Unit 6 Travelling around China 单元话题写作（环游中国）满分范文18篇（分层练习）英语沪教版五四学制2024六年级上册

Unit6 Travelling around China 单元话题写作（环游中国）满分范文18篇（分层练习） 1．“读万卷书，行万里路。”某报正在以“An Unforgettable Trip”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文来投稿。 要求： 1. 写一次自己难忘的旅行经历 (去了哪，做了什么，有什么感受)； 2. 适当增加细节，行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、班级和校名。 An Unforgettable Trip ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Your primary school studies are coming to an end. You will have a long holiday. Where are you going for your summer holidays? Can you tell me your travel plan? 要求：内容完整，语句通顺，单词拼写及语法正确，书写规范，不少于40词，文中不得出现校名、姓名等真实信息。 My Travel Plan __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．学校组织一场去山上的school trip，假如你是你们班的班长，请根据提示写一则英语旅行规则及注意事项。 要点： 1. 明天上午8点在校门口集合，不能迟到； 2. 每个人都需要穿运动鞋，在山上行走时不能走道路的边缘。 3. 不能单独行动，不要去危险的地方，带上水和帽子。 要求： 1. 文中应该包括以上信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、校名等； 3. 词数：80词左右。参考词汇：edge 边缘 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．旅行，是一次心灵的放飞。在旅途中，我们能够领略各地的风土人情，感受历史的厚重与文化的多彩。请分享你的一次旅行经历，并谈谈你的感受。要求： 1. 条理清晰、语法准确、内容完整、书写工整； 2. 不少于80词； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是Lucy，去年暑假和父母一起参观了杭州，根据下面提供的信息，以“My Last Summer Holiday”为题，介绍你的杭州之旅以及你的感受。根据提示，写一篇不少于60词的小短文，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：第一天：On the first day； 西湖：The West Lake；第四： fourth 提示： 1. 第一天，参观西湖，拍了许多照片。 2. 第二天，在湖里游泳，非常凉爽。 3. 第三天，野炊，食物很好吃。 4. 第四天，在街上散步，为朋友买了一些礼物。 5. 很累，但很开心。期待着下次再去。 My Last Summer Holiday _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．不管距离远还是近，旅行总能带给人们不同的体验和感受。请用英语讲述自己的一次旅行经历，你是用什么方式记录这次旅行的，并且谈谈你对旅行的意义的理解。 注意： 1. 词数100字左右； 2.内容需要涵盖所给要点，可适当发挥； 3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是校英文公众号的小编辑，负责Travel in China栏目。请你写一篇英语短文介绍一个你游览过的地方并发布在公众号上。 内容包括： (1) 地理位置和气候； (2) 景点和美食。 作文要求： (1) 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和人名； (2) 语句连贯，词数80左右；短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear readers, Let me introduce a beautiful city I have been to many times to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是北京的李华，你的好朋友戴夫(Dave)听说北京动物园新添了一些动物，为此想让你写信告诉他北京动物园新成员的情况以及北京动物园的规则。请你根据以下提示信息和要求，给戴夫写一封信介绍北京动物园的相关情况。 提示： 1. 动物：来自非洲的长颈鹿，有点腼腆；来自泰国的大象，友好；来自澳大利亚的考拉，有点懒。 2. 规则：请勿带宠物到动物园；请勿投喂(feed)动物；请勿在河里游泳。 要求： 1. 包括提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清晰、语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 词数80左右(信件格式及开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Dave, How are you? Now I want to tell you something about Beijing Zoo. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．暑假即将来临，Kate打算和家人一起去旅游，所以她去旅行社咨询了一下。假设你是旅行社的一名职员，请你根据表格中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，给她一些建议。 要求：1. 不少于60词(开头已经给出，不计入总词数)；2. 语句通顺、语法正确。 Things Katewants to do Advice (建议) Reasons (理由) see the sea Dalian seaside (海边) city；ocean parks know about Chinese history Beijing many places of interest like the Palace Museum go shopping Shanghai large shopping malls (商场) 　　Now I can give you some advice. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假如你叫李雷，端午节(Dragon Boat Festival)你和家人外出旅游，玩得很开心。请根据以下内容提示，以“A Great Trip”为题，从天气、地点以及你的见闻等方面介绍这次旅行。 内容提示： 1. How was the weather? 2. Where did you go? 3. What did you do there? Something more about the trip. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校，词数100，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 A Great Trip Hello, I’m Li Lei! I will share my great trip with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．Jane正在云南旅游。她在云南的美景中流连忘返。请你根据写作要求，帮助Jane给她的朋友Maria写一张明信片，告诉Maria她的旅游经历和感受。 写作要求： 1）说明你（Jane）现在在哪里旅游，那里的天气怎样； 2）谈谈你（Jane）的旅游经历，以及你的感受和心情； 3）语言表达准确，短文通顺连贯，书写规范整洁； 4）根据要点适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 5）词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Maria, How are you doing? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all is well with you! Yours, Jane 12．作为网红城市，长沙以其可口的食物、适宜的天气、多样的活动、友好的人民，深受大家的喜爱。到南门口吃粉喝奶茶、到动物园看熊猫、逛湖南博物院、甚至到坡子街派出所拍照打卡等，都是年轻人热衷的事情。假如你是李华，也是长沙的“铁粉”，正在长沙游览，请给你的表妹Lucy写一封信，说说这几天你在长沙的经历与感受。 