05 广州市-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

05 广州市 2024年中考英语作文解读 2022 版课标强调培养学生的语言运用能力、思维品质和文化意识等。 这道中考英语作文命题“An unforgettable school trip”， 1. 从语言运用能力方面，要求学生能够准确运用过去时态来描述旅行经历，比如“went”“spent”“visited”“helped”等动词的过去式，考查学生对时态的掌握和运用。 2. 在思维品质上，学生需要有条理地组织思路，按照时间、地点、人物、活动、感受和收获等方面来阐述，培养逻辑思维和组织能力。 3. 关于文化意识，通过描述学校旅行，学生可以分享不同的文化体验，增进对不同文化背景下活动的理解。 总的来说，这道题很好地体现了 2022 版课标的要求，有助于全面考查学生的英语综合能力。 （2024·广东广州·中考真题）你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛，主题是“An unforgettable school trip”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80词左右； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 An unforgettable school trip ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 An unforgettable school trip Our school organized a trip to the Science Museum last Saturday. I went there with all the students and teachers of Grade 9 together. We got together at 8:00 a.m. at the school gate and left for the museum by bus. We took a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there. After that, we took a visit around the different halls of the museum. A variety of advanced inventions had been displayed, from the appliance to industry, education and life. What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of AI. We also enjoyed the delicious food cooked by an AI robot. How amazing! At the end of the visit, we said goodbye to the AI guide. It is a meaningful trip which not only broadens our horizon of the creation world, but also builds up our national confidence. I made up my mind to study hard and make a contribution to my motherland. 【知识点】游览活动、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：一般过去时； ③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生需要按照要点写出相应的内容，不得遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，介绍学校旅行的时间、地点和人物； 第二步，具体介绍这次旅行中你们都做了什么； 第三步，表达对于此次经历的感想以及收获。 [亮点词汇] ①take a lecture听讲座 ②A variety of各种各样的 ③have a better understanding of更好地理解…… ④make a contribution to对……做出贡献 [高分句型] ①We took a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句) ②What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of AI. (which引导的定语从句) 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023 年：以学校志愿队队长的身份给交换生写电邮，介绍主题为 “健康你和我” 的志愿服务活动安排 命题特点： 情境真实：创设了学校志愿队开展活动的真实情境，让学生在具体的情境中运用英语进行交流和表达，体现了语言的交际性。 任务驱动：要求学生以志愿队队长的身份写邮件介绍活动安排，任务明确，具有一定的驱动性，促使学生思考如何用英语清晰、准确地传达信息。 关注健康主题：紧扣 “健康” 这一主题，引导学生关注自身和他人的健康，培养学生的健康意识和社会责任感。 命题优点： 学以致用：让学生将所学的英语知识应用到实际的邮件写作中，提高学生在真实情境中运用英语进行沟通和表达的能力。 培养社会责任感：通过介绍志愿服务活动安排，鼓励学生积极参与社会实践，为他人的健康贡献自己的力量，有助于培养学生的社会责任感和团队合作精神。 开放性与灵活性：在活动安排的内容上，学生有一定的自主发挥空间，可以根据自己的想法和经验进行合理的设计和安排，体现了一定的开放性和灵活性。 对教学的启示：教学中要注重创设真实的语言情境，让学生在情境中学习和运用英语。加强对邮件等应用文写作格式和技巧的教学，提高学生的应用文写作能力。同时，培养学生关注社会、关爱他人的意识，引导学生积极参与社会实践活动。 （2023·广东广州·中考真题）你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题（theme）为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。 Theme Healthy You and Me Time 8:30 a.m.—11:30 a.m. Place Sports Center Activities … Purpose … 注意： 1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80词左右（邮件的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Sam, Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Sam, Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday. Let me introduce something about the activity to you. The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”, and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. It will be held in the Sports Center. There are many interesting activities. First, there will be a sports history show. It will be held in our school hall. Besides, “Healthy You and Me” speech will be on, too. If you want to take part, please let us know before this Friday. There will be different kinds of after-school exercise classes, such as football, basketball, tennis and so on. You can choose the one you like. The main purpose is to increase students’ interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively. I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合表格提示内容介绍活动的安排。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出对活动的重点介绍； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“主题、时间、地点、活动”几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，介绍活动的目的并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①introduce...to...介绍……给…… ②from...to...从……到…… ③different kinds of各种不同的 ④look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”, and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. （and连接并列句） ②The main purpose is to increase students’ interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively.（不定式结构作表语和作宾语补足语） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022 年：以 “my green school library” 为题介绍所设计的绿色图书馆 命题特点： 主题明确：围绕 “绿色图书馆” 这一主题，通过思维导图给出了具体的写作要点和方向，如图书馆的外观、材料、功能等，内容明确，学生不容易跑题。 强调创新与环保：既考查学生的英语表达能力，又引导学生关注环保、创新等理念，体现了对学生综合素质和创新思维的培养。 形式新颖：以征稿的形式呈现写作任务，增加了写作的情境性和趣味性，能激发学生的写作兴趣和积极性。 命题优点： 培养创新意识：让学生发挥想象，设计自己心目中的绿色图书馆，有利于培养学生的创新能力和创造力。 综合考查能力：学生需要根据思维导图的提示，运用所学的英语知识进行描述和拓展，考查了学生的词汇、语法、句型运用以及篇章组织等综合语言运用能力。 关注社会热点：将环保理念融入作文命题，引导学生关注社会现实问题，增强学生的环保意识。 对教学的启示：教学中要注重培养学生的创新思维和解决实际问题的能力，多提供一些具有开放性和创新性的写作任务。同时，加强对环保、科技等社会热点话题的教学，引导学生关注社会发展，拓宽学生的视野。 （2022·广东广州·中考真题）你校将兴建新图书馆，学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计（design）的绿色图书馆。 注意： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My Green School Library I want to design a green school library. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Green School Library I want to design a green school library. It is green. It is built entirely from renewable resources. It is round. When you sit inside, you will feel very warm. It is composed of waste paper and solar panels. All its energy comes from the sun. You can read all kinds of books in it. You can also listen to music in it. If you are tired, you can also rest inside. 