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专题04 书面表达12篇
(南通中考真题+中考模拟)
1.(2024·江苏南通·中考真题)假如你是李华,将参加学校英语社团举行的主题为“A Friendly Smile”的交流分享活动,谈谈班级里与微笑有关的故事,请根据下面海报中的提示,写一篇交流稿。
A Friendly SmileTips for your sharing
·choose anything that happened in your class
·describe the story
·express your feelings
Please join us and share your story at 8:00 a. m. next Tuesday (June 25) at the Students’ Centre.
School English Club
注意:1. 词数 90左右,交流稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 交流稿中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1. Grade 9. Today I like to share a story that happened in my class. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you often smile? Thank you!
2.(2023·江苏南通·中考真题)热心公益,积极为社会作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你从以下社会行为中选择一种或另选一种相关活动,用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备做的一次社会实践活动的短文。要求表达清楚“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。
注意:1. 词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
参考词汇:responsibility n. 责任;义务
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity.
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3.(2022·江苏南通·中考真题)华夏大地,人杰地灵;中华文明,源远流长。假如你是李华,你国外的朋友Andy想了解中国,请根据下图提示,选择或自拟至少两个要点进行介绍。
注意:1.词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Learning that you are interested in China, I feel honored to introduce my country to you.
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4.(2021·江苏南通·中考真题)艺术陶冶情操, 涵养生命。你喜欢的艺术形式是什么, 有过怎样的经历, 又有怎样的感受呢?请在下列图示中任选一种或自选一种其他艺术形式, 用英语写一篇短文。
注意:1. 词数90左右, 短文开头已给出, 不计入总词数。2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Art plays an important role in our life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(2020·江苏南通·中考真题)阳光中学的英语社团下周将举行一次座谈会,主题为“幸福都是奋斗出来的”。假如你是魏华,将参与座谈。请根据以下图片提示,联系自身实际,从德、智、体、美、劳等方面中选取至少三个方面写一篇英语发言稿,谈谈自己将如何努力奋斗。
注意:1. 词数90左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Wei Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m happy to be here to share my ideas. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
6.(2019·江苏南通·中考真题)假如你是李明,请参考《南通市初中学生综合索质评价方案》的相关指标,对你本学期的突出优点和明显不足进行总结,举例佐证优点并针对不足提出改进措施,完成一份自评小结。
注意:1. 图表中的内容不需要面面俱到,不要逐条翻译。2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Self-assessment
I’m Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think it’s necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.(2018·江苏南通·中考真题)书面表达
“南通市安全教育平台”让广大中小学生学到了很多安全知识。假如你是Jack,你的英国朋友Simon想了解平台的相关内容,请你根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文,从提供的六个类别里选择两个,跟 Simon谈谈相应的保护自身安全的措施,并分享你的体会。
Contents
(内容)
Categories(类别)
fire safety
food safety
traffic safety
Internet safety
natural disasters
accidental injuries
Solutions(措施)
……(请按你自选的两类内容分别写两点)
Understanding(体会)
treasure life;…(请写1~2点)
提示词汇:accidental injuries意外伤害 treasure珍爱 vt.
注意:1.短文中应包含所要求的信息,可以适当发挥。
2.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3.短文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear Simon,
Safety is very important.Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety.A website called nantong. sa fetree. com helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety.On the website,I have learned a lot.
8.(2024·江苏南通·二模)为进一步推动教育教学改革,改善学生中出现的不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象,促进学生多元化成长,学校开设了劳动品德教育,对此你表示赞同。请结 合自身的体会及如何培养劳动能力和精神,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1. 上劳动课,学习生活技能;
2. 参加课后劳动,如……,丰富真实的劳动体验;
3. 学做家务,如……,培养学生独立生活的能力;
4. 你的想法和建议……
注意:
1. 内容需涵盖所有要点,并作适当发挥;
2. 词数90词左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 不得在文中出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
As we all know, hardworking spirit education can help more students to get a working spirit. As a middle school student, what should we do? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.(2024·江苏南通·二模)你们班想在毕业之前分小组为学校做一些有意义的事,如种植纪念树、捐书给图书馆、 拍摄宣传学校的视频等。假如你是李华,你们组打算邀请交换生Peter一起参加这次活动。 请你根据提示,用英文写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动安排及你们组的打算。
提示词语:memorial 纪念的
提示问题:
● What activities does your class plan to do? Why?
