14 河南-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

14 河南 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让同学们思考不同的学习方式，并能够清晰地表达自己的观点和理由，锻炼同学们的逻辑思维和英语表达能力。 能力考查：考查同学们对英语语言的运用能力，包括词汇、语法、句型等，同时也考查同学们的阅读理解和分析能力，能否理解题目要求并提取关键信息。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，鼓励同学们积极参与语言实践活动，提高综合语言运用能力，培养独立思考和表达观点的能力。 （2024·河南·中考真题）在日常学习中，有的学生喜欢独自学习，有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式？校刊英语专栏正在以“Studying alone or studying with a group?”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种学习方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。 Studying alone Studying with a group solve problems on my own get help from others keep my mind on schoolwork share ideas with group members 写作要求： 1．文中须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Studying alone or studying with a group? Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作步骤】 1. 选择学习方式： • 文章作者选择的是“studying alone”（独自学习）。 2. 阐述理由： • 首先，“studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time.”（独自学习有助于自己学会解决问题，大多数时候自己努力思考，同时思维能力得到提高）。 • 其次，“when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing.【高分句型一】With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit.”（独自学习能专注于正在做的事，头脑清晰能快速完成作业，逐渐养成好习惯）。 • 最后，“I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.【高分句型二】”（认为独自学习是好方式，对生活有益）。 所以这篇短文是围绕选择独自学习以及阐述独自学习的好处来写的。 【满分优秀范文】1: Studying alone or studying with a group? Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I like studying alone better. Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I’m doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit. I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life. 【满分优秀范文】2: Studying alone or studying with a group? Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I prefer to study with a group. As the saying goes, “Two heads are better than one.” With a group, I can learn a lot from others. Whenever I have some questions, they are always ready to help. With their help, I become more and more confident in my study. Also, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face to face. Through discussion, we can share different ideas and get to know more about each other. All in all, I think studying with a group provides many chances to improve myself and helps me to be a better person. 【知识点】学习策略 【详解】以Possible version 1为例 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“Studying alone or studying with a group?”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种学习方式； 第二步，具体介绍为什么喜欢这种方式； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①solve problems on my own 自己解决问题 ②at the same time 同时 ③keep my mind on... 集中注意力在…… ④develop a good learning habit 养成良好的学习习惯 [高分句型] ①Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I’m doing.（when引导的时间状语从句和宾语从句） ②I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.（省略that的宾语从句和并列句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让同学们通过描述学校大课间的活动，锻炼英语表达能力，同时引导大家思考如何让大课间活动更丰富有益。 能力考查：考查同学们用英语描述事物、表达观点和提出建议的能力，也考验大家对词汇和语法的运用。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，鼓励同学们在实际情境中运用英语，培养语言综合运用能力，关注学生的思维发展和创新意识。 （2023·河南·中考真题）为了丰富学校大课间活动内容，学校校刊英语专栏以“最美大课间，强健青少年”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。 写作要求：1) 介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容，并简单谈谈你的感受； 2) 你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议，请写出理由； 3) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 4) 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：shuttlecock exercises 毽子操；badminton 羽毛球；rope skipping 跳绳 The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger.                 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作步骤】 文章内容： 首先介绍了学校目前 30 分钟大课间的活动是跑步，作者觉得很无聊。然后提出建议，认为需要如毽子操、跳绳等不同种类的活动，这样能放松自己、体验运动的快乐，上课也更有精力。最后表示希望学校能组织更多活动以确保学生全面发展。 写作要点： 1. 活动内容：学校目前是跑步。 • 感受：无聊。 2. 建议：毽子操、跳绳等。 • 理由：放松、体验快乐、上课更有精力。 3. 期望：学校组织更多活动，促进学生全面发展。 【满分优秀范文】 The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger. In our school, we usually do running during the 30-minute break. When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground. Then we are lined up and run together. I think it is quite boring. In my opinion, we need different kinds of activities at break, such as shuttlecock exercises, rope skipping and so on. Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of sports. Also, we will be more energetic in class. Different kinds of activities at break time will surely benefit us a lot. I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students. 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示内容进行写作，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容，并简单谈谈你的感受； 第三步，介绍你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议，请写出理由。 [亮点词汇] ①walk out of走出 ②in my opinion依我来看 ③different kinds of不同种类的 [高分句型] ①When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students.(宾语从句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过写作阐述阅读对英语学习的提升作用，培养学生的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，同时引导学生重视阅读在英语学习中的重要性。 能力考查：考查学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构、逻辑连贯等方面。