【知识点】学校设施 【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要以“My Green School Library”为题，并根据题干中的思维导图介绍你所设计的绿色图书馆，可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。主要是根据思维导图中的提示描述自己设计的绿色图书馆，写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 这道作文题的出题思路是这样的哟： 1. 它想通过设置一个特别的场景，就是世界冠军李华来上云体育课，来激发同学们的写作兴趣。 2. 要求同学们描述授课者的基本信息，这能考查大家对人物介绍的表达能力。 3. 阐述上课内容，能检验大家对活动描述的语言运用。 4. 分享收获和感受，是为了让大家表达自己的思考和情感体验。 这道题的优点有： 1. 结合了当下热门的云课堂形式，很贴近现实生活。 2. 题目给出了参考词汇，能给同学们一些提示和帮助。 不过呢，也有一点点小挑战： 1. 要在 80 词左右把这些要点都写清楚，对语言的简洁性和准确性要求比较高。 2. 对于“收获和感受”部分，需要同学们有一定的思考和总结能力。 （2021·广东广州·中考真题）今天，跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文日记，记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点： 1.授课者：李华，14岁，红星中学学生； 2.上课内容：跳绳讲解和示范等； 3.你的收获和感受。 注意:1.参考词汇：跳绳(rope skipping)、冠军(champion)； 2.词数：80词左右（日记的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Monday, May 31st Dear Diary, Today, we had a special online PE lesson.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 Monday, May 31st Dear Diary, Today, we had a special online PE lesson. The teacher was the world champion of rope skipping named Li Hua. He is 14 years old, and he is also the student of Hongxing Middle School. In the class, he explained the way of rope skipping and showed us how to do it well. We were interested in the sports. He answered some questioned and told his experience to us. I learned that the best way to do something best is by practicing it a lot. Practice makes perfect. What an interesting lesson we had! 【知识点】教育、个人经历 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于日记写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；讲述授课者的个人信息，上课的内容，最后讲述个人的收获和感受。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述授课人的信息和课堂内容需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020 年：“我送过的一份珍贵礼物” 命题特点： 贴近生活：话题聚焦于学生生活中送礼物的经历，让学生有话可说，能激发学生的情感体验和表达欲望。 立足课内：与教材中的相关话题有所关联，如八年级下册 unit3 的 traditional skills 和九年级上册 unit8 的课文 the gifts，体现了对课本知识的延伸和运用。 考查能力全面：要点用英文给出，既降低了翻译难度，又深入考查学生的语言逻辑衔接能力和拓展写作能力，要求学生不仅能准确表达内容，还需具备较好的逻辑思维和语言组织能力。 命题优点： 引导关注生活：促使学生回顾生活中的点滴，培养学生对身边人、事的关注和感恩之情，有助于情感态度价值观的正向引导。 灵活性与开放性：给予不同程度的考生以不同层次的发挥空间，无论是语言表达能力较强还是较弱的学生，都能根据自己的经历和理解进行写作。 对教学的启示：强调教材知识的掌握和运用，教师在教学中要注重引导学生将课本知识与实际生活相结合。同时，培养学生的语言逻辑思维和拓展写作能力，多进行相关的写作训练，提高学生在给定主题下的内容组织和表达能力。 （2020·广东广州·中考真题）今天的英语课上，班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物，”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文，汇报你们四人小组的分享内容，需包括以下要点。 From Bob Kate Lily You To parents good friend foreign teacher （请补充） What soup Photo album Paper cutting （请补充） Why thanks and love friendship culture （请补充） 注意：1.词数：80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）： 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 In today's English class, we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”. Here is what we shared in ou group. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 In today’s English class.we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”.Here is what we shared in our group. A valuable gift given by Bob was a bowl of soup to his parents. In his opinion, he considered it as a good gift to express his thanks and love to them. Kate gave a photo album to one of her good friends because she wanted to cherish every moment with her/him, hoping that their friendship could last forever. In addition, Lily sent her foreign teacher a piece of paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture. For me, what I gave to my grandparent was a smartphone. We don't live together and my parents are so busy that we can't meet each other often. However, we can have video chats by smartphone. 【知识点】其他人 【详解】题干解读：这篇短文要求学生们根据题目中给出的图表，汇报一下你这个小组中四个人送过的珍贵的礼物。写作前，应仔细观察图表中的信息，浏览可知，短文中应介绍清楚这个礼物是谁送给谁的，是什么以及为什么送这个礼物。图表中给出的都是关键词语，学生写作时，应用完整的句子表达。并且对于最后一栏中自己送的礼物，学生需要发挥想象力，结合实际情况，进行补充。短文应以一般过去时态为主来叙述。 例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先文章内容完整，包括了图表中的所有信息，对最后一栏的内容进行了补充，并对细节进行了拓展，使文章的内容更加充实。短文有三段，第一段是题目中给出的开头；第二段中作者主要介绍了小组中其他三人送的礼物；最后一段介绍了自己送过的礼物。层次清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，符合表达需要，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，有变化，增强了文章的表现力。 高分亮点： 短语：in one’s opinion；in addition；each other。 句型：过去分词作后置定语；动词不定式作目的状语；because引导原因状语从句；现在分词作伴随状语；which引导定语从句；what引导主语从句；so…that引导结果状语从句。 最新模拟 一、书面表达 1．（2024·广东广州·二模）假如你是校研学俱乐部(Study Trip Club)部长李华，俱乐部将于下周六组织研学活动，请你以“Welcome to Our Study Trip”为题给校报写一篇短文，介绍这次研学活动的内容和意义，并号召同学们积极参加。 Who will go? Where will you go? What will you do? What will you learn? Grade 7 students The Children’s Park plant trees … Grade 8 students Tea House make dim sum a… skill Grade 9 students The History Museum … Chinese history ... 注意： 1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80词左右(开头已给出，不计入字数)； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Welcome to Our Study Trip Our Study Trip Club will organize a trip for us next Saturday._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·广东广州·二模）初中生活即将结束，英语校报计划开展以“回顾初中生活，书写难忘时光”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图的提示，任选一或两点，分享你的成长故事及其对你的启发。 注意： 1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80词左右(稿件的开头已给出，不计入词数)； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Growing up How time flies! My junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I have a lot of unforgettable memories._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·广东广州·三模）假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办题为“AI in Our Life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿，包含以下内容： 注意： 1．