要求： （1）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）提示内容仅供参考，不要逐句翻译；可自由发挥； （3）注意根据内容分段，可适当增加细节使行文连贯； （4）文中不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名； （5）书写工整，不得使用涂改液和修正带。 参考词汇：米粉 rice noodles Dear Lucy, I’m very excited to tell you something about a must-visit city, Changsha. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 13．假如你是李华，你想告诉你的英国笔友Mike上周日去参观陶瓷博物馆的经历和感受，请你根据以下图示，给他写一封邮件。词数80词左右。 1. 参考词汇：porcelain 陶瓷 2. 温馨提示： ①必须包含所有要点信息，可适当发挥； ②开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； ③请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear Mike, How are you doing? I would like to tell you something about my wonderful trip.   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes to you! Yours, Li Hua 14．21世纪英文报正在举办以“My Trip to ________”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，根据以下提示与要求，用英语写一篇短文来投稿，分享自己难忘的旅行经历。 提示: 1. When and where did you go? 2. Who did you go with? And how did you go there? 3. What did you do there? 4. How did you feel about your trip? 要求：1.词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2.语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范； 3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．习近平总书记曾说：“让旅游成为人们感悟中华文化、增强文化自信的过程”。为此，重庆一中举办了“领略自然之美、感悟文化之美”的英文主题演讲比赛。请你作为参赛选手，写一篇演讲稿，介绍曾经的旅行见闻和感悟，并号召同学们一起行走在广袤的美丽中国大地上，感受千年文脉的深厚底蕴。 要求： 1.80-120词。 2.文中不能出现自己的名字和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Hello, everyone. As the famous old saying goes, “Read thousands of books and travel thousands of miles.”_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．同学，请分享一下你的旅游经历吧！你去过哪里？什么时候去的？和谁一起去的？怎么去的？都做了什么有趣的事情？玩得开心吗？请以“My Travel”为题，写一篇60词左右的作文。 要求：1．不要出现真实姓名和学校名称；2．包含所给要点。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．假如你是李明，去年暑假爸爸妈妈带你去了北京旅游，请你根据下列表格提示写篇英语短文，介绍一下你的旅游经历。 行程 我和爸爸、妈妈去了北京 参观了天安门广场，国家博物馆，在北海公园划船 去了老舍茶馆，了解了老舍的生命历程： 吃了美味的食物，并给爷爷奶奶买了礼物。 感受 …… 提示词： 天安门广场 Tiananmen Square；国家博物馆 National Museum；北海公园 Beihai Park 划船 go boating；老舍茶馆 Lao She Teahouse；骆驼祥子 Camel Xiangzi 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于60词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 My Trip to Beijing My name is Li Ming. Last summer vacation, I had a trip to Beijing with my parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．暑期即将来临，如何度过一个丰富多彩又有意义的假期呢？烟台广播发起 “北大清华研学游” 的活动，下面是活动的相关内容。请根据下面的提示，用英语描述一下此次研学活动。 研学地点： 北京 研学时长：5天 研学对象：8-18岁青少年 活动安排 1. 参观北京大学、清华大学； 2. 聆听教授精彩的课程； 3. 与学霸面对面，听他们分享学习经验和成长的故事； 4. 参观博物馆，了解中国历史和文化； 5. 游览圆明园，以史为鉴，奋发图强。 参考词汇：study tour 研学旅行  Peking University 北京大学  Tsinghua University 清华大学  professor 教授  top students 学霸  museum 博物馆  the Old Summer Palace 圆明园 要求: 1. 写作包含以上内容提示，可适当发挥； 2. 意思连贯、通顺，条理清楚； 3. 80词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Join Our Study Tour! Summer Vacation is coming. How to spend a colorful and meaningful holiday? Yantai Broadcasting has launched a study tour activity to Peking University and Tsinghua University. Here are the relevant details (相关细节) of this activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 7 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit6 Travelling around China 单元话题写作（环游中国）满分范文18篇（分层练习） 1．“读万卷书，行万里路。”某报正在以“An Unforgettable Trip”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文来投稿。 要求： 1. 写一次自己难忘的旅行经历 (去了哪，做了什么，有什么感受)； 2. 适当增加细节，行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、班级和校名。 An Unforgettable Trip ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An Unforgettable Trip I had a wonderful trip in Beijing last summer holiday. I arrived there by train with my parents. The weather was sunny and fine. We stayed in Beijing for seven days. We visited some places of interest. We went to Tian’anmen Square to watch the national flag go up in the early morning. We also went to the Great Wall. It was exciting. We also took many photos and ate Beijing Roast Duck. It was very nice. It was really a fantastic trip, which I’ll never forget. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要求”中自己难忘的旅行经历的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出自己有一次难忘经历的旅行的话题； 第二步，具体阐述这次旅行去了哪，做了什么； 第三步，书写结语，表达旅行后的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest景点 ②take photos拍照 ③go up上升 [高分句型] ①It was really a fantastic trip, which I’ll never forget. (which 引导非限制定语从句) 2．Your primary school studies are coming to an end. You will have a long holiday. Where are you going for your summer holidays? Can you tell me your travel plan? 要求：内容完整，语句通顺，单词拼写及语法正确，书写规范，不少于40词，文中不得出现校名、姓名等真实信息。 My Travel Plan __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Travel Plan Hello, everyone. I’m Gao Wei. I’m 13. Let me tell you about my travel plan. I am going to Beijing with my parents. We are going there by plane. We are going to stay there for two days. On the first day, we are going to visit the Great Wall. It is the longest wall in the world. On the second day, we are going to visit Beihai Park. I hear it is a very big park. We will have a good time. This is my travel plan. How about yours? Can you tell me about your travel plan? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为一般将来时； ③提示：本文主要是介绍自己的旅行计划，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍自己的旅行计划； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①by plane坐飞机 ②have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] I hear it is a very big park. (宾语从句) 3．学校组织一场去山上的school trip，假如你是你们班的班长，请根据提示写一则英语旅行规则及注意事项。 要点： 1. 明天上午8点在校门口集合，不能迟到； 2. 每个人都需要穿运动鞋，在山上行走时不能走道路的边缘。 3. 不能单独行动，不要去危险的地方，带上水和帽子。 要求： 1. 文中应该包括以上信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、校名等； 3. 词数：80词左右。参考词汇：edge 边缘 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! Tomorrow we’ll go for a school trip in the mountains. We will get together at the school gate at 8:00 in the morning. Don’t be late. Before we start, there are some rules for you. First, everyone should wear sports shoes. Second, when you walk in the mountains, you mustn’t walk to the edge of the path. Third, you must walk together or you’ll get lost. Don’t go to dangerous places. Fourth, bring some water and a hat with you. The weather is hot tomorrow. Hope everyone can have a good trip. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”与“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍旅行规则及注意事项”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，介绍明天有学校旅行； 第二步，根据题干给出的要点，介绍旅行的规则和注意事项； 第三步，希望大家都能玩得开心，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①get together在一起 ②in the morning在上午 [高分句型] ①Second, when you walk in the mountains, you mustn’t walk to the edge of the path.（when引导时间状语从句） ②Don’t go to dangerous places.（祈使句） 4．旅行，是一次心灵的放飞。在旅途中，我们能够领略各地的风土人情，感受历史的厚重与文化的多彩。请分享你的一次旅行经历，并谈谈你的感受。要求： 1. 条理清晰、语法准确、内容完整、书写工整； 2. 不少于80词； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Taking a trip is interesting and relaxing. Trips can make our life colorful. Last summer vacation, my parents took me to Dalian for vacation. It was sunny. We went there by train and saw some farms and villages along the way. After we arrived at Dalian, we went to the beach. We put up a tent and played volleyball on the beach. It was exciting. But the sun was so big that we felt very hot. So we swam in the sea. It was cool and relaxing. At night, we enjoyed so much delicious seafood and watched beautiful stars in the sky. What a wonderful vacation! I would like to go there again. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中的要求，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“旅行的好处”来引出下文中对旅行经历的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间地点和旅行活动”两方面入手，重点介绍自己的旅行经历； ③第三步，书写结语。这次旅行十分愉快。 [亮点词汇] ①arrive at 到达 ②put up 搭建 ③so...that 如此……以致于 [高分句型] ①What a wonderful vacation!（what引导的感叹句） 5．假如你是Lucy，去年暑假和父母一起参观了杭州，根据下面提供的信息，以“My Last Summer Holiday”为题，介绍你的杭州之旅以及你的感受。根据提示，写一篇不少于60词的小短文，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：第一天：On the first day； 西湖：The West Lake；第四： fourth 提示： 1. 第一天，参观西湖，拍了许多照片。 2. 第二天，在湖里游泳，非常凉爽。 3. 第三天，野炊，食物很好吃。 4. 第四天，在街上散步，为朋友买了一些礼物。 5. 很累，但很开心。期待着下次再去。 