还考查学生对阅读与英语学习关系的理解和分析能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的观点和想法，提高学生的书面表达能力和跨文化交际意识。 （2022·河南·中考真题）阅读是英语学习的重要途径。请你结合下面图示信息，以“How reading improves my English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。 写作要求： 1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3)词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：improve 提高 How reading improves my English Reading plays an important role in my English learning. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作步骤】 ● 开篇点题，指出阅读在英语学习中起着重要作用。 ● 接着从四个方面阐述阅读的作用：提高口语，使写作更轻松，培养思维能力，养成学习习惯。 ● 每个方面都有合理的解释和说明，如“通过阅读，口语得到很大提高，让说英语更有自信”“阅读提醒单词的正确拼写，减少写作错误”等。 ● 结尾总结，强调阅读带来快乐和学习兴趣。 【满分优秀范文】： How reading improves my English Reading plays an important role in my English learning. Firstly, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved through reading. It gives me confidence when I talk in English. Secondly, reading helps make writing easier for me. When I do English reading, it reminds me how words are spelled correctly. So I make fewer and fewer mistakes in my English writing. Thirdly, reading develops my thinking ability. What I’ve read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more. What’s more, reading helps me develop a good habit of learning English. In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English learning. 【知识点】学习策略 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“How reading improves my English”为题，结合提示内容介绍自己是如何提高英语的，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从口语、写作和思维能力等方面介绍自己是如何提高英语的；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们通过写作来表达自己每天坚持做的一件事，培养同学们的语言组织和表达能力，同时引导大家思考坚持做一件事的意义和价值。 能力考查：考查同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、逻辑清晰以及观点阐述等方面。还考查了同学们对自身生活的观察和总结能力，以及对目标、影响等概念的理解和表达。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对语言运用、思维发展和文化意识的培养要求。鼓励同学们用英语清晰地表达自己的想法和经历，锻炼逻辑思维，同时也能让同学们在写作中感受坚持的重要性，培养积极的价值观。 （2021·河南·中考真题）水滴石穿，绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。请以“One thing I keep doing every day”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇发言稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。 1. 要点： 1）你每天在坚持做什么； 2）你坚持这么做的理由； 3）它会给你带来怎样的影响或改变。 2.要求： 1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2）词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 One thing I keep doing every day Good morning, everyone! I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【写作步骤】 1. 确定每天做的事 ● 根据范文，作者确定每天做的事是阅读（reading）。这是满足题目要求中“你每天在坚持做什么”这一要点的关键内容。 2. 阐述坚持的理由 ● 文中提到“As we know, what we keep doing everyday is very important for us to achieve our goals.”，表明作者认为每天坚持做的事对实现目标很重要，这是坚持阅读的一个理由。 3. 说明带来的影响或改变 ● “reading not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others and how to be a better person. Keeping reading helps me open up my eyes to the outside world. The more I read, the wiser I will be.”，这里详细说明了阅读带来的影响，包括带来知识、教会与人相处、成为更好的人、开阔眼界以及让人更智慧等。 所以，按照题目要求，在写这篇发言稿时： ● 首先要明确一件每天坚持做的事（如阅读、锻炼等）。 ● 然后给出坚持做这件事的合理理由（如对目标实现有帮助、对健康有益等）。 ● 最后阐述这件事带来的积极影响（如知识增长、身体变好等）。 【满分优秀范文】 One thing I keep doing every day Good morning, everyone! I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day. I love running and I have kept running for three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at sports and running was always my weakness. I often failed in my running test. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school. Sometimes, I was so tired that I really wanted to give up. But I kept telling myself that I could make it. No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to keep running. Now I do much better in running. I’m very proud of myself and I’m ready for any challenge in the future. That’s all. Thank you! 【知识点】健康与运动、哲理感悟、个人经历 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“One thing I keep doing every day”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己坚持做的事、这么做的理由以及给自己带来的影响和改变；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过描述自己在学习英语过程中提出的问题，培养学生的反思能力和语言表达能力。 能力考查：考查学生用英语清晰阐述问题、原因和结果的能力，同时也检验学生对英语学习经历的总结和思考能力。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，鼓励学生在实际情境中运用英语，提高语言运用的准确性和流畅性，培养学生的自主学习和解决问题的意识。 （2020·河南·中考真题）爱思考的人善于提出问题，而提出问题有助于解决我们生活或学习中的困惑。请以”A question I asked”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 1、要点： 1)你提出的问题是什么； 2)你为什么会提出这个问题； 3)你提出的问题有什么结果。 2、要求： 1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2)词数100左右。 A question I asked ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： A question I asked When I began to learn English, remembering words was a big headache to me. Even though I could remember some, they went out of my mind soon. I was so hopeless. One day I asked my teacher a question before I would give up, “Why do I have to remember words?” The teacher said, “Words are not for remembering but for talking and writing. Keep using them and you will remember them.” I took her advice and tried to use words in my talking and writing. To my surprise, learning words by heart didn’t seem to be a problem any more. 【知识点】方法/策略、学习体验 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是话题类书面表达，短文内容要包含题目中的三个要点。