13.必修第二册Unit 3 Festivals and customs(推广中国传统节日)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(译林版2020)

Unit 3 Festivals and customs 单元写作深度指导 推广中国传统节日 1.(教材原句)According to tradition, we should celebrate the festival by going mountain climbing, but how many people today still observe this tradition? 依照传统,我们应该爬山来庆祝这个节日,但是如今还有多少人仍然遵循这个传统呢? (应用文之介绍活动)When we take part in the parade to observe the National Day, we must observe the traffic rules.If we observe someone run the red light, we should stop him.当我们参加游行来庆祝国庆节的时候,我们必须遵守交通规则。如果我们看到有人闯红灯,我们应该阻止他。 【写作借鉴】 (1)observe sb. do sth.观察/看到某人做某事(全过程) observe sb. doing sth. 观察/看到某人正在做某事 observe the traffic rules　遵守交通规则 observe that... 发现…… (2)observer n.观察者;观察员 (3)observation n.观察;观测;监视 ▲(应用文之介绍春节)我正写信告诉你我们是怎样庆祝春节的。 I’m writing to tell you how we observe the Spring Festival.  2.(教材原句) The Dragon Boat Festival,for example,is celebrated in honour of Qu Yuan. 例如,庆祝端午节是为了纪念屈原。 【写作借鉴】 (1)in honour of　　　为了纪念,为了庆祝 in one’s honour 为了纪念某人 have the honour of doing/to do sth. 有幸做某事 It is sb.’s/an honour to do sth.做某事是某人的荣幸/一件荣幸的事 (2)honoured adj.受尊敬的,感到荣幸的 be/feel honoured to do sth.很荣幸做某事 be honoured with...　被授予…… be honoured as... 被授予……的称号 3.(教材原句)Finally, traditional festivals are a source of national pride and help shape our national identity. 最后,传统节日是民族自豪感的源泉,有助于形成我们的民族认同。 (应用文之演讲稿)Our strong sense of national identity has been shaped by our history. 我们强烈的民族认同感是由我们的历史塑造的。 【写作借鉴】 (1)identity card　　　身份证 a sense of identity 认同感 (2)identification n.辨认,识别 (3)identify v.识别,认出 identify sb./sth.as 认出某人/物是…… 4.(教材原句)It is the duty of every one of us to protect them for generations to come. 保护它们让它们传承下来是我们每一个人的责任。 (应用文之回复咨询)As your penfriend, I think it is my duty to offer my help whenever you meet with difficulties while learning Chinese.作为你的笔友, 我认为在你学中文遇到困难时, 为你提供帮助是我的责任。 【写作借鉴】 on duty 　值班,上班 off duty 下班 a sense of duty 责任感 It’s one’s duty to do sth. 做某事是某人的职责 5.(教材原句)The Double Ninth Festival(the Chongyang Festival),which has a history of over 2,000 years, falls on the ninth day of the ninth month in the Chinese lunar calendar.九月九(重阳节)有2 000多年的历史,是在中国农历九月的第九天。 【写作借鉴】 fall behind　　　　　落后 fall down 跌倒; 倒塌; 落下 fall off (从……)落下 fall in love with 喜欢, 爱上 ▲我们在功课上可能会落后于他人, 这让我们很有压力。 We may fall behind others in our lessons, which makes us stressed.  6.(教材原句) It is the duty of every one of us to protect them for generations to come. 我们每个人都有责任为我们的后代保护它们。 (应用文之传统文化)My generation have grown up without the experience of a world war. 我这一代人在成长过程中没有经历过世界大战。 【写作借鉴】 from generation to generation 世世代代,代代相传 generation gap 代沟 build up/lead/improve a generation 培养/引导/提高一代人 1.题型解读 　　介绍中国的传统节日,属于“人与社会”主题语境中“不同民族文化习俗与传统节日”的范畴。主要从传统节日的名称、庆祝时间、节日由来、风俗习惯或庆祝活动、节日的重要性及其意义等方面来写。 2.突破策略 ①首先审题,介绍传统节日的相关信息。 ②选用正确的人称和时态,主要使用第一人称和一般现在时来写。然后写出单个句子,再使用正确的连词,连句成段。 ③文章可以分为三段: 【语料积累】 1.教材词汇 (1)promote　　　vt.促进,推动;促销;提升,晋升 (2)lunar adj.月亮的,月球的 (3)observe vt.遵守;注意到;观察;庆祝 (4)generation n.一代人;代,一代;产生 (5)source n.来源;起源;源头 (6)identity n.特性;身份 (7)duty n.责任,义务;上班,值班;职责;税 (8)precious adj.宝贵的,珍贵的;珍奇的,珍稀的 2.常用词块 (1)节日介绍 ①date back to/date from　追溯到 ②originate from/in 起源于 ③be popular with 受……的欢迎 ④be rooted in 根植于 (2)措施 ①take measures 采取措施 ②call on sb.to do sth. 号召某人做某事 ③raise the awareness of 提高……的意识 ④educate sb.to do sth. 教育某人做某事 (3)意义 ①hold on to traditional festivals 保留传统节日 ②promote the development of traditional festivals 促进传统节日的发展 ③inherit cultural heritages 继承文化遗产 ④fall on 适逢;正当 ⑤in honor of 为向……表示敬意 3.话题句式 (1)段首句 ①The Spring Festival, also known as the Chinese New Year, is a very important festival in China. 春节,也被称为中国新年,在中国是一个非常重要的节日。 ②As is well known to us all, the Spring Festival/the Mid-Autumn Festival is a festival for reunion. 众所周知,春节/中秋节是一个团圆的节日。 (2)主体段落句 ①It’s obvious that there are many ways to promote the development of traditional festivals. 很明显,有很多方式可以促进传统节日的发展。 ②It is surely a good way to promote the development of traditional festivals through the media. 通过媒体促进传统节日的发展无疑是个好办法。 ③It is important for schools to teach students the traditional culture. 对学校来说,教授学生传统文化是很重要的。 (3)段尾句 ①It’s our duty to promote the development of traditional culture. 促进传统文化的发展是我们的责任。 ②Only in this way can we promote the development of traditional festivals. 只有这样,我们才能促进传统节日的发展。 假如你是李华,你校校刊Sunflower本期征文的话题是 “How to promote our traditional festivals”,请你据此写一篇文章向校刊投稿,谈谈怎样才能号召人们传承中国传统节日和风俗,使中国传统文化发扬光大。 注意:写作词数应为80个左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 Step 1:读题布局 Step 2:词句激活 1.西方节日正变得越来越流行。 The western festivals are becoming more and more popular.  2.我们的传统节日正被忽视。 Our traditional festivals are being ignored.  3.我们应该号召政府把更多的传统节日列为法定节日。 We should call on our government to list more traditional festivals as national festivals.  4.(一句多译) 这个方法有助于促进传统节日的发展。 (1)This method is of help to promote the development of traditional festivals.  (2)This method is helpful to promote the development of traditional festivals.  Step 3:衔接成篇 How to promote our traditional festivals With the western festivals becoming more and more popular,our traditional festivals are being ignored.We should try our best to promote traditional festivals. There are many ways to promote traditional festivals.First of all, we should call on our government to list more traditional festivals as national festivals, which is of help to promote the development of traditional festivals.What’s more, it is important for schools to teach students the traditional culture.Only in this way can the younger generation have a better understanding of traditional festivals and customs. At last,if we work together,we will successfully inherit and promote our traditional festivals. 1．春节是我国重要的传统节日。请根据下列所给的提示内容，写一篇介绍春节的短文。 我国的春节是阴历的正月初一，一般在阳历的一月或者二月。 春节有很多习俗，比如放烟花，收红包，拜访亲戚朋友，等等。 春节是全家团圆的日子。 除夕晚上人们包水饺，看春晚。 世界各地的中国人也庆祝春节。 要求：1. 文章必须包括以上五条中的至少四条，可展开思路，适当发挥； 2. 词数80词左右。 提示词：中国阴历 Chinese lunar calendar；阳历 solar calendar ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．某英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点： 1.它是中国的传统节日之一； 2.家人团聚； 3.赏月、吃月饼； 4.还有旅游、访友等其他活动。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假定你是李华，你校英文报“英语园地”栏目拟刊登介绍中国节日风俗的短文。请写一篇短文介绍端午节向该栏目投稿。要点如下： 1.端午节的起源; 2.端午节的庆祝活动; 3.你的看法。 注意：1.词数80左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是李华，你校英语广播站正在举行主题为“我最喜欢的传统节日”征文活动，请根据以下要点写一篇 100 字左右的短文投稿。 1. 节日的名称； 2. 节日期间人们的主要活动。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．传统节日是人们文化生活中的重要组成部分，它们代表着不同历史时期的文化遗产和民族精神。这些节日的庆祝活动，不仅丰富了人们的业余生活，还加强了人与人之间的情感纽带。请你就此话题写一篇关于你最喜爱的节日，内容包括： 1.你最喜爱的节日简介; 2.过节的风俗习惯; 3.结合你的经历分享你的感受,    你的节日安排。 注意：1.写作词数应为80——100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假定你是李华，你校即将举办校园文化节。你准备参加“用英语讲好中国故事之中华传统节日”版块活动，你选择给校刊投稿介绍端午节。内容包括： 1.庆祝时间； 2.庆祝活动； 3.节日意义。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：粽子rice dumplings； zongzi ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 3 Festivals and customs 单元写作深度指导 推广中国传统节日 1.(教材原句)According to tradition, we should celebrate the festival by going mountain climbing, but how many people today still observe this tradition? 依照传统,我们应该爬山来庆祝这个节日,但是如今还有多少人仍然遵循这个传统呢? (应用文之介绍活动)When we take part in the parade to observe the National Day, we must observe the traffic rules.If we observe someone run the red light, we should stop him.