内蒙古自治区赤峰市2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中英语试题

保密★启用前 第二节（共15小题：每小题1.5分，满分22.5分） 赤峰市高三年级11·20模拟考试试题 听下面5段对话球始白。每段对话成独白后有几个小题，从题中所哈的A、B、C三个远 项中达出量性逸项，听每段对话或鞋白前，你将有时间阅读各个小恩，年小愿5秒钟：听先 英语 22411 后，各小置将输出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话成独白续两追。 听第6段材料，回答第6、7题. 生童帝项：1.本试卷分选择题和集选择抛两高分。满分10分，考时间0分种。 6What are the two speakers taTking about? 工容菌前，考生先将白已的姓名和准考证号套可滑楚，将条形网难确帖贴在务生垃单彩两桂站 A.Aschool band B.A school ooncert C.A school masic festival 区 7.What does thea like best of the perfocmance from these class? 、考生作答时，请博答案答在答延卡上，意绿题每小题这出答表后。用2B格笔光春愿卡上对应 A.Rock and folk. B.Rock and pop. C.Jazz and pop. 题日的苍案标号涂篇：非进择愿束用直径Q5毫米果色图水签字笔在希活卡上各题的物题区城 听第7段材料，回答第8至10题. 内作答，醒出答西区城书写的苍案天效，在草规纸：试卷上筹萄无效。 &Why has Tom been beinging his lunch to work? 4保持未面青洁。不要折叠，不要弄装、那鼓。不性使用涂改液、修正蒂，利低刀】 A.To go on a diet. B.To cut down expenses. 第一部分听力（共两节，满分30分） C.To consume bomemade meals. 敏题时，先将答案标在试卷上。录音内容结束后，你将有同分件的时间将试奉上的帝案转涂 到答题卡上， 9.What kind of proceins does the m clude his lunch? 第一节（共5小题：每小愿15分，满分7.5分） A.Beef and chicken.B.Chicken and fish. C.Fish and beaes 听下图5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从悬中所给的A、B,C三个选项中法出最佳 10.What's the man's amitude towards his current eating habit? 选项，听克每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间未回答有关小愿和阅读下一小恩，靓对话仅读 A.Satisfied. B.Regretful. C.Indifferent 一追。 听第8段材料，回答第11至13愿， 例：How much is the shirt2 11.Why does the man make the phoee call? AE19.15 B.9.1& C915. A.To promote a produet.B.To purchase something C.To retumn an item. 答案是C. 12.What aspect ofhe bookcase is the man most coucemed abour? 1.How did the woman lose weight? A.The height. B.The widrh C.The material. A By taking medieise. B.By eating less C.By doingx说 13.What does the woman probably do? 2.Where does the conversatio possibly take place? A.A salesperson. B.An advertiser. C.A destgner. A.In a libeary. B.鱼a cinema C.In a classroom 听第9段材料，回答第14至17愿. 3.What does the woman plan to dothis weekend? 14.What led the gest to be a sofware engineer? A.Move to a new place.B.Pack her belonggs C.Find a new apartnert A.High salary. B.Family pressure C.Strong passioa. 4.What are they going to do? 15.What is the man's career dream? A.Visita doctor. B.Call a chemist. C.Rest at home. A.To be a sales manager.B.To be a team leader C.To be a businessman. 5.How does the man know Greg? 16.What advice does the man give to tech beginners? A.He met Greg in Sweden B.He teaches Greg physics C.He is Greg's elassme A.Keep updated. 且.Focus on challeeges, C.Go to a langer company. 高旦英语第【夏共2国 高三英语第2页共2页 17.What is the probable relacioeship between the speakers? Tennessee Valley Trail A.Teacher and gtudent.B.Editor and reader. C.Interviewer and interviewee. Length:1.8 miks 听第10段材料，回答第18至20题。 Noe:y 18.Where is Macbu Piochu located? Named afer e wreckage of the 55 Teamessee,this valley in the Marin Headlands serves as the A.In East Asia. B.In South Africa. C.In South America. phke memberf the family,Ifyou(协调一数)your triphtide 19.How were the stones in the walls of Machu Piechu held together? dlsand alignments,you canstill se the engine of the wrecked ship SS Tennessee from A.With some sticky substances. thethendofthe hike. B.Through accurate cutting to fit tightly. Gowen Gate Bridge Trail C.With the help of wheels and metal tools. Lengthe 3.6 miles 20.When did Macbu Piccha become known to the publie? No:Bike-friedly A.回191I B.In the 16ch century. C.n2007 Asa ideal hiking destnao for visinors,its 1.7-mile span overlooks the Goiden Gate Strait and the San Francisco Bay,while offering many xeellent points for a family photo. 第二部分阅读（共两节，满分50分） For more ideas,visit our website and find a site and trail that's perfect for your fumily-and 第一节（共15小题：每小题25分，满分375分） 3 your appeteorver哈ge 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B.C、D四个选项中菇出最住法项。 21.Oa which trail can one ride a horse? 