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：【满分优秀范文】采用三段式结构，第一段讲述自己遇到的学习问题；第二段讲述向老师求助以后，老师给出学习建议；第三段讲述采纳了老师的建议以后自己的收获。整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。 3.高分亮点： 短语：begin to do sth.；ask sb. sth.；give up；try to do sth.；to one’s surprise；not…any more。 句型：Even though I could remember some, they went out of my mind soon. even though引导的让步状语从句；One day I asked my teacher a question before I would give up. before引导的时间状语从句。 最新模拟 1．（2024·河南郑州·三模）高铁驰骋、航天梦圆、5G领先……在国际舞台上，中国的声音越来越响亮，祖国妈妈的每一次突破都让身为孩子的我们倍感骄傲。Amazing China杂志社正举办以“My Country, My Pride”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 提示： 1. Describe the development of science and technology in China. 2. Express your feelings. 注意： 1.词数100左右(开头已写好，不计入总词数)； 2.短文中不得泄露个人信息。 My Country, My Pride I was born in a great country, and it has a beautiful name China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·河南漯河·一模）每个人都会憧憬未来美好的生活。请以“The beautiful life that I’m looking forward to”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 1. 要点： 1）请描述一下你所憧憬的美好生活（如教育、工作……）; 2）你的感受。 2. 要求： 1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2）词数100左右。 The beautiful life that I’m looking forward to 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3．（2024·河南许昌·二模）新学期，你校拟增设一个图书角，现向全校同学征集选购图书种类的建议。请你根据写作内容和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校投稿。写作内容： 1）你认为学校增设这一图书角的好处； 2）你喜欢什么类型的图书（至少从右图中选一项）； 3）读这种类型的图书给你带来了哪些收获。 写作要求： 1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数100左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·河南郑州·三模）在繁忙的学习生活中，你是如何度过宝贵的空闲时间的呢？有没有哪件事能够让你放松身心，给你带来乐趣和自信呢？请以“One thing I always do in my free time”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己空闲时间经常做的一件事。 要点： 1）你在空闲时间喜欢做什么事； 2）你为什么喜欢做这件事； 3）你从这件事中收获了什么。 要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2）词数100左右。 One thing I always do in my free time ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·河南驻马店·三模）学校校刊进行了一次“最合适的倾诉对象”的问卷调查，统计了同学们在遇到烦恼时，最愿意向谁倾诉，下面的统计图就是调查结果。请你根据以下写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。 写作要求： 1)描述统计图，可适当发挥； 2)说说你眼中最合适的倾诉对象及理由； 3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 4)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Our school magazine did a survey among students on “the most suitable listeners”. 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6．（2024·河南省直辖县级单位·一模）生活中总有一些事在不经意间带给我们启迪，促使我们成长，改变了我们的行为处事方式，改变了我们对世界的认知，让我们受益良深。校刊以“One thing that changed my life”为题向全校学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。 1.内容包括： 1)哪件事改变了你； 2)它是如何改变你的； 3)你的感悟。 2.要求： 1)必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥； 2)语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3)文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4)词数100左右。 One thing that changed my life _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·河南洛阳·二模）假如你是李华，是校报的一名记者。以下是上周你对全校学生最喜欢的运动的调查结果。请写一篇短文给校英文报投稿。 写作要求： 1)简述调查结果： ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·河南南阳·三模）相信每个同学都有一段关于童年的美好记忆。学校英语校刊习作园地现面向全校征集稿件。请以“My favorite childhood memory”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 1. 要点： 1)请描述这段记忆的具体内容； 2)这段记忆给你带来的影响是什么。 2. 要求： 1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2)词数100左右。 My Favorite Childhood Memory _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·河南信阳·三模）近年来，随着科技的发展，电子产品越来越多，学生的汉字书写能力大大降低。假如你是校书法协会的会长，请根据以下要点及要求，用英文写一封倡议书，号召同学们重视书写。 要点： 1.减少对电子产品的依赖，多动手记笔记； 2.养成练书法和写信的习惯。 要求： 1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：calligraphy n.书法 Dear fellow students, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Calligraphy Association 10．（2024·河南周口·三模）英语有句俗语：“Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.”从这句话中我们可以深刻体会到团队协作(teamwork)的重要性。请你分享一次团队协作的经历，如：体育运动、小组合作学习、团队游戏等，谈谈你对团队协作的看法。 要求： 1. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名； 2. 100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Teamwork There is a famous saying, “Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 14 河南 2024年中考英语作文解读 2024年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让同学们思考不同的学习方式，并能够清晰地表达自己的观点和理由，锻炼同学们的逻辑思维和英语表达能力。 能力考查：考查同学们对英语语言的运用能力，包括词汇、语法、句型等，同时也考查同学们的阅读理解和分析能力，能否理解题目要求并提取关键信息。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，鼓励同学们积极参与语言实践活动，提高综合语言运用能力，培养独立思考和表达观点的能力。 （2024·河南·中考真题）在日常学习中，有的学生喜欢独自学习，有的则喜欢和大家一起学习。你更喜欢哪一种学习方式？校刊英语专栏正在以“Studying alone or studying with a group?”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种学习方式中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，向专栏投稿。 Studying alone Studying with a group solve problems on my own get help from others keep my mind on schoolwork share ideas with group members 写作要求： 1．文中须包含所选学习方式的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3．词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Studying alone or studying with a group? Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作步骤】 1. 选择学习方式： • 文章作者选择的是“studying alone”（独自学习）。 2. 阐述理由： • 首先，“studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time.”（独自学习有助于自己学会解决问题，大多数时候自己努力思考，同时思维能力得到提高）。 • 其次，“when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I'm doing.【高分句型一】With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit.”（独自学习能专注于正在做的事，头脑清晰能快速完成作业，逐渐养成好习惯）。 • 最后，“I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.【高分句型二】”（认为独自学习是好方式，对生活有益）。 所以这篇短文是围绕选择独自学习以及阐述独自学习的好处来写的。 【满分优秀范文】1: Studying alone or studying with a group? Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I like studying alone better. Firstly, studying alone helps me learn to solve problems on my own. Most of the time, I need to think hard about them all by myself. So my thinking ability is improved at the same time. Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I’m doing. With a clear head, I am able to finish my homework quickly. In this way, I will gradually develop a good learning habit. I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life. 【满分优秀范文】2: Studying alone or studying with a group? Some students like to study alone. Others enjoy studying with a group. As for me, I prefer to study with a group. As the saying goes, “Two heads are better than one.” With a group, I can learn a lot from others. Whenever I have some questions, they are always ready to help. With their help, I become more and more confident in my study. Also, when I study with my classmates, we can discuss whatever puzzles me face to face. Through discussion, we can share different ideas and get to know more about each other. All in all, I think studying with a group provides many chances to improve myself and helps me to be a better person. 【知识点】学习策略 【详解】以Possible version 1为例 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“Studying alone or studying with a group?”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种学习方式； 第二步，具体介绍为什么喜欢这种方式； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①solve problems on my own 自己解决问题 ②at the same time 同时 ③keep my mind on... 集中注意力在…… ④develop a good learning habit 养成良好的学习习惯 [高分句型] ①Secondly, when I study alone, I can keep my mind on what I’m doing.（when引导的时间状语从句和宾语从句） ②I think studying alone is really a good way and it will benefit me a lot in my life.（省略that的宾语从句和并列句） 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让同学们通过描述学校大课间的活动，锻炼英语表达能力，同时引导大家思考如何让大课间活动更丰富有益。 能力考查：考查同学们用英语描述事物、表达观点和提出建议的能力，也考验大家对词汇和语法的运用。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，鼓励同学们在实际情境中运用英语，培养语言综合运用能力，关注学生的思维发展和创新意识。 （2023·河南·中考真题）为了丰富学校大课间活动内容，学校校刊英语专栏以“最美大课间，强健青少年”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。 写作要求：1) 介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容，并简单谈谈你的感受； 2) 你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议，请写出理由； 3) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 4) 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：shuttlecock exercises 毽子操；badminton 羽毛球；rope skipping 跳绳 The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger.                 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作步骤】 文章内容： 首先介绍了学校目前 30 分钟大课间的活动是跑步，作者觉得很无聊。然后提出建议，认为需要如毽子操、跳绳等不同种类的活动，这样能放松自己、体验运动的快乐，上课也更有精力。最后表示希望学校能组织更多活动以确保学生全面发展。 写作要点： 1. 活动内容：学校目前是跑步。 • 感受：无聊。 2. 建议：毽子操、跳绳等。 • 理由：放松、体验快乐、上课更有精力。 3. 期望：学校组织更多活动，促进学生全面发展。 【满分优秀范文】 The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger. In our school, we usually do running during the 30-minute break. When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground. Then we are lined up and run together. I think it is quite boring. In my opinion, we need different kinds of activities at break, such as shuttlecock exercises, rope skipping and so on. Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of sports. Also, we will be more energetic in class. Different kinds of activities at break time will surely benefit us a lot. I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students. 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示内容进行写作，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容，并简单谈谈你的感受； 第三步，介绍你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议，请写出理由。 [亮点词汇] ①walk out of走出 ②in my opinion依我来看 ③different kinds of不同种类的 [高分句型] ①When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students.(宾语从句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过写作阐述阅读对英语学习的提升作用，培养学生的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力，同时引导学生重视阅读在英语学习中的重要性。 能力考查：考查学生的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、句子结构、逻辑连贯等方面。还考查学生对阅读与英语学习关系的理解和分析能力。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对学生语言综合运用能力的培养要求，鼓励学生用英语表达自己的观点和想法，提高学生的书面表达能力和跨文化交际意识。 （2022·河南·中考真题）阅读是英语学习的重要途径。请你结合下面图示信息，以“How reading improves my English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。 写作要求： 1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3)词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：improve 提高 How reading improves my English Reading plays an important role in my English learning. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作步骤】 ● 开篇点题，指出阅读在英语学习中起着重要作用。 ● 接着从四个方面阐述阅读的作用：提高口语，使写作更轻松，培养思维能力，养成学习习惯。 ● 每个方面都有合理的解释和说明，如“通过阅读，口语得到很大提高，让说英语更有自信”“阅读提醒单词的正确拼写，减少写作错误”等。 ● 结尾总结，强调阅读带来快乐和学习兴趣。 