● When and where will your class organize them?
● Which activity will your group choose? Why?
注意:
1. 表达中必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
2. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We sincerely invite you to join us for this special activity. Your presence would mean a lot to us.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
10.(2024·江苏南通·一模)近来,安全问题备受关注。专家指出,提高青少年的自我保护能力可以避免80%的意外伤害。因此,自我保护是青少年必备的意识和能力之一。请你以“Self-protection”为题写 一篇演讲稿,选择或自拟两个方面,谈谈自我保护的重要性并提出具体建议。
要求:
词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
可以适当发挥,使条理清晰,内容完整,意思连贯。
文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
参考词汇:school-bullying校园欺凌
Self-protection
Good afternoon, everyone!
Recently safety has been paid much attention to. It is reported that 80% of the injuries can be prevented by improving our self-protection abilities. Self-protection is one of the most important skills to us.
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Thanks for your listening!
11.(2024·江苏南通·一模)很多外国友人喜欢中国文化,David就是其中之一。他在抖音上发起Traditional Chinese Stories的话题,向中国网友征集中国传统故事。请你参与话题,介绍一个中国传统故事,传播中国声音。
提示:①What is the story about?
②Why do you choose the story? (至少两点)
※You can choose one from the following stories or any other one you like.
Yu Gong moves mountains. 愚公移山
The Rabbit and the Turtle. 龟兔赛跑
Look at the Sky from the Bottom of a Well. 坐井观天 ...
要求:①不得出现学校、老师和同学的真实姓名。
②语句连贯,字数90词左右。
Traditional Chinese stories play an important role in Chinese culture. Now I’d like to introduce
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12.(2024·江苏南通·一模)近日,你校举办了“我为母校建言献策”的征集活动,请毕业年级的学生为学校未来发展提出自己宝贵的建议。假如你是李华,请你给教导处王老师写一份信。请你从提供的6个方面里选择2—3点,谈谈你的真实感受,并针对你认为有待提高的地方,提出合理建议和简要说明理由,同时献上你对母校未来发展的美好祝福。
Contents (内容)
Course design(课程设计)
School environment(校园环境)
Quality of lunch(午餐质量)
Burden of homework(作业负担)
School activities(校园活动)
School rules(学校规则)
Suggestions (建议)
……(请写 1—2 点)
Thanks &Wishes (感谢与祝愿)
……(请写 1—2 点)
注意:1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息;
2. 词数:90词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文章必须包含所需要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Mr Wang,
I’d like to say something about my school and school life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
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专题04 书面表达12篇
(南通中考真题+中考模拟)
1.(2024·江苏南通·中考真题)假如你是李华,将参加学校英语社团举行的主题为“A Friendly Smile”的交流分享活动,谈谈班级里与微笑有关的故事,请根据下面海报中的提示,写一篇交流稿。
A Friendly SmileTips for your sharing
·choose anything that happened in your class
·describe the story
·express your feelings
Please join us and share your story at 8:00 a. m. next Tuesday (June 25) at the Students’ Centre.
School English Club
注意:1. 词数 90左右,交流稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 交流稿中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1. Grade 9. Today I like to share a story that happened in my class. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you often smile? Thank you!
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. Today I’d like to share a story that happened in my class.
One day, our teacher announced that there would be a math test the next day. Everyone was worried, except for Tom. He was always confident and had a smile on his face. When the test started, I found the questions very difficult and I was stuck. I looked around and saw Tom still smiling. His smile was like a ray of sunshine, making me feel less nervous. After the test, I asked him how he could be so calm. He said, “A smile can make everything better. When you smile, you feel more confident and you can think more clearly.” His words made me realize the power of a smile.
Since then, I have tried to smile more often. When I meet difficulties, I smile and tell myself to be brave. When I see my classmates, I smile to show my friendliness. A smile can really make a difference.
