。又大又漂亮。（自主发挥一点） 老师和同学 各自主发挥一点 学校活动 ……举一例 你的感受 …… 要求：1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，可适当发挥； 3. 词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone. Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Hello, everyone.   Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua. I study in Class 1, Grade 7. I like playing basketball because it helps me stay healthy and teaches me teamwork. Our school has 30 classes and the school is both large and beautiful. There are many green trees and flowers in the school. The teachers here are kind and my classmates are friendly. There are all kinds of clubs in our school. Doing activities after class makes me very happy. My school life is wonderful. I always have a good time here. 【详解】[总体分析] ②题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍个人信息； 第二步：介绍学校信息及老师同学； 第三步：阐述你的感想。 [亮点词汇] ①like doing sth喜欢做某事 ②have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①I like playing basketball because it helps me stay healthy and teaches me teamwork. (because引导原因状语从句) ①There are many green trees and flowers in the school.（There be 句型） 9．假设你是Amy，请你根据下面表格中的提示信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的家庭成员。 My Family Amy 13 years old, a middle school student father a doctor, hospital, busy mother an English teacher, middle school sister 3 years On weekends park, walk, fly kites 要求：1. 必须包括表格中所有的提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 词数60左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】范文： My Family Hello! My name is Amy. I’m 13 years old and I’m a middle school student. There are four people in my family. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital and he is very busy. My mother is an English teacher in a middle school. She is very kind and her students all like her. I have a sister. She is only 3 years old. She is very lovely. On weekends, we often go to the park. We walk and fly kites there. We always have a good time. I love my family very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍Amy的个人信息； 第二步，介绍她的家庭成员情况； 第三步，最后介绍周末活动。 [亮点词汇] ① on weekends在周末 ② fly kites放风筝 ③ have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] He works in a hospital and he is very busy. （and并列句） 10．家人是生命中最温暖的存在，家庭是永远的心灵港湾。英语周报将举办以“My Happy Family”为主题的征文比赛。假设你是Jack，请你根据图片提示，用英语写一篇短文，向英语周报投稿，介绍你的家庭成员，并表达对家人的爱。 参考信息： 要求： 1. 根据图片提示，至少介绍2-3个家人的详细信息，要有适当的结尾； 2. 卷面整洁，书写工整，标点符号使用正确； 3. 文章中不能出现真实姓名、学校等个人信息： 4. 80-120词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! My name’s Jack. I live in a happy family. Here is a photo of my family. I’m the little boy with short hair, and I like reading books. My grandma is on the left. She is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Hello, everyone! My name’s Jack. I live in a happy family. Here is a photo of my family. I’m the little boy with short hair, and I like reading books. My grandma is on the left. She is 60 years old and has short hair. She can play the erhu well. My grandpa is on the right. He is 62 years old. He likes playing weiqi and he has short hair, too. In the middle of the photo, you can see my parents. They are both 38 years old. My dad is tall, and he likes fishing. My mom is slim, and she likes planting flowers. My family are very kind and friendly. We have a cute cat, too. Its name is Mimi. We are a happy family. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章开头，介绍家庭照； 第二步，根据题干图片和思维导图中的要点，详细介绍家人的相关信息； 第三步，点评家人，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①on the right在右边 ②in the middle of在……的中间 [高分句型] ①He likes playing weiqi and he has short hair, too.（and表并列） 11．近期有一篇微博热搜引人瞩目。重庆龙洞镇的7岁女孩傅鑫怡在父亲遭遇车祸后非常积极乐观，主动承担起照顾瘫痪父亲的责任，让妈妈安心外出打工赚钱。终于经过300多天，因车祸而深度昏迷的父亲渐渐醒来并逐步好转，她也被评为“感动重庆年度人物”。我校也将进行“美德少年（Virtue Teenager）”的评选。如果你是推荐人，你想推荐你们班的李伟。请你根据所给的提示内容介绍李伟的情况，并谈谈你的推荐理由。 Age 13 years old Appearance medium height; glasses Personal qualities friendly; caring; be willing to help others Hobbies playing the piano; swimming Main story Time: every Sunday Place: the old people’s home Activities: telling stories, doing some cleaning Your opinions（看法） …… 写作要求： 1. 