【满分优秀范文】： How reading improves my English Reading plays an important role in my English learning. Firstly, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved through reading. It gives me confidence when I talk in English. Secondly, reading helps make writing easier for me. When I do English reading, it reminds me how words are spelled correctly. So I make fewer and fewer mistakes in my English writing. Thirdly, reading develops my thinking ability. What I’ve read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more. What’s more, reading helps me develop a good habit of learning English. In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English learning. 【知识点】学习策略 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“How reading improves my English”为题，结合提示内容介绍自己是如何提高英语的，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从口语、写作和思维能力等方面介绍自己是如何提高英语的；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 2021年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题主要是想让同学们通过写作来表达自己每天坚持做的一件事，培养同学们的语言组织和表达能力，同时引导大家思考坚持做一件事的意义和价值。 能力考查：考查同学们的英语写作能力，包括词汇运用、语法正确、逻辑清晰以及观点阐述等方面。还考查了同学们对自身生活的观察和总结能力，以及对目标、影响等概念的理解和表达。 课标要求：符合课程标准中对语言运用、思维发展和文化意识的培养要求。鼓励同学们用英语清晰地表达自己的想法和经历，锻炼逻辑思维，同时也能让同学们在写作中感受坚持的重要性，培养积极的价值观。 （2021·河南·中考真题）水滴石穿，绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。请以“One thing I keep doing every day”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇发言稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。 1. 要点： 1）你每天在坚持做什么； 2）你坚持这么做的理由； 3）它会给你带来怎样的影响或改变。 2.要求： 1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2）词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 One thing I keep doing every day Good morning, everyone! I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【写作步骤】 1. 确定每天做的事 ● 根据范文，作者确定每天做的事是阅读（reading）。这是满足题目要求中“你每天在坚持做什么”这一要点的关键内容。 2. 阐述坚持的理由 ● 文中提到“As we know, what we keep doing everyday is very important for us to achieve our goals.”，表明作者认为每天坚持做的事对实现目标很重要，这是坚持阅读的一个理由。 3. 说明带来的影响或改变 ● “reading not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others and how to be a better person. Keeping reading helps me open up my eyes to the outside world. The more I read, the wiser I will be.”，这里详细说明了阅读带来的影响，包括带来知识、教会与人相处、成为更好的人、开阔眼界以及让人更智慧等。 所以，按照题目要求，在写这篇发言稿时： ● 首先要明确一件每天坚持做的事（如阅读、锻炼等）。 ● 然后给出坚持做这件事的合理理由（如对目标实现有帮助、对健康有益等）。 ● 最后阐述这件事带来的积极影响（如知识增长、身体变好等）。 【满分优秀范文】 One thing I keep doing every day Good morning, everyone! I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day. I love running and I have kept running for three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at sports and running was always my weakness. I often failed in my running test. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school. Sometimes, I was so tired that I really wanted to give up. But I kept telling myself that I could make it. No matter what kind of difficulty I faced, I tried my best to keep running. Now I do much better in running. I’m very proud of myself and I’m ready for any challenge in the future. That’s all. Thank you! 【知识点】健康与运动、哲理感悟、个人经历 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“One thing I keep doing every day”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己坚持做的事、这么做的理由以及给自己带来的影响和改变；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020年中考英语作文命题解读： 命题意图：这道题旨在让学生通过描述自己在学习英语过程中提出的问题，培养学生的反思能力和语言表达能力。 能力考查：考查学生用英语清晰阐述问题、原因和结果的能力，同时也检验学生对英语学习经历的总结和思考能力。 课标要求：符合课标的要求，鼓励学生在实际情境中运用英语，提高语言运用的准确性和流畅性，培养学生的自主学习和解决问题的意识。 （2020·河南·中考真题）爱思考的人善于提出问题，而提出问题有助于解决我们生活或学习中的困惑。请以”A question I asked”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 1、要点： 1)你提出的问题是什么； 2)你为什么会提出这个问题； 3)你提出的问题有什么结果。 2、要求： 1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2)词数100左右。 A question I asked ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】： A question I asked When I began to learn English, remembering words was a big headache to me. Even though I could remember some, they went out of my mind soon. I was so hopeless. One day I asked my teacher a question before I would give up, “Why do I have to remember words?” The teacher said, “Words are not for remembering but for talking and writing. Keep using them and you will remember them.” I took her advice and tried to use words in my talking and writing. To my surprise, learning words by heart didn’t seem to be a problem any more. 【知识点】方法/策略、学习体验 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是话题类书面表达，短文内容要包含题目中的三个要点。 2.【满分优秀范文】点评：【满分优秀范文】采用三段式结构，第一段讲述自己遇到的学习问题；第二段讲述向老师求助以后，老师给出学习建议；第三段讲述采纳了老师的建议以后自己的收获。整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。 3.高分亮点： 短语：begin to do sth.；ask sb. sth.；give up；try to do sth.；to one’s surprise；not…any more。 句型：Even though I could remember some, they went out of my mind soon. even though引导的让步状语从句；One day I asked my teacher a question before I would give up. before引导的时间状语从句。 最新模拟 1．（2024·河南郑州·三模）高铁驰骋、航天梦圆、5G领先……在国际舞台上，中国的声音越来越响亮，祖国妈妈的每一次突破都让身为孩子的我们倍感骄傲。Amazing China杂志社正举办以“My Country, My Pride”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 提示： 1. Describe the development of science and technology in China. 