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专题04 书面表达20篇
(浙江中考真题+名校模拟)
1.(2024·浙江·中考真题)假如你是李华,你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐一所合适的学校。
I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great.
My cousin’s school
◆in the city center
◆a good ping-pong team
◆hand-made food classes
My school
◆in the countryside
◆a new sports center
◆local art clubs
注意:
(1)邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80左右:邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2.(2023·浙江湖州·中考真题)幸福可以是偶得礼物时的欣喜,可以是帮助他人时的愉悦……你觉得幸福是什么呢?请你写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿,分享你的经历,谈谈你对幸福的理解。
参考词汇(仅供选择使用):achieve,share,have fun,be thankful to
注意:(1)词数:80—100;短文首句已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Happiness is everywhere around us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.(2023·浙江丽水·中考真题)初中三年即将过去,回顾这段时光,你是否有许多难忘的回忆,也有很多感慨?假定你是李华,你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件,题为“写给自己的一封信”,请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
A Letter to Myself
内容要点
参考词汇
Memories
Feelings
注意: 1. 文中必须包含两项内容要点,可适当发挥(参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考);
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;稿件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
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Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
4.(2023·浙江台州·中考真题)假设你叫李辉,你所在的班级拟组织一次“和合古街探访与环境改善”的项目化学习活动,请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加此次活动,内容包括如下:
内容要点
参考词汇
Where will we go?
·Hehe Ancient Street
·take the bus
How will we go there?
·interview…
What will we do?
·discuss ways of improving…
Why will we go there?
·learn more about……
·…
When and where will we meet?
·9: 00 a. m. Friday, the school gate
注意:(1)邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;
(2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(3)词数 80~100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To: Mr. Smith
From: Li Hui
Dear Mr. Smith,
How’s it going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hui
5.(2023·浙江杭州·中考真题)假定你是李平,请你对英国朋友Jack的邮件进行回复。词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
TO LiPing@mail.com
SUBJECT C U soon!
Hi Li Ping
Next week I’ll be with you in Hangzhou. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me? Is there a swimming pool or tennis center nearby?
I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you?
I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon.
Jack
Hi Jack,
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Li Ping
6.(2023·浙江金华·中考真题)假设你叫李华,你的英国朋友Alex很难读懂中国诗句“山重水复疑无路,柳岸花明又一村”(For every cloud, there is a silver lining),来信向你寻求帮助。请你根据表格信息,并结合自身例子给他回一封e-mail,谈谈你的理解。
内容要点
写作参考
About the sentence
written by Lu You
in English: For every cloud, there is a silver lining.
Your example
Any difficult situation that you experienced, and how did you get out?
Your understanding
never give up, find a way out, ...
注意:
1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;写作参考供选择使用;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数:80~100;
4.正文首句和尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my reply will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
7.(2024·浙江温州·三模)英语项目化学习复盘阶段,你班就“如何解决英语资料阅读困难”这一问题进行了调查,请根据如图,介绍调查结果,并结合自身经历谈谈你的做法和体会。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
2. 词数:110词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
I am going to share the results of our survey about how students dealt with the difficulties when reading English materials.
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8.(2024·浙江温州·三模)某国际学校正在向学生征集暑期社会实践方案。假设你是该学校的学生李明,请你从以下两个实践项目 Visit Children’s Home(拜访儿童福利院)和Care for City Cleaners(关爱环卫工人)之中选择一个,向负责人 Mr Miller介绍你的设计方案,并说明理由。
Project: Visit Children’s Home◆Place: The Children’s Home
◆Things to prepare:
_____________________
◆Activities:
_____________________
Project: Care for City Cleaners◆Place: Central Park
◆Things to prepare:
_____________________
◆Activities:
_____________________
注意:
①文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
②词数:100词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Miller,
I’m Li Ming. I’m happy to have the chance to introduce my plan for the project: _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
9.(2024·浙江金华·三模)假如你是李华,你校正举行以“用英语讲中国故事”为主题的征文比赛,请写一篇讲述与某位民族英雄相关的历史故事的短文参赛。
内容包括:故事的背景,故事的情节(起因、经过、结果),故事的意义。
注意:(1)文中不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息;(2)词数:80~100。
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10.(2024·浙江杭州·三模)假设你是李华,作为学校英语阅读俱乐部活动的策划者,你计划给有丰富活动组织经验的外教Tom Smith写一封英语邮件,向他阐述计划并寻求建议,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.已有计划,如:share your favorite books, …;
3.寻求建议,如:how to choose books for different levels, …。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;抄写本试卷中的语篇不得分。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
11.(2024·浙江金华·二模)最近,外教Tom正在策划以“SPORTS”为主题的校园英语角活动,请你根据下面的提示与要求,推荐1-2个与主题相关的topic,并以李华的名义投稿,说说你的理由。
要点
参考词汇
Time
On weekdays?/ On weekends? …
Place
Inside the school?/ Outside the school?…
Topics
Sports and health?/ Sports events?/ Sports heroes?/ Sports culture?…
Reasons
improve/benefit/open/increase/…
注意:
(1). 短文须包含所有要点;
(2). 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3). 词数:100左右;
(4). 短文首句已给,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that a sports-themed English Corner will be held next week. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope my advice can be helpful. Looking forward to our English corner!