必须包括所有的提示内容，语句通顺、连贯； 2. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入字数）； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通畅，意义连贯，书写规范。 Li Wei is one of the most popular students in our class. I would like to recommend him as the Virtue Teenager. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： Li Wei is one of the most popular students in our class. I would like to recommend him as the Virtue Teenager. Li Wei is 13 years old and of medium height. He wears glasses and is known for being friendly and caring. He is always willing to help others. His hobbies include playing the piano and swimming. Every Sunday, Li Wei visits the old people’s home where he tells stories to the old people and helps with cleaning. Most people speak highly of him. I believe Li Wei deserves this recognition because of his dedication to helping others and his positive influence on our community. Hope you have a consideration. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材: 本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态: 时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示: 写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，表明写作目的； 第二步，介绍李伟的情况，并阐述推荐他的理由； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to想要 ②of medium height中等身高 ③be known for因……而众所周知 ④be willing to do愿意做某事 [高分句型] ①Every Sunday, Li Wei visits the old people’s home where he tells stories to the old people and helps with cleaning. (定语从句) ②I believe Li Wei deserves this recognition because of his dedication to helping others and his positive influence on our community. (宾语从句) 12．假如你是校报《阳光周刊》(Sunshine Weekly) 的一员，你的一位同学在与同学相处过程中产生了困惑。请你给她写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。 Dear editor, I had an argument with my best friend last week and we haven’t talked with each other for days. I think I am still angry with her. How can she say such rude words to me? I will lose my best friend, right? What can I do? Dear May, I can understand how you feel. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sunshine Weekly 【满分优秀范文】 Dear May, I can understand how you feel. It’s normal to feel mad, but people make mistakes sometimes. Maybe she didn’t mean to say those bad words. Here are some ideas to help you. Take a little time. Give yourself and her some space. Think about what happened and how you feel. Talk nicely. When you’re ready, find a quiet place to talk. Use “I” words like “I felt sad” instead of saying “You did this”. Let her tell her side of the story. Be nice and try to understand.    Say sorry. If you did something wrong, tell her you’re sorry. It helps fix the fight. Remember all the fun you had together. You care about each other a lot.   I hope these help. Keep trying, and you’ll be friends again soon! Best wishes. Sunshine Weekly 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回信； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括来信提到的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，安慰对方，引出话题：提供一些建议； 第二步，针对来信提到的问题，给出一些建议； 第三步，书写总结，表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①instead of 代替 ②care about 关心，在意 [高分句型] ①When you’re ready, find a quiet place to talk. (when引导时间状语从句) ②If you did something wrong, tell her you’re sorry. (if引导条件状语从句) 13．我们的世界因各种生物而丰富多彩，妙趣横生。它们是我们亲爱的朋友，也是我们守护的珍宝。国宝大熊猫“花花”是熊猫届的顶流女明星，深受人们的喜爱。请依据以下提示内容，写一篇介绍大熊猫“花花”的英文稿。 姓名：花花 (Huahua) 年龄：3 出生地：四川成都 食物：竹子(bamboo)、蔬菜、水果 性格：聪明、友好 要求： 1. 字数80左右，题目已给出，不计入总字数； 2. 依据表格内容，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯； 3.·文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、学校等内容。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Huahua Huahua is a 3-year-old panda. She was born in Chengdu, Sichuan Province. She is very cute and popular. Huahua is very smart and friendly. Her favorite food is bamboo, vegetables and fruit. She lives in a zoo and has many fans. People like to watch her eat and play. As a top celebrity in the panda world, she has captured the hearts of many people. Huahua is not just a national treasure but also a beloved friend to all. I hope she can live a happy life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍了花花的基本信息，包括年龄、出生地和食物； 第二步，描述了花花的性格特点； 第三步，最后强调了花花在熊猫界的明星地位和受欢迎程度。 [亮点词汇] ①be born in出生于 ②live in住在 ③capture the hearts of俘获人心 [高分句型] ①Huahua is not just a national treasure but also a beloved friend to all.（not just...but also） ②I hope she can live a happy life.（宾语从句） 14．每年的10月4日为世界动物日，动物是人类的朋友。请根据以下提示写一篇不少于70词的短文介绍你最喜欢的动物，可适当拓展。 提示： (1) Say something about your favourite animal. (2) Why should we protect the animal? (3) How can we protect the animal? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Favourite Animal I like tigers very much. They usually have orange fur and dark stripes. They are symbols of strength and courage. In many stories, they are brave. We can see them in the forest or mountains. The tigers are at the top of the food chain. They keep the number of other animals in balance. So they are important to us. But now they are in danger. We should do something to protect them. We shouldn’t hunt or kill them. We can plant more trees. Let’s work together to save the tigers. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干给出的要点，适当增加细节，灵活运用恰当的句型，使行文流畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要介绍最喜欢的动物； 第二步，说明该动物的现状，阐明保护动物的理由； 第三步，举出保护动物的可行措施。 [亮点词汇] ① a symbol of  ……的象征 ② keep...in balance  使……保持平衡 ③ be in danger  处于危险之中 [高分句型] ① We should do something to protect them. (动词不定式作目的状语) ② Let’s work together to save the tigers. (祈使句) 15．根据以下提示要点，写一篇关于你的同学Mary的生活方式的文章，不少于60词，且语句通畅。 1) 13岁，是班上的尖子生，但不健康； 2) 经常吃汉堡包；不喜欢吃蔬菜和水果； 3) 在两餐之间，她吃许多甜的零食；但很少锻炼； 4) 想成为一个舞蹈家，所以要改变自己的生活方式； 5) 现在每天跑步；并且不再吃甜的零食。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My friend Mary is thirteen years old. She is a top student in our class, but she isn’t healthy. She often eats hamburgers. However, she doesn’t like eating vegetables or fruit. She eats lots of sweet snacks between meals. She seldom exercises. She wants to be a dancer, so she plans to change her lifestyle. Now she keeps running every day. She doesn’t eat sweet snacks any more. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍Mary的生活方式； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“个人信息、饮食习惯、体育锻炼”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，介绍Mary为了自己的梦想，做出的改变。 [亮点词汇] ①like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ②lots of许多 ③plan to do sth.计划做某事 [高分句型] She wants to be a dancer, so she plans to change her lifestyle.（so引导的结果状语从句） 16．请以“My favourite shopping mall”为题，写一篇70词左右的英语短文。 要点： 1.你通常乘坐2路公共汽车去那里； 2.沿着新华街一直走，在第二个交通信号灯处左拐，它在银行对面； 3.在里面你可以买到自己喜欢的各种东西，还能看电影。 My favourite shopping mall ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My favourite shopping mall There are many shopping centers near my home, but the one I like best is Carrefour. I usually go there by No.2 bus. Then go straight along Xinhua Street and turn left at the second traffic light. It’s opposite the bank. There I can buy all kinds of things I like and watch movies. If I’m hungry, there’s a food court. It has a lot of food that I like. If you come here, you’ll like it, too. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点”中我最爱的购物商场的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明我最喜欢的商场是哪一个； 第二步，具体阐述我是如何去这个商场的； 第三步，具体阐述在那个商场可以做什么； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①go straight along沿着……一直往前走 ②turn left向左转 ③all kinds of各种…… ④a lot of很多 [高分句型] If you come here, you’ll like it, too. (if引导的条件状语从句) 17．假如你是张伟，刚刚度过了一个愉快的暑假，请根据以下信息给你的美国笔友Mike写一封信，并说说你在新学期有哪些计划打算。 写作要点： 1．很开心度过了一个愉快的暑假。 2．暑假和父母去了新疆。 (1)爬了天山，骑了骡子 (2)看见了许多水果 3．说说你新学期有哪些打算，为什么。 