My Last Summer Holiday _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Last Summer Holiday I visited Hang Zhou with my parents last summer vacation. We had a great time there. Hang Zhou is one of the most beautiful cities in our country. We visited the West Lake and took many photos there on the first day. I swam in the lake the next day and it was very cool. We had a picnic on the third day. How delicious the food was! I walked on the street and bought some gifts for my friends on the fourth day. I left Hang Zhou, feeling tired, but happy. I am looking forward to going there again. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。 ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你的杭州之旅的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“以“My Last Summer Holiday”为题，介绍你的杭州之旅以及你的感受。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“参观的地点、自己的活动、感受等”几个方面重点介绍你的杭州之旅的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“期望再次去那里”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①have a great time玩得高兴； ②take photos拍照； ③buy sth for sb给某人买某物； ④look forward to期望。 [高分句型] ①Hang Zhou is one of the most beautiful cities in our country. (“one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”句型) ②How delicious the food was! (感叹句) 6．不管距离远还是近，旅行总能带给人们不同的体验和感受。请用英语讲述自己的一次旅行经历，你是用什么方式记录这次旅行的，并且谈谈你对旅行的意义的理解。 注意： 1. 词数100字左右； 2.内容需要涵盖所给要点，可适当发挥； 3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: Travelling can give us time to think, learn and grow. It also helps us discover inner strength and get a whole new outlook on the world. What impressed me most is the last summer’s trip to Beijing with my parents. To watch the raising of the national flag, we got up at 3 o’clock in the morning. However, when we got to Tian’anmen Square, we found a lot of people there. We waited patiently. As the music was played, we couldn’t help singing along with the national anthem. Watching the rising flag, the sense of national pride and love for the country came into my heart. I couldn’t stop taking many photos and posted them with a sentence on my Weibo account, “The world is a book, and those who do not travel read only a page.” 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：题目要求根据提示介绍一次自己的旅行经历，并谈谈此次旅行的意义。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。 [写作步聚] 第一步，开篇切入主题； 第二步，描述一次自己的旅行经历，以及对这次旅行的记录方式； 第三步，最后谈旅行感受。 [亮点词汇] ①the raising of the national flag 升国旗 ②get to 到达 ③can’t help doing 忍不住做某事 [高分句型] ①Travelling can give us time to think, learn and grow.（动名词作主语） ②To watch the raising of the national flag, we got up at 3 o’clock in the morning.（动词不定式作目的状语） 7．假如你是校英文公众号的小编辑，负责Travel in China栏目。请你写一篇英语短文介绍一个你游览过的地方并发布在公众号上。 内容包括： (1) 地理位置和气候； (2) 景点和美食。 作文要求： (1) 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和人名； (2) 语句连贯，词数80左右；短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear readers, Let me introduce a beautiful city I have been to many times to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Dear readers, Let me introduce a beautiful city I have been to many times to you. Jinan is an ancient city in the east of China. The weather there is completely different in different seasons. It’s dry in spring while it’s rainy in summer. And it’s cool in autumn while it’s cold in winter. There are lots of places to visit in Jinan, such as Baotu Spring, Qianfo Mountain and Daming Lake. If you want to enjoy delicious food there, you can try Shandong-style Pork Shreds and Shandong pancakes. It is one of the most popular cities in China, so you can’t miss it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容”中你游览过的地方的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出介绍某个城市的话题； 第二步，具体阐述这个城市位置，气候，景点和美食； 第三步，书写结语。希望大家可以去这个城市游玩。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of许多 ②such as例如 ③ in the east of在……的东部 [高分句型] ①If you want to enjoy delicious food there, you can try Shandong-style Pork Shreds and Shandong pancakes. (if引导的条件状语从句) ②It is one of the most popular cities in China, so you can’t miss it.