专题02 读后续写之亲情感悟-【妙笔生花】2025年高考英语写作常考文体提分秘籍

专题02 读后续写之亲情感悟 *** 考情分析 *** 年份 卷别 类别 话题 2021 2021年新高考I&II卷 人与社会 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 2021年浙江1月卷 人与社会 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 *** 写作指导 *** 【题型分析】 亲情故事往往以温暖的力量直击人心，在高考“读后续写”题材中十分常见。它不仅描绘了家庭成员之间的无条件关爱和支持，也能反映出细微的情感变化。亲情故事中的场景可以是日常生活中的小事，也可以是突发事件下家人之间的相互扶持，细腻刻画的亲情能触动读者内心深处。通过写作亲情类的故事，我们不仅传达出家庭的温情，还能引发人们对亲人之间情感联结的思考。 第一类是相亲相爱的锦上添花，比如纪念重要日子（如举办惊喜生日派对，送生日礼物，母亲节，父亲节等）和父亲教孩子学习新技能，孩子为长辈解决困难。这一类整体基调是快乐的，积极的，充满爱的。最后加上收获，开心，感恩等。 第二类是解决小误会小矛盾的握手言和，如：亲子之间缺乏沟通，父母把自己的意志强加给子女，子女觉得父母做法不对，孩子想要帮父母却帮倒忙等。续写往往要求考生能够用续写原文的伏笔，让冲突得到化解，化解可以是弥补，解释，道歉，回忆等。如果是亲人间的矛盾、误会，结尾往往会亲人间冰释前嫌，握手言和。 【写作方法】 在“亲情”主题的续写中，可以遵循以下六个步骤，将亲情的温暖描绘得更细腻动人 第一步：提炼六个要素，概括主旨大意 首先，从文本中提取出六个基本要素：谁（Who）、何时（When）、何地（Where）、做什么（What）、为什么（Why）和如何（How）。这些要素可以帮助考生迅速厘清故事主线，为续写做好铺垫，避免跑题或缺乏逻辑。 第二步：理清故事脉络，把握情感发展 亲情类故事的情感往往是循序渐进的。通过绘制情节发展线和情感变化线，考生可以更好地贴合原文逻辑，在续写中表达出家庭成员之间情感的渐变，比如从最初的依赖到后来的理解与守护。 第三步：分析段落首句，精心设计问题 段首句在续写中承接并推进情节。考生可以根据段首句的逻辑关系（顺承、转折、因果等）设计小问题，例如：段首句揭示了什么？故事应如何推进？这种方法有助于增强续写内容的连贯性和一致性。 第四步：设计情感高潮，展现情感升华 在设计结尾时，通过关键情境将情感推向高潮，比如在离别时的依依不舍、一次意外后的守护等。将家庭成员间的温情和感激之情通过具体情节展现出来，达到情感升华的效果，让故事更具感染力。 第五步：列出关键词汇，续写连贯句群 续写时，考生可以列出原文中关键的情感词汇和人物间的互动，按照故事发展的顺序逐一列出，构建出连贯的句群，从而确保故事在逻辑上前后一致，并能真实地展现亲情的温度。 第六步：润色词句，誊写成文 续写完成后，考生可对内容进行润色，使表达更细腻丰富，句式更具多样性，从而使续写内容与原文风格相契合。最后，清晰规范地将故事誊写在答题纸上。 相亲相爱故事情节构建支架 在续写亲情主题时，情节可以分为以下三步： 第一步：亲密日常——依恋与陪伴 · 情感表现：依赖、信任、欣喜 · 肢体动作：轻轻牵手、微笑相视、贴心守护 第二步：相互扶持——关怀与守护 · 行动表现：温柔关怀、鼓励支持、倾听理解 · 情感变化：从依赖到成长，从关心到支持 第三步：感人告别或情感升华 · 情感表现：不舍、感激、温馨回忆 · 主题升华：领悟亲情的珍贵、感恩每一个相处的瞬间 握手言和故事情节构建支架 矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张） 1.So nervous was he that （他太紧张了）he dropped the electric carving knife.（2021.04 台州高三调考） 2.I got into a panic（ 陷入惊慌之中）as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. （2021年1月浙江高考）     3. Sweating and nearly tearing（汗流浃背，眼泪差点流下来）, I could imagine how silly and strange I was at that moment based on the continuing laughter from my parents and Jason. （2021年1月浙江高考） 3.她立刻涨红了脸，感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。 Blushing scarlet instantly, she felt embarrassment almost wreathed her entirely.     快乐结局塑造（感激+开心）   1. 他们耸了耸肩，咧着嘴笑，这就驱散了她的一切烦恼，给了她安慰。 They shrugged and grinned, which dissipated all her distress and consoled her. 2.谢谢。她紧紧抓住打开的袋子，充满了感激和温暖。 ‘Thanks.’ Clinging her hands to the bag opening, she was overwhelmed by a surge of gratitude and warmth. 3.这两个强壮的陌生人点亮了她的一天。 The two strong strangers undoubtedly lit her day up. 4. We all jumped to our feet, dancing and screaming with joy（开心得欢呼雀跃）. （2021.04 台州高三调考） 5. Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I brought to others（对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满意）. （2021年1月浙江高考） 6. 她停了下来，心中洋溢着欢快的心情，拿出一把硬币，扭头把它们攥在他们的手里，尽管两个男人的表情都很惊讶。（2021嘉兴二模） Brimming over with bright feeling and joy, she stopped, fished out a handful coins and tuned around to squeeze them in their fists despite two men's astonished expression.        情感升华（感悟+感动）     1. It was Henry's kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family. I will treasure it with all my heart. 正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。 2. I keep the little plane as a reminder of my daughter's love and also the power of words. 我留着这架小飞机，以提醒女儿对我的爱和语言的力量。 3. Every time I faced challenges, a thought of giving up flashed in my mind, but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going. 每次面对挑战，我都想放弃，但是家人的支持给了我继续前进的力量。 4. The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warmed us. 透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光，和我们家人之间的爱，温暖了我们。 5. From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest. 从那以后，每当他打算撒谎的时候，那三颗巧克力就会在他心里敲响警钟，提醒他要诚实。 *** 素材宝库 *** ①依恋信任类 · filled with a childlike trust 满怀孩童般的信任 · lean into one’s embrace 靠在某人的怀抱中 · always a safe harbor 始终是安全的港湾 · drawn to each other naturally 自然而然地吸引到一起 1. In her mother’s warm embrace, she felt safe from the worries of the world. （在母亲温暖的怀抱中，她感觉远离了世间的烦恼。） 2. He clung to his father’s hand, the familiar grip a source of comfort. （他紧紧握住父亲的手，这熟悉的触感让他感到安心。） 