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专题09 书面表达15篇 1.(23-24高一上 北京西城 期末)假设你是高一学生李华,你们班这学期读了一本英文小说WONDER,你非常喜欢,想要把这本小说推荐给你的英国朋友Jim。请你给他写一封信,内容包括: 1.故事梗概; 2.最喜欢的人物; 3.推荐理由。 注意:1.词数不少于100;2.开关和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 提示词:推荐recommend sth. to sb.; recommend sb. to do sth. Dear Jim, _ 2.(23-24高一上 北京昌平 期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“阳光体育”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括: 1.活动形式; 2.活动内容。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _ Yours, Li Hua 3.(23-24高一上 北京顺义 期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Jack在给你的邮件中提到他很想了解你校近期举办的“冬季长跑”活动情况,请你给他回信,内容包括: 1. 活动开始的时间、地点; 2. 跑前热身,跑中听学生自选的音乐; 3. 你的收获或感受。 注意:1.词数不少于50词; 2.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in our school’s Winter Running Event. I would like to share something about it with you. _ How about your school activities? Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 4.(23-24高一上 北京通州 期末)假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文,感觉有些困难,所以给你写信,希望你能给他一些学习中文的建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1. 你的建议及理由; 2. 你的祝愿。 注意: 1. 词数100左右, 开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 Dear Jim, _ Yours, Li Hua 5.(23-24高一上 北京西城 期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友 Jim 在邮件中提到对你的 高中生活很感兴趣。请你给他回一封邮件,分享你高中生活中一件难忘的事。 内容包括: 1. 事情经过; 2. 你的感受。 注意: 1. 词数不少于 60; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _ Yours, Li Hua 6.(23-24高一上 北京石景山 期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim 给你的邮件中提到他对中国传统节日很感兴趣, 并请你介绍一个你喜欢的中国传统节日。请你给 Jim 回信, 内容包括: 1. 介绍哪个中国传统节日: 2. 中国人怎么庆祝这个节日: 3. 你为什么喜欢这个节日。 注意:1、词数100 左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, I’m very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. _ Yours Li Hua 7.(23-24高一上 北京东城 期末)假设你是红星中学的李华,你的美国笔友Jim将来京学习。请根据他的邮件给他回信。 Dear Li Hua, How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you that I have joined in an exchange program. I’m leaving for Beijing next month and am going to study in Beijing for a year. Although I have dreamed about it for a long time, I feel a little bit anxious now. You know my Chinese is not good enough for me to communicate with others. What is more, most Chinese traditional culture is still new to me. Both the problems make me feel worried about fitting in the new environment. What can I do to deal with the problems? Could you give me any suggestions? Looking forward to your early reply! Yours, Jim 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _ Yours, Li Hua 8.(23-24高一上 北京怀柔 期末)根据题目所提出的具体要求,在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于 60。 假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jack 给你发邮件,请你给他介绍我国的传统节日“中秋节”。请参考下列信息,给他回邮件。 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 fall on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month have a family reunion eat moon cakes and watch the full moon …… Dear Jack, Glad to know that you're interested in the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. I’d like to share something about it with you. _ All the best, Li Hua 9.(23-24高一上 北京丰台 期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你校公众号英语栏目正在举行题为“Celebrations and I”的征文活动。请你写一篇文章,介绍一个你难忘的庆祝活动,内容包括你的经历和感受。 习作要求主题鲜明、细节描述能体现主题;语言准确得体;词数 100左右。 _ 10.(23-24高一上 北京朝阳 期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim被中文老师邀请去家里过除夕(Chinese New Year’s Eve),他发来邮件询问相关信息。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括: 1.除夕活动; 2.做客礼仪。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _ Yours, Li Hua 11.(23-24高一上 北京 期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你校《英语周报》开展了题为“我最敬佩的人”征文活动。请你根据要求给周报投稿,内容包括: 1. Who do you admire most? 2. Give at least two reasons to explain why. 注意:词数不少于60。 The Person I Admire Most _ 12.(23-24高一上 北京 期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,春节将至,你校英国交换生Jim接受了来你家共度除夕的邀请,请你就他关心的问题写一封邮件。内容包括: 1.很高兴他接受了邀请; 2.介绍你家除夕的安排; 3.期待他的到来。 注意: 1.词数不少于50; 2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _ Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 13.