68 内蒙古包头-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

68 内蒙古包头 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想让同学们通过描述自己在社区的志愿活动经历，锻炼大家的英语写作能力，同时培养大家的社会责任感和分享意识。 内容把握： - 短文开头清晰地交代了时间、地点和身份。 - 中间部分详细描述了活动的具体内容，包括集合、分组、不同的任务等，内容丰富且具体。 - 结尾表达了个人的感受和期望，使文章有了深度和情感。 能力考查： - 考查同学们对一般过去时的运用，比如“Last Sunday I worked...”“Before the event began, we gathered...”等。 - 对词汇的掌握，像“eco-friendly”“reusable”“be divided into”“give out”“go all out”等。 - 考查句型的运用，如“Before 引导的时间状语从句”“疑问词+动词不定式”等复杂句型。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对语言表达、逻辑思维和情感态度的培养要求。 解题思路： - 先确定文章的时态为一般过去时，描述过去发生的事情。 - 按照题目要求，依次描述活动的简要情况和个人的体验感受。 - 运用所学的词汇和句型，增加文章的丰富度和准确性。 - 注意语言的流畅性和连贯性，使文章逻辑清晰。 （2024·内蒙古包头·中考真题）你校英语报社组织同学们分享自己在社区进行志愿活动的经历，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1．简要描述; 2．体验和感受。 Topic Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Time last Sunday Activities made eco-friendly (环保的) products gave out reusable water bottles and bags worked at the learning stalls (摊位) 注意： 1．词数为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4．短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer. Before the event began, we gathered at the entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o’clock. We volunteers were then divided into groups. Some made eco-friendly products. Others gave out reusable water bottles and the bags we made. I went all out to work at the learning stalls, teaching neighbors how to properly recycle and how to reduce trash here in town. I shared what I know with others through the activity. Sharing is caring. Wish everyone could care about our community and earth. 【知识点】志愿服务 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，着重突出“活动”部分，可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍志愿者活动的时间、地点、人物等； 第二步，具体介绍志愿者活动内容； 最后一步，表达个人感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①be divided into被分成 ②give out分发 ③go all out全力以赴 ④care about关心 [高分句型] ①Before the event began, we gathered at the entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o’clock.（before引导时间状语从句） ②I went all out to work at the learning stalls, teaching neighbors how to properly recycle and how to reduce trash here in town.（疑问词+动词不定式） ③I shared what I know with others through the activity.（what引导宾语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题旨在引导学生关注健康饮食习惯的重要性，并促使他们思考如何养成健康的饮食习惯，培养学生的健康意识和自我管理能力。 内容把握： - 文章首先阐述了形成健康饮食习惯的重要性，从帮助增强体质和提供日常所需能量两个方面进行说明。 - 接着详细介绍了养成健康饮食习惯的方法，包括饮食多样化、不挑食、选择营养丰富的食物、避免快餐以及少吃高脂肪、高盐和高糖的食物。 - 最后引用俗语“You are what you eat”强调其重要性，呼吁大家养成良好习惯保持健康。 能力考查： - 考查学生的语言表达能力，能否清晰、准确地用英语表达自己的观点和想法。 - 考查学生对健康饮食相关知识的了解和运用。 - 考查学生组织文章结构和逻辑的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用能力、思维能力和文化意识的培养要求。 解题思路： - 认真阅读题目要求和征稿启事，明确主题和需要回答的问题。 - 构思文章结构，先阐述重要性，再给出养成方法。 - 运用所学的词汇、语法和句型，准确表达观点，注意语言的连贯性和逻辑性。 （2023·内蒙古包头·中考真题）你校英文报正在征稿，主题是“Form healthy eating habits”。请根据以下征稿启事，写一篇短文投稿。 ARTICLES WANTED! The World Wide Fund For Nature (WWF) suggests: Eat more plants: have more vegetables and whole grains (全谷类); Eat a variety offoods: don’t be picky (挑剔的) and have a colorful plate; Eat fewer foods high in fat, salt and sugar; … Write an article answering the following two questions. We will publish the best one in our newspaper. 1. Why is it important to form health y eating habits? 2. How can you form healthy eating habits? 注意： 1.词数80左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Form healthy eating habits _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Form healthy eating habits Getting into good eating habits benefits us a lot. For one thing, it helps us build up our body. For another, it gives us the energy we need to make the most of the day. In order to form healthy eating habits, we’d better take a variety of foods and not be picky. It’s a good choice for us to eat vegetables, tofu, and meat that are all rich in nutrients. At the same time, we should avoid fast food and eat fewer foods high in fat, salt and sugar. “You are what you eat”, as the old saying goes. So try to form good eating habits and stay healthy. 【知识点】方法/策略、健康饮食 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明为什么养成健康的饮食习惯很重要； 第二步，具体阐述养成健康的饮食习惯的方法。 第三步，最后呼吁大家养成良好的饮食习惯。 [亮点词汇] ①For one thing...For another一方面……另一方面 ②in order to为了 ③at the same time同时 [高分句型] ①it gives us the energy we need to make the most of the day.（省略that的定语从句） ②In order to form healthy eating habits, we’d better take a variety of foods and not be picky. （动词不定式作目的状语） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想考查学生的英语写作能力和对日常交流、旅行规划等方面的英语表达能力。 内容把握： - 邮件开头要表达对 Alan 即将到来的喜悦之情。 - 对于打包建议，要给出实用且符合旅行需求的物品和方式。 - 推荐的游玩地点要与 Alan 对中国历史文化的兴趣相契合。 - 关于纪念品的回应要合理且礼貌。 能力考查： - 考查学生的词汇运用能力，比如“pack”“souvenir”等词汇的正确使用。 - 考查学生组织语言和逻辑表达的能力，使邮件内容清晰、连贯。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生在语言运用、文化理解等方面的要求，能够用英语进行有效的书面交流。 解题思路： - 先认真阅读题目和邮件内容，理解 Alan 的需求和问题。 - 按照题目要求，分点回答，注意语言的规范性和准确性。 - 控制好词数，使邮件完整且不超出规定字数。 （2022·内蒙古包头·中考真题）假定你是李华，下周你的英国朋友Alan要来北京游玩，并发来如下邮件。