UNIT 3 Section Ⅴ Writing—写一篇家庭往事-【金版新学案】2024-2025学年新教材高一英语必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版2019）

UNIT 3　Family matters Section Ⅴ　Writing 　　　 　　——写一篇家庭往事 内容索引 模仿写作　学范文 1 40分写作限时练 2 模仿写作　学范文 返回 原文呈现 Sunday 20 October 　　I was tidying my room yesterday and found an old photo in a notebook.As I was looking at it，the lovely memory of that day came back to me. 　　It was my mother’s birthday ten years ago，and I decided to surprise her with home-made scrambled eggs.I woke up really early and tip-toed to the kitchen.I had never cooked anything before，so I tried to copy how she did it.But somehow they ended up burnt. 　　I was about to throw everything away when my mother came in.I showed her the eggs and sadly explained what happened.To my surprise，she tasted them and said they weren’t bad! I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient.In fact，we ended up laughing and ate them all. 　　This weekend is her 45th birthday.I’ll make her scrambled eggs again，and this time they won’t be burnt! 名师圈点 学语言 本文主要讲述了作者十年前为母亲制作生日礼物的回忆。文章主要以过去时态为主，讲述了给母亲悄悄制作礼物却失败的故事。为了给母亲惊喜，作者在文中使用了surprise，tip-toe等动词，使语言更加形象；失败后作者使用了sadly表达作者的失望之情。 最终，母亲品尝后说还不错。作者使用了．..love is indeed a magical ingredient，将爱比喻成“神奇的调料”，由此“爱”得到升华…… 知结构 本文写作主要借助时间顺序：yesterday→ten years ago→this weekend。 文章内容：一张老照片(引起回忆)→十年前给母亲制作生日礼物失败→下周母亲45岁生日，将再次制作同样的生日礼物(新的愿望)。 情境任务写作 　　假定你是李华，你在整理书架时偶然看到妈妈曾经写给你的一堆卡片。刚进入高中时，你的学习压力很大，这些卡片是妈妈为了鼓励你并帮助你减轻压力而写的，最后你开始快乐地学习。请你把这段美好回忆分享给你的好友Tom。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 仿写程序步骤 1．一仿结构布局合理 首段：__________； 主体：__________； 尾段：____________________。 2．二仿语言规范美观 ①这个周末我在整理我的书架时，发现了一堆卡片。(clean up) ____________________________________________，I found a stack of cards. ②当我读每张卡片上的话语时我的眼睛湿润了。(water) When I read the words on each card，_________________． 总体介绍 叙述故事 描述感受，进行总结 While I was cleaning up my bookshelf this weekend my eyes watered ③这些鼓励卡片帮助我经受住了挫折(frustration)。(go through) These encouraging cards helped me ___________________________． ④刚开始上高中的时候，我感到很有压力，我一天中的每一分钟都害怕会落后。(fall behind) I felt pressured at the beginning of high school _________________________ ______________________________________． ⑤妈妈很体贴，她发现了我的问题。(so...that...) Mum was __________________________________________． ⑥妈妈让我明白压力是无法避免的。(avoid) Mum makes me understand _________________________________． go through my frustration and I was afraid of falling so considerate that she found my problem that pressure can’t be avoided behind every minute of the day ⑦重要的是如何恰当地处理它，如何把它变成乐趣。(主语从句，count) _____________________________________，and how to turn it into pleasure. What counts is how to deal with it properly 3．三仿句式高级表达 ⑧用强调结构改写句③ ________________________________________________________________ ⑨用动词-ing形式(短语)作状语改写句④ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration. Feeling pressured at the beginning of high school，I was afraid of falling behind every minute of the day. 4．四仿教材连句成篇 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Tom， 　　While I was cleaning up my bookshelf this weekend，I found a stack of cards.When I read the words on each card，my eyes watered.It was these encouraging cards that helped me go through my frustration. 　　Feeling pressured at the beginning of high school，I was afraid of falling behind every minute of the day.Mum was so considerate that she found my problem.From then on，I could find a special card on my desk every morning.Gradually，I became less anxious and began to find pleasure in my studies. 　　Mum makes me understand that pressure can’t be avoided.What counts is how to deal with it properly，and how to turn it into pleasure. 　　Yours， 　　Li Hua 精彩素材积累 常用开头句： 1．As I was looking at it，the lovely memory of that day came back to me.当我在看它的时候，那天的美好回忆又回到我的脑海中。 2．I have a happy family，and I spent many wonderful times with my family.The most unforgettable time for me was last summer vacation. 我有一个幸福的家庭，我和家人度过了许多美好的时光。对我来说最难忘的时光是去年暑假。 3．I love spending time with my family because it brings us closer together.I find I develop greater love for them as the years pass，despite our differences or disagreements. 我喜欢和家人在一起，因为这让我们更亲密。随着时间的流逝，我发现我对他们的爱越来越深，尽管我们之间存在分歧。 常用中间句： 1．It made me feel so embarrassed. 那使我很尴尬。 2．First of all，he told me to analyze the causes one by one warm-heartedly instead of scolding me seriously as usual. 首先，他告诉我要热心地分析原因，而不是像往常一样严厉地责备我。 3．After reading the passage，I was lost in thought.From my own perspective，however busy parents are，they should spare time to accompany their children. 读完这篇文章，我陷入了沉思。从我个人的角度看，不管父母有多忙，他们都应该挤出时间陪伴他们的孩子。 常用结束句： 1．Only in this way can we enjoy an equal relationship. 