Do you often smile? Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:根据提示内容谈谈班级里与微笑有关的故事,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,谈谈班级里与微笑有关的故事;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①except for除了
②look around环顾四周
③make a difference有影响
[高分句型]
①One day, our teacher announced that there would be a math test the next day. (that引导的宾语从句)
②When the test started, I found the questions very difficult and I was stuck. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③His smile was like a ray of sunshine, making me feel less nervous. (现在分词作状语)
2.(2023·江苏南通·中考真题)热心公益,积极为社会作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你从以下社会行为中选择一种或另选一种相关活动,用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备做的一次社会实践活动的短文。要求表达清楚“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。
注意:1. 词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
参考词汇:responsibility n. 责任;义务
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity.
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【答案】例文:
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity. I’m going to take part in a voluntary activity in Old People’s Home.
First, I can talk to the old about something interesting or take a walk with them. Then, I may give them a great performance. Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or folding clothes for the old.
I believe these activities will not only make the old happy but also help me learn a lot. Isn’t it meaningful?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应选择一种社会行为,介绍今年暑假准备做的社会实践活动,要包含要点“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,介绍做什么,为何做;
第二步,介绍怎么做;
第三步,再次点明活动的益处,暗含这么做的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②such as 例如
③fold clothes 叠衣服
④not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or folding clothes for the old.(whatever引导宾语从句)
②Isn’t it meaningful?(否定疑问句)
3.(2022·江苏南通·中考真题)华夏大地,人杰地灵;中华文明,源远流长。假如你是李华,你国外的朋友Andy想了解中国,请根据下图提示,选择或自拟至少两个要点进行介绍。
注意:1.词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Learning that you are interested in China, I feel honored to introduce my country to you.
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【答案】例文
Learning that you are interested in China, I feel honored to introduce my country to you.
First, there are many great men in our country, such as Yuan Longping. Yuan Longping is known as the “father of hybrid rice”. He made a great contribution to the world food supply. Second, there are many famous places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall. It is known as one of the seven Wonders of the World. Third, China also has many traditional festivals, such as Spring Festival, Dragon Boat Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and so on. Chinese people attach the most importance to the Spring Festival.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给图示提示,选择至少两个要点,向Andy介绍中国的人物、名胜、节日等。
2.写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时;人称以第三人称为主。本文介绍时可以根据所给的人物、景点、节日描述,也可以自拟要点介绍。行文确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
4.(2021·江苏南通·中考真题)艺术陶冶情操, 涵养生命。你喜欢的艺术形式是什么, 有过怎样的经历, 又有怎样的感受呢?请在下列图示中任选一种或自选一种其他艺术形式, 用英语写一篇短文。
注意:1. 词数90左右, 短文开头已给出, 不计入总词数。2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Art plays an important role in our life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Art is an important part of our life. My favourite art is making kites.
According to my grandparents, when I was young, I looked forward to flying. One year, when spring came, my grandfather made a kite for me. That made me quite excited. When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of flying came true.
As I’m growing older, like a kite, I will leave my parents. But I know the line is still in my parents’ hand. With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther.
Art teaches us a lot. It makes our life rich and colourful.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求从所给的图示中任选一种或或自选一种其他艺术形式,写一篇短文来介绍自己喜欢的艺术形式,并结合自己的经历谈谈自己的感受。
2.写作指导:开始写作之前,先要确定自己要选的艺术形式,并根据所选内容列出写作提纲,以第一人称展开叙述,时态用一般现在时和一般过去时。可以先介绍自己喜欢的艺术形式是什么,接下来谈谈自己有过什么样的经历,最后谈谈自己的感受;文章开头已给出,注意上下文衔接过渡自然,可适当使用连词,保证语句通顺,条理清晰,注意文中无单词和语法错误。
5.(2020·江苏南通·中考真题)阳光中学的英语社团下周将举行一次座谈会,主题为“幸福都是奋斗出来的”。假如你是魏华,将参与座谈。请根据以下图片提示,联系自身实际,从德、智、体、美、劳等方面中选取至少三个方面写一篇英语发言稿,谈谈自己将如何努力奋斗。
注意:1. 词数90左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Wei Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m happy to be here to share my ideas. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文:
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Wei Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m happy to be here to share my ideas. I think happiness is achieved through hard work.
