内容正文:
■ 重点话题写作(三)
主题:发明
1.审题:
本话题是“发明”,与此相关的写作任务是能简单介绍某项发明的历史、用途、特点等。写作时,文章要有条理性,语言要准确简明,能正确运用一般过去时的被动语态。
2.话题词汇:
history历史 important重要的 helpful/useful有用的 convenient便利的 as we all know众所周知 open up one's eyes开阔眼界 play an important part/role发挥重要作用 try out尝试 at the same time同时
3.话题句式:
①First, the computer provides us with different kinds of information so that we can know more about the world.
首先,电脑为我们提供不同种类的信息,因此我们能更多地了解世界。
(提分点:so that引导的结果状语从句)
②Therefore, it is environmentally friendly to use the flying bike.
因此,使用飞行自行车是环保的。
(提分点:it固定句式)
③Although a lot of inventions are small, they're very useful in people's life.
尽管许多发明不起眼,它们在人们的生活中非常有用。
(提分点:Although引导的让步状语从句)
【书面表达】
发明不仅给我们的生活带来便利,而且还促进社会进步和发展。近日,Invention杂志正征集各类发明的英文稿件。请以“A Useful Invention”为题,根据下图,写一篇征文,介绍你心目中一项有用的发明。
注意:
1.根据上图所给提示,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
3.词数80词左右。
A Useful Invention
The mobile phone is a useful invention. The first mobile phone was invented for US Army in 1938 in America.
As we all know, mobile phones are being more and more widely used in our daily life. They are used in many ways.
First, they offer fast and convenient service for communication. We can talk with our parents or our friends for a long time on mobile phones. We can also surf the Internet on them. That helps us open up our eyes to the outside world. And when we are tired, we can listen to music to relax ourselves. Our life becomes more colourful because of the invention of mobile phones.
There is no doubt that the mobile phone plays an important part in our daily life.
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