(固定句型“one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数形式”) 8．假如你是北京的李华，你的好朋友戴夫(Dave)听说北京动物园新添了一些动物，为此想让你写信告诉他北京动物园新成员的情况以及北京动物园的规则。请你根据以下提示信息和要求，给戴夫写一封信介绍北京动物园的相关情况。 提示： 1. 动物：来自非洲的长颈鹿，有点腼腆；来自泰国的大象，友好；来自澳大利亚的考拉，有点懒。 2. 规则：请勿带宠物到动物园；请勿投喂(feed)动物；请勿在河里游泳。 要求： 1. 包括提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清晰、语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 词数80左右(信件格式及开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Dave, How are you? Now I want to tell you something about Beijing Zoo. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Dave, How are you? Now I want to tell you something about Beijing Zoo. Some new animal friends come to the zoo. They’re a giraffe，an elephant and a koala. The giraffe is from Africa. She’s kind of shy. The elephant comes from Thailand. He’s really friendly. The koala is from Australia. He’s a little lazy and he sleeps all day. There are some rules in the zoo. First, don’t take your pets to the zoo. Second, don’t feed animals. Third, there’s a river in the zoo and you can’t swim in it. But you can take photos by the river. Follow the rules, and I’m sure you can have fun in the zoo. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，介绍北京动物园新成员； 第二步，介绍北京动物园的规则。 [亮点词汇] ①friendly友好的 ②feed animals喂动物 ③take photos拍照 [高分句型] Follow the rules, and I’m sure you can have fun in the zoo.（宾语从句） 9．暑假即将来临，Kate打算和家人一起去旅游，所以她去旅行社咨询了一下。假设你是旅行社的一名职员，请你根据表格中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，给她一些建议。 要求：1. 不少于60词(开头已经给出，不计入总词数)；2. 语句通顺、语法正确。 Things Katewants to do Advice (建议) Reasons (理由) see the sea Dalian seaside (海边) city；ocean parks know about Chinese history Beijing many places of interest like the Palace Museum go shopping Shanghai large shopping malls (商场) 　　Now I can give you some advice. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Now I can give you some advice. If you want to see the sea, you can go to Dalian because it’s a seaside city. There are great ocean parks there, and you can see many animal shows. If you want to know about Chinese history, you can go to Beijing. There are many places of interest like the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace. If you want to go shopping, you can go to Shanghai. There are many large shopping malls there. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，依据要点，依次写出自己的建议； 第二步，写出自己建议的理由。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest名胜古迹 ②go shopping购物 [高分句型] There are great ocean parks there, and you can see many animal shows.（there be句型） 10．假如你叫李雷，端午节(Dragon Boat Festival)你和家人外出旅游，玩得很开心。请根据以下内容提示，以“A Great Trip”为题，从天气、地点以及你的见闻等方面介绍这次旅行。 内容提示： 1. How was the weather? 2. Where did you go? 3. What did you do there? Something more about the trip. 注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校，词数100，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 A Great Trip Hello, I’m Li Lei! I will share my great trip with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Great Trip Hello, I’m Li Lei! I will share my great trip with you. On Dragon Boat Festival, I visited a farm with my parents. We went there by car. The weather was fine. When we got there, we saw some birds. They were flying and singing happily. In the morning, I went fishing with my father. It was very interesting. And I also fed chickens with my mother. They were very lovely. We had a big lunch at noon. In the afternoon, we picked up many fresh strawberries and vegetables there, and then took them back home. We all enjoyed ourselves. I am glad to spend the festival with my family. What a happy and great trip! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要是一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍这次旅行； 第二步，从“天气、地点、做了什么”等方面介绍这次旅行； 第三步，再次表明这是一次很棒的旅行。 [亮点词汇] ①happily高兴地 ②interesting有趣的 ③lovely可爱的 ④pick up采摘 [高分句型] ①When we got there, we saw some birds.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②What a happy and great trip!（what引导的感叹句） 11．