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专题29 应用写作专项冲刺
一、书面表达写作框架万能模板
熟读背诵以下书面表达写作模板,在考试时可以直接套用。对于基础比较弱的考生是非常实用的。
【邀请信】
Dear XXX,
I am___________. How's everything going? I would like to invite you to___________. It will be held in ___________(地点),at___________(点),on___________(星期几).
During the party/meeting, we will have some activities. First,___________(活动1).Then,___________(活动2).I believe that you will enjoy it.I do hope you can come.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
XXX
【感谢信】
Dear XXX,
I am___________. I have learned that_________________________________. I am writing to thank you for your help. But for your help in___________(某一方面),I would have not ___________(结果 1).Thanks to your help,I can______________(结果2).Again I would like to express my warm thanks for your warmly help. Best regards for your health.
Yours sincerely,
XXX
【建议信】
Dear XXX,
I am glad to receive your letter. I would like to give you some advice on the problems you told me in the letter. Based on my experience, first of all, you can______________________(建议1).Besides, it is a good idea to______________________(建议2).
I hope my advice can help you and believe you can make a great progress.
Yours sincerely,
XXX
【投诉信】
Dear XXX
I am______________身份,a student of Grade one. I am afraid that I have to complain that ____________________________句子,which makes me unpleasant. I appreciate it very much if you could take this into consideration and do something to improve it.
Thanks for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
XXX
【道歉信】
Dear XXX,
I am very sorry to tell you that I will not be able to____________________________(之前答应的事情),although I am really interested in it. The reason is that____________________________(不能去的原因). I hope you can understand.
I am sorry for any trouble this may have caused you.
Yours sincerely,
XXX
【自荐信】
Dear XXX,
I am______________, a student of Grade one. I have known that______________ so I am writing to apply for a position as a/an______________(职位).
First,I have a strong interest in______________. I am also good at______________(自身优势). I will do my best if I can get this position.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
XXX
【留言条】(电话留言条)
Dear XXX,
______________(打电话来的人) called you this morning but you were not here. He/She wanted to ______________(打电话来的目的).
If the time is suitable, please call him back at xxx(电话号码).
Yours,
XXX
【失物招领】
Found
February 12
I found a/an______________(物品) in ______________(地点) on______________(星期几). it is ______________(物品的特征,如颜色,大小等). There are ______________ inside it.
The owner can come on ______________(日期) and call me at ______________(电话号码) in advance to claim it.
【寻物启事】
Lost
I carelessly lost a/an ______________(物品) in ______________(地点) at ______________(时间). It is ___________________(物品的特征,如颜色,大小等).
It is very important to me. If you find or know where it is, please contact me. My name is xxx and my phone number is xxx. Millions of thanks.
【请假条】(病假)
Dear XXX,
I am sorry to tell that I will be absent from ______________(活动、课程等), because I had a ______________(病). The doctor told me to stay at home and have a good rest. So I ask for a sick leave.
I will try my best to make up my lesson/work as soon as I get well.
Yours sincerely,
XXX
【祝贺信】
Dear XXX,
Knowing that ____________________________, I am so glad. I am so proud of you. I know how hard-working you were when you prepared it. All the efforts are worth it. I want to tell you that you deserve it.
Enjoy the moment. I hope you can make a great progress in the future.
Yours,
XXX
二、书面表达常用关联词语
内容连贯是书面表达的四大评分标准之一,因此,我们在写作时,除按照逻辑顺序组合所有内容信息外,还必须学会灵活运用关联词语。除连接并列句或引导主从复合句的连接词之外,特别推荐使用以下连接性词语。
类别
最常用的连接性词语
表观点
in my opinion, as far as I am concerned, from my point of view, as far as I know等
表递进
besides, what’s more, what’s worse, furthermore, in addition, to make matters worse等
表并列
also, as well (as), or, either…or, neither…nor, not only…but also, both…and等
表因果
therefore, thanks to, as a result (of), because of, due to, owing to, since/now that (既然)等
表强调
above all, indeed, surely, certainly, of course, at least, obviously等
表解释
that is to say, in other words, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, to put it simply等
表比较
just as/like, in the same way, similarly, instead等
表空间
first of all, on the left/right, to the left/right of, on one side of…on the other side of…, at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/centre of等
表转折
或对比
however, while, on the other hand, on the contrary, in contrast, after all, in fact, as a matter of fact等
表列举
for one thing…and for another (thing), on (the) one hand…on the other hand, first(ly), second(ly), third(ly), finally, last but not least (最后但同等重要的是)等
表举例
for example/instance, take…for example/as an example, such as, as follows, and so on, etc.等
表总结
in short, in a word, in conclusion, in brief, generally speaking, to sum up, all in all, to make the story short (简而言之)等
备考提示:考生可以选择几个适合自己的作文框架熟读背诵,关联词表格务必熟读背诵!
