读后续写--圣诞的惊喜：“大红” 裙子 讲义-湖南省长沙市长郡中学2024-2025学年高二上学期第一次月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The first time we set eyes on the beautiful dress “big Red.”father, mother and I were walking slowly through the freshly fallen snow on our way to Hubble's Hardware store on Main Street. The colorfully decorated window display held the best toys ever and some other things. And hey were all placed pleasantly beneath the breathtaking dress of Big Red. Mother’s eyes were glued to the massive flame of red satin(绸缎)，dotted with twinkling stars. “My goodness,"she managed to say in dreamlike wonder."Would you just look at that dress!"Then,totally out of character, mother unexpectedly danced on the slippery sidewalk. Beneath the heavy,grey wool coat that she had worm every winter for as long as I could remember,mother lost her balance and fell clumsily. Father quickly caught her. Her cheeks redder than usual, mother blamed dad for laughing."Oh,stop that!" she ordered, as my father swept the snow from her coat."What a silly dress to be displayed there in the window of Eaton's!" she shook her head in disbelief. "Who on earth would want such a brightly-colored dress? It is too expensive."As we continued to walk down the street, mother turned back for one more look."My goodness! You'd think they'd display something that a person could use!” Christmas was around the corner and the red dress was soon forgotten.Mother was not the one to wish for, or spend money on,things that were not practical."There are things we need more than this,"she'd always say, or,"There are things we need more than that." Father,on the other hand, liked to buy things whenever the budget allowed. Of course,he'd get a scolding for his occasional spending like this,but it was all done with the best intention. On our last trip to town before Christmas,we were driving up Main Street when mother suddenly exclaimed in surprise, “Would you just look at that!"She pointed excitedly as Dad drove past Eaton's."That big red dress is gone,” she said in disbelief. “It's actually gone." 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dad looked quickly and smiled,"Yes,it is not there!” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'll never forget that Christmas morning when father handed mother a box. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 作者一家在去哈勃五金店的路上看到伊顿商店橱窗里展示的漂亮的 “大红” 裙子，母亲被其吸引但又觉得不实用且昂贵。圣诞节临近，这件红裙子被逐渐淡忘。在圣诞节前最后一次去镇上时，母亲发现红裙子不见了。父亲平时喜欢在预算允许时买东西，尽管会因此受到母亲的责备。 伏笔及续写回应 · 伏笔：父亲偶尔会不顾母亲反对买些不实用但他认为好的东西，为后文父亲买下红裙子做铺垫。母亲虽然嘴上说红裙子不实用，但她看到裙子消失时的惊讶和不舍也为后续情节发展埋下伏笔。 · 续写回应示例：在续写中，可以描写父亲其实偷偷买下了裙子，给母亲一个惊喜，回应了父亲爱买东西的特点以及母亲对裙子的喜爱。比如父亲在母亲惊讶裙子不见时，露出神秘的微笑，暗示他有所行动。 续写要点 · 第一段：描述父母对于红裙子不见的反应和对话，父亲可能透露一些他的计划或者让母亲感到疑惑的话语，增加故事的悬念。 · 第二段：讲述圣诞节早上父亲给母亲一个盒子，母亲打开发现是红裙子时的惊喜和感动，以及家人之间温馨的氛围和情感的表达。 情感线 从母亲对红裙子的喜爱但又觉得不实用的矛盾心理，到裙子不见时的惊讶和不舍，再到收到裙子时的惊喜和感动。 故事线 看到红裙子 - 讨论裙子 - 裙子消失 - 父亲的神秘表现 - 圣诞节收到裙子 主旨升华句 1. Love often hides behind the seemingly ordinary actions and surprises that bring warmth and joy to our lives.（爱常常隐藏在看似平凡的行动和惊喜背后，给我们的生活带来温暖和快乐。） 2. Small gestures of love, like a thoughtful gift, can mean the world and strengthen the bonds of a family.（爱的小举动，如一份贴心的礼物，可能意味着整个世界，并能加强家庭的纽带。） 3. In a family, it's the unexpected joys and the understanding of each other's hearts that make the days truly special.（在一个家庭中，是那些意想不到的快乐和对彼此内心的理解，让日子变得真正特别。） 4. The gift of love, whether big or small, has the power to create beautiful memories and fill our hearts with happiness.（爱的礼物，无论大小，都有力量创造美好的回忆，让我们的心中充满幸福。） 5. A simple act of giving can express the deepest love and bring a family closer together during the holiday season.（一个简单的给予行为可以表达最深的爱，并在节日期间让一个家庭更加亲密。） 写作示范一 Dad looked quickly and smiled, "Yes, it is not there!" Mother's face showed a mixture of disappointment and confusion. "Well, I guess someone finally bought it. It was really too flashy for our taste anyway," she said, trying to hide her obvious regret. Dad just winked at me and said nothing. I had a feeling that he knew something we didn't. As we continued our Christmas shopping, I couldn't help but wonder if there was more to the story of the big red dress. I'll never forget that Christmas morning when father handed mother a box. Mother's eyes widened in surprise as she opened it. There, inside, was the beautiful big red dress. She gasped and then looked at Dad with tears in her eyes. "How...? When...?" Dad just smiled and said, "I knew you really liked it, even though you said it was impractical. It's our special Christmas gift for you." The whole family was filled with a warm and happy atmosphere. Mother put on the dress immediately, looking like a queen in her red satin. That Christmas became one of the most memorable ones, as it was a reminder of the love and understanding within our family. The big red dress was not just a piece of clothing, but a symbol of Dad's love for Mom and the joy it brought to our family. 写作示范二 Dad looked quickly and smiled, "Yes, it is not there!" Mother sighed and said, "Oh well, it was just a fancy dress. We have more important things to worry about for Christmas." But I noticed a hint of sadness in her eyes. Dad, on the other hand, seemed quite calm and a bit mysterious. He said, "You never know what might show up under the Christmas tree." I was curious about what he meant. As the days leading up to Christmas passed, I caught Dad making a few secret phone calls and going out on mysterious errands. I guessed he was up to something. I'll never forget that Christmas morning when father handed mother a box. Mother was initially puzzled, but as she opened it, her face lit up with pure joy. It was the big red dress! She couldn't believe it. She hugged Dad tightly and said, "You are so silly, but I love it so much." We all laughed and shared in the happiness. That day, we realized that sometimes it's the unexpected gifts that bring the most joy. The big red dress became a centerpiece of our Christmas celebration, representing the love and thoughtfulness that Dad had for Mom. It was a reminder that even in the midst of practicality, there's always room for a little bit of magic and love in a family. The Christmas morning was filled with warmth and the spirit of giving, making it a truly special day for all of us. 参考答案 Dad looked quickly and smiled, “Yes, it is not here!” “But who would like to buy that silly dress, which is neither practical nor cheap?” Mom marveled, but meanwhile both father and I could discern an inexplicable but conspicuous disappointment crept over her face. “Some romantic, reserved loving man might buy that for their wife.” Father winked slyly at mom and me from the rear mirror as if he were the secretive devoting husband he depicted. I will never forget that Christmas morning when father handed mother a box. “Ta da, the most silly gift for my princess!” father exclaimed, eyeing at his wife in a loving and expectant way. Mother, too stunned to speak, received the box with her trembling hands. Her palms sweating, throat tightening, mother’s hand slided through the red satin and lingered at the twinkling stars. “Oh, Tom, you shouldn’t have been that extravagant.” “No, baby, you deserve the highest honor and my passionate love on this Special Christmas.” 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$