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高二上学期期末考点大串讲（上海） 专题10 英语作文精选10篇 （原题版） 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是Jerry，你的朋友Lear准备设计一款智能手机app，可以帮助高中学生学习。他来信征求你的建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： （1）你需要的app的名称和功能； （2）你需要该app的理由； （3）你给该app的建议。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Directions: Write an English composition in about 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是启明中学高二学生李明。你的笔友约翰近日发邮件和你说，他拟使用数字化学习工具来辅助完成作业，想听取你的意见。请回复电子邮件给笔友，内容须包含： 1. 对此做法的态度； 2. 结合个人经历给出你的理由。 (文章中请不要出现真实的校名和姓名) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你校英文报《英语拾零》（English Sidelights）正庆祝创刊十周年，请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括： ● 读报的经历； ● 喜爱的栏目； ● 期望和祝福。 （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions givenbelow in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校计划引进一个机器人担任餐厅服务员或者图书馆管理员，并在英语贴吧征求学生意见，你很感兴趣，决定回帖响应，你所写的内容应包括： 1.你认为机器人适合担任的一个岗位，二选一 2.通过比较，阐述你选择的理由，可以从工作效率、服务范围等方面进行表述。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校计划对校园环境进行优化，校长就设计方案征求学生的意见。假设你是李华，给校长写一封信，对设计方案提出一些建议。你的信必须包括以下内容： 1. 谈谈你建议的具体内容； 2. 说明你的理由（从学生的学习、活动等角度进行说明） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below. 国际青少年互动友谊营(The Youth Camp for International Exchange and Friendship)正在招募志愿者，要求能安排并接待一位与你年龄相仿的外国青少年在上海游玩一天。你对此很感兴趣，请写一封E-mail，申请担任志愿者, 告诉主办方你一天的安排，并简述这样安排的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是陈芳。你的好友王敏是新华中学的学生，下个月将去英国的姐妹校交流访问。王敏想拍摄一个短片，向英国的同学和老师介绍自己的学校。她通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括: 1、短片的主题以及与之匹配的主要内容； 2、你选择这些内容的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 最近一本在线杂志发表了一篇文章，文中询问，在公众眼中，什么样的人是适合做年轻人的榜样（role model）。请你写封信给该杂志，推荐一位你认为适合做榜样的名人（celebrity）。你的文章须包括： 简单介绍这位名人； 为何这位名人适合做年轻人的榜样。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 近来，网络订餐服务发展迅速，用户即使足不出户也可以利用手机的app进行订餐，并由外送人员送餐到家。你如何看待这一现象？写一篇文章，表达你的想法。你的文章必须包括： 1.你认为网络订餐是利大于弊还是弊大于利。 2.你的理由和建议。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________ 10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是明启中学高二学生李华，本学期学校计划组织全年级学生去多个外地中学研学(study tour)。现就两种组织方案征求学生意见。一是以班级为单位，学校随机决定研学地点;二是由学生各自申请想去的中学，学校根据各处报名人数统筹安排。请写一封信给校长谈谈你的看法，信件内容需包括： 1)你选择哪个方案; 2)你选择该方案的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 高二上学期期末考点大串讲（上海） 专题10 英语作文精选10篇 （解析版） 1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是Jerry，你的朋友Lear准备设计一款智能手机app，可以帮助高中学生学习。他来信征求你的建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： （1）你需要的app的名称和功能； （2）你需要该app的理由； （3）你给该app的建议。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I need an APP to prevent class slippage. It's called Stay Awake. Its main function is that when I feel sleepy, the APP will automatically issue an alarm to remind me to improve my attention in class. More and more students are sleeping in class. I really want to control this bad habit, but we find it difficult to control ourselves. In order to better improve class efficiency and my state, I need an App that can feel heat and breath and remind me to not to sleep at all times. The APP should be designed to be easy to use, and have computational capabilities and data display function without disturbing the people around me. I hope I can benefit from your invention. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的朋友Lear准备设计一款智能手机app，可以帮助高中学生学习。他来信征求考生的建议。请考生给他回信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 提高：improve→promote 控制：control→contain 有：have→possess 想要做某事：want to do sth→would like to do sth 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：The APP should be designed to be easy to use, and have computational capabilities and data display function without disturbing the people around me. 拓展句：The APP should be designed to be easy to use, having computational capabilities and data display function without disturbing the people around me. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Its main function is that when I feel sleepy, the APP will automatically issue an alarm to remind me to improve my attention in class.（运用了that引导的表语从句和when引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】In order to better improve class efficiency and my state, I need an App that can feel heat and breath and remind me to not to sleep at all times.（运用了不定式作目的状语和that引导的定语从句） 2．Directions: Write an English composition in about 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是启明中学高二学生李明。你的笔友约翰近日发邮件和你说，他拟使用数字化学习工具来辅助完成作业，想听取你的意见。请回复电子邮件给笔友，内容须包含： 1. 对此做法的态度； 2. 结合个人经历给出你的理由。 (文章中请不要出现真实的校名和姓名) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear John, I’m glad to hear you’re considering using digital learning tools to aid your studies. I fully support this idea. In my own experience, digital tools have greatly enhanced my learning efficiency. They provide instant access to a wealth of resources, from online tutorials to interactive simulations. Moreover, these tools often make complex concepts more visual and understandable. I believe they can be equally beneficial for you. Feel free to explore and experiment with various tools to find the ones that suit you best. I’m confident they will help you achieve your academic goals. Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的笔友约翰近日发邮件说，他拟使用数字化学习工具来辅助完成作业，想听取你的意见。要求考生回复电子邮件给笔友。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→delighted 考虑：consider→take into account 支持：support→approve 有益的：beneficial→rewarding 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：In my own experience, digital tools have greatly enhanced my learning efficiency. They provide instant access to a wealth of resources, from online tutorials to interactive simulations. 拓展句：In my own experience, not only do digital tools have greatly enhanced my learning efficiency, but also they provide instant access to a wealth of resources, from online tutorials to interactive simulations. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Feel free to explore and experiment with various tools to find the ones that suit you best. (运用了that引导定语从句) [高分句型2] I believe they can be equally beneficial for you. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) 3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你校英文报《英语拾零》（English Sidelights）正庆祝创刊十周年，请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括： ● 读报的经历； ● 喜爱的栏目； ● 期望和祝福。 （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 English Sidelights and Me I have been an avid reader of English Sidelights since the day my teacher recommended it to me. I remember that the first time I picked up a copy of the paper, I was struck by the quality of the writing and the depth of the coverage. Since then, I have made it a habit to read it every day. One of my favorite sections is the Opinion. I appreciate the diverse range of views and perspectives presented in this section. The editorials are well-researched and thought-provoking, and the guest commentaries offer fresh insights into a variety of issues. I expect the paper to stay true to its core values and to continue to provide readers with high-quality reporting and analysis. On this special occasion of the 10th anniversary of English Sidelights, I hope the paper will thrive and grow in the years ahead. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英文报《英语拾零》正庆祝创刊十周年，要求考生按照要求写一篇文章投稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 热衷的：avid→ keen 呈现：present→ show 提供：offer→ provide 各种各样的：a variety of→ various 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I appreciate the diverse range of views and perspectives presented in this section. 拓展句：I appreciate the diverse range of views and perspectives that are presented in this section. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I remember that the first time I picked up a copy of the paper, I was struck by the quality of the writing and the depth of the coverage.（运用了that引导的宾语从句、the first time引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】On this special occasion of the 10th anniversary of English Sidelights, I hope the paper will thrive and grow in the years ahead.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句） 4．Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions givenbelow in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校计划引进一个机器人担任餐厅服务员或者图书馆管理员，并在英语贴吧征求学生意见，你很感兴趣，决定回帖响应，你所写的内容应包括： 1.你认为机器人适合担任的一个岗位，二选一 2.通过比较，阐述你选择的理由，可以从工作效率、服务范围等方面进行表述。 【答案】Dear headmaster,       So appealing is your plan to introduce a robot to our school that I decide to respond to your asking for proposals. From my perspective, a robot is more suitable for the position of librarian.       With regard to the range of service, a librarian needs not only to classify books, but also put and find them in the right order on the right shelf, while being a waiter involves serving the right dishes to the right table, doing some cleaning and so on. A robot can accomplish three or four librarians’ work of sorting and labeling books at the same time.        In terms of working efficiency, a robot may be more efficient in doing the programmed mechanical and repetitive kind of work. Therefore, it is more advisable for the robot to undertake the duties of a librarian grouping countless books repeatedly.        In a nutshell, it is the mechanical work of a librarian that the robot is more competent at. Hope that my advice will be of great help to your decision.                                                                                                                  Yours,                                                                                                                   Wang Lei 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在学校贴吧发帖，就学校打算引入机器人担任食堂服务员还是图书管理员给出建议，并阐述理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 吸引人的：appealing → attractive 建议：proposal → suggestion 关于：with regard to → concerning 分类：classify → categorize 2.