63 黑龙江大庆-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

63 黑龙江大庆 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在引导学生思考劳动的重要性，以及劳动对个人生活的积极影响，同时考查学生用英语表达自己在劳动方面的经历和感受的能力。 内容把握： - 作者开篇点明劳动的重要性，接着讲述自己擅长烹饪，会在周末为父母做饭，阐述了烹饪带来的感受，如能增强独立性、让父母放心等，还提到未来想学习种树以美化家乡。内容丰富，紧扣题目要求。 能力考查： - 考查学生的语言表达能力，如准确运用词汇和句型。 - 考查逻辑思维能力，文章条理清晰，有明确的叙述顺序。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、情感表达和思维发展的要求。 解题思路： - 首先，明确题目要求，确定写作主题为“劳动让生活更美好”。 - 然后，选择自己擅长的劳动技能进行描述，如文中的烹饪。 - 接着，详细阐述在劳动中的感受和益处，像作者提到的增强独立性、培养责任感等。 - 最后，可适当展望未来，如作者想要学习种树。 （2024·黑龙江大庆·中考真题）习近平总书记说：“人世间的一切幸福都需要靠辛勤的劳动来创造。”劳动可以增强体质，提升自信，培养责任感。在生活中，你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能，比如洗衣、做饭、打扫教室等。现学校英语报正在征集关于“劳动”的稿件，请你以“Labor(劳动) Makes a Better Life”为题，写一篇稿件。 内容包括： 1. 你擅长哪项劳动技能? 2. 在劳动中你有什么感受? 3. 劳动给你带来了什么益处? 参考词汇：build up one’s body (增强体质) develop a sense of duty (培养责任感) 写作要求： 1. 词数应为90个左右； 2. 可适当添加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 不得泄露个人信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Labor Makes a Better Life As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. I am very good at cooking. I always cook meals for my parents when I am free on weekends. I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking. I can learn how to take good care of myself instead of making my parents worry about me. Labor can also develop a sense of duty. In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful. 【知识点】劳动实践、计划 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Labor Makes a Better Life”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍擅长的一项劳动技能是什么； 第二步，介绍这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处； 第三步，介绍打算学习其他什么劳动技能。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②on weekends在周末 ③take good care of照顾好 ④In the future在未来 [高分句型] ①I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful.（so that引导的目的状语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题的命题意图是考查学生的英语书面表达能力，以及对实际情境的理解和应对能力。通过让学生写邮件申请成为校园向导，来检验学生是否能够清晰地表达自己的意愿、展示个人优势、理解活动的意义并表达恰当的祝愿。 内容把握：题目提供了明确的背景信息，即外国学生访问团将到访学校，需要成立校园向导团。学生在写作时要围绕这个背景展开，内容应包括表明意愿、阐述个人优势、说明活动意义和表达祝愿。 能力考查：主要考查学生的语言运用能力，如词汇、语法的正确使用，以及逻辑思维和组织能力，能否有条理地阐述观点。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语写作的要求，如语言表达准确、流畅，内容完整、有逻辑。 解题思路：首先，在邮件开头要直接表明自己希望成为校园向导的意愿。然后，分点阐述个人优势，如性格、文化理解、语言能力等方面。接着，说明此次接待活动对个人和学校的积极意义。最后，表达对活动的美好祝愿。写作过程中要注意语言规范，避免语法错误。 （2023·黑龙江大庆·中考真题）某国外中学生访问团将在暑假期间到访你的学校，参加文化交流活动。为顺利举办此次活动，做好接待工作，学校计划成立校园向导团。相关信息如下： Campus Guide WantedA group of foreign students are going to take part in an intercultural exchange project during the summer vacation in our school. We are planning to found a campus guide group to help them have a better experience during their visit. Write an e-mail to us if you want to join us! E-mail address: Eric123@100. com The Student Union 假设你是李华，想成为其中一员，请给学校相关工作负责人 Erie写一封邮件。 写作提示： 1. 表明意愿； 2. 阐述个人优势； 3. 说明此次接待活动的意义； 4. 表达你对此次活动的祝愿。 参考词汇： campus guide (校园向导) 写作要求： 1. 词数90 词左右 (开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数)； 2. 可适当添加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 不得泄露个人信息。 Dear Eric, I have known that our school wants some campus guides to receive the foreign students. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua One possible version: Dear Eric, I have known that our school wants some campus guides to receive the foreign students. I want to be a member of you. First of all, I’m easygoing and outgoing, so I’m good at communicating with others. What’s more, I have a good understanding of foreign cultures. Therefore, I can help those who come to our school better fit in with new environment as soon as possible. Last but not least, I can speak English well and it’s easy for us to chat with each other easily. From my point of view, this activity can not only improve my ability to work with other people, but also make our school known to more people. At the same time, I sincerely hope that the project can be a success and the foreign students will have a great time in our school. Li Hua 【知识点】个人信息 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出本文主题，表达自己的意愿； 第二步，阐述个人优势； 第三步，说明此次接待活动的意义； 第四步，表达你对此次活动的祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②be good at擅长 ③each other彼此 [高分句型] ①I have known that our school wants some campus guides to receive the foreign students.（宾语从句） ②Therefore, I can help those who come to our school better fit in with new environment as soon as possible.（who引导定语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在引导青少年思考自己的梦想，培养他们的自我认知和规划能力，同时激发他们为实现梦想而努力奋斗的精神。 内容把握：作文内容要清晰明确地阐述自己的梦想，包括梦想的变化及原因，还要说明为实现梦想所采取的行动。像这篇范文，先讲了曾经想当老师，后因奶奶离世想当医生，内容具体且合理。 能力考查：考查学生的语言表达能力、逻辑思维能力和对生活的观察与思考能力。比如在这篇作文中，作者能清晰地表达自己的想法和观点，逻辑连贯。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生写作能力的培养要求，如正确运用词汇、语法，清晰表达思想等。 解题思路：首先要明确自己的梦想，然后深入思考梦想的成因，最后规划实现梦想的具体步骤。写作时，语言要简洁明了，避免语法错误。 （2022·黑龙江大庆·中考真题）2022年令世人瞩目，在过去的半年里，涌现出了很多为了梦想拼搏奋斗的人物。例如，圆梦航天，胜利返航的神舟十三的3名宇航员；开场失利，永不言弃，最终夺得亚洲杯冠军的中国女足运动员……正是这种对梦想执着追求的精神，使得他们为祖国做出了突出贡献。作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么？请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇短文。 要点：1.你的梦想是什么？ 2.原因是什么？ 3.为此你会怎么做？ 注意：1.词数90左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。 My Dream ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Dream Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I am very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really good. I think my dream will come true one day. 【知识点】愿望、方法/策略、个人经历 【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，要求以“My Dream”为题，介绍自己的梦想，以及拥有这个梦想的原因，和为此会做些什么。写作时按说明文的格式来写。 2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来写。写作时，说明“梦想是什么”这一部分应用一般现在时；讲述拥有这个梦想的事件时，应用一般过去时；而在讲述为了实现梦想，“会做什么事”这一部分应用一般将来时。按照题目要求，先介绍“我”的梦想，再讲述拥有这一梦想的事件过程，最后列举为了实现梦想会做的事情并结尾。写作时注意三种时态的正确使用方法。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题旨在让学生回顾自己在初中升学体育考试中的经历，培养学生的回忆、总结和表达能力，同时引导学生认识到努力和收获的关系。 内容把握： 要求学生清晰地描述测试前的准备，包括项目选择和练习过程；明确交代测试结果；并分享在这个过程中的收获及感受。这样能全面展现学生对整个体育考试经历的理解和感悟。 能力考查： 考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力以及对词汇和语法的运用能力。比如能否准确描述动作、表达情感等。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生写作能力的培养要求，即能够用英语清晰、连贯地表达个人经历和感受。 解题思路： 首先，确定要写的内容框架，按照题目要求依次描述测试前准备、结果、收获及感受。在描述准备阶段，详细说明项目选择的原因和练习的具体情况；结果部分简洁明了地给出成绩；收获及感受部分要深入思考，体现个人成长。写作过程中，注意词汇和语法的正确使用，多运用学过的短语和句型，使文章更丰富生动。 （2021·黑龙江大庆·中考真题）2021年大庆初中升学体育考试已经过去，但却给你留下了深刻的印象。你决定向你校英文广播站投稿，分享你的备考经历与收获。 写作提示：1. 测试前准备（例如：项目选择，练习过程等等）；2. 测试结果；3. 收获及感受。 参考词汇： the solid ball (实心球)        jump rope (跳绳)        long jump (跳远) 写作要求：1. 词数80词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）；2. 写作过程中注意书写的规范和标点的正确使用；3. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；4. 可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 Though the physical test in Daqing entrance examination for senior middle school was over, it left me a deep impression. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Though the physical test in Daqing entrance examination for senior middle school was over, it left me a deep impression. I did a lot of pre-test preparations to choose the most proper sports event for me. At last, I chose the solid ball, jump rope and long jump. At first, I didn’t do well in jumping rope. But I didn’t give up. I stuck to doing it for three minutes downstairs after school every day. It was very difficult at first, but after half a month, I made a little progress each time. Finally, I could reach the standard of excellence. I did well in the solid ball and long jump as well. I not only got full marks in the middle school physical education examination, but also learned the spirit of never giving up. 【知识点】考试/竞赛、个人经历 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍自己初中升学体育考试的经历；注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍测试前的准备和测试结果；第三段介绍自己的收获和感受。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让即将毕业的同学总结初中学习经验，帮助学弟学妹更好地适应初中学习生活，培养学生的总结和分享能力。 内容把握： - 要求涵盖课前预习、课上做法、课后复习以及表达祝愿这几个方面，内容全面且具体。 - 比如课前预习提到要提前找出不理解的点，课上要认真听讲、积极做笔记、大胆提问，课后通过做练习和定期总结来复习。 能力考查： - 考查学生的语言组织和表达能力，能否清晰、有条理地阐述自己的学习经验。 - 也考查学生对不同学习阶段重点的把握和理解。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用和交流能力的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的想法和经验。 解题思路： - 首先，明确题目要求，确定要写的四个方面。 - 然后，针对每个方面，想出具体的做法和建议，用简单明了的语言表达出来。 - 注意语言的规范性和连贯性，使用恰当的连接词和句型，使文章通顺流畅。 （2020·黑龙江大庆·中考真题）你即将告别初中校园，请为学弟学妹们介绍一下初中的学习经验，帮助他们更好地适应初中的学习生活。 内容包括： 1、课前的自主预习； 2、课上的具体做法； 3、课后的复习方法； 4、表达祝愿。 写作要求： 1、词数为80左右；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2、写作过程中注意分段和标点；前三个要点至少各写出两句话； 3、句式灵活多样，行文连贯流畅； 4、文章中不得出现真实的学校名称及姓名。 I'd like to share some experience in studying. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 I’d like to share some experience in studying. If you want to be a good student, you must do three things. First, you must preview lessons for tomorrow in order to follow the teacher easily. Find out the points you don’t understand in advance. Second, you must listen to the teacher very carefully in class. This is very important because the teacher will explain the problems very clearly. Third, you must finish your homework on time. After you do homework, you will know what you have learned more clearly. Hopefully you can enjoy your school life and have a bright future. 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，题目已给出要点提示，只需要按照要点提示进行写作即可。时态应用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：【满分优秀范文】分三段，第一段用于引出给学弟学妹建议这个主题，第二段则根据要点提示给出了课前、课上、课后的学习建议，第三段则表达了对学弟学妹的祝福。【满分优秀范文】层次分明，要点齐全，思路清晰，熟练使用First、Second、Third等序数词，使句与句之间衔接自然流畅，是一篇优秀的【满分优秀范文】。 3.高分亮点： 短语：in order to，find out，in advance，listen to，on time。 句型： （1）If you want to be a good student, you must do three things.（if引导的条件状语从句） （2）Find out the points you don’t understand in advance.（祈使句） （3）This is very important because the teacher will explain the problems very clearly.（because引导的原因状语从句） 最新模拟 1．（2024·黑龙江大庆·一模）每个人都有自己喜欢的体育运动。你最喜欢的运动是什么？为什么喜欢它呢？请“My Favourite Sport”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的体育运动，并说明原因。 写作要点： 1. 最喜欢的运动； 2. 喜欢此项运动的原因。 写作要求 1. 不得出现真实姓名； 2. 字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，有条理； 3. 字数至少70字。 My Favourite Sport ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·黑龙江大庆·一模）运动有益身心健康。一所英语研究中心(English Research Center)正在对目前中学生最喜欢的运动项目展开调查。请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的运动项目。要点如下： 1. 你最喜欢的运动是什么； 2. 你喜欢这项运动的原因； 3. 你从这项运动中学到了什么。 注意： 1. 词数80—100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Doing sports makes people happy and healthy. 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3．（2024·黑龙江大庆·二模）法国雕塑家罗丹曾说过：“美是到处都有的。对于我们的眼睛，不是缺少美，而是缺少发现。”在我们的生活中，有很多美好的人和事。请分享一次你发现美或者创造美的经历，并谈谈你的感受。 参考信息： 1. 你的经历； 2. 你的感受； 3. …… 要求： 1. 词数90词左右； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 The beauty in life 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4．（2024·黑龙江大庆·三模）在热播电影《热辣滚烫》中，无论是演员贾玲，还是主角乐莹都通过坚持不懈地努力，实现了自己的人生价值，开启了 “热辣滚烫” 的生活。作为九年级的学生，我们正需要不屈不挠的毅力，不断拼搏的勇气，全力坚持做好每一件小事，成就更好的自己。请以 “We Can Make It” 为主题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。 内容包括： 1. 点明演讲主题； 2. 最近或多年来你坚持并全力以赴去做的一件事及理由； 3. 这件事或这份经历给你的学习和生活带来了怎样的影响。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 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5．（2024·黑龙江大庆·三模）中华民族历来就是一个礼仪之邦。《论语》中说“不学礼，无以立。”作为一名中学生，我们也应该讲文明、重礼仪，不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a student with good manners”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容必须包括以下要点： 1. 叙述一次生活中文明或不文明的事例（时间、地点、人物、经过）； 2. 就如何成为一名有文明素养的中学生提出自己的建议或看法（不少于两点）。 要求： 1. 词数90词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当添加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 不得泄露个人信息。 Be a student with good manners It’s very important to be a student with good manners in our daily life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·黑龙江大庆·二模）时光荏苒，初中四年转瞬即逝。回首，四年的成长定会带给你一些体会与感受。假设你是李平，请你以初四毕业生的身份，根据以下流程图用英语给学弟、学妹们写一封信，谈一谈“如何成为一名出色的中学生”。 How to be an excellent student quality Be honest, be thankful, be polite study Work hard, develop good habits, have good methods , encourage and help each other health Have healthy food, do sports Dear new friends, It’s my pleasure to write to you. As middle school students, I think it’s our duty to be excellent. I think we have lots of things to do. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·黑龙江大庆·二模）初中生活忙碌而充实，有汲取知识的欢乐，也有即将面临中考的压力。你校为了缓解学生压力，将以“How to keep healthy”为题，举行一次演讲。假如你是九年一班的John，请你谈 谈九年级学生在迎接中考阶段如何保持身心健康，用英语写出你的具体做法。内容必须包括表格中的提示要点。 要求： (1)词数90词左右 (开头和结尾已写好, 不计入总词数) (2)可适当添加细节，使行文连贯 (3)不得泄露个人信息。 How to keep healthy Dear classmates, I am John from Class 1 Grade 9. Today I will tell you what I do to keep healthy in my life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe we Grade 9 students will achieve success as long as we try our best. 8．（2024·黑龙江大庆·一模）2024年3月，河北邯郸一名初中生被同学残忍杀害，此消息震惊全国，为杜绝校园欺凌（say no to school bully），打造和谐安定校园（build a harmonious and stable campus），作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语作文。 提示：1.尊敬老师（respect the teachers），努力学习，锻炼身体，培养一个兴趣爱好。 2.与同学融洽相处（get on well with），互相帮助。 3.不要与他人吵架，不偷盗他人物品。 4.遵守学校的规章制度（follow the school rules），不下河洗澡，不携带管制刀具（restricted knives）。 5.不要私自会见陌生人，遇险应报警。 要求： 1.语句通顺，语意连贯。 2.运用以上提示词，内容可适当发挥。 3.词数90-100，作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 It’s important for us students to build a harmonious and stable campus. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·黑龙江大庆·一模）劳动课（labor course）已正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。你校英语校刊English Garden开展了一项关于家务活和学校劳动课的调查。请你根据调查表内容，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。 We’re conducting a survey on housework and labor course in our school. We would like you to share your ideas about housework and labor course. We need your ideas.●What housework do you often do at home? ●What are the advantages of doing housework? ●What advice can you offer on labor course in our school? Looking forward to hearing from you. 要求： (1) 词数90词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）； (2) 可适当添加细节，使行文连贯； (3) 不得泄露个人信息。 I am glad to share my ideas about housework and labor course. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 63 黑龙江大庆 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在引导学生思考劳动的重要性，以及劳动对个人生活的积极影响，同时考查学生用英语表达自己在劳动方面的经历和感受的能力。 内容把握： - 作者开篇点明劳动的重要性，接着讲述自己擅长烹饪，会在周末为父母做饭，阐述了烹饪带来的感受，如能增强独立性、让父母放心等，还提到未来想学习种树以美化家乡。内容丰富，紧扣题目要求。 能力考查： - 考查学生的语言表达能力，如准确运用词汇和句型。 - 考查逻辑思维能力，文章条理清晰，有明确的叙述顺序。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用、情感表达和思维发展的要求。 解题思路： - 首先，明确题目要求，确定写作主题为“劳动让生活更美好”。 - 然后，选择自己擅长的劳动技能进行描述，如文中的烹饪。 - 接着，详细阐述在劳动中的感受和益处，像作者提到的增强独立性、培养责任感等。 - 最后，可适当展望未来，如作者想要学习种树。 （2024·黑龙江大庆·中考真题）习近平总书记说：“人世间的一切幸福都需要靠辛勤的劳动来创造。”劳动可以增强体质，提升自信，培养责任感。在生活中，你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能，比如洗衣、做饭、打扫教室等。现学校英语报正在征集关于“劳动”的稿件，请你以“Labor(劳动) Makes a Better Life”为题，写一篇稿件。 内容包括： 1. 你擅长哪项劳动技能? 2. 在劳动中你有什么感受? 3. 劳动给你带来了什么益处? 参考词汇：build up one’s body (增强体质) develop a sense of duty (培养责任感) 写作要求： 1. 词数应为90个左右； 2. 可适当添加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 不得泄露个人信息。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Labor Makes a Better Life As we all know, labor plays an important role in our lives. I am very good at cooking. I always cook meals for my parents when I am free on weekends. I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking. I can learn how to take good care of myself instead of making my parents worry about me. Labor can also develop a sense of duty. In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful. 【知识点】劳动实践、计划 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Labor Makes a Better Life”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍擅长的一项劳动技能是什么； 第二步，介绍这项劳动技能给你带来什么益处； 第三步，介绍打算学习其他什么劳动技能。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②on weekends在周末 ③take good care of照顾好 ④In the future在未来 [高分句型] ①I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②In the future, I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful.（so that引导的目的状语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题的命题意图是考查学生的英语书面表达能力，以及对实际情境的理解和应对能力。通过让学生写邮件申请成为校园向导，来检验学生是否能够清晰地表达自己的意愿、展示个人优势、理解活动的意义并表达恰当的祝愿。 内容把握：题目提供了明确的背景信息，即外国学生访问团将到访学校，需要成立校园向导团。学生在写作时要围绕这个背景展开，内容应包括表明意愿、阐述个人优势、说明活动意义和表达祝愿。 能力考查：主要考查学生的语言运用能力，如词汇、语法的正确使用，以及逻辑思维和组织能力，能否有条理地阐述观点。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语写作的要求，如语言表达准确、流畅，内容完整、有逻辑。 解题思路：首先，在邮件开头要直接表明自己希望成为校园向导的意愿。然后，分点阐述个人优势，如性格、文化理解、语言能力等方面。接着，说明此次接待活动对个人和学校的积极意义。最后，表达对活动的美好祝愿。写作过程中要注意语言规范，避免语法错误。 （2023·黑龙江大庆·中考真题）某国外中学生访问团将在暑假期间到访你的学校，参加文化交流活动。为顺利举办此次活动，做好接待工作，学校计划成立校园向导团。相关信息如下： Campus Guide WantedA group of foreign students are going to take part in an intercultural exchange project during the summer vacation in our school. We are planning to found a campus guide group to help them have a better experience during their visit. Write an e-mail to us if you want to join us! E-mail address: Eric123@100. com The Student Union 假设你是李华，想成为其中一员，请给学校相关工作负责人 Erie写一封邮件。 写作提示： 1. 表明意愿； 2. 阐述个人优势； 3. 说明此次接待活动的意义； 4. 表达你对此次活动的祝愿。 参考词汇： campus guide (校园向导) 写作要求： 1. 词数90 词左右 (开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数)； 2. 可适当添加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 不得泄露个人信息。 Dear Eric, I have known that our school wants some campus guides to receive the foreign students. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua One possible version: Dear Eric, I have known that our school wants some campus guides to receive the foreign students. I want to be a member of you. First of all, I’m easygoing and outgoing, so I’m good at communicating with others. What’s more, I have a good understanding of foreign cultures. Therefore, I can help those who come to our school better fit in with new environment as soon as possible. Last but not least, I can speak English well and it’s easy for us to chat with each other easily. From my point of view, this activity can not only improve my ability to work with other people, but also make our school known to more people. At the same time, I sincerely hope that the project can be a success and the foreign students will have a great time in our school. Li Hua 【知识点】个人信息 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出本文主题，表达自己的意愿； 第二步，阐述个人优势； 第三步，说明此次接待活动的意义； 第四步，表达你对此次活动的祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②be good at擅长 ③each other彼此 [高分句型] ①I have known that our school wants some campus guides to receive the foreign students.（宾语从句） ②Therefore, I can help those who come to our school better fit in with new environment as soon as possible.（who引导定语从句） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道作文题旨在引导青少年思考自己的梦想，培养他们的自我认知和规划能力，同时激发他们为实现梦想而努力奋斗的精神。 内容把握：作文内容要清晰明确地阐述自己的梦想，包括梦想的变化及原因，还要说明为实现梦想所采取的行动。像这篇范文，先讲了曾经想当老师，后因奶奶离世想当医生，内容具体且合理。 能力考查：考查学生的语言表达能力、逻辑思维能力和对生活的观察与思考能力。比如在这篇作文中，作者能清晰地表达自己的想法和观点，逻辑连贯。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生写作能力的培养要求，如正确运用词汇、语法，清晰表达思想等。 解题思路：首先要明确自己的梦想，然后深入思考梦想的成因，最后规划实现梦想的具体步骤。写作时，语言要简洁明了，避免语法错误。 （2022·黑龙江大庆·中考真题）2022年令世人瞩目，在过去的半年里，涌现出了很多为了梦想拼搏奋斗的人物。例如，圆梦航天，胜利返航的神舟十三的3名宇航员；开场失利，永不言弃，最终夺得亚洲杯冠军的中国女足运动员……正是这种对梦想执着追求的精神，使得他们为祖国做出了突出贡献。作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么？请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇短文。 要点：1.你的梦想是什么？ 2.原因是什么？ 3.为此你会怎么做？ 注意：1.词数90左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。 My Dream ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Dream Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I am very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really good. I think my dream will come true one day. 【知识点】愿望、方法/策略、个人经历 【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，要求以“My Dream”为题，介绍自己的梦想，以及拥有这个梦想的原因，和为此会做些什么。写作时按说明文的格式来写。 2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来写。写作时，说明“梦想是什么”这一部分应用一般现在时；讲述拥有这个梦想的事件时，应用一般过去时；而在讲述为了实现梦想，“会做什么事”这一部分应用一般将来时。按照题目要求，先介绍“我”的梦想，再讲述拥有这一梦想的事件过程，最后列举为了实现梦想会做的事情并结尾。写作时注意三种时态的正确使用方法。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道作文题旨在让学生回顾自己在初中升学体育考试中的经历，培养学生的回忆、总结和表达能力，同时引导学生认识到努力和收获的关系。 内容把握： 要求学生清晰地描述测试前的准备，包括项目选择和练习过程；明确交代测试结果；并分享在这个过程中的收获及感受。这样能全面展现学生对整个体育考试经历的理解和感悟。 能力考查： 考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力以及对词汇和语法的运用能力。比如能否准确描述动作、表达情感等。 课标要求： 符合课程标准中对学生写作能力的培养要求，即能够用英语清晰、连贯地表达个人经历和感受。 解题思路： 首先，确定要写的内容框架，按照题目要求依次描述测试前准备、结果、收获及感受。在描述准备阶段，详细说明项目选择的原因和练习的具体情况；结果部分简洁明了地给出成绩；收获及感受部分要深入思考，体现个人成长。写作过程中，注意词汇和语法的正确使用，多运用学过的短语和句型，使文章更丰富生动。 （2021·黑龙江大庆·中考真题）2021年大庆初中升学体育考试已经过去，但却给你留下了深刻的印象。你决定向你校英文广播站投稿，分享你的备考经历与收获。 写作提示：1. 测试前准备（例如：项目选择，练习过程等等）；2. 测试结果；3. 收获及感受。 参考词汇： the solid ball (实心球)        jump rope (跳绳)        long jump (跳远) 写作要求：1. 词数80词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）；2. 写作过程中注意书写的规范和标点的正确使用；3. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；4. 可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 Though the physical test in Daqing entrance examination for senior middle school was over, it left me a deep impression. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Though the physical test in Daqing entrance examination for senior middle school was over, it left me a deep impression. I did a lot of pre-test preparations to choose the most proper sports event for me. At last, I chose the solid ball, jump rope and long jump. At first, I didn’t do well in jumping rope. But I didn’t give up. I stuck to doing it for three minutes downstairs after school every day. It was very difficult at first, but after half a month, I made a little progress each time. Finally, I could reach the standard of excellence. I did well in the solid ball and long jump as well. I not only got full marks in the middle school physical education examination, but also learned the spirit of never giving up. 【知识点】考试/竞赛、个人经历 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍自己初中升学体育考试的经历；注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍测试前的准备和测试结果；第三段介绍自己的收获和感受。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让即将毕业的同学总结初中学习经验，帮助学弟学妹更好地适应初中学习生活，培养学生的总结和分享能力。 内容把握： - 要求涵盖课前预习、课上做法、课后复习以及表达祝愿这几个方面，内容全面且具体。 - 比如课前预习提到要提前找出不理解的点，课上要认真听讲、积极做笔记、大胆提问，课后通过做练习和定期总结来复习。 能力考查： - 考查学生的语言组织和表达能力，能否清晰、有条理地阐述自己的学习经验。 - 也考查学生对不同学习阶段重点的把握和理解。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用和交流能力的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的想法和经验。 解题思路： - 首先，明确题目要求，确定要写的四个方面。 - 然后，针对每个方面，想出具体的做法和建议，用简单明了的语言表达出来。 - 注意语言的规范性和连贯性，使用恰当的连接词和句型，使文章通顺流畅。 （2020·黑龙江大庆·中考真题）你即将告别初中校园，请为学弟学妹们介绍一下初中的学习经验，帮助他们更好地适应初中的学习生活。 内容包括： 1、课前的自主预习； 2、课上的具体做法； 3、课后的复习方法； 4、表达祝愿。 写作要求： 1、词数为80左右；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2、写作过程中注意分段和标点；前三个要点至少各写出两句话； 3、句式灵活多样，行文连贯流畅； 4、文章中不得出现真实的学校名称及姓名。 I'd like to share some experience in studying. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 I’d like to share some experience in studying. If you want to be a good student, you must do three things. First, you must preview lessons for tomorrow in order to follow the teacher easily. Find out the points you don’t understand in advance. Second, you must listen to the teacher very carefully in class. This is very important because the teacher will explain the problems very clearly. Third, you must finish your homework on time. After you do homework, you will know what you have learned more clearly. Hopefully you can enjoy your school life and have a bright future. 【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，题目已给出要点提示，只需要按照要点提示进行写作即可。时态应用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：【满分优秀范文】分三段，第一段用于引出给学弟学妹建议这个主题，第二段则根据要点提示给出了课前、课上、课后的学习建议，第三段则表达了对学弟学妹的祝福。【满分优秀范文】层次分明，要点齐全，思路清晰，熟练使用First、Second、Third等序数词，使句与句之间衔接自然流畅，是一篇优秀的【满分优秀范文】。 3.高分亮点： 短语：in order to，find out，in advance，listen to，on time。 句型： （1）If you want to be a good student, you must do three things.（if引导的条件状语从句） （2）Find out the points you don’t understand in advance.（祈使句） （3）This is very important because the teacher will explain the problems very clearly.（because引导的原因状语从句） 最新模拟 1．（2024·黑龙江大庆·一模）每个人都有自己喜欢的体育运动。你最喜欢的运动是什么？为什么喜欢它呢？请“My Favourite Sport”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的体育运动，并说明原因。 写作要点： 1. 最喜欢的运动； 2. 喜欢此项运动的原因。 写作要求 1. 不得出现真实姓名； 2. 字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，有条理； 3. 字数至少70字。 My Favourite Sport ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·黑龙江大庆·一模）运动有益身心健康。一所英语研究中心(English Research Center)正在对目前中学生最喜欢的运动项目展开调查。请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的运动项目。要点如下： 1. 你最喜欢的运动是什么； 2. 你喜欢这项运动的原因； 3. 你从这项运动中学到了什么。 注意： 1. 词数80—100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Doing sports makes people happy and healthy. 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3．（2024·黑龙江大庆·二模）法国雕塑家罗丹曾说过：“美是到处都有的。对于我们的眼睛，不是缺少美，而是缺少发现。”在我们的生活中，有很多美好的人和事。请分享一次你发现美或者创造美的经历，并谈谈你的感受。 参考信息： 1. 你的经历； 2. 你的感受； 3. …… 要求： 1. 词数90词左右； 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 The beauty in life 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4．（2024·黑龙江大庆·三模）在热播电影《热辣滚烫》中，无论是演员贾玲，还是主角乐莹都通过坚持不懈地努力，实现了自己的人生价值，开启了 “热辣滚烫” 的生活。作为九年级的学生，我们正需要不屈不挠的毅力，不断拼搏的勇气，全力坚持做好每一件小事，成就更好的自己。请以 “We Can Make It” 为主题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。 内容包括： 1. 点明演讲主题； 2. 最近或多年来你坚持并全力以赴去做的一件事及理由； 3. 这件事或这份经历给你的学习和生活带来了怎样的影响。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 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5．（2024·黑龙江大庆·三模）中华民族历来就是一个礼仪之邦。《论语》中说“不学礼，无以立。”作为一名中学生，我们也应该讲文明、重礼仪，不断提升文明素养，做文明礼仪的倡导者。请以“Be a student with good manners”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容必须包括以下要点： 1. 叙述一次生活中文明或不文明的事例（时间、地点、人物、经过）； 2. 就如何成为一名有文明素养的中学生提出自己的建议或看法（不少于两点）。 要求： 1. 词数90词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当添加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 不得泄露个人信息。 Be a student with good manners It’s very important to be a student with good manners in our daily life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·黑龙江大庆·二模）时光荏苒，初中四年转瞬即逝。回首，四年的成长定会带给你一些体会与感受。假设你是李平，请你以初四毕业生的身份，根据以下流程图用英语给学弟、学妹们写一封信，谈一谈“如何成为一名出色的中学生”。 How to be an excellent student quality Be honest, be thankful, be polite study Work hard, develop good habits, have good methods , encourage and help each other health Have healthy food, do sports Dear new friends, It’s my pleasure to write to you. As middle school students, I think it’s our duty to be excellent. I think we have lots of things to do. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·黑龙江大庆·二模）初中生活忙碌而充实，有汲取知识的欢乐，也有即将面临中考的压力。你校为了缓解学生压力，将以“How to keep healthy”为题，举行一次演讲。假如你是九年一班的John，请你谈 谈九年级学生在迎接中考阶段如何保持身心健康，用英语写出你的具体做法。内容必须包括表格中的提示要点。 要求： (1)词数90词左右 (开头和结尾已写好, 不计入总词数) (2)可适当添加细节，使行文连贯 (3)不得泄露个人信息。 How to keep healthy Dear classmates, I am John from Class 1 Grade 9. Today I will tell you what I do to keep healthy in my life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe we Grade 9 students will achieve success as long as we try our best. 8．（2024·黑龙江大庆·一模）2024年3月，河北邯郸一名初中生被同学残忍杀害，此消息震惊全国，为杜绝校园欺凌（say no to school bully），打造和谐安定校园（build a harmonious and stable campus），作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语作文。 提示：1.尊敬老师（respect the teachers），努力学习，锻炼身体，培养一个兴趣爱好。 2.与同学融洽相处（get on well with），互相帮助。 3.不要与他人吵架，不偷盗他人物品。 4.遵守学校的规章制度（follow the school rules），不下河洗澡，不携带管制刀具（restricted knives）。 5.不要私自会见陌生人，遇险应报警。 要求： 1.语句通顺，语意连贯。 2.运用以上提示词，内容可适当发挥。 3.词数90-100，作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 It’s important for us students to build a harmonious and stable campus. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·黑龙江大庆·一模）劳动课（labor course）已正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。你校英语校刊English Garden开展了一项关于家务活和学校劳动课的调查。请你根据调查表内容，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。 We’re conducting a survey on housework and labor course in our school. We would like you to share your ideas about housework and labor course. We need your ideas.●What housework do you often do at home? ●What are the advantages of doing housework? ●What advice can you offer on labor course in our school? Looking forward to hearing from you. 要求： (1) 词数90词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）； (2) 可适当添加细节，使行文连贯； (3) 不得泄露个人信息。 I am glad to share my ideas about housework and labor course. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 My Favorite Sport I like sports very much, such as running, skating, playing basketball and so on. My favorite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy. It is also a good way to lose weight. If you want to keep fit, you can have a try. I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. Now I can swim very well. I usually spend an hour swimming in the swimming pool every Sunday. Swimming is really very interesting. If you swim in the water, you will look like a lovely fish. And I’m sure you will feel very happy. My favorite swimming player is Sun Yang. I hope I will become a swimming player when I grow up. 【知识点】爱好、健康与运动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，点出最喜欢的运动； 第二步，介绍喜欢此项运动的原因； 第三步，谈谈未来的打算。 [亮点词汇] ①strong and healthy身强体壮 ②look like看起来像 ③grow up长大 [高分句型] ①My favorite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy.（原因状语从句） ②And I’m sure you will feel very happy.（宾语从句） 2．【满分优秀范文】 Doing sports makes people happy and healthy. Dancing is my favorite sport, which can make me look much prettier and healthier. Whenever I was free, I danced to popular songs with my roommate. Both of us enjoyed it a lot. At first, we just danced to the music and we even didn’t know how to dance correctly. However, as the saying goes, practice makes perfect. The more we practise, the better we dance. The reason why I like dancing is that it can bring me happiness and help me keep healthy. Besides, dancing is also my dream in my childhood. Though I am still not good at dancing, I love it, because what it brought to me has greatly changed my life. By dancing, I become more outgoing and confident in talking with others. 【知识点】爱好、健康与运动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己最喜欢的运动； 第二步，具体阐述自己喜欢这项运动的原因； 第三步，阐述自己从这项运动中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①keep healthy保持健康 ②be good at擅长 ③talk with sb.与某人交谈 [高分句型] ①Dancing is my favorite sport, which can make me look much prettier and healthier.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②Though I am still not good at dancing, I love it, because what it brought to me has greatly changed my life.（though引导的让步状语从句） 3．【满分优秀范文】 The beauty in life The world is full of beauty as long as we have a pair of eyes to find it out. Maybe a small plant on the roadside can be the most beautiful scenery for its special meaning. It was a cloudy day and I was on my way to school sadly because I had difficulty in spoken English. Suddenly, a small sunflower on the road caught my eyes. It looked tiny and weak but it was trying to grow taller and stronger. There wasn’t even much soil and I couldn’t imagine how the seed could grow in the rubble. However, it succeeded in growing up no matter how the wind blew or the sun shone. At that time, I realized that it was its persistent efforts that helped it be seen and praised by people. As the old saying goes, perseverance pays off. I believe if I stick to practicing speaking English every morning, I will finally achieve my goal. 【知识点】个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容分享你在生活中发现美的经历及感受，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出文章话题； 第二步，具体介绍一件让你发现美的经历； 第三步，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be full of充满 ②have difficulty in sth在某事上有困难 ③succeed in doing sth成功做某事 [高分句型] ①It was a cloudy day and I was on my way to school sadly because I had difficulty in spoken English.（because引导原因状语从句） ②At that time, I realized that it was its persistent efforts that helped it be seen and praised by people.（that引导宾语从句） ③I believe if I stick to practicing speaking English every morning, I will finally achieve my goal.（if引导条件状语从句） 4．【满分优秀范文】 Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to make a speech here. Have you ever tried your best to do one thing? Have you ever lived your life to the fullest? Today I want to share the thing I keep doing these years with you. When I was in Grade 7, I couldn’t speak English well because of my poor pronunciation, so I was always laughed at by others. I made up my mind to improve my spoken English no matter how hard it was for me at that time. These years I get up at 5 o’clock every morning so that I can spend at least half an hour practicing speaking English. To correct my pronunciation, I also read English aloud after the tape every day. Now my English has greatly improved. This learning experience has made a great difference to my life. I am not as shy as I used to be. Besides, when facing difficulties in study, I will never give up. I’m ready to meet any challenge in the future. Thank you! 【知识点】哲理感悟、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明演讲主题，说明最近或多年来你坚持并全力以赴去做的一件事； 第二步，介绍最近或多年来你坚持并全力以赴去做的一件事及理由； 第三步，介绍这件事或这份经历给你的学习和生活带来了怎样的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①make up my mind to do sth.下定决心去做某事 ②make a great difference to对……产生巨大影响 ③as…as和……一样 [高分句型] ①I made up my mind to improve my spoken English no matter how hard it was for me at that time.（no matter how引导让步状语从句） ②These years I get up at 5 o’clock every morning so that I can spend at least half an hour practicing speaking English.（so that引导目的状语从句） 5．【满分优秀范文】： Be a student with good manners It’s very important to be a student with good manners in our daily life. Last Monday morning, I went to school with my classmate Liu Tao by bus. There were many people on the bus. When an old woman got on the bus, Liu Tao stood up and gave his seat to her. The old woman thanked Liu Tao for his kindness. I thought Liu Tao was very kind. But sometimes I see some bad manners around us. For example, some people push in before others or drop litter everywhere. As students, we should behave well when we are in public places. And we should give a hand when we see someone in need. We shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. We should be a civilized middle school student. 【知识点】意见/建议、礼仪与习俗 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己的观点——在日常生活中，做一个有礼貌的学生是很重要的； 第二步，叙述一次生活中文明或不文明的事例； 第三步，就如何成为一名有文明素养的中学生提出自己的建议或看法。 [亮点词汇] ①stand up站起来 ②thank sb. for sth.为某事感谢某人 ③give a hand帮助 ④for example例如 [高分句型] ①When an old woman got on the bus, Liu Tao stood up and gave his seat to her.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②There were many people on the bus.(there be句型) 6．【满分优秀范文】 Dear new friends, It’s my pleasure to write to you. As middle school students, I think it’s our duty to be excellent. I think we have lots of things to do. First of all, we should learn to be honest and thankful. We should also be friendly to others and behave politely in public. Moreover, we should develop our good study habits and keep interested in every subject. We should work hard as well. At the same time, it’s wise to have good methods to learn, such as listening to the teacher carefully, taking notes in class and so on. Finally, it’s helpful to be in good health. We must have enough healthy food and sleep well. We’d better spend at least an hour doing sports every day. If we follow these, we will be excellent! Wish you a bright future! Yours, Li Ping 【知识点】方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何成为一名出色的中学生，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍如何成为一名出生的中学生； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be friendly to对……友好 ②at the same time同时 ③and so on等等 ④spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事 [高分句型] ①At the same time, it’s wise to have good methods to learn, such as listening to the teacher carefully, taking notes in class and so on. (动词不定式作主语) ②If we follow these, we will be excellent! Wish you a bright future! (if引导的条件状语从句) 7．【满分优秀范文】 How to keep healthy Dear classmates, I am John from Class 1 Grade 9. Today I will tell you what I do to keep healthy in my life. It is important to keep physically healthy. So I try to have a healthy diet. I have milk every day and always remind myself to eat more fruit and vegetables. Also, I keep doing exercise. Whenever I have time, I practise volleyball or go running. Having enough sleep is necessary as well. I manage my time properly and plan my day carefully. As a result, I seldom stay up late. At the same time, I do my best to keep mentally healthy. Good communication is of great help. I share my worries with my parents and classmates. If I have problems, I will turn to my teachers for help. Besides, I get relaxed by listening to music. I like folk music best as it has strong local colour. I believe we Grade 9 students will achieve success as long as we try our best. 【知识点】健康与运动、健康饮食、方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍如何保持身体健康，根据表格所给的三个要点进行说明； 第二步，介绍如何保持心理健康，根据表格所给的两个要点进行说明。 [亮点词汇] ①remind提醒 ②necessary有必要的 ③stay up熬夜 ④strong local colour强烈的当地色彩 [高分句型] ①Whenever I have time, I practise volleyball or go running. (时间状语从句) ② If I have problems, I will turn to my teachers for help. (条件状语从句) 8．【满分优秀范文】： It’s important for us students to build a harmonious and stable campus. Recently, school-bullying is a hot topic again. Students showed their fear and parents and teachers also expressed their great concern about it. Our class had a heated discussion and we have reached some agreements on how to solve the problem. First of all, we should respect the teachers, study hard and do some exercise to keep healthy. Then we can develop some hobbies, like playing basketball. Next, we should get on well with other students and help each other. What’s more, don’t argue with others and do not steal their belongings. More importantly, follow the school rules, never swim in the river alone and don’t carry restricted knives. Last but not least, don’t meet strangers privately, and if you are in danger, you should call the police in time. All in all, every student should behave himself and keep away from school-bullying. 【知识点】意见/建议、青少年问题、校园安全 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态是“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点信息，可适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据开头，引出话题：我们应该怎么做； 第二步，根据提示，具体介绍我们应该做的事情； 第三步，书写结语：规范自己的行为，远离校园欺凌。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②study hard努力学习 ③argue with与……争吵 ④in danger处于危险 ⑤all in all总之 [高分句型] ①Last but not least, don’t meet strangers privately, and if you are in danger, you should call the police in time.（否定祈使句，if引导的条件状语从句） 9．【满分优秀范文】 I am glad to share my ideas about housework and labor course. Doing housework plays an important part in middle school students’ lives. So I often do housework, such as washing dishes, sweeping the floor, cooking and so on. I think middle school students should do housework. Here are three reasons. First of all, doing some housework can make us independent, because we can’t depend on others all our life. What’s more, it is a good way to keep us healthy and strong by doing housework. In order to make ourselves better, it is necessary for us to do house-work at home in our free time. As for how to run the course in our school, the school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning, grow plants and make breakfast. 【知识点】家庭生活 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：按照调查表内容提示要点，依次逐一陈述；同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，列举自己做的家务并表明态度； 第二步，详细阐述做家务活的好处； 第三步，对学校劳动课程提出建议并结尾。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important part起重要作用 ②First of all首先 ③What’s more而且 ④As for至于 [高分句型] ①First of all, doing some housework can make us independent, because we can’t depend on others all our life.（动名词作主语，because引导原因状语从句） ②What’s more, it is a good way to keep us healthy and strong by doing housework.（it作形式主语） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$