15 福建-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

15 福建 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想通过让学生描述实践活动的过程和表达感想，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，包括对活动的描述是否清晰、准确，以及能否用恰当的语言表达自己的感受。 能力考查：考查学生组织语言的能力、运用所学词汇和句型进行表达的能力，还有按照时间顺序进行叙述的逻辑思维能力。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，让学生能够在特定的情境中，运用所学的英语知识进行有效的交流和表达，同时培养学生对本国文化的理解和热爱。 （2024·福建·中考真题）假设你是李华，学校上周五开展了为期一天的实践活动。你的笔友Henry对这次活动很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示，用英语给他写一封信，谈谈活动过程及你的感想。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Henry, I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Henry, I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. Let me tell you something about it. In the morning, we visited the History Museum. We learned about the history of the Long March. Then we listened to the stories of the Red Army, which greatly touched us. After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art. We also watched local opera performances that are educational. The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of Chinese traditional art! Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】游览活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：结合所给图示完成写作，注意不要遗漏信息；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，告诉对方自己去了历史博物馆场进行实践活动； 第二步，具体介绍活动的时间以及过程； 第三步，谈谈此次活动带给自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① learn about了解到 ② not only...but also...不但……而且…… [高分句型] ①Let me tell you something about it.（祈使句） ②After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art.（定语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想通过让学生写自荐信的形式，考查学生用英语表达自己的能力和对相关话题的掌握程度。 能力考查：考查学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构以及逻辑表达等方面。同时也考查学生对所给信息的整合和拓展能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语书面表达能力的要求，让学生能够在特定情境中运用所学知识，清晰、准确地表达自己的想法和观点。 （2023·福建·中考真题）某地“美丽乡村（Beautiful Village）”项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。 What kind of person you are friendly, active… What you are good at speak English, tell stories… What you can do introduce local culture, help foreigners… 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Mr. Wang, I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides.   ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mr. Wang, I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides. I’d like to be one of them. I think I am suitable for the job. First of all, I am friendly and patient. I am active in many activities. Besides, I speak English well and have won several prizes in English speaking competitions. I am also good at telling stories. So I can introduce local culture to foreigners in English. Most importantly, I have visited the beautiful village many times and I can help foreigners better understand the life of the village. I would be thankful if I could be given the chance. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】志愿服务、个人信息 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封自荐信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍自己想成为“美丽乡村”项目的英语小导游； 第二步，具体阐述自己具备的品质和擅长做的事； 第三步，最后书写结尾，再次表达希望成为小导游中的一员。 [亮点词汇] ①be suitable for适合于…… ②introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某物 ③Most importantly最重要的是 [高分句型] ①I think I am suitable for the job.（省略that的宾语从句） ②I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.（if引导的条件状语从句；被动语态） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在通过让学生以书信的形式描述实践活动，考查学生的英语书面表达能力和对活动的理解与感悟能力。 能力考查： 1. 考查学生运用英语进行有条理的叙述和表达个人感受的能力。 2. 检验学生对时间、地点、活动过程等信息的英语表述准确性。 3. 考察学生能否根据所给的主题和图示，合理组织语言，使文章逻辑清晰、内容完整。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用能力、思维能力和文化意识的培养要求。鼓励学生在真实情境中运用所学语言知识，表达自己的想法和感受，同时培养学生珍惜劳动成果、尊重劳动的价值观。 （2022·福建·中考真题）假定你是李华，近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题的实践活动。请你结合以下图示，用英语给笔友John写一封信，分享活动过程和感受。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear John, How is everything going? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear John, How is everything going? I’m glad to tell you my one-day experience in rice fields. On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm. When we arrived, we visited the farm and watched videos on farming. Then we worked together with farmers. Some learnt to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields. Through the activity, I’ve got the pleasure of hard work and learnt to value each grain. Have you had any experience of this kind? Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动、叙事忆旧 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据图示内容，以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题写一篇作文。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主。人称以第一人称为主。写作时需涵盖要点，包括日期、地点、活动和感受，可适当发挥使行文连贯，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想通过让学生写一篇关于学校“English Day”活动的报道，考查学生对活动的描述能力、语言组织能力以及对时态和人称的正确运用。 