句式拓展 变倒装句 原句：With regard to the range of service, a librarian needs not only to classify books, but also put and find them in the right order on the right shelf… 拓展句：With regard to the range of service, not only does a librarian need to classify books, but also he/she puts and finds them in the right order on the right shelf… 【点睛】【高分句型1】So appealing is your plan to introduce a robot to our school that I decide to respond to your asking for proposals.（运用了so...that...的倒装句） 【高分句型2】In a nutshell, it is the mechanical work of a librarian that the robot is more competent at. （运用了强调句） 5．Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校计划对校园环境进行优化，校长就设计方案征求学生的意见。假设你是李华，给校长写一封信，对设计方案提出一些建议。你的信必须包括以下内容： 1. 谈谈你建议的具体内容； 2. 说明你的理由（从学生的学习、活动等角度进行说明） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     Hearing that our school is planning to optimize the campus environment, I am offering the following suggestions. First of all, I think the school should include environmental protection knowledge and health knowledge into the teaching tasks of various subjects, combined with the teaching content, which could help to cultivate and strengthen students’ environmental awareness. Secondly, each class should set up its own environmental cleaning area, and the school should strengthen the inspection and management of student dormitory environment, which will be beneficial for students to keep the dormitory clean and tidy. At the same time, in order to provide students with a good environment for study and dining, schools should improve the canteen facilities, replace the screens, add necessary equipment, such as drinking water equipment, sports equipment and update the computer teaching facilities. Sincerely, I hope that my suggestion will be helpful to you and finally be accepted. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校长写一封信，就学校校园环境优化计划提出建议。内容包括：建议的具体内容，以及阐述理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→advice 首先：first of all → first and foremost 诚挚地：sincerely→genuinely 希望：hope→ expect 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Hearing that our school is planning to optimize the campus environment, I am offering the following suggestions. 拓展句：Because I hear that our school is planning to optimize the campus environment, I am offering the following suggestions. 【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I think the school should include environmental protection knowledge and health knowledge into the teaching tasks of various subjects, combined with the teaching content, which could help to cultivate and strengthen students' environmental awareness.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Sincerely, I hope that my suggestion will be helpful to you and finally be accepted.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及情态动词的被动语态结构) 6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below. 国际青少年互动友谊营(The Youth Camp for International Exchange and Friendship)正在招募志愿者，要求能安排并接待一位与你年龄相仿的外国青少年在上海游玩一天。你对此很感兴趣，请写一封E-mail，申请担任志愿者, 告诉主办方你一天的安排，并简述这样安排的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, a senior high. I’m writing to apply for the position of The Youth Camp for International Exchange and Friendship volunteer. I heard you need someone to receive a foreign teenager and arrange a one-day trip for him/her in Shanghai. I think I’m the very person you are looking for, because I’m local and know this city a lot. About the trip, here are my suggestions. First, we will visit the Disneyland. It is a fairy world with many famous characters, with whom I bet he/she will fall in love immediately once setting foot in it. After that, we may visit the Oriental Pearl Tower to enjoy an impressive view of Shanghai’s modern skyline. That’s my arrangements for the one-day trip and I’m sure our guest will like them. I hope you take my application into consideration and give me an early rely. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于申请信。要求考生向国际青少年互动友谊营提出成为志愿者的申请，并简述带外国青少年游客上海一日游的计划安排。 【详解】1.词汇积累 职位：position → post 接待，迎接：receive → welcome 寻找：look for→seek 建议：suggestion → advice 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：That’s my arrangements for the one-day trip and I’m sure our guest will like them. 拓展句：That’s my arrangements for the one-day trip which I’m sure our guest will like. 【点睛】[高分句型1] I heard you need someone to receive a foreign teenager and arrange a one-day trip for him/her in Shanghai. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句) [高分句型2] It is a fairy world with many famous characters, with whom I bet he/she will fall in love immediately once setting foot in it. (运用了whom引导的定语从句和状语从句的省略) 7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是陈芳。你的好友王敏是新华中学的学生，下个月将去英国的姐妹校交流访问。王敏想拍摄一个短片，向英国的同学和老师介绍自己的学校。她通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括: 1、短片的主题以及与之匹配的主要内容； 2、你选择这些内容的理由。