请给Alan回复一封邮件。 Hi, Next week I’ll be with you in Beijing. I can’t wait! We could do lots of exciting things together. And now I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me? I always take lots of things in my bag and can’t find what I really want! Please tell me how I could pack. Since I am interested in history and culture of China, I want to know where we will go. I’d like to get you some souvenirs from where I live. What would you like me to get you? I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Alan Make a list （T-shirts, sunglasses…） Place small bags inside big bags… Places of interest （the Palace Museum, the Great Wall…） Postcards, books… 参考词汇：pack v. 打包         souvenir n. 纪念品 注意：1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Hi Alan, I’m so happy to get your email saying that you’re coming to visit us next week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to meeting you! Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】： Hi Alan, I’m so happy to get your email saying that you’re coming to visit us next week. Since you are going on a long flight, I suggest you make a list of things you take. It is a bit hot in summer here. So you can take T-shirts and sunglasses with you. Do you hate that feeling when you can’t find what you’re looking for in your bag? Me too! Placing small bags inside big bags is the best solution. I think it’s a good idea to go to some places of interest together, such as the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. You will learn a lot about Chinese culture and history. As for the souvenir, I like collecting postcards and books from different places. Do you have any postcards of Tower Bridge? That would suit me fine. Thanks! I’m looking forward to meeting you! Li Hua 【知识点】计划、旅行、意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于邮件写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述去北京游玩需要携带的东西，打包的方式，可以参观的地方以及建议带的纪念品。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主，讲述旅行需要携带的东西，打包的建议，在北京可以参观的地方，从英国带到中国的纪念品，要叙述完整，条理清晰。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查同学们的英语书面表达能力，以及在实际情境中运用英语进行交流和沟通的能力。 内容把握：题目设定了一个具体的情境，即学校组织郊外游玩，要求回复英国交换生 Alan 的邮件。需要回答对于活动的选择偏好、携带物品的建议以及见面讨论的时间和地点等内容。 能力考查：考查同学们对英语词汇、语法的运用，能否清晰准确地表达自己的想法和观点，同时也考查逻辑思维和组织语言的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生在特定情境下用英语进行书面交流的要求，培养学生的跨文化交际意识。 解题思路：首先，要认真阅读 Alan 的邮件，理解他提出的问题。然后，根据题目要求逐一进行回答。比如在选择活动时，要给出合理的理由；在建议携带物品时，要考虑到郊外游玩的实际需求；确定见面的时间和地点时，要表述清晰准确。整个回复要语言通顺、逻辑连贯，并且注意词数限制。 （2021·内蒙古包头·中考真题）假定你是李华，下周你校将组织去郊外游玩一天。你班英国交换生Alan发来如下邮件。请给Alan回复一封电子邮件，邮件需包括箭头所指内容。 … Hi! Guess what? My parents said I could go on the day trip into the countryside next week! Our teacher said we could do some walking during the trip or work on a farm, didn’t she? Which would you prefer to do? What do you think we should take with us? Do you want to meet before the trip to talk about it? Alan Great! Say which and why Give suggestions Yes-say when and where 注意： 1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Dear Alan, That’s great! I’m so happy you’re able to come!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ See you then! Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Alan, That’s great! I’m so happy you’re able to come! I know we’ll have a good time. I’d rather try learning from farmers than do some walking, because I am interested in milking a cow and finding out when to pick fruits or vegetables they planted. It’s more challenging. Besides, bathed in sunshine and fresh air, we will relax ourselves. Why don’t we take some sandwiches? I’ll make some for us. Could you bring some bottles of water? Besides, don’t forget to wear clothes that are more suitable for sport. Let’s meet this weekend for details. We can meet at the coffee shop next to our school. See you then! Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】游览活动 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写，在写作时应承接短文开头，根据英语提示的内容，先叙述作者的感觉，选择的活动及其理由以及针对此项活动的建议、具体细节等。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时；在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，叙述完整，保证行文连贯，条例清晰。 最新模拟 1．（2024·内蒙古包头·二模）假设你是李华，你的留学朋友Jack要在暑假回国， 打算为他妈妈准备几件富有中国特色的礼物，特来向你咨询。请你结合以下信息，提出你的建议和理由，给他回一封邮件。 注意： 1. 要求语句通顺， 意思连贯； 2. 文中不得提及真实的人名， 校名等相关信息； 3. 词数：80左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, I’m glad to hear that you are coming back home during the summer holiday. It’s great that you want to bring a few gifts to your mother that symbolize the Chinese culture. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Have a good vacation and send my best wishes to her. Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·内蒙古包头·二模）假如你是李华，你校英语社团向同学们发出 “爱读书、读好书、善读书” 的倡议。请你根据以下要点提示，用英文写一份倡议书。 写作要点： 1. Why do we need to read? 2. What should we read? 3. What’s our plan for reading? 注意： 1. 词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Dear schoolmates, Books are our best friends. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 3．（2023·内蒙古包头·三模）假如你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Tom将会作为交换生来中国游学一周。请认真阅读他的信件并根据内容回复。 注意： 1. 回信需包含所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。 2. 文中不得提及真实的人名，校名等相关信息。 3. 词数90词左右，短文开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I’m happy to hear that you are coming to China as an exhange student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you have any further questions, please write to me as soon as possible. Li Hua 4．（2023·内蒙古包头·三模）你的学校将举行以“低碳生活”为主题的英语征文活动，请你根据思维导图的提示以“How to be a greener person”为题，写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1、应包含思维导图提示中所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2、词数：80词左右； 3、标题、首尾段已给出，不计入总词数。 4、文中不得出现考生真实姓名、学校名称等。 How to Be a Greener Person It’s our duty to protect the environment around us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s do something to protect our environment. 5．（2023·内蒙古包头·三模）作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。 要求： 1. 语言表达准确，语意连贯、通顺； 2. 文章应包括所给思维导图中所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 词数：80左右。文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Make Myself Better As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ By doing these, I am sure I will make myself better and better. 6．（2023·内蒙古包头·三模）假如你是李华，你的笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物，餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。 写作要求： 1. 要点齐全、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.词数100 (邮件格式已给出，不计入总次数)。 Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Lan 7．（2023·内蒙古包头·二模）著名作家Francis Bacon曾说过：“Reading makes a full man.”可见，阅读对于每个人的成长都有着举足轻重的作用。请你根据以下信息提示，结合自己的观点，以“Reading Makes a Full Man”为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，表达你对阅读的看法和计划。 注意： 1. 词数90左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Reading Makes a Full Man Reading is very important in our study life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2023·内蒙古包头·模拟预测）假设你是Thomas，你的英国笔友Anthony计划来包头玩，他给你发了封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡包头。请认真阅读他的邮件，并根据邮件内容回信。 To: Thomas@ China. com From: Anthony2023@UK. com Subject: Your hometown Dear Thomas, How are you? Glad to hear from you. I am thinking about travelling to China during the summer holiday. I plan to travel to your hometown—Baotou. I want to know something about the environment (环境), people and transport (交通) in your hometown. Please tell me something else about your hometown. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Anthony 注意： (1)回信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； (2)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； (3)词数90个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Anthony, I'm glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Baotou. It is a good place to visit. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Baotou! Yours, Thomas 9．（2023·内蒙古包头·二模）初中生活是多姿多彩的，校园里的一切都会在每个人的心里留下美好的记忆。请根据以下提示，以 “My junior high school memories”为题，用英语描述一下你的初中生活。 注意： （1）词数 90 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名，地名等内容。 My junior high school memories School life is always colorful and students have their own memories. I’ll leave my junior school soon. But the colorful life gave me too much beautiful memories. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Goodbye, dear teachers. I will remember all of you forever. 10．（2023·内蒙古包头·模拟预测）你校将在下周举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Live a healthy life为题写一篇演讲稿参赛，文中需体现下图内容。 注意： 1.词数90左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Live a healthy life Good morning everybody. I’d like to give you a speech about living a healthy life. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 68 内蒙古包头 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想让同学们通过描述自己在社区的志愿活动经历，锻炼大家的英语写作能力，同时培养大家的社会责任感和分享意识。 内容把握： - 短文开头清晰地交代了时间、地点和身份。 - 中间部分详细描述了活动的具体内容，包括集合、分组、不同的任务等，内容丰富且具体。 - 结尾表达了个人的感受和期望，使文章有了深度和情感。 能力考查： - 考查同学们对一般过去时的运用，比如“Last Sunday I worked...”“Before the event began, we gathered...”等。 - 对词汇的掌握，像“eco-friendly”“reusable”“be divided into”“give out”“go all out”等。 - 考查句型的运用，如“Before 引导的时间状语从句”“疑问词+动词不定式”等复杂句型。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对语言表达、逻辑思维和情感态度的培养要求。 解题思路： - 先确定文章的时态为一般过去时，描述过去发生的事情。 - 按照题目要求，依次描述活动的简要情况和个人的体验感受。 - 运用所学的词汇和句型，增加文章的丰富度和准确性。 - 注意语言的流畅性和连贯性，使文章逻辑清晰。 （2024·内蒙古包头·中考真题）你校英语报社组织同学们分享自己在社区进行志愿活动的经历，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1．简要描述; 2．体验和感受。 Topic Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Time last Sunday Activities made eco-friendly (环保的) products gave out reusable water bottles and bags worked at the learning stalls (摊位) 注意： 1．词数为80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4．