3. With every word, she felt her grandmother’s love wrapping around her like a blanket. （每一个字，都让她感觉到祖母的爱如同一条毛毯将她包裹。） ②关怀守护类 · a gentle hand on the shoulder 轻轻拍在肩上的手 · shield from every storm 遮挡所有风雨 · an unspoken understanding 默契无言的理解 · bring warmth to one’s heart 带来温暖 1. Her mother’s gentle hand on her shoulder steadied her trembling heart. （母亲轻轻拍在她肩上的手，安抚了她不安的心。） 2. His father’s quiet presence was a source of strength in times of doubt. （父亲默默的陪伴，在她感到困惑时给了她力量。） 3. Every encouraging nod from her sister brought a newfound courage. （姐姐每一次鼓励的点头，都让她增添一份勇气。） ③依依不舍类 · reluctant to let go 不舍得放手 · eyes brimming with unshed tears 眼中含着未落的泪水 · a bittersweet farewell 苦乐参半的告别 · hold on for just a moment longer 多停留片刻 1. As they hugged, she could feel the reluctance to let go lingering in the air. （当他们拥抱时，她能感觉到空气中那份不舍的情绪。） 2. Her eyes glistened with unshed tears, holding on to the moment a little longer. （她的眼中泛着泪光，舍不得让这一刻就这样过去。） 3. With a bittersweet smile, he waved goodbye, carrying the warmth of family with him. （他带着一丝苦乐参半的微笑挥手告别，心中带着家的温暖。） ④感悟成长类 · grateful for every shared memory 感谢每一段共同的回忆 · learn the meaning of family 明白了亲情的含义 · understand the depth of love 理解爱的深度 · carry their love in one’s heart 将他们的爱铭记心中 句型一：It is through…that… · It is through the quiet resilience and unspoken sacrifices of family that one truly comprehends the profound depth of unconditional love. （正是通过家庭那份无言的坚韧与默默的牺牲，人们才真正领悟到无条件之爱的深邃。） 句型二：The love between… · The love between family members often manifests not in grand gestures but in the subtle, everyday moments that etch themselves into one’s memory, revealing the quiet strength of their bond. （家庭成员间的爱往往不在于宏大的举动，而在于日常生活中那些悄然铭刻在记忆中的点滴，展现出这种纽带的温柔力量。） 句型三：Not until…did… · Not until life’s trials revealed the fragility of time did he perceive the immeasurable value of his family’s steadfast presence. （直到生活的磨难揭示了时间的脆弱，他才意识到家庭始终陪伴的无价之珍。） 句型四：If not for… · If not for the unwavering support and silent sacrifices of family, one might never realize the true scope of human resilience and emotional depth. （若非家庭那份不离不弃的支持与无声的牺牲，或许人们永远不会真正意识到人类的坚韧与情感的深广。） 句型五：What started as…turned into… · What started as mere familial duty evolved into an enduring appreciation of the subtle, binding forces that hold us close through life’s myriad challenges. （起初只是简单的家庭责任，后来却升华为对那股牵系我们、支撑我们度过种种挑战的无形力量的深深感激。） 句型六：Only by…can… · Only by stepping away from the comfort of home can one truly appreciate the immeasurable worth of familial warmth and the silent, ever-present strength it imparts. （唯有离开家中的温暖，人们才能真正领悟到那份亲情之暖的无价，以及它赋予的无声却坚定的力量。） 句型七：Little did…know that… · Little did he know that every small gesture of his family was a testament to an unyielding love that, though often unnoticed, shaped his world profoundly. （他从未想到，家庭的每一个小小举动都是那份不屈不挠之爱的见证，尽管往往被忽视，却深刻地塑造了他的人生。） *** 片段写作 *** ①描述亲情场景 As she walked into the room, she saw her mother sitting by the window, knitting a scarf. The soft light of the lamp illuminated her face, filled with love and concern. Her father was in the corner, reading a book, looking up every now and then with a smile. The familiar sight filled her heart with warmth. She realized that no matter where life took her, this was where she belonged, surrounded by the love of her family. （当她走进房间时，她看到母亲坐在窗边，织着一条围巾。柔和的灯光照亮了她的脸，充满了爱和关切。父亲在角落里看书，不时抬头微笑。这熟悉的景象让她心中充满温暖。她意识到，无论生活将她带向何处，这里都是她的归属，被家人的爱所包围。） ②关于亲情互动 They sat around the dinner table, sharing stories and laughter. The aroma of the home-cooked meal filled the air, and the warmth of family love was palpable. As they talked, they realized that these moments were precious, and that the bond they shared would last a lifetime. （他们围坐在餐桌旁，分享着故事和欢笑。家常菜的香气弥漫在空气中，家庭之爱的温暖显而易见。在交谈中，他们意识到这些时刻是珍贵的，他们之间的纽带将持续一生。） *** 必背佳句 *** (1)表达亲情 1. Family is the harbor where our hearts find peace and love.（家庭是我们心灵找到安宁与爱的港湾。） 2. The love within a family is like a warm fire on a cold winter's night.（家庭中的爱就像寒冷冬夜中的温暖炉火。） 3. Blood is thicker than water, and family bonds are unbreakable.（血浓于水，亲情纽带坚不可摧。） (2)体现亲情力量 1. In times of trouble, family is the pillar that holds us up and gives us strength to carry on.（在困难时期，家庭是支撑我们的支柱，给予我们继续前行的力量。） 2. The power of family love can heal wounds, overcome obstacles, and bring hope in the darkest of times.