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Unit6 Detectives 单元主题写作（故事类）满分范文15篇（分层练习） 1．假如你是李雷。你的美国笔友 Tom 在昨天的 E-mail 中告诉你，最近他对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣，希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事。请你根据下面所给图画，给 Tom 回复一封E-mail，向他讲述这一经典故事，并表达出从这个故事中得出的哲理感悟。 要求： 1.文章需包括所有图画的内容，可以适当发挥，使全文连贯； 2.文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息； 3.100词左右(邮件的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：tortoise 乌龟 catch up with 赶上 look down on看不起 give up 放弃 The Rabbit and the Tortoise Dear Tom, I’m very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name “The Rabbit and the Tortoise”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to hearing from you. Li Lei 2．中华文化源远流长，经典名著历久弥新。假定你是李明，请你完成一份《西游记》读书笔记。 要点：1. 风趣幽默，深受喜爱； 2. 团队合作，历险克难； 3. 追逐梦想，永不言弃。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：character (n. 人物) ；overcome (v. 克服) I’m reading Journey to the West these days and it is really a Chinese classic work which brought me a lot of joy and deep thinking. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．某英语报正在举行“好故事，大家讲”活动，你报名参加并打算讲 “The Shirt of a Happy Man” 这个故事，请根据以下要点用英语撰写你的讲稿。 要点：1. 介绍故事梗概； 2. 谈谈你对快乐的理解。 要求：1. 词数80词左右； 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 参考词汇：prime minister 首相    general  将军     palace 宫殿 power 权力           wealth 财富      fame 名声 （参考词汇仅供参考，不必全部使用） Good morning! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thank you! 4．请根据以下的提示，以A book review of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer为题介绍你最喜爱的书《汤姆·索亚历险记》。 1. 故事发生在19世纪美国密苏里州（Missouri）的圣彼得堡镇（St Petersburg），它讲述了一个孩子的精彩故事，他经历了很多的冒险活动； 2. 汤姆是这本书的主角。他是一个活泼又聪明的小男孩。他不喜欢别人告诉他做什么事情，所以他总是招惹麻烦； 3. 直到今天，《汤姆·索亚历险记》仍被世界各地的读者阅读和喜爱，并被认为是美国最伟大的文学作品之一。 要求： 1. 词数：80 左右； 2. 开头句已给出，不计入词数。 A book review of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer My favourite great book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．读万卷书，行万里路。4月23日是世界读书日，你们学校为此举行了“Reading makes a better me”的征文活动，请以此为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容需包含表格中所有要点。 你的阅读习惯 读各种各样的书；每天读书半小时；经常去图书馆。 你最喜欢的一本书 书名：《秘密花园》The Secret Garden 主题：亲近自然；互帮互助；保持希望；收获成长。 阅读给你带来的改变。 至少两点。 注意： 1. 100词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数； 2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Reading makes a better me Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles. Reading is important for everyone.  _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of us can develop a good reading habit and enjoy reading. 6．阳光中学英语广播站推出一个专题为“My Favorite Chinese Folk Story”的栏目，请同学们介绍心中最喜欢的中国民间故事。请你就此写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. What’s the main idea of the story? 2. Why do you like the story? 3.… 要求：不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校和考生的真实信息：词数100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Favorite Chinese Folk Story In the long history of China, there are many famous stories. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．从入学到现在你应该阅读过很多书籍，书籍里的人物或某个事件也许会对你的生活方式、为人处世方式或学习态度产生一定的影响。请你以“It/He/She influenced me a lot”为题写一篇短文，参加学校的读书交流征文活动。 内容提示： (1) What event is it?/Who is he/she? (2) How did it/he/she influence you? (3) What did you learn from it/him/her? 写作要求： (1) 语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；(2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jack正在学习中文，对理解成语“愚公移山(Yu Gong Moves a Mountain)”有困难，来信向你请教。请用英语写一封回信，内容包括： 1.解释成语故事及其含义； 2.提出学习成语的建议。 注意： 1.词数：90左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, I got your letter about having trouble understanding the Chinese idiom Yu Gong Moves a Mountain. Let me explain it to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Don’t hesitate to ask if you have any more questions. Yours, Li Hua 9．假定你是李辉，学校举办英语周，倡导学生们“用英语讲中国故事”并举办一场故事演讲比赛。请你写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。 内容包括： 1. 故事总体介绍（故事名称及主要角色）； 2. 故事的主要情节； 3. 你的个人评价。 注意： 1. 词数80-100，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 演讲稿中不能出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear schoolmates, China has a history of over 5000 years and its culture is great and wonderful. We’ve learnt about a lot of Chinese stories since an early age. Today I’ll tell you one of them. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! Yours, Li Hui 10．假如你是陈雨，希望中学的一名学生。你们学校正在举办以“My Favorite Story”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备一份演讲稿参赛。 