Dear Mike, I’m happy to hear from you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Zhang Wei 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mike, I’m happy to hear from you. I had a great summer vacation. I went to Xinjiang with my parents. We climbed the Tianshan Mountain and rode a mule. We also saw a lot of fruits there. It was really interesting. In the new semester, I plan to study harder. I want to improve my English and math. I will also join the school basketball team. I think playing sports is good for my health. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Zhang Wei 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ② 时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达自己很开心度过了一个愉快的暑假； 第二步，简单介绍自己暑假做了什么； 第三步，介绍新学期的计划。 [亮点词汇] ① a lot of很多 ② plan to do sth计划做某事 ③ want to do sth想要做某事 [高分句型] I think playing sports is good for my health.（宾语从句，动名词作主语） 18．同学们，假期是美好的，相信刚过去的这个暑假你们都有自己丰富多彩的生活。请以“My Summer Holiday”为题用英语写一篇作文，谈谈你在假期里你经历的趣事。 内容提示： 1.暑假你和家人或朋友一起去了哪里？ 2.你们都干了哪些有趣的事？ 3.你们乘坐什么交通工具去的？ 4.你们当时的心情如何？ 5.你有什么收获？ 要求： 1.语法正确，语言流畅，语意通顺，上下文连贯，书写工整； 2.词数不少于 60。 My Summer Holiday ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： My Summer Holiday At the beginning of July my parents and I went to visit my grandparents who live in the countryside. We got there by car. It is a beautiful village. There is a river around the village. There are many fishes in it. My father went fishing there everyday. My mother and I helped my grandparents with farm work, such as planting vegetables and feeding chickens. It was tiring, but also rewarding to see the results of our labor. It is really a meaningful summer holiday. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：叙述过去发生的事情时应用一般过去时，对一般事实或现在的状态进行陈述时应用一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，引出暑假活动的话题。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点进行阐述，可适当进行拓展。 第三步：书写结语。总结此次暑假的收获和感受。 [亮点词汇] ①at the beginning of在……之初 ②help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事 ③such as例如 [高分句型] ①There is a river around the village.（there be句型） 19．假期是放松和充电的好时机，也是规划新学期目标的开始。请写一篇短文，分享你这个假期的经历和你为新学期制定的计划。 要求： 1. 时态正确，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范； 2. 不少于5句话。 注意：短文中不得出现任何与考生本人有关的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 Hello, I’m Li Hua. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Hello, I’m Li Hua. This holiday, I went to vist my grandparents in the countryside. I helped them with some farmwork and enjoyed the fresh air. I also spent time reading books and learning new skills online. For the new term, I plan to study harder and improve my grades, especially in math and English. I will also join the school’s basketball team to stay active and make new friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：综合使用“一般过去时”，“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，分享你这个假期的经历； 第二步，介绍为新学期制定的计划。 [亮点词汇] ①in the countryside 在乡下 ②help...with... 在某方面帮助某人 ③plan to do sth 计划做某事 [高分句型] ①I helped them with some farm work and enjoyed the fresh air.（并列结构） ②I will also join the school’s basketball team to stay active and make new friends.（不定式作目的状语） 20．同学们，暑假你们去了哪儿？发生了什么有趣的事情？用英文写一写吧！ 提示： 1. 短文应包含以下要点 (1) Where did you go?              (2) When did you go there? (3) How did you go there?           (4) How long did you stay there? (5) … 2. 发挥想象，所写内容适当补充 1—2 点。 3. 使用first, next, then...等表示逻辑顺序的词。 4. 书写工整，不少于50词。(不包含已经给出的词) My summer holiday My summer holiday was very interesting. I ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My summer holiday My summer holiday was very interesting. I went to Beijing with my parents. We went there on the tenth of July by plane. It was my first time to take a plane, so I was very excited. We stayed there for a week. First, we visited the Great Wall. Next, we went to the Summer Palace. Then, we ate Beijing Duck. Finally, we bought some presents for my friends. We were very happy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示信息介绍自己的暑假活动，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍自己暑假去了哪里以及有哪些活动等； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①by plane乘飞机 ②buy sth. for sb.为某人买某物 [高分句型] It was my first time to take a plane, so I was very excited. (so连接的并列句) 21．