07.写作文体-议论文(观点评论)-2025年中考英语一轮复习书面表达精讲精练(通用版)

07 写作文体-议论文(观点评论) ( 知识积累 ) 一、文体概览 初中英语写作中的议论文以其明确的论点、严密的逻辑、充实的事实依据、充分的反驳讨论以及正式准确的语言而独具特色，是培养学生批判性思维、逻辑推理能力和语言表达能力的重要载体。英语写作中的议论文特征主要体现在以下几个方面： 首先，‌明确的论点‌是议论文的核心。一篇优秀的议论文必须有一个清晰、具体的中心论点，它贯穿全文，指导着整篇文章的展开。 其次，‌逻辑性‌是议论文的重要特征。议论文需要通过合理的论证结构和严密的逻辑推理来支持论点，通常包括引言、正文和结论三个部分，其中正文部分会围绕论点展开多个论据，每个论据之间以及论据与论点之间都需要有紧密的逻辑联系。 再者，‌事实依据和例证‌是议论文说服力的关键。为了增强论点的可信度，议论文需要引用事实、数据、例子或权威观点作为支撑，这些证据应当准确、具体且与论点紧密相关。 此外，‌反驳与讨论‌也是议论文中不可或缺的元素。优秀的议论文不仅会提出自己的观点，还会预设可能的反对意见，并进行有理有据的反驳，展现出作者全面考虑问题的能力。 最后，‌语言的正式性和准确性‌也是初中英语议论文的特点之一。议论文要求使用正式、规范的语言，避免口语化表达，同时要求用词准确，句式多样，以增强文章的表现力和说服力。 二、内容要素 议论文是针对某个问题或某个事件进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张的一种文体。议论文三要素是论点、论据、论证。 l. 论点：即要阐述或议论的中心。 2. 论据：即支持观点的依据。 3. 论证：即通过—定的方法，比如摆事实、讲道理等证明观点。 三、策略布局 在议论文写作时，我们要首先考虑自己的观点是什么，明确观点后要围绕观点进行论证，最后再进行总结。议论文在写作手法上以议论为主，但有时也要运用说明、叙述、描写等手法。初中议论文的写作格式一般为三段式：开头、主体和结尾。一般写作步骤如下： 第一步：确定主题，引出论点； 第二步：通过摆事实、讲道理来支持自己的观点。所用的事实、原因、理由应紧密地同结论联系在一起； 第三步：得出结论。要简明扼要、回扣全文。 注意：大部分的议论文采取总分总的议论模式，但是过渡句的使用要恰当好处，使文章衔接自然。 四、语言储备 1.常用词汇 表示观点：agree with, be in favor of, support, approve, be in agreement, be against… 表示数量：a great many, a member of, thousands of, a quarter of, some, a little, a few, several… 表示评价：be bad/ good for, speak highly of, be proud of/ take pride in… 表示顺序：first of all, then, second, third, at last… 表示并列、对比关系：and, as well as, also, besides, in addition, what’s more, on the other hand… 2.常用句型 I think it’s+adj.+for sb. to do sth.我想对于某人来说做某事是……的。 It’s good for your health to walk after meals.饭后散步对于你的健康有好处。 This is a fact that many people are interested in…很多人对……很感兴趣，这是一个事实。 It’s well known to us that…我们都知道…… It’s neither too big nor too small.它既不太大也不太小。 I agree/disagree with you. 我赞成/不赞成你的观点。 She not only sings well but also dances well. 她不但歌唱得好，而且舞跳得也好。 People have different opinions on his problem. 在这个问题上，人们有不同的观点。 However, each coin has two sides. 然而，任何事情都有两个方面。 ( 写作示例 ) 1.模版示例 ① 观点态度型 Many students think that _____________, because _____________ But as to me, I am not in favour of this point of view. I think, _____________, so _____________（我的看法）. First of all, _____________（原因一）. Secondly, _____________（原因二）. Thirdly/Most important of all, _____________（原因三）. All in all/In a word, I hold the opinion that _____________（总结观点）. And I hope _____________（提出愿望）. ②说明利弊型 Nowadays, _____________ like to _____________（社会现象）. About this different people have different opinions. On the one hand, some people think _____________（优点一）. Moreover _____________（优点二）. But every coin has two sides. Firstly, _____________（缺点一）. Besides, _____________（缺点二）. I think _____________（我的观点）. ③解决方法型 In recent days, we have to face a problem: that is _____________（问题）. For example, some _____________（例一）; some _____________（例二）; some _____________（例三）and still some _____________（例四）. Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thing, we should _____________（解决方法一）. For another thing, we'd better _____________（解决方法二). Because, we should _____________（解决方法三）. In my opinion, if _____________ , we will _____________. 2.写作示例 ( 突破练习 ) 1．（2024·山东淄博·三模）最近雾霾天气较多，这是人类破坏环境造成的结果。保护环境，保卫家园是每个人的责任和义务。请你以“The Green Planet”为题写一篇不少于100词的英语短文，分析一下周围存在的环境问题，谈一下保护环境的主张和做法。 注意： 1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名； 短文的开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2023·陕西西安·三模）经历了“新冠”和“甲流”疫情，每个人都很重视自己的健康。作为一名中学生，请以Let’s have a healthy life!为题给你们的校刊“英文园地”投稿，建议同学们养成良好的生活、学习习惯，健康生活，快乐学习。 要求： 1. 行文应该包括生活习惯和学习习惯两个方面，参考提示词，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 不得出现真实的校名、人名； 4. 