Jane正在云南旅游。她在云南的美景中流连忘返。请你根据写作要求，帮助Jane给她的朋友Maria写一张明信片，告诉Maria她的旅游经历和感受。 写作要求： 1）说明你（Jane）现在在哪里旅游，那里的天气怎样； 2）谈谈你（Jane）的旅游经历，以及你的感受和心情； 3）语言表达准确，短文通顺连贯，书写规范整洁； 4）根据要点适当发挥，不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 5）词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Maria, How are you doing? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all is well with you! Yours, Jane 【答案】例文 Dear Maria, How are you doing? I am having a wonderful trip in Yunnan. I arrived here by plane with my family on Monday. The weather is sunny and warm there. Yesterday I visited some places, such as Lijiang and Dali. We also took some photos. The food here is very different from our food. I enjoy the delicious food. People here are very kind and help us find our way. I hope you can come and celebrate the Spring Festival with us next year. I hope all is well with you! Yours, Jane 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你现在在哪里旅游，那里的天气怎样； 第二步，介绍你的旅游经历，以及你的感受和心情； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②take some photos拍些照片 ③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] I hope you can come and celebrate the Spring Festival with us next year.（宾语从句） 12．作为网红城市，长沙以其可口的食物、适宜的天气、多样的活动、友好的人民，深受大家的喜爱。到南门口吃粉喝奶茶、到动物园看熊猫、逛湖南博物院、甚至到坡子街派出所拍照打卡等，都是年轻人热衷的事情。假如你是李华，也是长沙的“铁粉”，正在长沙游览，请给你的表妹Lucy写一封信，说说这几天你在长沙的经历与感受。 要求： （1）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）提示内容仅供参考，不要逐句翻译；可自由发挥； （3）注意根据内容分段，可适当增加细节使行文连贯； （4）文中不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名； （5）书写工整，不得使用涂改液和修正带。 参考词汇：米粉 rice noodles Dear Lucy, I’m very excited to tell you something about a must-visit city, Changsha. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Lucy, I’m very excited to tell you something about a must-visit city, Changsha. Changsha is located in the northeast of Hunan Province. It has a history of more than 3, 000 years. There are many famous attractions here. I went to the wonderful Orange Island on the first day. It is very attractive and there are many visitors who come to visit it every year. There are also many delicacies, such as stinky tofu. It stinks but tastes good. The people here are also very friendly. When I stay in Changsha, no matter what difficulties I meet, there will be someone to help me. I am having a good time in Changsha. Hope you can have a chance to come here. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己在长沙的经历与感受，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍自己在长沙的经历与感受； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be located in坐落于 ②such as例如 ③have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①It is very attractive and there are many visitors who come to visit it every year. (who引导的定语从句) ②When I stay in Changsha, no matter what difficulties I meet, there will be someone to help me. (when引导的时间状语从句) 13．假如你是李华，你想告诉你的英国笔友Mike上周日去参观陶瓷博物馆的经历和感受，请你根据以下图示，给他写一封邮件。词数80词左右。 1. 参考词汇：porcelain 陶瓷 2. 温馨提示： ①必须包含所有要点信息，可适当发挥； ②开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； ③请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear Mike, How are you doing? I would like to tell you something about my wonderful trip.   __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes to you! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, How are you doing? I would like to tell you something about my wonderful trip. It was nice and sunny last Sunday. My classmates and I went to Dehua Porcelain Museum for a visit. We went there on foot. After about half an hour, we got to the museum. Our teacher told us some rules. We walked around and learnt about the history of porcelain. Then we learnt how to make porcelain. We also took some photos there. After that, we went back. The trip was interesting and we learnt a lot from it. We were all very happy. Best wishes to you! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，告诉英国笔友Mike上周日的经历； 第二步，介绍去参观陶瓷博物馆的活动内容等； 第三步，写出对此经历的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to 想要…… ②the history of porcelain 瓷器的历史 ③take photos 拍照 [高分句型] Then we learnt how to make porcelain. （特殊疑问词how+动词不定式） 14．