Yours,
Li Hua
12.(2024·浙江温州·三模)一个有意义的周末可以这样度过:你可以与家人共享美食,可以与朋友参加志愿活动,可以学习特长提升自我⋯⋯请你根据下面的评价量表写一篇短文,在班级“My Meaningful Weekend”英语沙龙上分享。
Checklist
Content
include:
specific information (time, places...)
meaningful activities
feelings
Language
Use proper expressions and correct sentences.
Hand-writing
Write clearly.
注意:①词数:110词左右;②文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
My Meaningful Weekend
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13.(2024·浙江台州·一模)中国古诗词是我们代代传承的文化瑰宝。假定你是李华,你校将举办中国古诗词文化节 (Chinese Ancient Poetry Day)。你想邀请对中国古诗词非常感兴趣的外教Mr. White参加本次活动,请根据下面提示给他写一封邮件。
Time
2:00 p.m., May 20th
Place
the school library
Activities
·chant poems
·watch the movie 30,000 Miles from Chang’an
·...
Purpose
·popularize Chinese poetry
·…
要求:
(1)短文必须包括所有提示内容,并适当发挥;
(2)词数80—100词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
To: Mr White
From: Li Hua
Hi, Mr White,
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Li Hua
14.(2024·浙江温州·二模)你曾经为提升自己做过一些努力吗?请根据以下征文海报,写一篇英语短文投稿,分享你在提升自我方面的一次经历以及收获,并谈谈你在这方面的计划。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数:100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
During the past three years, I have done a lot of things to be better. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.(2024·浙江杭州·二模)文明社会,从我做起,请就下图的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一短文,向校刊English Garden投稿,倡导做文明人。
注意:
(1) 短文必须包括所给图片的信息,合理想象并补全第3幅图片的内容。 (以第三人称描述图片故事)
(2) 必须谈谈你对此事的看法,并说明原因。
(3) 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(4) 字数100词左右。短文首句已给,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:果皮 skin;踩在……上摔倒 slip on sth (slipped, slipped);救护车 ambulance;一些不文明行为 some uncivilized behaviour
To Be a Civilized Person
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin.
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16.(2024·浙江·二模)阳光学校将于六月底举行 2024届九年级毕业典礼,学校英语周刊向全校学生征集典礼活动金点子。假设你是该校学生李华,请给负责人王老师写一封电子邮件,推荐你认为最合适的三至四项活动,并给出理由。
Activities
Reasons
give best wishes to our friends
help us a lot...
invite parents to the ceremony
share... with them
…
注意:
(1)邮件需包含表中所给的所有信息,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:80—100词。信件开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(4)邮件开头已给出,不计入总数。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am very glad to share my ideas about the graduation ceremony activities. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
17.(2024·浙江绍兴·二模)假设你是李明,在世界读书日活动中,你对班级同学每年课外阅读的情况进行了问卷调查。请描述以下调查结果并提出你的建议,向Teenslife杂志投稿,以更好地推动校园读书活动。
Situation
Causes
Suggestions
1. don’t have enough time;
2. have little interest.
注意:
(1) 短文必须包括图表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
(2) 你的建议至少两条;
(3) 词数: 80—100;
(4) 短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
I did a survey about after-school reading in my class last year. Here are the results.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Ming
18.(2024·浙江·二模)假设你是李华,请结合表格内容,用英语邮件向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的,并谈谈你选择的一门劳动课程及选择理由。
School Labor (劳动) Courses
The course you choose and your reason
Courses
Aims
…
Vegetable-planting
To study plants and know about farming
Cooking course:
making dumplings & Zongzi
To learn about traditional Chinese cultures
Chair-repairing
To learn and practice new skills
要求:
1. 必须包括表格中所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
2. 词数:100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going?
This term, we have three labor courses at school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
19.(2024·浙江金华·二模)假定你是李华,请你对英国朋友Max的邮件进行回复。词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua,
Long time no talk! I bet you are busy with your upcoming exams.
Big news—I’m moving to Zhejiang with my parents, starting Grade Two there next term. Can’t wait to see you! But I’m a bit nervous about my coming school life. Would you mind sharing your middle school experience and giving me some advice?
Hope you’re doing well. Thanks!
Yours,
Max
Dear Max,
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Yours,
Li Hua
20.(2024·浙江杭州·一模)英语杂志社Sunday Mail正在开展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题的英语征文活动。请根据广告中的信息用英语写一篇100 词左右的征文,分享一件你自己认为自豪的事情。开头已给出 (不计词数)。
Articles Wanted
One Thing I’m Proud of
What is the thing you are proud of?
When did it happen and what did you do?
Why does this thing make you feel proud? Or what important lesson did you learn from this thing?
Tell us what you think!