假设你将代表学校参加市里的对外宣传征文活动，主题为“你最喜爱哪个季节? ”请你根据以下思维导图的内容，用英文写一篇短文来表达你的观点，并具体描写广州在该季节中的特点，以及喜爱的原因。 要求： 1）文章必须包含题干和思维导图中所有的要点，并适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分； 3）词数不少于80词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 My Favorite Season in Guangzhou Each season brings its own charm. As for me, my favorite one in Guangzhou is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Favorite Season in Guangzhou Each season brings its its own charm. As for me, my favorite one in Guangzhou is spring. The weather is mild and pleasant, making it ideal for outdoor activities. Parks and gardens are filled with blooming flowers and green trees, creating a beautiful and peaceful environment. What’s more, you can hear a number of birds singinging in the tree happily. There are many different kinds of cultural events in spring, such as the Flower Fair, the International Food Festival, the Kites Flying Festival and so on. People always get together and have a lot of fun. Spring in Guangzhou is a season of beauty, culture, and joy, making it the most wonderful time of the year. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我最喜欢春天”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“天气、动植物、活动”几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。表达“对春天的感受”。 [亮点词汇] ① a number of许多 ② different kinds of不同种类的 [高分句型] There are many different kinds of cultural events in spring, such as the Flower Fair, the International Food Festival, the Kites Flying Festival and so on.（There be 句型） 22．近年来，“China Travel” 成为全球网络上的热门话题。越来越多的海外游客来到中国，体验中国的风土人情。假如你是罗阳，你的朋友Jack即将从澳大利亚来中国，他希望你推荐一个最值得一游的城市。请根据思维导图，给Jack写一封E-mail。 注意： 1.词数80左右。开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.根据思维导图内容展开，请适当发挥，补充细节： 3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Dear Jack, I’m so excited you’re coming to China! I think you should visit my favourite city. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you have a great time in China! Let me know if you need more ideas. Best regards, Luo Yang 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Jack, I’m so excited you’re coming to China! I think you should visit my favourite city. It’s a place filled with special food, interesting places, and friendly people. The food here is amazing. You must try the local noodles. They are delicious and come with different toppings like meat, vegetables, and even eggs. There’s also a famous dumpling shop that serves dumplings with a unique filling. It’s a must-try! For interesting places, you can visit the ancient temple that has a long history. There are beautiful gardens and peaceful lakes around it. You can also explore the bustling market where you can find all kinds of souvenirs and local snacks. The people here are very friendly. They love to chat and help tourists. You won’t feel lost or lonely because everyone is so welcoming. I hope you have a great time in China! Let me know if you need more ideas. Best regards, Luo Yang 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，描述个人推荐和感受； ③提示：根据思维导图内容展开，注意介绍“Special food, Interesting places, Friendly people”三个方面，适当添加细节，突出城市的特色和吸引力。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。首先表达对Jack即将来中国的兴奋之情，并直接引出想要推荐的城市； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别从“Special food, Interesting places, Friendly people”三个方面详细介绍这座城市的魅力； 第三步，书写结语。再次表达对Jack来访的期待，并询问是否需要更多建议，以示友好和关心。 [亮点词汇] ①filled with充满 ②amazing令人惊叹的 ③different toppings不同的配料 ④a long history悠久的历史 ⑤bustling繁忙的 ⑥welcoming好客的 [高分句型] ①You can visit the ancient temple that has a long history and is surrounded by beautiful gardens and peaceful lakes.（定语从句修饰先行词temple，并列结构描述其特点） ②You can also explore the bustling market where you can find all kinds of souvenirs and local snacks.（定语从句修饰先行词market，描述其特点） ③You won’t feel lost or lonely because everyone is so welcoming.（because引导原因状语从句） 23．请选择一个城市，为它写一篇简短的天气预报。 