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Wangliang, Learning that you are going to visit sister schools in Britain next month, I am writing this letter to give you my suggestions on your making a short video about your school.I feel delighted since I have made some researches about making videos . To begin with,I do recommend that you should choose Campus Book Fair as the topic because reading is so popular in your school that it has gained public attention.In this way ,you can make your school known to more people.What’s more,you can also involve the library building located in the center of your campus,which is spectacular enough to represent the image of your school and your city. In conclusion, you should show your foreign friends the strong reading atmosphere in your school.It is reading that makes you so outingstanding. I believe you will complete the task perfectly.I am looking forward to your decision and good news. 【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求写一封建议信。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，要求写一封建议信。要求如下：假设你是陈芳。你的好友王敏是新华中学的学生，下个月将去英国的姐妹校交流访问。王敏想拍摄一个短片，向英国的同学和老师介绍自己的学校。她通过邮件向你征求意见。写一封回信，内容须包括: 1、短片的主题以及与之匹配的主要内容； 2、你选择这些内容的理由。 第2步：确定人称、时态。人称以第二人称为主；时态以一般现在时为主。 第3步：根据要求确定关键词，如：give you my suggestions；making a short video；it has gained public attention；make your school known to more people；is spectacular enough to represent the image of your school and your city； complete the task perfectly；I am looking forward to。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衍接与过渡，如To begin with；What’s more；In conclusion。书写要规范清晰，保持整洁美观。 【点睛】本文是一则建议信，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。同时文中使用高级句子。Learning that you are going to visit sister schools in Britain next month, I am writing this letter to …现在分词做原因状语；I do recommend that you should choose Campus Book Fair as the topic because reading is so popular in your school that it has gained public attention原因状语从句和so…that结构的完美结合； What’s more,you can also involve the library building located in the center of your campus,which is spectacular enough to represent the image of your school and your city.非限制性定语从句；It is reading that makes you so outingstanding.强调句。 8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 最近一本在线杂志发表了一篇文章，文中询问，在公众眼中，什么样的人是适合做年轻人的榜样（role model）。请你写封信给该杂志，推荐一位你认为适合做榜样的名人（celebrity）。你的文章须包括： 简单介绍这位名人； 为何这位名人适合做年轻人的榜样。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Sir/Madam. I have read your magazine's article asking what kind of person is suitable to be a role model for young people. In my opinion, the role model for young people should be a person of our own age, who is not only positive and sunny, but also has made outstanding achievements. In my mind, Wang Yuan, the leader of TFboys is such a person. Since his debut, he has brought us a lot of wonderful songs. His greatest achievement is that as a representative of Chinese youth, he was invited to attend the ECOSOC Youth Forum 2017 held at the UN headquarters in New York and delivered a speech in English. He is not only the first Chinese artist invited to participate in the UN youth forum, but also the first Chinese youth idol on the UN stage.    In view of the reasons above, I think Wang Yuan is a good role model for us.                                                                      yours truly, Lihua 【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。 【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：最近一本在线杂志发表了一篇文章，文中询问，在公众眼中，什么样的人是适合做年轻人的榜样，请你写封信给该杂志，推荐一位你认为适合做榜样的名人。你的文章须包括：简单介绍这位名人；为何这位名人适合做年轻人的榜样。时态应为一般现在时。 第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； role model（榜样），celebrity（名人），sunny（阳光的），positive（积极的）， outstanding（杰出的），achievement（成就），debut（出道）及youth idol（青年偶像）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。 【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有be suitable to do（适合做……），in one’s opinion（依某人的观点），get into shape (使身体好起来)，be invited to do（受邀……）以及participate in（参加），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“In my opinion, the role model for young people should be a person of our own age, who is not only positive and sunny, but also has made outstanding achievements.”，表语从句“His greatest achievement is that as a representative of Chinese youth, he was invited to attend the ECOSOC Youth Forum 2017 held at the UN headquarters in New York and delivered a speech in English.”，宾语从句和非谓语动词“I have read your magazine's article asking what kind of person is suitable to be a role model for young people.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。 9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 近来，网络订餐服务发展迅速，用户即使足不出户也可以利用手机的app进行订餐，并由外送人员送餐到家。你如何看待这一现象？写一篇文章，表达你的想法。你的文章必须包括： 1.你认为网络订餐是利大于弊还是弊大于利。 2.你的理由和建议。