03 重庆市-2024年中考英语作文解读及五年满分作文汇编

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03 重庆市 2024年中考英语作文解读 重庆A卷 • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:属于看图叙事的题材,要求学生根据给定的图片内容进行故事描述,文体为记叙文。这种形式考查学生观察图片、理解图片信息以及用英语进行连贯叙事的能力。 • 内容与主题:主题聚焦在一个温馨的师生互动故事上,通过描述Hannah在下雨天的经历以及学生们为她准备的惊喜,体现了师生之间的深厚情感和学生们的温暖举动。学生在写作时需要详细描述图片中的场景、人物的动作和表情等,如Hannah一开始的低落情绪(upset)、看到空教室时的担心和生气(worried and angry),以及最后学生们出现时她的惊喜和笑容(her face lit up)等,从而完整地呈现出这个故事的情节发展。这样的出题方式不仅考查学生的英语语言表达能力,还考查学生对细节的把握和对情感的传达能力,同时也能引导学生关注身边的美好情感和温暖瞬间,培养学生的情感认知和表达能力。 • 与往年对比及趋势:与往年相比,2024年A卷的作文题目在形式上有所创新,采用了看图叙事的方式,增加了题目的直观性和趣味性。从整体趋势来看,中考英语作文在题材和形式上更加多样化,注重考查学生的综合语言运用能力和思维能力,同时也越来越贴近学生的生活实际和情感体验,引导学生在写作中表达自己的真实感受和思考,体现了对学生综合素质的重视和培养。 重庆B卷 中考英语作文题目为:以英语为母语的汉语初学者往往对含义丰富的汉语表达产生困惑,请考生讲述一件这样的趣事;举例谈谈语言发展中的“词汇互借”;赞赏语言在促进交流(增进了解)中的积极作用或表达考生的感悟。其出题解读如下: • 题材与文体:材料作文,要求以书信的形式进行写作(虽然题目中未明确要求书信格式,但从内容和情境来看,以书信形式较为合适)。这考查学生对材料的理解、分析能力以及运用书信文体进行表达的能力。 • 内容与主题:主题围绕语言学习中的趣事和现象展开。内容包括讲述一件汉语初学者对汉语表达产生困惑的趣事,如外国朋友对“加油”“纸老虎”等词汇的不理解或误解的有趣场景;举例说明语言发展中“词汇互借”的现象,像“coffee→咖啡”“sofa→沙发”“豆腐→tofu”“功夫→kungfu”等;同时要赞赏语言在促进交流、增进了解中的积极作用或表达自己对语言的感悟。这样的设置既考查学生的语言积累和对不同语言现象的观察、理解能力,又引导学生思考语言在跨文化交流中的重要性和意义,培养学生的跨文化意识和语言运用能力。例如,学生在讲述趣事时,要生动地描述出双方因语言差异而产生的误解和有趣的互动过程;在举例“词汇互借”时,要准确说明词汇的来源和在不同语言中的使用情况;在赞赏语言的积极作用或表达感悟时,要能深入地阐述语言如何促进人与人之间的沟通和理解。 • 与往年对比及趋势:与往年相比,2024年B卷作文题目在主题上更加关注语言文化领域,体现了对学生跨文化交际能力和语言素养的考查。从趋势上看,中考英语作文不仅注重对学生日常生活的关注,还逐渐拓展到对文化、语言等更广泛领域的考查,引导学生关注不同文化之间的交流与融合,以及语言在其中所起到的桥梁作用,这对学生的综合素质和全球视野提出了更高的要求。同时,材料作文的形式也增加了题目的开放性和灵活性,要求学生在理解材料的基础上,能够自主选择角度和内容进行写作,充分展示自己的思维能力和语言表达能力。 (2024·重庆·中考真题A卷)雨天总让人烦恼,下雨了,愁眉苦脸的主人公又急又慌地赶往学校,哪知随后却有惊喜发生…… 发生了什么呢?请根据上述文字,并借助图片完整描述一个故事。文中需体现心情变化及感悟。 要求: 1.80—120词; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: sad, upset, umbrella, rush to, hurry... close to nature: raindrop, ant, plant, soil, fresh air... outdoor activities: raincoat, puddle (水洼), jump like frogs... indoor activities: class talent show, reading and storytelling... art: painting, drawing pictures, movie day... others: hug, praise, present, party... natural thing, enjoy, cheer, joy, better manage, bright side, don’t trouble yourself... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 One rainy day, Mary was in a rush to school, feeling sad and upset. But on the way, she noticed raindrops hitting the ground, ants scurrying around, and plants looking fresh. Several students, wearing raincoats and carrying umbrellas, were playing in puddles in the rain. They jumped like frogs and had a lot of fun. Mary joined them and felt little better. When Mary reached school, there was a class talent show. She performed well and got hugs, praises, and even a present, which made her surprised and happy. She realized that instead of being troubled by the rain, she should see the bright side. Just like in a story or a painting, there are always different aspects. She learned not to let small things bother her and to enjoy every moment. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】叙事忆旧、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为看图作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:根据表格中的参考内容结合图片,完成故事的写作,注意语法正确,逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步,引出故事发生的时间、地点、人物,并介绍上学路上发生的事情,以及主人公的心情; 第二步,介绍到了学校后发生的事情,以及主人公的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①in a rush匆忙地 ②had a lot of fun玩得很开心 ③talent show才艺表演 [高分句型] ①When Mary reached school, there was a class talent show.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②She performed well and got hugs, praises, and even a present, which made her surprised and happy. (定语从句) ③She realized that instead of being troubled by the rain, she should see the bright side.(宾语从句) (2024·重庆·中考真题B卷)以英语为母语的汉语初学者往往对含义丰富的汉语表达产生困惑,请你讲述一件这样的趣事;举例谈谈语言发展中的“词汇互借”;赞赏语言在促进交流(增进了解)中的积极作用或表达你的感悟。 要求: 1. 80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 加油 (jiayou): add oil (come on) 纸老虎 (zhilaohu): paper tiger (someone or something that is not as powerful as he/it looks) ... coffee→咖啡;sofa→沙发…… 豆腐→tofu;功夫→kung fu…… not a barrier but a carrier; pay attention to; the cultural meanings; understand better ... one day; a basketball game; Jiayou! Jiayou! look around; in surprise; no need to add oil... long history; communications between; take words from; be used by … ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Chinese language is extensive and profound. Many Chinese beginners are confused by the rich Chinese expressions. Here is a funny thing. There was a basketball game at school. During the game, everyone shouted, “Jiayou! Jiayou!” But a foreign friend said in surprise, “There’s no need to add oil. Why are you saying ‘Jiayou!’?” When I heard this, I couldn’t help laughing and explained the reason to him. There are many examples of taking words from each other between communications, such as coffee, kung fu and so on. Language plays a positive role in promoting communication. When we pay attention to the cultural meanings behind the words, we understand them better. In fact, it’s not a barrier but a carrier. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】语言与文化 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:一般现在时,一般过去时; ③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,引出一件趣事; 第二步,具体介绍这件趣事; 第三步,介绍语言发展中的“词汇互借”以及对于语言的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①extensive and profound 博大精深 ②couldn’t help doing 忍不住做某事 ③each other 彼此 ④In fact 事实上 [高分句型] ①When I heard this, I couldn’t help laughing and explained the reason to him.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②There are many examples of taking words from each other between communications, such as coffee, kung fu and so on.(There be句型) ③When we pay attention to the cultural meanings behind the words, we understand them better.(when引导的时间状语从句) 2023年中考英语作文解读 • A 卷: • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:这是一篇记叙文,要求学生根据所给开头,结合自身的想法和经历来阐述如何孝敬老人。这种题材与学生的日常生活紧密相关,能够引导学生关注家庭和社会中的老年人,培养他们的尊老敬老意识。 • 内容与主题:主题明确为关爱老人,学生需要具体阐述孝敬老人的做法和原因。例如,可以写经常陪老人读书、带老人外出活动、教老人新事物等,并且要说明这些做法能给老人带来的好处,如陪伴带来快乐、促进健康、让老人保持良好精神状态等。这不仅考查学生的英语表达能力,还能促使学生思考和践行传统美德。 • 与往年对比及趋势:与往年相比,2023年 A 卷作文更注重对学生品德教育和传统文化的考查,体现了中考作文在引导学生价值观方面的作用。从趋势上看,中考作文越来越倾向于结合社会热点和传统价值观,让学生在写作中表达自己的见解和情感,同时也更加注重考查学生对日常生活的观察和思考能力。 • B 卷: • 题目内容:以“Working together is important for teenagers.”(团队合作对青少年很重要)为开头,写一篇关于自己最难忘的一次团队合作经历的作文,并说明从这次经历中学到了什么。 • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:同样是记叙文,围绕团队合作展开。这一题材旨在让学生通过描述自己的亲身经历,体会团队合作的重要性。 • 内容与主题:主题突出团队合作的意义,学生需要详细描述一次具体的团队合作经历,如参加比赛、完成项目等。在描述过程中,要体现团队成员之间的分工协作、遇到的困难以及如何解决等,最后阐述从这次经历中获得的关于团队合作的感悟,如学会倾听他人意见、如何有效表达自己的想法、沟通能力得到提升等。这种出题方式既考查了学生的叙事能力,又引导学生关注团队合作在学习和生活中的重要性。 • 与往年对比及趋势:和 A 卷一样,B 卷也注重对学生情感态度和价值观的引导。从整体趋势来看,中考作文在题材上更加多样化,涵盖了个人成长、品德培养、社会现象等多个方面;在考查能力上,不仅要求学生具备良好的语言表达能力,还注重对学生思维能力、情感体验和价值观的考查。 (2023·重庆·中考真题A卷)“孝亲敬长”是中华民族的传统美德,家中老人尤其需要陪伴与关爱。校英语广播站正开展“孝敬祖辈,点滴做起”的好点子征集活动。请推荐一至两个切实可行的点子并讲述理由,以号召更多人孝敬祖辈,传承美德。 要求: 1.80—120词; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: Hello, everyone. Caring for the older persons is the Chinese traditional virtue(美德). _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Hello, everyone. Caring for the older persons is the Chinese traditional virtue(美德). The elderly in the family especially need companionship and care. As children, we should honor our elders. First of all, we can often read books with the elderly, so that we can not only spend time with the elderly, but also bring happiness to them. Second, we can take the elderly out regularly to promote physical activity, help them stay healthy, and help them to relieve psychological pressure. Third, we can teach the older persons some new things, which can make them feel young and in a good mental state. Everyone will be old one day, so let’s take action. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步,具体阐述可以孝敬老人的想法; 第二步,介绍这样做的原因; 第三步,最后让大家采取行动。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①First of all, we can often read books with the elderly, so that we can not only spend time with the elderly, but also bring happiness to them. (so that引导的目的状语从句) ②Third, we can teach the older persons some new things, which can make them feel young and in a good mental state.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) (2023·重庆·中考真题B卷)团队协作是21世纪人才必备能力之一。信任、配合、包容、沟通、责任、倾听是团队协作中重要的品质。你校校刊英语专栏以“团队协作”为话题发起征文,请你讲述自己团队协作的经历,分享其中令你最受益的品质及你的感悟,以供他人借鉴和学习。 要求: 1. 80—120词; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Working together is important for teenagers. Last term, Liz, Anne and I entered a science competition. Our task was to create a poster board with information about spaceships. After discussion, each of us got a job. Liz and Anne went to the library to look for more information about spaceships. I searched for the pictures we needed on the internet. The next day, we organized the information and decided what we wanted to put on the board. After that, we spent three days making the poster board. Finally, we won second prize. When working as a team, I learned how to work well with my partners. I listened to them carefully and I respectfully and confidently expressed my ideas. My communication skills have improved a lot. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】叙事忆旧、合作与交流 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“从这次经历中学到什么”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,指出团队合作很重要; 第二步,具体阐述最难忘的一次团队合作经历; 第三步,书写结语,总结这次经历中的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①look for寻找 ②search for搜索 ③work as a team团队合作 [高分句型] ①The next day, we organized the information and decided what we wanted to put on the board.(what引导的宾语从句) ②I searched for the pictures we needed on the internet.(省略that的定语从句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年重庆中考英语作文真题(A卷) • 题目内容:你校 English Corner 将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请写一篇发言稿,讲述你通过有效控制愤怒,成功解决某一问题的小故事,包括起因、经过、结果,并分享你的感悟。 • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:这是一篇记叙文,以发言稿的形式呈现。这种题材和文体的结合,既考查学生叙述故事的能力,又要求学生具备在特定场合(英语角)进行交流和表达的能力。 • 内容与主题:主题明确为控制愤怒并解决问题。学生需要讲述一个自己因控制愤怒而成功解决问题的具体事例,比如与同学或朋友之间发生矛盾冲突,通过控制情绪、冷静思考找到解决办法。在描述过程中,要清晰地阐述事件的起因,如朋友的某些行为引发自己的愤怒;经过部分要详细说明自己是如何控制愤怒情绪以及采取的具体解决措施;结果则是问题得到妥善解决。最后,还要分享从这件事中获得的感悟,如保持冷静有助于恢复理智、学会反思能更好地处理问题、有效沟通是解决矛盾的关键等。这不仅考查学生的英语表达能力,还引导学生反思自己在处理情绪和问题时的方式方法,培养学生的情绪管理和问题解决能力。 • 与往年对比及趋势:与往年相比,2022年 A 卷作文更注重对学生个人成长和情感管理方面的考查。从趋势上看,中考作文越来越关注学生的内心世界和综合素质,引导学生在学习英语的同时,注重自身品德修养和能力的提升,强调英语在实际生活中的运用和对学生思维、情感的培养。 2022年重庆中考英语作文真题(B卷) • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:这是一篇演讲稿,属于应用文的范畴,同时也具有一定的议论性质。演讲稿的形式要求学生能够用较为正式、有感染力的语言进行表达,考查学生在特定情境下运用英语进行公众演讲的能力。 • 内容与主题:主题围绕“Sharing”(分享)展开。首先,学生需要阐述分享的意义,如分享可以让我们获取更多知识,因为每个人都有自己独特的见解和经验,通过分享可以学习到不同的观点和方法;分享能开阔视野,了解到更多不同的文化、思想和生活方式;分享还可以增进友谊,在分享的过程中能加深与他人的交流和理解。其次,要结合具体事例来讲述自己的分享经历,比如在学习中分享学习方法、学习资料,或者在生活中帮助他人解决问题、分享快乐等。最后,呼吁大家多分享,强调分享对个人和社会的积极影响,鼓励大家在日常生活中积极践行分享的精神。这道题既考查学生对分享这一主题的理解和思考,又考查学生组织材料、运用语言进行论述和表达的能力,同时也培养学生的分享意识和社会责任感。 • 与往年对比及趋势:与往年相比,2022年 B 卷作文在题材上更加贴近学生的校园生活和日常体验,注重引导学生从自身经历出发,思考和阐述一个具有普遍意义的主题。从趋势来看,中考作文在题材选择上会继续关注学生的生活实际和成长需求,在文体上会更加多样化,考查学生在不同情境下运用英语进行表达和交流的能力,同时也会越来越强调对学生思维能力、价值观和综合素养的考查。 (2022·重庆·中考真题A卷)有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智,找回方向,解决问题。你校English Corner 将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿,讲述你通过有效控制愤怒,成功解决某一问题的小故事,并分享你的感悟。 要求: 1. 80—120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考词汇:anger n.[U] 愤怒 1.有效控制愤怒,成功解决问题的小故事(起因、经过、结果) 2.你的感悟(保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……) 3. …… Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening. 【满分作文】 Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better? Here is my experience. Last term, I bought a magazine that I had always wanted. I liked it so much that I was careful every time I carried it. But one day, my best friend Tom took the magazine without telling me. When I found it, I was very angry. But I calmed down soon. I thought of how Tom helped me when I was in trouble and I didn’t want to break the relationship between us. So I controlled my anger and decided to have a talk with him. I told him that he should tell me if he wanted to read the magazine. After the talk, our relationship became stronger. From this experience, when we are angry, we should calm ourselves down and learn to reflect. The most important is to communicate with others on time so that we can solve the problems better. Thanks for listening. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】叙事忆旧、情绪 【详解】1.题干解读:本文以“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”为题,结合自己的经历讲述通过有效控制愤怒,成功解决一件小事,可适当增加细节。 2. 写作指导:本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段引入话题;第二段讲述自己有效控制愤怒,成功解决问题的小故事;第三段描述自己的感悟。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 3. (2022·重庆·中考真题B卷) 科学研究发现,快乐可让我们身体更健康、思维更敏捷、心态更阳光。独乐乐不如众乐乐。某英语网站以“传递快乐”为主题发起故事分享活动,请讲述生活中你通过传递快乐(直接或间接的),感染他人的小故事。 要求: 1. 80-120词; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 1. 起因,经过; 2. 结果,感悟; 3. …… _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】     A study shows that happiness can make people healthier in mind and mental. Our positive mood has an influence on others. I want to share my experience with you.     I have a good friend and her name is Lucy. She was so short that other classmates always laughed at her. She was very upset. At that time I always told her some funny stories to cheer her up. And to become tall and strong, I also taught her to keep a healthy diet and do some exercise. Little by little, she became confident. From this experience, I learn that happiness is important and it can bring us a lot like a more sunny mindset. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】个人经历、朋友、哲理感悟 【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。以“传递快乐”为题写一篇短文。 2.写作指导:本文主要采用第三人称和第一人称,时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段讲述自己传递快乐的经历;最后表达自己从这次经历的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 • A 卷: • 题目内容:教育部印发通知要求控制中小学生书面作业总量并合理布置不同类型作业,某英文杂志社开展以“my creative English homework”为主题的征文活动。要求写一篇征文,讲述自身经历,提出合理建议。包括做过的最有创意的英语作业(内容、收获),更多有创意的英语作业建议(形式、理由)。 • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:这是一篇记叙文与议论文相结合的作文。题材聚焦学生的英语作业,贴近学生学习生活实际,让学生有话可说。 • 内容与主题:主题围绕英语作业的创意,学生需要描述自己做过的最有创意的英语作业,如制作海报、画思维导图、给外国人写信介绍春节等,并阐述从中获得的收获,如提高写作技巧、传播中国文化等。同时,还要提出更多有创意的英语作业建议及理由,如通过唱英文歌提高英语和爱好发展等。这样的出题既考查学生对英语学习的体验和思考,也鼓励学生发挥想象力和创造力,对英语作业形式进行创新探索,培养创新思维和英语综合运用能力。 • 与往年对比及趋势:与往年相比,2021年 A 卷作文更注重引导学生关注学习过程中的创新和实践,体现了对学生综合素质和创新能力的考查。从趋势上看,中考作文越来越强调学生在实际生活情境中运用英语的能力,以及对学习、生活等方面的思考和感悟。 • B 卷: • 题目内容:新冠疫情提醒人们重视健康,越来越多人通过运动保持健康,但运动安全不容小觑。要求给校报的英语栏目“English Corner”投稿,号召同学们重视运动安全。包括运动安全的现状和重要性,以及运动安全的建议(着装、热身、规则等)。 • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:这是一篇议论文。题材紧扣社会热点——新冠疫情下人们对健康的重视以及运动安全问题,具有很强的现实意义。 • 内容与主题:主题是强调运动安全的重要性并给出建议。学生需要阐述运动安全的现状,如人们运动时可能忽视安全导致受伤等,说明运动安全的重要性,例如保障身体健康、避免运动损伤影响生活和学习等。接着提出运动安全的具体建议,如穿着合适的运动服装和鞋子、做好热身运动、遵守运动规则等,并说明这些建议的理由。这道题考查学生对社会现象的观察和思考能力,以及运用英语表达观点和提出建议的能力,引导学生树立安全意识和健康生活的理念。 • 与往年对比及趋势:和往年相比,2021年 B 卷作文更关注社会热点问题与学生生活的结合,突出了英语的实用性和教育功能。在趋势上,中考作文逐渐倾向于引导学生关注社会现实,运用英语知识解决实际问题,培养学生的社会责任感和思维能力。 (2021·重庆·中考真题B卷)新冠疫情提醒人们更加重视健康。越来越多的人通过运动来保持健康,但是运动安全也不容小觑。请你给校报的英语栏目English Corner投稿,号召同学们重视运动安全。 要求: 1.80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 1.运动安全的现状和重要性; 2.运动安全的建议(着装、热身、规则……); 3.……. 参考词汇:热身运动 warming-up exercise COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health. Today I want to talk about sports safety. Sports safety is of great importance in our daily life. Nowadays, students pay less attention to sports safety. So there are all kinds of accidents that happen at schools. We do exercise because it can improve our physical fitness and health. To keep safe can ensure that we can better achieve the goals of sports. When we exercise, we should do enough warming-up activities. We should wear comfortable and suitable clothes. We should adopt the right way of rest, pay attention to the reasonable diet and health care. We should exercise to keep healthy, and we should also pay attention to sports safety. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】健康与运动、安全守则、意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容,介绍运动安全的相关问题。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。 2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍运动安全的现状和重要性;第三段给出运动安全的建议;第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。 (2021·重庆·中考真题A卷)教育部近日印发通知,要求控制中小学生的书面作业总量,合理布置不同类型的作业。为此,某英文杂志社正在开展以 “My Creative English Homework”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文,讲述自身经历,提出合理建议。 要求:1. 80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;    2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息:1. 做过的最有创意的英语作业(内容、收获……);    2. 更多有创意的英语作业建议(形式、理由……); 3. …… My Creative English Homework Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 My Creative English Homework Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English. Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring Festival in the letter. It not only helped me improve my written skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture. In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing. In this way, our English as well as hobbies develop. I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】学习科目、学习体验、意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文,要求根据所给的参考信息以 “My Creative English Homework”为题写一篇征文,从自身经历来谈谈自己的有创意的英语作业,并提出合理的建议。注意要点齐全。 2.写作指导:审题可知,本文写自身经历时用一般过去时,提建议时可采用一般现在时,人称主要以第一、三人称交替使用。文章开头已给出,第一段点题;第二段写自身经历,第三段提出建议;第四段总结。写作中可使用亮点词汇和句型为文章增添色彩,如:not only...but also...,It固定句型等。注意保证上下文语句通顺,条理清晰,文中无单词和语法上的错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 A 卷作文:“Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School” • 劳动教育的意义: • 学习生活技能:通过劳动教育,学生能亲身体验和学习诸如打扫卫生、整理物品、种植植物等生活技能,这些技能对他们日后的独立生活至关重要。比如学会做饭,就能在离开父母后自己解决饮食问题。 • 养成良好习惯:劳动过程中需要学生遵循一定的规则和步骤,长期参与劳动有助于学生养成做事有条理、认真负责、注重细节等良好习惯。例如,在校园清洁活动中,学生学会按区域打扫、有序摆放工具等,将这种习惯延伸到学习和生活其他方面,有助于提高学习效率和生活质量。 • 校内劳动教育建议: • 开设种植课:学校可以开辟专门的种植区域,让学生参与种植蔬菜、花卉等。这不仅能让学生了解植物的生长过程,培养他们的耐心和观察力,还能让他们体会到劳动的艰辛和收获的喜悦。比如学生亲自播种、浇水、施肥,看着植物从种子慢慢长大,到最后收获成果,这个过程能让他们对劳动有更深刻的理解。 • 组织做蛋糕比赛:这种活动具有趣味性和实践性。学生在准备比赛的过程中,需要学习蛋糕制作的步骤、技巧,以及如何分工合作。这能锻炼他们的动手能力、团队协作能力和创新能力。同时,通过比赛的形式,还能激发学生的竞争意识和对劳动的积极性。 B 卷作文 出题解读如下: • 语言运用能力:考查学生对词汇、语法、句型等的掌握程度。学生需要准确运用所学的英语知识来表达自己的观点和想法。 • 逻辑思维能力:要求学生在写作过程中有清晰的思路和合理的结构。文章应具有开头、中间和结尾,内容连贯,逻辑严密。 • 表达能力:注重学生能否用恰当的语言表达自己的情感、态度和观点。同时,也考查学生的语言丰富度和多样性。 对于“practice speaking English”这个主题,可以从以下几个方面进行写作: • 阐述练习说英语的重要性,如提高口语表达能力、增强自信心、更好地与外国人交流等。 • 介绍一些练习说英语的方法,如参加英语角、与外教交流、看英语电影、模仿英语演讲等。 • 分享自己练习说英语的经历和体会,包括遇到的困难和解决方法。 在写作时,要注意语法正确、词汇丰富、表达流畅,同时要符合题目要求和字数限制。 总体而言,2020 年重庆市中考英语 A 卷和 B 卷的作文题目都紧密联系学生的生活实际,既考查了学生的英语语言表达能力,又引导学生关注劳动教育的重要性以及自身的兴趣爱好和成长发展,具有一定的教育意义和现实价值。 (2020·重庆·中考真题B卷)某中学对高一新生进行了英语口语能力问卷调查, 以下是其中两个问题的调查数据。假如你是该校高一新生, 请结合下图数据和自身口语情况, 给你的英语老师写一篇短文。 要求∶ 1. 80-120词, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 1. 描述问卷调查结果(频率、方法); 2. 介绍自身口语情况(水平、打算·…); 3. …. The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. 45% of the students usually practice speaking English, and 38% of the students practise speaking English sometimes. How do you practise speaking English? Most students speak more only in class. Some of the students talk with friends in English. Some students practise speking English in other ways. In my opinion, we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can. Also, we should often listen to English stories in order to improve our understanding about English. Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others! This is quite important. Over and above, we should learn more English words. Only in this way, can we be good English speaker! 【难度】0.4 【知识点】学习策略 【详解】题干解读:这是一个看图作文,图中列出了某中学对学生进行的英语口语能力的调查问卷,包括两个问题,一个是“你多久练习说一次英语”;另一个是“你怎样练习说英语”。学生们应仔细观察图表中的信息,将这两个问题的调查结果表达出来。短文中还应包括另外一个内容,即介绍自己口语的情况,并对如何提高口语能力,提出自己的建议。短文应以一般现在时态为主,根据表达需要选择适当的人称。 例文点评:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整,叙述条理,结构清晰。文章采取两段式结构,第一段主要介绍该问卷调查的结果,包含了图表中的所有信息,没有遗漏要点,且各部分内容安排合理,有层次;第二段是自己的口语情况,以及对如何提高口语能力的建议。其次短文语法正确,用词准确,句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为基础,还使用了祈使句、宾语从句、非谓语动词等结构,表达流畅,意思连贯。 高分亮点: 短语:talk with;in other ways;in one’s opinion;be afraid of;in this way。 句型:45% of the students usually practice speaking English, and 38% of the students practise speaking English sometimes.;In my opinion, we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can.;Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others!;Only in this way, can we be good English speaker! (2020·重庆·中考真题A卷)国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此,你校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义,以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育,发起征文。请你以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 为题,写一篇短文参赛。 要求: 1. 80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 1. 劳动教育的意义(学习生活技能、养成良好习惯……); 2. 校内劳动教育建议(开设种植课、组织做蛋糕比赛……); 3. …… Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it's important. We can learn some life skills and form good habits. Both will help us a lot in the future. As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What's more, the school can set up some clubs, such as cooking club and paper-cutting club. The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful. I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、教育 【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此,学校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义,以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育,发起征文。要求以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 为题,写一篇短文参赛。首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。 2.例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。 3.高分亮点: 短语:a lot,in the future,what's more,set up,such as,look forward to,do well in。 句型:I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. 我期待着在新学期上这门课。look forward to doing sth期待做某事,固定搭配。   I believe I will do well in it. 我相信我会做得很好。I believe后接宾语从句;do well in在……方面做得好。 最新模拟 1.(2024·重庆江北·二模)勤俭节约是我们中华民族的优良传统。你校最近发起“倡导绿色生活,创建节约型校园”活动,请你给校刊“English Corner”写一篇英文稿件,谈谈作为一名中学生,你在日常生活中是如何厉行节约、杜绝浪费的。 要求: 1. 80—120词,开头已给出; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: Save Everything in Our Lives ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.(2024·重庆北碚·二模)新一轮创建“全国文明城区”(build a national civilized city) 的活动已经拉开帷幕,创建文明城区,校英语广播站正以“What can we do to build a national civilized city?”为主题开展英语征文比赛。请提供至少两条切实可行的建议,并说明原因。 要求: 1. 80—100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 What can we do to build a national civilized city?     As we all know, our city is building a national civilized city. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.(2024·重庆沙坪坝·三模)初中三年转瞬即逝。在这三年里,在良师的陪伴下,你们一定对各种精彩纷呈的课程记忆犹新,这些课或有趣,或生动,或深刻……也正是因为有了这些别样精彩的课程,大家一步步成长为有理想爱生活的青少年。某英语杂志社毕业专题栏目现向初中毕业生征稿,请以“A/An ______ Class”为题,描述你在初中生涯里上过的精彩一课,总结这节课令你印象深刻的地方以及你从中的收获。 要求: 1. 100—120词; 2. 文中不能出现自己和老师的姓名以及所在学校的名称。 A/An ______ class ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.(2024·重庆巴南·三模)习总书记时刻关心青少年的成长,强调要培养德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。为此,学校英语社团发出倡议,征集“追梦新时代,争做好少年”的演讲稿。请以“How to be an excellent teenager”为主题, 写一篇演讲稿,积极投稿。 要求: 1. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称; 2. 80-120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考信息: Hello, everyone! I’d like to share my ideas about how to be an excellent teenager. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 5.(2024·重庆沙坪坝·二模)粮食事关国运民生,是国家安全的重要基础。你校正在开展“节约粮食,杜绝浪费”的活动,学校English Corner 将以“Say ‘No’ to Food Waste”为题组织一次演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,简述节约粮食的重要性,提出2—3条杜绝粮食浪费的措施,并号召青少年厉行节约,反对浪费。 要求: 1. 80—120词; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: Importance: a Chinese traditional virtue (美德) help stop hunger … Methods: Make a shopping list eat up the food take leftover (剩菜) home not order too much … take action … Say “No” to Food Waste Ladies and gentlemen, It’s a great honor for me to deliver a speech themed “Say ‘No’ to Food Waste”. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.(2024·重庆渝中·三模)人生如登山,每征服一座山都会带给你不同的风景。每一座山都是一次洗礼,每一次挫折都是一次成长。请记你成长中的一次挫折或困难,并讲述你的应对之道及带给你的启示。 要求: 1. 