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专题14 书面表达（紧贴新教材主题，满分范文15篇） 1．一部好的电影， 会让你受到深刻的教育，会使你久久难忘， 你一定看过很多部电影吧？今天， 请你以“My Favorite Movie”为题， 介绍你最喜欢的电影。 要求： 1 语言通顺，意思连贯， 书写规范。 2 词数80词左右。 3 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 My Favorite Movie ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My favorite Movie My favorite movie is Kung Fu Panda. It is a cartoon movie. The movie tells the story of a common panda named Po. He did not have a single skill, but he practiced Kung Fu with his master. He never gave up easily. Finally, he learned good Kung Fu and beat Tiger Taro. It is a funny but meaningful movie. I will never forget it because I learn a lot from it. Like Po, I should believe in myself. I should also work hard and never give up. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文，为记叙文； ② 时态：一般现在时和一般过去时； ③ 提示：主要介绍最喜欢的电影及其启示。介绍电影内容部分用一般过去时。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍我最喜欢的电影是《功夫熊猫》； 第二步，介绍《功夫熊猫》的故事大意； 第三步，介绍《功夫熊猫》给我的启示。 [亮点词汇] ① a single skill 一技之长 ② gave up 放弃 ③ funny but meaningful 滑稽但有意义 ④ believe in myself 相信自己 [高分句型] I will never forget it because I learn a lot from it.（原因状语从句） The movie tells the story of a common panda named Po.（后置定语） 2．Write a passage of at least 60 words based on the situation below. 生活中，每个人都会遇到各种各样的挑战和问题，只要我们积极面对，一切问题都能解决，我们也能从中得到成长。请以“My problem (我的问题)”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 (注意：文中不得出现人名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分) Suggested questions: 1. What problem did you have？ 2. When did it happen? 3. What did you do to solve the problem? 4. How did you feel? My problem __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My problem Once I had a problem with my math homework. It happened last week when I was trying to solve a difficult problem. I felt confused and didn’t know what to do. To solve the problem, I decided to ask my mom for help. She explained the steps to me patiently. I listened carefully and tried to understand. After that, I practiced similar problems on my own. I felt happy and relieved when I finally solved it. It made me realize that if I face problems positively, I can overcome them and learn from them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述个人经历； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”，因为讲述的是过去发生的事情； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括遇到的问题、发生的时间、解决问题的方法以及解决后的感受，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节来丰富文章内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题。指出自己遇到的问题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。按照以下四个方面详细描述：What problem did you have?（遇到的问题是什么）；When did it happen?（问题发生的时间）；What did you do to solve the problem?（如何解决问题的）；How did you feel?（你的感受）； 第三步，书写感受。描述在解决问题后的心情和收获。 [亮点词汇] ①have a problem with在……方面有问题 ②try to do sth. 尝试做某事 ③explain sth. to sb. 向某人解释某事 ④overcome them 克服困难 [高分句型] ①It happened last week when I was trying to solve a difficult problem.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I felt happy and relieved when I finally solved it.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③It made me realize that if I face problems positively, I can overcome them and learn from them.（that引导的宾语从句，其中包含if引导的条件状语从句） 3．Suppose you are Jack. You have just received a letter from your pen friend, Tom. Please reply to Tom, telling him about your dream job and what you will do to realize your dream.（假设你是Jack，请给你的笔友Tom写一封回信，告诉他你梦想的工作以及你会怎么做去实现它） _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, I’m so happy to hear from you! I want to share my dream job with you. I want to be a scientist who studies the environment. I love nature and want to help protect it. To become a scientist, I’m studying hard in school. I’m learning about science and how to take care of the environment. I also help out in my community by cleaning up parks and beaches. I know it will take time and hard work, but I’m ready for the challenge. I want to make a difference to the world. That’s all. I hope you are doing well and have exciting plans for your future, too. Best regards, Jack 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明写信目的——分享自己的梦想的工作； 第二步，介绍打算如何去实现这一梦想； 第三步，收尾，表达对对方的祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①want to do想要做某事 ②take care of照顾 ③make a difference to...