（亲情的力量可以治愈伤口，克服障碍，在最黑暗的时刻带来希望。） 3. A family's love is a source of endless inspiration and motivation, pushing us to be our best selves.（家庭的爱是无尽的灵感和动力源泉，推动我们成为最好的自己。） *** 高考真题精讲 *** 【2021新课标I&II卷】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右。 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 【答案】 本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是Jenna和Jeff这对双胞胎兄妹为了在母亲节早上给母亲惊喜而精心策划并制作早餐的故事；他们克服困难，永不放弃，折射的是他们对母亲的拳拳之爱。 Paragraph 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Knowing what they were preparing for, he was greatly surprised. So immediately, he offered to get involved in the kids’ job. Firstly, he put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat, asking Jeff to watch out for it going for fifteen minutes. And then, he asked Jenna to break another two eggs and mix them with milk. With all preparations done, they started to fry bread together. In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. To their delight, the breakfast was a success in the end. Paragraph 1: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Eyes opened, the woman heard a harmonious “Happy Mother’s Day” from her twin kids with hot, sweet breakfast before her. Behind the children stood their father. To shed light on the game of the gift, he told the mother the whole story. After learning about what happened, she rose quickly to gaze at the boy’s hand with moved tears rolling down her cheeks. “Thank you, my honey!” said the mother. 【导语】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。 ②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。 2.续写线索：指导——积极——献礼——感动 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①帮助：help/assist ②完成：finish/complete ③拥抱：hug/embrace 情绪类 ①高兴：happy/delighted ②感动：moved/touched 【点睛】 [高分句型1]. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. (固定短语not only…but (also)和强调句型) 【2021浙江1月卷】 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year. This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders. My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. ________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Paragraph 1 It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Dad was summoned less, it seemed, in expectation of practical help than to make sure he didn't miss out on the spectacle. I heard him propose calling the fire department." Stay tuned," said she'd mentioned she was going to upload the video to Facebook but it was only then I realized she d been filming the whole time. The video cuts before my rescue-Dad got me to push my head farther into the pumpkin so Mom could reach in and undo the rubber band round my ponytail. I emerged with squash-conditioned hair, a sore chin and my nose plugged with pulp. Paragraph 2 The video was posted on the Monday before Halloween. By the end of that day, it had over 1.000 views. People asked my mom to put it on YouTube, and by Wednesday morning we were getting 5:00 a.m. calls from TV breakfast shows and then the international media-the video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views. When I went on a youth camp, I was recognized by children I'd never met. The pumpkin also became a minor celebrity. Passersby and trick-or-treaters would and ask, "Which is Rachel's pumpkin?" before taking selfies with it. [分析]本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者家有在万圣节雕刻南瓜的传统，今年也不例外，家里所有人都在厨房的餐桌上辛勤地工作着，而作者的妈妈则在拍摄一年一度的活动。结果作者将头伸进了南瓜里，被卡住了,无论如何也无法挣脱出来，妈妈却趁机拍下了这一幕，后来作者得救，视频也被上传到网上走红，这段视频开始获得数十万的点击量。 [详解] 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容°虽然时间只过去了五、六分钟，但还是感觉要长得多。"可知，第一段可描写作者是如何在爸爸的帮助下得救的。②由第二段首句内容”这段视频是在万圣节前的周一发布的。"可知，第一段可描写作者头被卡在南瓜里这段视频在网上的走红情况，以及视频走红对作者家和作者的影响。 2续写线索: 爸爸被喊来帮忙妈妈拍下了全过程:作者得救-视频被上传一视频走红一视频对作者家和作者的影响。 3.词汇激活 行为类:确保:make sure / guarantee 打算做某事:be going to do sth./ intend to do sth.出来:emerge / come out 情绪类:实际:practical / useful 出名:become a minor celebrity / be famous[点睛] [高分句型1] When I went on a youth camp, I was recognized by children I'd never met.(运用了when引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2] Passersby and trick-or-treaters would knock and ask. "Which is Rachel's pumpkin?R before taking selfies with it.