读后续写--大烟山惊魂：暴雨中的希望之光 讲义-湖南省湖南师大附中2022-2023学年高二下学期中英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Nature, while beautiful, could also be unpredictable and merciless. But most importantly we bear in mind that in the darkest times, there’s always a light at the end of the tunnel, just like Mrs. Evans'cabin light. One bright summer day, my friend Peter and I decided to venture into the unexplored trails of the Great Smoky Mountains. Blessed with rich biodiversity and fascinating landscapes, the national park seemed a perfect getaway. Little did we know that our casual hike would soon turn into an unexpected personal incident, forever engraved in our memories. We set off early in the morning, equipped with our backpacks and a map that was supposed to guide us through the winding trails. The sun was up, casting long shadows on the forest floor as we set off on our journey. We trekked (艰难行走), laughed, and marveled at the beauty of nature around us. As we trekked through the dense forests, taking in the natural wonders around us, we couldn’t help but feel a sense of adventure coursing through our veins. The trail was rugged and uneven, but we persevered through the challenging landscape. Midway through our expedition, we stumbled upon a breathtaking waterfall, its glistening waters cascading down the rocks in a quiet and peaceful melody. We sat down by the water's edge, taking a moment to get lost in the beauty of nature. The cool mist from the waterfall enveloped us, and we felt refreshed and energetic. As the day wore on, we ventured deeper into the wilderness, eager to explore every corner of this natural paradise. We were so absorbed in the beauty of nature that just didn't notice our way and it seemed that we could not find the way back to the familiar part of the forest. Panicking, we scrambled to find our way back but the dense vegetation and winding trails only served to confuse us further. We tried to remember any possible signs that might lead us back, No sooner had we celebrated our return to the clear trails than something worse happened. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。      Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn_______________________________________________________________________      Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flickered in the distance ________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 在美丽却又变幻莫测的大烟山，“我” 和彼得在夏日开启了探险之旅。我们带着背包和地图出发，沿途欣赏到了迷人的风景，如森林中的光影、壮观的瀑布等。在享受自然之美后，我们深入荒野却迷失了方向，本以为重回清晰的小路就没事了，然而情况变得更糟。 伏笔及续写回应 1. 伏笔：提到自然美丽却不可预测，暗示后面可能出现危险。回应：续写中天气突变，出现暴雨狂风等恶劣情况。 2. 伏笔：提到有希望之光，像埃文斯太太小屋的灯光。回应：续写中在绝望时看到远处闪烁的灯光，原来是小屋的灯光带来了希望。 续写要点 · 第一段： 1. 情感线：惊恐、无助，突如其来的恶劣天气让我们陷入极度的恐惧和慌乱。 1. 故事线：天气骤变，暴雨狂风让我们迷失方向且处境艰难。 · 第二段： · 情感线：从绝望到重燃希望，看到灯光后的惊喜和激动。 · 故事线：发现远处灯光，朝着灯光前进，最终到达小屋获得救助。 主旨升华句 1. Hope is the lighthouse that guides us through the stormy sea of life.（希望是指引我们穿越人生惊涛骇浪的灯塔。） 2. In the harshest of nature's trials, a glimmer of hope can be our salvation.（在大自然最严酷的考验中，一线希望能成为我们的救赎。） 3. Even in the darkest tempest, the light of hope never truly fades.（即使在最黑暗的暴风雨中，希望之光也永不真正消逝。） 4. When nature shows its wrath, hope is the warm fire that keeps our spirits alive.（当大自然展现其愤怒时，希望是让我们精神振奋的温暖之火。） 5. The most violent storms of life can't extinguish the light of hope within us.（人生中最猛烈的风暴也无法熄灭我们内心的希望之光。） 写作示范 示范一 Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn. Thunder rumbled ominously, and lightning slashed across the sky. The rain pelted down with such force that it felt like needles on our skin. We slipped and fell on the now - muddy path, our hearts pounding with fear. The beautiful forest had transformed into a terrifying nightmare. We huddled together, trying to shield ourselves from the elements, our minds racing with thoughts of never getting out. Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flickered in the distance. It was like a ray of sunshine breaking through the darkest clouds. With newfound energy, we pushed forward, ignoring the pain and exhaustion. As we approached the light, we saw it was an old cabin. The door opened, and an elderly man welcomed us in. We knew then that hope always shines through, no matter how bad the situation. 示范二 Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn. A fierce wind gusted, carrying with it a wall of rain. The temperature dropped rapidly, and we were shivering violently. The path became a quagmire, and the trees around us seemed to close in, adding to our sense of doom. We called out for help, but our voices were swallowed by the howling wind. We were on the verge of despair, thinking this might be the end. Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flickered in the distance. It was a tiny speck at first, but it grew stronger as we focused on it. We struggled towards it, our clothes torn and bodies bruised. When we reached the light, we found a small shelter with a kind - looking woman inside. She offered us warmth and comfort. This experience taught us that hope can be found even in the most desolate of times. 参考范文 Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn. Dark clouds shrouded the sky, and a heavy downpour ensued. The comforting forest sounds quickly turned into a terrifying symphony of thunder and wind. The trail that was once so clear became a muddy mess, making it impossible to continue. We tried to consult our map, but it was too late; we got lost in the wildness. Hours passed, and our attempts to find the trail proved to be in vain. With the cold creeping in, despair started to set in. Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flickered in the distance.  Curiosity overpowered our fear, and we decided to follow it. As we drew closer, we saw a small log cabin, lights shining from its windows. Knocking on the door, an elderly woman, Mrs. Evans, welcomed us with a warm smile. She was a retired ranger who had chosen to live her twilight years in the heart of the mountains. She offered us shelter for the night, and the next morning, guided us back to the main trail. This incident strengthened our friendship and taught us the value of resilience and hope. The experience was unexpected , terrifying, but enlightening all the same. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$