读后续写--圣诞惊喜：红裙背后的爱与温情 讲义-湖南省长郡中学2024-2025学年高二上学期第一次月考英语试题

读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The first time we set eyes on the beautiful dress “Big Red”, Father, Mother and I were walking slowly through the freshly fallen snow on our way to Hubble's Hardware store on Main Street.  The colorfully decorated window display held the best toys ever and some other things. And they were all placed pleasantly beneath the breathtaking dress of Big Red. Mother's eyes were glued to the massive flame of red satin（绸缎）, dotted with twinkling stars. “My goodness,” she managed to say in dreamlike wonder. “Would you just look at that dress!” Then, totally out of character, Mother unexpectedly danced on the slippery sidewalk. Beneath the heavy, grey wool coat that she had worn every winter for as long as I could remember, Mother lost her balance and fell clumsily. Father quickly caught her. Her cheeks redder than usual, Mother blamed dad for laughing. “Oh, stop that!” she ordered, as my father swept the snow from her coat. “What a silly dress to be displayed there in the window of Eaton's!” she shook her head in disbelief. “Who on earth would want such a brightly-colored dress? It is too expensive.” As we continued to walk down the street, Mother turned back for one more look. “My goodness! You'd think they'd display something that a person could use!” Christmas was around the corner and the red dress was soon forgotten. Mother was not the one to wish for, or spend money on things that were not practical. “There are things we need more than this,” she'd always say, or,“There are things we need more than that.” Father, on the other hand, liked to buy things whenever the budget allowed. Of course, he'd get a scolding for his occasional spending like this, but it was all done with the best intention. On our last trip to town before Christmas, we were driving up Main Street when Mother suddenly exclaimed in surprise,“Would you just look at that!” She pointed excitedly as Dad drove past Eaton's.“That big red dress is gone,” she said in disbelief.“It's actually gone.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。      Dad looked quickly and smiled,“Yes, it is not there!”____________________________________________________________________________     I'll never forget that Christmas morning when Father handed Mother a box. ____________________________________________________________________________ 文本主旨 本文描述了作者一家在雪中漫步时，在商店橱窗外，作者的母亲看到了一条漂亮的大红裙子，被深深吸引住了，但她在和家人谈论时故作不喜欢的样子。圣诞节前，作者一家再次进城，作者的母亲发现橱窗里的大红裙子不见了，感到难以置信。 思路点拨       阅读材料交代了故事主人公的特征。根据阅读材料第二段中的 "Mother's eyes were glued to..." 以及第三段中表惊叹的 "Wow" "in dreamlike wonder" 可知，母亲很喜欢这条大红裙子，但下文的 "totally out of character, Mother unexpectedly danced on the slippery sidewalk" 又表明母亲故作轻松地转移大家的注意力；根据阅读材料第五段可知，作者的母亲故作不喜欢是因为觉得这条裙子又贵又不实用。根据阅读材料第六段中的 "liked to buy things whenever the budget allowed" "with the best intention" 可知，作者的父亲喜欢在预算允许的时候出于好意买东西。      由续写第一段首句内容"爸爸快速地看了看并微笑着说：‘是的，它不在那里!’"和续写第二段首句中父亲送母亲礼物，结合父亲的人物特征不难推知，父亲买下了这条裙子，但是圣诞节未到，还不能告诉母亲。结合父母的人物特征及阅读材料最后一段可知，续写第一段可描写父亲诡秘的神情和动作以及母亲内心对于大红裙子不见了的惊讶与失望。      