当我们参加游行来庆祝国庆节的时候,我们必须遵守交通规则。如果我们看到有人闯红灯,我们应该阻止他。 【写作借鉴】 (1)observe sb. do sth.观察/看到某人做某事(全过程) observe sb. doing sth. 观察/看到某人正在做某事 observe the traffic rules　遵守交通规则 observe that... 发现…… (2)observer n.观察者;观察员 (3)observation n.观察;观测;监视 ▲(应用文之介绍春节)我正写信告诉你我们是怎样庆祝春节的。 I’m writing to tell you how we observe the Spring Festival.  2.(教材原句) The Dragon Boat Festival,for example,is celebrated in honour of Qu Yuan. 例如,庆祝端午节是为了纪念屈原。 【写作借鉴】 (1)in honour of　　　为了纪念,为了庆祝 in one’s honour 为了纪念某人 have the honour of doing/to do sth. 有幸做某事 It is sb.’s/an honour to do sth.做某事是某人的荣幸/一件荣幸的事 (2)honoured adj.受尊敬的,感到荣幸的 be/feel honoured to do sth.很荣幸做某事 be honoured with...　被授予…… be honoured as... 被授予……的称号 3.(教材原句)Finally, traditional festivals are a source of national pride and help shape our national identity. 最后,传统节日是民族自豪感的源泉,有助于形成我们的民族认同。 (应用文之演讲稿)Our strong sense of national identity has been shaped by our history. 我们强烈的民族认同感是由我们的历史塑造的。 【写作借鉴】 (1)identity card　　　身份证 a sense of identity 认同感 (2)identification n.辨认,识别 (3)identify v.识别,认出 identify sb./sth.as 认出某人/物是…… 4.(教材原句)It is the duty of every one of us to protect them for generations to come. 保护它们让它们传承下来是我们每一个人的责任。 (应用文之回复咨询)As your penfriend, I think it is my duty to offer my help whenever you meet with difficulties while learning Chinese.作为你的笔友, 我认为在你学中文遇到困难时, 为你提供帮助是我的责任。 【写作借鉴】 on duty 　值班,上班 off duty 下班 a sense of duty 责任感 It’s one’s duty to do sth. 做某事是某人的职责 5.(教材原句)The Double Ninth Festival(the Chongyang Festival),which has a history of over 2,000 years, falls on the ninth day of the ninth month in the Chinese lunar calendar.九月九(重阳节)有2 000多年的历史,是在中国农历九月的第九天。 【写作借鉴】 fall behind　　　　　落后 fall down 跌倒; 倒塌; 落下 fall off (从……)落下 fall in love with 喜欢, 爱上 ▲我们在功课上可能会落后于他人, 这让我们很有压力。 We may fall behind others in our lessons, which makes us stressed.  6.(教材原句) It is the duty of every one of us to protect them for generations to come. 我们每个人都有责任为我们的后代保护它们。 (应用文之传统文化)My generation have grown up without the experience of a world war. 我这一代人在成长过程中没有经历过世界大战。 【写作借鉴】 from generation to generation 世世代代,代代相传 generation gap 代沟 build up/lead/improve a generation 培养/引导/提高一代人 1.题型解读 　　介绍中国的传统节日,属于“人与社会”主题语境中“不同民族文化习俗与传统节日”的范畴。主要从传统节日的名称、庆祝时间、节日由来、风俗习惯或庆祝活动、节日的重要性及其意义等方面来写。 2.突破策略 ①首先审题,介绍传统节日的相关信息。 ②选用正确的人称和时态,主要使用第一人称和一般现在时来写。然后写出单个句子,再使用正确的连词,连句成段。 ③文章可以分为三段: 【语料积累】 1.教材词汇 (1)promote　　　vt.促进,推动;促销;提升,晋升 (2)lunar adj.月亮的,月球的 (3)observe vt.遵守;注意到;观察;庆祝 (4)generation n.一代人;代,一代;产生 (5)source n.来源;起源;源头 (6)identity n.特性;身份 (7)duty n.责任,义务;上班,值班;职责;税 (8)precious adj.宝贵的,珍贵的;珍奇的,珍稀的 2.常用词块 (1)节日介绍 ①date back to/date from　追溯到 ②originate from/in 起源于 ③be popular with 受……的欢迎 ④be rooted in 根植于 (2)措施 ①take measures 采取措施 ②call on sb.to do sth. 号召某人做某事 ③raise the awareness of 提高……的意识 ④educate sb.to do sth. 教育某人做某事 (3)意义 ①hold on to traditional festivals 保留传统节日 ②promote the development of traditional festivals 促进传统节日的发展 ③inherit cultural heritages 继承文化遗产 ④fall on 适逢;正当 ⑤in honor of 为向……表示敬意 3.话题句式 (1)段首句 ①The Spring Festival, also known as the Chinese New Year, is a very important festival in China. 春节,也被称为中国新年,在中国是一个非常重要的节日。 ②As is well known to us all, the Spring Festival/the Mid-Autumn Festival is a festival for reunion. 众所周知,春节/中秋节是一个团圆的节日。 (2)主体段落句 ①It’s obvious that there are many ways to promote the development of traditional festivals. 很明显,有很多方式可以促进传统节日的发展。 ②It is surely a good way to promote the development of traditional festivals through the media. 通过媒体促进传统节日的发展无疑是个好办法。 ③It is important for schools to teach students the traditional culture. 对学校来说,教授学生传统文化是很重要的。 (3)段尾句 ①It’s our duty to promote the development of traditional culture. 