Unit 3 Section Ⅴ Writing——如何写叙事类记叙文-【金版新学案】2023-2024学年新教材高一英语必修第一册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版2019）

Unit 3 Family matters Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Section Ⅴ　Writing——如何写叙事类记叙文　 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 I arrived at David's home by bike with a present impressed me most gave me a warm welcome Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 created a nice and warm atmosphere open my heart to his other friendly As a result and active friends Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 谢谢观看！ Unit 3　Family matters 英 语 必修 第一册 [文体感知] 叙事类记叙文主要对某一事件的发生、发展和结果进行叙述，重在叙述事情发生、发展的过程。写叙事类记叙文时，要交代清楚时间、地点、人物和起因，然后再进一步叙述经过和结果等要素。英语写作中的叙事类记叙文写作要求相对比较低，其考查重点在语言运用的正确性、句子的连贯性、信息表述的完整性等方面。 [增分佳句] 1．首段常用句型： I was doing... when I found an old photo/a card/a diary... 我正在做……时，发现一张旧照片/一张卡片/一本日记…… The lovely memory came flooding back. 美好的回忆涌上心头。 ... showed me a photo on my birthday. ……在我生日那天给我看了一张照片。 How time flies！时光飞逝！ I couldn't wait to share them with you. 我迫不及待地想和你分享它们。 2．中间段常用句型： It was a special day... years ago. 那是……年前的一个特殊的日子。 I decided to surprise... 我决定给……一个惊喜。 I was about to throw everything away when my mother came in. 我正准备把所有东西都扔掉，这时妈妈进来了。 When I．.. , my eyes watered. 当我……的时候，我的眼睛湿润了。 3．结尾段常用句型： Love is indeed a magical ingredient. 爱确实是一种神奇的因素。 I hope I will make... for her. 我希望我能为她做…… Remember that doing... can help deepen the understanding of... 记住，做……有助于加深对……的理解。 [典题示例] 假定今天是2020年3月15日，星期日，天气晴朗。你去参加了朋友David的生日聚会，请你在日记中记录这件事。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．开头已给出，不计入总词数。 March 15，2022　Sunday Sunny Today is my best friend David's birthday，______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 第一步　学会审题谋篇 第二步　保基础分——会写基本句 1．放学之后，我带着礼物骑车到了大卫家。 After school，_____________________________________________． 2．大卫和他的父母热情地迎接了我。 David and his parents ______________________． 3．在聚会上，使我印象最深的是大卫幸福的家庭。 During the party，David's happy family _________________． 4．此外，轻柔的音乐和烛光营造了美好温馨的氛围。 Besides，the light music and candle light ________________________ __________． 5．因此，我能够像对待兄弟姐妹一样，向他的其他友好活跃的朋友们敞开心扉。 ___________，I was able to _________________________________ _____________________ like brothers and sisters. 第三步　创设亮点(包括词汇美和句式美) 6．用定语从句把句1和句2合成一个句子 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________． 7．用主语从句改写句3 ________________________________________________________． After school，I arrived at David's home by bike with a present，where David and his parents gave me a warm welcome During the party，what impressed me most was David's happy family 8．用定语从句把句4和句5合成一个句子 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________． Besides，the light music and candle light created a nice and warm atmosphere，as a result of which I was able to open my heart to his other friendly and active friends like brothers and sisters． 第四步　衔接成篇得满分 March 15，2022　Sunday Sunny Today is my best friend David's birthday，and I，together with his other friends，was invited to his birthday party held in his home. After school，I arrived at David's home by bike with a present，where David and his parents gave me a warm welcome.During the party，what impressed me most was David's happy family.Besides，the light music and candle light created a nice and warm atmosphere，as a result of which I was able to open my heart to his other friendly and active friends like brothers and sisters. It was a wonderful party and the unforgettable experience will be stored in my mind forever. 假定你是 Tony，有一件东西让你回忆起了家庭中发生的一件事。请你写一篇80词左右的文章，叙述这件事。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Every time I look at the watch, a lovely memory will come into my mind. Three years ago when I just attended junior school, I spent much time playing and was rather lazy in my study.One day, Father came back home and talked to me in a serious tone，“Tony, you are now a junior student. You should know how to manage your time.”And then he handed a nice watch to me. I took it over eagerly, falling in love with it at first sight. Father told me to value time and become an excellent student. I have been following Father's words and have benefited a lot from it. $$