(23-24高一上 北京石景山 期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国好友Jim在他所在城市举办的主题为“Protecting World Wildlife” 海报设计大赛中,获得一等奖。请给Jim写一封电子邮件, 内容包括: 1.祝贺他获奖; 2.肯定他的才华。 注意: 1.词数100字左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _ Yours, Li Hua 14.(22-23高一上 北京密云 期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,想邀请外教Jim一起参观中国剪纸艺术展。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括: 1. 展览的时间和地点; 2. 展览的内容; 3. 邀请其参加。 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; Dear Jim, _ Yours, Li Hua 15.(22-23高一上 北京怀柔 期末)假设你是李华,你的英国好友Jim对中国的元宵节感兴趣,请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1. 元宵节的时间及庆祝活动; 2. 节日意义并期待与他共度。 提示词(供参考):元宵:sticky rice balls;灯谜:lantern riddles;庙会temple fairs 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, _ Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究!22 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$
专题09 书面表达15篇
1.(23-24高一上·北京西城·期末)假设你是高一学生李华,你们班这学期读了一本英文小说WONDER,你非常喜欢,想要把这本小说推荐给你的英国朋友Jim。请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1.故事梗概;
2.最喜欢的人物;
3.推荐理由。
注意:1.词数不少于100;2.开关和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:推荐recommend sth. to sb.; recommend sb. to do sth.
Dear Jim,
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【答案】Dear Jim,
My class read an English novel called WONDER this semester. I like it very much. I’m writing to recommend you to read the novel by R.J.Palacio. It is a book full of love and hope.
It focuses on a boy named Auggie, who is born with a facial deformity and is still not understood or accepted after multiple surgeries. However, during his new school experience, he meets some real friends and people who are willing to accept him. My favorite character is Auggie whose body is weak but his spirit is strong. This book is not only a children’s literature, but also a book of revelation for readers of all ages, which makes one rethink what true beauty and courage are, and how to build true friendship in a world full of difference.
If you are interested, read the details!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友 Jim 写一封信,向他推荐一本英文小说WONDER,并陈述推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜欢: like →be fond of
推荐:recommend→ suggest/advise
聚焦于:focus on→concentrate on
充满:be full of →be filled with
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句: I’m writing to recommend you to read the novel by R.J.Palacio. It is a book full of love and hope.
拓展句: I’m writing to recommend you to read the novel by R.J.Palacio, which is a book full of love and hope.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 However, during his new school experience, he meets some real friends and people who are willing to accept him. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】This book is not only a children’s literature, but also a book of revelation for readers of all ages, which makes one rethink what true beauty and courage are, and how to build true friendship in a world full of difference.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.(23-24高一上·北京昌平·期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“阳光体育”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.活动形式;
2.活动内容。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Sunshine Sports” and need any help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive manner so that students are interested in it. Besides, all kinds of forms of activities should be arranged. You can arrange some competitions in sports ranging from running, doing gymnastics, playing basketball, playing football and so on, which can make students help students keep fit. You can also carry out different physical education courses.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给正在策划以“阳光体育”为主题的社团活动的Jim,写一封邮件,给他提供建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestions→advice
此外:Besides→In addition
各种各样的:all kinds of →various
等等:and so on→and the like
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions.