词数：不少于70（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） 提示词： Living habits: exercise, enough sleep, healthy food Study habits: preview (预习) lessons, take notes, review lessons. . Let’s have a healthy life! Recently, everyone pays more attention to their health because of the bad flu. As middle school students, we should have healthy living habits and good study habits. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All in all, I believe if we have good living and study habits, we can live healthily and study well. 3．（2024·山西忻州·三模）面对转瞬即逝的初中生活，我们有太多的希冀与不舍，多少欢笑与泪水，多少成功与失败，对于我们青涩的青春我们想到的是什么？拼搏，希望，信任，友爱，鼓励……，请选择一个关键词，并分享背后的故事和你的感悟。 要求：1.不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.不得出现真实的校名、人名。      Looking back at my junior school life, I think of many things. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·山东淄博·二模）假如你是李华。请你以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，从生活习惯、学习、人际关系等方面谈谈你将如何成为更好的自己。 注意： 1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·黑龙江鸡西·二模）习总书记在二十大报告中指出“青年强，则国家强”。作为中学生的我们，更要努力发展自身，做拼搏上进的中国少年！请根据以下图片，联系自身实际，从德智体美劳等方面谈谈自己将如何努力做合格的中国少年。 要求：1．话题作文和图示作文任选其一。 2．词数：80~100之间，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3．字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive, said President Xi Jinping. So how to be a better teenager? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·湖北十堰·二模）2024年中考即将来临，面对这一人生重大的转折点，每位同学都在为了实现自己的梦想而奋力拼搏。很多同学在积极进取的道路上会遇到一些困惑。请认真阅读王芳给Robert Hunt写的一封信后，以Robert Hunt的身份用英语给王芳写封回信，帮助她解惑。 Dear Mr. Hunt, My problem is that I am worried about arguments between my parents. My father always complains about my study, shouting at my mother without any reason. I often feel stressed out and I stay up late until 1 o’clock. And also I can’t focus on what the teacher said in class. I always feel nervous. What should I do? Wang Fang 要求： （1）回信要合情合理，能跟来信者产生共鸣，起到帮助作用； （2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； （3）词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Wang Fang, I have heard from you. It’s not easy being your age. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Robert Hunt 7．（2024·广东广州·三模）假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办题为“AI in Our Life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿，包含以下内容： 注意： 1．参考词汇：AI人工智能。 2．文中需包含所给的相关信息，并可作适当想象和发挥。 3．文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 4．词数80词左右。 AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your listening! 8．（2024·山东日照·二模）生活节奏加快，竞争日益激烈，许多中学生在生活或学习上或多或少产生了压力。该如何应对呢？假如你是李华，你班要以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题开一个主题班会，请你根据以下内容写一篇发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享。 内容包括： 1. 同学们普遍存在的压力是什么； 2. 你的压力是什么； 3. 你是如何成功缓解压力的，如：制定合适的目标，遇到困难多沟通，谈谈你自己的一至两个观点。 注意： 1. 词数90左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·辽宁丹东·三模）假设你是中学生李华，你的笔友Bob最近和他的朋友John关系紧张，原因是John想借Bob的英语作业抄写，Bob拒绝了。Bob发邮件向你咨询如何改善与John的关系，请你回复邮件，内容包括： （1）写作目的； （2）提出建议并说明理由； （3）表达美好愿望。 注意：（1）词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Bob, Having known you have some problems with your friend, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 10．（2024·福建泉州·二模）假如你是李华。上周五你在学校书法(calligraphy)比赛中获奖。根据图表提示，请你用英语给笔友Peter写一封邮件，分享你的心情，谈谈你的感受。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Dear Peter; How is everything going?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to get your reply soon! Yours, Li Hua 11．（2024·山东威海·中考真题）英国学生 Joe在学习中国文化，他对成语“近朱者赤，近墨者黑”感兴趣，在某网站论坛上发起讨论。请你回帖发表你的见解：阐述你对该成语的理解，并从择友、交友的角度举例加以说明。 注意： （1）词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）内容需涵盖所有要求，可适当发挥； （3）文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息。 Hi, Joe. I’m happy that you’re interested in Chinese culture. This is a famous Chinese idiom._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 07 写作文体-议论文(观点评论) ( 知识积累 ) 一、文体概览 初中英语写作中的议论文以其明确的论点、严密的逻辑、充实的事实依据、充分的反驳讨论以及正式准确的语言而独具特色，是培养学生批判性思维、逻辑推理能力和语言表达能力的重要载体。