(运用了动名词作宾语) *** 名校模拟题提升练 *** 【2024-2025学年高三湖北省九师联盟•宜昌市协作体】 少女离家 父亲用爱融化叛逆情结 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。     “Daddy, I want to ask your permission to study in America,” I said to my father a few months before my graduation from high school. But hardly before I finished, he shouted, “No!”     “But why?” I replied. “If you are worried about money, it will be OK since I have got a scholarship...”     But he refused to give in. At the moment, I didn’t know what to say. For more than two years, I had been working very hard to pass all the necessary examinations. I had not told my father because I wanted to give him a pleasant surprise. I thought he would be very proud of me because it was many of my classmates’ parents’ dream to send their children to study abroad.     “Why do I have to get your permission? I am already 18 and I’m not a kid anymore,” I said angrily and rushed to my bedroom, shutting the door violently. Blinded by anger, I found that I could not stay at my hometown any longer. Late that night, I slipped out of the house and decided to take the bus to the railway station to start my own life as far away from my home as possible.     The bus stop was just two blocks away from my home. When I got there, I found that I forgot to take any money with me and missed the last bus. I did not want to go back home, so I sat down on the bench and closed my eyes to have a break.     Suddenly, I was woken up by my phone. I looked around and found the road was deserted and the street was so quiet that I regretted that I had left home in such a hurry. I picked up the phone and answered the phone even without checking the number.     “Have you had a good sleep? It’s going to rain. Shall we go home now?”     注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；     2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。     Paragraph 1: It was my father’s voice! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     Paragraph 2: I grabbed my bag and hurried toward him. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Paragraph 1: It was my father's voice! I froze in disbelief,clutching my phone tightly My father was never one to show his emotions openly, but his familiar tone was filled with worry. “I'm sorry, Dad," I whispered. my voice trembling.“I didn't mean to hurt you." He sighed heavily, but his voice softened “I know, but you scared me. Let's talk this through at home." Paragraph 2: I grabbed my bag and hurried toward him, tears streaming down my face.When I saw him standing under the streetlight,holding an umbrella ,I felt a surge of relief. He opened his arms, and I ran into them, sobbing .On the way home, he told me he only wanted the best for me, and I realized how much he cared. That night, we reached an understanding, and I promised to never shut him out again. 【长郡中学 2024 年高二第一次月考】 雪中漫步偶遇漂亮红裙子 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The first time we set eyes on the beautiful dress “Big Red”, Father, Mother and I were walking slowly through the freshly fallen snow on our way to Hubble's Hardware store on Main Street.  The colorfully decorated window display held the best toys ever and some other things. And they were all placed pleasantly beneath the breathtaking dress of Big Red. Mother's eyes were glued to the massive flame of red satin（绸缎）, dotted with twinkling stars. “My goodness,” she managed to say in dreamlike wonder. “Would you just look at that dress!” Then, totally out of character, Mother unexpectedly danced on the slippery sidewalk. Beneath the heavy, grey wool coat that she had worn every winter for as long as I could remember, Mother lost her balance and fell clumsily. Father quickly caught her. Her cheeks redder than usual, Mother blamed dad for laughing. “Oh, stop that!” she ordered, as my father swept the snow from her coat. “What a silly dress to be displayed there in the window of Eaton's!” she shook her head in disbelief. “Who on earth would want such a brightly-colored dress? It is too