对……有积极影响 [高分句型] ①I want to be a scientist who studies the environment.（who引导的定语从句） ②To become a scientist, I’m studying hard in school.（动词不定式作目的状语） 4．每个人都有自己的梦想 (dream)，你以后想要从事什么职业呢？请你根据以下要点和要求，以“I Want to Be a(n) ________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下自己以后想要从事的职业。 要点： 1. 你以后想从事什么职业； 2. 你为什么想从事这个职业； 3. 为了实现你的梦想，你现在需要做些什么。 要求： 1. 请把题目补充完整。短文应包含提示的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级、姓名等信息； 3. 词数80左右。 I Want to Be a(n) ________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I Want to Be a Teacher I want to be a teacher one day. Why? Because I want to be a good teacher like my father. My father is a Chinese teacher. He reads books every day and he knows a lot. He teaches very well. He is kind to his students, so his students all like him very much. Being a teacher is my dream because of my father. To be a teacher, I need to study hard now. I will read many books. I’m sure where there is a will, there is a way. I hope my dream can come true one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己以后想从事的职业； 第二步，具体阐述自己想从事这个职业的原因； 第三步，介绍如何实现自己的梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①be kind to sb.对某人友好 ②because of因为 ③study hard努力学习 [高分句型] ①He is kind to his students, so his students all like him very much.（so引导的结果状语从句） ②I hope my dream can come true one day.（省略that的宾语从句） 5．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境，写一篇不少于60词的短文，要求语句正确通顺，内容连贯，标点符号不占格。) 想一想你未来想从事什么工作，阐述理由以及如何实现它。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I want to be a police officer. I see police officer standing in front of our school to keep students safe every morning and afternoon. I feel proud and safe. I want to be a police officer like them in the future. I will try my best to catch the bad and keep people safe. I will do more exercise to keep strong. I will also study hard to make my dream come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：语句正确通顺，内容连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明未来想从事什么工作。 第二步，阐述理由以及如何实现它。 [亮点词汇] ①want to be想成为 ②in front of在……前面 ③in the future 将来 ④come true实现 [高分句型] ①I see police officer standing in front of our school to keep students safe every morning and afternoon.（现在分词短语作宾语补足语） ②I will also study hard to make my dream come true.（动词不定式表目的） 6．请根据提示用英语写一篇80词左右的文章来介绍你的家乡——桂林（Guilin）。 1. 桂林位于广西（Guangxi）的北部，因为青山绿水而闻名，是度假胜地。 2. 桂林有两千多年悠久的历史，现在有五百万人口，比以前更大、更繁华，正变得越来越美丽。 3. 每年世界各地成千上万的游客来参观桂林。他们参观公园和动物园、游览漓江（visit Li River by boat）、购物、欣赏这里秀丽的风景（scenery）。 要求： 1. 内容应包括所有要点，可适当增加一些细节； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 3. 词数不少于80。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Guilin is my hometown. It is in the north of Guangxi. It is famous for the green hills and clean rivers. It is a popular city for holidays. Guilin has a long history of more than 2,000 years. Now, it has a population of five million. It is much bigger and busier than before. It is getting more and more beautiful. Thousands of people from all over the world come to visit Guilin every year. They visit parks and zoos here, visit Li River by boat, go shopping and enjoy the beautiful scenery here. Welcome to my hometown! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：为“一般现在时”； ③提示：内容提示已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍家乡桂林的相关信息，包括地理位置、其闻名的原因； 第二步，介绍桂林的历史、人口、城市的现况以及与旅游相关的情况； 第三步，表示欢迎大家来桂林游玩。 [亮点词汇] ① be famous for 以……而闻名 ② thousands of 成千上万的 ③ all over the world 全世界 [高分句型] It is much bigger and busier than before. (比较级) 7．某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文竞赛， 其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明， 请你根据下面的图片及要点提示， 写一篇以My Beautiful Hometown为题的英语短文投稿。 　 要点提示：1.过去的家乡：山、河流、垃圾等； 2.