三、一条黄金法则
与情境说明和写作要点内容相关的,能写一点就写一点,哪怕是不成句子的零星的一个或几个英语单词,也一定要写!万万不可留空!这是考生必须记住的黄金法则!
因为只要你能写出一个或几个相关的单词,评卷老师就一定会给你分!但是如果乱写一些与作文无关的话,或摘抄与写作内容毫无关系的试卷中阅读理解的段落或句子,抄得再多,也是零分!
如果你能用简单句表达完要点中规定的内容,一般也可得满分的60%,你就远远超过全省平均分了!
四、写作步骤
第一步,认真审题。包括审文体、审时态(主要用什么时态)、审人称(写给谁,以第几人称写)、审要点。
第二步,圈出要点。根据情境说明和写作要点思考要写哪些内容,并在试卷上圈出来。(也可以在第一步完成)
第三步,列出句子。根据文体需要或主题需要,再结合常识,将不成句的要点拓展成8~12个句子(一般来说,有主语有谓语就是句子,即某人做某事或什么是什么等)。
第四步,译成英语。将上述句子用英语表达出来,注意不要生硬地逐字逐句译,要根据英语基本句型的结构或文体的要求等用正确得体的英语表达出来。当遇到难词表达不了时,就用近义词或句型,将大概意思表达出来即可。(成绩优秀的学生可以将第三步与第四步合并成一步)
第五步,连句成文。将上述句子连成一篇通顺连贯的短文,必要时可能需要增加连词连成并列句或主从复合句,或增加连接性副词,如however,besides等。
第六步,细心检查。大致用短文改错的方法细心检查。
第七步,规范誊写。一手漂亮的英文可能会让阅卷老师为你的作文提高一个档次。平时要舍得花时间练好英文书法,并在平时的写作中养成规范书写的好习惯。多得2分,你的人生可能会变得精彩万分!
第八步,誊后复查。在誊写完后,再扫读一遍,看在誊写过程中有没有出错。
温馨提示:从历年全国卷真题范文来看,只要掌握基本的句型结构和常见话题的语言表达形式(单词和词块),就能完成高考题给定的交际目的,获得较高的分数。
【应用写作专项训练】
(1)
假定你是李华,下周日是你的生日,请用英语给你的外教Robert写一封邮件,邀请他来参加你的生日聚会。
内容包括:(1)表示欢迎;
(2)生日聚会安排:时间、地点、参加人员、聚会活动等;
(3)期待他的回复。
注意:1. 词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Robot,
Yours,
Li Hua
(2)
假定你是李华,是校学生会主席。请你代表校学生会(Student Union)用英文给你校学生写一则讲座通知。
内容包括:(1)主讲人、主题、时间和地点等;
(1)参加讲座的人员;
(1)其他事项。
注意:1. 词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear students,
Yours sincerely,
Students Union
(3)
[写作内容]
假定你是班长李华。刚接到学校的电话通知,下周一全体学生要去博物馆参观,原定的班会将推迟召开。请用英语给外国交换生 (exchange student) Tom 写一张留言条告知此事,并请 Tom 转告其他交换生。
注意:1. 词数50左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(4)
假定你是李华,想参加学校下学期的英语才艺大赛(English Talent Show)。请用英语给你的外教Mr Smith写一封信。
内容包括:(1)表达你想参加比赛的愿望;
(2)介绍你在英语方面的才能;
(3)请他给予指导。
注意:1. 词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
Yours,
Li Hua
(5)
[写作内容]
假定你是班长李明。你们班将于下周日到森林公园野餐,定于当天上午九点钟在校门口集合,乘公共汽车前往。请你用英语给班上的外国留学生写一封电子邮件,告知上述安排。
注意:1. 词数40左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
(6)
假设你是校学生会主席李华。学生会将举办一次高三英语演讲比赛,请你按照下面内容写一则书面通知。通知发布的时间是2024年11月3日。
内容包括:(1)举办比赛目的;
(2)报名的时间、地点;
(3)比赛的时间、地点;
(4)其他:邀请5位老师当评委,奖励前八名。
注意:1. 词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
NOTICE
(7)
假定你是学生会主席李华。一批来自美国的高中生与你校学生会开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请你为此写一篇发言稿。
内容包括:(1)回顾双方的交流活动;
(2)谈谈收获和感受;
(3)表达祝愿与期望。
注意:1. 词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
Thank you.