英语写作中的议论文特征主要体现在以下几个方面： 首先，‌明确的论点‌是议论文的核心。一篇优秀的议论文必须有一个清晰、具体的中心论点，它贯穿全文，指导着整篇文章的展开。 其次，‌逻辑性‌是议论文的重要特征。议论文需要通过合理的论证结构和严密的逻辑推理来支持论点，通常包括引言、正文和结论三个部分，其中正文部分会围绕论点展开多个论据，每个论据之间以及论据与论点之间都需要有紧密的逻辑联系。 再者，‌事实依据和例证‌是议论文说服力的关键。为了增强论点的可信度，议论文需要引用事实、数据、例子或权威观点作为支撑，这些证据应当准确、具体且与论点紧密相关。 此外，‌反驳与讨论‌也是议论文中不可或缺的元素。优秀的议论文不仅会提出自己的观点，还会预设可能的反对意见，并进行有理有据的反驳，展现出作者全面考虑问题的能力。 最后，‌语言的正式性和准确性‌也是初中英语议论文的特点之一。议论文要求使用正式、规范的语言，避免口语化表达，同时要求用词准确，句式多样，以增强文章的表现力和说服力。 二、内容要素 议论文是针对某个问题或某个事件进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张的一种文体。议论文三要素是论点、论据、论证。 l. 论点：即要阐述或议论的中心。 2. 论据：即支持观点的依据。 3. 论证：即通过—定的方法，比如摆事实、讲道理等证明观点。 三、策略布局 在议论文写作时，我们要首先考虑自己的观点是什么，明确观点后要围绕观点进行论证，最后再进行总结。议论文在写作手法上以议论为主，但有时也要运用说明、叙述、描写等手法。初中议论文的写作格式一般为三段式：开头、主体和结尾。一般写作步骤如下： 第一步：确定主题，引出论点； 第二步：通过摆事实、讲道理来支持自己的观点。所用的事实、原因、理由应紧密地同结论联系在一起； 第三步：得出结论。要简明扼要、回扣全文。 注意：大部分的议论文采取总分总的议论模式，但是过渡句的使用要恰当好处，使文章衔接自然。 四、语言储备 1.常用词汇 表示观点：agree with, be in favor of, support, approve, be in agreement, be against… 表示数量：a great many, a member of, thousands of, a quarter of, some, a little, a few, several… 表示评价：be bad/ good for, speak highly of, be proud of/ take pride in… 表示顺序：first of all, then, second, third, at last… 表示并列、对比关系：and, as well as, also, besides, in addition, what’s more, on the other hand… 2.常用句型 I think it’s+adj.+for sb. to do sth.我想对于某人来说做某事是……的。 It’s good for your health to walk after meals.饭后散步对于你的健康有好处。 This is a fact that many people are interested in…很多人对……很感兴趣，这是一个事实。 It’s well known to us that…我们都知道…… It’s neither too big nor too small.它既不太大也不太小。 I agree/disagree with you. 我赞成/不赞成你的观点。 She not only sings well but also dances well. 她不但歌唱得好，而且舞跳得也好。 People have different opinions on his problem. 在这个问题上，人们有不同的观点。 However, each coin has two sides. 然而，任何事情都有两个方面。 ( 写作示例 ) 1.模版示例 ① 观点态度型 Many students think that _____________, because _____________ But as to me, I am not in favour of this point of view. I think, _____________, so _____________（我的看法）. First of all, _____________（原因一）. Secondly, _____________（原因二）. Thirdly/Most important of all, _____________（原因三）. All in all/In a word, I hold the opinion that _____________（总结观点）. And I hope _____________（提出愿望）. ②说明利弊型 Nowadays, _____________ like to _____________（社会现象）. About this different people have different opinions. On the one hand, some people think _____________（优点一）. Moreover _____________（优点二）. But every coin has two sides. Firstly, _____________（缺点一）. Besides, _____________（缺点二）. I think _____________（我的观点）. ③解决方法型 In recent days, we have to face a problem: that is _____________（问题）. For example, some _____________（例一）; some _____________（例二）; some _____________（例三）and still some _____________（例四）. Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thing, we should _____________（解决方法一）. For another thing, we'd better _____________（解决方法二). Because, we should _____________（解决方法三）. In my opinion, if _____________ , we will _____________. 2.写作示例 ( 突破练习 ) 1．（2024·山东淄博·三模）最近雾霾天气较多，这是人类破坏环境造成的结果。保护环境，保卫家园是每个人的责任和义务。请你以“The Green Planet”为题写一篇不少于100词的英语短文，分析一下周围存在的环境问题，谈一下保护环境的主张和做法。 注意： 1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名； 短文的开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2023·陕西西安·三模）经历了“新冠”和“甲流”疫情，每个人都很重视自己的健康。作为一名中学生，请以Let’s have a healthy life!为题给你们的校刊“英文园地”投稿，建议同学们养成良好的生活、学习习惯，健康生活，快乐学习。 要求： 1. 行文应该包括生活习惯和学习习惯两个方面，参考提示词，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 不得出现真实的校名、人名； 4. 词数：不少于70（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） 提示词： Living habits: exercise, enough sleep, healthy food Study habits: preview (预习) lessons, take notes, review lessons. . Let’s have a healthy life! Recently, everyone pays more attention to their health because of the bad flu. As middle school students, we should have healthy living habits and good study habits. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All in all, I believe if we have good living and study habits, we can live healthily and study well. 3．（2024·山西忻州·三模）面对转瞬即逝的初中生活，我们有太多的希冀与不舍，多少欢笑与泪水，多少成功与失败，对于我们青涩的青春我们想到的是什么？拼搏，希望，信任，友爱，鼓励……，请选择一个关键词，并分享背后的故事和你的感悟。 要求：1.不少于80词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.不得出现真实的校名、人名。      Looking back at my junior school life, I think of many things. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·山东淄博·二模）假如你是李华。请你以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，从生活习惯、学习、人际关系等方面谈谈你将如何成为更好的自己。 注意： 1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的区县、学校及姓名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·黑龙江鸡西·二模）习总书记在二十大报告中指出“青年强，则国家强”。作为中学生的我们，更要努力发展自身，做拼搏上进的中国少年！请根据以下图片，联系自身实际，从德智体美劳等方面谈谈自己将如何努力做合格的中国少年。 要求：1．话题作文和图示作文任选其一。 2．词数：80~100之间，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3．字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive, said President Xi Jinping. So how to be a better teenager? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·湖北十堰·二模）2024年中考即将来临，面对这一人生重大的转折点，每位同学都在为了实现自己的梦想而奋力拼搏。很多同学在积极进取的道路上会遇到一些困惑。请认真阅读王芳给Robert Hunt写的一封信后，以Robert Hunt的身份用英语给王芳写封回信，帮助她解惑。 Dear Mr. Hunt, My problem is that I am worried about arguments between my parents. My father always complains about my study, shouting at my mother without any reason. I often feel stressed out and I stay up late until 1 o’clock. And also I can’t focus on what the teacher said in class. I always feel nervous. What should I do? Wang Fang 要求： （1）回信要合情合理，能跟来信者产生共鸣，起到帮助作用； （2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； （3）词数80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Wang Fang, I have heard from you. It’s not easy being your age. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Robert Hunt 7．（2024·广东广州·三模）假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办题为“AI in Our Life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿，包含以下内容： 注意： 1．参考词汇：AI人工智能。 2．文中需包含所给的相关信息，并可作适当想象和发挥。 3．文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 4．词数80词左右。 AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your listening! 8．（2024·山东日照·二模）生活节奏加快，竞争日益激烈，许多中学生在生活或学习上或多或少产生了压力。该如何应对呢？假如你是李华，你班要以“Less Pressure, Better Life”为主题开一个主题班会，请你根据以下内容写一篇发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享。 内容包括： 1. 同学们普遍存在的压力是什么； 2. 你的压力是什么； 3. 你是如何成功缓解压力的，如：制定合适的目标，遇到困难多沟通，谈谈你自己的一至两个观点。 注意： 1. 词数90左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·辽宁丹东·三模）假设你是中学生李华，你的笔友Bob最近和他的朋友John关系紧张，原因是John想借Bob的英语作业抄写，Bob拒绝了。Bob发邮件向你咨询如何改善与John的关系，请你回复邮件，内容包括： （1）写作目的； （2）提出建议并说明理由； （3）表达美好愿望。 注意：（1）词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Bob, Having known you have some problems with your friend, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 10．（2024·福建泉州·二模）假如你是李华。上周五你在学校书法(calligraphy)比赛中获奖。根据图表提示，请你用英语给笔友Peter写一封邮件，分享你的心情，谈谈你的感受。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Dear Peter; How is everything going?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to get your reply soon! Yours, Li Hua 11．（2024·山东威海·中考真题）英国学生 Joe在学习中国文化，他对成语“近朱者赤，近墨者黑”感兴趣，在某网站论坛上发起讨论。请你回帖发表你的见解：阐述你对该成语的理解，并从择友、交友的角度举例加以说明。 注意： （1）词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）内容需涵盖所有要求，可适当发挥； （3）文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息。 