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Module 9 Unit 3
Writing
教学目标
1.语言知识目标:
能够准确地识认和读出某地的人口数,并且能够在写作中将其准确地表述出来;
能够熟练运用increase, cause, solve, problem, pollution, huge, heavy, crowded等词汇得体地描述人口增长带来的问题及解决方案;
能够正确并合理地使用连接词so, because, but, and表述逻辑关系。
2.语言技能目标:
能够描述人口与环境类的问题,并提出解决方案。
3. 情感目标:
了解目前世界面临的人口问题,结合自己所在的城市及周边地区的实际情况思考人口过剩、噪音、污染等问题及产生的后果,从而增强学生的全球意识和控制人口数量、保护环境的意识。
1. What is the population of your city? Is it large or small?
2. What are the problems caused by the population increase?
3. Do you have any good suggestions to solve these problems?
Introduction
Body
Conclusion
Problems&Reasons
Solution
The population of Dalian
In the 19th century, Dalian was just a small _________ with a _________ population.
but
Now, Dalian is a ______city. It has a __________ of about 6.98 million.
village
small
huge
population
Problems Details Conjunction words
more cars
traffic becomes heavier
so
because
Traffic
Problems Details Conjunction words
build more factories
develop the economy(经济)
more pollution
less fresh air and clean water
in order to
so
what's worse
Environment
Problems Details Conjunction words
need more places to live
build more houses
crowded ; expensive
so
because
and
Housing
Evaluation Standard (评价标准) 很好 一般 勉强
Content (内容)------------ Complete(完整)
(是否涵盖所有内容要点,是否中心突出,主次分明) 5 3-4 1-2
Language(语言)---------Accurate(准确); Appropriate(得体)
(语言表达是否得体,用词是否贴切,是否有语法结构或词汇方面的错误) 5 3-4 1-2
Structure (结构)---------Logical(有逻辑性的)
(组织结构是否清晰,是否有效使用语法间的连接成分,全文结构是否紧凑) 5 3-4 1-2
Context (上下文)--------- Coherent (连贯)
(是否有效使用了语句之间的连接成分,上下文是否连贯,通顺) 5 3-4 1-2
The population of Dalian
Problems and reasaons
Solution
traffic
envrionment
housing
The government
a huge city
6,980,000
We
Protect the environment!
Start from me!
Thank you!
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