读后勇攀高峰：汤姆的冒险之旅 讲义-湖南省湖南师大附中2024-2025学年高二上学期第一次大练习英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A Journey of Courage Tom had always dreamed of climbing mountains. As a child, he would spend hours reading adventure books about explorers who scaled the tallest peaks in the world. He admired their bravery and determination, and he promised himself that one day, he would stand on top of a mountain and look out at the world below. When Tom turned 18, he decided that it was time to make his dream a reality. He spent months training, hiking through forests and climbing smaller hills to build up his strength and stamina (耐力). He read books on mountaineering, learned how to use climbing gear (装备), and practiced tying knots. His goal was to climb Mount Peakstone, a challenging mountain known for its difficult terrain (地形) and unpredictable weather. On the day of the climb, Tom felt both excited and nervous. He packed his gear carefully—warm clothes, food, water, and his climbing equipment. As he stood at the base of the mountain, he looked up at the towering peak. It seemed much taller in person than it did in the pictures he had seen. For a moment, doubt crept into his mind. Could he really do this? But Tom pushed the doubt aside. He had come too far to turn back now. With a deep breath, he began his ascent (攀登). The first part of the climb was relatively easy. The weather was clear, and the path was well- marked. As he climbed higher, the air grew colder, and the wind picked up, but Tom pressed on, determined to reach the top. About halfway up the mountain, the weather took a sudden turn for the worse. Dark clouds gathered overhead, and snow began to fall heavily. The wind howled, making it difficult to see and even harder to keep his balance. Tom’s heart pounded in his chest. He knew he had to make a decision—should he continue climbing, or should he turn back? 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Tom found shelter behind a large rock and took a moment to think. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Step by step, Tom made his way up the mountain, carefully placing his hands and feet on the rock, testing every hold before moving forward. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 Tom 一直梦想爬山，18 岁时决定攀登以地形复杂和天气多变著称的 Mount Peakstone。他经过数月训练后开始攀登，起初较为顺利，但爬到半山腰时天气突变，乌云密布，大雪纷飞，狂风呼啸，他面临着继续攀登还是返回的艰难抉择。文章中 Tom 儿时对爬山的向往、前期的充分准备以及攀登过程中天气的变化为后续情节发展埋下伏笔。 伏笔及续写回应 · 伏笔 1：Tom 儿时的梦想 · 续写回应：在面对困难时，Tom 回忆起儿时的梦想，这成为他坚持下去的动力之一。在续写中，他在岩石后躲避时思考自己爬山的初衷，坚定了不轻易放弃的决心，回应了儿时梦想对他的深远影响。 · 伏笔 2：前期的训练和准备 2. 续写回应：Tom 前期的训练和对登山知识的学习在后续应对恶劣天气和继续攀登中发挥了作用。续写中他能够相对冷静地应对困境，利用所学知识寻找庇护所、保存体力等，体现了前期准备的重要性。 · 伏笔 3：天气的变化 3. 续写回应：天气突变是故事的关键转折点，续写中 Tom 需要根据天气情况做出决策并采取相应行动。他在等待风暴过去后继续攀登，过程中小心应对恶劣环境，最终成功登顶，回应了天气变化带来的挑战以及他克服挑战的过程。 续写要点 （一）第一段 1. 描述 Tom 在岩石后躲避时的心理活动，包括对继续攀登和放弃的权衡，回忆自己的梦想和前期的努力。 2. 可以提及他对天气状况的观察和判断，以及思考如何应对当前困境，如等待天气好转或寻找其他解决办法。 3. 写出他最终做出的决定及原因，为下一段的行动做铺垫。 （二）第二段 1. 详细叙述 Tom 在继续攀登过程中的行动和困难，如道路湿滑、视线受阻、风力强劲等情况下他如何小心翼翼地前进。 2. 描写他在攀登过程中的心理状态，可能有紧张、坚定、专注等情绪交织，强调他克服困难的决心和毅力。 3. 描述他最终成功登顶时的感受和看到的景象，突出实现梦想的喜悦和成就感，以及对勇气和坚持的感悟。 情感线 文章开始 Tom 充满兴奋和期待，随着天气恶化，他变得紧张和犹豫，在岩石后思考时内心经历挣扎，最终决定继续攀登后展现出坚定和勇敢。成功登顶时，他充满了自豪和成就感，情感从期待到挫折再到胜利的喜悦，不断变化推动故事发展。 故事线 以 Tom 的登山之旅为主线，从他决定攀登、前期准备、开始攀登的顺利，到遇到恶劣天气的困境，在岩石后思考决策，再到继续攀登并最终成功登顶，情节跌宕起伏，展现了一个关于勇气、坚持和实现梦想的故事。 主旨升华句 1. Courage is not the absence of fear, but the determination to face it and overcome it.（勇气不是没有恐惧，而是决心面对并克服它。） 2. Every step towards a dream is a step towards self-discovery and growth.（朝着梦想迈出的每一步都是迈向自我发现和成长的一步。） 3. In the face of challenges, our determination defines our success.（在面对挑战时，我们的决心决定了我们的成功。） 4. The journey to the top is not just about the destination, but the strength we gain along the way.（登顶之旅不仅仅是关于目的地，更是我们在途中获得的力量。） 5. Dreams become reality when we have the courage to persevere through difficulties.（当我们有勇气在困难中坚持时，梦想就会成为现实。） 写作示范一 第一段 Tom found shelter behind a large rock and took a moment to think. The howling wind and the heavy snow seemed to be mocking his ambition. Doubts once again filled his mind. But then he remembered all the nights he spent poring over those adventure books, imagining himself standing on the summit. The months of training, the sweat and effort he had put in, flashed through his mind. He realized that giving up now would mean all that preparation was in vain. He also knew that the weather could potentially get worse if he waited too long. After a fierce internal struggle, he decided to take a calculated risk and continue climbing once the snow showed signs of easing. 