2. Express your feelings. 注意： 1.词数100左右(开头已写好，不计入总词数)； 2.短文中不得泄露个人信息。 My Country, My Pride I was born in a great country, and it has a beautiful name China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·河南漯河·一模）每个人都会憧憬未来美好的生活。请以“The beautiful life that I’m looking forward to”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 1. 要点： 1）请描述一下你所憧憬的美好生活（如教育、工作……）; 2）你的感受。 2. 要求： 1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2）词数100左右。 The beautiful life that I’m looking forward to 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3．（2024·河南许昌·二模）新学期，你校拟增设一个图书角，现向全校同学征集选购图书种类的建议。请你根据写作内容和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校投稿。写作内容： 1）你认为学校增设这一图书角的好处； 2）你喜欢什么类型的图书（至少从右图中选一项）； 3）读这种类型的图书给你带来了哪些收获。 写作要求： 1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数100左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·河南郑州·三模）在繁忙的学习生活中，你是如何度过宝贵的空闲时间的呢？有没有哪件事能够让你放松身心，给你带来乐趣和自信呢？请以“One thing I always do in my free time”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己空闲时间经常做的一件事。 要点： 1）你在空闲时间喜欢做什么事； 2）你为什么喜欢做这件事； 3）你从这件事中收获了什么。 要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2）词数100左右。 One thing I always do in my free time ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·河南驻马店·三模）学校校刊进行了一次“最合适的倾诉对象”的问卷调查，统计了同学们在遇到烦恼时，最愿意向谁倾诉，下面的统计图就是调查结果。请你根据以下写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。 写作要求： 1)描述统计图，可适当发挥； 2)说说你眼中最合适的倾诉对象及理由； 3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 4)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Our school magazine did a survey among students on “the most suitable listeners”. 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6．（2024·河南省直辖县级单位·一模）生活中总有一些事在不经意间带给我们启迪，促使我们成长，改变了我们的行为处事方式，改变了我们对世界的认知，让我们受益良深。校刊以“One thing that changed my life”为题向全校学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。 1.内容包括： 1)哪件事改变了你； 2)它是如何改变你的； 3)你的感悟。 2.要求： 1)必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥； 2)语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3)文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4)词数100左右。 One thing that changed my life _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2024·河南洛阳·二模）假如你是李华，是校报的一名记者。以下是上周你对全校学生最喜欢的运动的调查结果。请写一篇短文给校英文报投稿。 写作要求： 1)简述调查结果： ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·河南南阳·三模）相信每个同学都有一段关于童年的美好记忆。学校英语校刊习作园地现面向全校征集稿件。请以“My favorite childhood memory”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 1. 要点： 1)请描述这段记忆的具体内容； 2)这段记忆给你带来的影响是什么。 2. 要求： 1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2)词数100左右。 My Favorite Childhood Memory _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·河南信阳·三模）近年来，随着科技的发展，电子产品越来越多，学生的汉字书写能力大大降低。假如你是校书法协会的会长，请根据以下要点及要求，用英文写一封倡议书，号召同学们重视书写。 要点： 1.减少对电子产品的依赖，多动手记笔记； 2.养成练书法和写信的习惯。 要求： 1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：calligraphy n.书法 Dear fellow students, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Calligraphy Association 10．（2024·河南周口·三模）英语有句俗语：“Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.”从这句话中我们可以深刻体会到团队协作(teamwork)的重要性。请你分享一次团队协作的经历，如：体育运动、小组合作学习、团队游戏等，谈谈你对团队协作的看法。 要求： 1. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名； 2. 100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Teamwork There is a famous saying, “Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： 1．【满分优秀范文】： My Country, My Pride I was born in a great country, and it has a beautiful name China. It is a country with a long history and rich culture. It has amazing historical sites like the Great Wall, Forbidden City, and Terracotta Warriors. They all show the wisdom and hard work of the Chinese people. In modern times, the wide application of high-speed rail and new energy cars has made people’s life more convenient. WeChat Pay allows us to shop without carrying cash. The Chinese people are friendly and diligent, trying to make their country rich and powerful. I love my motherland deeply. And I am proud of its achievements. I will study hard to contribute to its future development. 【知识点】中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，介绍自己的国家，注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我来自一个伟大的国家，它有一个美丽的名字——中国。”来引出下文对中国的介绍； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“中国的历史和文化、中国的科技发展、中国人”三方面入手，重点介绍中国； 第三步，书写结语。表达对祖国的爱，努力学习为祖国做贡献。 [亮点词汇] ①historical sites历史遗迹 ②be proud of为……感到自豪 ③contribute to为……做贡献 [高分句型] ①The Chinese people are friendly and diligent, trying to make their country rich and powerful. (现在分词作状语) 2．【满分优秀范文】 The beautiful life that I’m looking forward to Everyone expects to live a beautiful life in the future. So do I. Let me share my beautiful life that I’m looking forward to with you. First, I’m looking forward to getting the best education. It’s the best education that can help me achieve my dream. Second, I expect to find a good job. The company that I want to work is Huawei Company. I want to use what I have learned at school to make it stronger. Lastly, I’d like to buy a large house for my parents. My parents spare no efforts to make me become what I am today. I want to give them something in return. All in all, I know that Rome was not built in a day. Only when I try my best, can I turn my dream life into reality. 