Hi, Joe. I’m happy that you’re interested in Chinese culture. This is a famous Chinese idiom._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． The Green Planet Now our environment is becoming worse and worse. More and more people have realized the importance of protecting the environment. It’s our duty to protect our earth. In my daily life, I always turn off the lights when I leave a room. While I am washing my hair, I usually turn off the shower. Besides, if I want to go shopping, I always take reusable bags instead of using plastic bags. I have decided to do more things to protect our earth, such as recycling books and paper. It’s good for us to ride bikes or walk to school. We can also plant more trees to improve the air around us. In a word, I think one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it does make a difference. Let’s take action now! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。 ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主。 ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“如何保护地球的环境”并适当补充，使文章内容充实，行文应使用第一人称。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，点明环境越来越糟糕，以及环境的重要性。 第二步，具体阐述内容，介绍自己生活中是如何用具体行动保护环境的。 第三步，书写结语，号召大家行动起来。 [亮点词汇] ①daily life日常生活 ②make an effort做出努力 ③decide to do决定做某事 [高分句型] ①I always turn off the lights when I leave a room.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I think one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort we make, it does make a difference.（省略that的宾语从句，no matter what引导的让步状语从句） 2． Let’s have a healthy life! Recently, everyone pays more attention to their health because of the bad flu. As middle school students, we should have healthy living habits and good study habits. There are some good living habits. First, we should do some exercise to build up our bodies. Second, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Third, we must have healthy food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. There are also some good study habits. First, we should preview lessons the day before the class. Second, when we are having classes, we should take notes in our textbooks. Third, after class, we ought to review what we have learned in class. All in all, I believe if we have good living and study habits, we can live healthily and study well. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文； ②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍自己的良好习惯，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题，表明健康生活和学习习惯的重要性； 第二步，从三个方面详细介绍应如何养成良好的生活习惯； 第三步，从三个方面详细介绍应如何养成良好的学习习惯； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①pay attention to 注意 ②build up one’s body强身健体 [高分句型] ①Second, when we are having classes, we should take notes in our textbooks. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②Third, after class, we ought to review what we have learned in class. (what引导的宾语从句) 3． Looking back at my junior school life, I think of many things. Among them, encouragement impresses me the best, which is like a kind of magic. I am always encouraged to move forward because of it. I still remember when Mr. Li asked a question in the English class. I got an answer, but I was not sure whether my answer was completely correct because I was not a top student. All of sudden, I saw Mr. Li looking at me with a smile. Thinking for a while, I picked up the courage to say my answer. I never expected Mr. Li walked towards me and said loudly, “Perfect! What a great answer you gave.” Hearing this, my heart was full of hope, confidence and joy. Thanks to Mr. Li’s encouragement, I study even harder and I believe I can be a top student. It’s like the sunshine that lights the road ahead of me. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：在写作时首先要选好自己要谈论的关键词，根据关键词介绍其背后的经历，并描述自己的感悟。