现在的家乡：青山、绿水、空气、花鸟等； 3.你的感想。 写作要求：1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥； 2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80； 3.文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。 参考词汇： barren 贫瘠的；不毛的　backward落后的 My Beautiful Hometown_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Beautiful Hometown My hometown is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. There are a lot of changes in my hometown. In the past, there were several barren mountains and a dirty river in my hometown. There was much rubbish and people lived a hard life. It was a poor and backward little town. But now, there are green mountains, clean rivers, fresh air and lots of birds and flowers. The streets are much wider. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theaters spring up one after another. I love my hometown and the people here. We are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题——自己的家乡发生了很大的变化； 第二步，具体阐述内容。介绍自己家乡过去的样子和现在的样子； 第三步，书写结语。表示自己的感受，希望自己的家乡更加富裕和美丽。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of许多 ②in the past在过去 ③one after another一个接一个 ④so as to以便，为了 [高分句型] ①There are a lot of changes in my hometown.（there be句型） ②We are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.（动词不定式作目的状语） 8．Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情 境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 在我们国家众多的河流中，长江具有举足轻重的地位。为了赞美长江，学校举 行了“长汇”的主题活动，现向全体同学征文。请同学们根据提示写一篇短文来介 绍长江。 提示： (1)长江是亚洲最长的河流，也是世界上第三长河，全长约6300千米； (2)长江发源于青海省，最后汇入太平洋； (3)长江里有各种各样的鱼。对中国来说长江非常重要； (4)我们应该保护长江，停止倾倒垃圾和排废水。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: The Yangtze River The Yangtze River is the longest river in Asia and it’s also the third longest river in the world. It is about 6,300 kilometres long. It starts from Qinghai Province and goes into the Pacific Ocean. There are many kinds of fishes in the river and some of them are endangered species. People love the Yangtze River, but it has been polluted. We should try to protect it as it is very important for China. We should stop putting rubbish and pouring waste water into it. I hope it will become more and more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明长江在中国以及世界举足轻重的地位； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“长度、起源地、鱼类生物以及保护长江”等具体介绍长江； 第三步，书写书面结语。表达希望长江越来越好的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① starts from起源于 ②endangered species濒危物种 [高分句型] ①The Yangtze River is the longest river in Asia and it’s also the third longest river in the world.（形容词最高级的应用） ②We should try to protect it as it is very important for China.（as引导的原因状语从句） 9．假如你是李华，你去参观了有关智能厨房的科技展。请根据以下内容写一封e-mail告诉你的英国朋友Tom你的见闻及想法。 Smart Kitchen What does it have? (至少写出4点， 可选择以下内容或自由发挥) ·powered by clean energy ·smart fridge (be connected to, shop) ·smart screen (by voice, play music, show menus…) ·smart cooker (a balanced diet) ·safety system (keep...safe) ·smart housekeeper (control) Your opinions: ...(请至少写2 点). 注意事项： 1.词数：80—100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 3.表格中的英文提示可作参考。 Tom, I learned a lot about smart kitchens at a tech exhibition. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What do you think? Would you like to have a smart kitchen, or do you prefer the traditional way of cooking? Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Tom, I learned a lot about smart kitchens at a tech exhibition. The entire kitchen is powered by clean energy. There are many smart appliances in the kitchen. The smart fridge can be connected to wireless networks and used for shopping. In addition, the smart screen in the refrigerator has many functions, such as playing music and displaying menus by voice. There are also lots of cookers in the kitchen to make sure we have a balanced diet. The whole kitchen security system is very good, and it can keep us safe. It’s controlled by an intelligent butler. I really hope that I can have such a smart kitchen in the future, and I think it is very convenient and cool. What do you think? Would you like to have a smart kitchen, or do you prefer the traditional way of cooking? Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括文章给出的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头文章已给，介绍自己获得关于智能厨房的知识； 第二步，具体阐述智能厨房里面有哪些东西并说出自己的看法； 第三步，结尾文章已给出，询问对方的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①be connected to与……有关联 ②In addition此外 ③have a balanced diet均衡饮食 [高分句型] ①The entire kitchen is powered by clean energy.（被动语态） ②I really hope that I can have such a smart kitchen in the future, and I think it is very convenient and cool.（宾语从句） 10．阅读理解A篇提及的智能家居展中有很多给生活助力的AI 产品。人工智能(AI)的崛起对我们的生活产生了重大影响。假如你是李明，学校的英语杂志正在开展以“人工智能与我们的生活”为主题的征文活动，请你就这个主题进行英文投稿，结合以下思维导图写一篇80词左右的短文。 参考词汇：product 产品；convenience 便利；advantage 优点； disadvantage 缺点。 注意： 1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名； 2. 包含表格所有要点，并发表自己的观点； 3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 As we all know, AI has changed our life greatly. With the development of science and technology, we can see different kinds of AI products in our daily life. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 As we all know, AI has changed our life greatly. With the development of science and technology, we can see different kinds of AI products in our daily life. For example, smart phones can make work and study more efficient while the sweeping robots can help us do chores so that we can have more time to do other things. The advantage of AI products is that they all bring great convenience and progress to our society. However, with AI technology being widely used, we are sorry to see that many workers have lost their jobs. Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they have trouble in dealing with problems independently. All in all, just as the saying goes, each coin has two sides. AI products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use AI in a correct way, it will bring us more convenient life in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料文，为说明文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中人工智能的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“人工智能产品、人工智能的利与弊；对人工智能的态度等”几个方面重点介绍人工智能的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of各种各样的 ②so that以便于 ③rely on依赖 ④deal with处理 [高分句型] ①The advantage of AI products is that they all bring great convenience and progress to our society. (that引导的表语从句) ②However, with AI technology being widely used, we are sorry to see that many workers have lost their jobs. (with的复合结构) 11．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favorite film is…”, using the following questions for reference（请根据提示问题，以“我喜爱的电影是……”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。） Suggested questions: (1)What is the name of the film? (2)What kind of film is it? (3)What is the film about? (4)Why do you like the film best? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My favorite film is The Lion King My favorite film is The Lion King. It’s a cartoon movie produced by Walt Disney Pictures. The film is about a little lion called Simba, whose father is a king. Unluckily, his father is killed one day. Simba thinks it is his fault and leaves his family. He meets two friends and they help him to lead a new life. His mother and other family members think he has died. One day, his friend Nala meets him by accident. She asks him to get his kingdom back. He doesn’t accept it at first, but then he agrees with the help of a magical monkey. He returns and knows it was his uncle who killed his father. He fights against him and wins at last. He saves his mother and other lions and becomes the king. The movie tells us that we should be brave and that is why I like this movie best. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章标题以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要忘记把标题的内容补全，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明，介绍你最喜欢的电影名称、电影类型等； 第二步，简要介绍这部电影的故事情节，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，说明喜欢这部电影的原因并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①lead a new life过上新的生活 ②by accident偶然地 ③with the help of在……的帮助下 ④fights against与……作斗争 [高分句型] ①The film is about a little lion called Simba, whose father is a king.