拓展句:I hope that you will get some inspiration from my suggestions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Sunshine Sports” and need any help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和非谓语动词作状语)
【高分句型2】You can arrange some competitions in sports ranging from running, doing gymnastics, playing basketball, playing football and so on, which can make students help students keep fit. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.(23-24高一上·北京顺义·期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Jack在给你的邮件中提到他很想了解你校近期举办的“冬季长跑”活动情况,请你给他回信,内容包括:
1. 活动开始的时间、地点;
2. 跑前热身,跑中听学生自选的音乐;
3. 你的收获或感受。
注意:1.词数不少于50词;
2.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in our school’s Winter Running Event. I would like to share something about it with you.
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How about your school activities? Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in our school’s Winter Running Event. I would like to share something about it with you.
The event started on December 1st, right on our playground. All the students and teachers couldn’t wait to join in the 1000-meter morning run. We first did the warm-up exercises with the help of our PE teachers to get ready for it. Then we started running in two lines along the tracks. More interestingly, we could run to our own chosen music which made the event more enjoyable and dynamic.
After completing the run, I was filled with a special sense of achievement. And I have learned that running can not only build up our body but also provide relief from tension due to hard work.
How about your school activities? Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jack写封回信,介绍学校近期举办的“冬季长跑”活动情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开始:start→begin
参加:join in→take part in
帮助:help→assist
完成:complete→finish
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:More interestingly, we could run to our own chosen music which made the event more enjoyable and dynamic.
拓展句:What was more interesting was that we could run to our own chosen music which made the event more enjoyable and dynamic.
【点睛】【高分句型1】More interestingly, we could run to our own chosen music which made the event more enjoyable and dynamic. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】And I have learned that running can not only build up our body but also provide relief from tension due to hard work. (运用了that引导宾语从句、动名词作主语以及not only…but also句型)
4.(23-24高一上·北京通州·期末)假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文,感觉有些困难,所以给你写信,希望你能给他一些学习中文的建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的建议及理由;
2. 你的祝愿。
注意: 1. 词数100左右, 开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I’m very happy to hear that you are learning Chinese. And I really understand that you are finding Chinese quite challenging to learn. It’s okay for beginners to meet some troubles. Here are some advice I’d like to give you.
First, I suggest you focus on mastering the basics, such as pinyin and commonly used phrases. This will help you build a strong foundation for further learning.
Another suggestion is to immerse yourself in the language as much as possible. Watch Chinese movies or TV shows, listen to Chinese music, and try to communicate with native speakers. This will not only improve your listening and speaking skills but also give you a better understanding of Chinese culture.
Remember, learning a new language takes time and effort. I wish you all the best in your Chinese learning journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文,感觉有些困难,要求考生给他写一封电子邮件,给他一些学习中文的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→ glad
非常:quite→ extremely
挑战性的:challenging→ provocative
提高:improve→ enhance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m very happy to hear that you are learning Chinese.
拓展句:Hearing that you are learning Chinese, I’m very happy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m very happy to hear that you are learning Chinese.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】And I really understand that you are finding Chinese quite challenging to learn.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
5.(23-24高一上·北京西城·期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友 Jim 在邮件中提到对你的 高中生活很感兴趣。请你给他回一封邮件,分享你高中生活中一件难忘的事。
内容包括:
1. 事情经过;
2. 你的感受。
注意: 1. 词数不少于 60;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How is everything going? Glad to know you are interested in my high school life. I want to share with you an unforgettable event.
It was the annual school talent show held last week. When I first heard the news, I wanted to give it a try, but then I hesitated. Though I love singing, I had never sung in public. Finally, to challenge myself, I signed up. In the following weeks, I practiced almost every day. On the day of the show, I was very nervous, but the moment I stepped onto the stage and began my performance, all my fears disappeared. As the last note faded, the audience’s applause and cheers arose. At that time, I felt a great sense of achievement.
The best part of the experience was learning to step outside my comfort zone and embrace new challenges.