Firstly, helping others will make us feel happy. For example, we should give our seats to the elderly when we take a bus. After we see their smiling faces, we must be happier too.Secondly, healthy bodies can bring us happiness. Health is important to everyone. Only when we keep healthy, we can work and study happily. So we should keep doing exercise every day. Thirdly, knowledge makes our life colorful and interesting. In our free time, we are willing to learn different kinds of skills (like computer and art) so that we can serve the society better. Finally, the beautiful environment gives us a comfortable feeling. We should plant more trees to protect the environment. We also work as volunteers and clean up the parks.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求以“幸福都是奋斗出来的”为主题,结合图片提示,完成英语发言稿,开头和结尾已经给出,补充剩余内容即可。
2.例文点评:例文采用三段式结构,第一段点明“幸福都是奋斗出来的”这一主题,第二段结合自身实际,从不同的方面讲述了自己该如何奋斗,第三段是结束语;整篇文章内容完整,结构清晰条理;人称主要是第一人称,时态主要是一般现在时。
3.高分亮点:
短语:make sb. do sth.;give one’s seat to sb.;for example;keep doing sth.;in one’s free time;be willing to do sth.;different kinds of。
句型:so that引导的目的状语从句;when引导的时间状语从句。
6.(2019·江苏南通·中考真题)假如你是李明,请参考《南通市初中学生综合索质评价方案》的相关指标,对你本学期的突出优点和明显不足进行总结,举例佐证优点并针对不足提出改进措施,完成一份自评小结。
注意:1. 图表中的内容不需要面面俱到,不要逐条翻译。2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Self-assessment
I’m Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think it’s necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Self-assessment
I’m Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think it's necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term.I think I am a healthy person. I like sports. I like playing basketball and running. I have a good study habit. I can listen to the teacher and review carefully after class. I am a helpful person. I like to interact with my classmates. I have a good citizenship. I try to innovate knowledge. I also have a good sense of aesthetics. I think I am a good student.
【详解】假如你是李明,请参考《南通市初中学生综合索质评价方案》的相关指标,对你本学期的突出优点和明显不足进行总结,举例佐证优点并针对不足提出改进措施,完成一份自评小结。本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第三人称,注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少.如: I think I am a healthy person. I like sports. I like playing basketball and running.
7.(2018·江苏南通·中考真题)书面表达
“南通市安全教育平台”让广大中小学生学到了很多安全知识。假如你是Jack,你的英国朋友Simon想了解平台的相关内容,请你根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文,从提供的六个类别里选择两个,跟 Simon谈谈相应的保护自身安全的措施,并分享你的体会。
Contents
(内容)
Categories(类别)
fire safety
food safety
traffic safety
Internet safety
natural disasters
accidental injuries
Solutions(措施)
……(请按你自选的两类内容分别写两点)
Understanding(体会)
treasure life;…(请写1~2点)
提示词汇:accidental injuries意外伤害 treasure珍爱 vt.
注意:1.短文中应包含所要求的信息,可以适当发挥。
2.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3.短文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear Simon,
Safety is very important.Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety.A website called nantong. sa fetree. com helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety.On the website,I have learned a lot.
【答案】Dear Simon,
Safety is very important.Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety.A website called nantong.sa fetree. com helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety.On the website,I have learned a lot.
Food safety is the most common problem with us students.We should stay away from fast food.Perhaps fast food is delicious,but it’s bad for our health.Some dishes and food may be expired and you shouldn't eat them the next day,especially the dishes and food that were put into the fridge the night before.I once ate the dishes in the fridge.The next day,when I got to school,I had a stomachache.At least you should heat it enough before you eat them.Next,the traffic safety is also a big problem.It's necessary for us to obey the traffic rules,especially when we’re on the way to school or back home.Pay more attention to the traffic lights.Don't cross the road when the light is red.We should always go on the right side.Don't ride bikes side by side.
All in all,we must realize the danger around us and treasure our lives.Safety is always the first priority.
Yours
Jack
【分析】这是一篇给材料作文,跟我的英国朋友Simon谈谈安全的类别以及相应的保护自身安全的措施,并分享我的体会。
【详解】结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Food safety is……,We should…….,when I got to……,we must……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了安全很重要,有一个网站帮助我们知道很多安全知识;接下来介绍安全的类别以及相应的保护自身安全的措施,最后指出我的体会。此处stay away from, be bad for, put into, at least, pay attention to, all in all等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
8.(2024·江苏南通·二模)为进一步推动教育教学改革,改善学生中出现的不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象,促进学生多元化成长,学校开设了劳动品德教育,对此你表示赞同。请结 合自身的体会及如何培养劳动能力和精神,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1. 上劳动课,学习生活技能;
2. 参加课后劳动,如……,丰富真实的劳动体验;
3. 学做家务,如……,培养学生独立生活的能力;
4. 你的想法和建议……
注意:
1. 内容需涵盖所有要点,并作适当发挥;
2. 词数90词左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 不得在文中出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
As we all know, hardworking spirit education can help more students to get a working spirit. As a middle school student, what should we do? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
As we all know, hardworking spirit education can help more students to get a working spirit. As a middle school student, what should we do?
Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables in order to enrich our real-world work experience. In addition, we need to try to do some housework at home like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.
In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括四个方面的内容要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍劳动能力和精神的重要性,引出话题:中学生应该如何做;
第二步,结合提示内容,重点介绍我们应该如何做,给出恰当的建议;
第三步,书写总结。
[亮点词汇]
① in addition 另外
② above all 尤其是
[高分句型]
① Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables in order to enrich our real-world work experience. (in order to作目的状语)
② Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience. (and连接并列句)
9.(2024·江苏南通·二模)你们班想在毕业之前分小组为学校做一些有意义的事,如种植纪念树、捐书给图书馆、 拍摄宣传学校的视频等。假如你是李华,你们组打算邀请交换生Peter一起参加这次活动。 请你根据提示,用英文写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动安排及你们组的打算。
提示词语:memorial 纪念的
提示问题:
● What activities does your class plan to do? Why?
● When and where will your class organize them?
● Which activity will your group choose? Why?
注意:
1. 表达中必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
2. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We sincerely invite you to join us for this special activity. Your presence would mean a lot to us.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I’m writing to invite you to join us.
Our class wants to do something meaningful for our school before we graduate. We have decided to plant a memorial tree, donate books to the library, and make a video to promote our school. These activities are not only a way to give back to our school but also to create lasting memories for our class. We have scheduled these activities next week at our school.
We all know that trees can protect us from sand and make our environment beautiful. So our group decide to plant a tree for our school. We will meet at the school gate at 7 o’clock next Saturday. Then we will go to the playground. We will dig a hole, plant a tree and water it.
We sincerely invite you to join us for this special activity. Your presence would mean a lot to us.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明要邀请Peter参加活动;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍班级活动内容、时间、地点及原因,小组活动内容及原因;
第三步,书写结语。表达希望Peter可以参加活动。
[亮点词汇]
①meaningful有意义的
②promote推广
③give back回报
④create lasting memories创造持久的回忆
[高分句型]
We all know that trees can protect us from sand and make our environment beautiful. (宾语从句)
10.(2024·江苏南通·一模)近来,安全问题备受关注。专家指出,提高青少年的自我保护能力可以避免80%的意外伤害。因此,自我保护是青少年必备的意识和能力之一。请你以“Self-protection”为题写 一篇演讲稿,选择或自拟两个方面,谈谈自我保护的重要性并提出具体建议。
要求:
词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
可以适当发挥,使条理清晰,内容完整,意思连贯。
文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
参考词汇:school-bullying校园欺凌
Self-protection
Good afternoon, everyone!
Recently safety has been paid much attention to. It is reported that 80% of the injuries can be prevented by improving our self-protection abilities. Self-protection is one of the most important skills to us.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文
Self-protection
Good afternoon, everyone!
Recently, more and more people pay attention to safety problems. It is reported that 80% of the injuries can be prevented by improving our self-protection abilities. Self-protection is one of the most important skills to us.
We can avoid or reduce the possibility of being hurt if we know what to do in different situations. Fire is one of the most terrible accidents around us. If our building is on fire, the most important is to calm down first. Then, cover the mouth and nose with a wet towel to protect ourselves from thick smoke and try to get out as soon as possible.