21世纪英文报正在举办以“My Trip to ________”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，根据以下提示与要求，用英语写一篇短文来投稿，分享自己难忘的旅行经历。 提示: 1. When and where did you go? 2. Who did you go with? And how did you go there? 3. What did you do there? 4. How did you feel about your trip? 要求：1.词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2.语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范； 3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Trip to Beijing Last year, I went to Beijing with my parents in the summer vacation. We went there by plane. We visited the wonderful Forbidden City and Summer Palace, climbed the Great Wall, and walked through Tiananmen Square. What’s more, we watched the raising of the national flag in the early morning. The food in Beijing was also amazing. I liked delicious Peking duck and lamb hotpot. My trip to Beijing was an unforgettable experience that I will cherish for a lifetime. It was a journey that not only filled my eyes with wonder but also touched my heart. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，介绍旅行的时间，地点和人物； 第二步，具体阐述在这次旅行中都做了什么； 第三步，谈谈自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①walk through穿过 ②the raising of the national flag国旗的升起 ③not only...but also不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①My trip to Beijing was an unforgettable experience that I will cherish for a lifetime. (定语从句) 15．习近平总书记曾说：“让旅游成为人们感悟中华文化、增强文化自信的过程”。为此，重庆一中举办了“领略自然之美、感悟文化之美”的英文主题演讲比赛。请你作为参赛选手，写一篇演讲稿，介绍曾经的旅行见闻和感悟，并号召同学们一起行走在广袤的美丽中国大地上，感受千年文脉的深厚底蕴。 要求： 1.80-120词。 2.文中不能出现自己的名字和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： Hello, everyone. As the famous old saying goes, “Read thousands of books and travel thousands of miles.”_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone. As the famous old saying goes, “Read thousands of books and travel thousands of miles.” I had an unforgettable trip. Last summer vacation, I went to Chengdu with my parents. We got there by plane. It took us about 2 hours to get there. On the first day, we tasted the famous hot pot. It was very spicy but delicious. On the second day, we went to the Temple of Marquis to learn more about Chinese history. On the third day, we went shopping. We felt tired but happy. From this trip, I learn a lot about local culture. I think taking a trip can make us eat delicious food and know more about Chinese culture. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；   ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，用一句谚语来介绍自己的难忘旅行；   第二步，介绍自己去成都的旅行； 第三步，介绍从这段旅行中所学到的东西以及自己对旅行的看法。 [亮点词汇]   ①by plane乘坐飞机   ②learn about了解 [高分句型]   ①It took us about 2 hours to get there.（动词不定式作主语） 16．同学，请分享一下你的旅游经历吧！你去过哪里？什么时候去的？和谁一起去的？怎么去的？都做了什么有趣的事情？玩得开心吗？请以“My Travel”为题，写一篇60词左右的作文。 要求：1．不要出现真实姓名和学校名称；2．包含所给要点。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Travel Last summer, I went to Beijing with my family. We traveled by train. In Beijing, we visited the Great Wall, which was very impressive. We also explored the Forbidden City and ate delicious local food. In the evenings, we enjoyed the city lights and took many photos. I had a wonderful time during this trip. It was truly memorable and exciting. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文为一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：作文需要描述旅游经历，涉及去过的地点、时间、同行者、交通方式、有趣的活动及感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍旅游的时间、地点及同行者； 第二步，说明交通方式； 第三步，描述旅游中的活动及感受。 [亮点词汇] ① by train 坐火车 ② have a wonderful time 玩得开心 [高分句型] We visited the Great Wall, which was very impressive. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 17．假如你是李明，去年暑假爸爸妈妈带你去了北京旅游，请你根据下列表格提示写篇英语短文，介绍一下你的旅游经历。 行程 我和爸爸、妈妈去了北京 参观了天安门广场，国家博物馆，在北海公园划船 去了老舍茶馆，了解了老舍的生命历程： 吃了美味的食物，并给爷爷奶奶买了礼物。 感受 …… 提示词： 天安门广场 Tiananmen Square；国家博物馆 National Museum；北海公园 Beihai Park 划船 go boating；老舍茶馆 Lao She Teahouse；骆驼祥子 Camel Xiangzi 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于60词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。 