It always feels great to share with you these unforgettable moments in my life. Drop me a line when you are free.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国笔友 Jim 在邮件中提到对考生的 高中生活很感兴趣,要求考生给他回一封邮件,分享高中生活中一件难忘的事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→ delighted
难忘的:unforgettable→ memorable
紧张的:nervous→tense
消失:disappear→ vanish
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Glad to know you are interested in my high school life.
拓展句:Knowing that you are interested in my high school life, I feel glad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I first heard the news, I wanted to give it a try, but then I hesitated. (运用了When引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Though I love singing, I had never sung in public.(运用了Though引导的让步状语从句)
6.(23-24高一上·北京石景山·期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim 给你的邮件中提到他对中国传统节日很感兴趣, 并请你介绍一个你喜欢的中国传统节日。请你给 Jim 回信, 内容包括:
1. 介绍哪个中国传统节日:
2. 中国人怎么庆祝这个节日:
3. 你为什么喜欢这个节日。
注意:1、词数100 左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I’m very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. I would like to introduce one of them to you.
Mid-autumn Festival, also known as Mooncake Festival, is held on the 15th day of the eighth month in the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day family members will try their best to go back home and get together with their family. People usually have a big dinner. Of course mooncakes are a must. After dinner, people usually go outdoors to appreciate the moon and enjoy the beautiful lanterns in the streets and parks.
Mid-autumn Festival, a time of family reunion, is highly valued by all the Chinese. That’s why I like this festival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国笔友Jim 给你的邮件中提到他对中国传统节日很感兴趣,要求考生给 Jim 回信,向他介绍一个你喜欢的中国传统节日。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→glad
尽某人最大努力:try one’s best→do one’s best
通常:usually→normally
对……感兴趣:be interested in→be keen on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Mid-autumn Festival, also known as Mooncake Festival, is held on the 15th day of the eighth month in the Chinese lunar calendar.
拓展句:Mid-autumn Festival, which is also known as Mooncake Festival, is held on the 15th day of the eighth month in the Chinese lunar calendar.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.(省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Mid-autumn Festival, a time of family reunion, is highly valued by all the Chinese.(运用了a time of family reunion作同位语)
7.(23-24高一上·北京东城·期末)假设你是红星中学的李华,你的美国笔友Jim将来京学习。请根据他的邮件给他回信。
Dear Li Hua,
How is everything going?
I’m writing to tell you that I have joined in an exchange program. I’m leaving for Beijing next month and am going to study in Beijing for a year.
Although I have dreamed about it for a long time, I feel a little bit anxious now. You know my Chinese is not good enough for me to communicate with others. What is more, most Chinese traditional culture is still new to me. Both the problems make me feel worried about fitting in the new environment.
What can I do to deal with the problems? Could you give me any suggestions? Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Jim
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m so excited to hear that you’ll be coming to Beijing for your exchange program. Beijing is a city full of history and culture, and I know you’ll definitely enjoy yourself no matter what.
To help you communicate better, I suggest you take some Chinese language courses before you leave. You can also try to learn some basic Chinese phrases to help you in your daily life. Don’t worry if you can’t speak fluently, most Beijing locals will understand what you mean. As for the Chinese culture, you can read books about Chinese history and culture to help you understand the background.
If you need any help or advice, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假设是红星中学的李华,你的美国笔友Jim将来京学习。请根据他的邮件给他回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
玩的高兴:enjoy oneself→have fun
当地人:local→native
肯定:definitely→certainly
建议:suggest→recommend/advise
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Beijing is a city full of history and culture, and I know you’ll definitely enjoy yourself no matter what.
拓展句:Beijing is a city full of history and culture, where you’ll definitely enjoy yourself no matter what.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To help you communicate better, I suggest you take some Chinese language courses before you leave. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] If you need any help or advice, don’t hesitate to contact me. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
8.(23-24高一上·北京怀柔·期末)根据题目所提出的具体要求,在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于 60。
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jack 给你发邮件,请你给他介绍我国的传统节日“中秋节”。请参考下列信息,给他回邮件。
邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
fall on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month
have a family reunion
eat moon cakes and watch the full moon
……
Dear Jack,
Glad to know that you're interested in the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. I’d like to share something about it with you.