写作时要注意语言的准确性和逻辑性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，明确要介绍的话题； 第二步，重点介绍该话题背后的经历； 第三步，介绍自己的感受，与第一步呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①because of由于 ②all of sudden突然 ③be full of充满 ④thanks to多亏 [高分句型] ①Among them, encouragement impresses me the best, which is like a kind of magic.（which引导的定语从句） ②I got an answer, but I was not sure whether my answer was completely correct because I was not a top student.（whether引导的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句） ③It’s like the sunshine that lights the road ahead of me.（that引导的定语从句） 4． How to Make Myself Better As a teenager, it’s important to develop good habits to be a better teenager. Here is some advice on how to make myself better. First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. Eat more fruit and vegetables is good for us. We also need to take exercise every day and get enough sleep. What’s more, we should make a study plan and take action to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends. When others need help, we are supposed to try our best to help them. Finally, it is important for us to develop good hobbies and take part in voluntary activities, such as cleaning the city park. In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better. [总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头引出本文主题；   第二步，介绍如何让自己变得更好； 第三步，总结概括。   [亮点词汇]   ①be good for对……有好处   ②take action采取行动 ③such as例如 [高分句型]   ①The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have.（the+比较级，the+比较级的结构）   ②Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends.（动词不定式作主语） 5．： A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive, said President Xi Jinping. So how to be a better teenager? Firstly, helping others will make us feel happy. For example, we should help others who have fallen down. After we see their smiles on their faces, we must be happier too. Secondly, we should study hard. In our free time, we are willing to read more books to broaden our eyes. Thirdly, healthy bodies can bring us happiness. Health is important to everyone. Only when we keep healthy can we work and study happily. So we should keep on doing more exercise. Fourthly, developing good interests is also important, which can make our life colorful and interesting. So we should develop a good habit to learn more and more skills when we are in our free time. Finally, we can do more social work. For example, we can plant more trees to protect the environment. We can also work as volunteers and clean up the parks. From doing these, I must be a better teenager. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：根据图片内容以及提示单词，联系自身实际介绍自己将如何做合格的中国少年。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，突出主题：如何成为一名好少年？ 第二步，结合图片内容，分别从帮助他人、努力学习、体育锻炼、发展兴趣及参与社会实践活动等五个方面具体阐述如何做一名合格的中国少年。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己做一名好少年的决心。 [亮点词汇] ①fall down落后 ②broaden our eyes开阔我们的眼界 ③develop a good habit培养好的习惯 ④be willing to do sth.愿意做某事 [高分句型] ①For example, we should help others who have fallen down. (who引导的定语从句) ②In our free time, we are willing to read more books to broaden our eyes. (动词不定式作目的状语) ③Fourthly, developing good interests is also important, which can make our life colorful and interesting. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ④Only when we keep healthy can we work and study happily. (倒装结构) 6． Dear Wang Fang, I have heard from you. It’s not easy being your age. I understand how you feel about your parents’ arguments and the stress it brings. Here are some suggestions that might help you. First, try to talk to your parents about how their arguments affect you. They might not realize the impact it has on you. Second, find a quiet place to study where you can focus better. It could be a library or a friend’s house. Finally, make sure to get enough sleep. Going to bed earlier can help you feel more rested and focused in class. Remember, it’s important to take care of yourself. I hope these suggestions help you. Robert Hunt [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文主要是安慰王芳，并给出一些缓解压力和改善学习状态的建议。