要求： 1.书写规范，卷面整洁； 2.语句通顺，情节完整，逻辑清晰； 3.不少于80词。 My Favorite Story ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．假定你是李辉，即将参加学校英语俱乐部举办的“品名著”读书报告展示活动。请你从我们学过的几个小故事“Tom Sawyer paints the fence”，“The gifts”，“The last leaf”，“Tom and Becky in the cave”当中选一个，写一篇英文读书报告。 内容包括： 1. 故事的名字，作者，主要人物； 2. 主要故事情节； 3. 你的个人观点。 注意： 1. 词数80—100。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 This is a report on ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hui 12．提示：讲好中国故事，传播中国声音，推动中国文化更好地走向世界。请以“A Chinese Story that Moved Me”为题，以及这个故事在你成长经历中对你的启迪，影响或借鉴。 要求： 1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 A Chinese Story that Moved Me _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．假如你是李华，你的南非朋友Mike对中国古代四大名著很感兴趣，希望你能推荐其中的一部，请用英语给Mike回信，内容包括： 一、简要介绍一本名著； 二、说明你推荐的理由。 要求： 1. 80字左右（开头和结尾已给出不记入总词数内）。 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 3. 可适当添加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯。 4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 参考词汇：Romance of Three Kingdoms; Water Margin; Journey to the West;  A Dream of Red Mentions Dear Mike, It is very exciting to know ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hopefully, you will find this book is well worth reading. Sincerely Yours, Li Hua 14．用英语讲好中国故事！ 提升语言能力，传播中国声音。假设China Daily网站中的Culture版块中有一项“Tell a Chinese traditional story”征文活动。假如你是李华，请你以“My favorite Chinese traditional story”为题写一篇英语文章进行投稿。 提示： 1. 描述故事内容。 2. 故事带给你的影响和启发。 要求： 1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。 2.语句连贯，字数100词左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．请你根据以下内容提示,为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍发生在你好朋友王强Wang Qiang身上的一件事。 1.上周一放学后Wang Qiang骑车回家,在十字路口,看到一位老太太正要过马路。 2.当时交通灯坏了,所有车辆都一个接一个通过十字路口。 3.老太太犹豫不决,不敢独自穿过十字路口。 4.王强看到这种情况,主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过了路口。 5.请就此事谈谈你的看法...... 要求: 1.短文要包括以上所有要点。2.行文连贯,可适当发挥。3.词数:80-100。开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:十字路口 crossroads    在……犹豫不决 hesitate in Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 5 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit6 Detectives 单元主题写作（故事类）满分范文15篇（分层练习） 1．假如你是李雷。你的美国笔友 Tom 在昨天的 E-mail 中告诉你，最近他对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣，希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事。请你根据下面所给图画，给 Tom 回复一封E-mail，向他讲述这一经典故事，并表达出从这个故事中得出的哲理感悟。 要求： 1.文章需包括所有图画的内容，可以适当发挥，使全文连贯； 2.文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息； 3.100词左右(邮件的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：tortoise 乌龟 catch up with 赶上 look down on看不起 give up 放弃 The Rabbit and the Tortoise Dear Tom, I’m very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name “The Rabbit and the Tortoise”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to hearing from you. Li Lei 【答案】One possible version: Dear Tom, I’m very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name “The Rabbit and the Tortoise”. Once upon a time, there was a rabbit. It liked running. One day, a tortoise decided to compete with the rabbit. All the animals went to watch the game. At first, the rabbit ran very fast and the tortoise walked very slowly. The rabbit thought it ran so fast that the tortoise wasn’t able to catch up with it. So it fell asleep under a tree. However, the tortoise kept on walking without taking a break. Finally, the tortoise won the game and all the animals cheered for it. This story tells us we should always do everything carefully and shouldn’t look down on others. What’s more, we can’t give up easily, because everything is possible! I am looking forward to hearing from you. Li Lei 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给图片和要求完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，根据图片介绍这一经典故事以及从中得出的哲理感悟； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①once upon a time从前 ②compete with sb.和某人比赛/竞争 ③catch up with赶上 ④fell asleep睡着了 ⑤look down on瞧不起 ⑥look forward to期待 [高分句型] The rabbit thought it ran so fast that the tortoise wasn’t able to catch up with it.(so…that引导结果状语从句) 2．中华文化源远流长，经典名著历久弥新。假定你是李明，请你完成一份《西游记》读书笔记。 要点：1. 风趣幽默，深受喜爱； 2. 团队合作，历险克难； 3. 追逐梦想，永不言弃。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：character (n. 人物) ；overcome (v. 克服) I’m reading Journey to the West these days and it is really a Chinese classic work which brought me a lot of joy and deep thinking. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考例文： I’m reading Journey to the West these days and it is really a Chinese classic work which brought me a lot of joy and deep thinking. The book Journey to the West was written by Wu Cheng’en during the Ming dynasty. It tells a story about the Tang monk Xuanzang and his three followers. The book is humorous and very popular among Chinese people from children to the old. In the book, the four main characters overcame a lot of difficulties. Finally, they finished their task and became gods. This story tells us to try to achieve our dreams and never give up. What’s more, it also shows the importance of teamwork. The book is worth reading more than once. I can find more from reading it twice and more. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题（已给出）； 第二步，介绍书的作者及主要内容，及自己的感受。 第三步，结束语，推荐阅读这本书。 [亮点词汇] ①from children to the old从孩子到老人 ②give up放弃 ③the importance of ……的重要性 [高分句型] The book Journey to the West was written by Wu Cheng’en during the Ming dynasty.（一般过去时的被动语态） 3．某英语报正在举行“好故事，大家讲”活动，你报名参加并打算讲 “The Shirt of a Happy Man” 这个故事，请根据以下要点用英语撰写你的讲稿。 要点：1. 介绍故事梗概； 2. 谈谈你对快乐的理解。 要求：1. 词数80词左右； 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 参考词汇：prime minister 首相    general  将军     palace 宫殿 power 权力           wealth 财富      fame 名声 （参考词汇仅供参考，不必全部使用） Good morning! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all! Thank you! 【答案】例文     Good morning! Today I’d like to share a story named The Shirt of a Happy Man with all of you.     A long time ago, the king who owned a rich and beautiful country was unhappy. He felt bad and didn’t feel like eating. A doctor examined the king but he found nothing wrong with his body. The doctor said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy man to wear. Therefore, the prime minister, the king’s banker and the palace singer were called to the palace. However, none of them was happy. The king’s general was told to find a happy man in three days. Finally, the general found a poor man who was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself on the street. He was happy and his song came from the happiness from his heart. When the general asked him for a shirt, he said he didn’t own any shirts.     In my opinion, happiness has nothing to do with power, wealth or fame. As long as we are satisfied with what we have and don’t want what we can’t have, we will be happy.     That’s all! Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，不要漏写对快乐的理解，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直切主题。说明要讲述的故事为“The Shirt of a Happy Man”； 第二步，介绍故事梗概； 第三步，谈谈对快乐的理解。 [亮点词汇] ①therefore因此 ②ask sb. for sth.向某人要某物 ③in one’s opinion在某人看来 ④as long as只要 ⑤satisfied满足的 [高分句型] ①A long time ago, the king who owned a rich and beautiful country was unhappy.（定语从句） ②The doctor said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy man to wear.（宾语从句，主语从句） ③Finally, the general found a poor man who was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself on the street.（定语从句） ④As long as we are satisfied with what we have and don’t want what we can’t have, we will be happy.（条件状语从句，宾语从句） 4．请根据以下的提示，以A book review of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer为题介绍你最喜爱的书《汤姆·索亚历险记》。 1. 故事发生在19世纪美国密苏里州（Missouri）的圣彼得堡镇（St Petersburg），它讲述了一个孩子的精彩故事，他经历了很多的冒险活动； 2. 汤姆是这本书的主角。他是一个活泼又聪明的小男孩。他不喜欢别人告诉他做什么事情，所以他总是招惹麻烦； 3. 直到今天，《汤姆·索亚历险记》仍被世界各地的读者阅读和喜爱，并被认为是美国最伟大的文学作品之一。 要求： 1. 词数：80 左右； 2. 开头句已给出，不计入词数。 A book review of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer My favourite great book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A book review of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer My favourite great book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Make Twain. The story is set in the town of St Petersburg, Missouri, in the US, in the nineteenth century. It tells some exciting stories about a boy who has many adventures. Tom is the hero of the book. He’s a lively and clever boy. He doesn’t like people telling him what to do, so he always gets into trouble. Today it’s read and loved by people all over the world, and it’s thought to be one of the greatest American stories. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出对《汤姆·索亚历险记》的介绍； 第二步，具体介绍本书的主人公和内容； 第三步，介绍自己对这本书的看法以及评价。 [亮点词汇] ①get into trouble陷入麻烦 ②be set in以……为背景 ③all over the world全世界 [高分句型] ①It tells some exciting stories about a boy who has many adventures.