expensive.” As we continued to walk down the street, Mother turned back for one more look. “My goodness! You'd think they'd display something that a person could use!” Christmas was around the corner and the red dress was soon forgotten. Mother was not the one to wish for, or spend money on things that were not practical. “There are things we need more than this,” she'd always say, or,“There are things we need more than that.” Father, on the other hand, liked to buy things whenever the budget allowed. Of course, he'd get a scolding for his occasional spending like this, but it was all done with the best intention. On our last trip to town before Christmas, we were driving up Main Street when Mother suddenly exclaimed in surprise,“Would you just look at that!” She pointed excitedly as Dad drove past Eaton's.“That big red dress is gone,” she said in disbelief.“It's actually gone.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。      Dad looked quickly and smiled,“Yes, it is not there!”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  I'll never forget that Christmas morning when Father handed Mother a box.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 本文描述了作者一家在雪中漫步时，在商店橱窗外，作者的母亲看到了一条漂亮的大红裙子，被深深吸引住了，但她在和家人谈论时故作不喜欢的样子。圣诞节前，作者一家再次进城，作者的母亲发现橱窗里的大红裙子不见了，感到难以置信。 思路点拨       阅读材料交代了故事主人公的特征。根据阅读材料第二段中的 "Mother's eyes were glued to..." 以及第三段中表惊叹的 "Wow" "in dreamlike wonder" 可知，母亲很喜欢这条大红裙子，但下文的 "totally out of character, Mother unexpectedly danced on the slippery sidewalk" 又表明母亲故作轻松地转移大家的注意力；根据阅读材料第五段可知，作者的母亲故作不喜欢是因为觉得这条裙子又贵又不实用。根据阅读材料第六段中的 "liked to buy things whenever the budget allowed" "with the best intention" 可知，作者的父亲喜欢在预算允许的时候出于好意买东西。      由续写第一段首句内容"爸爸快速地看了看并微笑着说：‘是的，它不在那里!’"和续写第二段首句中父亲送母亲礼物，结合父亲的人物特征不难推知，父亲买下了这条裙子，但是圣诞节未到，还不能告诉母亲。结合父母的人物特征及阅读材料最后一段可知，续写第一段可描写父亲诡秘的神情和动作以及母亲内心对于大红裙子不见了的惊讶与失望。      由续写第二段首句内容"我永远不会忘记那个新年的早晨，父亲递给母亲一个盒子"可知，续写第二段的主要内容是父亲送母亲大红裙子。根据阅读材料中的"with the best intention"可知，本段可描写作者的父亲送出大红裙子时对母亲的爱意与期待；根据阅读材料中母亲对大红裙子的喜爱及看到大红裙子不见的惊讶与失望可知，本段也应描写母亲收到礼物时的惊讶和激动之情。要注重通过人物的语言、动作等细节描写来丰富人物形象，表达人物的心理感受。 续写线索 母亲失望 → 父亲故作神秘 → 父亲送母亲裙子 → 母亲感动 → 父亲表达爱意 词汇激活 行为类 ①走路: walking slowly through/ walking along slowly ②责备: blame for/ reproach/ accuse 情绪类 ①失望: disappointment/ regret/ despair ②惊讶: disbelief/ incredible 参考范文 Dad looked quickly and smiled,“Yes, it is not there!”“But who would like to buy that silly dress, which is neither practical nor cheap?”Mom marveled(v.感到惊奇), but meanwhile both Father and I could discern(vt.辨别;识别;) an inexplicable but conspicuous disappointment crept over her face (她的脸上流露出一种令人费解但显而易见的失望).“Some romantic, reserved loving man might buy that for his wife.”Father winked slyly(狡黠地眨眼) at Mom and me from the rear mirror as if he were the secretive devoting husband he depicted. I'll never forget that Christmas morning when Father handed Mother a box. “Ta da, the most silly gift for my princess!”Father exclaimed, eyeing at his wife in a loving and expectant way(用带着爱意和期待的眼神看着他的妻子). Mother, too stunned to speak(惊愕地说不出话来), received the box with her trembling hands. Her palms sweating, throat tightening(掌心冒汗，喉咙发紧), Mother's hand slided through the red satin and lingered at the twinkling stars.“Oh, Tom, you shouldn't have been that extravagant (adj.奢侈的).”“No, baby, you deserve the highest honor and my passionate love on this Special Christmas.” 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题02 读后续写之亲情感悟 年份 卷别 类别 话题 2021 2021年新高考I&II卷 人与社会 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 2021年浙江1月卷 人与社会 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 【题型分析】 亲情故事往往以温暖的力量直击人心，在高考“读后续写”题材中十分常见。它不仅描绘了家庭成员之间的无条件关爱和支持，也能反映出细微的情感变化。亲情故事中的场景可以是日常生活中的小事，也可以是突发事件下家人之间的相互扶持，细腻刻画的亲情能触动读者内心深处。通过写作亲情类的故事，我们不仅传达出家庭的温情，还能引发人们对亲人之间情感联结的思考。 第一类是相亲相爱的锦上添花，比如纪念重要日子（如举办惊喜生日派对，送生日礼物，母亲节，父亲节等）和父亲教孩子学习新技能，孩子为长辈解决困难。这一类整体基调是快乐的，积极的，充满爱的。最后加上收获，开心，感恩等。 第二类是解决小误会小矛盾的握手言和，如：亲子之间缺乏沟通，父母把自己的意志强加给子女，子女觉得父母做法不对，孩子想要帮父母却帮倒忙等。续写往往要求考生能够用续写原文的伏笔，让冲突得到化解，化解可以是弥补，解释，道歉，回忆等。如果是亲人间的矛盾、误会，结尾往往会亲人间冰释前嫌，握手言和。 【写作方法】 在“亲情”主题的续写中，可以遵循以下六个步骤，将亲情的温暖描绘得更细腻动人 第一步：提炼六个要素，概括主旨大意 首先，从文本中提取出六个基本要素：谁（Who）、何时（When）、何地（Where）、做什么（What）、为什么（Why）和如何（How）。