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接信件的开头，引出写作意图； 第二步，详细给出一些缓解压力和改善学习状态的建议； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①complain about 抱怨 ②focus 专注 [高分句型] I understand how you feel about your parents’ arguments and the stress it brings. (how引导的宾语从句) They might not realize the impact it has on you. (省略that的宾语从句) Going to bed earlier can help you feel more rested and focused in class. (动名词短语作主语) 7．： AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. We can see all kinds of AI products in our daily life. For example, smartphones can make work and study more efficient. If we have any problems in our studies, we will ask smartphones for help. Cleaning robots can help with housework. They all bring great convenience and progress to our society. However, with AI technology being widely used, many workers lost their jobs. Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves. All in all, just as every coin has its two sides, AI products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future. That’s all. Thank you for your listening! [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从学习及生活等方面介绍AI改变了我们的生活； 第二步，介绍对于AI的一些担忧； 第三步，最后介绍自己对AI的一些看法。 [亮点词汇] ① all kinds of各种各样的 ② ask for help请求帮助 ③ in the future在将来 [高分句型] ① If we have any problems in our studies, we will ask smartphones for help.（if引导的条件状语从句） ② I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future.（that引导的宾语从句） 8． Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! I’m glad to stand here and give you a short speech. My topic is “Less Pressure, Better Life”. I hope you’ll like it. Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in my class feel stressed from time to time. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. I’m always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in class. So they sent me to all kinds of after-school classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. That’s all. Thank you! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“压力更小，生活更美好”话题； 第二步，具体阐述同学们普遍存在的压力是什么、自己的压力是什么以及如何成功缓解压力的； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①from time to time 有时 ②agree with 同意 ③necessary 必需的 [高分句型] Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. (while引导的从句) 9． Dear Bob, Having known you have some problems with your friend, I’m sorry to hear that. Here is my personal advice on how to solve it. Firstly, you’d better talk to John. It’s wrong to copy others’ homework. Students should be honest and try to finish homework by themselves instead of copying. Besides, you can offer to help him. Tell him that you can help him if he has difficulties in doing his homework. Finally it is a good idea to invite him to do some activities together, such as watching films and playing football, which can also be helpful to improve the relationship between you. I hope these suggestions will be helpful and everything will turn out all right in the end. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，表明写作目的； 第二步，给出建议并说明理由； 第三步，表达美好愿望，并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①by oneself 靠自己 ②instead of 代替，而不是 ③have difficulties doing sth. 做某事有困难 ④turn out 结果是 [高分句型] ①Tell him that you can help him if he has difficulties in doing his homework.（if引导的条件句） ②I hope these suggestions will be helpful and everything will turn out all right in the end.