能力考查： • 考查学生的语言表达能力，看能否清晰、准确地描述活动的时间、地点、内容和参与者的情况。 • 检验学生对一般过去时的掌握和运用，能否正确描述过去发生的事情。 • 考察学生对不同活动的参与情况的表述能力，以及对数据的处理和表达。 课标要求： 根据课标的要求，学生需要能够在特定的情境中，运用所学的语言知识，包括词汇、语法和句型，进行有效的书面表达。这道题符合课标的要求，让学生在实际的写作任务中，提高语言综合运用能力。 （2021·福建·中考真题）假定你是学校英语报小记者李华，上周学校开展了“English Day”活动，请你根据下面的海报和学生参加活动的数据写一篇报道，介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受。词数80左右。 Number of Participants (参加者) English Day Time: 2:00 p. m. - 4:30 p. m. June 18th Place: In the school hall Learning by Doing * Singing Competition * Cooking Show * Storytelling,     Join us! 注意事项： 1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Our School English Day Our school English Day was a great success. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Our School English Day Our school English Day was a great success. It took place in the school hall from 2: 00 p. m. to 4: 30 p. m. on June 18th. Three activities were included. Half of us students took part in the singing competition. 30% of us went to the cooking show. And the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in the storytelling. We spoke highly of the English Day. We learnt a lot through practice. It also made us come to realize the importance of teamwork. We hope there will be more colorful activities in our school. 【知识点】学校人员、文体活动 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍上周开展的英语日的活动情况。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段介绍活动的地点和时间；第二段介绍学生参加活动的情况；最后一段介绍这个活动给同学们带来的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查学生用英语进行书面表达的能力，尤其是在给定情境下清晰、准确地传达信息和表达观点。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力，以及对相关词汇和句型的运用能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生在特定情境下用英语进行交流和表达的要求，培养学生的跨文化交际意识和对传统文化的传播意识。 （2020·福建·中考真题）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友David对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示，用英语写一封电子邮件，向他推荐即将在你校举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动，说明推荐理由，并请他关注线上相关信息。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear David, I'm pleased to know that you're interested in Chinese medicine._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear David, I'm pleased to know that you're interested in Chinese medicine. Now, I'd like to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school, which is going to take place on July 31, 2020. On that day, a famous doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine. And there will be a show about its development. Also, the film Li Shizhen will be on. I'm sure the activities would be very helpful to you. I hope you can visit www. intelschool. com and have a better understanding of traditional Chinese medicine. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】社团/俱乐部 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。文中向朋友推荐即将举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动，并说明推荐理由。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：本文主要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般将来时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强，句子通顺。 3.高分亮点： 短语：share with sb about sth与某人分享某事；take place举行；be helpful to sb对某人有帮助。 句子：there will be a show about its development句中用的是there be句型；I'm sure the activities would be very helpful to you句中由that引导的宾语从句，引导词that已省略。 最新模拟 1．（2024·福建福州·三模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jason对学习八段锦 (Ba Duan Jin) 感兴趣。请你根据图表提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加你校举办的主题为“八段锦”的特色文化节活动。 Time July 7—12, 2024 Activities ●a talk on Ba Duan Jin ●the video Shaolin Temple ●practice basic Ba Duan Jin movements Dating back to Ming Dynasty Benefits of Ba Duan Jin help to relax, improve health, … 要求： 1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数80左右，短文开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jason, I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Ba Duan Jin. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you will come. Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·福建莆田·一模）“读书足以怡情，足以傅彩，足以长才……”，读书能给人带来很多好处。请结合图示信息及自己的实际情况，以“Reading makes a full man”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇英语短文。 Reading makes a full man the books I like reading the good reading methods I have what I get from reading 要求：1．词数：80左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·福建厦门·二模）假如你是陈鹭，交换生Eason是你的好朋友、他计划在暑期进行毕业旅行，他安排了一天时间在美丽的厦门度过。请你为他设计一条合理的地铁沿线的旅行路线(Line l or Line 2，二选一)，包含三个目的地及相关介绍(something to see/eat/enjoy, etc.)、并简要谈谈地铁沿线游的好处。 要求：80~120词左右。 提示：lie in坐落在；go sightseeing去观光；tourist attraction旅游胜地；advantage好处 注意： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名；文中地名如不会英文表达，可用拼音代替。 Dear Eason,   I’m really excited to know that you will come to Xiamen for your holiday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   I’m looking forward to meeting you soon! Yours, Chen Lu 4．