【知识点】畅想未来 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，描述一下你所憧憬的美好生活； 第二步，介绍你的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①achieve…dream实现梦想 ②expect to do期望 ③spare no efforts不遗余力 [高分句型] ①I want to use what I have learned at school to make it stronger.（宾语从句） ②Only when I try my best can I turn my dream life into reality.（倒装句） 3．【满分优秀范文】 The book corner is a supplement to the school library, allowing students to obtain books for reading in their spare time. The borrowing process is more convenient, simpler than the school library, and can better utilize fragmented time. In addition, students put the books they have read at home in the book corner, which is a reuse of the books and maximizes the value of each book. It also saves money on buying books. Finally, when students read books, they also experience the joy of helping their classmates, which is a win-win situation. A large number of books and magazines can help students increase their knowledge. I think schools should provide more storybooks. Because we are already very tired in class, we should read more storybooks in our spare time to relax ourselves. I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. 【知识点】意见/建议、阅读、社团/俱乐部 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从增设这一图书角的好处、你所喜欢的图书类型以及读这种类型的图书给你带来的收获等方面来介绍具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 ②maximize the value使价值最大化 ③save money节约钱 ④experience the joy of体验……的快乐 [高分句型] ①The book corner is a supplement to the school library, allowing students to obtain books for reading in their spare time.（现在分词作状语） ②Finally, when students read books, they also experience the joy of helping their classmates, which is a win-win situation.（when引导的时间状语从句；which引导的时非限制性定语从句） 4．【满分优秀范文】 One thing I always do in my free time Different people like doing different things in their free time. As for me, I like swimming when I am free. I began to learn swimming at the age of eight. I was a quick learner. After three weeks, I could swim very well. Swimming is so cool as well as relaxing that I often go swimming in my free time. With the help of swimming, I do more exercise. As a result, I become stronger. What’s more, swimming can reduce my pressure. I feel less stressed after swimming. Swimming can also help me to make more friends. Swimming is the thing I always do in my free time. I hope everyone can enjoy the fun swimming brings to us. 【知识点】爱好 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中需要介绍自己从这件事中收获了什么，注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍每个人在空闲时间都有喜欢做的事； 第二步，介绍自己喜欢游泳以及原因，并介绍自己从游泳中得到的收获； 第三步，书写结语，表达“每个人都能享受游泳带给我们的乐趣”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①as for sb就某人而言 ②at the age of在……岁时 ③as well as和 ④with the help of在……的帮助下 ⑤as a result最终，结果 [高分句型] ①As for me, I like swimming when I am free. （when引导时间状语从句） ②I hope everyone can enjoy the fun swimming brings to us.（省略引导词that的宾语从句） 5．One possible version: Our school magazine did a survey among students on “the most suitable listeners”. The result shows that half of the students would like to talk to friends when they have problems. A quarter of the students think their parents are the best listeners. 20% of the students would turn to teachers and 5% of the students would talk to other people when meeting problems. For most students, friends know them better. However, as for me, parents are the most suitable persons to talk to. For example, when I feel stressed about my lessons and exams, I often communicate with my parents. They can give me some advice through their experiences. They can make me relaxed and have confidence in myself. 【知识点】意见/建议、青少年问题、合作与交流 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据写作要点介绍调查的结果，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体指出要介绍调查的结果； 第二步，根据统计图分别介绍不同的倾诉对象所占的比例； 第三步，介绍自己的倾诉对象以及原因，并结束文章。 [亮点词汇] ①talk to sb与某人交谈 ②for example例如 ③communicate with sb和某人交流 [高分句型] ①The result shows that half of the students would like to talk to friends when they have problems.（that引导的宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句） ②20% of the students would turn to teachers and 5% of the students would talk to other people when meeting problems.（and连接的并列句） 6．【满分优秀范文】 One thing that changed my life After our school had a policy of reducing the burden of the students and their family, my life changed a lot. In the past, I still had too much homework to do after school. Even worse, I had to stay at home to study at weekends. And I didn’t have time to get some exercise and I couldn’t do my favourite things. But now, I live a different life. I can finish my homework at school and I can join my favourite club. In my free time, I often do exercise with my friends. We usually play football or tennis together. I think the changes in our life are very good. I’m sure we will have a happy life in the future. 