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All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear. Jack,
Glad to know that you're interested in the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. I'd like to share something about it with you.
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, which is a traditional festival in our country. We usually get together to have a family reunion on that day, especially those who live far away would like to go back home to meet their family members. In the evening, we often eat moon cakes and watch the full moon. At that moment, we can not only enjoy the delicious food and the beautiful bright moonlight, but also have a pleasant time with our family members. So we all like to celebrate this festival and treasure the reunion time.
Do you have a similar festival in Britain? Looking forward to hearing from you.
All the best,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jack回邮件,介绍我国的传统节日“中秋节”。
【详解】1.词汇积累
聚在一起:get together→ gather together
愿意做:would like to do→ feel like doing
看满月:watch the full moon→ admire the full moon
令人愉快的:pleasant→ delightful
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, which is a traditional festival in our country.
拓展句:The Mid-Autumn Festival, a traditional festival in our country, falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, which is a traditional festival in our country.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】We usually get together to have a family reunion on that day, especially those who live far away would like to go back home to meet their family members.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
9.(23-24高一上·北京丰台·期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你校公众号英语栏目正在举行题为“Celebrations and I”的征文活动。请你写一篇文章,介绍一个你难忘的庆祝活动,内容包括你的经历和感受。
习作要求主题鲜明、细节描述能体现主题;语言准确得体;词数 100左右。
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【答案】 Celebrations and I
There are many memorable things in my life. The most unforgettable thing happened on my birthday.
Before the birthday, I invited my best friend to come to my party. She was happy to promise that she would come. However, the two of us had a conflict over something. I thought she would not come to celebrate my birthday. Surprisingly, she showed up and apologized to me. We two made up again.
She gave me a doll which I longed for a long time. We talked and played games, which made me so happy. I understand what is real friendship.
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生以题为“Celebrations and I”写一篇文章,介绍一个你难忘的庆祝活动,内容包括你的经历和感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发生:happen→take place
出现:show up→appear
道歉:apologize→make an apology
渴望:long for→be eager for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, the two of us had a conflict over something.
拓展句:However, the two of us had a conflict over something, which was so severe that I though she would not forgive me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】She was happy to promise that she would come. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】She gave me a doll which I longed for a long time.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
10.(23-24高一上·北京朝阳·期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim被中文老师邀请去家里过除夕(Chinese New Year’s Eve),他发来邮件询问相关信息。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.除夕活动;
2.做客礼仪。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are invited by your Chinese teacher to spend the Chinese New Year’s Eve at his home, I am writing to tell you something about it.
In China, the Chinese New Year’s Eve is very important for Chinese people. On that day, people get together to have a big meal, during which dumplings are usually served. After that they will watch the Spring Festival gala evening.
As a guest, you need to know some etiquette. At first, you’d better arrive a few minutes early. In addition, the moment you meet with your Chinese friend and his/her family, you should say “Happy Spring Festival” to them.
I wish you enjoy yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。英国朋友Jim被中文老师邀请去家里过除夕,他发来邮件询问相关信息。要求考生就此事用英文给他回复,内容包括:1.除夕活动;2.做客礼仪。
【详解】词汇积累
重要的:important→of importance
到达:arrive→reach
此外:In addition→Besides
玩得开心:enjoy oneself→have fun
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:After that they will watch the Spring Festival gala evening
拓展句:After that they will watch the Spring Festival gala evening, which is a tradition for Chinese people.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are invited by your Chinese teacher to spend the Chinese New Year’s Eve at his home, I am writing to tell you something about it.(运用了现在分词作状语,that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】On that day, people get together to have a big meal, during which dumplings are usually served. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
11.(23-24高一上·北京·期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你校《英语周报》开展了题为“我最敬佩的人”征文活动。请你根据要求给周报投稿,内容包括:
1. Who do you admire most?
2. Give at least two reasons to explain why.
注意:词数不少于60。
The Person I Admire Most
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【答案】One possible version:
The person I admire most is Steve Jobs. He was an American inventor and the co-founder and CEO of Apple Inc. There are two reasons why I admire Steve Jobs: he never quit and taught me the meaning of creativity.