（2024·福建三明·三模）为讲好中国故事，传播中国声音，推动中国文化更好地走向世界，我校拟定下周举办中华文化节活动（Chinese Culture Festival）。假设你是李华，请根据以下图文提示，给外教Bob写一封邮件，向他简要介绍这次活动，并邀请他参加。词数不少于80。 注意事项： 1.必须包含要点提示，可适当发挥，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear Bob, How are you doing? I’m writing to invite you to the Chinese Culture Festival in our school. Now let me tell you something about it._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to getting your reply! Yours, Li Hua 5．（2024·福建宁德·二模）你同学李华设计的“老年人助手机器人 (Elderly Assistant Robot)”在“宁德市科普创新比赛”中获奖。假定你是一名校园小记者，请你根据下列提示写一则新闻报道，介绍这款机器人的外观、功能并表达看法。词数80左右。 Look tall, cute… Functions give medicine… do housework… communicate with… Opinions not replace, care, the elderly (老年人)… 要求： 必须包含要点提示，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Li Hua, a student from Ningde has won a prize in the Science Popularization and Innovation Competition with a creative elderly assistant robot. Here is a report about this robot. The robot _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·福建厦门·二模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Lily对中国传统手工艺品很感兴趣。请你结合以下图表信息，用英语写一封电子邮件，向她介绍上周你校举办的艺术节系列活动之“体验手工艺品制作，感受千年艺术之美”，分享活动的过程和感受，并邀请她有机会来你校体验传统手工艺品制作。词数80左右。 Traditional Chinese handicrafts (手工艺品) Materials provided Kite bamboo, paper, string (线), glue (胶水) Paper cutting paper with different colors, scissors Chinese clay art clay, paint 要求： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息； 2.注意紧扣主题， 内容完整，意思连贯，符合逻辑，书写整齐。 Dear Lily, I’m happy to know that you’re interested in traditional Chinese handicrafts. ________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．（2024·福建厦门·二模）现在，学校布置了很多实践性作业，鼓励学生创新和实践。学生对实践性作业持不同意见。 某校针对此话题在九年级400名学生中展开了调查，下图是调查结果。假如你是该校的一名九年级学生，请你根据图表信息，写一篇英语短文，简要说明调查结果，并结合自身经历谈谈你对该话题的看法。         要求： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3. 100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 It’s common for schools to have practical assignment (实践性作业) for students. Students have different ideas. A survey on this topic was done among 400 students in our school. Here are the results. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·福建泉州·三模）假定你是李华，上周你校开展了向雷锋同志学习的主题活动，以下是同学们参加志愿活动的调查数据。请你根据图表提示，给笔友David写一封邮件，介绍学生参加活动的情况，分享你的经历与感受。词数80左右。 Number of Participants (参加者) 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear David, Last week our school had a themed activity on learning from Comrade Lei Feng. It’s an honor to share the result of my survey with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．（2024·福建·三模）“心中有规矩，行为定方圆。”假如你是李华，你在家和学校需要遵守一些规则。你的笔友Susan想了解这些规则。请根据以下提示，给她写一封email，词数80左右。 注意： 1. 可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Susan, Hi! I want to tell you about the rules I have to follow at home and school. _____________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about you? What rules do you have to follow? Yours Li Hua 10．（2024·福建厦门·三模）2024年是甲辰龙年。Student Daily英语报社开设“龙年特别报道——探寻龙的本质，践行龙的精神”专栏。假设你是李华，请参照以下图示， 以To Be a “Loong” Student为题写一篇80词左右的短文向该报社投搞。 注意事项： 1.必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名； 3.提示词汇： trait特点 To Be a “Loong” Student In the Year of Loong, I’d like to share about Loong and how to be a “Loong” student. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 15 福建 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想通过让学生描述实践活动的过程和表达感想，考查学生的英语书面表达能力，包括对活动的描述是否清晰、准确，以及能否用恰当的语言表达自己的感受。 能力考查：考查学生组织语言的能力、运用所学词汇和句型进行表达的能力，还有按照时间顺序进行叙述的逻辑思维能力。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，让学生能够在特定的情境中，运用所学的英语知识进行有效的交流和表达，同时培养学生对本国文化的理解和热爱。 （2024·福建·中考真题）假设你是李华，学校上周五开展了为期一天的实践活动。你的笔友Henry对这次活动很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示，用英语给他写一封信，谈谈活动过程及你的感想。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Henry, I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Henry, I’m glad that you’re interested in our school study tour last Friday. Let me tell you something about it. In the morning, we visited the History Museum. We learned about the history of the Long March. Then we listened to the stories of the Red Army, which greatly touched us. After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art. We also watched local opera performances that are educational. The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of Chinese traditional art! Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】游览活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：结合所给图示完成写作，注意不要遗漏信息；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，告诉对方自己去了历史博物馆场进行实践活动； 第二步，具体介绍活动的时间以及过程； 第三步，谈谈此次活动带给自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① learn about了解到 ② not only...but also...不但……而且…… [高分句型] ①Let me tell you something about it.