Unit 1 课时5 写作-【宝典训练】2024-2025学年新教材七年级上册英语高效课堂(沪教版2024)

Unit 1 Friendship 课时5 5写作 ...... 例文呈现 英语课上,你的英语老师要你介绍一下你的好朋友,并谈一谈你对友谊的看法,请以“MyGood Friend”为题写一篇英语作文 写作要点:1.你朋友的基本信息; 2.你朋友的外貌; 3.你朋友的爱好以及梦想; 4.你朋友的个性,品质 5.你对友谊的看法。 写作要求:80词以上 7爹考范文 My Good Friend I have a special friend named Lucy. She is a warm and outgoing girl who is 14 years :oldnow. Lucy is tall and slender(苗条的);with long hair that alwavs seems to shine Her eyes are expressive and warm and her laugh is always full of joy Lucy has a hobby for reading and art. She spends much time in the library, her dream is to become an author and inspire (激 励) others through her words. Apart from writing, she also enjoys painting and often spends her free time creating beautiful artworks. Lucyhas many personalities, such as kindness(善良),generosity(慷慨),and resilience (韧性). She is always ready to lend a helping hand to those in need and is willing to help me with my English. And now my English has improved a lot. As for me. I believe it is a valuable relationship that enriches (丰富)our lives. A true friend is someone who supports us at any time,celebrates(庆祝)our successes,and comforts(安慰) :us during difficult times. I cherish our friendship and I am grateful to have Lucy as a friend. 【写作素材参考】 appearance外貌 helpful乐于助人的 good-looking好看的 honest 诚实的 medium height 中等身高 patient有耐心的 round/square face 圆/方脸 brave 勇敢的 straight/curly hair直发/卷发 smart聪明的 slim苗条的 warm-hearted执心的 dream梦;梦想 easy-going 随和的 friendship友谊 out-going外向的 hobby兴趣:爱好 hard-working 勤奋的 future未来 lovely可爱的 45 金典训练 英语·七年级·上册(牛津版) humorous 幽默的 with one's help在某人的帮助下 careful细心的 in one'sspare time在某人的空闲时间 active活跃的 (be) good at 擅长 confident 自信的 (be) interested in对......感兴趣 caring关心他人的 (be)readyto乐于/愿意做...... friendly友好的 make friends with与......交朋友 attractive吸引人、迷人的 give a hand to sb. 帮助某人 polite有礼貌的 share sth.with sb. 与......分享 funny有趣的 look forward to盼望;期待 supportive 支持的; 课时过关 学校广播站英语栏目正在征稿,题目是“MyBestFriend”,请你结合所学的介绍朋友的方法,写一 篇广播稿,80词以上,包含以下要点: 1.你朋友的年龄、外貌等基本信息 2.你朋友的爱好及梦想: 3.你朋友的性格和品质 4.简要谈一下你对交朋友的看法。 (一)造句训练 1.我最的好朋友叫James,他13岁,来自阳光中学 2.James有着迷人的外貌,英俊的脸庞,黑黑的头发 3.James有很多的爱好,比如打篮球、听音乐、弹吉他。 4.他最喜爱的学科是历史和数学(mathematics),他也对中国古代历史很感兴趣 5.下课后,我们经常在一起研究数学难题,在他的帮助下,我的数学取得许多进步。 6. James的梦想是成为一名历史学家(historian),他有着坚韧不拔的毅力(indomitableperseverance)和 一颗善良的心。 7.经过他的努力(efforts),我相信他的梦想一定会实现。 8.在我看来,真正的友谊是忠诚、理解和信任。尤其是在你遇到麻烦时朋友能够伸出援助之手。 46 Unit 1 Friendship (二)连句成文 My Best Friend 评分标准 内容 结构 语法与词汇 表达与书写 创新性 完整性:作文内容 篇章结构:作文是 语法准确性:作文 是否涵盖了题目要 否具有明确的开 中是否出现严重的 求的所有要点,是 语法错误,如主谓 头、主体和结尾,各 表达清晰度:句子 否完整表达了作者 部分之间是否过渡 不一致、时态错 是否简洁明了,易 的观点或故事 误等。 观点新颖性:作文中 自然。 于理解。 情节。 是否提出了新颖独 段落划分:段落划 词汇丰富性:是否 连贯性:句子之间 深度与广度:作文 特的观点或看法。 分是否合理,每个 使用了丰富多样的 段落之间是否衔接 内容是否具有深度 表达创新性:是否使 段落是否围绕一个 词汇,包括同义词。 紧密,是否使用了 和广度,能否展开 用了创新性的表达 中心意思展开。 反义词等,以及准 适当的连接词和过 深入的讨论或描绘 渡句。 方式或修辞手法,使 句子结构:句子结 确的短语和成语。 生动的场景 作文更具吸引力。 构是否多样化,是 拼写与标点:拼写 书写工整,段落 逻辑性:内容是否 否使用了适当的从 是否正确,标点符 分明。 条理清晰,各段落 句和复合句。 号使用是否规范。 之间是否有明确的 逻辑关系。《高效爆堂宝典训练》·英语·七年级上册（牛津版）】 课时2阅读 课时5写作 课时精讲 课时过关 1.My mother is a kind and patient woman.She is good at eooking. (-)1.My best friend is James.He is thirteen years old and from 2.When I get back home.I will call you.3.good Sunshine Middle School. 4.With the help of my teacher.my English has improved a lot. 2.James has an attractive appearance.with an handsome face 5.I not only finished my homework,but also reviewed the notes for and dark hair. all the exams. 3.James has a lot of hobbies,such as playing basketball, 课堂0分钟 listening to music and playing the guitar. 一、I.be good at/do well in2.turn to sh.for help 4.His favourite subjeets are history and mathematies,and he 3.happen to sb.4.share sth.with sb. is also very interested in ancient Chinese history. 5.like/love/enjoy doing sth.6.after school 5.After class,we often study mathematical problems together. 