（过去分词作定语；whose引导非限制性定语从句） ②Simba thinks it is his fault and leaves his family.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句） ③He returns and knows it was his uncle who killed his father.（it is…who…强调句型） ④The movie tells us that we should be brave and that is why I like this movie best.（why引导表语从句） 12．Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 假设张蕾、李华、刘明是你的好朋友，你们喜欢不同类型的电影。请根据下表提示，对你们所喜爱的电影类型进行简要介绍。要求语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 Names Types Reasons Zhang Lei scary movies exciting Li Hua comedies happy Liu Ming documentaries learn a lot You _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I have three good friends. They are Zhang Lei, Li Hua and Liu Ming. We have different preferences for movies. Zhang Lei loves scary movies because they are exciting and thrilling. Li Hua prefers comedies, as they make her laugh and feel happy. Liu Ming enjoys documentaries because they provide valuable knowledge and insights. He can learn a lot from them. For me, I am fond of action movies. They are exciting and filled with adventures, featuring brave heroes and thrilling plots. Watching action movies makes me feel invigorated and gives me a sense of excitement and fun. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据表格的提示，介绍3个好朋友喜爱的电影类型和原因，补充说明自己喜欢的电影类型及其原因。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，简单介绍自己有3个朋友，并直接点明主题，引出下文。 第二步，详细介绍每个人喜欢什么样类型的电影及其原因。 第三步，总结看电影的感受。 ［亮点词汇］ ①be fond of喜爱 ②learn...from从……学习 ［高分句型］ ①Li Hua prefers comedies, as they make her laugh and feel happy.（as引导的原因状语从句） ②Watching action movies makes me feel invigorated and gives me a sense of excitement and fun.（动名词作主语) 13．假如你是阳光中学七年级1班的学生李华， 你看到英语校刊 Sunshine Weekly发布的一则俱乐部招新启事。请根据启事的内容与要求，用英语写一封电子邮件申请加入其中一个俱乐部。 JOIN A CLUB! Do you want to make friends, learn something new or have fun? Here are three clubs for you! Which one do you want to join? Write an email to tell us: Your name, age, looks... The club you want to join Why you want to join it Your dream... Please send your email to sunshineweekly@163.com by next Friday. We hope you enjoy yourself in our clubs. Music Club     Reading Club     Sports Club 注意： 1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2.要点齐全，语意通顺，可适当发挥； 3.词数不少于70词，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/ Madam, I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】例文     Dear Sir/Madam,     I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. I’m fourteen years old. I’m a tall and thin girl, and I like reading very much. So I want to join the Reading Club. I read books every day. There are many kinds of books in my room. I often go to the school library, too. It’s really a quiet place. I also like making friends. I hope to join the Reading Club. Then we can talk about good books and learn from each other. I dream of one day applying the knowledge learned from books to reality. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：本文主要是申请加入一个俱乐部，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的信息，表明自己想加入阅读俱乐部； 第二步，介绍自己想加入读书俱乐部的原因； 第三步，介绍自己的梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①want to do sth. 想要做某事 ②many kinds of 很多种类的 ③talk about 谈论 [高分句型] ①I’m a tall and thin girl, and I like reading very much.(and连接的并列句) ②I hope to join the Reading Club. (动词不定式作宾语) 14．从上文花木兰的故事中，我们学到了她许多美好的品质。在成长的道路上，每个人都会遇到一些困难，这些困难可能是自身的不足或缺陷，也可能是一些挑战性任务。面对这些困难，我们要积极思考，寻找解决问题的方法，用智慧和勇气去克服每一个难关。这样，我们不仅能够成长和进步，还能在人生的道路上，像花木兰一样，成为真正的英雄。请以“How I become better at being better (我如何成为更好的自己)”为题，分享你的经历和感受。