参考词汇：AI人工智能。 2．文中需包含所给的相关信息，并可作适当想象和发挥。 3．文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 4．词数80词左右。 AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your listening! 4．（2024·广东广州·三模）上周，你去了科技博物馆参观，你对“未来人类与机器人生活”主题展厅的一款家庭医生机器人Home Doctor很感兴趣，你打算在本周英语课上向同学们介绍它。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇英语短文，为介绍做准备。 Home Doctor What does it look like? ●… ●… What can it do? ●… ●… What did it do at the show? ●… What do you think of it? ●… How did you feel after the visit? 注意： （1）必须包含全部要点，可适当拓展； （2）词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； （3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Last week, I went to the Science and Technology Museum. I was greatly interested in a new kind of robot ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·广东广州·二模）你校正在开展“共创校园之美”的活动，学校英文报以“Make our school more beautiful”为题向学生征稿，请根据以下图示的内容写一则短文投稿，介绍你美化校园的活动设想。 注意： 1.词数80—120个左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥）； 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 In order to make our school more beautiful, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·广东广州·二模）为提升公众环保意识，你校将组织主题为 Protect the Earth, Start from Now公益活动，同学们分组向市民宣传环保知识，请你写一封 e-mail 邀请英国交流生 Mike 参加活动，告知他你所参加的小组的两项具体活动。 Theme (主题): Protect the Earth, Start from Now Time June, 29th Place The People’s Park Group Group 1: Green Consumer Group 2: Protect Animals Group 3: Guard the Blue Sky 要求： 1、80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2、涵盖要求的内容并适当拓展。 Dear Mike, Our school will hold an environmental protection activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jia Ming 7．（2024·广东广州·二模）数据显示，我国家庭智能机器人的市场需求正在增强。针对这一现象，你以“Is home robot a good idea?”为主题在班里进行了一项调查并在英语活动课上就此发言。请你根据图表中的调查结果写一篇发言稿，陈述同学们的观点及理由并表达你的个人看法。 要求： (1)词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2)包含上述提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。 Is home robot a good idea?      As society develops, more and more families use home robots in their daily lives. Is it a good idea?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·广东广州·二模）21世纪报Teens正在举行以“To be better”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下征文海报，写一篇英语短文投稿，分享你在提升自我方面的一次经历以及收获，并谈谈你在这方面的计划。 注意： (1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； (2)词数：80—100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I did a lot of things to make myself better. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·广东广州·二模）近些年，汉服在年轻人中很受欢迎。假如你是李华，上周二你校开展了校园汉服节活动（the Hanfu Festival），请你以The Hanfu Festival为标题，给校园英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 时间 上周二下午 4:30-6:00 地点 学校操场 对象 全校学生（高三除外） 目的 1. 弘扬中国传统文化； 2. 补充1个目的。 内容 1. 汉服服装秀； 2. 汉服知识竞赛； 3. 补充1项相关活动。 意义 1. 增加了对中国传统文化的了解； 2. 补充1点意义。 要求: 1）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 2）词数：80 词左右（报道的标题和首句已给出，不计入总词数）； 3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。 The Hanfu Festival In recent years, Hanfu revival has become one of China’s many trends among young people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·广东广州·一模）假如你是李华，暑假将有一批英国交换生到你校开展文化交流活动，学校计划通过英语演讲比赛，选出学生代表参与组织活动，你有意竞选。请按照以下要求，结合你的特长设计对应的活动计划，用英语写一份演讲稿。 你的优点 具体表现 活动计划 英语水平好 阅读过大量的英语书籍； 能用英语进行日常交流 ……（请补充一项） 熟悉中国文化 掌握剪纸技巧； ……（请补充一点） ……（请补充一项） 注意： 1．请围绕所给的提示合理发挥； 2．词数80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）； 3．不得透露学校、真实姓名及任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear fellow students, My name is Li Hua. I’m honoured to introduce myself and my ideas on cultural exchange activities to you.... _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ … I hope you will vote for me. Thank you! ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 05 广州市 2024年中考英语作文解读 2022 版课标强调培养学生的语言运用能力、思维品质和文化意识等。 这道中考英语作文命题“An unforgettable school trip”， 1. 从语言运用能力方面，要求学生能够准确运用过去时态来描述旅行经历，比如“went”“spent”“visited”“helped”等动词的过去式，考查学生对时态的掌握和运用。 2. 在思维品质上，学生需要有条理地组织思路，按照时间、地点、人物、活动、感受和收获等方面来阐述，培养逻辑思维和组织能力。 3. 关于文化意识，通过描述学校旅行，学生可以分享不同的文化体验，增进对不同文化背景下活动的理解。 总的来说，这道题很好地体现了 2022 版课标的要求，有助于全面考查学生的英语综合能力。 （2024·广东广州·中考真题）你校将在英语周举办英语征文比赛，主题是“An unforgettable school trip”。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80词左右； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 An unforgettable school trip ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 An unforgettable school trip Our school organized a trip to the Science Museum last Saturday. I went there with all the students and teachers of Grade 9 together. We got together at 8:00 a.m. at the school gate and left for the museum by bus. We took a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there. After that, we took a visit around the different halls of the museum. A variety of advanced inventions had been displayed, from the appliance to industry, education and life. What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of AI. We also enjoyed the delicious food cooked by an AI robot. How amazing! At the end of the visit, we said goodbye to the AI guide. It is a meaningful trip which not only broadens our horizon of the creation world, but also builds up our national confidence. I made up my mind to study hard and make a contribution to my motherland. 【知识点】游览活动、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：一般过去时； ③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生需要按照要点写出相应的内容，不得遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，介绍学校旅行的时间、地点和人物； 第二步，具体介绍这次旅行中你们都做了什么； 第三步，表达对于此次经历的感想以及收获。 [亮点词汇] ①take a lecture听讲座 ②A variety of各种各样的 ③have a better understanding of更好地理解…… ④make a contribution to对……做出贡献 [高分句型] ①We took a lecture by the guide as soon as we got there. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句) ②What impressed me most was the experience of the usage of them, which made me have a better understanding of the knowledge of AI. (which引导的定语从句) 2023年中考英语作文解读 2023 年：以学校志愿队队长的身份给交换生写电邮，介绍主题为 “健康你和我” 的志愿服务活动安排 命题特点： 情境真实：创设了学校志愿队开展活动的真实情境，让学生在具体的情境中运用英语进行交流和表达，体现了语言的交际性。 任务驱动：要求学生以志愿队队长的身份写邮件介绍活动安排，任务明确，具有一定的驱动性，促使学生思考如何用英语清晰、准确地传达信息。 关注健康主题：紧扣 “健康” 这一主题，引导学生关注自身和他人的健康，培养学生的健康意识和社会责任感。 命题优点： 学以致用：让学生将所学的英语知识应用到实际的邮件写作中，提高学生在真实情境中运用英语进行沟通和表达的能力。 培养社会责任感：通过介绍志愿服务活动安排，鼓励学生积极参与社会实践，为他人的健康贡献自己的力量，有助于培养学生的社会责任感和团队合作精神。 开放性与灵活性：在活动安排的内容上，学生有一定的自主发挥空间，可以根据自己的想法和经验进行合理的设计和安排，体现了一定的开放性和灵活性。 对教学的启示：教学中要注重创设真实的语言情境，让学生在情境中学习和运用英语。加强对邮件等应用文写作格式和技巧的教学，提高学生的应用文写作能力。同时，培养学生关注社会、关爱他人的意识，引导学生积极参与社会实践活动。 （2023·广东广州·中考真题）你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题（theme）为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。 Theme Healthy You and Me Time 8:30 a.m.—11:30 a.m. Place Sports Center Activities … Purpose … 注意： 1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80词左右（邮件的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Sam, Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Sam, Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday. Let me introduce something about the activity to you. The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”, and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. It will be held in the Sports Center. There are many interesting activities. First, there will be a sports history show. It will be held in our school hall. Besides, “Healthy You and Me” speech will be on, too. If you want to take part, please let us know before this Friday. There will be different kinds of after-school exercise classes, such as football, basketball, tennis and so on. You can choose the one you like. The main purpose is to increase students’ interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively. I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合表格提示内容介绍活动的安排。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出对活动的重点介绍； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“主题、时间、地点、活动”几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，介绍活动的目的并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①introduce...to...介绍……给…… ②from...to...从……到…… ③different kinds of各种不同的 ④look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①The theme of the activity is “Healthy You and Me”, and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. （and连接并列句） ②The main purpose is to increase students’ interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively.（不定式结构作表语和作宾语补足语） 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022 年：以 “my green school library” 为题介绍所设计的绿色图书馆 命题特点： 主题明确：围绕 “绿色图书馆” 这一主题，通过思维导图给出了具体的写作要点和方向，如图书馆的外观、材料、功能等，内容明确，学生不容易跑题。 强调创新与环保：既考查学生的英语表达能力，又引导学生关注环保、创新等理念，体现了对学生综合素质和创新思维的培养。 形式新颖：以征稿的形式呈现写作任务，增加了写作的情境性和趣味性，能激发学生的写作兴趣和积极性。 命题优点： 培养创新意识：让学生发挥想象，设计自己心目中的绿色图书馆，有利于培养学生的创新能力和创造力。 综合考查能力：学生需要根据思维导图的提示，运用所学的英语知识进行描述和拓展，考查了学生的词汇、语法、句型运用以及篇章组织等综合语言运用能力。 关注社会热点：将环保理念融入作文命题，引导学生关注社会现实问题，增强学生的环保意识。 对教学的启示：教学中要注重培养学生的创新思维和解决实际问题的能力，多提供一些具有开放性和创新性的写作任务。同时，加强对环保、科技等社会热点话题的教学，引导学生关注社会发展，拓宽学生的视野。 （2022·广东广州·中考真题）你校将兴建新图书馆，学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计（design）的绿色图书馆。 注意： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My Green School Library I want to design a green school library. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分优秀范文】 My Green School Library I want to design a green school library. It is green. It is built entirely from renewable resources. It is round. When you sit inside, you will feel very warm. It is composed of waste paper and solar panels. All its energy comes from the sun. You can read all kinds of books in it. You can also listen to music in it. If you are tired, you can also rest inside. 【知识点】学校设施 【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要以“My Green School Library”为题，并根据题干中的思维导图介绍你所设计的绿色图书馆，可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。主要是根据思维导图中的提示描述自己设计的绿色图书馆，写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 这道作文题的出题思路是这样的哟： 1. 它想通过设置一个特别的场景，就是世界冠军李华来上云体育课，来激发同学们的写作兴趣。 2. 要求同学们描述授课者的基本信息，这能考查大家对人物介绍的表达能力。 3. 阐述上课内容，能检验大家对活动描述的语言运用。 4. 分享收获和感受，是为了让大家表达自己的思考和情感体验。 这道题的优点有： 1. 结合了当下热门的云课堂形式，很贴近现实生活。 2. 题目给出了参考词汇，能给同学们一些提示和帮助。 不过呢，也有一点点小挑战： 1. 要在 80 词左右把这些要点都写清楚，对语言的简洁性和准确性要求比较高。 2. 对于“收获和感受”部分，需要同学们有一定的思考和总结能力。 （2021·广东广州·中考真题）今天，跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文日记，记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点： 1.授课者：李华，14岁，红星中学学生； 2.上课内容：跳绳讲解和示范等； 3.你的收获和感受。 注意:1.参考词汇：跳绳(rope skipping)、冠军(champion)； 2.词数：80词左右（日记的开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Monday, May 31st Dear Diary, Today, we had a special online PE lesson.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 Monday, May 31st Dear Diary, Today, we had a special online PE lesson. The teacher was the world champion of rope skipping named Li Hua. He is 14 years old, and he is also the student of Hongxing Middle School. In the class, he explained the way of rope skipping and showed us how to do it well. We were interested in the sports. He answered some questioned and told his experience to us. I learned that the best way to do something best is by practicing it a lot. Practice makes perfect. What an interesting lesson we had! 