内容正文:
如何熟练掌握各类动作描写技巧?
如何将所学的动作描写素材运用到实战当中?
我们特别选取了各省市试题,采用名师范文,结合挖空训练法,制作了试题挖空训练,帮助学生深入了解读后续写中的动作描写技巧与应用。
本系列内容建议与《爱疯大课堂读后续写晨读晚练一月通》——第四部分 细节描写与素材积累运用配合使用。
试题回顾
(2024山东省高三百师联盟)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Memorable April Fool's Day
I really like to trick people, especially my friends, Cherry and Harry. But after one particular day, when a strange incident happened, it changed. I learned a lot on that day.
What is the awful incident? Well, it all started when Miss Beth introduced us to a new exchange student, Pei. “She is very tall,” I said to Cherry. “Speaking of heights, wouldn't she be perfect in the cheerleading team?” Cherry asked. “Maybe... Well, we’ d better keep quiet. Miss Beth is looking at us,” I said.
Surprisingly, I was assigned to guide the new girl around. During the break, I wanted to start a conversation with Pei, so I quickly approached her. “Hey, Pei,” I said. “Hello,” she replied politely. I had a short chat with her and she seemed to be a nice person. Before going home, I showed Pei around.
The next day, I was very excited because it was April Fool's Day. I planned to trick my friends with Pei since she was new. I really hoped that she would cooperate with me. So, I quickly ran to her before our English period started.
Unfortunately, Matt, a naughty schoolboy came to our classroom, realising that there wasn't any teacher in. “Go away!” I shouted. As usual, he ignored that. I took Pei's notebook and hit Matt until it fell on the floor. Well... it wasn't actually a notebook. It was Pei's diary. “Ooh, it's a diary!” shouted Matt. Then, he started to read out Pei's diary loudly. “I really think Mal is bossy and…” Matt kept reading all of Pei's inner thoughts.
I could see that Pei was embarrassed. She grabbed her diary from Matt and ran outside the classroom. I was quite upset, and had a bad feeling about the whole thing. After a while, I jumped out of seat to follow her just to say sorry. However, I couldn't find her anywhere before the school bell rang, I had to walk back to the classroom.
续写第一段开头句:Then Miss Beth walked into our classroom for our English period.
续写第二段开头句:After school, I went to the staffroom to meet Miss Beth.
范文挖空训练
Then Miss Beth walked into our classroom for our English period. Her smile quickly faded when she 1._______(注意到了)the awkward silence and the tense atmosphere. I could feel my heart race as she asked, "Is everything alright, class?" I nervously 2._______(瞥了一眼)my friends, but no one said anything. It wasn’t until Pei 3._______(回到教室), her eyes red, that I realized the seriousness of what had just happened. Miss Beth quickly turned to Pei, her expression softening, and asked if she was okay. Pei 4._______(沉默地点了点头), but 5._______(我看得出她很难过). The entire class remained quiet, and I felt terrible. The fun trick I had planned had turned into a disaster. I wished I could take back what I had done, but I knew I couldn't undo the hurt I had caused.
After school, I went to the staffroom to meet Miss Beth. She 6._______(坐在办公桌前), talking to Pei. The moment I stepped in, Miss Beth 7._______(抬头看我)with a calm but serious expression. "Mal," she began, "I know you didn't mean any harm, but your actions hurt Pei. You 8._______(需要明白的是)that pranks like these can have real consequences." My heart sank as I approached Pei, feeling ashamed of what I had done. I 9._______(深呼吸)and apologized sincerely. Pei gave me a small, tired smile, but there was a sadness in her eyes that I couldn't ignore. From that day on, I learned that 10._______(幽默不应以牺牲别人的感受为代价).
答案:
1. noticed
2. glanced at
3. came back into the room
4. nodded silently
5. I could tell she was upset
6. was sitting at her desk
7. looked up at me
8. need to understand
9. took a deep breath
10. humor shouldn't come at the cost of someone else's feelings
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