（祈使句） ②After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center, where we enjoyed paper cutting art.（定语从句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想通过让学生写自荐信的形式，考查学生用英语表达自己的能力和对相关话题的掌握程度。 能力考查：考查学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构以及逻辑表达等方面。同时也考查学生对所给信息的整合和拓展能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生英语书面表达能力的要求，让学生能够在特定情境中运用所学知识，清晰、准确地表达自己的想法和观点。 （2023·福建·中考真题）某地“美丽乡村（Beautiful Village）”项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。 What kind of person you are friendly, active… What you are good at speak English, tell stories… What you can do introduce local culture, help foreigners… 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Mr. Wang, I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides.   ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear Mr. Wang, I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides. I’d like to be one of them. I think I am suitable for the job. First of all, I am friendly and patient. I am active in many activities. Besides, I speak English well and have won several prizes in English speaking competitions. I am also good at telling stories. So I can introduce local culture to foreigners in English. Most importantly, I have visited the beautiful village many times and I can help foreigners better understand the life of the village. I would be thankful if I could be given the chance. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】志愿服务、个人信息 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封自荐信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍自己想成为“美丽乡村”项目的英语小导游； 第二步，具体阐述自己具备的品质和擅长做的事； 第三步，最后书写结尾，再次表达希望成为小导游中的一员。 [亮点词汇] ①be suitable for适合于…… ②introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某物 ③Most importantly最重要的是 [高分句型] ①I think I am suitable for the job.（省略that的宾语从句） ②I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.（if引导的条件状语从句；被动语态） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在通过让学生以书信的形式描述实践活动，考查学生的英语书面表达能力和对活动的理解与感悟能力。 能力考查： 1. 考查学生运用英语进行有条理的叙述和表达个人感受的能力。 2. 检验学生对时间、地点、活动过程等信息的英语表述准确性。 3. 考察学生能否根据所给的主题和图示，合理组织语言，使文章逻辑清晰、内容完整。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言运用能力、思维能力和文化意识的培养要求。鼓励学生在真实情境中运用所学语言知识，表达自己的想法和感受，同时培养学生珍惜劳动成果、尊重劳动的价值观。 （2022·福建·中考真题）假定你是李华，近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题的实践活动。请你结合以下图示，用英语给笔友John写一封信，分享活动过程和感受。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear John, How is everything going? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear John, How is everything going? I’m glad to tell you my one-day experience in rice fields. On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm. When we arrived, we visited the farm and watched videos on farming. Then we worked together with farmers. Some learnt to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields. Through the activity, I’ve got the pleasure of hard work and learnt to value each grain. Have you had any experience of this kind? Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动、叙事忆旧 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据图示内容，以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题写一篇作文。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主。人称以第一人称为主。写作时需涵盖要点，包括日期、地点、活动和感受，可适当发挥使行文连贯，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图： 这道题主要是想通过让学生写一篇关于学校“English Day”活动的报道，考查学生对活动的描述能力、语言组织能力以及对时态和人称的正确运用。 能力考查： • 考查学生的语言表达能力，看能否清晰、准确地描述活动的时间、地点、内容和参与者的情况。 • 检验学生对一般过去时的掌握和运用，能否正确描述过去发生的事情。 • 考察学生对不同活动的参与情况的表述能力，以及对数据的处理和表达。 课标要求： 根据课标的要求，学生需要能够在特定的情境中，运用所学的语言知识，包括词汇、语法和句型，进行有效的书面表达。这道题符合课标的要求，让学生在实际的写作任务中，提高语言综合运用能力。 （2021·福建·中考真题）假定你是学校英语报小记者李华，上周学校开展了“English Day”活动，请你根据下面的海报和学生参加活动的数据写一篇报道，介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受。词数80左右。 Number of Participants (参加者) English Day Time: 2:00 p. m. - 4:30 p. m. June 18th Place: In the school hall Learning by Doing * Singing Competition * Cooking Show * Storytelling,     Join us! 注意事项： 1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Our School English Day Our school English Day was a great success. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 Our School English Day Our school English Day was a great success. It took place in the school hall from 2: 00 p. m. to 4: 30 p. m. on June 18th. Three activities were included. Half of us students took part in the singing competition. 30% of us went to the cooking show. And the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in the storytelling. We spoke highly of the English Day. We learnt a lot through practice. It also made us come to realize the importance of teamwork. We hope there will be more colorful activities in our school. 【知识点】学校人员、文体活动 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍上周开展的英语日的活动情况。