促进传统文化的发展是我们的责任。 ②Only in this way can we promote the development of traditional festivals. 只有这样,我们才能促进传统节日的发展。 假如你是李华,你校校刊Sunflower本期征文的话题是 “How to promote our traditional festivals”,请你据此写一篇文章向校刊投稿,谈谈怎样才能号召人们传承中国传统节日和风俗,使中国传统文化发扬光大。 注意:写作词数应为80个左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 Step 1:读题布局 Step 2:词句激活 1.西方节日正变得越来越流行。 The western festivals are becoming more and more popular.  2.我们的传统节日正被忽视。 Our traditional festivals are being ignored.  3.我们应该号召政府把更多的传统节日列为法定节日。 We should call on our government to list more traditional festivals as national festivals.  4.(一句多译) 这个方法有助于促进传统节日的发展。 (1)This method is of help to promote the development of traditional festivals.  (2)This method is helpful to promote the development of traditional festivals.  Step 3:衔接成篇 How to promote our traditional festivals With the western festivals becoming more and more popular,our traditional festivals are being ignored.We should try our best to promote traditional festivals. There are many ways to promote traditional festivals.First of all, we should call on our government to list more traditional festivals as national festivals, which is of help to promote the development of traditional festivals.What’s more, it is important for schools to teach students the traditional culture.Only in this way can the younger generation have a better understanding of traditional festivals and customs. At last,if we work together,we will successfully inherit and promote our traditional festivals. 1．春节是我国重要的传统节日。请根据下列所给的提示内容，写一篇介绍春节的短文。 我国的春节是阴历的正月初一，一般在阳历的一月或者二月。 春节有很多习俗，比如放烟花，收红包，拜访亲戚朋友，等等。 春节是全家团圆的日子。 除夕晚上人们包水饺，看春晚。 世界各地的中国人也庆祝春节。 要求：1. 文章必须包括以上五条中的至少四条，可展开思路，适当发挥； 2. 词数80词左右。 提示词：中国阴历 Chinese lunar calendar；阳历 solar calendar ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．某英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点： 1.它是中国的传统节日之一； 2.家人团聚； 3.赏月、吃月饼； 4.还有旅游、访友等其他活动。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假定你是李华，你校英文报“英语园地”栏目拟刊登介绍中国节日风俗的短文。请写一篇短文介绍端午节向该栏目投稿。要点如下： 1.端午节的起源; 2.端午节的庆祝活动; 3.你的看法。 注意：1.词数80左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是李华，你校英语广播站正在举行主题为“我最喜欢的传统节日”征文活动，请根据以下要点写一篇 100 字左右的短文投稿。 1. 节日的名称； 2. 节日期间人们的主要活动。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．传统节日是人们文化生活中的重要组成部分，它们代表着不同历史时期的文化遗产和民族精神。这些节日的庆祝活动，不仅丰富了人们的业余生活，还加强了人与人之间的情感纽带。请你就此话题写一篇关于你最喜爱的节日，内容包括： 1.你最喜爱的节日简介; 2.过节的风俗习惯; 3.结合你的经历分享你的感受,    你的节日安排。 注意：1.写作词数应为80——100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假定你是李华，你校即将举办校园文化节。你准备参加“用英语讲好中国故事之中华传统节日”版块活动，你选择给校刊投稿介绍端午节。内容包括： 1.庆祝时间； 2.庆祝活动； 3.节日意义。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：粽子rice dumplings； zongzi ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． Spring Festival Spring Festival is very important in China, which we celebrate in January and February. A few days before Spring Festival, we clean our homes and sweep all the bad luck away.There are many customs in the Spring Festival, such as setting off fireworks, receiving red envelopes, visiting relatives and friends, and so on.On New Year's Eve, people make dumplings and watch the Spring Festival Gala,having a big family dinner. When people meet, they usually say best wishes to each other. Chinese people all over the world also observe the Spring Festival. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生介绍中国的传统节日春节。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 重要的：important→essential 传统的：traditional→conventional 全世界：all over the world→worldwide 清洁：clean→tidy 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：here are many customs in the Spring Festival, such as setting off fireworks, receiving red envelopes, visiting relatives and friends, and so on. 