Module 9 Unit 3Language in Use（课件）-2024-2025学年外研版英语八年级上册

Watch Me! Module 9 Population Unit 3 Language in Use Population Beijing China world ..a huge city with.. The population of ...is that is... one fifth of birth moving Why people moved to cities? To find jobs Go to see the doctor Make more money Get better chance/ opportunity Get better education To start a new life To realize dream Problems too much traffic noise pollution/ too much noise water pollution land pollution too much rubbish illness not enough land to grow crops not enough food too many people in schools / hospitals/flats not safe Population Increase less enough space /crowded air pollution Things You May Need in Writing It is clear that it needs more schools, hospitals, buses… It needs fresh air, clean water, better public services... It also needs more police to protect its people Beijing is a huge city with a large population. China has a population of 1.37 billion. That's almost one fifth of the world's population, that is 7 billion. 近十年左右，大连的人口不断增长，市区变得越来越拥挤，路上的车也越来越多，还经常出现雾霾天气，其他很多问题也是层出不穷，比如，住房，上学， 健康，安全等等。写一篇不少于60词的作文，来说明大连人口增长这一现象，以及由人口增长引发的各种 问题，并给出相关、合理的解决方案。 必须包含以下三个方面： 1. What causes population increase? 2. What problems does the population cause? 3. How to solve the problems? Writing Task 1.population increase &its causes 2.problems caused by growing population 3.solutions Framework Arnwick was a small city with 20,000 people in the past. But now it has a population of over a million. People keep moving to the city for better jobs, schools, or new lives. The growing population caused many problems. Firstly, the city became too crowded. And there's too much traffic on the road. Secondly, more people means more rubbish. The rubbish can cause water and land pollution. So it's not easy for people to keep healthy. And for students in Parkville, their local school closed down. So they have to travel a long way by bus to go to school in Arnwick. In order to make people healthier and live more peacefully. There should be more schools, buses and hospitals. And we need fresh air, clean water and better public service. What's more, we also need more police to protect its people. 过渡句 First of all/ What’s more/ As a result Sample Writing 连接词 Evaluation Criterion for Content & Layout Scores（共 15分） 1. 符合结构：population increase&its cause--problems--solutions 符合 2分 2. 问题说明真实、具体、有层次。（如由problem 1 引发了 problem 2，而problem2又引发了多种结果） 1. 真实 1分 2. 具体、有层次 2分 3. 解决方案与上文提到的问题相对应，并合理可行 符合 2分 4. 运用了恰当的连接词和过渡句使文章内容浑然一体，自然流畅 1. 过渡句 2分 2. 使用4个以上连接词 2分 3. 连接词使用正确、恰当 2分 5.字数不少于60 符合 2分 Turn writings into acts! Love life, love the world! Bye ^ ^ $$