80—120词; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: Idea bank: fail an exam/lose a game/have a fight with family/have relationship problems with friends or classmates/feel stressed out … How to solve the problem: make a study plan/ask teachers for help/practice more/work with a team/have a talk with parents/ … get stronger become better … __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.(2024·重庆九龙坡·二模)最近,教育部发文指出,要建设“和谐有序、丰富活力”的校园,并强调良好的学生关系在其中的重要作用。作为九年级的学长,请你写一篇演讲稿,向同学们说明良好学生关系的重要性,提出建立良好关系的具体建议,并号召同学们一起行动。要求: 1. 词数:80—120词; 2. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8.(2024·重庆九龙坡·三模)今年五月,教育部决定开展第一个全国心理健康宣传教育月活动,其主题鲜明:“全社会都行动起来,共促学生心理健康”。在这股倡导关爱与成长的浪潮中,我校“英语俱乐部”积极响应,举办了一场题为“A Heartwarming Story”的征文大赛,旨在挖掘并传颂那些在生活中默默发光的温暖瞬间。请你分享一则发生在你身上的暖心故事,参加本次征文比赛。 要求: 1.80—120词; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 1.描述一个发生在你身上的暖心故事 (可参考故事山模型);2.说明这个故事为何让你感到温暖…… A Heartwarming Story __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9.(2024·重庆江津·三模)假设上个月你参加了学校组织的郊游活动,参观了现代农场。请以“A School Trip to the Modem Farm”为题,写一篇英语短文。 提示: 1. Who did you go to the farm with? 2. How did you get there? 3. What did you do there? 4. How did you feel? 要求: 1. 词数80—120词: 2. 在提示问题的基础上写作,也可适当发挥想象; 3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、班名和校名。 A School Trip to the Modern Farm _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10.(2024·重庆渝中·二模)书籍是人生的导师,拥有改变我们命运的力量。2024年的世界读书日的主题为“阅读推动未来”。为了更深入地了解人们的阅读方式,学校英语社团在社区开展了以People’s Favorite Book-reading Ways为主题的调查,请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。 内容包括: 1. 描述调查结果; 2. 陈述你的读书方式并说明理由; 3. …… 要求: 1. 80—120词; 2. 短文须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺; 3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Recently, the school’s English club did a survey in the community about people’s favorite book-reading ways. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$ 03 重庆市 2024年中考英语作文解读 重庆A卷 • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:属于看图叙事的题材,要求学生根据给定的图片内容进行故事描述,文体为记叙文。这种形式考查学生观察图片、理解图片信息以及用英语进行连贯叙事的能力。 • 内容与主题:主题聚焦在一个温馨的师生互动故事上,通过描述Hannah在下雨天的经历以及学生们为她准备的惊喜,体现了师生之间的深厚情感和学生们的温暖举动。学生在写作时需要详细描述图片中的场景、人物的动作和表情等,如Hannah一开始的低落情绪(upset)、看到空教室时的担心和生气(worried and angry),以及最后学生们出现时她的惊喜和笑容(her face lit up)等,从而完整地呈现出这个故事的情节发展。这样的出题方式不仅考查学生的英语语言表达能力,还考查学生对细节的把握和对情感的传达能力,同时也能引导学生关注身边的美好情感和温暖瞬间,培养学生的情感认知和表达能力。 • 与往年对比及趋势:与往年相比,2024年A卷的作文题目在形式上有所创新,采用了看图叙事的方式,增加了题目的直观性和趣味性。从整体趋势来看,中考英语作文在题材和形式上更加多样化,注重考查学生的综合语言运用能力和思维能力,同时也越来越贴近学生的生活实际和情感体验,引导学生在写作中表达自己的真实感受和思考,体现了对学生综合素质的重视和培养。 重庆B卷 中考英语作文题目为:以英语为母语的汉语初学者往往对含义丰富的汉语表达产生困惑,请考生讲述一件这样的趣事;举例谈谈语言发展中的“词汇互借”;赞赏语言在促进交流(增进了解)中的积极作用或表达考生的感悟。其出题解读如下: • 题材与文体:材料作文,要求以书信的形式进行写作(虽然题目中未明确要求书信格式,但从内容和情境来看,以书信形式较为合适)。这考查学生对材料的理解、分析能力以及运用书信文体进行表达的能力。 • 内容与主题:主题围绕语言学习中的趣事和现象展开。内容包括讲述一件汉语初学者对汉语表达产生困惑的趣事,如外国朋友对“加油”“纸老虎”等词汇的不理解或误解的有趣场景;举例说明语言发展中“词汇互借”的现象,像“coffee→咖啡”“sofa→沙发”“豆腐→tofu”“功夫→kungfu”等;同时要赞赏语言在促进交流、增进了解中的积极作用或表达自己对语言的感悟。这样的设置既考查学生的语言积累和对不同语言现象的观察、理解能力,又引导学生思考语言在跨文化交流中的重要性和意义,培养学生的跨文化意识和语言运用能力。例如,学生在讲述趣事时,要生动地描述出双方因语言差异而产生的误解和有趣的互动过程;在举例“词汇互借”时,要准确说明词汇的来源和在不同语言中的使用情况;在赞赏语言的积极作用或表达感悟时,要能深入地阐述语言如何促进人与人之间的沟通和理解。 • 与往年对比及趋势:与往年相比,2024年B卷作文题目在主题上更加关注语言文化领域,体现了对学生跨文化交际能力和语言素养的考查。从趋势上看,中考英语作文不仅注重对学生日常生活的关注,还逐渐拓展到对文化、语言等更广泛领域的考查,引导学生关注不同文化之间的交流与融合,以及语言在其中所起到的桥梁作用,这对学生的综合素质和全球视野提出了更高的要求。同时,材料作文的形式也增加了题目的开放性和灵活性,要求学生在理解材料的基础上,能够自主选择角度和内容进行写作,充分展示自己的思维能力和语言表达能力。 (2024·重庆·中考真题A卷)雨天总让人烦恼,下雨了,愁眉苦脸的主人公又急又慌地赶往学校,哪知随后却有惊喜发生…… 发生了什么呢?请根据上述文字,并借助图片完整描述一个故事。文中需体现心情变化及感悟。 要求: 1.80—120词; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: sad, upset, umbrella, rush to, hurry... close to nature: raindrop, ant, plant, soil, fresh air... outdoor activities: raincoat, puddle (水洼), jump like frogs... indoor activities: class talent show, reading and storytelling... art: painting, drawing pictures, movie day... others: hug, praise, present, party... natural thing, enjoy, cheer, joy, better manage, bright side, don’t trouble yourself... ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 One rainy day, Mary was in a rush to school, feeling sad and upset. But on the way, she noticed raindrops hitting the ground, ants scurrying around, and plants looking fresh. Several students, wearing raincoats and carrying umbrellas, were playing in puddles in the rain. They jumped like frogs and had a lot of fun. Mary joined them and felt little better. When Mary reached school, there was a class talent show. She performed well and got hugs, praises, and even a present, which made her surprised and happy. She realized that instead of being troubled by the rain, she should see the bright side. Just like in a story or a painting, there are always different aspects. She learned not to let small things bother her and to enjoy every moment. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】叙事忆旧、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为看图作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:根据表格中的参考内容结合图片,完成故事的写作,注意语法正确,逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步,引出故事发生的时间、地点、人物,并介绍上学路上发生的事情,以及主人公的心情; 第二步,介绍到了学校后发生的事情,以及主人公的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①in a rush匆忙地 ②had a lot of fun玩得很开心 ③talent show才艺表演 [高分句型] ①When Mary reached school, there was a class talent show.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②She performed well and got hugs, praises, and even a present, which made her surprised and happy. (定语从句) ③She realized that instead of being troubled by the rain, she should see the bright side.(宾语从句) (2024·重庆·中考真题B卷)以英语为母语的汉语初学者往往对含义丰富的汉语表达产生困惑,请你讲述一件这样的趣事;举例谈谈语言发展中的“词汇互借”;赞赏语言在促进交流(增进了解)中的积极作用或表达你的感悟。 要求: 1. 80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 加油 (jiayou): add oil (come on) 纸老虎 (zhilaohu): paper tiger (someone or something that is not as powerful as he/it looks) ... coffee→咖啡;sofa→沙发…… 豆腐→tofu;功夫→kung fu…… not a barrier but a carrier; pay attention to; the cultural meanings; understand better ... one day; a basketball game; Jiayou! Jiayou! look around; in surprise; no need to add oil... long history; communications between; take words from; be used by … ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Chinese language is extensive and profound. Many Chinese beginners are confused by the rich Chinese expressions. Here is a funny thing. There was a basketball game at school. During the game, everyone shouted, “Jiayou! Jiayou!” But a foreign friend said in surprise, “There’s no need to add oil. Why are you saying ‘Jiayou!’?” When I heard this, I couldn’t help laughing and explained the reason to him. There are many examples of taking words from each other between communications, such as coffee, kung fu and so on. Language plays a positive role in promoting communication. When we pay attention to the cultural meanings behind the words, we understand them better. In fact, it’s not a barrier but a carrier. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】语言与文化 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:一般现在时,一般过去时; ③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,引出一件趣事; 第二步,具体介绍这件趣事; 第三步,介绍语言发展中的“词汇互借”以及对于语言的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①extensive and profound 博大精深 ②couldn’t help doing 忍不住做某事 ③each other 彼此 ④In fact 事实上 [高分句型] ①When I heard this, I couldn’t help laughing and explained the reason to him.(when引导的时间状语从句) ②There are many examples of taking words from each other between communications, such as coffee, kung fu and so on.(There be句型) ③When we pay attention to the cultural meanings behind the words, we understand them better.(when引导的时间状语从句) 2023年中考英语作文解读 • A 卷: • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:这是一篇记叙文,要求学生根据所给开头,结合自身的想法和经历来阐述如何孝敬老人。这种题材与学生的日常生活紧密相关,能够引导学生关注家庭和社会中的老年人,培养他们的尊老敬老意识。 • 内容与主题:主题明确为关爱老人,学生需要具体阐述孝敬老人的做法和原因。例如,可以写经常陪老人读书、带老人外出活动、教老人新事物等,并且要说明这些做法能给老人带来的好处,如陪伴带来快乐、促进健康、让老人保持良好精神状态等。这不仅考查学生的英语表达能力,还能促使学生思考和践行传统美德。 • 与往年对比及趋势:与往年相比,2023年 A 卷作文更注重对学生品德教育和传统文化的考查,体现了中考作文在引导学生价值观方面的作用。从趋势上看,中考作文越来越倾向于结合社会热点和传统价值观,让学生在写作中表达自己的见解和情感,同时也更加注重考查学生对日常生活的观察和思考能力。 • B 卷: • 题目内容:以“Working together is important for teenagers.”(团队合作对青少年很重要)为开头,写一篇关于自己最难忘的一次团队合作经历的作文,并说明从这次经历中学到了什么。 • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:同样是记叙文,围绕团队合作展开。这一题材旨在让学生通过描述自己的亲身经历,体会团队合作的重要性。 • 内容与主题:主题突出团队合作的意义,学生需要详细描述一次具体的团队合作经历,如参加比赛、完成项目等。在描述过程中,要体现团队成员之间的分工协作、遇到的困难以及如何解决等,最后阐述从这次经历中获得的关于团队合作的感悟,如学会倾听他人意见、如何有效表达自己的想法、沟通能力得到提升等。这种出题方式既考查了学生的叙事能力,又引导学生关注团队合作在学习和生活中的重要性。 • 与往年对比及趋势:和 A 卷一样,B 卷也注重对学生情感态度和价值观的引导。从整体趋势来看,中考作文在题材上更加多样化,涵盖了个人成长、品德培养、社会现象等多个方面;在考查能力上,不仅要求学生具备良好的语言表达能力,还注重对学生思维能力、情感体验和价值观的考查。 (2023·重庆·中考真题A卷)“孝亲敬长”是中华民族的传统美德,家中老人尤其需要陪伴与关爱。校英语广播站正开展“孝敬祖辈,点滴做起”的好点子征集活动。请推荐一至两个切实可行的点子并讲述理由,以号召更多人孝敬祖辈,传承美德。 要求: 1.80—120词; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: Hello, everyone. Caring for the older persons is the Chinese traditional virtue(美德). _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Hello, everyone. Caring for the older persons is the Chinese traditional virtue(美德). The elderly in the family especially need companionship and care. As children, we should honor our elders. First of all, we can often read books with the elderly, so that we can not only spend time with the elderly, but also bring happiness to them. Second, we can take the elderly out regularly to promote physical activity, help them stay healthy, and help them to relieve psychological pressure. Third, we can teach the older persons some new things, which can make them feel young and in a good mental state. Everyone will be old one day, so let’s take action. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】中华文化 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步,具体阐述可以孝敬老人的想法; 第二步,介绍这样做的原因; 第三步,最后让大家采取行动。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ③take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①First of all, we can often read books with the elderly, so that we can not only spend time with the elderly, but also bring happiness to them. (so that引导的目的状语从句) ②Third, we can teach the older persons some new things, which can make them feel young and in a good mental state.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) (2023·重庆·中考真题B卷)团队协作是21世纪人才必备能力之一。信任、配合、包容、沟通、责任、倾听是团队协作中重要的品质。你校校刊英语专栏以“团队协作”为话题发起征文,请你讲述自己团队协作的经历,分享其中令你最受益的品质及你的感悟,以供他人借鉴和学习。 要求: 1. 80—120词; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Working together is important for teenagers. Last term, Liz, Anne and I entered a science competition. Our task was to create a poster board with information about spaceships. After discussion, each of us got a job. Liz and Anne went to the library to look for more information about spaceships. I searched for the pictures we needed on the internet. The next day, we organized the information and decided what we wanted to put on the board. After that, we spent three days making the poster board. Finally, we won second prize. When working as a team, I learned how to work well with my partners. I listened to them carefully and I respectfully and confidently expressed my ideas. My communication skills have improved a lot. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】叙事忆旧、合作与交流 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“从这次经历中学到什么”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,指出团队合作很重要; 第二步,具体阐述最难忘的一次团队合作经历; 第三步,书写结语,总结这次经历中的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①look for寻找 ②search for搜索 ③work as a team团队合作 [高分句型] ①The next day, we organized the information and decided what we wanted to put on the board.(what引导的宾语从句) ②I searched for the pictures we needed on the internet.(省略that的定语从句) 2022年中考英语作文解读 2022年重庆中考英语作文真题(A卷) • 题目内容:你校 English Corner 将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请写一篇发言稿,讲述你通过有效控制愤怒,成功解决某一问题的小故事,包括起因、经过、结果,并分享你的感悟。 • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:这是一篇记叙文,以发言稿的形式呈现。这种题材和文体的结合,既考查学生叙述故事的能力,又要求学生具备在特定场合(英语角)进行交流和表达的能力。 • 内容与主题:主题明确为控制愤怒并解决问题。学生需要讲述一个自己因控制愤怒而成功解决问题的具体事例,比如与同学或朋友之间发生矛盾冲突,通过控制情绪、冷静思考找到解决办法。在描述过程中,要清晰地阐述事件的起因,如朋友的某些行为引发自己的愤怒;经过部分要详细说明自己是如何控制愤怒情绪以及采取的具体解决措施;结果则是问题得到妥善解决。最后,还要分享从这件事中获得的感悟,如保持冷静有助于恢复理智、学会反思能更好地处理问题、有效沟通是解决矛盾的关键等。这不仅考查学生的英语表达能力,还引导学生反思自己在处理情绪和问题时的方式方法,培养学生的情绪管理和问题解决能力。 • 与往年对比及趋势:与往年相比,2022年 A 卷作文更注重对学生个人成长和情感管理方面的考查。从趋势上看,中考作文越来越关注学生的内心世界和综合素质,引导学生在学习英语的同时,注重自身品德修养和能力的提升,强调英语在实际生活中的运用和对学生思维、情感的培养。 2022年重庆中考英语作文真题(B卷) • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:这是一篇演讲稿,属于应用文的范畴,同时也具有一定的议论性质。演讲稿的形式要求学生能够用较为正式、有感染力的语言进行表达,考查学生在特定情境下运用英语进行公众演讲的能力。 • 内容与主题:主题围绕“Sharing”(分享)展开。首先,学生需要阐述分享的意义,如分享可以让我们获取更多知识,因为每个人都有自己独特的见解和经验,通过分享可以学习到不同的观点和方法;分享能开阔视野,了解到更多不同的文化、思想和生活方式;分享还可以增进友谊,在分享的过程中能加深与他人的交流和理解。其次,要结合具体事例来讲述自己的分享经历,比如在学习中分享学习方法、学习资料,或者在生活中帮助他人解决问题、分享快乐等。最后,呼吁大家多分享,强调分享对个人和社会的积极影响,鼓励大家在日常生活中积极践行分享的精神。这道题既考查学生对分享这一主题的理解和思考,又考查学生组织材料、运用语言进行论述和表达的能力,同时也培养学生的分享意识和社会责任感。 • 与往年对比及趋势:与往年相比,2022年 B 卷作文在题材上更加贴近学生的校园生活和日常体验,注重引导学生从自身经历出发,思考和阐述一个具有普遍意义的主题。从趋势来看,中考作文在题材选择上会继续关注学生的生活实际和成长需求,在文体上会更加多样化,考查学生在不同情境下运用英语进行表达和交流的能力,同时也会越来越强调对学生思维能力、价值观和综合素养的考查。 (2022·重庆·中考真题A卷)有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智,找回方向,解决问题。你校English Corner 将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿,讲述你通过有效控制愤怒,成功解决某一问题的小故事,并分享你的感悟。 要求: 1. 80—120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考词汇:anger n.[U] 愤怒 1.有效控制愤怒,成功解决问题的小故事(起因、经过、结果) 2.你的感悟(保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……) 3. …… Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening. 【满分作文】 Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better? Here is my experience. Last term, I bought a magazine that I had always wanted. I liked it so much that I was careful every time I carried it. But one day, my best friend Tom took the magazine without telling me. When I found it, I was very angry. But I calmed down soon. I thought of how Tom helped me when I was in trouble and I didn’t want to break the relationship between us. So I controlled my anger and decided to have a talk with him. I told him that he should tell me if he wanted to read the magazine. After the talk, our relationship became stronger. From this experience, when we are angry, we should calm ourselves down and learn to reflect. The most important is to communicate with others on time so that we can solve the problems better. Thanks for listening. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】叙事忆旧、情绪 【详解】1.题干解读:本文以“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”为题,结合自己的经历讲述通过有效控制愤怒,成功解决一件小事,可适当增加细节。 2. 写作指导:本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段引入话题;第二段讲述自己有效控制愤怒,成功解决问题的小故事;第三段描述自己的感悟。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 3. (2022·重庆·中考真题B卷) 科学研究发现,快乐可让我们身体更健康、思维更敏捷、心态更阳光。独乐乐不如众乐乐。某英语网站以“传递快乐”为主题发起故事分享活动,请讲述生活中你通过传递快乐(直接或间接的),感染他人的小故事。 要求: 1. 80-120词; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 1. 起因,经过; 2. 结果,感悟; 3. …… _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】     A study shows that happiness can make people healthier in mind and mental. Our positive mood has an influence on others. I want to share my experience with you.     I have a good friend and her name is Lucy. She was so short that other classmates always laughed at her. She was very upset. At that time I always told her some funny stories to cheer her up. And to become tall and strong, I also taught her to keep a healthy diet and do some exercise. Little by little, she became confident. From this experience, I learn that happiness is important and it can bring us a lot like a more sunny mindset. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】个人经历、朋友、哲理感悟 【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。以“传递快乐”为题写一篇短文。 2.写作指导:本文主要采用第三人称和第一人称,时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段讲述自己传递快乐的经历;最后表达自己从这次经历的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。 2021年中考英语作文解读 • A 卷: • 题目内容:教育部印发通知要求控制中小学生书面作业总量并合理布置不同类型作业,某英文杂志社开展以“my creative English homework”为主题的征文活动。要求写一篇征文,讲述自身经历,提出合理建议。包括做过的最有创意的英语作业(内容、收获),更多有创意的英语作业建议(形式、理由)。 • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:这是一篇记叙文与议论文相结合的作文。题材聚焦学生的英语作业,贴近学生学习生活实际,让学生有话可说。 • 内容与主题:主题围绕英语作业的创意,学生需要描述自己做过的最有创意的英语作业,如制作海报、画思维导图、给外国人写信介绍春节等,并阐述从中获得的收获,如提高写作技巧、传播中国文化等。同时,还要提出更多有创意的英语作业建议及理由,如通过唱英文歌提高英语和爱好发展等。这样的出题既考查学生对英语学习的体验和思考,也鼓励学生发挥想象力和创造力,对英语作业形式进行创新探索,培养创新思维和英语综合运用能力。 • 与往年对比及趋势:与往年相比,2021年 A 卷作文更注重引导学生关注学习过程中的创新和实践,体现了对学生综合素质和创新能力的考查。从趋势上看,中考作文越来越强调学生在实际生活情境中运用英语的能力,以及对学习、生活等方面的思考和感悟。 • B 卷: • 题目内容:新冠疫情提醒人们重视健康,越来越多人通过运动保持健康,但运动安全不容小觑。要求给校报的英语栏目“English Corner”投稿,号召同学们重视运动安全。包括运动安全的现状和重要性,以及运动安全的建议(着装、热身、规则等)。 • 出题解读: • 题材与文体:这是一篇议论文。题材紧扣社会热点——新冠疫情下人们对健康的重视以及运动安全问题,具有很强的现实意义。 • 内容与主题:主题是强调运动安全的重要性并给出建议。学生需要阐述运动安全的现状,如人们运动时可能忽视安全导致受伤等,说明运动安全的重要性,例如保障身体健康、避免运动损伤影响生活和学习等。接着提出运动安全的具体建议,如穿着合适的运动服装和鞋子、做好热身运动、遵守运动规则等,并说明这些建议的理由。这道题考查学生对社会现象的观察和思考能力,以及运用英语表达观点和提出建议的能力,引导学生树立安全意识和健康生活的理念。 • 与往年对比及趋势:和往年相比,2021年 B 卷作文更关注社会热点问题与学生生活的结合,突出了英语的实用性和教育功能。在趋势上,中考作文逐渐倾向于引导学生关注社会现实,运用英语知识解决实际问题,培养学生的社会责任感和思维能力。 (2021·重庆·中考真题B卷)新冠疫情提醒人们更加重视健康。越来越多的人通过运动来保持健康,但是运动安全也不容小觑。请你给校报的英语栏目English Corner投稿,号召同学们重视运动安全。 要求: 1.80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 1.运动安全的现状和重要性; 2.运动安全的建议(着装、热身、规则……); 3.……. 参考词汇:热身运动 warming-up exercise COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health. Today I want to talk about sports safety. Sports safety is of great importance in our daily life. Nowadays, students pay less attention to sports safety. So there are all kinds of accidents that happen at schools. We do exercise because it can improve our physical fitness and health. To keep safe can ensure that we can better achieve the goals of sports. When we exercise, we should do enough warming-up activities. We should wear comfortable and suitable clothes. We should adopt the right way of rest, pay attention to the reasonable diet and health care. We should exercise to keep healthy, and we should also pay attention to sports safety. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】健康与运动、安全守则、意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容,介绍运动安全的相关问题。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。 2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍运动安全的现状和重要性;第三段给出运动安全的建议;第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。 (2021·重庆·中考真题A卷)教育部近日印发通知,要求控制中小学生的书面作业总量,合理布置不同类型的作业。为此,某英文杂志社正在开展以 “My Creative English Homework”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文,讲述自身经历,提出合理建议。 要求:1. 80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;    2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息:1. 做过的最有创意的英语作业(内容、收获……);    2. 更多有创意的英语作业建议(形式、理由……); 3. …… My Creative English Homework Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 My Creative English Homework Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English. Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring Festival in the letter. It not only helped me improve my written skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture. In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing. In this way, our English as well as hobbies develop. I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】学习科目、学习体验、意见/建议 【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文,要求根据所给的参考信息以 “My Creative English Homework”为题写一篇征文,从自身经历来谈谈自己的有创意的英语作业,并提出合理的建议。注意要点齐全。 2.写作指导:审题可知,本文写自身经历时用一般过去时,提建议时可采用一般现在时,人称主要以第一、三人称交替使用。文章开头已给出,第一段点题;第二段写自身经历,第三段提出建议;第四段总结。写作中可使用亮点词汇和句型为文章增添色彩,如:not only...but also...,It固定句型等。注意保证上下文语句通顺,条理清晰,文中无单词和语法上的错误。 2020年中考英语作文解读 A 卷作文:“Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School” • 劳动教育的意义: • 学习生活技能:通过劳动教育,学生能亲身体验和学习诸如打扫卫生、整理物品、种植植物等生活技能,这些技能对他们日后的独立生活至关重要。比如学会做饭,就能在离开父母后自己解决饮食问题。 • 养成良好习惯:劳动过程中需要学生遵循一定的规则和步骤,长期参与劳动有助于学生养成做事有条理、认真负责、注重细节等良好习惯。例如,在校园清洁活动中,学生学会按区域打扫、有序摆放工具等,将这种习惯延伸到学习和生活其他方面,有助于提高学习效率和生活质量。 • 校内劳动教育建议: • 开设种植课:学校可以开辟专门的种植区域,让学生参与种植蔬菜、花卉等。这不仅能让学生了解植物的生长过程,培养他们的耐心和观察力,还能让他们体会到劳动的艰辛和收获的喜悦。比如学生亲自播种、浇水、施肥,看着植物从种子慢慢长大,到最后收获成果,这个过程能让他们对劳动有更深刻的理解。 • 组织做蛋糕比赛:这种活动具有趣味性和实践性。学生在准备比赛的过程中,需要学习蛋糕制作的步骤、技巧,以及如何分工合作。这能锻炼他们的动手能力、团队协作能力和创新能力。同时,通过比赛的形式,还能激发学生的竞争意识和对劳动的积极性。 B 卷作文 出题解读如下: • 语言运用能力:考查学生对词汇、语法、句型等的掌握程度。学生需要准确运用所学的英语知识来表达自己的观点和想法。 • 逻辑思维能力:要求学生在写作过程中有清晰的思路和合理的结构。文章应具有开头、中间和结尾,内容连贯,逻辑严密。 • 表达能力:注重学生能否用恰当的语言表达自己的情感、态度和观点。同时,也考查学生的语言丰富度和多样性。 对于“practice speaking English”这个主题,可以从以下几个方面进行写作: • 阐述练习说英语的重要性,如提高口语表达能力、增强自信心、更好地与外国人交流等。 • 介绍一些练习说英语的方法,如参加英语角、与外教交流、看英语电影、模仿英语演讲等。 • 分享自己练习说英语的经历和体会,包括遇到的困难和解决方法。 在写作时,要注意语法正确、词汇丰富、表达流畅,同时要符合题目要求和字数限制。 总体而言,2020 年重庆市中考英语 A 卷和 B 卷的作文题目都紧密联系学生的生活实际,既考查了学生的英语语言表达能力,又引导学生关注劳动教育的重要性以及自身的兴趣爱好和成长发展,具有一定的教育意义和现实价值。 (2020·重庆·中考真题B卷)某中学对高一新生进行了英语口语能力问卷调查, 以下是其中两个问题的调查数据。假如你是该校高一新生, 请结合下图数据和自身口语情况, 给你的英语老师写一篇短文。 要求∶ 1. 80-120词, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 1. 描述问卷调查结果(频率、方法); 2. 介绍自身口语情况(水平、打算·…); 3. …. The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. 45% of the students usually practice speaking English, and 38% of the students practise speaking English sometimes. How do you practise speaking English? Most students speak more only in class. Some of the students talk with friends in English. Some students practise speking English in other ways. In my opinion, we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can. Also, we should often listen to English stories in order to improve our understanding about English. Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others! This is quite important. Over and above, we should learn more English words. Only in this way, can we be good English speaker! 【难度】0.4 【知识点】学习策略 【详解】题干解读:这是一个看图作文,图中列出了某中学对学生进行的英语口语能力的调查问卷,包括两个问题,一个是“你多久练习说一次英语”;另一个是“你怎样练习说英语”。学生们应仔细观察图表中的信息,将这两个问题的调查结果表达出来。短文中还应包括另外一个内容,即介绍自己口语的情况,并对如何提高口语能力,提出自己的建议。短文应以一般现在时态为主,根据表达需要选择适当的人称。 例文点评:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整,叙述条理,结构清晰。文章采取两段式结构,第一段主要介绍该问卷调查的结果,包含了图表中的所有信息,没有遗漏要点,且各部分内容安排合理,有层次;第二段是自己的口语情况,以及对如何提高口语能力的建议。其次短文语法正确,用词准确,句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为基础,还使用了祈使句、宾语从句、非谓语动词等结构,表达流畅,意思连贯。 高分亮点: 短语:talk with;in other ways;in one’s opinion;be afraid of;in this way。 句型:45% of the students usually practice speaking English, and 38% of the students practise speaking English sometimes.;In my opinion, we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can.;Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others!;Only in this way, can we be good English speaker! (2020·重庆·中考真题A卷)国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此,你校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义,以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育,发起征文。请你以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 为题,写一篇短文参赛。 要求: 1. 80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 1. 劳动教育的意义(学习生活技能、养成良好习惯……); 2. 校内劳动教育建议(开设种植课、组织做蛋糕比赛……); 3. …… Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it's important. We can learn some life skills and form good habits. Both will help us a lot in the future. As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What's more, the school can set up some clubs, such as cooking club and paper-cutting club. The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful. I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、教育 【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此,学校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义,以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育,发起征文。要求以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 为题,写一篇短文参赛。首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。 2.例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。 3.高分亮点: 短语:a lot,in the future,what's more,set up,such as,look forward to,do well in。 句型:I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. 我期待着在新学期上这门课。look forward to doing sth期待做某事,固定搭配。   I believe I will do well in it. 我相信我会做得很好。I believe后接宾语从句;do well in在……方面做得好。 最新模拟 1.(2024·重庆江北·二模)勤俭节约是我们中华民族的优良传统。你校最近发起“倡导绿色生活,创建节约型校园”活动,请你给校刊“English Corner”写一篇英文稿件,谈谈作为一名中学生,你在日常生活中是如何厉行节约、杜绝浪费的。 要求: 1. 80—120词,开头已给出; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: Save Everything in Our Lives ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Save Everything in Our Lives Nowadays, our country practises strict economy and combats waste. As middle school students, we are supposed to develop some good habits. First, I always save water and reuse water if it is possible. For example, after washing hands, I use water to water flowers. When I brush my teeth, I turn off the tap. What’s more, saving food is also a traditional culture for us to follow. When my parents and I go out to eat, we don’t order too much food. As the technology develops, the energy waste is more and more serious. To reduce it, I always turn off lights when I leave the room. Everyone can try his best to play a role in creating a better society. Let’s save everything in our lives. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】节约与浪费、方法/策略 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文属于材料作文写作; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:文章写作要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,开篇引出话题; 第二步,按照提示要点介绍自己在日常生活中如何厉行节约,杜绝浪费的,可列举具体的事例; 第三步,呼吁大家一起行动起来并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be supposed to do sth应该做某事 ②turn off the tap关掉水龙头 [高分句型] ①First, I always save water and reuse water if it is possible.(if引导的条件状语从句) ②When I brush my teeth, I turn off the tap.(when引导的时间状语从句) 2.(2024·重庆北碚·二模)新一轮创建“全国文明城区”(build a national civilized city) 的活动已经拉开帷幕,创建文明城区,校英语广播站正以“What can we do to build a national civilized city?”为主题开展英语征文比赛。请提供至少两条切实可行的建议,并说明原因。 要求: 1. 80—100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 What can we do to build a national civilized city?     As we all know, our city is building a national civilized city. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 What can we do to build a national civilized city? As we all know, our city is building a national civilized city. It’s crucial for each of us to play a part. We can volunteer to clean up the streets, tidy, walking, or the subway, not only reduces congestion but also fosters a safer environment. Furthermore, we should offer the seats to the elderly, demonstrating respect and kindness. These small acts contribute to a warm and harmonious society. Let’s pull together and take these steps towards creating a more civilized and inclusive city for all. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】意见/建议、城市、环境保护 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇话题作文; ②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,写作开头已给出,写作时直接写创建全国文明城市,我们能做的事情。 第二步,具体阐述写作内容,主要围绕“去清理街道,整理,步行,或坐地铁以及其原因”和“给老人让座位以及其原因”展开,适当补充,丰富细节。 第三步,书写结语,重申主旨,倡议大家一起创建全国文明城市。 [亮点词汇] ①As we all know众所周知 ②crucial关键的 ③play a part发挥作用 ④volunteer to do sth.志愿做某事 ⑤clean up打扫 ⑥not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ⑦offer sth. to sb.提供某物给某人 [高分句型] ①It’s crucial for each of us to play a part. (It+be+adj.+for sb. to do sth.固定句型) ②Let’s pull together and take these steps towards creating a more civilized and inclusive city for all. (Let引导的祈使句) 3.(2024·重庆沙坪坝·三模)初中三年转瞬即逝。在这三年里,在良师的陪伴下,你们一定对各种精彩纷呈的课程记忆犹新,这些课或有趣,或生动,或深刻……也正是因为有了这些别样精彩的课程,大家一步步成长为有理想爱生活的青少年。某英语杂志社毕业专题栏目现向初中毕业生征稿,请以“A/An ______ Class”为题,描述你在初中生涯里上过的精彩一课,总结这节课令你印象深刻的地方以及你从中的收获。 要求: 1. 100—120词; 2. 文中不能出现自己和老师的姓名以及所在学校的名称。 A/An ______ class ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 A wonderful class We have many classes every day, but I think the most wonderful class is yesterday’s Chinese class. Yesterday in the Chinese class, Miss Li didn’t take the Chinese book but took several pictures that looked very bad. In these pictures, some children even picked up things to eat from the dustbins. All of us were surprised and didn’t know what Miss Li meant. After Miss Li explained the story behind each picture, I understood its meaning. There were still many children in many areas who didn’t have food or go to school. I felt sorry for it. What a wonderful lesson! Cherish every day of school from now on and try our best to help the children. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】学习科目、叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:这是一篇话题作文,为记叙文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作围绕“精彩的一堂课”展开,注意语句连贯、语法正确。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍最精彩的课是哪一课; 第二步,详细介绍这一堂课的内容; 第三步,总结收获。 [亮点词汇] ①pick up捡起 ②feel sorry for对……感到抱歉 ③from now on从今天起 ④try one’s best to尽某人最大努力 [高分句型] ①There were still many children in many areas who didn’t have food or go to school. I felt sorry for it.(who引导的定语从句) ②Cherish every day of school from now on and try our best to help the children.(and并列句) 4.(2024·重庆巴南·三模)习总书记时刻关心青少年的成长,强调要培养德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。为此,学校英语社团发出倡议,征集“追梦新时代,争做好少年”的演讲稿。请以“How to be an excellent teenager”为主题, 写一篇演讲稿,积极投稿。 要求: 1. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称; 2. 80-120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 参考信息: Hello, everyone! I’d like to share my ideas about how to be an excellent teenager. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 【满分作文】 Hello, everyone! I’d like to share my ideas about how to be an excellent teenager. For students, the most important thing is to study hard. We should use phones wisely. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. At the same time, we should also actively exercise. Body is the capital of revolution. Only with good health can we realize our dreams. What’s more, we should improve our manners. We should respect our elders and be willing to help others. Thirdly, we should learn to do housework. We can learn to cook and wash clothes with our parents. Fourthly, we should love Chinese culture and cultivate all kinds of interests. In a word, if we try our best to do better, the world will become more and more beautiful. That’s all. Thank you. 【难度】0.4 【知识点】方法/策略、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇讲稿; ②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主; ③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍怎样才能成为一名优秀的少年”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步,点题,表明演讲的意图; 第二步,根据题干思维导图中的要点,详细描述如何成为一名优秀的少年; 第三步,总结,号召大家都行动起来努力做到最好,并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①at the same time同时 ②what’s more更重要的是 [高分句型] ①Only with good health can we realize our dreams.(倒装句) ②In a word, if we try our best to do better, the world will become more and more beautiful. (if引导的条件状语从句) 5.(2024·重庆沙坪坝·二模)粮食事关国运民生,是国家安全的重要基础。你校正在开展“节约粮食,杜绝浪费”的活动,学校English Corner 将以“Say ‘No’ to Food Waste”为题组织一次演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,简述节约粮食的重要性,提出2—3条杜绝粮食浪费的措施,并号召青少年厉行节约,反对浪费。 要求: 1. 80—120词; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: Importance: a Chinese traditional virtue (美德) help stop hunger … Methods: Make a shopping list eat up the food take leftover (剩菜) home not order too much … take action … Say “No” to Food Waste Ladies and gentlemen, It’s a great honor for me to deliver a speech themed “Say ‘No’ to Food Waste”. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 Say “No” to Food Waste Ladies and gentlemen, It’s a great honor for me to deliver a speech themed “Say ‘No’ to Food Waste”. It’s shocking to know that while many from hunger, we waste a lot of food daily. Saving food is a Chinese traditional virtue. It’s not only a way to help stop hunger, but also a way to protect our planet. Everyone can do his part. Make a shopping list, buy only what you need, and eat up the food on your plate. When you eat out, you’d better not order too many dishes. And remember to take leftover home if there’s something left. Small changes can make a big difference. Let’s take action now, be smart with our food choices, and say ‘No’ to food waste. Together, we can make a positive influence. Thank you. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】节约与浪费、意见/建议 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”。 ③提示:根据提供表格的内容完成写作,可适当发挥;注意上下文的逻辑关系,标点符号和大小写问题。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍节约粮食、杜绝浪费的重要意义; 第二步 ,列举节约粮食的方法; 第三步,号召大家开始行动起来,开始节约粮食。 [亮点词汇] ①deliver a speech发表演说 ②virtue美德 ③positive influence积极影响 ④make a big difference产生很大影响 [高分句型] ①It’s shocking to know that while many from hunger, we waste a lot of food daily. (时间状语从句) ②It’s not only a way to help stop hunger, but also a way to protect our planet. (并列句) ③ A nd remember to take leftover home if there’s something left. (条件状语从句) 6.(2024·重庆渝中·三模)人生如登山,每征服一座山都会带给你不同的风景。每一座山都是一次洗礼,每一次挫折都是一次成长。请记你成长中的一次挫折或困难,并讲述你的应对之道及带给你的启示。 要求: 1. 80—120词; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: Idea bank: fail an exam/lose a game/have a fight with family/have relationship problems with friends or classmates/feel stressed out … How to solve the problem: make a study plan/ask teachers for help/practice more/work with a team/have a talk with parents/ … get stronger become better … __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 In life, every challenge is like a mountain to be climbed. One such mountain I faced was losing a speech competition I had prepared for months. To begin with, I was upset. However, it wasn’t the end. To succeed in the next competition, I had a heart-to-heart talk with my parents. They encouraged me not to give up and helped me figure out the problems. I realized I hadn’t practiced enough and lacked confidence. Then I took action. I made a study plan and practiced English with my classmates daily. I also asked my English teacher for advice and extra materials. Finally, I built up great confidence and succeeded. This experience taught me valuable lessons. One the one hand, failure is not the end but an opportunity to learn and grow. One the other hand, I learned the importance of planning ahead, working hard, and asking for help. Now, I face challenges with a positive attitude, knowing every challenge or failure is a stepping stone to success. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】个人经历、学习体验 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇话题作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”; ③提示:本文主要介绍成长中的一次挫折或困难,并讲述自己的应对之道及启示,适当增加细节,完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步,引出话题,介绍自己遇到的挫折; 第二步,介绍自己是如何面对挫折的; 第三步,介绍从这次经历中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①give up 放弃 ②figure out 弄清楚 ③take action 采取行动 ④on the one hand...on the other hand 一方面……另一方面…… [高分句型] ①To succeed in the next competition, I had a heart-to-heart talk with my parents. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②I realized I hadn’t practiced enough and lacked confidence. (宾语从句) 7.(2024·重庆九龙坡·二模)最近,教育部发文指出,要建设“和谐有序、丰富活力”的校园,并强调良好的学生关系在其中的重要作用。作为九年级的学长,请你写一篇演讲稿,向同学们说明良好学生关系的重要性,提出建立良好关系的具体建议,并号召同学们一起行动。要求: 1. 词数:80—120词; 2. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 My dear friends, today I’m here to share some of my ideas on building good student relations with you. As we all know, good relations among students are quite important for us. They will help us create a suitable learning environment and find aid when we are in trouble. Moreover, good relations allow us make progress and have achievements as a whole. Since building good relations is of great importance, how can we do it? I think it’s important to be friendly. We can share our ideas with our classmates. We can also get some useful advice from others. Let’s build good student relations, and then we can study hard together. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】社会关系 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步,说明良好学生关系的重要性; 第二步,提出建立良好关系的具体建议; 第三步,总结观点。 [亮点词汇] ①As we all know众所周知 ②make progress取得进步 ③be of great importance非常重要 [高分句型] ①They will help us create a suitable learning environment and find aid when we are in trouble. (when引导的时间状语从句) 8.(2024·重庆九龙坡·三模)今年五月,教育部决定开展第一个全国心理健康宣传教育月活动,其主题鲜明:“全社会都行动起来,共促学生心理健康”。在这股倡导关爱与成长的浪潮中,我校“英语俱乐部”积极响应,举办了一场题为“A Heartwarming Story”的征文大赛,旨在挖掘并传颂那些在生活中默默发光的温暖瞬间。请你分享一则发生在你身上的暖心故事,参加本次征文比赛。 要求: 1.80—120词; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: 1.描述一个发生在你身上的暖心故事 (可参考故事山模型);2.说明这个故事为何让你感到温暖…… A Heartwarming Story __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】 A Heartwarming Story Here is one Heartwarming thing happened between my classmate Tom and me. Tom is my best friend. He is very kind and helpful. Once I had to make a speech in public. I was too shy to show myself. Tom kept encouraging me and teaching me useful skills. It was Tom who helped me practice again and again. He cheered for me when I spoke. That really touched me. Tom is really a five-star friend in my mind. He is just like a candle to me. I hope we can support each other and our friendship will last long. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】叙事忆旧 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:一般过去时为主; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,引出主题; 第二步,细节描述这个暖心故事; 第三步,说明这个故事为何让你感到温暖。 [亮点词汇] ①in public当众 ②too…to太……而不能 ③cheer for sb.为某人打气 [高分句型] ①It was Tom who helped me practice again and again.(强调句) ②He cheered for me when I spoke.(时间状语从句) ③I hope we can support each other and our friendship will last long.(宾语从句) 9.(2024·重庆江津·三模)假设上个月你参加了学校组织的郊游活动,参观了现代农场。请以“A School Trip to the Modem Farm”为题,写一篇英语短文。 提示: 1. Who did you go to the farm with? 2. How did you get there? 3. What did you do there? 4. How did you feel? 要求: 1. 词数80—120词: 2. 在提示问题的基础上写作,也可适当发挥想象; 3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、班名和校名。 A School Trip to the Modern Farm _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文】: A School Trip to the Modern Farm I went on a school trip to the Modern Farm with my classmates and teachers last month. We took a bus there. When we got there, we were told the rules on the farm and were showed around the farm. Then, we went to the cow farm and fed the cute cows. We also watched how to milk. Next, we got to the vegetable field, and we picked our favorite vegetables with the help of the farmers. At last, we cooked the vegetables in the kitchen for our lunch. We had a really meaningful time there. On the way back to school, I felt a little tired but very happy. What a wonderful school trip! 【难度】0.65 【知识点】游览活动、个人经历 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材:这是一篇话题作文,为记叙文; ② 时态:主要采用“一般过去时”; ③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍和谁一起去的农场,以及时间; 第二步,介绍在农场做了什么; 第三步,介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① show sb around 带某人参观 ② how to milk 如何挤奶 ③ with the help of sb 在某人的帮助之下 [高分句型] ① When we got there, we were told the rules on the farm and were showed around the farm.(when引导时间状语从句) ② What a wonderful school trip!(感叹句) 10.(2024·重庆渝中·二模)书籍是人生的导师,拥有改变我们命运的力量。2024年的世界读书日的主题为“阅读推动未来”。为了更深入地了解人们的阅读方式,学校英语社团在社区开展了以People’s Favorite Book-reading Ways为主题的调查,请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿。 内容包括: 1. 描述调查结果; 2. 陈述你的读书方式并说明理由; 3. …… 要求: 1. 80—120词; 2. 短文须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺; 3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Recently, the school’s English club did a survey in the community about people’s favorite book-reading ways. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文1】 Recently, the school’s English club did a survey in the community about people’s favorite book-reading ways. Different people have different views about them. Now here are the results. As smart phones become more and more popular, about 52% of people like reading on the phone. 20% of people like reading on the computer. 18% of people like listening to e-books. However, only 10% of them like reading a paper book. In my opinion, both e-books and paper books have advantages and disadvantages. I prefer e-books, because I can read books on the phone or e-readers no matter where I am. We can get information from the libraries easily. And I think what we should do is to use e-books wisely. All in all, everyone has their own way of enjoying books. No matter what way of reading we choose, we should stick to reading and enjoy reading. 【难度】0.65 【知识点】阅读 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:应用“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,描述并评价调查结果; 第二步,陈述你的选择并说明理由; 第三步,结尾总结。 [亮点词汇] ①In my opinion按我的观点 ②no matter where无论在哪里 ③stick to doing坚持做 ④take interest in doing对做……感兴趣 ⑤more and more越来越 ⑥prefer to do宁愿做 [高分句型] ①Now here are the results.(倒装句) ②I prefer e-books, because I can read books on the phone no matter where I am.(because引导原因状语从句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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