、A.Lands End Trail B.Miramontes Trail. Looking for easy day hikes to enjoy fantastic views,but don't know where to go?Lucky for C.Temesee Valley Trail. D.Golden Gate Bridge Trail. you,we've got you covered Here are some of our favorite hikes,in and aroud the Golden Gate 22.Whal is special about Golden Gate Bridge Tra Natioeal Parks,that we think you ad your whole family would enjoy this boliday weekend-or any A.It tailrsatrack for dogs weekend. B.It offers a bird view of the bay. Lands End Trall C.It is famous for unique low tide Length 2.9 miles D.h is named after the engine of a ship Notes:Dog-friendly 23.Who migat be the target readers of the text? This rocky stretch of coastlie in the northwest comer of San Franciso feares bresthtaking A.Families to relax at weekends. scenes of the Golden Gate Strait,the new Lands End Lookout visitor center,and access to the ruins B.Vishoes in love with advenbures. of Sutro Baths. C.Predessional athieles under stress Miramontes Trail D.Pholograpbers erazy about atre. Length:4.6 miles Notes:Horses permitted B This area is now in one of our southemost sites in the Golden Gate National Parks,and it Chien-Shiung Wu was a famous Chinese-American physicist who made significant festuresa flowing stream and splendid second-growth forests of redwoods.Evidence of logging coributios0 nuelearand parele physics(粒子物理学).She was often referred to asthe First iodustry and steamillsis stevident,o. Lady of Physies and the Chinese Marie Cuarie. 高三其请第3页共2真 高三真语宽4页共12页 Bom on Msy 29.1912,in Liuhe,Jiangsu province,Wu was the middle child of ece Her father believed in equal rights for women and the education of girls,so be founded the finst A new study M UR is belping lo keep birds on campus safe from window collisions elementary school in the regic to educate girls Supported by her father,Wu pursuednd Oee of the biggest corervation threstsbirds aee today is coionsith glass windows then moved to a boarding school in Suzhou in 1923 Researchers estimate that around 2 balion birds are killed by glass aneually in the Uaied States. In 1929,she studied physies at National Central University and moved to the US in 1936 for Although windows are essetial in achinecture,they often reflectoudvegetation and ead graduate des at the University of Califomia,Berkeley.uder Emest Lawrene,Nobel birds to their deaths. Prize-winning pioneer of nuclear sienee.Aferan her docorae1940,she tghtSmith "Smsh the Crash"initiative made up ofa leam of dedicated whereshe contributed to uraniur☐（他）separio processes vital for atomic bomb productioDe faculry(全体教员hopes to doc=ent these collision and for tothe destrctiveoumofato bombsd her hope for peace,Wlater distncedrf from peeventing bird-window collisions on campus The study is led by De.Richard Fadok,apodcral the project. fellow in the Humanities Center. In 1956,alongside Tsung-Dao Lee and Chen-Ning Yang she conducted experiments on beta Since window colisions typically happean the momming.thesuut voheeers typically decay (that confirmed that identical nuckus particles do not always behave the same.This survey specific buildags fom 2-3 p.m.Using their phones,they take photos of any bird collisions groundbreaking work eamed Lee and Yang the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1957.The importance of they find,as well as bandle them with gloves to observe and submit their dats. her proofin the Nobel Prize was highlighted in Time magazine thatsame ye Ins fourwocks of sveying 10 buildings,volunteers have found over 40 birds athave died Wu received merous honors,including the Comstock and Wolf prizes,and beeame the first due to collisions with windows,including yellow-bellied sapsuckers,white-hroated spamws woman president of the American Physical Society in 1975.Theoughou her creere remined a black-beaded grosbeaks.Tbe goal of collecting he data is to idenrify cal collisioa oon stroeg advocate for gender equality. Wu passed away in 1997 at age 84.In accordance with her final request,ber ashes were sread campus and target hesereas that often poea problfor the birds. in ber father's schoolyard-reuniting with the father shesoloved. With eno data coleced,wecan work towards taking more bird-safe measures around 24.What aspects of Wu's father affected ber wten she w&s young? eampus,such as adhesive flims,acopian birdsavers,and trimed glass