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段介绍活动的地点和时间；第二段介绍学生参加活动的情况；最后一段介绍这个活动给同学们带来的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想考查学生用英语进行书面表达的能力，尤其是在给定情境下清晰、准确地传达信息和表达观点。 能力考查：考查学生的语言组织能力、逻辑思维能力，以及对相关词汇和句型的运用能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生在特定情境下用英语进行交流和表达的要求，培养学生的跨文化交际意识和对传统文化的传播意识。 （2020·福建·中考真题）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友David对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示，用英语写一封电子邮件，向他推荐即将在你校举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动，说明推荐理由，并请他关注线上相关信息。词数80左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear David, I'm pleased to know that you're interested in Chinese medicine._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【满分优秀范文】 Dear David, I'm pleased to know that you're interested in Chinese medicine. Now, I'd like to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school, which is going to take place on July 31, 2020. On that day, a famous doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine. And there will be a show about its development. Also, the film Li Shizhen will be on. I'm sure the activities would be very helpful to you. I hope you can visit www. intelschool. com and have a better understanding of traditional Chinese medicine. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】社团/俱乐部 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。文中向朋友推荐即将举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动，并说明推荐理由。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：本文主要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般将来时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强，句子通顺。 3.高分亮点： 短语：share with sb about sth与某人分享某事；take place举行；be helpful to sb对某人有帮助。 句子：there will be a show about its development句中用的是there be句型；I'm sure the activities would be very helpful to you句中由that引导的宾语从句，引导词that已省略。 最新模拟 1．（2024·福建福州·三模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jason对学习八段锦 (Ba Duan Jin) 感兴趣。请你根据图表提示，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加你校举办的主题为“八段锦”的特色文化节活动。 Time July 7—12, 2024 Activities ●a talk on Ba Duan Jin ●the video Shaolin Temple ●practice basic Ba Duan Jin movements Dating back to Ming Dynasty Benefits of Ba Duan Jin help to relax, improve health, … 要求： 1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3. 词数80左右，短文开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jason, I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Ba Duan Jin. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you will come. Yours, Li Hua 2．（2024·福建莆田·一模）“读书足以怡情，足以傅彩，足以长才……”，读书能给人带来很多好处。请结合图示信息及自己的实际情况，以“Reading makes a full man”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇英语短文。 Reading makes a full man the books I like reading the good reading methods I have what I get from reading 要求：1．词数：80左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·福建厦门·二模）假如你是陈鹭，交换生Eason是你的好朋友、他计划在暑期进行毕业旅行，他安排了一天时间在美丽的厦门度过。请你为他设计一条合理的地铁沿线的旅行路线(Line l or Line 2，二选一)，包含三个目的地及相关介绍(something to see/eat/enjoy, etc.)、并简要谈谈地铁沿线游的好处。 要求：80~120词左右。 提示：lie in坐落在；go sightseeing去观光；tourist attraction旅游胜地；advantage好处 注意： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名；文中地名如不会英文表达，可用拼音代替。 Dear Eason,   I’m really excited to know that you will come to Xiamen for your holiday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   I’m looking forward to meeting you soon! Yours, Chen Lu 4．（2024·福建三明·三模）为讲好中国故事，传播中国声音，推动中国文化更好地走向世界，我校拟定下周举办中华文化节活动（Chinese Culture Festival）。假设你是李华，请根据以下图文提示，给外教Bob写一封邮件，向他简要介绍这次活动，并邀请他参加。词数不少于80。 注意事项： 1.必须包含要点提示，可适当发挥，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear Bob, How are you doing? I’m writing to invite you to the Chinese Culture Festival in our school. Now let me tell you something about it._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to getting your reply! Yours, Li Hua 5．（2024·福建宁德·二模）你同学李华设计的“老年人助手机器人 (Elderly Assistant Robot)”在“宁德市科普创新比赛”中获奖。假定你是一名校园小记者，请你根据下列提示写一则新闻报道，介绍这款机器人的外观、功能并表达看法。词数80左右。 Look tall, cute… Functions give medicine… do housework… communicate with… Opinions not replace, care, the elderly (老年人)… 要求： 必须包含要点提示，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Li Hua, a student from Ningde has won a prize in the Science Popularization and Innovation Competition with a creative elderly assistant robot. Here is a report about this robot. The robot _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·福建厦门·二模）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Lily对中国传统手工艺品很感兴趣。请你结合以下图表信息，用英语写一封电子邮件，向她介绍上周你校举办的艺术节系列活动之“体验手工艺品制作，感受千年艺术之美”，分享活动的过程和感受，并邀请她有机会来你校体验传统手工艺品制作。词数80左右。 Traditional Chinese handicrafts (手工艺品) Materials provided Kite bamboo, paper, string (线), glue (胶水) Paper cutting paper with different colors, scissors Chinese clay art clay, paint 要求： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息； 2.