只有这样我们才能享有平等的关系。 2．Good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.善于倾听能使我们彼此走得更近。 3．With the encouragement and support of my parents，I have overcome many difficulties in my life. 在父母的鼓励和支持下，我克服了生活中的许多困难。 学以致用 　　你校英文报社举办征文比赛，要求以“My happy family”为主题写一则小故事，描述自己的家庭。请按要求投稿，内容如下： 　　1．描述一件你和家人的美好往事； 　　2．阐述令你印象深刻的原因。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 　　There are five people in my family.We live happily together.There are many things occurring around us，creating many wonderful and loving moments in my memory. 　　Last weekend，my parents and I celebrated my grandpa’s birthday happily.On the early morning of the big day，my grandpa and I set out for the park.Considering his age，I accompanied him to the top of the mountain by cable car.Enjoying the beautiful scenery，we couldn’t help taking lots of photos.When we came back home at noon，my parents had already prepared a big lunch for us.All my family enjoyed the meal happily. 　　Seeing the smiles on my grandpa’s face，I was glad and proud to have done something to show my love to him. 返回 40分写作限时练 返回 Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分) (2024·大同高一期中) 　　上周末你和家人一起参观了当地的博物馆。据此，请你写一篇英语短文，内容包括： 　　1．当天的活动； 　　2．收获与感想。 　　注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 　　2．请按如下格式作答。 参考词汇：展品exhibit A Family Day Out ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 A Family Day Out 　　Last weekend，I visited the local museum with my family.During our visit，we explored various paintings，sculptures，and other exhibits.One of the most impressive memories was the opportunity to learn about the cultural traditions of our city.I was amazed by the stories behind them. 　　Overall，the visit to the museum was beneficial to me.It was a great moment to spend quality time with my family and have some insight into the history and culture of our city.I would highly recommend the museum to anyone who is interested in our city. Ⅱ.读后续写(满分25分) 　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　　(2024·保定高一期中) 　　An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son.Suddenly a crow (乌鸦) perched (栖息) on their window. 　　The father asked his son，“What is this？” The son replied，“It is a crow.” 　　After a few minutes，the father asked his son for the second time，“What is this？” The son said，“Father，I have just now told you it is a crow！” 　　After a little while，the old father again asked his son for the third time，“What is this？” 　　At this time some expression of irritation (恼怒) was felt in the son’s tone when he said to his father with a rebuff (生硬回绝).“It’s a crow，a crow.” A little while later，the father again asked his son the fourth time，“ What is this？” 　　This time，the son shouted at his father，“ Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again，although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS A CROW’．Are you not able to understand this？” 　　A little while later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered (发皱的) diary，which he had maintained since his son was born.On opening a page，he asked his son to read that page.When the son read it，the following words were written in the diary： 　　Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa，when a crow was sitting on the window.My son asked me 23 times what it was，and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow.I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question.I did not at all feel annoyed but I rather felt love for my innocent son. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 　　2．请按如下格式作答。 　　After reading the diary，________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Feeling ashamed，the son got down on his knees before his father. ______ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文 　　After reading the diary，tears rolled down the son’s face and he recalled the days when he used to sit together with his father.His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling annoyed while his father asked him the same question just four times! Only until then did he realize what a kind and selfless father he has! He loved his son so much but he didn’t expect anything in return.He couldn’t help bursting into tears. 返回 　　Feeling ashamed，the son got down on his knees before his father.He said to his father with regret，“I’m so stupid that I hurt you.In no case will I make you annoyed in the future.I promise to see you happy forever，Dad.It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child，showering your selfless love on me.But now，it is my turn to do that.”Dad smiled proudly and they hugged each other tightly. 谢 谢 观 看 ！ 返回 $$