(8)
假定你是李华。你正在为高考紧张复习,但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。
内容包括:(1)作业多,没有时间运动;
(2)压力大,难以入睡;
(3)希望得到Kate的帮助。
注意:1. 词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Kate,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
(9)
假定你是李华,你到一个叫Robert的同学家里,叫他帮忙做一件事,碰巧他不在家。因此你要给他写一张留言条。
内容包括:(1)请他代你参加明天(3月12日)的植树活动;
(2)集合地点,如何出发;
(3)天气情况;
(4)自备的东西。
注意:1. 词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
March 11
Dear Robert,
Yours,
Li Hua
(10)
假定你是李华,你看到某跨国旅游公司在广州市当地招聘暑期工的广告,你想利用高考结束到大学入学前这段时间去打工。于是你写一封求职信申请该职位。
内容包括:(1)年龄:18
(2)毕业学校:广州市一中
(3)电子邮箱:lihua2008@qq.com
(4)相关工作经验
注意:1. 词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear manager,
I have learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a tour guide.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(11)
假定你是李华,你校外籍教师Martin想暑假期间到中国各地旅游,需聘请一位旅游爱好者做他的导游。请写一封邮件推荐你的朋友李明给他。
内容包括:(1)写信的目的;
(2)介绍李明的优势;
(3)希望安排面试。
注意:1. 词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Martin,
Yours,
Li Hua
(12)
假定你是李华,你的美国老师Mr. Evans要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr. Evans道歉并说明情况。
内容包括:(1)表示歉意;
(2)理由:父亲去北京出差,母亲生病住院需要人照顾;
(3)询问:是否有录音,以便补听讲座。
注意:1. 词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Evans,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(13)
假定你是李华,上周六,你有一次不愉快的就餐经历,对餐厅的服务员态度非常不满意。于是你给该餐厅老板写一封投诉信。
内容包括:(1)问题:牛肉面有苍蝇,服务员态度粗鲁;
(2)其他问题;
(3)要求:餐厅赔礼道歉。
注意:1. 词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua, a frequent customer in your restaurant.
I look forward to a better service next time.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
(14)
假定你是李华,最近你们班从英国转来了一名新生Jenny。这是她第一次远离家乡,很想念父母及家人,有时候思念至深,常常独自一个人深夜暗泣。对此,请你给Jenny写一封建议信。
内容包括:(1)鼓励Jenny坚定求学信心,志存高远,四海为家;
(2)就Jenny的目前状况,提2到3个建议。
注意:1. 词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jenny,
I am so glad to have a talk with you.
Wish you happy every day.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
(15)
假定你是李华,得知你的好友王强今年考上了北京大学(Peking University),他来自贫困地区,是村里的第一位大学生。请你给他写一封祝贺信。
内容包括:(1)考上理想大学,父母骄傲;
(2)努力学习将来为家乡服务;
(3)对未来祝福。
注意:1. 词数90左右;
2. 开头和结尾已经给出,不计入词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
Dear Wang Qiang,
Congratulations!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
(1)
Dear Robot,
How is it going? I am writing to invite you to my birthday party.
It will be held at my home from 5 to 6 in the evening next Sunday. Our classmates will be invited. At the party, there will be some interesting activities. In the beginning, we will enjoy a wonderful movie. Of course, all kinds of snacks are necessary for us. Then we will enjoy a delicious dinner and cake afterwards. I am sure we will have a wonderful time.
Look forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
(2)
Dear students,
On behalf of our school's Students Union, I am writing to inform all of us students that there will be a speech with a theme of Campus Violence by Professor Lin. What's more, the speech will be held at 5 p.m. on Friday in the meeting hall.
Thus, all of the students ought to attend the speech on time and wear school uniforms as well. If you can't be present, please ask your class teachers for a leave in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Students Union
(3)
Dear Tom
I'm the monitor Li Hua. I have just received a call from our school, telling me that all the students are required to visit the museum next Monday. Therefore, the intended class meeting will be put off. Please remember to inform other exchange students.
Thanks a lot!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(4)
Dear Mr. Smith,
Having known that there is going to be an English Talent Show at school next term, I'm writing to express my wish to take part in the show.