【知识点】个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明哪件事改变了你； 第二步，介绍它是如何改变你的； 第三步，介绍你的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①stay at home待在家 ②in the past在过去 [高分句型] And I didn’t have time to get some exercise and I couldn’t do my favourite things.（并列结构） 7．One possible version: Last week I did a survey on students’ favorite sports. The result shows that basketball is the most popular among students. Besides, 28% of students like running best. There are 21% of students whose favorite sport is table tennis and only 17% of students enjoy playing football. As we know, sports play an important role in keeping us healthy. What’s more, they can bring us a lot of fun in daily life. Last but not least, playing sports with classmates can help us develop team spirit. Therefore, I call on every student to do sports regularly. Only in this way can we keep fit and enjoy a happy life. 【知识点】爱好 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给图片完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简述调查结果； 第二步，介绍运动的好处； 第三步，书写结语，号召学生们做运动。 [亮点词汇] ①do a survey on…对……进行调查 ②play an important role发挥重要作用 ③daily life日常生活 ④last but not least最后但同样重要的是 ⑤team spirit团队精神 ⑥keep fit保持健康 [高分句型] Only in this way can we keep fit and enjoy a happy life.(倒装句) 8．【满分优秀范文】 My favorite childhood memory My favorite childhood memory is the time I spent in the garden with my mom. We planted flowers and vegetables together, and I helped water them every day. I loved watching the plants grow and seeing the different flowers bloom. My mom taught me about the different plants and how to take care of them. This memory is special to me because it taught me about the importance of hard work and patience. I learned that with time and effort, even small seeds can grow into beautiful flowers and delicious vegetables. This lesson has stayed with me through the years and continues to inspire me in my daily life. 【知识点】个人经历、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中需要介绍这段记忆对自己的影响。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己最喜欢的童年记忆； 第二步，介绍这段记忆对自己的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①love doing sth.喜欢做某事 ②take care of照顾 ③grow into长成 [高分句型] ①This memory is special to me because it taught me about the importance of hard work and patience.（because引导原因状语从句） ②I learned that with time and effort, even small seeds can grow into beautiful flowers and delicious vegetables.（that引导宾语从句） 9．【满分优秀范文】 Dear fellow students, With the development of science and technology, more and more students prefer to use electronic products for taking notes and sending messages instead of writing on the paper. Thus, our handwriting is not as good as it was in the past. Facing the problem, we should do as follows. First, we should use electronic products less often when learning. If so, we can have more opportunities to improve our handwriting. Besides, we must form the habit of practicing calligraphy every day. What’s more, it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand instead of sending e-mails. Beautiful and neat handwriting is of great benefit to us students. So let’s take action right now! I’m sure our efforts will pay off! Calligraphy Association 【知识点】意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封倡议书； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给要点及要求完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，陈述学生的汉字书写能力大大降低的现状； 第二步，根据所给要点，陈述自己的倡议； 第三步，书写结语，鼓励大家行动起来。 [亮点词汇] ①prefer to更喜欢 ②instead of而不是 ③opportunity机会 ④form the habit of…养成……的习惯 ⑤take action采取行动 ⑥pay off取得成功 [高分句型] I’m sure our efforts will pay off!(省略that的宾语从句) 10．【满分优秀范文】 Teamwork There is a famous saying, “Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.” Teamwork plays an important part in our daily life. I still remember when I was in Grade 8, my physics was very poor. I had a really hard time with it. Once in class, I studied with some classmates together. I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics. I didn’t feel stressed out at all. At last, I finished my homework by myself for the first time. How excited I was! Because of studying in groups, I am not worried about physics any more. I get more confidence with my classmates’ help. It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways. In my opinion, working in a team provides a chance for us to communicate with each other. It is a way to broaden our horizon and to establish our friendship with others. To sum up, to learn to work in a team is really necessary and important and we should try to enjoy it. 【知识点】个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：本文主要是分享一次团队协作的经历，并谈谈你对团队协作的看法，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，分享一次团队协作的经历； 第三步，谈谈你对团队协作的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①feel stressed out感到压力大 ②for the first time第一次 ③be worried about担心 [高分句型] ①I still remember when I was in Grade 8, my physics was very poor. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②In my opinion, working in a team provides a chance for us to communicate with each other. (动名词作主语，动词不定式作定语) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$