短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer. Before the event began, we gathered at the entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o’clock. We volunteers were then divided into groups. Some made eco-friendly products. Others gave out reusable water bottles and the bags we made. I went all out to work at the learning stalls, teaching neighbors how to properly recycle and how to reduce trash here in town. I shared what I know with others through the activity. Sharing is caring. Wish everyone could care about our community and earth. 【知识点】志愿服务 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，着重突出“活动”部分，可适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍志愿者活动的时间、地点、人物等； 第二步，具体介绍志愿者活动内容； 最后一步，表达个人感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①be divided into被分成 ②give out分发 ③go all out全力以赴 ④care about关心 [高分句型] ①Before the event began, we gathered at the entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o’clock.（before引导时间状语从句） ②I went all out to work at the learning stalls, teaching neighbors how to properly recycle and how to reduce trash here in town.（疑问词+动词不定式） ③I shared what I know with others through the activity.（what引导宾语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题旨在引导学生关注健康饮食习惯的重要性，并促使他们思考如何养成健康的饮食习惯，培养学生的健康意识和自我管理能力。 内容把握： - 文章首先阐述了形成健康饮食习惯的重要性，从帮助增强体质和提供日常所需能量两个方面进行说明。 - 接着详细介绍了养成健康饮食习惯的方法，包括饮食多样化、不挑食、选择营养丰富的食物、避免快餐以及少吃高脂肪、高盐和高糖的食物。 - 最后引用俗语“You are what you eat”强调其重要性，呼吁大家养成良好习惯保持健康。 能力考查： - 考查学生的语言表达能力，能否清晰、准确地用英语表达自己的观点和想法。 - 考查学生对健康饮食相关知识的了解和运用。 - 考查学生组织文章结构和逻辑的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用能力、思维能力和文化意识的培养要求。 解题思路： - 认真阅读题目要求和征稿启事，明确主题和需要回答的问题。 - 构思文章结构，先阐述重要性，再给出养成方法。 - 运用所学的词汇、语法和句型，准确表达观点，注意语言的连贯性和逻辑性。 （2023·内蒙古包头·中考真题）你校英文报正在征稿，主题是“Form healthy eating habits”。请根据以下征稿启事，写一篇短文投稿。 ARTICLES WANTED! The World Wide Fund For Nature (WWF) suggests: Eat more plants: have more vegetables and whole grains (全谷类); Eat a variety offoods: don’t be picky (挑剔的) and have a colorful plate; Eat fewer foods high in fat, salt and sugar; … Write an article answering the following two questions. We will publish the best one in our newspaper. 1. Why is it important to form health y eating habits? 2. How can you form healthy eating habits? 注意： 1.词数80左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Form healthy eating habits _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Form healthy eating habits Getting into good eating habits benefits us a lot. For one thing, it helps us build up our body. For another, it gives us the energy we need to make the most of the day. In order to form healthy eating habits, we’d better take a variety of foods and not be picky. It’s a good choice for us to eat vegetables, tofu, and meat that are all rich in nutrients. At the same time, we should avoid fast food and eat fewer foods high in fat, salt and sugar. “You are what you eat”, as the old saying goes. So try to form good eating habits and stay healthy. 【知识点】方法/策略、健康饮食 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明为什么养成健康的饮食习惯很重要； 第二步，具体阐述养成健康的饮食习惯的方法。 第三步，最后呼吁大家养成良好的饮食习惯。 [亮点词汇] ①For one thing...For another一方面……另一方面 ②in order to为了 ③at the same time同时 [高分句型] ①it gives us the energy we need to make the most of the day.（省略that的定语从句） ②In order to form healthy eating habits, we’d better take a variety of foods and not be picky. （动词不定式作目的状语） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想考查学生的英语写作能力和对日常交流、旅行规划等方面的英语表达能力。 内容把握： - 邮件开头要表达对 Alan 即将到来的喜悦之情。 - 对于打包建议，要给出实用且符合旅行需求的物品和方式。 - 推荐的游玩地点要与 Alan 对中国历史文化的兴趣相契合。 - 关于纪念品的回应要合理且礼貌。 能力考查： - 考查学生的词汇运用能力，比如“pack”“souvenir”等词汇的正确使用。 - 考查学生组织语言和逻辑表达的能力，使邮件内容清晰、连贯。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生在语言运用、文化理解等方面的要求，能够用英语进行有效的书面交流。 解题思路： - 先认真阅读题目和邮件内容，理解 Alan 的需求和问题。 - 按照题目要求，分点回答，注意语言的规范性和准确性。 - 控制好词数，使邮件完整且不超出规定字数。 （2022·内蒙古包头·中考真题）假定你是李华，下周你的英国朋友Alan要来北京游玩，并发来如下邮件。请给Alan回复一封邮件。 Hi, Next week I’ll be with you in Beijing. I can’t wait! We could do lots of exciting things together. And now I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me? I always take lots of things in my bag and can’t find what I really want! Please tell me how I could pack. Since I am interested in history and culture of China, I want to know where we will go. I’d like to get you some souvenirs from where I live. What would you like me to get you? I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Alan Make a list （T-shirts, sunglasses…） Place small bags inside big bags… Places of interest （the Palace Museum, the Great Wall…） Postcards, books… 参考词汇：pack v. 打包         souvenir n. 纪念品 注意：1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Hi Alan, I’m so happy to get your email saying that you’re coming to visit us next week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to meeting you! Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】： Hi Alan, I’m so happy to get your email saying that you’re coming to visit us next week. Since you are going on a long flight, I suggest you make a list of things you take. It is a bit hot in summer here. So you can take T-shirts and sunglasses with you. Do you hate that feeling when you can’t find what you’re looking for in your bag? Me too! Placing small bags inside big bags is the best solution. I think it’s a good idea to go to some places of interest together, such as the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. You will learn a lot about Chinese culture and history. As for the souvenir, I like collecting postcards and books from different places. Do you have any postcards of Tower Bridge? That would suit me fine. Thanks! I’m looking forward to meeting you! Li Hua 【知识点】计划、旅行、意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于邮件写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述去北京游玩需要携带的东西，打包的方式，可以参观的地方以及建议带的纪念品。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主，讲述旅行需要携带的东西，打包的建议，在北京可以参观的地方，从英国带到中国的纪念品，要叙述完整，条理清晰。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查同学们的英语书面表达能力，以及在实际情境中运用英语进行交流和沟通的能力。 内容把握：题目设定了一个具体的情境，即学校组织郊外游玩，要求回复英国交换生 Alan 的邮件。需要回答对于活动的选择偏好、携带物品的建议以及见面讨论的时间和地点等内容。 能力考查：考查同学们对英语词汇、语法的运用，能否清晰准确地表达自己的想法和观点，同时也考查逻辑思维和组织语言的能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生在特定情境下用英语进行书面交流的要求，培养学生的跨文化交际意识。 解题思路：首先，要认真阅读 Alan 的邮件，理解他提出的问题。然后，根据题目要求逐一进行回答。比如在选择活动时，要给出合理的理由；在建议携带物品时，要考虑到郊外游玩的实际需求；确定见面的时间和地点时，要表述清晰准确。整个回复要语言通顺、逻辑连贯，并且注意词数限制。 （2021·内蒙古包头·中考真题）假定你是李华，下周你校将组织去郊外游玩一天。你班英国交换生Alan发来如下邮件。请给Alan回复一封电子邮件，邮件需包括箭头所指内容。 … Hi! Guess what? My parents said I could go on the day trip into the countryside next week! Our teacher said we could do some walking during the trip or work on a farm, didn’t she? Which would you prefer to do? What do you think we should take with us? Do you want to meet before the trip to talk about it? Alan Great! Say which and why Give suggestions Yes-say when and where 注意： 1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Dear Alan, That’s great! I’m so happy you’re able to come!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ See you then! Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Alan, That’s great! I’m so happy you’re able to come! I know we’ll have a good time. I’d rather try learning from farmers than do some walking, because I am interested in milking a cow and finding out when to pick fruits or vegetables they planted. It’s more challenging. Besides, bathed in sunshine and fresh air, we will relax ourselves. Why don’t we take some sandwiches? I’ll make some for us. Could you bring some bottles of water? Besides, don’t forget to wear clothes that are more suitable for sport. Let’s meet this weekend for details. We can meet at the coffee shop next to our school. See you then! Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】游览活动 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写，在写作时应承接短文开头，根据英语提示的内容，先叙述作者的感觉，选择的活动及其理由以及针对此项活动的建议、具体细节等。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时；在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，叙述完整，保证行文连贯，条例清晰。 最新模拟 1．（2024·内蒙古包头·二模）假设你是李华，你的留学朋友Jack要在暑假回国， 打算为他妈妈准备几件富有中国特色的礼物，特来向你咨询。请你结合以下信息，提出你的建议和理由，给他回一封邮件。 注意： 1. 要求语句通顺， 意思连贯； 2. 文中不得提及真实的人名， 校名等相关信息； 3. 词数：80左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack, I’m glad to hear that you are coming back home during the summer holiday. It’s great that you want to bring a few gifts to your mother that symbolize the Chinese culture. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Have a good vacation and send my best wishes to her. Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·内蒙古包头·二模）假如你是李华，你校英语社团向同学们发出 “爱读书、读好书、善读书” 的倡议。请你根据以下要点提示，用英文写一份倡议书。 写作要点： 1. Why do we need to read? 2. What should we read? 3. What’s our plan for reading? 注意： 1. 词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Dear schoolmates, Books are our best friends. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 3．（2023·内蒙古包头·三模）假如你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Tom将会作为交换生来中国游学一周。请认真阅读他的信件并根据内容回复。 注意： 1. 回信需包含所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。 2. 文中不得提及真实的人名，校名等相关信息。 3. 词数90词左右，短文开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I’m happy to hear that you are coming to China as an exhange student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you have any further questions, please write to me as soon as possible. Li Hua 4．（2023·内蒙古包头·三模）你的学校将举行以“低碳生活”为主题的英语征文活动，请你根据思维导图的提示以“How to be a greener person”为题，写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1、应包含思维导图提示中所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2、词数：80词左右； 3、标题、首尾段已给出，不计入总词数。 4、文中不得出现考生真实姓名、学校名称等。 How to Be a Greener Person It’s our duty to protect the environment around us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s do something to protect our environment. 5．（2023·内蒙古包头·三模）作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。 要求： 1. 语言表达准确，语意连贯、通顺； 2. 文章应包括所给思维导图中所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 词数：80左右。文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 How to Make Myself Better As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ By doing these, I am sure I will make myself better and better. 6．（2023·内蒙古包头·三模）假如你是李华，你的笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物，餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。 写作要求： 1. 要点齐全、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.词数100 (邮件格式已给出，不计入总次数)。 Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Lan 7．（2023·内蒙古包头·二模）著名作家Francis Bacon曾说过：“Reading makes a full man.”可见，阅读对于每个人的成长都有着举足轻重的作用。请你根据以下信息提示，结合自己的观点，以“Reading Makes a Full Man”为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，表达你对阅读的看法和计划。 注意： 1. 词数90左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Reading Makes a Full Man Reading is very important in our study life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2023·内蒙古包头·模拟预测）假设你是Thomas，你的英国笔友Anthony计划来包头玩，他给你发了封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡包头。请认真阅读他的邮件，并根据邮件内容回信。 To: Thomas@ China. com From: Anthony2023@UK. com Subject: Your hometown Dear Thomas, How are you? Glad to hear from you. I am thinking about travelling to China during the summer holiday. I plan to travel to your hometown—Baotou. I want to know something about the environment (环境), people and transport (交通) in your hometown. Please tell me something else about your hometown. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Anthony 注意： (1)回信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； (2)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息； (3)词数90个左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Anthony, I'm glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Baotou. It is a good place to visit. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Baotou! Yours, Thomas 9．（2023·内蒙古包头·二模）初中生活是多姿多彩的，校园里的一切都会在每个人的心里留下美好的记忆。请根据以下提示，以 “My junior high school memories”为题，用英语描述一下你的初中生活。 注意： （1）词数 90 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名，地名等内容。 My junior high school memories School life is always colorful and students have their own memories. I’ll leave my junior school soon. But the colorful life gave me too much beautiful memories. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Goodbye, dear teachers. I will remember all of you forever. 10．（2023·内蒙古包头·模拟预测）你校将在下周举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Live a healthy life为题写一篇演讲稿参赛，文中需体现下图内容。 注意： 1.词数90左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。 Live a healthy life Good morning everybody. I’d like to give you a speech about living a healthy life. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】： Dear Jack, I’m glad to hear that you are coming back home during the summer holiday. It’s great that you want to bring a few gifts to your mother that symbolize the Chinese culture. In my opinion, you can buy the following two presents. First of all, Chinese tea, known as one of the most popular drinks in the world not only tastes delicious but also is good for health. I am sure she will find it relaxing to enjoy tea after the meals. Besides, Cheongsam is a good choice. It’s a very beautiful dress for women in a traditional style and it can show the real beauty of them. I believe she will fall in love with it. Have a good vacation and send my best wishes to her. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】商品、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：结合材料所给信息提出建议，写作过程注意邮件格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，表达对Jack做法的赞同； 第二步，写出礼物选择的建议和理由； 第三步，书写结语，表达祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①in my opinion在我看来 ②first of all首先 ③not only...but also...不但……而且…… ④fall in love with爱上 [高分句型] ①It’s great that you want to bring a few gifts to your mother that symbolize the Chinese culture.（定语从句） ②I believe she will fall in love with it.（宾语从句） 2．【满分优秀范文】： Dear schoolmates, Books are our best friends. Reading books can provide us with rich knowledge. Reading can also make us wiser. We can improve ourselves by reading. First, we should read some classics, such as Journey to the West, Little Women and so on. Second, it’s better for us to read at the proper time. We can read either after school or on weekends as long as we are free. Third, reading in a quiet and comfortable place is important for us because we can pay more attention to it. We can read in the library so that we may choose books that we like. After reading we should write a book report and share it with our friends. Reading makes a full man! Let’s start reading now. Li Hua 【知识点】阅读、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，与读书有关； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括鼓励阅读的理由，提出的建议，以及计划等。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍阅读作为最好的朋友为我们提供知识； 第二步，具体阐述阅读的重要性和收益，并制定阅读建议，如阅读经典，合适的阅读时间，最佳的阅读场所； 第三步，强调阅读的计划和价值，通过书写书评以及分享阅读感受提升自我，鼓励大家立刻开始阅读。 [亮点词汇] ① provide sb. with sth. 提供某人某物 ② make sb. adj. 使某人…… ③ such as 例如 [高分句型] ① Third, reading in a quiet and comfortable place is important for us because we can pay more attention to it.