First, I admire Steve Jobs because when he faced challenges in his life and career, he didn’t quit. He was determined and dedicated. Did you know that he was actually fired from the company he had created? But instead of feeling sorry for himself, he continued working hard. It was during that time of hard work that Jobs developed the technology we enjoy today.
Second, I admire Steve Jobs because he taught me the true meaning of creativity. He said that creativity is just connecting things from different fields. He provided an example of this from his own life. After dropping out of college, Jobs studied calligraphy. Years later, he brought the world the first personal computer, which included beautiful calligraphic typefaces. Truly, Steve Jobs was a good teacher; he taught us how to be creative.
Steve Jobs left us with so many things of value, like Apple’s products, the iPhone and iPad, which have brought us the most modern technology. We can enjoy such technology because Jobs never gave up and understood the importance of creativity, and this is why I admire him.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校《英语周报》开展了题为“我最敬佩的人”征文活动,要求考生根据要求写一篇短文给周报投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
面临:face→be faced with
解雇:fire→dismiss
而不是:instead of→rather than
重要性:importance→significance
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:After dropping out of college, Jobs studied calligraphy.
拓展句:Jobs studied calligraphy after he dropped out of college.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was during that time of hard work that Jobs developed the technology we enjoy today. (运用了强调句型以及省略了关系代词的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】We can enjoy such technology because Jobs never gave up and understood the importance of creativity, and this is why I admire him. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句以及why引导的表语从句)
12.(23-24高一上·北京·期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,春节将至,你校英国交换生Jim接受了来你家共度除夕的邀请,请你就他关心的问题写一封邮件。内容包括:
1.很高兴他接受了邀请;
2.介绍你家除夕的安排;
3.期待他的到来。
注意:
1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear that you will spend Spring Festival Eve with my faimly! Now I’m going to tell you our arrangements.
To celebrate the special occasion, we have many activities planned. In the morining, my father, a calligraphy lover, will write some copies of the Chinese character “Fu”, meaning good luck. You may join me in giving them to our neighbours, an act o spreading happiness and joy. Preparations for the big evening feast usually start in the afternoon. My mom will cook varieties of delicious food, including your favorite Jiaozi. We can help her. In the evening, watching the Spring Festival Gala is part of the celebration.
Join us and let’s have fun together! I sincerely look forward to your arrival.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生告诉外国交换生Jim非常高兴他能来家里过春节,并告知他家里春节的安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
庆祝:celebrate→observe
各种各样的: varieties of→all kinds of
帮助某人:help sb.→give sb. a hand
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In the evening, watching the Spring Festival Gala is part of the celebration.
拓展句:In the evening, watching the Spring Festival Gala is part of the celebration, which may leave an deep impression on you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear that you will spend Spring Festival Eve with my faimly! (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】To celebrate the special occasion, we have many activities planned. (运用了动词不定式作目的状语)
13.(23-24高一上·北京石景山·期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国好友Jim在他所在城市举办的主题为“Protecting World Wildlife” 海报设计大赛中,获得一等奖。请给Jim写一封电子邮件,
内容包括:
1.祝贺他获奖;
2.肯定他的才华。
注意: 1.词数100字左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I am more than delighted to hear that you have won the first prize in the poster design competition with the theme of “Protecting World Wildlife” held in your city. Congratulations!