7.It's fun to sth./It is interesting to do sth. With his help.I have made a lot of progress in mathematies. 8.with the help of.../with one's help 6.James's dream is to become a historian.he has the 9.have the courage to sth.10.be willing to do sth. indomitable perseverance and a kind heart. 11.thanks to/because of 12.count on each other 7.Through his efforts,I believe that his dream will come true. 13.not only...but also... 14.get along with... 8.In my opinion,true friendship is honesty,understanding and 15.take care of trust.Especially when you're in trouble.a friend can lend 二、l.helpful 2.at 3.interesting you a helping hand. 4.happiness 5.the 6.more confident 】 My Best Friend 7.to help 8.before 9.really 10.honesty My best friend is James.He is thirteen years old and from 三1-5 DCBCA Sunshine Middle School.James has an attractive appearance.with a 课时3语法 handsome face and dark hair. 课时精讲 James has a lot of hobbies that reflect his diverse interests.He loves playing basketball and enjoys listening to musie during his free 1.When 2.Where 3.How time.Additionally,he often practise playing the guitar at the 4.Where 5.Who weekends. 课凳0分钟 hen it comes to academics(学术)，Jes'favourite subjects 1.Where 2.How often 3.Why are history and mathematics.He has a great interest in ancient 4.Which 5.Whose 6.How old Chinese history,and often discusses funny stories and events with 7.When 8.How many 9.Who me.After class.we often study mathematical problems together. 10.What With his help.I have made a lot of progress in mathematies. 二、l.interest 2.lines 3.got James's dream is to become a historian,he has the indomitable 4.to paint 5.saying 6.him perseverance and a kind heart that is always ready to lend a helping 7.the 8.and 9.With hand.Through his efforts.I believe that his dream will come true. 10.When As for me.true friendship is honesty,understanding and trust. 1.What do you usually like to do after school? Especially when you're in trouble.a friend can lend you a helping 2.When is your birthday? hand. 3.Where is your hometown?How often do you go back to your Unit 2 School life hometown? 课时1词汇 4.What is your favourite hobby?Which subject do you like best? 5.What is your dream job? 课时精讲 课时4听说 1.geographer 2.(1)acts (2)activities 一、略 3.(1)Pructice (2)pructises (3)speaking 二，I,Three,/He has three e-friends. 4.solution 5.(1)developed (2)developing 2.Franee./He is from France. 6.skilled 7.greeted 8.energetie 9.Luckily 10.succeeded 3.Sunny./It's sunny in Beijing. 11.(1)take part in/join in/attend (2)join 4.By train./She went there by train. 漂堂0分钟 5.She has long hair and big eyes./Sara has long hair and big 1.active 2.solution eyes. 3.developed/developing 4.skilled/skillful 6.To be a doctor./She wants to be a doctor. 5.greet 6.energetie 7.lueky 7.Twelve./Twelve years old. 8.celebration 9.succeed 10.mock 8.Yes.he is./Yes.his father is. 二，l.speaking2.solution3.development 9.By bus./He usually goes to school by bus. 4.realized 5.Unluckily 6.twice 7.celebration 10.Flying kites. 8.successfully 9.closing 10.important 三、 Tina is 13 years old.She has short black hair and brown 1.I am a student from Shenzhen Middle School.Now let me eyes.She is in Grade 7.Her favourite subject is Art and her introduce my school life to you. dream is to be an art teacher.She has a younger brother.She 2.I get up at 6:30 a.m.and then quickly brush my teeth and often plays table tennis with him.She also likes going to the have breakfast. beach with her friends. 1.How old is your brother? 3.My house is a little far away from the school,so I take a bus to school. 2.Do you live far away from your school?/Is your home far 4.We have 7 classes a day.My favourite subjeets are English away from the school? and maths. 课堂1O分钟：1-5 CAFBE 5.I have lunch at school and we have a one-hour lunch break.