【知识点】教育、个人经历 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于日记写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；讲述授课者的个人信息，上课的内容，最后讲述个人的收获和感受。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述授课人的信息和课堂内容需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 2020年中考英语作文解读 2020 年：“我送过的一份珍贵礼物” 命题特点： 贴近生活：话题聚焦于学生生活中送礼物的经历，让学生有话可说，能激发学生的情感体验和表达欲望。 立足课内：与教材中的相关话题有所关联，如八年级下册 unit3 的 traditional skills 和九年级上册 unit8 的课文 the gifts，体现了对课本知识的延伸和运用。 考查能力全面：要点用英文给出，既降低了翻译难度，又深入考查学生的语言逻辑衔接能力和拓展写作能力，要求学生不仅能准确表达内容，还需具备较好的逻辑思维和语言组织能力。 命题优点： 引导关注生活：促使学生回顾生活中的点滴，培养学生对身边人、事的关注和感恩之情，有助于情感态度价值观的正向引导。 灵活性与开放性：给予不同程度的考生以不同层次的发挥空间，无论是语言表达能力较强还是较弱的学生，都能根据自己的经历和理解进行写作。 对教学的启示：强调教材知识的掌握和运用，教师在教学中要注重引导学生将课本知识与实际生活相结合。同时，培养学生的语言逻辑思维和拓展写作能力，多进行相关的写作训练，提高学生在给定主题下的内容组织和表达能力。 （2020·广东广州·中考真题）今天的英语课上，班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物，”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文，汇报你们四人小组的分享内容，需包括以下要点。 From Bob Kate Lily You To parents good friend foreign teacher （请补充） What soup Photo album Paper cutting （请补充） Why thanks and love friendship culture （请补充） 注意：1.词数：80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）： 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 In today's English class, we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”. Here is what we shared in ou group. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 In today’s English class.we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”.Here is what we shared in our group. A valuable gift given by Bob was a bowl of soup to his parents. In his opinion, he considered it as a good gift to express his thanks and love to them. Kate gave a photo album to one of her good friends because she wanted to cherish every moment with her/him, hoping that their friendship could last forever. In addition, Lily sent her foreign teacher a piece of paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture. For me, what I gave to my grandparent was a smartphone. We don't live together and my parents are so busy that we can't meet each other often. However, we can have video chats by smartphone. 【知识点】其他人 【详解】题干解读：这篇短文要求学生们根据题目中给出的图表，汇报一下你这个小组中四个人送过的珍贵的礼物。写作前，应仔细观察图表中的信息，浏览可知，短文中应介绍清楚这个礼物是谁送给谁的，是什么以及为什么送这个礼物。图表中给出的都是关键词语，学生写作时，应用完整的句子表达。并且对于最后一栏中自己送的礼物，学生需要发挥想象力，结合实际情况，进行补充。短文应以一般过去时态为主来叙述。 例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先文章内容完整，包括了图表中的所有信息，对最后一栏的内容进行了补充，并对细节进行了拓展，使文章的内容更加充实。短文有三段，第一段是题目中给出的开头；第二段中作者主要介绍了小组中其他三人送的礼物；最后一段介绍了自己送过的礼物。层次清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，符合表达需要，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，有变化，增强了文章的表现力。 高分亮点： 短语：in one’s opinion；in addition；each other。 句型：过去分词作后置定语；动词不定式作目的状语；because引导原因状语从句；现在分词作伴随状语；which引导定语从句；what引导主语从句；so…that引导结果状语从句。 最新模拟 一、书面表达 1．（2024·广东广州·二模）假如你是校研学俱乐部(Study Trip Club)部长李华，俱乐部将于下周六组织研学活动，请你以“Welcome to Our Study Trip”为题给校报写一篇短文，介绍这次研学活动的内容和意义，并号召同学们积极参加。 Who will go? Where will you go? What will you do? What will you learn? Grade 7 students The Children’s Park plant trees … Grade 8 students Tea House make dim sum a… skill Grade 9 students The History Museum … Chinese history ... 注意： 1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80词左右(开头已给出，不计入字数)； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Welcome to Our Study Trip Our Study Trip Club will organize a trip for us next Saturday._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2024·广东广州·二模）初中生活即将结束，英语校报计划开展以“回顾初中生活，书写难忘时光”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图的提示，任选一或两点，分享你的成长故事及其对你的启发。 注意： 1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数80词左右(稿件的开头已给出，不计入词数)； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Growing up How time flies! My junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I have a lot of unforgettable memories._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2024·广东广州·三模）假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办题为“AI in Our Life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿，包含以下内容： 注意： 1．参考词汇：AI人工智能。 2．文中需包含所给的相关信息，并可作适当想象和发挥。 3．文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 4．词数80词左右。 AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your listening! 4．（2024·广东广州·三模）上周，你去了科技博物馆参观，你对“未来人类与机器人生活”主题展厅的一款家庭医生机器人Home Doctor很感兴趣，你打算在本周英语课上向同学们介绍它。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇英语短文，为介绍做准备。 Home Doctor What does it look like? ●… ●… What can it do? ●… ●… What did it do at the show? ●… What do you think of it? ●… How did you feel after the visit? 注意： （1）必须包含全部要点，可适当拓展； （2）词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）； （3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Last week, I went to the Science and Technology Museum. I was greatly interested in a new kind of robot ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·广东广州·二模）你校正在开展“共创校园之美”的活动，学校英文报以“Make our school more beautiful”为题向学生征稿，请根据以下图示的内容写一则短文投稿，介绍你美化校园的活动设想。 注意： 1.词数80—120个左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥）； 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 In order to make our school more beautiful, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·广东广州·二模）为提升公众环保意识，你校将组织主题为 Protect the Earth, Start from Now公益活动，同学们分组向市民宣传环保知识，请你写一封 e-mail 邀请英国交流生 Mike 参加活动，告知他你所参加的小组的两项具体活动。 Theme (主题): Protect the Earth, Start from Now Time June, 29th Place The People’s Park Group Group 1: Green Consumer Group 2: Protect Animals Group 3: Guard the Blue Sky 要求： 1、80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2、涵盖要求的内容并适当拓展。 