这些要素可以帮助考生迅速厘清故事主线，为续写做好铺垫，避免跑题或缺乏逻辑。 第二步：理清故事脉络，把握情感发展 亲情类故事的情感往往是循序渐进的。通过绘制情节发展线和情感变化线，考生可以更好地贴合原文逻辑，在续写中表达出家庭成员之间情感的渐变，比如从最初的依赖到后来的理解与守护。 第三步：分析段落首句，精心设计问题 段首句在续写中承接并推进情节。考生可以根据段首句的逻辑关系（顺承、转折、因果等）设计小问题，例如：段首句揭示了什么？故事应如何推进？这种方法有助于增强续写内容的连贯性和一致性。 第四步：设计情感高潮，展现情感升华 在设计结尾时，通过关键情境将情感推向高潮，比如在离别时的依依不舍、一次意外后的守护等。将家庭成员间的温情和感激之情通过具体情节展现出来，达到情感升华的效果，让故事更具感染力。 第五步：列出关键词汇，续写连贯句群 续写时，考生可以列出原文中关键的情感词汇和人物间的互动，按照故事发展的顺序逐一列出，构建出连贯的句群，从而确保故事在逻辑上前后一致，并能真实地展现亲情的温度。 第六步：润色词句，誊写成文 续写完成后，考生可对内容进行润色，使表达更细腻丰富，句式更具多样性，从而使续写内容与原文风格相契合。最后，清晰规范地将故事誊写在答题纸上。 相亲相爱故事情节构建支架 在续写亲情主题时，情节可以分为以下三步： · 情感表现：依赖、信任、欣喜 · 肢体动作：轻轻牵手、微笑相视、贴心守护 · 行动表现：温柔关怀、鼓励支持、倾听理解 · 情感变化：从依赖到成长，从关心到支持 · 情感表现：不舍、感激、温馨回忆 · 主题升华：领悟亲情的珍贵、感恩每一个相处的瞬间 握手言和故事情节构建支架 矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张） 1.So nervous was he that （他太紧张了）he dropped the electric carving knife.（2021.04 台州高三调考） 2.I got into a panic（ 陷入惊慌之中）as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. （2021年1月浙江高考）     3. Sweating and nearly tearing（汗流浃背，眼泪差点流下来）, I could imagine how silly and strange I was at that moment based on the continuing laughter from my parents and Jason. （2021年1月浙江高考） 3.她立刻涨红了脸，感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。 Blushing scarlet instantly, she felt embarrassment almost wreathed her entirely.     快乐结局塑造（感激+开心）   1. 他们耸了耸肩，咧着嘴笑，这就驱散了她的一切烦恼，给了她安慰。 They shrugged and grinned, which dissipated all her distress and consoled her. 2.谢谢。她紧紧抓住打开的袋子，充满了感激和温暖。 ‘Thanks.’ Clinging her hands to the bag opening, she was overwhelmed by a surge of gratitude and warmth. 3.这两个强壮的陌生人点亮了她的一天。 The two strong strangers undoubtedly lit her day up. 4. We all jumped to our feet, dancing and screaming with joy（开心得欢呼雀跃）. （2021.04 台州高三调考） 5. Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I brought to others（对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满意）. （2021年1月浙江高考） 6. 她停了下来，心中洋溢着欢快的心情，拿出一把硬币，扭头把它们攥在他们的手里，尽管两个男人的表情都很惊讶。（2021嘉兴二模） Brimming over with bright feeling and joy, she stopped, fished out a handful coins and tuned around to squeeze them in their fists despite two men's astonished expression.        情感升华（感悟+感动）     1. It was Henry's kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family. I will treasure it with all my heart. 正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。 2. I keep the little plane as a reminder of my daughter's love and also the power of words. 我留着这架小飞机，以提醒女儿对我的爱和语言的力量。 3. Every time I faced challenges, a thought of giving up flashed in my mind, but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going. 每次面对挑战，我都想放弃，但是家人的支持给了我继续前进的力量。 4. The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warmed us. 透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光，和我们家人之间的爱，温暖了我们。 5. From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest. 从那以后，每当他打算撒谎的时候，那三颗巧克力就会在他心里敲响警钟，提醒他要诚实。 ①依恋信任类 · filled with a childlike trust 满怀孩童般的信任 · lean into one’s embrace 靠在某人的怀抱中 · always a safe harbor 始终是安全的港湾 · drawn to each other naturally 自然而然地吸引到一起 1. In her mother’s warm embrace, she felt safe from the worries of the world. （在母亲温暖的怀抱中，她感觉远离了世间的烦恼。） 2. He clung to his father’s hand, the familiar grip a source of comfort. （他紧紧握住父亲的手，这熟悉的触感让他感到安心。） 3. With every word, she felt her grandmother’s love wrapping around her like a blanket. （每一个字，都让她感觉到祖母的爱如同一条毛毯将她包裹。） ②关怀守护类 · a gentle hand on the shoulder 轻轻拍在肩上的手 · shield from every storm 遮挡所有风雨 · an unspoken understanding 默契无言的理解 · bring warmth to one’s heart 带来温暖 1. Her mother’s gentle hand on her shoulder steadied her trembling heart. （母亲轻轻拍在她肩上的手，安抚了她不安的心。） 2. His father’s quiet presence was a source of strength in times of doubt. （父亲默默的陪伴，在她感到困惑时给了她力量。） 3. Every encouraging nod from her sister brought a newfound courage. （姐姐每一次鼓励的点头，都让她增添一份勇气。） ③依依不舍类 · reluctant to let go 不舍得放手 · eyes brimming with unshed tears 眼中含着未落的泪水 · a bittersweet farewell 苦乐参半的告别 · hold on for just a moment longer 多停留片刻 1. As they hugged, she could feel the reluctance to let go lingering in the air. （当他们拥抱时，她能感觉到空气中那份不舍的情绪。） 2. Her eyes glistened with unshed tears, holding on to the moment a little longer. （她的眼中泛着泪光，舍不得让这一刻就这样过去。） 