拓展句：here are many customs in the Spring Festival, such as setting off fireworks, receiving red envelopes, which means luck money, visiting relatives and friends, and so on. [高分句型1] Spring Festival is very important in China, which we celebrate in January and February. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] When people meet, they usually say best wishes to each other. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 2．     The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15 th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time when we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as traveling and visiting our relatives or friends. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动，内容包括它是中国传统节日之一、家人团聚、赏月吃月饼及旅游、访友等其他活动。 【要点详解】1. 词汇积累： 传统的、惯例的：traditional→conventional 赏月：enjoy the moon→admire the moon 除了……以外：in addtion to→apart from 选择：choice→option 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句： With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. 拓展句： As the beautiful moon is up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. 【高分句型1】 Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for celebration.（运用了以连词no matter how引导的让步状语从句。） 【高分句型2】What we love most is the time when we enjoy the full moon together.（运用了以连接代词what引导的主语从句和关系副词when引导的定语从句。） 3．The Dragon Boat Festival, one of the Chinese traditional festivals, dates back to over 2,000 years. It is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar, and it will fall on June 9 next year. The festival is best-known for its dragon-boat races, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. Besides, people always cook and eat rice dumplings made of glutinous rice and wrapped by bamboo leaves to celebrate it. People celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival in honor of Qu Yuan, a great poet of ancient China. In my opinion, it is of great necessity to attach importance to our traditional festivals, for they’re part of our culture. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生写一篇短文介绍端午节向学校英文报“英语园地”栏目投稿。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 传统的：traditional→conventional 为纪念：in honor of→in memory of 重要性：importance→significance 尤其是：especially→particularly 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Besides, people always cook and eat rice dumplings made of glutinous rice and wrapped by bamboo leaves to celebrate it. 拓展句：Besides, people always cook and eat rice dumplings which are made of glutinous rice and wrapped by bamboo leaves to celebrate it. [高分句型1] The festival is best-known for its dragon-boat races, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. (运用了where引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] Besides, people always cook and eat rice dumplings made of glutinous rice and wrapped by bamboo leaves to celebrate it. (运用了过去分词作后置定语) 4．    My favorite festival is Mid-Autumn Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. All Chinese people usually celebrate it at home. It falls in September or October every year. On this day, people usually get together with their families and have a nice meal. The most popular food are mooncakes. After that, people always enjoy the moon while listening to the story about Chang’e. All of the children love this moment.   In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a special day for families to get together and share the happiness and love. Everyone always enjoys themselves on that day. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生以“我最喜欢的传统节日”写一篇短文投稿。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 重要的：important→vital 欣赏：enjoy→appreciate 总之：in short→in a word 过得愉快：enjoy oneself→have fun 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a special day for families to get together and share the happiness and love. 拓展句：In short, the Mid-Autumn Festival is a special day when families get together and share the happiness and love. 【高分句型1】My favorite festival is Mid-Autumn Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】After that, people always enjoy the moon while listening to the story about Chang’e.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略） 5．Spring Festival is also called Chinese New Year. It’s my favorite Chinese festival. The festival is always in February, so I have enough time to celebrate it. On this day, I will visit my relatives and play with my cousins. If I wish my elders congratulations or health, people always wish each other good luck. At noon, they will give me red envelopes. In the evening, my parents and grandparents usually make spring rolls. All my relatives will have a special dinner together at o’clock. At that time, almost every family would watch the festival together. People usually set off firecrackers at 12 o’clock. It’s very interesting for Chinese people to hear about the new year in the Spring Festival. I’m always happy with the bell. Many people think it’s a wonderful day. 【写作分析】这篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生介绍自己最喜欢的节日。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 庆祝：celebrate → observe 拜访：visit→ call on→ pay a visit to 祝彼此好运：wish each other good luck→ may each other be lucky 给：give → offer 红包：red envelopes → lucky money 吃团圆饭：have a special dinner together → unit at the table 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句1：Spring Festival is also called Chinese New Year. It’s my favorite Chinese festival. 拓展句1：Spring Festival, which is also called Chinese New Year, is my favorite Chinese festival. 【高分句型1】The festival is always in February, so I have enough time to celebrate it.（运用了so连接的并列句，表因果关系。） 【高分句型2】If I wish my elders congratulations or health, people always wish each other good luck. （运用了条件状语从句。） 【高分句型3】It’s very interesting for Chinese people to hear about the new year in the Spring Festival.（运用了it作形式主语，真正的主语为动词不定式短语这一结构。） 6．One possible version： Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. For thousands of years, the festival has been marked by eating rice dumplings and racing dragon boats. The rice dumpling is made of rice, meat and so on. You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings. Besides, the festival is best known for its dragon-boat races, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. Dragon Boat Festival is in memory of the death of the famous ancient poet Qu Yuan, who is a devoted government official and poet. Overall, the Dragon Boat Festival enjoys great popularity among people in China. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在即将举办校园文化节中，给校刊投稿介绍端午节，内容包括庆祝时间、庆祝活动以及节日的意义。 【要点详解】1.词汇积累 庆祝：celebrate →observe 此外：besides → what’s more 著名的：famous →well-known 忠诚的：devoted →committed 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. 拓展句：Dragon Boat Festival, which is also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. 【高分句型1】Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar.（运用了过去分词短语作定语） 【高分句型2】Dragon Boat Festival is in memory of the death of the famous ancient poet Qu Yuan, who is a devoted government official and poet.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$