My Trip to Beijing My name is Li Ming. Last summer vacation, I had a trip to Beijing with my parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My trip to Beijing My name is Li Ming. Last summer vacation, I had a trip to Beijing with my parents. Now let me tell you something about the trip. I went to Beijing with my parents by train. And we visited many places of interest, such as Tiananmen Square, the National Museum and Beihai Park. And in Beihai Park, we went boating. It was great fun! We also went to Lao She Teahouse and learnt a lot about Lao She. He was born in Beijing in 1899. Then he became a teacher in 1916. Five years later, he was in a newspaper. And then he went to England and taught Chinese in 1924. Later, he came back to China in 1929. He married in 1931 and died in 1966. Two of his famous works are Camel Xiangzi and Lao She Teahouse. We also had some delicious local food, such as Beijing Duck. And we bought some gifts for my grandparents before we left. Though the trip was short, I felt very happy. Beijing is a wonderful place. I think I will go there again. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，开门见山，引出话题：介绍去年暑假去北京的经历。 第二步，介绍去北京的方式和参观的景点； 第三步，重点介绍老舍的生命历程； 第四步，品尝美食以及其他活动； 第五步，表达感受。 ［亮点词汇］ ① many places of interest 许多名胜古迹 ② such as 例如 ［高分句型］ ① Though the trip was short, I felt very happy.  (though引导让步状语从句) ② I think I will go there again. (宾语从句) 18．暑期即将来临，如何度过一个丰富多彩又有意义的假期呢？烟台广播发起 “北大清华研学游” 的活动，下面是活动的相关内容。请根据下面的提示，用英语描述一下此次研学活动。 研学地点： 北京 研学时长：5天 研学对象：8-18岁青少年 活动安排 1. 参观北京大学、清华大学； 2. 聆听教授精彩的课程； 3. 与学霸面对面，听他们分享学习经验和成长的故事； 4. 参观博物馆，了解中国历史和文化； 5. 游览圆明园，以史为鉴，奋发图强。 参考词汇：study tour 研学旅行  Peking University 北京大学  Tsinghua University 清华大学  professor 教授  top students 学霸  museum 博物馆  the Old Summer Palace 圆明园 要求: 1. 写作包含以上内容提示，可适当发挥； 2. 意思连贯、通顺，条理清楚； 3. 80词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Join Our Study Tour! Summer Vacation is coming. How to spend a colorful and meaningful holiday? Yantai Broadcasting has launched a study tour activity to Peking University and Tsinghua University. Here are the relevant details (相关细节) of this activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文                                                                                    Join Our Study Tour!           Summer Vacation is coming. How to spend a colorful and meaningful holiday? Yantai Broadcasting has launched a study tour activity to Peking University and Tsinghua University. Here are the relevant details (相关细节) of this activity.           Our study tour is for young students aged 8 to 18 and will be held in Beijing for 5 exciting days! You’ll get to visit the famous Peking University and Tsinghua University, where you can listen to brilliant professors teach amazing lessons. You’ll also meet top students who will share their stories of learning and growth.We have planned visits to museums to explore the rich history and culture of China. Plus, we’ll take a trip to the Old Summer Palace to learn from history and be inspired to work hard for a better future.           Come and join us for a holiday full of fun, learning, and adventure! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，介绍研学活动内容; ②时态：主要是一般现在时和一般将来时; ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意先补全开头，并结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全开头； 第二步，描述研学活动五天安排； 第三步，呼吁大家来参加研学活动。 [亮点词汇] ①exciting days 令人兴奋的日子 ②brilliant professors 杰出的教授 ③amazing lessons  惊人的课程 ④rich history and culture 丰富的历史和文化 [高分句型] ①Our study tour is for young students aged 8 to 18 and will be held in Beijing for 5 exciting days! (一般将来时的被动语态） ② You'll also meet top students who will share their stories of learning and growth. (who引导的定语从句) ③ We have planned visits to museums to explore the rich history and culture of China. (动词不定式表目的) 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 7 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$