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How I become better at being better Everyone will meet difficulties in their lives. So do I. The biggest problem in my life is that I am very shy. My spoken English used to be very poor. I dared not answer questions in class because I was so shy. One day, Miss Li encouraged me to speak more. Her friendly smile melted my heart. Then, I began to communicate more with my classmates in English, joined the English corner after class, and talked with foreign friends in my neighborhood to practice even more. And my spoken English improved a lot. From then on, I believed that when we face trouble, like Mulan, we should be brave. This way, we can solve problems and get better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题，介绍自己遇到的困难； 第二步，具体阐述自己曾经的困境，如何面对、解决和进步的； 第三步，表达自己对于成长经历的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①used to过去常常，曾经 ②encourage鼓励 ③melt融化 ④communicate交流 ⑤improve提高 [高分句型] ① I dared not answer questions in class because I was so shy. (原因状语从句) ② From then on, I believed that when we face trouble, like Mulan, we should be brave. (宾语从句，时间状语从句) 15．What Is a Smart Classroom? Write an online post about “A Smart Classroom”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A Smart Classroom Smart classrooms revolutionize the traditional learning experience with advanced technology and interactive tools. In a smart classroom, an interactive board is a central feature, allowing teachers to display multimedia content such as videos, images and animations, which makes lessons more engaging and easier to understand. Additionally, an audio-visual system ensures that both teachers and students can hear and see clearly, enhancing communication and comprehension during lessons. Furthermore, each student has access to a computer, providing opportunities for personalized learning, research and collaboration, making education more interactive and effective. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要根据图片内容及文字提示写一篇名为“A Smart Classroom”的在线帖子，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍智能教室带来的变化； 第二步，具体介绍智能教室是什么样的及智能教室起到的积极作用。 [亮点词汇] ①advanced technology 先进技术 ②such as 例如 ③provide ... for ... 为……提供…… [高分句型] ①In a smart classroom, an interactive board is a central feature, allowing teachers to display multimedia content such as videos, images and animations, which makes lessons more engaging and easier to understand.（定语从句） ② Additionally, an audio-visual system ensures that both teachers and students can hear and see clearly, enhancing communication and comprehension during lessons.（宾语从句） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题14 书面表达（紧贴新教材主题，满分范文15篇） 1．一部好的电影， 会让你受到深刻的教育，会使你久久难忘， 你一定看过很多部电影吧？今天， 请你以“My Favorite Movie”为题， 介绍你最喜欢的电影。 要求： 1 语言通顺，意思连贯， 书写规范。 2 词数80词左右。 3 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 My Favorite Movie ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Write a passage of at least 60 words based on the situation below. 生活中，每个人都会遇到各种各样的挑战和问题，只要我们积极面对，一切问题都能解决，我们也能从中得到成长。请以“My problem (我的问题)”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 (注意：文中不得出现人名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分) Suggested questions: 1. What problem did you have？ 2. When did it happen? 3. What did you do to solve the problem? 4. How did you feel? My problem __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Suppose you are Jack. You have just received a letter from your pen friend, Tom. Please reply to Tom, telling him about your dream job and what you will do to realize your dream.（假设你是Jack，请给你的笔友Tom写一封回信，告诉他你梦想的工作以及你会怎么做去实现它） _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．每个人都有自己的梦想 (dream)，你以后想要从事什么职业呢？请你根据以下要点和要求，以“I Want to Be a(n) ________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下自己以后想要从事的职业。 要点： 1. 你以后想从事什么职业； 2. 你为什么想从事这个职业； 3. 为了实现你的梦想，你现在需要做些什么。 要求： 1. 请把题目补充完整。短文应包含提示的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级、姓名等信息； 3. 词数80左右。 I Want to Be a(n) ________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境，写一篇不少于60词的短文，要求语句正确通顺，内容连贯，标点符号不占格。) 想一想你未来想从事什么工作，阐述理由以及如何实现它。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．请根据提示用英语写一篇80词左右的文章来介绍你的家乡——桂林（Guilin）。 1. 桂林位于广西（Guangxi）的北部，因为青山绿水而闻名，是度假胜地。 2. 桂林有两千多年悠久的历史，现在有五百万人口，比以前更大、更繁华，正变得越来越美丽。 