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Today, in all fast-paced life, technology has developed at a very fast speed in order to make life more and more convenient. In such an age of big data, ordering food online has rising and become a new trend. In my opinion, the online food ordering service has obviously more advantages than disadvantages. First of all, it's convenient for us to order food online. When we don't want to make food or go to the restaurant, we just need to take out phones and use apps to order food. It allows us to enjoy dedicate meals without going out. In addition, the rise of the service has relieved the great problem of unemployment in China. As we all know, China has a big population，and it's very tricky to find the job. With the food delivery gaining popularity, many unemployed people can take up the job and make their own living. Last but not least, the service has helped many restaurants to make more profits. As they cooperate with the companies that provide food delivery, more and more orders occur, thus increasing the income of restaurants. Though one of the biggest problems with the food delivery is that it has brought plastic waste, man restaurants have promised to stop using disposable items like chopsticks and boxes. Due to its advantages, we have every reason to believe that it will surely have a prospective future. 【分析】这是一篇议论文。主要陈述自己对于网络订餐服务的看法，并列举原因和建议。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：议论文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.发表自己观点（认为利大于弊）； 2.理由和建议 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） convenient, enjoy dedicate meals, relieved the great problem of unemployment, take up the job, make their own living, make more profits, have a prospective future. 第三步：连词成句 1.When we don't want to make food or go to the restaurant, we just need to take out phones and use apps to order food. It allows us to enjoy dedicate meals without going out. 2. In addition, the rise of the service has relieved the great problem of unemployment in China. 3. With the food delivery gaining popularity, many unemployed people can take up the job and make their own living. 4. As they cooperate with the companies that provide food delivery, more and more orders occur, thus increasing the income of restaurants. 5.Due to its advantages, we have every reason to believe that it will surely have a prospective future. 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Last but not least 2.表并列补充关系：In addition 3.表因果关系：Because, As, So（供参考） 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰 【点睛】[高分句型1] When we don't want to make food or go to the restaurant, we just need to take out phones and use app to order food.该句是复合句。when引导时间状语从句。 [高分句型2] With the food delivery gaining popularity, many unemployed people can take up the job and make their own living.该句使用with的复合结构。with+宾语+宾补，food delivery与gain是主动关系，使用gaining形式。主句使用take up和make one’s living高分词组。 [高分句型3] As they cooperate with the companies that provide food delivery, more and more orders occur, thus increasing the income of restaurants.该句是复合句，前半句as引导原因状语从句。主句后部分increasing the income of restaurants现在分词做结果状语。使用高分词汇cooperate以及occur。 10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 你是明启中学高二学生李华，本学期学校计划组织全年级学生去多个外地中学研学(study tour)。现就两种组织方案征求学生意见。一是以班级为单位，学校随机决定研学地点;二是由学生各自申请想去的中学，学校根据各处报名人数统筹安排。请写一封信给校长谈谈你的看法，信件内容需包括： 1)你选择哪个方案; 2)你选择该方案的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear principal, I’m Li Hua, a senior high 2 student of our school. I’m glad to learn that the school plan to organize all the students of our grade to go to many out-of-town schools for a study tour this term. As for the two organizational projects proposed by the school, I suggest that students apply for the schools they want to go to and that our school make overall arrangements according to the number of applicants. The reasons why I choose this project are as follows. First of all, allowing students to choose schools by themselves can help stimulate their enthusiasm and increase their desire to study. Secondly, students can learn the knowledge and relevant information of the school they want to go to in advance so as to make full preparation for the study. Last but not least, our school can make various arrangements ahead of time according to the number of students applying to ensure the smooth progress of study tour. If you could take my advice into account, I would appreciate it. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就本学期学校计划组织全年级学生去多个外地中学研学事宜，对学校提出的两种组织方案，提出自己的意见和建议，表明自己选择哪种方案，并说明理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 计划：plan→project 建议：suggest→propose 激励、激发：stimulate→inspire 提前：in advance→ahead of time 考虑：take...into account→consider 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句：Secondly, students can learn the knowledge and relevant information of the school they want to go to in advance so as to make full preparation for the study. 拓展句：Secondly, students can learn the knowledge and relevant information of the school they want to go to in advance in order that they can make full preparation for the study. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As for the two organizational projects proposed by the school, I suggest that students apply for the schools they want to go to and that our school make overall arrangements according to the number of applicants.（运用了两个以连接词that引导的并列宾语从句和虚拟语气。） 【高分句型2】The reasons why I choose this project are as follows.（运用了以关系副词why引导的定语从句。） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！5 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $