10：书面表达-备战2025年中考英语真题题源解密（浙江专用）

2024年浙江省中考英语真题深度解析及变式训练 书面表达第76题     【真题呈现】 第四部分 书面表达（共1小题，满分20分） 61. 假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一所合适的学校。 I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great. My cousin’s school ◆in the city center ◆a good ping-pong team ◆hand-made food classes My school ◆in the countryside ◆a new sports center ◆local art clubs 注意： （1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （3）词数80左右：邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Candy I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【试题解读】 一、写作思路： 1. 首先，需要确定推荐哪一所学校，并给出至少两个相关的理由。 2. 其次，结合Candy的兴趣爱好（喜欢运动、对中国传统艺术感兴趣、喜欢中国美食），说明为什么这所学校适合她。 3. 最后，可以简单描述学校的其他优势或特色。 二、写作框架： · 引言：表达对好友即将来中国的兴奋之情。 · 主体：推荐学校并阐述理由，包括学校位置、运动设施、艺术活动、美食课程等方面。 · 结尾：期待Candy的回复，表达对她中国之行的祝愿。 三、写作步骤： 1. 阅读题目要求，确定需要包含的信息点。 2. 构思邮件内容，确定推荐学校及其理由。 3. 组织语言，注意使用恰当的连接词和句式。 4. 检查邮件内容，确保没有语法错误，信息点完整。 【参考答案】 参考范文一： Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I think my school would be a great choice for you. It's located in the countryside, which is perfect for enjoying the peaceful environment and focusing on your studies. Plus, we have a new sports center where you can practice various sports, including the sports you love. Additionally, joining local art clubs here will allow you to explore traditional Chinese art, which I know you're interested in. The school also has delicious handmade food classes, so you can learn to cook Chinese dishes yourself! Looking forward to your reply and wishing you a great trip to China. Best wishes, Li Hua 关键词汇：countryside, sports center, local art clubs, handmade food classes 亮点句式：It's located in the countryside, which is perfect for enjoying the peaceful environment... 参考范文二： Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. Considering your interests, I recommend my cousin’s school for your study trip. Situated in the city center, it offers a vibrant atmosphere and easy access to various cultural experiences. The school is well-known for its excellent ping-pong team, which aligns with your love for sports. Moreover, the hand-made food classes will be an excellent opportunity for you to delve into the art of Chinese cuisine. I believe these features make it an ideal place for you to immerse in Chinese culture while enjoying your favorite activities. I can't wait to hear your thoughts and hope you have an unforgettable experience in China. Best regards, Li Hua 关键词汇：city center, ping-pong team, hand-made food classes, Chinese cuisine 亮点句式：Situated in the city center, it offers a vibrant atmosphere and easy access to various cultural experiences. 参考范文三： Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I think you will love my school. It’s located in the countryside. The air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful. We have a new sports center where you can play various sports. If you like ping-pong, you can also join our school’s table tennis club. There are local art clubs in our school. You can learn traditional Chinese painting, calligraphy and paper-cutting. Moreover, we often have activities related to traditional Chinese art. I believe you will have a great time here. Looking forward to your coming. 关键词汇：countryside、new sports center、local art clubs、table tennis club、traditional Chinese painting、calligraphy、paper-cutting、activities related to traditional Chinese art 亮点句式：“I think you will love my school.” 表达出强烈的推荐之意；“There are local art clubs in our school. You can learn traditional Chinese painting, calligraphy and paper-cutting.” 详细介绍了学校的艺术俱乐部和可学习的内容。 参考范文四： Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I highly recommend my cousin's school. It's in the city center, convenient for you to explore. It has a good ping-pong team. And there are hand-made food classes where you can experience Chinese cuisine and culture. Looking forward to your arrival. 关键词汇：city center、good ping-pong team、hand-made food classes、Chinese cuisine and culture 亮点句式：“I highly recommend my cousin's school.” 直接表明推荐；“It's in the city center, convenient for you to explore.” 说明学校位置优势。 《课程标准》要求学生能通过书面语篇描述、介绍事物，表达个人看法，表意清晰，话语基本通顺;能用所学英语，通过书面语篇简单介绍中外主要文化现象，语义基本连贯。试卷书面表达部分命题充分体现了《课程标准》对学生通过书面表达展现语言能力的要求。试题主要围绕“人与社会”“人与自我”两个方面展开、创设真实语境，要求学生结合个人生活经验和社会生活需要，利用所学语言、文化知识及逻辑思维进行有意义的思考、建构、交流和书而表达，创造新的语篇。 【命题立意】考查学生描述、介绍熟悉的事物，表达个人观点的能力以及分析问题和解决问题的能力。 【试题分析】书面表达试题设计聚焦学生校园生活，涉及学校活动、食物、爱好、休闲等多个话题，以及对介绍、建议和逻辑关系等书面表达技能的考查，充分体现素养导向。试题通过 Alice的喜好提示及My school和 My cousin's school一城一乡两所学校的信息支架，选一所合适的学校推荐给 Alice。表面看来是推荐学校，但不能轻易落笔。其中内容和语言的合理性和逻辑性等是学生需要注意的方面。总体上该试题既贴近学生真实的校园生活，让来自城乡不同学校的学生都有机会能结合自身经历和感受，做出有话可说的恰当选择:又体现新课标背景下对学生核心素养的考查，将英语真正融入学生生活，有利于学生积极主动地将所学语言运用于解决实际问题，体现了试题的应用性和开放性。本题的写作要领及注意事项简要阐述如下: 1.审题清晰，明确写作要点在开始写作前，先要仔细审题，明确写作要点。本文的写作要求结合Alice的喜好，即爱运动、喜欢中国传统艺术和美食，及My school和My cousin's school一城一乡两所学校的信息支架，结合自己的生活经验选择一所合适的学校，以电子邮件的形式推荐给Alice并说明理由。一些学生审题不清、表现为:(1)对两所学校都推荐了;(2)让Alice自己选择;(3)未在两所学校中做出选择、直接说“I think you will like my school...”，写作目的不清晰。 2.用语得体，关注意义表达 在写作时，要明确目标读者。本文的读者是外国朋友Alice。作者与读者之间的关系是年龄相仿的好朋友，因此需要用亲近而得体的语言。写作的目的是帮助对方选择一所合适的学校、因此在推荐学校时、需要考虑对方的真实需求，结合自己的生活经历，综合运用所学语言知识进行有意义的交流和表达。一些学生不关注语境，缺乏“真交际”的能力，如开头用“I's my great honor to introduce...”、忽略朋友间交际语的亲近面得体性;在阐述推荐理山时部分学生套用表达结构，如“The reasons are as follows. Here are the reasons.To start with...Besides...”，忽略了应用文的交际性。 3.表达逻辑，实现整合目标 在写作过程中，学生需要根据要点信息提示，如Alice的兴趣爱好，Myschool和Mycousin'sschoo等内容，结合具体语境，分析交际对象和交际目的的相关性，用合乎交际思维的习惯来确定表达顺序。学生可以先根据Alice的具体兴趣爱好来推荐合适的学校，后明推荐理由，如学校在乡村，可以结合Alice喜好和自己对乡村的认知体验，提供更多吸引朋友的有效细节，如:信件开头推荐合适的学校(.know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you.)，接着整合信息，说明推荐理( It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you'll enjoy it.)。这些信息的表述方式不是现成的，需要学生根据经验和常识自己做出科学、合理的安排和设计。在语言上，选择简洁、合适的词汇与表达方式即可，通过加工和组合，有条理地表达，确保表达有逻辑、得体、有效。       1．学校将征集学生活动室的设计方案。假设你是李华，请从以下两个所给方案中选择一个：才艺天地(Talent Corner)和义卖集市(Charity Market)。根据提示给校英语广播栏目负责人张老师写封邮件，完善方案并说明设计意图。 Talent Corner Meanings: a good way to show yourself, Activities: perform a play,· Opening time:… Charity Market Meanings: a good way to raise money, Activities: sell second-hand things, Opening time:… 要求： (1)不能出现真实的人名和校名； (2)词数 80—100，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Zhang, I’ve heard that we will have a new student activity room. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Zhang, I’ve heard that we will have a new student activity room. I prefer to make it a Talent Corner. For some students, it will make them feel proud when they show their talent. So this Talent Corner is the best place which gives them a good way to show themselves. We can perform an English play every Friday, making us relaxed. And it can enable us to have a better understanding of foreign culture. What’s more, we can hold a singing competition or speech competition to enrich our school life. Thank you for reading my e-mail. Best wishes!     Yours,     Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明写信目的，表明你最喜欢的是哪一种方案； 第二步，介绍这个方案的意义、活动以及时间等相关信息； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①prefer to do sth喜欢做某物 ②enable sb. to do sth.使某人能够做某事 ③have a better understanding of对……有更好的理解 [高分句型] ①For some students, it will make them feel proud when they show their talent. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②So this Talent Corner is the best place which gives them a good way to show themselves. (which引导的定语从句) 2．假定你是李明，你的英国朋友David来信向你了解中国传统民间艺术，请结合下表提供的信息，选择其中一项艺术形式给他写一封邮件进行介绍。 Chinese Folk Art 内容要点 艺术形式 Basic facts Your feeling Lantern •about 1,800 years, ... •use different materials, ... •the Lantern Festival, ... •a symbol of... ... Paper cutting •over 1,500 years, ... •cut out different shapes, ... •the Spring Festival, ... •express... ... 注意： 1.文中必须包含该艺术形式的两项内容要点，可适当发挥（参考词汇仅供选择使用 或参考)： 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3.词数：80~100：邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear David, How is everything going? Hearing that you’re interested in Chinese folk art, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you’ll come here and enjoy our traditional beauty yourself one day. Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文： Dear David, How is everything going? Hearing that you’re interested in Chinese folk art, I’d like to tell you something about Chinese paper cutting. Chinese paper cutting has a long history of over 1,500 years. Paper cuttings can be seen in different parts of China. Many people, no matter the young or the old, are fond of them.  People in the northern part of China do well in paper cutting. They cut paper into different shapes, like animals, flowers and so on. They are put on doors and windows during the Spring Festival and when people celebrate something happily. They mean welcoming good fortune. More and more people are interested in it. Hope you’ll come here and enjoy our traditional beauty yourself one day. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：为“一般现在时”； ③提示：从表格中选择一个传统民间艺术进行介绍，注意行文逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接邮件开头介绍自己要介绍的民间艺术——剪纸； 第二步，结合所给要点详细介绍剪纸的历史，形状，使用场合等； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①in different parts of在……不同的地方 ②be fond of喜爱 ③be interested in对……感兴趣 [高分句型] ①Paper cuttings can be seen in different parts of China. (被动语态) ②They are put on doors and windows during the Spring Festival and when people celebrate something happily. (被动语态；when引导的时间状语从句) 【点睛】 3．阳光学校将于六月底举行 2024届九年级毕业典礼，学校英语周刊向全校学生征集典礼活动金点子。假设你是该校学生李华，请给负责人王老师写一封电子邮件，推荐你认为最合适的三至四项活动，并给出理由。 Activities Reasons give best wishes to our friends help us a lot... invite parents to the ceremony share... with them … 注意： （1）邮件需包含表中所给的所有信息，并适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （3）词数：80—100词。信件开头已给出，不计入总词数； （4）邮件开头已给出，不计入总数。 Dear Mr. Wang, I am very glad to share my ideas about the graduation ceremony activities. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mr Wang, I am very glad to share my ideas about the graduation ceremony activities. The graduation ceremony is considered as a time to say goodbye and thank you to the junior high school life and give wishes to the coming life as well. The following activities are probably some good choices. The activity I want to recommend first is to say thanks to all the teachers who helped us and take a photo with them. When we were going through a difficult time or making progress, teachers are always with us, supporting and helping us. They are the ones we will never forget. Also, giving wishes to our friends is a good idea. Although we will part with each other, the friendship will last forever. Wha’s more, it could be a wonderful thing to invite parents to the ceremony. Parents will be glad to share your joy with you and also it is a proper time to show great thanks to them. No matter what activities we will have, thank you for holding the ceremony for us. And wish everything goes well. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要有遗漏，可适当发挥，注意用词准确，语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出下文毕业典礼的活动； 第二步，具体介绍三到四个活动，并给出理由； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①be considered as被视为 ②take a photo with sb和某人合影 ③go through经历 ④part with sb与某人分开 [高分句型] ① The graduation ceremony is considered as a time to say goodbye and thank you to the junior high school life and give wishes to the coming life as well.（被动语态） ②The activity I want to recommend first is to say thanks to all the teachers who helped us and take a photo with them.（定语从句） ③When we were going through a difficult time or making progress, teachers are always with us, supporting and helping us.（时间状语从句） ④Although we will part with each other, the friendship will last forever. （让步状语从句）    1．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael即将结束在中国的交换生课程。他打算为家人和好友准备一些中国礼物。请你写一封电子邮件，向他推荐三件有特色的礼物并说明推荐的理由(礼物可以从下表中选择或自行确定)。 Presents Reasons a silk scarf soft and comfortable; some Chinese paintings on it Chinese tea paper cuts pieces of Chinese clay art Chinese fans toy pandas … … 注意： (1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 (2)词数：80-100。 Dear Michael, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Michael, There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents. For your mother, I think a silk scarf from Hangzhou is a nice present. It’s soft and comfortable. There are usually beautiful Chinese paintings on it. And you can give your father some Chinese tea. It’s a kind of healthy drink with a long history. Paper cutting is a traditional Chinese art. Chinese artists cut the paper into different shapes, such as flowers or buildings. I believe your friends will like paper cuts. I hope these can help you. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，可参考表格中给出的礼物来推荐三件有特色的礼物。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，推荐礼物； 第二步，具体推荐三种有特色的礼物； 第三步，收尾，希望能帮到对方。 [亮点词汇] ①give sb. sth. 给某人某物 ②traditional Chinese art 传统中国艺术 ③such as 例如 [高分句型] ①There are many choices for you to choose wonderful Chinese presents.（There be句型） ②I believe your friends will like paper cuts.（省略that的宾语从句） 2．假设你是李华，请结合表格内容，用英语邮件向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的，并谈谈你选择的一门劳动课程及选择理由。 School Labor (劳动) Courses The course you choose and your reason Courses Aims …  Vegetable-planting To study plants and know about farming  Cooking course: making dumplings & Zongzi To learn about traditional Chinese cultures  Chair-repairing To learn and practice new skills 要求： 1. 必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 2. 词数：80~100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。 Dear Mike, How is everything going? This term, we have three labor courses at school. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, How is everything going? This term, we have three labor courses at school. In the cooking course we learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on. In each kind of Chinese traditional food lie rich Chinese cultures. And we have chair-repairing course. It’s very interesting to learn new skills and practice them. There is also a vegetable-planting course this term. I choose it this term. My classmates and I can plant tomatoes and have a lot of fun. We study plants and know about farming and get close to nature. I really enjoy vegetable-planting course as they not only enrich our school life but also offer us basic life skills. Do you have labor courses? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的； 第二步，介绍自己选择的劳动课程。 [亮点词汇] ①have a lot of fun玩得开心 ②get close to亲近 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①In the cooking course we learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on.（疑问词+动词不定式结构） ②It’s very interesting to learn new skills and practice them.（动词不定式作主语） 3．中国古诗词是我们代代传承的文化瑰宝。假定你是李华，你校将举办中国古诗词文化节 (Chinese Ancient Poetry Day)。你想邀请对中国古诗词非常感兴趣的外教Mr. White参加本次活动，请根据下面提示给他写一封邮件。 Time 2:00 p.m., May 20th Place the school library Activities ·chant poems ·watch the movie 30,000 Miles from Chang’an ·... Purpose ·popularize Chinese poetry ·… 要求： （1）短文必须包括所有提示内容，并适当发挥； （2）词数80—100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 To: Mr White From: Li Hua Hi, Mr White, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】例文： Hi, Mr White, I am writing to invite you to the Chinese Ancient Poetry Day at our school because I know you have great interest in Chinese ancient poetry. The festival will take place on May 20th in the school library and it will begin at 2:00 pm. On that day, there will be various activities. For example, students can admire the beauty of Chinese ancient poetry by chanting. Students can also learn more about some great poets like Li Bai by listening to their stories. Besides, school provides the movie 30,000 Miles from Chang’an, which enjoys popularity among Chinese people these days. The festival is an excellent chance to popularize Chinese poetry. It can help us get a better understanding of Chinese culture as well. Hope you can join us. Looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：材料表格所给内容不得遗漏；注意邮件写作格式和时态切换。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，详细介绍古诗词文化节举行的时间、地点、活动内容及目的等； 第三步，书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①take place举行 ②for example例如 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①I am writing to invite you to the Chinese Ancient Poetry Day at our school because I know you have great interest in Chinese ancient poetry.（原因状语从句） ②Besides, school provides the movie 30,000 Miles from Chang’an , which enjoys popularity among Chinese people these days（非限定性定语从句） 4．假设国外中学生Alex将来你校进行为期一周的交流学习，期间计划参加一项你校社团活动，体验中国文化。请你根据下表中的提示，写一篇英文短文，介绍其中一个社团内容。 Clubs Introduction Reasons The paper cutting club admire some masters’ great works, try paper cutting… a traditional art form of beauty; a symbol of wishes for good luck… The folk music club take musical instrument classes, attend a folk music concert… enjoy the beauty of Chinese folk music; a chance to bring the school and you closer… 注意：1. 请回复邮件中所提及的所有问题，可适当发挥使行文通顺、连贯。 2. 邮件中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 3. 词数80-100左右。 Dear Alex, I’m so excited to hear from you. It’s my honor to introduce some                 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ping 【答案】例文 Dear Alex, I’m so excited to hear from you. It’s my honor to introduce some of the wonderful clubs in our school to you. For me, the paper cutting club is without doubt the most attractive one. In fact, paper cutting has been around for centuries. Here, students are able to admire some masters’ great works. The most common pictures are animals, flowers and things about Chinese history. They are often put on the windows as a symbol of people’s wishes for good luck. Additionally, students are given the opportunity to try paper cutting. This way, you can enjoy the beauty of this traditional art form by yourself. In a word, joining the club is a good chance for you to have a deeper understanding of Chinese culture. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍学校的社团活动”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，介绍学校有好的社团； 第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，介绍相关社团的内容，以及选择的理由； 第三步，点评加入社团是一件好事。 [亮点词汇] ①in fact实际上 ②in a word总而言之 [高分句型] ①Additionally, students are given the opportunity to try paper cutting.（被动语态） ②In a word, joining the club is a good chance for you to have a deeper understanding of Chinese culture.（动名词作主语） 5．某学习网站的“Student Helper”栏目收到两位学生的邮件。假如你是该网站志愿者李明，请就其中一封(任选)进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 To: studenthelper@mail.com Subject: Need Help! Dear Helper, Chinese is too difficult for me! I really don’t know how to speak well. Could you please tell me how I can improve my Chinese speaking skills? Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! May To: studenthelper@mail.com Subject: What can I do? Dear Helper, I’m very worried about my physics these days. You know, it’s really hard for me. Could you please tell me how I can improve my physics? Looking forward to your reply. Eric Hi, ____________, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ming 【答案】例文 Hi, May I am glad to hear that you have a great interest in Chinese. I would like to give some advice. First, try to say Chinese as much as possible in and out of class. Second, don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Last but not least, you should try to say Chinese in public. When you have time, you can call me in Chinese. Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析]： ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邮件写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：考生根据邮件内容，选择一篇回复，给出如何提高中文水平或物理成绩的建议。 [写作步骤] 第一步：本文要回复的是第一封邮件，给出如何提高中文水平的建议。 第二步：具体阐述提高中文的方法。 [亮点词汇] ①in and out of class课堂内外 ②be afraid of害怕 ③in poblic公开的；当众 [高分句型] ①First, try to say Chinese as much as possible in and out of class. （祈使句） ②When you have time, you can call me in Chinese.（时间状语从句）    1．假设你是学生李华，你的学校将组织一个新的社团，现有以下几种计划: ● Reading club ●Arts and sport club ●Hand-made workshop 请给校报的Mr. King写一封邮件，选择一个你最喜欢的社团，说明你选择的理由，并对社团后续开展活动提出至少两点建议。 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息； 2. 词数：80~100词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. King, I’m writing to give some advice about the new club our school will set up. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope my advice can be taken by you. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. King, I’m writing to give some advice about the new club our school will set up. I choose to join the reading club. I like reading. I read all kinds of books. I especially like story books. Their stories have enriched my spare time life, and also made me feel the hardships of society. If I have time, I will pick up a book to read. Through reading, I learned a lot of knowledge, which not only opened my eyes, but also made me relax. After joining the book club, I hope we can hold regular book briefing meetings. At the same time, we can also hold a reading speech to say what books we like and why. Hope my advice can be taken by you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤]   第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；   第二步，介绍自己选择这个社团的原因。   [亮点词汇]   ①choose to do sth选择做某事 ②all kinds of各种各样的 ③at the same time同时 [高分句型]   ①If I have time, I will pick up a book to read.（if引导条件状语从句）   2．假定你是李华， 你校英语杂志社Youth Voice打算改版， 现就新增栏目名称与内容等征求全校师生的意见。请你用英语给杂志社主编Simon写一封邮件，分享你的想法。 Columns What Why Great Works share famous books, ... increase knowledge, ... Science Study show the latest discoveries, ... raise interest in science, ... ... ... ... 注意： （1）邮件必须包含所有要点并补充一个栏目； （2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息； （3）词数：80~100。首尾句已给出，不计入总词数。 FROM: Li Hua TO: Simon SUBJECT: Adding new columns to Youth Voice Dear Simon, I’m so glad that our school magazine Youth Voice will renew very soon. I have some ideas about adding new columns. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will consider my advice and I believe our school magazine will be better! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Simon, I’m so glad that our school magazine Youth Voice will renew very soon. I have some ideas about adding new columns. From my point of view, Great Works is a good choice. We can share famous books and learn about favourite writers. We will increase our knowledge and we can communicate more with others. What’s more, many students may be interested in Science Study. The world is developing at a high speed. If there is one column about the latest science discoveries, we will raise interest in science and be more creative. Besides, it’s better to add Animal World, animals are our friends and then Animal World will call on students to protect animals in danger. I hope you will consider my advice and I believe our school magazine will be better! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； [写作步骤] 第一步，首先承接短文开头。 第二步，根据所给的材料，就新增栏目名称与内容等分享你的想法。 第三步，总结短文，并表达愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①communicate…with…与……交流…… ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③call on呼吁，号召 ④in danger处于危险之中 [高分句型] We will increase our knowledge and we can communicate more with others.（and连接的并列句） If there is one column about the latest science discoveries, we will raise interest in science and be more creative.（if引导的条件状语从句） I hope you will consider my advice and I believe our school magazine will be better!（省略that的宾语从句） 3．假如你是李平，你校英文校刊上发布了一则暑期夏令营活动信息，请你给英国笔友 Mike写一封信邀请他参加其中一个夏令营，并说明推荐理由。 注意： 1.词数为80~100词左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Mike, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 【答案】Dear Mike, How are you doing? Summer holiday is coming and there are three summer camps for us to choose. I think Music Camp is a good choice. Let me introduce something about it to you. The Music Camp will last six days from July 19th to 24th. There will be lots of great activities. We will watch Chinese folk music performances. Besides, we’ll have the chance to take Erhu classes. I know that you’re interested in Erhu and I’m sure you’ll like it. I sincerely recommend you to join this camp. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：一般现在时及一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，向对方介绍自己推荐的夏令营活动； 第二步，具体介绍夏令营都有哪些吸引人的活动； 第三步，邀请对方参加。 [亮点词汇] ①introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某事 ②have the chance to do有机会做某事 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] I know that you’re interested in Erhu and I’m sure you’ll like it.（宾语从句） 4．假如你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友 Tom对你们学校的拓展课程很感兴趣，想了解相关信息。请你根据表格内的提示向他介绍部分课程及开设原因，并表达自己还希望学校开设哪门拓展课和理由。 Special after-school classes in our school classes reasons Cooking 1. help parents 2. master the life skills English play 1. learn how to act 2. improve spoken English Basketball 1. be good for our health 2. encourage teamwork Your wishes … 注意： 1.短文须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3.词数：100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How’s it going?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best Wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, How’s it going? Learning in your letter that you are interested in our special after-school classes, I’m very glad to introduce three of them. Cooking is the first we like because it offers us the life skills and we can do it by ourselves when parents aren’t in. English play course, which can help us with both acting skills and spoken English, is also our favorite. Besides, some of us prefer basketball classes since playing basketball is not only good for our health but also encourages us to work as a team. In a word, these fascinating programs make our school lives colorful and meaningful. Honestly, I do hope IT class will be held as quickly as possible because to be a programmer is my dream. Best Wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是书信作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示所给出的三个点，添加适当细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候对方然后表明主题并引出下文； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从提示中的三个点，烹饪，英语话剧，篮球来介绍； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的意愿和期许。 [亮点词汇] ①are interested in对……感兴趣 ②be glad to do 开心去做某事 [高分句型] ①Cooking is the first we like because it offers us the life skills and we can do it by ourselves when parents aren’t in.（原因状语从句，时间状语从句） 5．你校将举办英语文化节，现向全校学生征求活动意见。假如你是李华，请用英语给负责人写一封书信，从学校的活动意向表中推荐2—3个活动并阐明理由。 □sing English songs    □read English novels □watch English movies     □tell English stories □make English posters     □perform English sitcoms 注意：（1）书信内容要点应选自上表，可适当发挥； （2）词数： 80-100； （3）书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear sir, For the coming English festival, I have some suggestions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version Dear sir, For the coming English festival, I have some suggestions. I think watching English movies is a good choice. Not only can we enjoy the performance of the actors, but we can also learn English in a fun way. Also, I recommend telling English stories as a way to celebrate the festival, by which we can enrich our knowledge as well as share favorite stories with each other in English. Another way I would like to recommend is to play English sitcoms. The reason is that it helps to improve our spoken English and acting skills. At the same time, we can learn to work together well. I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“英语文化节”来引出下文中对推荐的活动的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“看英文电影、讲英文故事和演英语情景喜剧”三方面入手，重点介绍推荐这些活动的理由； ③第三步，书写结语。希望自己的建议能够被采纳。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also 不但……而且 ②as well as 和 ③share sth with sb 与某人分享某物 ④at the same time 同时 [高分句型] ①Not only can we enjoy the performance of the actors, but we can also learn English in a fun way.（倒装句） ②Also, I recommend telling English stories as a way to celebrate the festival, by which we can enrich our knowledge as well as share favorite stories with each other in English.（定语从句） ③The reason is that it helps to improve our spoken English and acting skills. （表语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024年浙江省中考英语真题深度解析及变式训练 书面表达第76题     【真题呈现】 第四部分 书面表达（共1小题，满分20分） 61. 假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一所合适的学校。 I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great. My cousin’s school ◆in the city center ◆a good ping-pong team ◆hand-made food classes My school ◆in the countryside ◆a new sports center ◆local art clubs 注意： （1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （3）词数80左右：邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Candy I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【试题解读】 一、写作思路： 1. 首先，需要确定推荐哪一所学校，并给出至少两个相关的理由。 2. 其次，结合Candy的兴趣爱好（喜欢运动、对中国传统艺术感兴趣、喜欢中国美食），说明为什么这所学校适合她。 3. 最后，可以简单描述学校的其他优势或特色。 二、写作框架： · 引言：表达对好友即将来中国的兴奋之情。 · 主体：推荐学校并阐述理由，包括学校位置、运动设施、艺术活动、美食课程等方面。 · 结尾：期待Candy的回复，表达对她中国之行的祝愿。 三、写作步骤： 1. 阅读题目要求，确定需要包含的信息点。 2. 构思邮件内容，确定推荐学校及其理由。 3. 组织语言，注意使用恰当的连接词和句式。 4. 检查邮件内容，确保没有语法错误，信息点完整。 【参考答案】 参考范文一： Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I think my school would be a great choice for you. It's located in the countryside, which is perfect for enjoying the peaceful environment and focusing on your studies. Plus, we have a new sports center where you can practice various sports, including the sports you love. Additionally, joining local art clubs here will allow you to explore traditional Chinese art, which I know you're interested in. The school also has delicious handmade food classes, so you can learn to cook Chinese dishes yourself! Looking forward to your reply and wishing you a great trip to China. Best wishes, Li Hua 关键词汇：countryside, sports center, local art clubs, handmade food classes 亮点句式：It's located in the countryside, which is perfect for enjoying the peaceful environment... 参考范文二： Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. Considering your interests, I recommend my cousin’s school for your study trip. Situated in the city center, it offers a vibrant atmosphere and easy access to various cultural experiences. The school is well-known for its excellent ping-pong team, which aligns with your love for sports. Moreover, the hand-made food classes will be an excellent opportunity for you to delve into the art of Chinese cuisine. I believe these features make it an ideal place for you to immerse in Chinese culture while enjoying your favorite activities. I can't wait to hear your thoughts and hope you have an unforgettable experience in China. Best regards, Li Hua 关键词汇：city center, ping-pong team, hand-made food classes, Chinese cuisine 亮点句式：Situated in the city center, it offers a vibrant atmosphere and easy access to various cultural experiences. 参考范文三： Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I think you will love my school. It’s located in the countryside. The air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful. We have a new sports center where you can play various sports. If you like ping-pong, you can also join our school’s table tennis club. There are local art clubs in our school. You can learn traditional Chinese painting, calligraphy and paper-cutting. Moreover, we often have activities related to traditional Chinese art. I believe you will have a great time here. Looking forward to your coming. 关键词汇：countryside、new sports center、local art clubs、table tennis club、traditional Chinese painting、calligraphy、paper-cutting、activities related to traditional Chinese art 亮点句式：“I think you will love my school.” 表达出强烈的推荐之意；“There are local art clubs in our school. You can learn traditional Chinese painting, calligraphy and paper-cutting.” 详细介绍了学校的艺术俱乐部和可学习的内容。 参考范文四： Dear Candy, I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I highly recommend my cousin's school. It's in the city center, convenient for you to explore. It has a good ping-pong team. And there are hand-made food classes where you can experience Chinese cuisine and culture. Looking forward to your arrival. 关键词汇：city center、good ping-pong team、hand-made food classes、Chinese cuisine and culture 亮点句式：“I highly recommend my cousin's school.” 直接表明推荐；“It's in the city center, convenient for you to explore.” 说明学校位置优势。 《课程标准》要求学生能通过书面语篇描述、介绍事物，表达个人看法，表意清晰，话语基本通顺;能用所学英语，通过书面语篇简单介绍中外主要文化现象，语义基本连贯。试卷书面表达部分命题充分体现了《课程标准》对学生通过书面表达展现语言能力的要求。试题主要围绕“人与社会”“人与自我”两个方面展开、创设真实语境，要求学生结合个人生活经验和社会生活需要，利用所学语言、文化知识及逻辑思维进行有意义的思考、建构、交流和书而表达，创造新的语篇。 【命题立意】考查学生描述、介绍熟悉的事物，表达个人观点的能力以及分析问题和解决问题的能力。 【试题分析】书面表达试题设计聚焦学生校园生活，涉及学校活动、食物、爱好、休闲等多个话题，以及对介绍、建议和逻辑关系等书面表达技能的考查，充分体现素养导向。试题通过 Alice的喜好提示及My school和 My cousin's school一城一乡两所学校的信息支架，选一所合适的学校推荐给 Alice。表面看来是推荐学校，但不能轻易落笔。其中内容和语言的合理性和逻辑性等是学生需要注意的方面。总体上该试题既贴近学生真实的校园生活，让来自城乡不同学校的学生都有机会能结合自身经历和感受，做出有话可说的恰当选择:又体现新课标背景下对学生核心素养的考查，将英语真正融入学生生活，有利于学生积极主动地将所学语言运用于解决实际问题，体现了试题的应用性和开放性。本题的写作要领及注意事项简要阐述如下: 1.审题清晰，明确写作要点在开始写作前，先要仔细审题，明确写作要点。本文的写作要求结合Alice的喜好，即爱运动、喜欢中国传统艺术和美食，及My school和My cousin's school一城一乡两所学校的信息支架，结合自己的生活经验选择一所合适的学校，以电子邮件的形式推荐给Alice并说明理由。一些学生审题不清、表现为:(1)对两所学校都推荐了;(2)让Alice自己选择;(3)未在两所学校中做出选择、直接说“I think you will like my school...”，写作目的不清晰。 2.用语得体，关注意义表达 在写作时，要明确目标读者。本文的读者是外国朋友Alice。作者与读者之间的关系是年龄相仿的好朋友，因此需要用亲近而得体的语言。写作的目的是帮助对方选择一所合适的学校、因此在推荐学校时、需要考虑对方的真实需求，结合自己的生活经历，综合运用所学语言知识进行有意义的交流和表达。一些学生不关注语境，缺乏“真交际”的能力，如开头用“I's my great honor to introduce...”、忽略朋友间交际语的亲近面得体性;在阐述推荐理山时部分学生套用表达结构，如“The reasons are as follows. Here are the reasons.To start with...Besides...”，忽略了应用文的交际性。 3.表达逻辑，实现整合目标 在写作过程中，学生需要根据要点信息提示，如Alice的兴趣爱好，Myschool和Mycousin'sschoo等内容，结合具体语境，分析交际对象和交际目的的相关性，用合乎交际思维的习惯来确定表达顺序。学生可以先根据Alice的具体兴趣爱好来推荐合适的学校，后明推荐理由，如学校在乡村，可以结合Alice喜好和自己对乡村的认知体验，提供更多吸引朋友的有效细节，如:信件开头推荐合适的学校(.know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you.)，接着整合信息，说明推荐理( It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you'll enjoy it.)。这些信息的表述方式不是现成的，需要学生根据经验和常识自己做出科学、合理的安排和设计。在语言上，选择简洁、合适的词汇与表达方式即可，通过加工和组合，有条理地表达，确保表达有逻辑、得体、有效。       1．学校将征集学生活动室的设计方案。假设你是李华，请从以下两个所给方案中选择一个：才艺天地(Talent Corner)和义卖集市(Charity Market)。根据提示给校英语广播栏目负责人张老师写封邮件，完善方案并说明设计意图。 Talent Corner Meanings: a good way to show yourself, Activities: perform a play,· Opening time:… Charity Market Meanings: a good way to raise money, Activities: sell second-hand things, Opening time:… 要求： (1)不能出现真实的人名和校名； (2)词数 80—100，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. Zhang, I’ve heard that we will have a new student activity room. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 2．假定你是李明，你的英国朋友David来信向你了解中国传统民间艺术，请结合下表提供的信息，选择其中一项艺术形式给他写一封邮件进行介绍。 Chinese Folk Art 内容要点 艺术形式 Basic facts Your feeling Lantern •about 1,800 years, ... •use different materials, ... •the Lantern Festival, ... •a symbol of... ... Paper cutting •over 1,500 years, ... •cut out different shapes, ... •the Spring Festival, ... •express... ... 注意： 1.文中必须包含该艺术形式的两项内容要点，可适当发挥（参考词汇仅供选择使用 或参考)： 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3.词数：80~100：邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear David, How is everything going? Hearing that you’re interested in Chinese folk art, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you’ll come here and enjoy our traditional beauty yourself one day. Yours, Li Ming 3．阳光学校将于六月底举行 2024届九年级毕业典礼，学校英语周刊向全校学生征集典礼活动金点子。假设你是该校学生李华，请给负责人王老师写一封电子邮件，推荐你认为最合适的三至四项活动，并给出理由。 Activities Reasons give best wishes to our friends help us a lot... invite parents to the ceremony share... with them … 注意： （1）邮件需包含表中所给的所有信息，并适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； （3）词数：80—100词。信件开头已给出，不计入总词数； （4）邮件开头已给出，不计入总数。 Dear Mr. Wang, I am very glad to share my ideas about the graduation ceremony activities. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua    1．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael即将结束在中国的交换生课程。他打算为家人和好友准备一些中国礼物。请你写一封电子邮件，向他推荐三件有特色的礼物并说明推荐的理由(礼物可以从下表中选择或自行确定)。 Presents Reasons a silk scarf soft and comfortable; some Chinese paintings on it Chinese tea paper cuts pieces of Chinese clay art Chinese fans toy pandas … … 注意： (1)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 (2)词数：80-100。 Dear Michael, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 2．假设你是李华，请结合表格内容，用英语邮件向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的，并谈谈你选择的一门劳动课程及选择理由。 School Labor (劳动) Courses The course you choose and your reason Courses Aims …  Vegetable-planting To study plants and know about farming  Cooking course: making dumplings & Zongzi To learn about traditional Chinese cultures  Chair-repairing To learn and practice new skills 要求： 1. 必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 2. 词数：80~100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。 Dear Mike, How is everything going? This term, we have three labor courses at school. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．中国古诗词是我们代代传承的文化瑰宝。假定你是李华，你校将举办中国古诗词文化节 (Chinese Ancient Poetry Day)。你想邀请对中国古诗词非常感兴趣的外教Mr. White参加本次活动，请根据下面提示给他写一封邮件。 Time 2:00 p.m., May 20th Place the school library Activities ·chant poems ·watch the movie 30,000 Miles from Chang’an ·... Purpose ·popularize Chinese poetry ·… 要求： （1）短文必须包括所有提示内容，并适当发挥； （2）词数80—100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 To: Mr White From: Li Hua Hi, Mr White, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 4．假设国外中学生Alex将来你校进行为期一周的交流学习，期间计划参加一项你校社团活动，体验中国文化。请你根据下表中的提示，写一篇英文短文，介绍其中一个社团内容。 Clubs Introduction Reasons The paper cutting club admire some masters’ great works, try paper cutting… a traditional art form of beauty; a symbol of wishes for good luck… The folk music club take musical instrument classes, attend a folk music concert… enjoy the beauty of Chinese folk music; a chance to bring the school and you closer… 注意：1. 请回复邮件中所提及的所有问题，可适当发挥使行文通顺、连贯。 2. 邮件中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 3. 词数80-100左右。 Dear Alex, I’m so excited to hear from you. It’s my honor to introduce some                 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ping 5．某学习网站的“Student Helper”栏目收到两位学生的邮件。假如你是该网站志愿者李明，请就其中一封(任选)进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 To: studenthelper@mail.com Subject: Need Help! Dear Helper, Chinese is too difficult for me! I really don’t know how to speak well. Could you please tell me how I can improve my Chinese speaking skills? Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! May To: studenthelper@mail.com Subject: What can I do? Dear Helper, I’m very worried about my physics these days. You know, it’s really hard for me. Could you please tell me how I can improve my physics? Looking forward to your reply. Eric Hi, ____________, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Ming    1．假设你是学生李华，你的学校将组织一个新的社团，现有以下几种计划: ● Reading club ●Arts and sport club ●Hand-made workshop 请给校报的Mr. King写一封邮件，选择一个你最喜欢的社团，说明你选择的理由，并对社团后续开展活动提出至少两点建议。 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息； 2. 词数：80~100词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mr. King, I’m writing to give some advice about the new club our school will set up. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope my advice can be taken by you. Yours, Li Hua 2．假定你是李华， 你校英语杂志社Youth Voice打算改版， 现就新增栏目名称与内容等征求全校师生的意见。请你用英语给杂志社主编Simon写一封邮件，分享你的想法。 Columns What Why Great Works share famous books, ... increase knowledge, ... Science Study show the latest discoveries, ... raise interest in science, ... ... ... ... 注意： （1）邮件必须包含所有要点并补充一个栏目； （2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息； （3）词数：80~100。首尾句已给出，不计入总词数。 FROM: Li Hua TO: Simon SUBJECT: Adding new columns to Youth Voice Dear Simon, I’m so glad that our school magazine Youth Voice will renew very soon. I have some ideas about adding new columns. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will consider my advice and I believe our school magazine will be better! Yours, Li Hua 3．假如你是李平，你校英文校刊上发布了一则暑期夏令营活动信息，请你给英国笔友 Mike写一封信邀请他参加其中一个夏令营，并说明推荐理由。 注意： 1.词数为80~100词左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Dear Mike, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 4．假如你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友 Tom对你们学校的拓展课程很感兴趣，想了解相关信息。请你根据表格内的提示向他介绍部分课程及开设原因，并表达自己还希望学校开设哪门拓展课和理由。 Special after-school classes in our school classes reasons Cooking 1. help parents 2. master the life skills English play 1. learn how to act 2. improve spoken English Basketball 1. be good for our health 2. encourage teamwork Your wishes … 注意： 1.短文须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3.词数：100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How’s it going?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best Wishes! Yours, Li Hua 5．你校将举办英语文化节，现向全校学生征求活动意见。假如你是李华，请用英语给负责人写一封书信，从学校的活动意向表中推荐2—3个活动并阐明理由。 □sing English songs    □read English novels □watch English movies     □tell English stories □make English posters     □perform English sitcoms 注意：（1）书信内容要点应选自上表，可适当发挥； （2）词数： 80-100； （3）书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear sir, For the coming English festival, I have some suggestions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you! Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$