3. 每年世界各地成千上万的游客来参观桂林。他们参观公园和动物园、游览漓江（visit Li River by boat）、购物、欣赏这里秀丽的风景（scenery）。 要求： 1. 内容应包括所有要点，可适当增加一些细节； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 3. 词数不少于80。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文竞赛， 其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明， 请你根据下面的图片及要点提示， 写一篇以My Beautiful Hometown为题的英语短文投稿。 　 要点提示：1.过去的家乡：山、河流、垃圾等； 2.现在的家乡：青山、绿水、空气、花鸟等； 3.你的感想。 写作要求：1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥； 2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80； 3.文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。 参考词汇： barren 贫瘠的；不毛的　backward落后的 My Beautiful Hometown_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情 境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 在我们国家众多的河流中，长江具有举足轻重的地位。为了赞美长江，学校举 行了“长汇”的主题活动，现向全体同学征文。请同学们根据提示写一篇短文来介 绍长江。 提示： (1)长江是亚洲最长的河流，也是世界上第三长河，全长约6300千米； (2)长江发源于青海省，最后汇入太平洋； (3)长江里有各种各样的鱼。对中国来说长江非常重要； (4)我们应该保护长江，停止倾倒垃圾和排废水。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假如你是李华，你去参观了有关智能厨房的科技展。请根据以下内容写一封e-mail告诉你的英国朋友Tom你的见闻及想法。 Smart Kitchen What does it have? (至少写出4点， 可选择以下内容或自由发挥) ·powered by clean energy ·smart fridge (be connected to, shop) ·smart screen (by voice, play music, show menus…) ·smart cooker (a balanced diet) ·safety system (keep...safe) ·smart housekeeper (control) Your opinions: ...(请至少写2 点). 注意事项： 1.词数：80—100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 3.表格中的英文提示可作参考。 Tom, I learned a lot about smart kitchens at a tech exhibition. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What do you think? Would you like to have a smart kitchen, or do you prefer the traditional way of cooking? Yours, Li Hua 10．阅读理解A篇提及的智能家居展中有很多给生活助力的AI 产品。人工智能(AI)的崛起对我们的生活产生了重大影响。假如你是李明，学校的英语杂志正在开展以“人工智能与我们的生活”为主题的征文活动，请你就这个主题进行英文投稿，结合以下思维导图写一篇80词左右的短文。 参考词汇：product 产品；convenience 便利；advantage 优点； disadvantage 缺点。 注意： 1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名； 2. 包含表格所有要点，并发表自己的观点； 3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 As we all know, AI has changed our life greatly. With the development of science and technology, we can see different kinds of AI products in our daily life. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favorite film is…”, using the following questions for reference（请根据提示问题，以“我喜爱的电影是……”为题写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。） Suggested questions: (1)What is the name of the film? (2)What kind of film is it? (3)What is the film about? (4)Why do you like the film best? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 假设张蕾、李华、刘明是你的好朋友，你们喜欢不同类型的电影。请根据下表提示，对你们所喜爱的电影类型进行简要介绍。要求语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 Names Types Reasons Zhang Lei scary movies exciting Li Hua comedies happy Liu Ming documentaries learn a lot You _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．假如你是阳光中学七年级1班的学生李华， 你看到英语校刊 Sunshine Weekly发布的一则俱乐部招新启事。请根据启事的内容与要求，用英语写一封电子邮件申请加入其中一个俱乐部。 JOIN A CLUB! Do you want to make friends, learn something new or have fun? Here are three clubs for you! Which one do you want to join? Write an email to tell us: Your name, age, looks... The club you want to join Why you want to join it Your dream... Please send your email to sunshineweekly@163.com by next Friday. We hope you enjoy yourself in our clubs. Music Club     Reading Club     Sports Club 注意： 1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2.要点齐全，语意通顺，可适当发挥； 3.词数不少于70词，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/ Madam, I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 14．从上文花木兰的故事中，我们学到了她许多美好的品质。在成长的道路上，每个人都会遇到一些困难，这些困难可能是自身的不足或缺陷，也可能是一些挑战性任务。面对这些困难，我们要积极思考，寻找解决问题的方法，用智慧和勇气去克服每一个难关。这样，我们不仅能够成长和进步，还能在人生的道路上，像花木兰一样，成为真正的英雄。请以“How I become better at being better (我如何成为更好的自己)”为题，分享你的经历和感受。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．What Is a Smart Classroom? Write an online post about “A Smart Classroom”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 9 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$