School-bullying is another danger that may happen around us. If we meet with school-bullying, we must tell our teachers or parents about it. They will help us deal with it well. What’s more, it’s necessary for us to help others if they are in trouble. In a word, we should have some self-protection skills to live a safe and happy life.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自我保护”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,介绍自我保护的重要性;
第二步,根据题干中的表格,具体介绍两种情况并给出建议;
第三步,收尾,并再次点评自我保护的重要性,与前文呼应。
[亮点词汇]
①calm down冷静
②in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①School-bullying is another danger that may happen around us.(定语从句)
②What’s more, it’s necessary for us to help others if they are in trouble.(it is adj for sb to do句型)
11.(2024·江苏南通·一模)很多外国友人喜欢中国文化,David就是其中之一。他在抖音上发起Traditional Chinese Stories的话题,向中国网友征集中国传统故事。请你参与话题,介绍一个中国传统故事,传播中国声音。
提示:①What is the story about?
②Why do you choose the story? (至少两点)
※You can choose one from the following stories or any other one you like.
Yu Gong moves mountains. 愚公移山
The Rabbit and the Turtle. 龟兔赛跑
Look at the Sky from the Bottom of a Well. 坐井观天 ...
要求:①不得出现学校、老师和同学的真实姓名。
②语句连贯,字数90词左右。
Traditional Chinese stories play an important role in Chinese culture. Now I’d like to introduce
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【答案】例文
Traditional Chinese stories play an important role in Chinese culture. Now, I’d like to introduce a well-known story called the Rabbit and the Turtle.
One day a rabbit and a turtle had a race. At first, the rabbit ran so fast that he quickly left the turtle far behind. A moment of pride went through his mind, “if I have a sleep now, the turtle can’t catch up with me, either.” Then he followed what he thought.
However, the turtle insisted on pulling himself slowly to the end, though he was quite tired. At last, when the turtle reached the finishing line, the whole animal world was surprised. The rabbit regretted a lot.
The story reminds me that something which seems impossible can be achieved if someone puts all his effort into it. As the old saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits.” And I think I should take each task seriously not only in my study, but also in my life in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出要介绍的传统故事;
第二步,具体阐述传统故事内容;
第三步,阐述自己从这个故事中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①catch up with赶上
②insist on坚持
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①At last, when the turtle reached the finishing line, the whole animal world was surprised.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②The story reminds me that something which seems impossible can be achieved if someone puts all his effort into it.(宾语从句)
12.(2024·江苏南通·一模)近日,你校举办了“我为母校建言献策”的征集活动,请毕业年级的学生为学校未来发展提出自己宝贵的建议。假如你是李华,请你给教导处王老师写一份信。请你从提供的6个方面里选择2—3点,谈谈你的真实感受,并针对你认为有待提高的地方,提出合理建议和简要说明理由,同时献上你对母校未来发展的美好祝福。
Contents (内容)
Course design(课程设计)
School environment(校园环境)
Quality of lunch(午餐质量)
Burden of homework(作业负担)
School activities(校园活动)
School rules(学校规则)
Suggestions (建议)
……(请写 1—2 点)
Thanks &Wishes (感谢与祝愿)
……(请写 1—2 点)
注意:1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息;
2. 词数:90词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文章必须包含所需要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Mr Wang,
I’d like to say something about my school and school life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
Dear Mr Wang,
I’d like to say something about my school and school life. My school is like a beautiful garden with many trees and flowers. Therefore, I feel comfortable to study in such a pleasant environment. Different kinds of activities are held every year to enrich my school life, which helps me grow healthily.
However, there are some ways that need improvement. First of all, I suggest that the school restaurant can make some dishes that students really enjoy. Secondly, more practical courses like cooking can be added so that we can learn more life skills and become more independent.
Grateful for all, I hope our school will have a brighter future and become a better self.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信。
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:从所给要点中选取2到3点表达阐述你的真实感受;
第二步:针对你认为有待提高的地方,提出合理建议和简要说明理由;
第三步:表达对母校未来发展的美好祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of各种各样的
②first of all首先
③so that以便
[高分句型]
①Different kinds of activities are held every year to enrich my school life, which helps me grow healthily. (非限制性定语从句)
②First of all, I suggest that the school restaurant can make some dishes that students really enjoy.(that引导的宾语从句,定语从句)
③Secondly, more practical courses like cooking can be added so that we can learn more life skills and become more independent.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
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