（because引导原因状语从句） ② We can read in the library so that we may choose books that we like.（so that引导目的状语从句，that引导定语从句） 3．【满分优秀范文】： Dear Tom, I’m happy to hear that you are coming to China as an exchange student. I know you are interested in greeting manners and the Dragon Boat Festival. Let me tell you something about them. First of all, you are supposed to shake hands with others when you meet for the first time in China. You can also say ‘nihao’ . Secondly, the Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most traditional Chinese festivals in China. It is in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet Qu Yuan. What’s more, It is celebrated on lunar May 5th. Finally, there are many interesting activities on that day. We can make zongzi with our family. And It’s a good time for us to get together to have a big dinner. Watching the dragon boat races is also a good choice. All in all, I’m sure you will have a good time in China! If you have any further questions, please write to me as soon as possible. Li Hua 【知识点】中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封回信； ②时态：时态是“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的。回应汤姆上封信询问的内容； 第二步，阐述写作内容。从“打招呼的礼仪、端午节的详细情况”几个方面具体展开； 第三步，书写结语。表达对笔友来中国的期待和祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对某事感兴趣 ②be supposed to do应当做某事 ③in memory of Qu Yuan纪念屈原 ④all in all总的来说 [高分句型] ①Secondly, the Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most traditional Chinese festivals in China.（one of+形容词最高级+名词复数） ②And It’s a good time for us to get together to have a big dinner.（it做形式主语） 4．【满分优秀范文】 How to Be a Greener Person It’s our duty to protect the environment around us. When we go to school, we should ride a bike or walk to school. When we go out for activities, we shouldn’t step on the grass. We can’t draw everywhere. When we go shopping, we’d better use a cloth bag. This is beneficial for protecting the environment. At home we can save water and electricity. When we leave a room, we should turn off the lights. At school, we can collect waste paper and recycle things, such as bottles, cans and plastic bags. We shouldn’t listen to pop music or spit in public. In a word, as long as we do something to protect our earth, our environment will be greener. Let’s do something to protect our environment. 【知识点】环境保护 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍选择交通工具方面怎么做； 第二步，介绍外出购物等活动时该怎么做； 第三步，介绍在家、在学校等该怎么做。 [亮点词汇] ①be beneficial for有益于 ②turn off关掉 ③such as例如 ④in public大庭广众 ⑤as long as只要 [高分句型] ①When we go to school, we should ride a bike or walk to school.（时间状语从句） ②When we go out for activities, we shouldn’t step on the grass.（时间状语从句） ③In a word, as long as we do something to protect our earth, our environment will be greener.（条件状语从句） 5．【满分优秀范文】 How to Make Myself Better As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better. Let me tell you how I will make myself better. First of all, it is important to live healthily. I will eat more fruit and vegetables. I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep. What’s more, I should work hard at all my subjects. I’ll not be afraid to face challenges any more and try my best to solve the problems bravely. Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends. Last but not least, it’s our responsibility to take care of our parents. I’ll also do what I can to help other people. By doing these, I will make myself better and better. 【知识点】方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：要求根据思维导图谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己，学生可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先引出“将如何塑造更好的自己”的话题； 第二步，从生活方式、学习、人际关系等方面来讲述如何实施； 第三步，总结，谈谈自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①First of all首先 ②be afraid to do sth害怕做某事 ③try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大的努力做某事 ④take care of照顾 [高分句型] ①Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends.（It固定句型） ②I’ll also do what I can to help other people.（宾语从句） 6．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. Manners are highly valued in Chinese culture. When we meet people for the first time, we usually shake hands with each other. It is also polite to give gifts for some special events. We usually receive gifts with both hands and open them later. As for table manners, we are expected to use chopsticks properly and try not to make much noise. At the same time, we should eat up all the food we order. Don’t eat until the elder arrive. I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. 【知识点】中华文化 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时； ③提示：本文要求写的是知道的相关礼仪，要适当地详细描述，并使文章衔接顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，总述礼仪在中国有着很重要的地位； 第二步，详细介绍餐桌礼仪，待人接物等； 第三步，结束语，希望自己的介绍有用。 ［亮点词汇］ for the first time第一次 At the same time同时 shake hands with each other互相握手 ［高分句型］ When we meet people for the first time, we usually shake hands with each other.（时间状语从句） 7．【满分优秀范文】： Reading Makes a Full Man Reading is very important in our study life. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us much wiser. Besides, reading is also one of the most important ways to learn language as well as improve writing skills. Great books, textbooks, newspapers, magazines and information on the Internet can help us know more about the outside world and help us grow up into an excellent person. As for me, I’m planning to read at least half an hour a day. And I’ll spend more time reading at the weekends. I believe every step that I make will make a big difference to my study life. Reading makes a full man! Let’s start reading now. 【知识点】阅读、计划、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，阐述我们为什么要阅读； 第二步，举例说明我们可以阅读的读物有哪些； 第三步，介绍自己的阅读计划并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ②as well as也、又、和 ③make a big difference to影响 [高分句型] ①Besides, reading is also one of the most important ways to learn language as well as improve writing skills.（动词不定式作定语） ②I believe every step that I make will make a big difference to my study life.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句，that引导的限制性定语从句） 8．One Possible Version, Dear Anthony, I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Baotou. It is a good place to visit. The air is fresh in Baotou. There are many trees and mountains. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. The people here are kind and helpful. In my community, people often help each other with problems. In the bus, they always take the initiative to give up their seats to others, and they are especially enthusiastic to some outsiders who ask for directions. They always tell them how to get there very carefully. When you come to Baotou, you can go to different parks and eat Chinese food. If you go to different places in Baotou, you can take a bus. There are buses to different places every day. If you come to Baotou, you will definitely like it. I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Baotou! Yours, Thomas 【知识点】城市 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据来信内容，介绍环境的环境、人文以及交通情况，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍了包头的环境； 第二步，介绍包头的人很友善，乐于助人； 第三步，表介绍了包头的交通和食物。 [亮点词汇] ①each other互相 ②give up放弃 ③ask for要 [高分句型] ①When you come to Baotou, you can go to different parks and eat Chinese food.（When引导的时间状语从句） ② If you go to different places in Baotou, you can take a bus.（if引导的条件状语从句） 9．【满分优秀范文】 My junior high school memories School life is always colorful and students have their own memories. I’ll leave my junior school soon. But the colorful life gave me too much beautiful memories. My school is big and beautiful. There are many flowers and trees in the school, and they make me feel fresh. The excitement of sports meeting and worries about tests will remain in my heart for long. I still remember how difficult Physics is. Sometimes I was afraid of the Physics classes, but our Physics teacher is so patient and kind. She helped me a lot with my study and made me love it. I also make many good friends and they help me a lot. What’s more, I am thankful to the people around me and I will remember all of them forever. Goodbye, my beautiful school, my lovely friend, and my dear teacher! 【知识点】叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：本文主要根据题干中的提示介绍自己的初中回忆，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，表示自己初中有很多美好的回忆； 第二步，从学校环境、老师和朋友、学习科目等方面介绍自己在初中的回忆； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be afraid of害怕 ②help sb with sth帮助某人做某事 ③be thankful to感激 [高分句型] ①There are many flowers and trees in the school, and they make me feel fresh.(and连接的并列句) ②I still remember how difficult Physics is.(how引导的宾语从句) 10．【满分优秀范文】 Live a healthy life Good morning everybody. I’d like to give you a speech about living a healthy life. Nowadays people are paying more attention to living healthily. Ways such as making friends help a lot. Because communicating with friends helps us feel less stressful and a good friend makes us stronger and healthier both mentally and physically. Next, as a student, studying hard really matters. The more we learn, the better we will understand the world. What’s more, sports make our body strong. Whether team sports or individual games will both benefit us. All above are my understanding of the healthy life. Hope everyone lives a healthy life. 【知识点】方法/策略、健康与运动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据图片的提示内容介绍如何健康生活，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据图片从三个方面介绍健康生活，适当增加细节； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth.想要做某事 ②pay attention to注意 [高分句型] ①Because communicating with friends helps us feel less stressful and a good friend makes us stronger and healthier both mentally and physically.(because引导的原因状语从句) ②The more we learn, the better we will understand the world.(the+比较级，the+比较级) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$