（定语从句） ②Today it’s read and loved by people all over the world, and it’s thought to be one of the greatest American stories.（最高级） 5．读万卷书，行万里路。4月23日是世界读书日，你们学校为此举行了“Reading makes a better me”的征文活动，请以此为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容需包含表格中所有要点。 你的阅读习惯 读各种各样的书；每天读书半小时；经常去图书馆。 你最喜欢的一本书 书名：《秘密花园》The Secret Garden 主题：亲近自然；互帮互助；保持希望；收获成长。 阅读给你带来的改变。 至少两点。 注意： 1. 100词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数； 2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Reading makes a better me Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles. Reading is important for everyone.  _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of us can develop a good reading habit and enjoy reading. 【答案】 例文 Reading makes a better me Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles. Reading is important for everyone. I often read various books. I read for half an hour every day and often go to the library. My favorite book is The Secret Garden. The theme of this book is getting close to nature and helping each other. It told us to keep hopeful and never give up when facing difficulties, and we can grow up through them. Since I developed the habit of reading daily, I have changed quite a lot. Firstly, I am no longer addicted to playing mobile games, but more focused on learning. Secondly, I have become increasingly good at thinking and have learned to solve problems independently. I hope all of us can develop a good reading habit and enjoy reading. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，写你的阅读习惯； 第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的一本书； 第三步，描述阅读给你带来的改变。 [亮点词汇] ①be addicted to对……上瘾 ②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 [高分句型] ① It told us to keep hopeful and never give up when facing difficulties, and we can grow up through them.（when引导时间状语从句） 6．阳光中学英语广播站推出一个专题为“My Favorite Chinese Folk Story”的栏目，请同学们介绍心中最喜欢的中国民间故事。请你就此写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. What’s the main idea of the story? 2. Why do you like the story? 3.… 要求：不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校和考生的真实信息：词数100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Favorite Chinese Folk Story In the long history of China, there are many famous stories. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Chinese Folk Story In the long history of China, there are many famous stories. One of my favorite traditional Chinese stories is “Yu Gong Moves the Mountains”. Once upon a time, there was an old man named Yu Gong. Near his home stood two mountains which made it difficult for him to go outside. Therefore, he led his children to move them away. When laughed at, he replied, “My children will go on forever, but the mountains will get no bigger.” Winter left and spring came. They kept on working. Finally, a god was moved by him and took the mountains away. This story reminds us nothing is impossible as long as we put our effort into it. We should never give up on the way of seeking light. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是篇材料作文； ②时态：本文的时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：本文主要介绍自己心中最喜欢的中国民间故事，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总述最爱的故事的名字； 第二步，详细介绍这个故事的内容； 第三步，介绍自己喜欢这个故事的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①Therefore因此 ②forever永远 ③as long as只要 [高分句型] ①Near his home stood two mountains which made it difficult for him to go outside（定语从句） ②This story reminds us nothing is impossible as long as we put our effort into it.（as long as引导的条件状语从句） 7．从入学到现在你应该阅读过很多书籍，书籍里的人物或某个事件也许会对你的生活方式、为人处世方式或学习态度产生一定的影响。请你以“It/He/She influenced me a lot”为题写一篇短文，参加学校的读书交流征文活动。 内容提示： (1) What event is it?/Who is he/she? (2) How did it/he/she influence you? (3) What did you learn from it/him/her? 写作要求： (1) 语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；(2) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I’m influenced by the book Charlotte’s Web written by E.B. White a lot. The book tells the story of a livestock pig named Wilbur and his friendship with a barn spider named Charlotte. When Wilbur is in danger of being slaughtered by the farmer, Charlotte writes messages praising Wilbur in her web in order to persuade the farmer to let him live. At the end of the story, while Wilbur gets to be very famous at a country fair with the help of Charlotte message writing skills, Charlotte herself reaches the end of her life after laying an egg sack. Before dying, Charlotte entrusts her eggs to Wilbur who takes them back to the barn, guarding them until they hatch. Three of them stay behind and befriend Wilbur. It is my favourite book because the characters and descriptions of farm life in the book looked so surreal to my mind. Besides, no other books, which I had read up until then, had awakened my imagination. Charlotte and Wilbur’s friendship, despite their differences in nature, teaches tolerance. As he grows up, like any child, Wilbur learns to cope with fear, loss, mortality, and loneliness. Although it is a story of life and death, it is also full of warmth. It warms me, too. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料所要求内容不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题说明对自己影响很大的书籍名称； 第二步，阐述书籍内容以及对自己的影响； 第三步，写出自己的收获和感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①at the end of在……结尾 ②grow up长大 ③cope with对付 ④be full of充满 [高分句型] ①When Wilbur is in danger of being slaughtered by the farmer, Charlotte writes messages praising Wilbur in her web in order to persuade the farmer to let him live.（时间状语从句） ②Although it is a story of life and death, it is also full of warmth.（让步状语从句） 8．假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jack正在学习中文，对理解成语“愚公移山(Yu Gong Moves a Mountain)”有困难，来信向你请教。请用英语写一封回信，内容包括： 1.解释成语故事及其含义； 2.提出学习成语的建议。 注意： 1.词数：90左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, I got your letter about having trouble understanding the Chinese idiom Yu Gong Moves a Mountain. Let me explain it to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Don’t hesitate to ask if you have any more questions. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Jack, I got your letter about having trouble understanding the Chinese idiom Yu Gong Moves a Mountain. Let me explain it to you. The story goes that a very old man named Yu Gong decided to move two large mountains that blocked the way to his home. Despite his age and the enormity of the task, he was determined to remove the mountains. His perseverance and determination eventually moved the gods, who sent divine beings to help him complete the task. The idiom “Yu Gong Moves a Mountain” symbolizes the spirit of perseverance and the belief that with determination, even the most difficult tasks can be accomplished. To better understand and learn Chinese idioms, I suggest you read more Chinese stories and try to use the idioms in your daily conversations. Watching Chinese movies or TV shows can also help you see how these idioms are used in context. Don’t hesitate to ask if you have any more questions. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，说明写信目的； 第二步，介绍“愚公移山”故事及其含义，并提出学习成语的建议； 第三步，表达期望或主动提供帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①block the way拦路 ②be determined to do下定决心做 ③perseverance and determination毅力和决心 [高分句型] ①To better understand and learn Chinese idioms, I suggest you read more Chinese stories and try to use the idioms in your daily conversations.（不定式表目的） ②His perseverance and determination eventually moved the gods, who sent divine beings to help him complete the task.（定语从句） 9．假定你是李辉，学校举办英语周，倡导学生们“用英语讲中国故事”并举办一场故事演讲比赛。请你写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。 内容包括： 1. 故事总体介绍（故事名称及主要角色）； 2. 故事的主要情节； 3. 你的个人评价。 注意： 1. 词数80-100，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 演讲稿中不能出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear schoolmates, China has a history of over 5000 years and its culture is great and wonderful. We’ve learnt about a lot of Chinese stories since an early age. Today I’ll tell you one of them. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! Yours, Li Hui 【答案】例文： Dear schoolmates, China has a history of over 5000 years and its culture is great and wonderful. We’ve learnt about a lot of Chinese stories since an early age. Today I’ll tell you one of them. Its name is Cao Chong weighs an elephant. It is a story about Cao Cao’s son, a clever boy named Cao Chong. One day, Sun Quan sent Cao Cao a huge elephant. Cao Cao was quite pleased and wanted to know its weight. However, no one knew how to solve this problem. Just then, Cao Chong, Cao Cao’s little son, got an idea. He asked some soldiers to lead the elephant onto a boat. The boat went lower into the water when the elephant walked onto it. He drew a line on the side of the boat to mark how low it went. Then Cao Chong let the soldiers take the elephant off the boat and fill the boats with rocks until water reached the line on the boat. Then Cao Chong weighed the rocks which were added into the boat. That was the weight of the elephant. Everyone considered Cao Chong a genius. From this story, we know that when we face difficult problems, we shouldn’t give up and deal with them from another view. Thank you for listening! Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明故事名称及主要角色； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍故事的主要情节； 第三步，写个人评价。 [亮点词汇] ①be pleased满意的 ②how to solve如何解决 ③ask sb to do让某人做某事 [高分句型] ①The boat went lower into the water when the elephant walked onto it. (时间状语从句) ②Then Cao Chong weighed the rocks which were added into the boat. (定语从句) 10．假如你是陈雨，希望中学的一名学生。你们学校正在举办以“My Favorite Story”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备一份演讲稿参赛。 要求： 1.书写规范，卷面整洁； 2.语句通顺，情节完整，逻辑清晰； 3.不少于80词。 My Favorite Story ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Story Hello, everyone! I’m Chen Yu. There are many stories in China. Among all of the stories, I like Yugong moves the mountains best. Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yugong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yugong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away. The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up. This is all about my favorite story. Thank you for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据题干，介绍自己最喜欢的故事，适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的故事是《愚公移山》； 第二步，详细描述故事内容； 第三步，介绍故事带给自己的启发。 [亮点词汇] ①Once upon a time曾经 ②give up放弃 [高分句型] ①They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. (so…that…引导结果状语从句) ②The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. (that引导的宾语从句；as long as引导的条件状语从句) 11．假定你是李辉，即将参加学校英语俱乐部举办的“品名著”读书报告展示活动。请你从我们学过的几个小故事“Tom Sawyer paints the fence”，“The gifts”，“The last leaf”，“Tom and Becky in the cave”当中选一个，写一篇英文读书报告。 内容包括： 1. 故事的名字，作者，主要人物； 2. 主要故事情节； 3. 你的个人观点。 注意： 1. 词数80—100。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。 This is a report on ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hui 【答案】 例文 This is a report on the story Tom Sawyer paints the fence. It is written by Mark Twain, who is still well-known around the world because of his interesting novels. There are some characters in the story, including Tom, Becky, Ben, Aunt Polly and so on. Of course, Tom, the naughty but lovely boy, is one of the main characters. The story takes place one afternoon in a town. Tom is required to paint the 3-yard-long fence by Aunt Polly. It is such hard work that Tom actually is unwilling to complete it. Suddenly, he thinks of an idea. When his friend passes by, Tom pretends to enjoy painting the fence and it is great fun to do it. Therefore, his friend becomes interested and begs Tom for a try. Later on, more boys are tricked into painting the fence and even offer their food and toys. At last, the fence gets 3 coats of paint. For Tom, he wins Aunt Polly’s praise and his friends’ toys and food as well. In my opinion, the story is so interesting and enjoyable that it is worth reading. Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇读书报告，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，介绍故事的名字、作者和主要人物； 第二步，简要介绍故事的主要情节； 第三步，发表你的个人观点。 [亮点词汇] ①be unwilling to do sth不情愿做某事 ②pass by经过 ③pretend to do sth假装做某事 ④beg sb for sth向某人乞求某物 [高分句型] ①It is written by Mark Twain, who is still well-known around the world because of his interesting novels.（who引导的非限制性定语从句） ②It is such hard work that Tom actually is unwilling to complete it.（such…that引导的结果状语从句） 12．提示：讲好中国故事，传播中国声音，推动中国文化更好地走向世界。请以“A Chinese Story that Moved Me”为题，以及这个故事在你成长经历中对你的启迪，影响或借鉴。 要求： 1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 A Chinese Story that Moved Me _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A Chinese Story that Moved Me Once upon a time, there lived an old man called Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Although Yu Gong was old, he decided to move the mountains with his family. So Yu Gong started digging. At that time, a “clever” man called Zhi Sou laughed at him and told him that it was impossible to move such high mountains. But Yu Gong didn’t listen to him and said that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. Then a god was moved by Yu Gong, so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains. The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，讲述这个寓言故事；   第二步，介绍这个故事对自己的影响。   [亮点词汇]   ①stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事 ②laugh at嘲笑 ③give up放弃 [高分句型]   ①Although Yu Gong was old, he decided to move the mountains with his family.（although引导让步状语从句）   ②The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard.（that引导宾语从句） 13．假如你是李华，你的南非朋友Mike对中国古代四大名著很感兴趣，希望你能推荐其中的一部，请用英语给Mike回信，内容包括： 一、简要介绍一本名著； 二、说明你推荐的理由。 要求： 1. 80字左右（开头和结尾已给出不记入总词数内）。 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 3. 可适当添加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯。 4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。 参考词汇：Romance of Three Kingdoms; Water Margin; Journey to the West;  A Dream of Red Mentions Dear Mike, It is very exciting to know ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hopefully, you will find this book is well worth reading. Sincerely Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, It is very exciting to know you are interested in the Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese literature. They are all masterpieces worth reading. I’d like to recommend you read A Dream of Red Mentions first. This great novel was written by Cao Xuqin and edited by Gao E during the Qing Dynasty, telling us the story of some young people and the rise and fall of their families. It is of great value in literature, medicine, food, dress and architecture. The love between Baoyu and Daiyu will surely bring you a lot of laughter and tears. Hopefully, you will find this book is well worth reading. Sincerely Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总述中国四大名著值得阅读； 第二步，简要介绍推荐的名著，并说明理由； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in 对……感兴趣 ②be worth doing sth.  值得做某事 ③between...and 在……和……之间 [高分句型] This great novel was written by Cao Xuqin and edited by Gao E during the Qing Dynasty, telling us the story of some young people and the rise and fall of their families. (被动语态) 14．用英语讲好中国故事！ 提升语言能力，传播中国声音。假设China Daily网站中的Culture版块中有一项“Tell a Chinese traditional story”征文活动。假如你是李华，请你以“My favorite Chinese traditional story”为题写一篇英语文章进行投稿。 提示： 1. 描述故事内容。 2. 故事带给你的影响和启发。 要求： 1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。 2.语句连贯，字数100词左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My favorite Chinese traditional story There are many traditional stories in China. Among all of the stories, I like YuGong moves the mountains best. Once upon a time, there was an old man called YuGong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. YuGong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he took the mountains away. The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求以“我最喜爱的中国传统故事”为题写一篇英文征文，需按照提示内容进行写作。 2.写作指导：本文以第三人称进行写作，描述故事内容时采用一般过去时，表达感想时采用一般现在时。写作时可分为三段，第一段引出主题，第二段叙述故事内容，第三段陈述哲理启发。注意时态的变换和主谓一致，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。 15．请你根据以下内容提示,为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍发生在你好朋友王强Wang Qiang身上的一件事。 1.上周一放学后Wang Qiang骑车回家,在十字路口,看到一位老太太正要过马路。 2.当时交通灯坏了,所有车辆都一个接一个通过十字路口。 3.老太太犹豫不决,不敢独自穿过十字路口。 4.王强看到这种情况,主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过了路口。 5.请就此事谈谈你的看法...... 要求: 1.短文要包括以上所有要点。2.行文连贯,可适当发挥。3.词数:80-100。开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:十字路口 crossroads    在……犹豫不决 hesitate in Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home. On his way home, at a crossroads he saw an old lady going across the road. Because the traffic lights didn’t work at that time, all the traffic crossed the road without stopping one by one. The lady hesitated in whether she should cross it, but she was afraid to do that When Wang Qiang saw that, he offered to stop the traffic with his bike in order to lead her to cross the road safely. In my opinion, Wang Qiang is such a good example that we should learn from him. At the same time we also suggest that all the drivers should let people cross first and then traffic when this situation happens. 【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍发生在我的好朋友王强身上的一件事。 【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The lady hesitated……，but she was afraid……，he offered to……，Wang Qiang is…..等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了王强骑车回家的路上看见一位老太太不敢过马路，接下来介绍他主动上前拦住了车辆领着老人安全过了路口，最后我就这件事谈谈我的想法。此处on one’s way, see sb doing sth, at that time, without doing sth, offer to do sth, learn from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$