（宾语从句，and连接的并列句） 10． Dear Peter, How is everything going? Last Friday I won a prize in the school calligraphy competition. I’m very excited. Chinese calligraphy is an important traditional culture with a long history in China. Calligraphy can not only make my writing beautiful but also relax myself. It’s popular with all ages. I can’t help sharing the news with you right now. I think practicing every day is a good way to make it perfect. Now many foreigners are also interested in it. Would you like to have a try? I’m sure you’ll enjoy it. Hope to get your reply soon! Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作方向已给出，写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容，注意表述清晰，逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，向对方问好，具体阐述书法的历史以及好处； 第二步，阐述对书法的感受； 第三步，书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also不但……而且…… ②be popular with受欢迎 ③can’t help doing sth情不自禁做某事 ④be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①I think practicing every day is a good way to make it perfect. (宾语从句) 11． Version 1 Hi, Joe. I’m happy that you’re interested in Chinese culture. This is a famous Chinese idiom. It means that we are influenced by people around us. There are people who can make us kinder, braver and more confident. So it is important for us to choose a good friend. At the same time, we should keep away from people who have bad effects on us. Here, I want to share my own experience with you. When I was in Grade 8, I had a friend who was not good at schoolwork. She often asked me to play computer games with her. I spent so much time playing with her that I failed in my exams. This year, I have made a new friend. She was excellent. She was patient with me and gave me a hand whenever I had problems. She always encouraged me to study hard. With the help of her, I have made great progress. I got better grades in the exam. Because of her, I become better and more confident. Now I look forward to going to the same senior high school with her. This famous Chinese idiom can guide us how to choose friends. If you want to know more about Chinese culture, I will be ready to offer help to you. Version 2 Hi, Joe. I’m happy that you’re interested in Chinese culture. This is a famous Chinese idiom. In my opinion, it shows how important it is to choose friends because they really play an important role in our life and we will be easily influenced by them. We’ll become better because we make a good friend. I didn’t have a clear goal and used to give up easily, but now I have become more strong-minded because of my best friend Cindy. Cindy likes playing tennis and she dreams to be a tennis star one day. To make her dream come true, she keeps practicing tennis really hard every day and never gives up when facing difficulties. Whenever I go through a hard time, I will think of Cindy. It is her spirit that encourages me to challenge myself and hold on to my dream. Later, I also fall in love with tennis and take part in different kinds of tennis competitions to better myself. All in all, I think everyone should choose friends wisely. A good friend is really helpful to you. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述对“近朱者赤，近墨者黑”的理解； 第二步，结合自己的经历讲述朋友对自己的影响； 第三步，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①in one’s opinion在某人看来 ②play an important role in在……中扮演重要角色 ③come true实现 [高分句型] ①it shows how important it is to choose friends because they really play an important role in our life and we will be easily influenced by them.（宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句） ②Whenever I go through a hard time, I will think of Cindy.（让步状语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$