注意紧扣主题， 内容完整，意思连贯，符合逻辑，书写整齐。 Dear Lily, I’m happy to know that you’re interested in traditional Chinese handicrafts. ________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 7．（2024·福建厦门·二模）现在，学校布置了很多实践性作业，鼓励学生创新和实践。学生对实践性作业持不同意见。 某校针对此话题在九年级400名学生中展开了调查，下图是调查结果。假如你是该校的一名九年级学生，请你根据图表信息，写一篇英语短文，简要说明调查结果，并结合自身经历谈谈你对该话题的看法。         要求： 1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3. 100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 It’s common for schools to have practical assignment (实践性作业) for students. Students have different ideas. A survey on this topic was done among 400 students in our school. Here are the results. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·福建泉州·三模）假定你是李华，上周你校开展了向雷锋同志学习的主题活动，以下是同学们参加志愿活动的调查数据。请你根据图表提示，给笔友David写一封邮件，介绍学生参加活动的情况，分享你的经历与感受。词数80左右。 Number of Participants (参加者) 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 Dear David, Last week our school had a themed activity on learning from Comrade Lei Feng. It’s an honor to share the result of my survey with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．（2024·福建·三模）“心中有规矩，行为定方圆。”假如你是李华，你在家和学校需要遵守一些规则。你的笔友Susan想了解这些规则。请根据以下提示，给她写一封email，词数80左右。 注意： 1. 可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 Dear Susan, Hi! I want to tell you about the rules I have to follow at home and school. _____________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about you? What rules do you have to follow? Yours Li Hua 10．（2024·福建厦门·三模）2024年是甲辰龙年。Student Daily英语报社开设“龙年特别报道——探寻龙的本质，践行龙的精神”专栏。假设你是李华，请参照以下图示， 以To Be a “Loong” Student为题写一篇80词左右的短文向该报社投搞。 注意事项： 1.必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名； 3.提示词汇： trait特点 To Be a “Loong” Student In the Year of Loong, I’d like to share about Loong and how to be a “Loong” student. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Jason, I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Ba Duan Jin. I would like to invite you to our school’s special cultural festival themed “Ba Duan Jin” from July 7 to 12, 2024. During the festival, there will be a talk on Ba Duan Jin, a video about the Shaolin Temple, and sessions to practice basic Ba Duan Jin movements. Ba Duan Jin dates back to the Ming Dynasty and is known for its benefits, such as helping to relax and improve health. I believe you will find it very enjoyable and beneficial.   Hope you will come.   Yours, Li Hua    【知识点】中华文化、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步：阐述八段锦主题活动的时间和活动内容； 第二步：阐述八段锦的历史追溯以及练习八段锦的好处； 第三步：表达希望Jason能来参加的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to想要 ②be known for因……而众所周知 ③such as例如 [高分句型] ①During the festival, there will be a talk on Ba Duan Jin, a video about the Shaolin Temple, and sessions to practice basic Ba Duan Jin movements.(there be句型) ②I believe you will find it very enjoyable and beneficial.（省略that的宾语从句） 2．【满分优秀范文】                                                   Reading makes a full man     Reading is an essential part of my life.      I enjoy reading various types of books, such as novels, science fiction, and history books. These books not only broaden my horizons but also enrich my knowledge. To make the most of my reading time, I have developed some good reading habits. I always choose a quiet place to read and take notes on important points. Additionally, I set aside a specific time each day for reading, which helps me stay consistent. From reading, I have gained a lot. It has improved my vocabulary, enhanced my understanding of different cultures, and made me more knowledgeable. Reading truly makes a full man. 【知识点】阅读 【总体分析】① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：一般现在时； ③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生不得遗漏。 【写作步骤】第一步，引出主题——阅读的重要性； 第二步，具体描述喜欢的书籍类型、好的阅读方法以及从阅读中获得的收获； 第三步，书写结语。 【亮点词汇】① broaden my horizons 开阔我的视野 ② enrich my knowledge 丰富我的知识 ③ develop good reading habits 养成好的阅读习惯 ④ enhance my understanding 增强我的理解 【高分句型】① To make the most of my reading time, I have developed some good reading habits. (不定式作目的状语) ② From reading, I have gained a lot. (介词短语作状语) 3．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Eason,   I’m really excited to know that you will come to Xiamen for your holiday. I suggest you can travel along Line 1 of the metro. First, you can visit Xiamen University, which lies in the heart of the city and is a famous tourist attraction. You can enjoy the beautiful campus and taste local snacks. Next, take the metro to Zhongshan Road, where you can go sightseeing and shop for souvenirs. Finally, you can head to Gulangyu Island. It’s known for its stunning scenery and delicious seafood. Traveling by metro is convenient and save time. You can visit multiple attractions in one day without worrying about traffic. I’m looking forward to meeting you soon!   Yours,   Chen Lu 【知识点】景点/建筑、意见/建议、旅行、计划 【详解】[总体分析]       ①题材：本文是一封书信作文；       ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；       ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。       [写作步骤]       第一步，表达收到对方来旅游的消息感到兴奋，提出建议；       第二步，具体介绍厦门地铁1号线的旅行路线，包含三个目的地：厦门大学、中山路和鼓浪屿，并简要介绍每个目的地的特色；       第三步，介绍地铁沿线游的好处； 第四步，书写结语，表达期待对方早日到来。     [亮点词汇]   ①lie in坐落在   ②go sightseeing去观光 ③be known for以……闻名 ④worry about担心 [高分句型]       ①I suggest you can travel along Line 1 of the metro.(宾语从句) ②First, you can visit Xiamen University, which lies in the heart of the city and is a famous tourist attraction.(非限制性定语从句)   4．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Bob, How are you doing? I’m writing to invite you to the Chinese Culture Festival in our school. Now let me tell you something about it. We know China is a great country with a long history and rich cultures. In order to tell Chinese stories to more people around the world and spread Chinese voices, our school plan to hold a Chinese Culture Festival next week on the playground. I know you’re very interested in Chinese culture, so you must be excited to join us in this festival. We will have lots of interesting activities during the festival. For example, some students and teachers will read Chinese poems. You can learn a lot of Chinese history and excellent ancient poets from the poems. Besides, you can also watch wonderful Chinese dancing. Dancers will be in beautiful Chinese-style costumes to show fantastic Chinese dancing. What’s more, as you are lost in Chinese culture, you can enjoy delicious Chinese food. Last, our headmaster will draw the luckiest one from the lottery box. Would you like to be the lucky dog? I’m looking forward to getting your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】中华文化、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己学校下周举办中华文化节活动并邀请对方参加； 第二步，介绍活动的背景、意义及原因等； 第三步，具体描述活动内容； 第四步，期待对方的回复。 [亮点词汇] ①in order to为了 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③what’s more而且 [高分句型] ①I know you’re very interested in Chinese culture, so you must be excited to join us in this festival.（宾语从句） 5．【满分优秀范文】 Li Hua, a student from Ningde has won a prize in the Science Popularization and Innovation Competition with a creative elderly assistant robot. Here is a report about this robot. The robot is tall and looks very cute with big eyes. He looks like a friendly person, making it easier for the elderly to accept him. The robot is of great use. First, he can give the elderly medicine on time when they are ill. He will also call for help at once if they meet danger. Besides, the robot can do some cooking and sweep the floor for the elderly, which makes their life easier. Last but not least, he is good at communicating with the elderly. He can tell stories and jokes, bringing joy and laughter into the life of the elderly. Although robots can help us a lot, our love for the elderly can’t be replaced. Let’s take good care of the elderly with the help of robots, making sure they live happily. 【知识点】科学技术、发明与创造 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍老年人助手机器人； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“外观、功能”等方面进行介绍机器人，并提出自己的观点； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①at once立刻 ②be good at擅长 ③make sure确保 [高分句型] ①He will also call for help at once if they meet danger.（if引导条件状语从句） ②Besides, the robot can do some cooking and sweep the floor for the elderly, which makes their life easier.（which引导的定语从句） 6．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Lily, I’m happy to know that you’re interested in traditional Chinese handicrafts. Our school just held an art festival. It was great fun and I can’t wait to share it with you. The activity took place in the school art room from 4:00 p. m. to 6:30 p. m. on May 31st. And it had three traditional Chinese handicrafts, the kite, paper cutting and Chinese clay art, for us to choose. I am quite fond of flying kites, so I enjoyed myself in making my own kite. At first, the art teacher showed us how to make a kite. Following her clear instruction, I cut the bamboo and the paper. Then I drew a picture and painted it with a brush on the paper. After that, I started to glue the paper on the bamboo and tie a string to the kite. Finally, all my hard work paid off. I got my own kite and I thought it was pretty. Through this activity, I not only experience the pleasure of making traditional Chinese handicrafts, but also feel the beauty shown in common things. I think it is really worth doing it by ourselves. Would you like to join in this activity next time? I’m sure you will like it. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”及“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍活动的背景信息； 第二步，介绍体验手工艺品制作的过程； 第三步，描述自己的感受并邀请对方。 [亮点词汇] ①share…with…和……分享…… ②take place举行 ③fond of 喜欢 ④instruction教授；指示 ⑤pay off得到回报 ⑥not only…but also不仅……而且 [高分句型] I think it is really worth doing it by ourselves.(省略that的宾语从句) 7．【满分优秀范文】 It’s common for schools to have practical assignment (实践性作业) for students. Students have different ideas. A survey on this topic was done among 400 students in our school. Here are the results. 24% of the students surveyed are against the practical assignment. They think it seems unrealistic to spare time for the practical assignment. Because there is lots of homework and after-school classes. Besides, it’s hard for them to complete the practical assignment. However, 76% of the students surveyed are for the practical assignment. They think it allows them to have more time for interesting activities. What’s more, it helps them gain more practical skills and enables them to develop their creativity. In my opinion, we can have the opportunity to do experiments and learn from real life because of practical assignment. So I believe we can study happily and have fun at school. 【知识点】意见/建议、教育 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用“调查结果”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，详细介绍调查结果； 第三步，表达自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ① be against 反对 ② learn from 向……学习 [高分句型] ① They think it seems unrealistic to spare time for the practical assignment.（省略that的宾语从句） 8．【满分优秀范文】： Dear David, Last week our school had a themed activity on learning from Comrade Lei Feng. It’s an honor to share the result of my survey with you. Here are the results. 20% of the students worked in an old people’s home. 30% of the students helped kids in an after-school program. 15% of them was a guide at a museum. 45% helped clean up the streets. It’s surprising that everyone took part in the activity. I helped kids in an after-school program. Because I not only like kids but also I’m good at English. I feel happy to be with them. I think being a volunteer is great. We spoke highly of the volunteer work. We learnt a lot through practice. We hope there will be more meaningful activities in our school. Do you want to be a volunteer? Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动、志愿服务 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：“一般过去时”为主，“一般现在时”为辅； ③提示：根据图表所示信息分享你参加的志愿活动的经历和感受，可适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图（已给出），并介绍调查结果； 第二步，介绍自己参加活动的经历以及感受； 第三步，总结全文，对志愿者工作的肯定。 [亮点词汇] ①clean up打扫 ②not only...but also....不仅……而且…… ③be good at擅长 ④speak highly of赞扬 [高分句型] ①It’s surprising that everyone took part in the activity.（主语从句） ②I think being a volunteer is great.（宾语从句） 9．【满分优秀范文】 Dear Susan,     Hi! I want to tell you about the rules I have to follow at home and school.     There are many rules at my home. I must help with dishes after dinner. I can use smart phones for an hour every week. I have to finish my homework first after school. Before I go to bed, I have to take a shower.     Our school has school rules. We must arrive by 7:50 in the morning and listen to the teachers carefully in class. We can’t run or shout in the hallways.     I think the rules are very important for us and we should obey them.     What about you? What rules do you have to follow? Yours Li Hua 【知识点】校规、守则、家庭生活 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，介绍自己的家规和校规及自己的感受； 第三步，书写结语，询问对方情况。 [亮点词汇] ①help with帮助 ②go to bed就寝 ③take a shower洗澡 [高分句型] Before I go to bed, I have to take a shower. (before引导时间状语从句) 10．【满分优秀范文】 To Be a “Loong” Student In the Year of Loong, I’d like to share about Loong and how to be a “Loong” student. Loong is a symbol of power and wisdom. Loong looks like a snake. It has a strong body and can fly high even without wings. As students, we can learn to be like Loong. We should be brave when we face trouble. If we have a problem, we should try to solve it bravely. We also need to be creative and think actively to find new ways. Besides, it is important to be independent, like looking after ourselves and making our own choices. Let’s try our best to be a “Loong” student. Get ready to fly high and go for our dreams! 【知识点】精神品质 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据图示内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述清晰，并突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍龙的特点； 第二步，根据图示信息，介绍值得我们学习的龙的精神； 第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家努力成为“龙”学生。 [亮点词汇] ①a symbol of……的象征 ②look after照顾 ③get ready to do sth准备做某事 [高分句型] ①We should be brave when we face trouble. (when引导时间状语从句) ②If we have a problem, we should try to solve it bravely. (if引导条件状语从句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$