alongside collaborating with A.His love and wish B.His belief and support University leadenhip to decide how we should make these impreveme C.His efforts and advocation D.His education and ambition. If you wish to help"Smash the Crash,"there are two ways to participate.You can voluntoer to 25.Why does the author mention Wu's contribution to the Nobel Prize? be a building monitor by emailing smsheesURai.com.You.can also photogaph any A.To convey a fict 且.To raisequestion coiso victims you find on emsand submit theonhSmash the Crash website Even the C.To make an excuse. D.Totk知an exampl 26.Which words can best describe Chien-Shiung Wu? 28.What is the main pupose ofSmash the Crash"? A.Kind and generous. B.Parient and intelligest D.Honest and considerate A.To study the behaviors ofdifferent bird species on campus. C.Pioneering and determised. 27.Which section of the magazine is this text probably from? B.To recoed bird-window collisions aed find pocential solutions A Education. B.Literature. C.Nature. D.People. C.To educate students about the orace fconerving birds D.To promote the applicaticn of more glass windows on camgus. 高三英语第》页共2夏 在三其语第6真满12页 29.What is paragraph 4 mainly about? As we wrap ep our exploration of the prychology of bragging.here comes the thieg A.The causes of window collisioas. urdersanding psyblogetosjust aboul pointing fingers at the braggart inyou B.The expected daration of the research. ofeIt's sbout developingsfeour own communicatioe Se the next time you feel C.The methods used by students to colleet data. heuge toa chanelyour er psychologist,and ask youself:"Is this really about sharing.of D.The measures taken previously by the college. am I just trying to preve something?" 30.The undertied "hotspots"in paragraph 5 means 32.According paragrph 2,why do people brag? A.where the temperature is very high A.To hide desire. B.To seek insecurity. B.where woluneers often search for birds. C.To gun approwaL D.To draw sympathy. C.where birds'population deelines very sharply. 33.What does the uderned sen in paragraph 3 imply? D.where birds crash into the windows frequently. A.Those who know much are perfect. 31.What is the wrner's attinude towards"Smsh the Crash"? B.Those who know little are talkative. A.Supportive B.Critical. C.Indifferent. D.Reserved. C.People who brag are very intelligent. D D.People who lack serity tend to brag. Fromthe cowker who can't stop taking aboutheir latest achievements to the showy so 4.htm町the authors知g鲜cebt②Z7 media intuenoer,bragging.simply the act of talking about oneself in。boastfal(自夸的)meer A.Consult psychologists for help. popping upconverosommon m our daily lives.But have you ever wondered what drives B.Queshoa and blame such practices. people to beag? C.Compete wir恤braggart体d女feat them First up on our list of bragging ovatioas is the good eed for recognition.We humans are D.Refcton our motives and behave peoperly. social creatures.Who can refuse a pat on the back!When we shareour achievemets,we're 35.What ean be the best title for th passage? essentially fishingora praise.sking that sweet from our peers It's like a lite dopamine() A.Defisition of Beagging B.Ways to Deal with Bragging hit for our brains. D.Social Impact of Bragging Bat bold yor horses,because there's the other side to this co Sometmes,bragging rises C.Psychology bebind Bragging from inseurity and low self-esteem.Shocking right?It's like atold saying.mpty 第二节（共5小延：每小题25分。满分12.5分》 poduces the loudest note"People who coestantly brag might be seekng balance between 阁读下面短文，从短文后的达项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。其中有两喷为多余 deep-seated feelings of imperfectio dhe strong desire for perfection.It's their way-of sying. 选项。 Hey,look at me!I'm worth something!"It's almost like they're trying to convince themselves as As a new semester begims,excitement and anticipatice fill the air,along with a flurry of much as others. activities and resporsbitie36Here are four strategics that can help you mange you Now,let's talk about the desire for social status and power.In or competitive seciety,bragging seademic joueney effectively. becomesheir weapon of choice in the batte for soclal position.It's like they're constatly trying Track your strengths through in a journal to one-up everyone around them,turning every converation into a competitioe 7But knowing your and how to use them effectively can have a great effect on Last but certainly not east,we've got to address the elephant in he:nareissistic(白交型) succes特nawell-being Keep a joumal where you o晚down h0w-you'e used your s地eghs血 persoeality.People with narcissistic tendencies ofien have a sense of selfimportance and s your neademio pursuits Refket on these entries to identify patters and strategies that work best for deep-seated need for dmirarion.For them,bragging is'tusa habit-it's a way of tife. 奥 高三英请第？翼共2丙 高三英语第8真共12页 Focws top priority on pleasure in life different amazing figures like a ballet dancer or other50 However,Jing-mei does not always Foeling good aboutyou're doing and why you're doing is the best wyc win recognition.After 51 various severe tests and seeing her mother's disappointment, According to a survey,happiness often lcads to sess,but sceess on its own my lead to she gradually usderstands her mother's hopes are just a 52 of her oun urealized happiness.38They can be what you're proud of,what you're gratefal for,owh sly dreams.She decides to accept her ordinary side and 53 her true self brings asmile to your f欣e The novel hes received positive 4 due to its emphasis on the significance of love and Create persomalized learning playlists understanding.It inspires readers to coosider the profound strength of family ties and the Create a"leaming playlist"that meets your unique keaming style If youea leamer hoves 55 of personal identity. towach pictures ad videos,then add more videos and chartsto it.Ifyoureer listening things 41.A.remarkable C.regular D.reliable then try podcasts and lectures,which will definitely satisfy your ears39 42.A.criticizes B.observes C.examines D.prediets Strengthen your memory with active recall strategies 43.A.individeals B.secictes C.relations D.generations Put active recall into your study by testing yoursef regularhy on what you've leared 40. 44.A.presented B.recorded C.prepared D.remembered Yo can directy go to sofare,sch as Anki ooveringa wide ge of disciplies and aguage 45.A.efforts 目.trugpks C.troubles D.wccesses leang maeriastostan leaming or use themas a suppemento your own study materials 46.A encouraging B.demanding C.engaging D.amusing A I's homan nature to want to correct weaknesses 47.A emotions B.facts C.opinions D.rules B.With so much to tackle,it's essential to have a plan in place 48.A.arrange B.build C.settle D.place C.To develop good babit,you have some things to bear in mind 49.A.imagines B.pcetends C.enjoys D.treats B To build a pood mood practice writing down some geod things 50.A.workers B.celebrres C.players D.editors E.People are tuming to the power of technologry to impeove memory 51.A-passing B.achieving C.failing D.winning 手Keeping jouralstoeyouda助yi面is surely away 52.A.description B.reflection C.prodoction D.conditioe G.Tailoring hese inems can keep your leaminggdeffective 5红.A.account for B.provide for C.relate to D.stick to 54.A.efTects B.amitudes C.reviews D.coements 第三都分语言运用（共两节，满分30分） 55.A.loss B.basis C.change D.pursuit 第一节（共15小题：每小题1分.满分15分》 第二节（共0小易：每小题1.5分，满分15分） 阅读下查经文，从每瑟所始的A。BC、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项， 阅读下面材科，在空白处境入适当的内容(1个单司》或所始单词的正确形式 Amy Ta's The oy Lnck Ciub is a movel,exploring motber-daughter relationskipe.Tn creates The seventh Chinese Farmers'Harvest Festival kicked off56()main event in Lankao a 41 tle through the lives of four Chinese immigrant women and their each Amencan-bor County.Henan Province,on the momning of September 22.The festival,which falls on the Autumn daughter.I 42 themes frum the new penpective of different views of two43 Equinox during the harvest season every September.57 (establish)in 2018 and is the first The characters are vividly44making it easy for readers to comnect with their nationholiday desiged for farmers. 45 and joys.The writing style is 46Foe instance,the descriptions of the semings and The celebrations Lanko included exhibitions,cultural perforances and entertaieent 47ae so clear that one can almost feel as if they were part of the story. eveats58thighhght)farmers'contrbutions and the importance of agricalture in Chinese Like most Chinese mochers,Wu Suyuan would like to4 great hopes on her daughter soccty.Events were organized to stimulate comsmerped and create a festive atmosphere. Jing-mei,.h3 inthat she will become a piano genius.In the s箱mew球，ing-mei4约_herselfas Efors suchs the application ofeed technologies are being(active)oledou 高三英语第9夏开口死 高三填请第10页典12页 the country,contributing to6sese of bouncifal harvest Tears elled up维my eycs. At the fostival,farmers ot only celebrate the harvest61 the improvement in their. O Tom walked ver and patted me on the shoulder gently."Child,"be sid sofy,"beauty is livelihood.This year,many rural areas have increased employment and income by selling j园what youeon the outsid.t修what lies within yo吗wating to be discovered”Baho local6(produce)tat make good use of their lcal agricltural advantages. fidat beyadespera in my voice.Old Tom smied mysteriouly. Across the country,efforts (umprove)the rural living environment hawe been going on. Aa be worked.I coulds't help but ask,"Why is there no mimor in your shop?"Ol Tom Around.90 percent of villages have effective waste collection and treatment systems,.and.clean chuckl"Mmsnbe cheating They show ony the surface.1w my elientstodiscover their oilets are4(aocess)to appeoximately 75 percent of rral familes.Now,regions arewrking beaty in their own time.without being influenced by what they see immedialely."I nodded. together on 65 to better trasform the plan of comrebensive rural development ino reality. undinaeabout his phlosophy. Atervnhaircutthatmed to hold the prosefa new beginning.I thanked him 第四部分写作（共两节。满分40分） with bartferatdedwalked out through the door His words choed in my bead,There's 第一节（满分15分） nyour new ha Now start your joumey to beauty." 假定你是某国际学枚学生会主磨李华。下周你校将与新华中学率行一场篮球赛，请你用 AsIstrolled don the steet sunlight filtered down through theovernleaves abovemy 英语写一则现寒通知，内容包括： bead,eatinga lovely pater on the ground.It was as if nture was celebrating yefound 1.比赛信息： transfomn I shook my head,yet I codn'fel any signifieandifferee Fowever,there was 2.注意事项。 orof,like a little voice that ad long been lcked,now desperately desiring to be heard. 注意：1闻数为80左右： Saddenly,I beard someone calling tom with extreme enthusias"Susan!Ssan was 2.请梭如下格式在答是卡的相应位置作答。 Catherae一e画ost populargl in the eire sehool. Nocice 请在意： (1)续写闻数应为150个左右： (2)请技如下格式在答赠卡的相应位置作答， I tarned aroand guicily aty heart rocing wirh a mectire of swrprise and cariority 第二节（满分25分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和乐给段落开头语铁写两段，使之构成一篇宽整的短文。 Old Tom was,without a doubt,the most extraordinary hair stylist I had ever had the good fortune to emeounter.His shop,a harbor-of creativity and artistry,lay in a charming comer of the From that day o,my lfe brgan o chage tow As I entered the shop,my beart heavy with sadness and disppointment,I was immediately comforted by the familiar atmophere Old Tom looked updsmiedway. "Hello there,my dear.What brings you here today?he asked.I sighed deeply.1 had jst been rejeced forrole in the school play.I feel so ordinary-looking and boringIanto be beauriful. 商三英婚前引红共2页 在三英语第12红共2真1 赤峰市高三年级 11  20模拟考试试题 英语答案 第一部分 听力（每小题 1.5分，满分 30分） 1--5 CABAC 6--10 CBCBA 11--15 BBACB 16--20 ACCBA 第二部分 阅读（共两节，满分 50分） 第一节（共 15小题；每小题 2.5分，满分 37.5分） A篇：BBA B篇：BACD C篇：BCDA D篇：CDDC 21---25 BBABA 26---30 CDBCD 31---35 ACDDC 第二节（共 5小题；每小题 2.5分，满分 12.5分） 36---40 BADGE 第三部分 语言运用（共两节，满分 30分） 第一节（共 15小题；每小题 1分，满分 15分） 41---45 ACDAC 46---50 CADAB 51---55CBDCD 第二节（共 10小题；每小题 1. 