3. With a bittersweet smile, he waved goodbye, carrying the warmth of family with him. （他带着一丝苦乐参半的微笑挥手告别，心中带着家的温暖。） ④感悟成长类 · grateful for every shared memory 感谢每一段共同的回忆 · learn the meaning of family 明白了亲情的含义 · understand the depth of love 理解爱的深度 · carry their love in one’s heart 将他们的爱铭记心中 句型一：It is through…that… · It is through the quiet resilience and unspoken sacrifices of family that one truly comprehends the profound depth of unconditional love. （正是通过家庭那份无言的坚韧与默默的牺牲，人们才真正领悟到无条件之爱的深邃。） 句型二：The love between… · The love between family members often manifests not in grand gestures but in the subtle, everyday moments that etch themselves into one’s memory, revealing the quiet strength of their bond. （家庭成员间的爱往往不在于宏大的举动，而在于日常生活中那些悄然铭刻在记忆中的点滴，展现出这种纽带的温柔力量。） 句型三：Not until…did… · Not until life’s trials revealed the fragility of time did he perceive the immeasurable value of his family’s steadfast presence. （直到生活的磨难揭示了时间的脆弱，他才意识到家庭始终陪伴的无价之珍。） 句型四：If not for… · If not for the unwavering support and silent sacrifices of family, one might never realize the true scope of human resilience and emotional depth. （若非家庭那份不离不弃的支持与无声的牺牲，或许人们永远不会真正意识到人类的坚韧与情感的深广。） 句型五：What started as…turned into… · What started as mere familial duty evolved into an enduring appreciation of the subtle, binding forces that hold us close through life’s myriad challenges. （起初只是简单的家庭责任，后来却升华为对那股牵系我们、支撑我们度过种种挑战的无形力量的深深感激。） 句型六：Only by…can… · Only by stepping away from the comfort of home can one truly appreciate the immeasurable worth of familial warmth and the silent, ever-present strength it imparts. （唯有离开家中的温暖，人们才能真正领悟到那份亲情之暖的无价，以及它赋予的无声却坚定的力量。） 句型七：Little did…know that… · Little did he know that every small gesture of his family was a testament to an unyielding love that, though often unnoticed, shaped his world profoundly. （他从未想到，家庭的每一个小小举动都是那份不屈不挠之爱的见证，尽管往往被忽视，却深刻地塑造了他的人生。） ①描述亲情场景 As she walked into the room, she saw her mother sitting by the window, knitting a scarf. The soft light of the lamp illuminated her face, filled with love and concern. Her father was in the corner, reading a book, looking up every now and then with a smile. The familiar sight filled her heart with warmth. She realized that no matter where life took her, this was where she belonged, surrounded by the love of her family. （当她走进房间时，她看到母亲坐在窗边，织着一条围巾。柔和的灯光照亮了她的脸，充满了爱和关切。父亲在角落里看书，不时抬头微笑。这熟悉的景象让她心中充满温暖。她意识到，无论生活将她带向何处，这里都是她的归属，被家人的爱所包围。） ②关于亲情互动 They sat around the dinner table, sharing stories and laughter. The aroma of the home-cooked meal filled the air, and the warmth of family love was palpable. As they talked, they realized that these moments were precious, and that the bond they shared would last a lifetime. （他们围坐在餐桌旁，分享着故事和欢笑。家常菜的香气弥漫在空气中，家庭之爱的温暖显而易见。在交谈中，他们意识到这些时刻是珍贵的，他们之间的纽带将持续一生。） (1)表达亲情 1. Family is the harbor where our hearts find peace and love.（家庭是我们心灵找到安宁与爱的港湾。） 2. The love within a family is like a warm fire on a cold winter's night.（家庭中的爱就像寒冷冬夜中的温暖炉火。） 3. Blood is thicker than water, and family bonds are unbreakable.（血浓于水，亲情纽带坚不可摧。） (2)体现亲情力量 1. In times of trouble, family is the pillar that holds us up and gives us strength to carry on.（在困难时期，家庭是支撑我们的支柱，给予我们继续前行的力量。） 2. The power of family love can heal wounds, overcome obstacles, and bring hope in the darkest of times.（亲情的力量可以治愈伤口，克服障碍，在最黑暗的时刻带来希望。） 3. A family's love is a source of endless inspiration and motivation, pushing us to be our best selves.（家庭的爱是无尽的灵感和动力源泉，推动我们成为最好的自己。） 【2021新课标I&II卷】 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右。 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 【2021浙江1月卷】 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year. This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders. My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. ________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【2024-2025学年高三湖北省九师联盟•宜昌市协作体】 少女离家 父亲用爱融化叛逆情结 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。     “Daddy, I want to ask your permission to study in America,” I said to my father a few months before my graduation from high school. But hardly before I finished, he shouted, “No!”     “But why?” I replied. “If you are worried about money, it will be OK since I have got a scholarship...”     But he refused to give in. At the moment, I didn’t know what to say. For more than two years, I had been working very hard to pass all the necessary examinations. I had not told my father because I wanted to give him a pleasant surprise. I thought he would be very proud of me because it was many of my classmates’ parents’ dream to send their children to study abroad.     “Why do I have to get your permission? I am already 18 and I’m not a kid anymore,” I said angrily and rushed to my bedroom, shutting the door violently. Blinded by anger, I found that I could not stay at my hometown any longer. Late that night, I slipped out of the house and decided to take the bus to the railway station to start my own life as far away from my home as possible.     The bus stop was just two blocks away from my home. When I got there, I found that I forgot to take any money with me and missed the last bus. I did not want to go back home, so I sat down on the bench and closed my eyes to have a break.     Suddenly, I was woken up by my phone. I looked around and found the road was deserted and the street was so quiet that I regretted that I had left home in such a hurry. I picked up the phone and answered the phone even without checking the number.     “Have you had a good sleep? It’s going to rain. Shall we go home now?”     注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；     2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。     Paragraph 1: It was my father’s voice! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________     Paragraph 2: I grabbed my bag and hurried toward him. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【长郡中学 2024 年高二第一次月考】 雪中漫步偶遇漂亮红裙子 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The first time we set eyes on the beautiful dress “Big Red”, Father, Mother and I were walking slowly through the freshly fallen snow on our way to Hubble's Hardware store on Main Street.  The colorfully decorated window display held the best toys ever and some other things. And they were all placed pleasantly beneath the breathtaking dress of Big Red. Mother's eyes were glued to the massive flame of red satin（绸缎）, dotted with twinkling stars. “My goodness,” she managed to say in dreamlike wonder. “Would you just look at that dress!” Then, totally out of character, Mother unexpectedly danced on the slippery sidewalk. Beneath the heavy, grey wool coat that she had worn every winter for as long as I could remember, Mother lost her balance and fell clumsily. Father quickly caught her. Her cheeks redder than usual, Mother blamed dad for laughing. “Oh, stop that!” she ordered, as my father swept the snow from her coat. “What a silly dress to be displayed there in the window of Eaton's!” she shook her head in disbelief. “Who on earth would want such a brightly-colored dress? It is too expensive.” As we continued to walk down the street, Mother turned back for one more look. “My goodness! You'd think they'd display something that a person could use!” Christmas was around the corner and the red dress was soon forgotten. Mother was not the one to wish for, or spend money on things that were not practical. “There are things we need more than this,” she'd always say, or,“There are things we need more than that.” Father, on the other hand, liked to buy things whenever the budget allowed. Of course, he'd get a scolding for his occasional spending like this, but it was all done with the best intention. On our last trip to town before Christmas, we were driving up Main Street when Mother suddenly exclaimed in surprise,“Would you just look at that!” She pointed excitedly as Dad drove past Eaton's.“That big red dress is gone,” she said in disbelief.“It's actually gone.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。      Dad looked quickly and smiled,“Yes, it is not there!”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  I'll never forget that Christmas morning when Father handed Mother a box.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$