由续写第二段首句内容"我永远不会忘记那个新年的早晨，父亲递给母亲一个盒子"可知，续写第二段的主要内容是父亲送母亲大红裙子。根据阅读材料中的"with the best intention"可知，本段可描写作者的父亲送出大红裙子时对母亲的爱意与期待；根据阅读材料中母亲对大红裙子的喜爱及看到大红裙子不见的惊讶与失望可知，本段也应描写母亲收到礼物时的惊讶和激动之情。要注重通过人物的语言、动作等细节描写来丰富人物形象，表达人物的心理感受。 五要素分析 1. 角色（Character） · 母亲：是一个务实、节俭的人，对不实用的东西不太关注，起初对商店橱窗里昂贵又艳丽的红裙子评价不高，但内心其实对它有一定的好奇和喜爱。从她看到裙子消失后的惊讶以及最终收到裙子时的反应，可以看出她性格中朴实又有温情的一面。 · 父亲：与母亲相反，在预算允许的情况下喜欢购物，比较随性，充满爱意。他买下红裙子作为圣诞礼物送给母亲，展现出他浪漫、体贴的一面，尽管会因此受到母亲的责备，但依然坚持给母亲惊喜。 · “我”：故事的叙述者，通过 “我” 的视角观察父母的行为和情感变化，见证了整个事件的发展。 2. 背景（Setting） · 时间：圣诞节前夕，这个特殊的时间节点为故事营造了温馨、欢乐的氛围，同时也为父亲送裙子作为圣诞礼物这一情节做铺垫。 · 地点：小镇的主街，尤其是从 Hubble's Hardware store 到 Eaton's 的路上。街道上有积雪，商店的橱窗装饰精美，这些场景描写为故事增添了浓厚的节日气息和浪漫色彩。 3. 冲突（Conflict） · 观念冲突：母亲的节俭务实与父亲的随性消费观念形成冲突。母亲认为应该把钱花在更实用的东西上，而父亲则愿意在喜欢的东西上花钱，这种冲突贯穿故事，为情节发展增加了张力。 · 心理冲突：母亲虽然一开始觉得红裙子不实用，但裙子的美丽还是吸引了她，当裙子消失时她表现出的好奇和失落，体现了她内心对裙子喜爱与节俭观念之间的矛盾心理。 4. 情节（Plot） · 起始：一家人在去商店的路上看到商店橱窗里漂亮的红裙子，母亲先是被吸引，后又觉得裙子不实用且昂贵，对其进行了一番评价，为故事展开做铺垫。 · 发展：圣诞节临近，在一次去镇上的途中，母亲发现红裙子不见了，十分惊讶，和父亲有了关于裙子消失的对话，引起读者好奇心，推动情节发展。 · 高潮：圣诞节早晨，父亲送给母亲一个盒子，里面装着红裙子，将故事推向高潮，满足了读者的期待，也展现了家庭中的温馨与爱。 · 结局：母亲收到裙子后又惊又喜，责骂中带着掩饰不住的兴奋，穿上裙子宛如公主，为故事画上了一个温暖的句号，突出了家庭的爱和圣诞节的欢乐氛围。 5. 主题（Theme） · 爱与惊喜：父亲不顾母亲的节俭观念，买下红裙子作为圣诞礼物送给母亲，体现了夫妻之间深深的爱意，以及在平凡生活中创造惊喜的重要性。这种爱和惊喜让家庭充满温暖，是故事的核心主题。 · 物质与情感的平衡：母亲的务实和父亲的浪漫消费形成对比，通过红裙子这一礼物，展示了在家庭生活中，物质需求和情感表达之间需要找到一种平衡，即使节俭，也不能缺少情感的滋润。 续写线索 母亲失望 → 父亲故作神秘 → 父亲送母亲裙子 → 母亲感动 → 父亲表达爱意 参考范文 Dad looked quickly and smiled,“Yes, it is not there!”“But who would like to buy that silly dress, which is neither practical nor cheap?”Mom marveled(v.感到惊奇), but meanwhile both Father and I could discern(vt.辨别;识别;) an inexplicable but conspicuous disappointment crept over her face (她的脸上流露出一种令人费解但显而易见的失望).“Some romantic, reserved loving man might buy that for his wife.”Father winked slyly(狡黠地眨眼) at Mom and me from the rear mirror as if he were the secretive devoting husband he depicted. I'll never forget that Christmas morning when Father handed Mother a box. “Ta da, the most silly gift for my princess!”Father exclaimed, eyeing at his wife in a loving and expectant way(用带着爱意和期待的眼神看着他的妻子). Mother, too stunned to speak(惊愕地说不出话来), received the box with her trembling hands. Her palms sweating, throat tightening(掌心冒汗，喉咙发紧), Mother's hand slided through the red satin and lingered at the twinkling stars.“Oh, Tom, you shouldn't have been that extravagant (adj.奢侈的).”“No, baby, you deserve the highest honor and my passionate love on this Special Christmas.” 高分句型 But who would like to buy that silly dress, which is neither practical nor cheap? 但是谁愿意买那件既不实用也不便宜的愚蠢的裙子呢？ 分析：由关系词 which 引导的非限制性定语从句的熟练运用。 Father winked slyly at mom and me from the rear mirror as if he were the secretive devoting husband he depicted. 父亲从后视镜里狡黠地向我和妈妈眨了眨眼睛，仿佛他就是他所描绘的那个神秘而忠诚的丈夫。 分析：as if 引导虚拟条件句的熟练运用。 “Ta da, the most silly gift for my princess!” Father exclaimed, eyeing at his wife in a loving and expectant way. “Ta da, 送给我公主的最愚蠢的礼物！”父亲喊道，充满爱意和期待地看着妻子。 分析：非谓语动词作状语使描写更生动。 Her palms sweating, throat tightening, mothers hand slided through the red satin and lingered at the twinkling stars. 母亲的手掌出汗，喉咙紧绷，她的手滑过红色的缎子，在闪烁的星星旁徘徊。 分析：这句话使用了独立主格结构。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$