Dear Mike, Our school will hold an environmental protection activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Jia Ming 7．（2024·广东广州·二模）数据显示，我国家庭智能机器人的市场需求正在增强。针对这一现象，你以“Is home robot a good idea?”为主题在班里进行了一项调查并在英语活动课上就此发言。请你根据图表中的调查结果写一篇发言稿，陈述同学们的观点及理由并表达你的个人看法。 要求： (1)词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2)包含上述提示要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。 Is home robot a good idea?      As society develops, more and more families use home robots in their daily lives. Is it a good idea?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2024·广东广州·二模）21世纪报Teens正在举行以“To be better”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下征文海报，写一篇英语短文投稿，分享你在提升自我方面的一次经历以及收获，并谈谈你在这方面的计划。 注意： (1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； (2)词数：80—100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I did a lot of things to make myself better. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（2024·广东广州·二模）近些年，汉服在年轻人中很受欢迎。假如你是李华，上周二你校开展了校园汉服节活动（the Hanfu Festival），请你以The Hanfu Festival为标题，给校园英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 时间 上周二下午 4:30-6:00 地点 学校操场 对象 全校学生（高三除外） 目的 1. 弘扬中国传统文化； 2. 补充1个目的。 内容 1. 汉服服装秀； 2. 汉服知识竞赛； 3. 补充1项相关活动。 意义 1. 增加了对中国传统文化的了解； 2. 补充1点意义。 要求: 1）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 2）词数：80 词左右（报道的标题和首句已给出，不计入总词数）； 3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。 The Hanfu Festival In recent years, Hanfu revival has become one of China’s many trends among young people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（2024·广东广州·一模）假如你是李华，暑假将有一批英国交换生到你校开展文化交流活动，学校计划通过英语演讲比赛，选出学生代表参与组织活动，你有意竞选。请按照以下要求，结合你的特长设计对应的活动计划，用英语写一份演讲稿。 你的优点 具体表现 活动计划 英语水平好 阅读过大量的英语书籍； 能用英语进行日常交流 ……（请补充一项） 熟悉中国文化 掌握剪纸技巧； ……（请补充一点） ……（请补充一项） 注意： 1．请围绕所给的提示合理发挥； 2．词数80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）； 3．不得透露学校、真实姓名及任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear fellow students, My name is Li Hua. I’m honoured to introduce myself and my ideas on cultural exchange activities to you.... _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ … I hope you will vote for me. Thank you! 参考答案： 1．【优秀满分范文】 Welcome to Our Study Trip Our Study Trip Club will organize a trip for us next Saturday. Grade 7 students will go to the Children’s Park to plant trees. This activity will help them understand the importance of environmental protection. Grade 8 students will visit the Tea House to learn how to make dim sum, which is a valuable traditional skill. Grade 9 students will go to the History Museum to learn about Chinese history, which will deepen their understanding of our cultural heritage. This study trip is a great opportunity for us to learn outside the classroom. Let’s all participate and make the most of it! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】计划、旅行 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合表格提示内容介绍活动的安排。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍研学活动的安排； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“年级、地点、活动”几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，介绍活动的意义并号召同学们积极参加。 [亮点词汇] ①organize a trip 组织一次旅行 ②environmental protection 环境保护 ③valuable traditional skill 宝贵的传统技能 ④cultural heritage 文化遗产 [高分句型] Grade 8 students will visit the Tea House to learn how to make dim sum, which is a valuable traditional skill.（定语从句） 2.【优秀满分范文】 Growing up  How time flies! My junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I have a lot of unforgettable memories. One of the the most mermorable experiences was partcipating in the school’s annual science fair. I worked tirelessly on my project about renewable energy sources. Through this experience, I learned the importance of perseverance and teamwork. It also sparked my interest in environmental science, which I plan to pursue in the future. Another unforgettable moment was when I had a speech in front of the classmates, I was so nervous that I couldn’t speak out any words. But after adjusting my mood, I overcame the nervousness and tried to speak. Finally , I won the second prize. Although it was not perfect, I knew how great I was in my mind.     Growing up is like a race with yourself. I hope that we will try our best to become the best one. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】毕业活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“回首往事，有很多难忘的回忆。”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——成长故事及启发等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“希望我们都能努力成为最好的。”的美好。 [亮点词汇] ①the importance of……的重要性 ②come to an end结束 ③plan to do计划做某事 [高分句型] ①It also sparked my interest in environmental science, which I plan to pursue in the future.(定语从句） ②I was so nervous that I couldn’t speak out any words. (so...that...引导结果状语从句) 3．【优秀满分范文】 AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. We can see all kinds of AI products in our daily life. For example, smartphones can make work and study more efficient. If we have any problems in our studies, we will ask smartphones for help. Cleaning robots can help with housework. They all bring great convenience and progress to our society. However, with AI technology being widely used, many workers lost their jobs. Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves. All in all, just as every coin has its two sides, AI products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future. That’s all. Thank you for your listening! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】科学技术、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从学习及生活等方面介绍AI改变了我们的生活； 第二步，介绍对于AI的一些担忧； 第三步，最后介绍自己对AI的一些看法。 [亮点词汇] ① all kinds of各种各样的 ② ask for help请求帮助 ③ in the future在将来 [高分句型] ① If we have any problems in our studies, we will ask smartphones for help.（if引导的条件状语从句） ② I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future.（that引导的宾语从句） 4．【优秀满分范文】 Last week, I went to the Science and Technology Museum. I was greatly interested in a new kind of robot “Home Dcotor”. It is red and looks like a lovely girl, and it is about 1.2 meters tall. Home Doctor can not only offer health advice, but also treat diseases at home. At the show, it demonstrated how to check blood pressure and give dietary suggestions. I think it’s a very useful invention that will be a good assistant to people. If its prices can be a little lower, each family can enjoy its service. After the visit, I felt excited and hopeful about the future of healthcare technology. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】发明与创造 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据提示要点介绍这款家庭医生机器人，注意不要遗漏参观后的感受的写作，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍家庭机器人的外形、颜色等内容； 第二步，介绍机器人能做什么及它在展览中展示了什么； 第三步，表达自己的看法及感受。 [亮点词汇] ①not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ②give dietary suggestions提供饮食建议 ③check blood pressure检查血压 [高分句型] ①At the show, it demonstrated how to check blood pressure and give dietary suggestions. (疑问词+不定式作宾语) ②I think it’s a very useful invention that will be a good assistant to people. (宾语从句；that引导定语从句) 5．【优秀满分范文】 In order to make our school more beautiful, I plan to do some meaningful activities with my classmates. The first thing we decide to do is to create a beautiful environment. We will clean every corner of the school. Meanwhile, more flowers and trees will be planted along the main roads of the school. Our school will surely take on a new look after our careful cleaning and gardening. Then, it’s necessary to encourage our schoolmates to do more reading. We will put up educational posters and set up Reading Corners on every floor so that book lovers can share their wonderful ideas. This will make learning possible in every part of the school. Besides, there will be lectures about good manners for the students. Experts will show students not only how to dress properly, but also behave politely at school. With their helpful advice, students can realize the importance of one’s inner beauty and become a better self. Let’s all work together to make our school more beautiful. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】文体活动、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：一般现在时、一般将来时； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己计划和同学们一起做一些有意义的活动； 第二步，从“环境、文化、人等”几个方面重点介绍自己的计划、活动方式及其带来的变化； 第三步，表达“共同努力，使学校更美丽”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① take on a new look 焕然一新 ② put up 张贴 ③ set up 设立 ④ not only... but also ... 不仅……而且…… ⑤ realize the importance of 认识到……的重要性 ⑥ inner beauty 内在美 [高分句型] ① The first thing we decide to do is to create a beautiful environment.（that引导定语从句，that省略） ② Then, it’s necessary to encourage our schoolmates to do more reading.（it固定句式） ③ We will put up educational posters and set up Reading Corners on every floor so that book lovers can share their wonderful ideas.（so that引导目的状语从句） ④ Let’s all work together to make our school more beautiful.（祈使句，动词不定式作目的状语） 6．【优秀满分范文】 Dear Mike, Our school will hold an environmental protection activity. The theme of the event is “Protect the Earth, Start from Now”, which aims to raise public awareness about environmental issues. The activity is scheduled for June 29th at the People’s Park. Our school has been divided into several groups, each focusing on a specific aspect of environmental protection. I am part of Group 1, which is dedicated to promoting green consumption, and we will be educating the public on the importance of sustainable shopping habits. Additionally, we will hold educational workshops. We will be conducting workshops to educate people on the environmental impact of their consumption habits. I believe this is a great opportunity for us to make a positive impact and contribute to our planet’s well-being. I sincerely hope you can join us for this event. Looking forward to your reply.                                                                                                                                                           Yours,                                                                                                                                                       Jia Ming 【难度】0.65 【知识点】志愿服务、环境保护 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态应为“一般现在时“和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点包括活动的主题、时间、地点、小组分配和具体活动内容。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。通过介绍即将举行的公益活动来引出邀请； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细介绍活动的主题、时间、地点以及你所在的小组和小组的具体活动内容； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望Mike能够参加的愿望，并结束邮件。 [亮点词汇] ① protect保护 ② environmental环境的 ③ participate参加 [高分句型] The theme of the event is “Protect the Earth, Start from Now”, which aims to raise public awareness about environmental issues.（定语从句） 7．【优秀满分范文】 Is home robot a good idea? As society develops, more and more families use home robots in their daily lives. Is it a good idea? I’ve made a survey in our class recently. Let’s have a look at the result of my survey. 