例如：New York ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： It’s time for the weather report. Today is Monday. The weather in New York is sunny. The temperature is 10°C. It’s a nice day. Please remember to wear a coat when you go out. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇小作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容书写，可适当发挥，注意语义连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍日期； 第二步，介绍纽约的天气状况； 第三步，提示人们外出进行保暖。 [亮点词汇] ①it’s time for是做某事的时候了 ②weather report天气预报 [高分句型] Please remember to wear a coat when you go out. (when引导的时间状语从句) 24．暑假已经接近尾声。这个暑假，你做了什么？去了哪里？请你结合自身情况，写一篇英语短文和大家分享一下。不少于50个词。 My summer holiday _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My summer holiday I visited Shanghai with my parents this summer holiday. We went there by plane. We saw many interesting things. We visited the Bund and the Shanghai Science and Technology Museum. We went to the Oriental Pearl Tower too. I saw many beautiful sights from there. We also ate a lot of delicious food and took many pictures. I had a happy summer holiday. I hope I can visit Shanghai again. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要是一般过去时； ③提示：考生应根据题干要求完成写作，注意用词准确，语句通顺，语法正确。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明暑假去了哪里； 第二步，阐述做了什么； 第三步，谈谈自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①interesting有趣的 ②beautiful美丽的 ③delicious美味的 ④take pictures拍照 [高分句型] ①I hope I can visit Shanghai again.（省略that的宾语从句） 25．假如你是Li Hua，请根据问题提示，给你的笔友John写一封回信。要求：书写规范，语句通顺。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Dear John, Let me tell you something about me. Before, I didn’t like summer, because it is hot. Now, I like summer. I can eat ice-cream. I went to Beijing this summer holiday. I visited the Great Wall and ate Beijing duck. My summer holiday was great. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 按照提示介绍自己的改变，假期去了哪里、做了什么以及对暑假的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①go to去 ②visit the Great Wall参观长城 ③eat Beijing duck吃北京烤鸭 [高分句型] ①Before, I didn’t like summer, because it is hot.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②I visited the Great Wall and ate Beijing duck.（并列结构） 26．假如你是初一新生李华。你的学校即将举办外语节，正向初一新生征集以“New school, new start”为主题的英语vlog，请为你剪辑的vlog素材写一篇旁白，分享自己忙碌但快乐的校园生活，要点如下： 校园生活 1. 学习： 举例你最喜欢的一门学科， 并说明原因 (1点) 2. 课后活动： 描述参加的一个活动的内容和你的感受 (1点) 人际交往 最好的朋友是 Jack， 因为……(说明2点原因 ) 展望未来 对未来校园生活的期待 (1点) 注意： 1. 80词以上，文章的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，适当补充细节； 3. 文中不得使用真实的校名与姓名。 Hello everyone, I’m Li Hua, a junior high school student. I’m excited to ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my vlog. Thank you for watching! 【满分优秀范文】 Hello everyone, I’m Li Hua, a junior high school student. I’m excited to share my busy but happy school life with you in this vlog. First of all, among all the subjects, English is my favorite. It’s like a magic key to opening the door to a new world. Moreover, I take part in the school’s football club. During the last football match against another class, I really felt the power of teamwork and the joy of victory when we all worked hard towards one goal. More importantly, I made a good friend named Jack. He is really helpful. For example, when I had trouble in math, he patiently explained the answer to me until I got it. Besides, he has a great sense of humor. He can always tell some funny jokes to make me laugh. Above all, I’m really looking forward to more school activities in the future. I hope to have a great opportunity for me to improve my English and broaden my horizons at the same time. That’s all for my vlog. Thank you for watching! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章开头，介绍意图； 第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，介绍校园生活，人际交往等情况； 第三步，展望未来，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②take part in加入 [高分句型] ①For example, when I had trouble in math, he patiently explained the answer to me until I got it.（时间状语从句） ②He can always tell some funny jokes to make me laugh.（不定式表目的） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $