专题05-2 读后续写高分句式之心理情绪情感描写 - 2025届新高考英语读后续写提分讲练测

专题05-2 读后续写高分句式（原卷版） 心理/情绪情感描写高分句式 心理/情绪情感描写高分句式 心理/情绪情感描写描写指描写语篇中的人物在特定情境中的心理状态、精神面貌或者内心情感活动。语篇中的心理描写可以反映人物的性格，展示彼时彼刻人物的内心世界，并可以刻画人物的形象，突出人物的特点。有的心理描写可以表达人物的感受；有的则可以表达人物的情绪。 构建公式1　adj.作状语 课本典例 翻译练习 Surprised and terrified at the same time, I could only agree. 我既惊讶又害怕，只能同意。 1.我失望又悲伤，忍不住思考，当其他孩子问我得到了什么时，我要说什么。 Disappointed and sad, I couldn't help thinking what I would say when the other kids asked what I'd got. 2.我满怀热情和竞争精神，全身心地投入到比赛之中，这激发了我对跳出思维定式的热爱。 Full of enthusiasm and the spirit of competition, I threw myself into the contest, which sparked my love of thinking outside the box. 句式仿写 1.我非常急切和兴奋地走进他的房间，用我那双闪烁着满足的光芒的眼睛表达了我诚挚的谢意。（2023•新高考I卷） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.大卫低着头静静地坐着，郁郁寡欢。（2022•新高考I卷） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.担心自己可能会失败，我什么也说不出来，只能焦急地等待结果。（2023•新高考I卷） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.似乎过了很长时间，大卫冲过了终点线，筋疲力尽但又激动不已。（2022•新高考I卷） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.Hilda 对此事感到沮丧，但并没有气馁，她决定暗中监视 Maya。（2024• 九省新高考适应性考试） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 构建公式2　with＋表示情感的抽象名词 高考典例 翻译练习 (2023·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)She would have struggled with extreme pain to make it to that aid checkpoint without Bailey's help.　如果没有贝利的帮助，她会在极度痛苦之中挣扎着到达那个援助检查站。 1.一看到那只凶猛的狼，她就吓得睁大了眼睛。 At the sight of the fierce wolf, she opened her eyes wide open with fear． 2.一看到那只凶猛的狮子，我吓得僵住了。 On seeing that fierce lion, I felt so scared that I froze with terror． 伴随着喜悦：with delight / excitement /  pleasure / happiness / joy 伴随着满足：with satisfaction 伴随着生气：with anger / rage 伴随着焦虑：with anxiety 伴随着困惑：with confusion/puzzlement 伴随着耐心：with patience 伴随着恐惧：with fear / terror 伴随着尴尬：with embarrassment 伴随着自豪：with pride 句式仿写 1.她满怀自豪和高兴地解释说，这些都是来自墨西哥的特产。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.他转向我，眼中充满了恐惧。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.一见到丈夫Tom，Jane就立刻拥抱了他，眼睛里充满了喜悦。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 构建公式3　to one's (great) ＋情绪名词/much to one's ＋情绪名词 续写典例 翻译练习 To my surprise, though I had treated my group members badly before, I was surrounded and warmly welcomed by them the moment I entered the classroom. 令我惊讶的是，虽然我之前对待我的小组成员不好，但我一进入教室就被他们包围并受到他们的热烈欢迎。 1.令我非常吃惊的是，许多人来询问我问题并买了我的书。 Much to my surprise, a number of people came up to ask me questions and bought my book. 2.令我失望的是，经过一次又一次的修改，我的文章仍然不符合要求。 To my disappointment, having been revised again and again, my essay still failed to meet the requirements. 要想这个句子学好，必须积累情绪名词，比如： 【正态度】amazement惊奇, delight高兴, joy高兴, satisfaction满足，excitement兴奋 【负态度】annoyance烦恼,  disappointment失望, horror恐怖, shame,羞耻 sorrow悲伤 【中性态度】puzzlement迷惑, regret后悔, relief欣慰, surprise/ amazement惊讶 To my surprise,Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest. 令我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。 构建公式4　情感拟人化 高考典例 翻译练习 (2022·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)I bit back my frustration. I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the right thing. 我强忍住自己的懊恼。我知道教练的本意是好的——他认为他正在做正确的事。 1.他被恐怖笼罩了。　Fear entirely seized him. 2.他突然感到不寒而栗。　A chill of horror suddenly swept over him. 3.到目前为止，乐观变成了怀疑。　By now, optimism has given way to doubt. 4.我气得说不出话。　Anger choked me. 5.我们激动得喘不过气来。　Excitement took our breath away． 6.喜悦的泪水从她的脸上滑落。Tears of joy streamed down her face． 7.他站了起来，拥抱着他的父母，微笑着，尽力不让自己的情绪控制自己。 He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions get the better of him. 8.每个人都离开后，我突然感到一阵子孤独。 After everyone left, I was suddenly seized with/by a feeling of loneliness． 9.当她听到她赢得一等奖的消息时，她欣喜若狂。 When she heard the announcement that she won the first prize, a wild joy took hold of her. 10.他的脸上露出灿烂的笑容。　A shining smile spread across his face. “a wave of+情绪名词+固定动词+sb” A wave of sorrow washed over me as I heard the bad news. A strong sense of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the news. 描述心情的名词 happiness/joy/delight 开心 anger/rage/fury 狂怒 sadness/sorrow/grief 悲伤 gratitude/appreciation 感激 admiration 钦佩/赞赏 guilt/remorse 愧疚/悔恨 fear/terror/fright/panic 害怕/恐慌 astonishment/shock/surprise 震惊 动词 seize catch (caught过去式) strike (struck 过去式) surround take hold of wash over come over         +sb. 有行为意义的名词：“一见到/一想到” The sight/thought of sth made sb+情绪形容词：一见/想到sth，某人---      At the sight/thought of sth, sb did sth: 一见/想到sth，某人---              句式仿写 1.当主持人开始宣读获奖名单时，我感到一阵焦虑，心脏怦怦直跳。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.一想到考试失败，他就万念俱灰。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.当我的名字被宣布时，一种兴奋之情涌上心头。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.当他们的母亲意识到发生了什么时，一股骄傲和温暖的感觉席卷了她。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 构建公式5　细节描写代替概括描写 高考典例 翻译练习 The boy was lonely and unhappy. 这个男孩既孤独又不快乐。 →(2022·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence...His usual big toothy smile was absent today. 我环顾四周，终于发现了戴维，他独自站在篱笆旁边。……他平常的咧嘴笑今天不见了。 1.我如此紧张以至于心跳开始加速，头脑一片空白。 I was so nervous that my heart began to race and my mind went blank. 2.一听到那个坏消息，她心痛不已，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。 The moment she heard the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks． so......that句型 1.     他感到生气。 【概括描写】He felt angry. 【细节描写】 He felt so angry______ he stormed out of the room, slamming the door. He felt so angry that he _____(slap) him in the face. He _____(feel) so angry that he couldn’t say a word. 2.     他感到累。 【概括描写】He felt tired. 【细节描写】 He felt so _____(tire) that he couldn't walk forward/ move an inch . He felt so tired that he threw ______(him) into the sofa and fell asleep immediately. 3.     我感到害怕。 【概括描写】He felt frightened. 【细节描写】 He felt so frightened that he did not dare ____( move) an inch. 4.     他感到紧张。 【概括描写】He felt nervous. 【细节描写】 He felt so nervous that he kept______( rub) his hands together fiercely. He felt so ______(nerve) that his legs started shaking. 5.     他感到羞愧/尴尬。 【概括描写】He felt ashamed/embarrassed. 【细节描写】 He felt so _______(embarrass) that he could feel his face burning. He felt so ashamed/embarrassed that he hung/dropped his head, _____(dare) not to look at his father. 6.     他感到伤心。 【概括描写】He felt sad/depressed. 【细节描写】 He felt so sad /depressed that he sobbed ______(bitter). He felt so sad/depressed that his tears _____(blur) his eyes/vision. 7.     他感到高兴。 【概括描写】He felt happy. 【细节描写】 He felt so happy that he ______(skip) into the house. He felt so happy that his smile lit up_____ whole room. He felt so happy that he burst into______( laugh). 8.     他感到困倦。 【概括描写】He felt sleepy. 【细节描写】 He felt so sleepy that he fell ______(sleep) as soon as his head hit the pillow. He felt so sleepy that he fell asleep the moment he _____(lie) down . 9．他感到兴奋。 【概括描写】He felt excited. 【细节描写】 He felt so excited that his eyes twinkled with _____(excite). He felt so excited that he rushed and _____(fall) into his father’s arms. 10.他感到惊讶。 【概括描写】He felt surprised. 【细节描写】 He felt so surprised that he_____( freeze) with his mouth wide open. He felt so surprised that his mouth _____(drop) open. 2 / 6 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题05-2 读后续写高分句式（解析版） 心理/情绪描写高分句式 心理/情绪描写高分句式 心理/情绪情感描写描写指描写语篇中的人物在特定情境中的心理状态、精神面貌或者内心情感活动。语篇中的心理描写可以反映人物的性格，展示彼时彼刻人物的内心世界，并可以刻画人物的形象，突出人物的特点。有的心理描写可以表达人物的感受；有的则可以表达人物的情绪。 构建公式1　adj.作状语 课本典例 翻译练习 Surprised and terrified at the same time, I could only agree. 我既惊讶又害怕，只能同意。 1.我失望又悲伤，忍不住思考，当其他孩子问我得到了什么时，我要说什么。 Disappointed and sad, I couldn't help thinking what I would say when the other kids asked what I'd got. 2.我满怀热情和竞争精神，全身心地投入到比赛之中，这激发了我对跳出思维定式的热爱。 Full of enthusiasm and the spirit of competition, I threw myself into the contest, which sparked my love of thinking outside the box. 句式仿写 1.我非常急切和兴奋地走进他的房间，用我那双闪烁着满足的光芒的眼睛表达了我诚挚的谢意。（2023•新高考I卷） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.大卫低着头静静地坐着，郁郁寡欢。（2022•新高考I卷） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.担心自己可能会失败，我什么也说不出来，只能焦急地等待结果。（2023•新高考I卷） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.似乎过了很长时间，大卫冲过了终点线，筋疲力尽但又激动不已。（2022•新高考I卷） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.Hilda 对此事感到沮丧，但并没有气馁，她决定暗中监视 Maya。（2024• 九省新高考适应性考试） ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案 1.Extremely eager and excited, I stepped into his room, expressing my sincere appreciation with my eyes glittering with contentment. 2. David sat silently with his head dropping,depressed and low-spirited. 3.Worried that I might be a failure, I couldn't say anything but anxious to wait for the result. 4.After what seemed like ages/centuries, David crossed the finish line, exhausted but thrilled. 5.Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya. 构建公式2　with＋表示情感的抽象名词 高考典例 翻译练习 (2023·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)She would have struggled with extreme pain to make it to that aid checkpoint without Bailey's help.　如果没有贝利的帮助，她会在极度痛苦之中挣扎着到达那个援助检查站。 1.一看到那只凶猛的狼，她就吓得睁大了眼睛。 At the sight of the fierce wolf, she opened her eyes wide open with fear． 2.一看到那只凶猛的狮子，我吓得僵住了。 On seeing that fierce lion, I felt so scared that I froze with terror． 伴随着喜悦：with delight / excitement /  pleasure / happiness / joy 伴随着满足：with satisfaction 伴随着生气：with anger / rage 伴随着焦虑：with anxiety 伴随着困惑：with confusion/puzzlement 伴随着耐心：with patience 伴随着恐惧：with fear / terror 伴随着尴尬：with embarrassment 伴随着自豪：with pride 句式仿写 1.她满怀自豪和高兴地解释说，这些都是来自墨西哥的特产。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.他转向我，眼中充满了恐惧。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.一见到丈夫Tom，Jane就立刻拥抱了他，眼睛里充满了喜悦。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案 1.With pride and joy, she explained that these were specialties from Mexico. 2.He turned to me, with his eyes full of fear. 3.Upon seeing her husband Tom, Jane immediately hugged him, with her eyes full of delight. 构建公式3　to one's (great) ＋情绪名词/much to one's ＋情绪名词 续写典例 翻译练习 To my surprise, though I had treated my group members badly before, I was surrounded and warmly welcomed by them the moment I entered the classroom. 令我惊讶的是，虽然我之前对待我的小组成员不好，但我一进入教室就被他们包围并受到他们的热烈欢迎。 1.令我非常吃惊的是，许多人来询问我问题并买了我的书。 Much to my surprise, a number of people came up to ask me questions and bought my book. 2.令我失望的是，经过一次又一次的修改，我的文章仍然不符合要求。 To my disappointment, having been revised again and again, my essay still failed to meet the requirements. 要想这个句子学好，必须积累情绪名词，比如： 【正态度】amazement惊奇, delight高兴, joy高兴, satisfaction满足，excitement兴奋 【负态度】annoyance烦恼,  disappointment失望, horror恐怖, shame,羞耻 sorrow悲伤 【中性态度】puzzlement迷惑, regret后悔, relief欣慰, surprise/ amazement惊讶 To my surprise,Tom won the first prize in the English Speech Contest. 令我惊讶的是Tom 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。 构建公式4　情感拟人化 高考典例 翻译练习 (2022·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)I bit back my frustration. I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the right thing. 我强忍住自己的懊恼。我知道教练的本意是好的——他认为他正在做正确的事。 1.他被恐怖笼罩了。　Fear entirely seized him. 2.他突然感到不寒而栗。　A chill of horror suddenly swept over him. 3.到目前为止，乐观变成了怀疑。　By now, optimism has given way to doubt. 4.我气得说不出话。　Anger choked me. 5.我们激动得喘不过气来。　Excitement took our breath away． 6.喜悦的泪水从她的脸上滑落。Tears of joy streamed down her face． 7.他站了起来，拥抱着他的父母，微笑着，尽力不让自己的情绪控制自己。 He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions get the better of him. 8.每个人都离开后，我突然感到一阵子孤独。 After everyone left, I was suddenly seized with/by a feeling of loneliness． 9.当她听到她赢得一等奖的消息时，她欣喜若狂。 When she heard the announcement that she won the first prize, a wild joy took hold of her. 10.他的脸上露出灿烂的笑容。　A shining smile spread across his face. “a wave of+情绪名词+固定动词+sb” A wave of sorrow washed over me as I heard the bad news. A strong sense of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the news. 描述心情的名词 happiness/joy/delight 开心 anger/rage/fury 狂怒 sadness/sorrow/grief 悲伤 gratitude/appreciation 感激 admiration 钦佩/赞赏 guilt/remorse 愧疚/悔恨 fear/terror/fright/panic 害怕/恐慌 astonishment/shock/surprise 震惊 动词 seize catch (caught过去式) strike (struck 过去式) surround take hold of wash over come over         +sb. 有行为意义的名词：“一见到/一想到” The sight/thought of sth made sb+情绪形容词：一见/想到sth，某人---      At the sight/thought of sth, sb did sth: 一见/想到sth，某人---              句式仿写 1.当主持人开始宣读获奖名单时，我感到一阵焦虑，心脏怦怦直跳。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.一想到考试失败，他就万念俱灰。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.当我的名字被宣布时，一种兴奋之情涌上心头。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.当他们的母亲意识到发生了什么时，一股骄傲和温暖的感觉席卷了她。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案 1.When the host started to read out the winning list, a wave of anxiety seized me,my heart racing. 2.Despair overwhelmed him at the thought of his failure in the exam. 3.When my name was announced, a sense of excitement surged through my heart. 4.The moment their mother realized what happened，a wave of pride and warmth swept over him. 构建公式5　细节描写代替概括描写 高考典例 翻译练习 The boy was lonely and unhappy. 这个男孩既孤独又不快乐。 →(2022·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence...His usual big toothy smile was absent today. 我环顾四周，终于发现了戴维，他独自站在篱笆旁边。……他平常的咧嘴笑今天不见了。 1.我如此紧张以至于心跳开始加速，头脑一片空白。 I was so nervous that my heart began to race and my mind went blank. 2.一听到那个坏消息，她心痛不已，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。 The moment she heard the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks． so......that句型 1.     他感到生气。 【概括描写】He felt angry. 【细节描写】 He felt so angry______ he stormed out of the room, slamming the door. He felt so angry that he _____(slap) him in the face. He _____(feel) so angry that he couldn’t say a word. 答案：that slapped felt 2.     他感到累。 【概括描写】He felt tired. 【细节描写】 He felt so _____(tire) that he couldn't walk forward/ move an inch . He felt so tired that he threw ______(him) into the sofa and fell asleep immediately. 答案：tired himself 3.     我感到害怕。 【概括描写】He felt frightened. 【细节描写】 He felt so frightened that he did not dare ____( move) an inch. 答案：to move 4.     他感到紧张。 【概括描写】He felt nervous. 【细节描写】 He felt so nervous that he kept______( rub) his hands together fiercely. He felt so ______(nerve) that his legs started shaking. 答案：rubbing nervous beat 5.     他感到羞愧/尴尬。 【概括描写】He felt ashamed/embarrassed. 【细节描写】 He felt so _______(embarrass) that he could feel his face burning. He felt so ashamed/embarrassed that he hung/dropped his head, _____(dare) not to look at his father. 答案：ashamed daring 6.     他感到伤心。 【概括描写】He felt sad/depressed. 【细节描写】 He felt so sad /depressed that he sobbed ______(bitter). He felt so sad/depressed that his tears _____(blur) his eyes/vision. 答案：bitterly blurred 7.     他感到高兴。 【概括描写】He felt happy. 【细节描写】 He felt so happy that he ______(skip) into the house. He felt so happy that his smile lit up_____ whole room. He felt so happy that he burst into______( laugh). 答案：skipped the laughing 8.     他感到困倦。 【概括描写】He felt sleepy. 【细节描写】 He felt so sleepy that he fell ______(sleep) as soon as his head hit the pillow. He felt so sleepy that he fell asleep the moment he _____(lie) down . 答案：sleepy lied 9．他感到兴奋。 【概括描写】He felt excited. 【细节描写】 He felt so excited that his eyes twinkled with _____(excite). He felt so excited that he rushed and _____(fall) into his father’s arms. 答案：excitement fell 10.他感到惊讶。 【概括描写】He felt surprised. 【细节描写】 He felt so surprised that he_____( freeze) with his mouth wide open. He felt so surprised that his mouth _____(drop) open. 答案：froze dropped 2 / 6 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$