第二段 Step by step, Tom made his way up the mountain, carefully placing his hands and feet on the rock, testing every hold before moving forward. The wind still gusted, trying to push him back, and the path was now a slippery nightmare. But he remained focused, his eyes fixed on the goal above. Every step was a battle against the elements and his own fear. With each difficult movement, he drew strength from his unwavering determination. Finally, as he pulled himself over the last ledge, he stood on the top of the mountain. The view was beyond anything he could have imagined. The sense of achievement and pride filled his heart. He had proven to himself that with courage and perseverance, he could conquer any obstacle. In that moment, he understood that the journey was not just about reaching the summit, but about the growth and strength he had gained along the way. 写作示范二 第一段 Tom found shelter behind a large rock and took a moment to think. The cold seeped into his bones, and the uncertainty of the situation weighed heavily on him. He thought about his family and friends who had supported his dream. He remembered the excitement in their eyes when he told them about his plan to climb Mount Peakstone. Giving up now would not only disappoint himself but also let them down. As he peered out from behind the rock, he noticed that the snowfall was starting to slow. He realized that if he waited too long, he might lose the opportunity to reach the top. With a newfound resolve, he decided to push forward, trusting in his skills and the preparation he had done. 第二段 Step by step, Tom made his way up the mountain, carefully placing his hands and feet on the rock, testing every hold before moving forward. The wind whipped at his face, but he gritted his teeth and continued. The slippery ground made each step precarious, but he remained steady and focused. Every time he felt like giving up, he thought about the view from the top that he had dreamed of. As he climbed higher, the air became thinner, but his determination grew stronger. Finally, he reached the summit. The feeling of elation and accomplishment washed over him. He had faced the challenges head-on and emerged victorious. This experience taught him that when we set our minds to something and have the courage to persevere, we can achieve the seemingly impossible. It was a lesson he would carry with him for the rest of his life, and a story he would share to inspire others to chase their dreams, no matter how difficult the journey may be. 参考答案 Tom found shelter behind a large rock and took a moment to think. He had read about this in the mountaineering books: when the weather turns dangerous, it’s often best to stop and wait it out. Cold and a little frightened, Tom thought of calling for rescue for a moment. But Tom was so close to the top and his dream. He thought, if he had quitted this time, he would feel regretful in his later life. He didn’t want to give up now. After a few minutes, he made up his mind. He would continue, but he would be extra cautious. Step by step, Tom made his way up the mountain, carefully placing his hands and feet on the rock, testing every hold before moving forward. His muscles ached, and the cold cut through his clothes, but he focused on the goal. After what felt like hours, he finally reached the summit. The wind had died down, and the clouds began to clear, revealing a breathtaking view of the world below. Tom stood there, tired and exhausted, but filled with a sense of accomplishment. As he looked out at the vast landscape, he realized that the journey had taught him more than just how to climb a mountain. It had taught him the importance of perseverance, courage, and believing in himself, even when things seemed impossible. The mountain had tested him, but in the end, he proved to himself that he was capable of achieving his dream. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$