5分, 满分 15分） 56. its 57. was established 58. highlighting 59. actively 60. a 61. but 62.products 63. to improve 64. accessible 65. how 第四部分 写作（共两节, 满分 40分） 第一节（满分 15分） 参考范文： Notice To interact and build friendships, a highly anticipated basketball game will take place between our school and Xinhua Middle School at 4 p.m. on Wednesday in our school's stadium. Here are some things to note. Firstly, please be punctual. Arriving on time not only shows respect for the players but also allows you to catch every moment of the action from the start. Secondly, while enjoying the game, it is crucial to maintain good order. Thirdly, let's take responsibility for keeping our court clean. Let's come together to enjoy this wonderful sporting event and support our players! 评分标准 2 档次 描述 第五档 （13—15） 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 —覆盖所有内容要点。 —应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 —语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较 强的语言运用能力。 —有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档 （10—12） 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 —虽漏掉 1、2 个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 —应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 —语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所 致。 —应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档 （7—9） 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 —虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 —应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 —有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 —应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 第二档 （4—6） 未适当完成试题规定的任务。 —漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 —语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。 —有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 —较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺乏连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 第一档 （1—3） 未完成试题规定的任务。 —明显漏掉主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。 —语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。 —较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 —缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。 0 未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判； 所写内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。 注：词数少于 60 和多于 100 的，从总分中减去 2分。如书写较差，影响理解的，将分数降低一个档次。 3 第二节（满分 25分） 读后续写评分标准 1．评分原则 （1）本题满分为 25 分，按五个档次进行评分。 （2）评分时，应主要从内容、语言知识运用和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为： ◆ 创造内容的质量，续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。 ◆ 使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。 ◆ 上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。 （3）评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量， 确定或调整档次，最后给分。 （4）评分时还应注意： ◆ 词数少于 130 的，酌情扣分。 ◆ 单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、 美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 ◆ 书写较差以致影响交际的，可将分数降低一个档次。 2. 内容要点 本文讲述了 Susan因外形不出众，不自信被戏剧社拒绝；她找到 Old Tom 希望 Tom为她设 计新发型来改变自己，后来她终于领悟到了美在于对自己内在的自信和认可。 3．各档次的给分范围和要求 第五档（21～25 分） － 创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高。 － 使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别错误，但完全不影响理解。 － 有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，意义连贯。 第四档（16～20 分） － 创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度较高。 － 使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有些许错误，但不影响理解。 － 比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。 第三档（11～15 分） － 创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关。 － 使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有一些错误或不恰当之处，但基本不影响理解。 － 基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。 第二档（6～10 分） － 内容或逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文情境有一定程度脱节。 － 所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，影响理解。 － 未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义不够连贯。 第一档（1～5 分） 4 － 内容或逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节。 － 所使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误很多，严重影响理解。 － 几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。 零分 未作答；所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完 全不相关。 参考范文 1 I turned around quickly, my heart racing with a mixture of surprise and curiosity. Before I could even say a word, her eyes landed on my hair and lit up immediately, as if she had discovered a rare treasure. “Wow, your new hairstyle is amazing!” she walked around me in a semi-circle, seemingly admiring a fine piece of art from all angles. “This hairstyle suits you perfectly.”, she continued. Hearing her words, I could feel my face burning and a surge of delight flooded over me. We had a pleasant chat and parted at the crossing. That night, when in the mirror I was surprised to find that nothing too much had changed. It was old Tom’s philosophy that made me feel different. From that day on, my life began to change. It gradually dawned on me that Old Tom’s magic wasn’t about changing my appearance, but about changing how I saw myself. I started to believe in myself and my own beauty. Gathering enough faith in myself, I attended another interview and fortunately was admitted to the school drama club. Old Tom’s magic has not only transformed my hair but also my perspective on life. I learn that true beauty comes from within and that sometimes, all it takes is a little bit of magic to help us discover it. 参考范文 2 I turned around quickly, my heart racing with a mixture of surprise and curiosity. Catherine’s usually calm face was now glowing with excitement. “Susan, you look absolutely amazing!” she exclaimed, her eyes wide with genuine appreciation. “I heard about your setback with the school play role, but you should definitely try again. You’ve really got something special now.” Her heartfelt words touched me deeply. I smiled, warmth spreading through me like a gentle wave. “Thank you, Catherine. Your words mean a lot to me.” From that day on, my life began to change. I no longer saw myself as merely ordinary or boring. Instead, I started to perceive the unique qualities that made me who I was. I did try again for the school play, and this time, I landed the lead role. The transformation wasn’t just in my appearance but in my confidence and self-belief. Old Tom’s absence of mirrors in his shop allowed me to see myself not just as I was, but as I could be. And in that understanding, I found the beauty that had always been there, waiting to be discovered. 参考范文 3 5 I turned around quickly, my heart racing with a mixture of surprise and curiosity. Instead of the usual haughty manner, she greeted me warmly this time, just like an old friend. “You know,” she uttered, with shining eyes, “you look really amazing!” On hearing the words, I was full of strength and energy and noticed the admiring glances from other people passing by. I became even more curious about the Old Tom’s magical power. Then I ran back home quickly, picked up the mirror with my trembling hands. What I saw was myself in the mirror— a self full of confidence and vitality! From that day on, my life began to change. It saw off the gloom and embraced sunshine. It was the Old Tom’s “magic” that awoke me—the true beauty and charm stemming from self-confidence. I released the mediocrity that filled in my mind all along. Instead, I had a new understanding of myself. When talking to my classmates, what appeared on my face was sunny and confident smile. Of course, if given another opportunity to apply for a role in the school play, I would make a difference. Thanks to the Old Tom, his magic changed me completely. 参考范文 4 I turned around quickly, my heart racing with a mixture of surprise and curiosity.Catherine stopped beside me. Staring at me for a while, she said that I looked a little bit different. After I explained that I had just had my hair cut, she looked at my hair closer, nodding her head and adding that my new hairstyle suited me so much. She told me that she knew I was rejected for the role in the school play. Surprisingly, she motivated me to try applying for the role again, which impressed her deeply in my previous acting. Tears welled up in my eyes again. From that day on, my life began to change. After school every day, Catherine would accompany and guide me to better my acting skills.Not until that remarkable day when I was eventually given the role I wanted, did I recognize that what lay inside mattered most. No words are more appropriate to express my gratitude to Old Tom and Catherine. Their encouragement makes a great difference to me, making me pay more attention to hard work and what lies inside.