As your best friend, I am very proud of you! I know you are good at poster design. You have rich imagination and creativity. At the same time, you have really made a lot of efforts. Your efforts have finally paid off. I hope I could do as well as you. Could you share your successful experience with me?
I’d appreciate it if you could write me back soon and give me some guidance and help. Congratulations again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国笔友 Peter写封信,介绍今天参加的一个关于因特网的优劣的辩论会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→conduct
分享:share→partake of
高兴的:delighted→glad
为……感到骄傲:be proud of =take pride in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:At the same time, you have really made a lot of efforts. Your efforts have finally paid off.
拓展句:At the same time, you have really made a lot of efforts and your efforts have finally paid off.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am more than delighted to hear that you have won the first prize in the poster design competition with the theme of “Protecting World Wildlife” held in your city. (运用了that引导的宾语从句及过去分词作定语)
[高分句型2] I hope I could do as well as you. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
14.(22-23高一上·北京密云·期末)假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,想邀请外教Jim一起参观中国剪纸艺术展。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 展览的时间和地点;
2. 展览的内容;
3. 邀请其参加。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students. I'm writing to invite you to visit the paper cutting exhibition. Paper cutting is one of Chinese traditional art forms and I’m sure you will like it.
The exhibition will be held in the local museum from 8:00 am to 11:00 am next Saturday. There are some famous artists who will perform on the spot. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper cutting works that are collected from all over the country will be on show there. If you like, you can also join in paper cutting. I believe that it will be an unforgettable experience for you.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jim写一封邮件,邀请他一起参观中国剪纸艺术展,说明展览的时间和地点以及展览的内容。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
漂亮的:beautiful → pretty/good-looking
收集:collect → gather/assemble
展示:show→ exhibit/display/present
参与:join in → participate in/take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Paper cutting is one of Chinese traditional art forms and I’m sure you will like it.
拓展句:Paper cutting is one of Chinese traditional art forms, which I’m sure you will like.
【高分句型1】There are some famous artists who will perform on the spot.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Meanwhile, some beautiful paper cutting works that are collected from all over the country will be on show there.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型3】I believe that it will be an unforgettable experience for you.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
15.(22-23高一上·北京怀柔·期末)假设你是李华,你的英国好友Jim对中国的元宵节感兴趣,请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 元宵节的时间及庆祝活动;
2. 节日意义并期待与他共度。
提示词(供参考):元宵:sticky rice balls;灯谜:lantern riddles;庙会temple fairs
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Lantern Festival. I am very happy to tell you something about it.
The Lantern Festival is on the 15th day of the first lunar month, which is highly valued by every Chinese family. On that day, streets and parks become a sea of lanterns. There will be some lantern riddles for guessing and amazing gifts for the winners. Going to temple fairs is another attractive activity, where people can experience traditional Chinese culture, such as watching folk dance, tasting delicious traditional snacks, and so on.
Throughout history, some of the original customs have changed, but the spirit of the festival—the spirit of family—has largely been kept. The Lantern Festival is a wonderful time for people to be back home with their entire family. People always have sticky rice balls during this time, which is a symbol of a family gathering.
This year’s Festival is around the corner. I'm looking forward to your coming to celebrate it with us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生给英国好友Jim写信,邀请他参加元宵节庆祝活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy→delighted
告诉某人某事:tell sb. sth.=inform sb. of sth.
令人惊讶的:amazing→astonishing
吸引人的:attractive→appealing
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:On that day, streets and parks become a sea of lanterns.
拓展句:On that day, streets and parks become a sea of lanterns, which is undoubtedly splendid.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
The Lantern Festival is on the 15th day of the first lunar month, which is highly valued by every Chinese family.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Going to temple fairs is another attractive activity, where people can experience traditional Chinese culture, such as watching folk dance, tasting delicious traditional snacks, and so on.(动名词短语Going to temple fairs作主语,where引导非限制性定语从句,watching folk dance和 tasting delicious traditional snacks为动名词短语作宾语)
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