I've successfully passed the College English Test Bank 4. What's more, I've got a good knowledge of presentation skills in English. I would greatly appreciate it if I would have the chance to take part in the show, and it would be my great honor if you could give me some advice both on the show and on my English. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
(5)
Dear friends,
I am the monitor, Li Ming. I am very happy/pleased/delighted to invite you to join us in going on a picnic at the Forest Park next Sunday. We shall meet at the school gate at 9: 00 a.m. We will start/set off to go there by bus. We can have a good time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
(6)
NOTICE
In order to improve the students’ spoken English, an English speaking contest among the students of Senior 3 will be held in the school meeting room at 7:00 p.m. on November 15. It is organized by the Students’ Union. Those who want to take part in the contest, please sign up in the Students’ Union office before November 10. Five English teachers will be invited to work as judges. The first 8 winners will be given prizes. Everyone is welcome to participate in it.
The Students’ Union
November 3, 2024
(7)
Dear friends,
How time flies!
I am Li Hua, the president of the Students’ Union. It’s my great honor to be here, sharing this moment with our fellow friends from the United States. During the two-week activities, we surely exchanged our ideas on learning, sports, talent and cultures. One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.
The past two weeks witnessed our growth and our friendship. It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us deeply. After the precious exchange activity, we now have a better understanding of each other on a whole new level.
Now I sincerely hope that our friendship will last forever. Wish you all the best.
Thank you.
(8)
Dear Kate,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, I’ve been busy preparing for my college entrance exam, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to ask you for help.
I’m encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me extremely stressful because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night.
Faced with the above problems, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems?
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
(9)
March 11
Dear Robert,
I would like to ask you for help. Would you please take the place of me to take part in the tree planting activity in the People’s Park tomorrow? You know the school sports meeting has taken up much of my time and energy, and I need to adjust myself. You will get together at the school gate at 7 o’clock, and set off by bike for the park. By the way, it is reported that it probably rains tomorrow, so do remember to take your raincoat along with you. Besides, you must bring your own lunch. A million thanks to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
(10)
Dear manager,
I learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a tour guide. I have the intention of finding a part-time job in your company during this summer vacation.
I’m Li Hua, a girl aged 18 and I have just graduated from Guangzhou No. 1 Middle School. Therefore, I can speak fluent English as well as standard Chinese. Besides, I once worked as a tour guide for a month and was highly praised for my good service and rich experience. Young and energetic, I’m keen on traveling. Grown up in this city, I’m familiar with many beautiful places in Guangzhou. Thus, I’m convinced that I’m qualified for the job. Once hired, I would be very grateful and I would devote myself to the post. Please email me at: lihua2008@qq.com
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(11)
Dear Mr Martin,
Informed that you want a companion as a tour guide to travel around China, I strongly recommend my friend Li Ming to you.
Li Ming is a graduate majoring in English, which helps him communicate with you without difficulty. Moreover, he is enthusiastic about tourism and has worked as a part-time guide. It’s his relevant experiences that make him more qualified for this position. What makes him more admirable is that under no circumstance will he fail to cope with emergencies.
Should you favor him with the position, I am convinced that he would live up to your expectations. I hope you can schedule an interview with him at your earliest convenience. Please contact me at 12345678.
Yours,
Li Hua
(12)
Dear Mr. Evans,
I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow afternoon. My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now. I am afraid that I will have to take care of her these days.
However, I am actually very interested in English society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(13)
Dear Sir,
I am Lihua, a frequent customer in your restaurant. I have been pleased with your excellent service for years but now I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction about the poor service of your waiters.
Last Saturday, I went to your restaurant to have lunch but I had an awful experience. When having beef noodles, I suddenly found there were two flies in them, which disgusted me a lot. So I asked the waiter to change another dish. Out of my expectation, he didn’t change it but said in a rude manner that he was too busy to solve the problem. Needless to say, such a way of treating customers is unacceptable.
It’s my sincere hope that you can investigate the matter seriously and make a formal apology to me.
I look forward to a better service next time.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
(14)
Dear Jenny,
I am so glad to have a talk with you. I understand your present situation for I have had a similar experience before.
People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. I think you should realize that present separation will help with your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.
Try to make friends on your school campus, and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you take an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it.
Wish you happy every day.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
(15)
Dear Wang qiang,
Congratulations! I have learned with delight that you are admitted to Peking University, your ideal one! I know you have worked very hard in the past years, so I’m truly happy to know that you become the first college student of your village from the poor areas. I am sure your parents are greatly proud of you. I just want you to know how pleased I am to witness your success. This is a new start for you and it’s good for you to study with so many excellent students and learn from top professors. I wish you greater success in university and serve for the hometown in the future.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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