60% of the students think it’s a good idea. Here are their reasons. First home robots help with housework so that people have more time to do things they enjoy. Second, home robots can act as guards when no one is at home. This gives people a sense of security. Third, they can also make people feel less lonely. Fourth, they can improve the efficiency of work. However, 28% of the students disagree with the following reasons. First, depending on the robots too much may make people lazier. Second, most robots have cameras to collect information. That puts the owners’ private information at a risk of being exposed. Third, it also costs too much to buy a home robot at present. Finally, Home robots are high-energy appliances. As for the rest of the students, they are not sure if it’s a good idea to have a home robot. In my opinion, home robots can make our lives easier. I will surely get one in the future. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】发明与创造、意见/建议 【详解】[整体介绍] ①体裁：本文是一篇议论文，属于材料作文； ②时态：采用“一般现在时” ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，条理清晰，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引出话题； 第二步：陈述各方观点及理由； 第三步：表达自己的观点及理由。 [亮点词汇] ①make sb. do sth.使某人做某事 ②depend on依赖 ③at a risk of 冒着……的风险 [高分句型] ①First home robots help with housework so that people have more time to do things they enjoy. （目的状语从句） ②As for the rest of the students, they are not sure if it’s a good idea to have a home robot.（宾语从句） 8．【优秀满分范文】 To be better I did a lot of things to make myself better, such as reading books, keeping exercising, entering a competition and doing a volunteer job. The most meaningful experience was joining an English speaking competition. Before the competition, I was not confident and was afraid to speak English in front of others. But my teacher encouraged me to challenge myself. So I practised again and again whenever I had time. During the competition, I did quite well and got the first prize. After the competition, I became more confident in learning English. And I also learned that hard work pays off. For the future, I plan to read more books and join an English club to improve myself. I believe every effort will bring me closer to my goals. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】计划、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括提升自我方面经历的过程、结果和对未来的打算。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的状态和经历——参加英语演讲比赛； 第二步，描述参赛过程，包括自己的感受和努力； 第三步，描述比赛的结果和对自己的影响； 第四步，阐述自己的未来计划。 [亮点词汇] ①be afraid to do 害怕做 ②encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 ③pay off 带来好结果 [高分句型] ①I practiced again and again whenever I had time.（whenever引导的状语从句） ②I believe every effort will bring me closer to my goals.（省略了that的宾语从句） 9．【优秀满分范文】 The Hanfu Festival In recent years, Hanfu revival has become one of China’s many trends among young people. Last Tuesday, our school hosted a Hanfu Festival. Held from 4:30 pm to 6:00 pm on the school playground, the festival was a great success, attracting students from all grades except for the graduating seniors. The primary aim of the festival was to promote the traditional Chinese culture, with an additional purpose of fostering a sense of pride among the students. The festival kicked off with a spectacular Hanfu fashion show, which was followed by a lively Hanfu knowledge contest about the history of Hanfu. In addition to these activities, there was a traditional Chinese music and dance performance. The significance of the Hanfu Festival went beyond mere entertainment. It helped deepen the students’ appreciation for Chinese traditional culture, and it also provided a unique opportunity for cultural exchange. In conclusion, the Hanfu Festival was both educational and entertaining. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】文体活动、中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为一般过去时； ③提示：写作时注意围绕所给问题展开描述，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍汉服节活动举办的时间，地点以及对象； 第二步，介绍汉服节活动的目的，内容以及意义； 第三步，书写结语，概括总结此次活动。 [亮点词汇] ①except for 除了 ②a sense of pride自豪感 ③kick off（使）（事件、比赛或讨论等）开始 [高分句型] ①Held from 4:30 PM to 6:00 PM on the school playground, the festival was a great success, attracting students from all grades except for the graduating seniors. (非谓语作状语) ②The festival kicked off with a spectacular Hanfu fashion show, which was followed by a lively Hanfu knowledge contest about the history of Hanfu. (定语从句) ③It helped deepen the students’ appreciation for Chinese traditional culture, and it also provided a unique opportunity for cultural exchange. (并列句) 10．【优秀满分范文】 Dear fellow students, My name is Li Hua. I’m honoured to introduce myself and my ideas on cultural exchange activities to you. Firstly, I have an advantage in English. I’ve read plenty of English books so far and I have no problem communicating with English speakers. As a result, we can have a discussion on “beauty of your own country” with the exchange students. What’s more, I konw a lot about Chinese culture. I can not only make paper-cuttings, but also play Erhu. We can hold an art show to show the traditional culture of the two countries. I think it’s everyone’s duty to popularize our traditional culture. I hope you will vote for me. Thank you. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】个人信息、文体活动 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍自己的优点及其具体表现； 第二步，介绍活动计划。 [亮点词汇] ①have an advantage in...在……方面有优势 ②as a result因此 ③what’s more更重要的是 [高分句型] ①I think it’s everyone’s duty to popularize our traditional culture.（省略that的宾语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$