Write an article answering these questions and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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专题04 书面表达20篇
(浙江中考真题+名校模拟)
1.(2024·浙江·中考真题)假如你是李华,你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐一所合适的学校。
I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great.
My cousin’s school
◆in the city center
◆a good ping-pong team
◆hand-made food classes
My school
◆in the countryside
◆a new sports center
◆local art clubs
注意:
(1)邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80左右:邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文①
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you.
It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you’ll enjoy it. Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! Also, our school has traditional art classes, and you can learn paper cutting, Chinese painting and so on. I’m sure you’ll love my school.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文②
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin’s school is a good choice.
It is in the city center with many restaurants nearby. You’ll find it easy to try different local foods there. In her school, there are some special hand-made food classes. You can learn to make food by yourself. I’m sure you’ll be interested in them. What’s more, the ping-pong team in her school is great. As a ping-pong lover, you can’t miss it!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析] (以例文①为例)
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容给她推荐一所合适的学校,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,向她推荐一个学校;
第二步,根据提示内容详细介绍推荐学校的信息;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball打篮球
②and so on等等
[高分句型]
Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! (so连接的并列句)
2.(2023·浙江湖州·中考真题)幸福可以是偶得礼物时的欣喜,可以是帮助他人时的愉悦……你觉得幸福是什么呢?请你写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿,分享你的经历,谈谈你对幸福的理解。
参考词汇(仅供选择使用):achieve,share,have fun,be thankful to
注意:(1)词数:80—100;短文首句已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Happiness is everywhere around us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Happiness is everywhere around us. When asked what happiness is, many people will give the answer like making a lot of money because money and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction. But, in my eyes, staying with my families really makes me happy for the simple and sincere love among us can last forever throughout our life.
In the sixth grade of primary school, I had a high fever and had to be hospitalized for two weeks. My father sent me delicious food made by my mother and talked with me every day. My little sister Lucy often called me and cared about my health. When I was awake at night, I found my father sleeping on the chair beside my bed, and I suddenly thought that staying with families was the biggest happiness and I was the happiest person in the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,讲述对幸福的理解;
第二步,讲述一件让自己感觉幸福的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①the sense of……的感觉
②have to不得不
③care about关心
[高分句型]
①When asked what happiness is, many people will give the answer like making a lot of money because money and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction.(when引导时间状语从句)
3.(2023·浙江丽水·中考真题)初中三年即将过去,回顾这段时光,你是否有许多难忘的回忆,也有很多感慨?假定你是李华,你校英文报向初三学生征集稿件,题为“写给自己的一封信”,请你结合下表内容写一份稿件投稿。
A Letter to Myself
内容要点
参考词汇
Memories
Feelings
注意: 1. 文中必须包含两项内容要点,可适当发挥(参考词汇仅供选择使用或参考);
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;稿件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
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Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
A Letter to Myself
Dear myself,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye to your junior high school life.
Memories are still fresh that you were so shy and quiet when in Grade Seven. Sometimes you even lacked courage to ask the teachers problems about learning. But now, with the help of teachers and warm-hearted classmates, you become more confident and outgoing. Do you still remember the quarrel with your best friend? Sometimes silence causes misunderstandings. Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody.
May you always keep these ups and downs in mind. It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person.
Wish you all the best, my dear self.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据所给提示内容写给自己一封信。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己三年来难忘的回忆。
第二步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①lack courage缺乏勇气
②with the help of在……帮助下
③quarrel with和……争吵
[高分句型]
①Try to open yourself up, and you will understand what friendship means to everybody. (祈使句+and/or+陈述句)
②It is all of these unforgettable moments that help you grow into a better person. (that引导定语从句)
4.(2023·浙江台州·中考真题)假设你叫李辉,你所在的班级拟组织一次“和合古街探访与环境改善”的项目化学习活动,请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加此次活动,内容包括如下:
内容要点
参考词汇
Where will we go?
·Hehe Ancient Street
·take the bus
How will we go there?
·interview…
What will we do?
·discuss ways of improving…
Why will we go there?
·learn more about……
·…
When and where will we meet?
·9: 00 a. m. Friday, the school gate
注意:(1)邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;
(2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(3)词数 80~100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To: Mr. Smith
From: Li Hui
Dear Mr. Smith,
How’s it going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Smith,
How’s it going? Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to take part in our trip to Hehe Ancient Street.
We are going there by bus. When we arrive, we will interview the old people, hoping they will tell us stories about the past. Then we plan to discuss ways of improving the travel environment to interest more tourists. These activities will surely help us learn more about the history of the ancient street and sense the beauty of Hehe Culture. Besides, it offers us a good chance to do community service.
Would you like to come? If yes, please meet us at 9:00 on Friday morning at the school gate.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要求已给出,学生不要遗漏题目中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述活动的时间、地点、内容以及活动意义;
第三步,期盼对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②plan to do计划做某事
③the beauty of……的美丽
④offer sb sth提供某人某物
[高分句型]
①When we arrive, we will interview the old people, hoping they will tell us stories about the past.(非谓语作状语)
②Then we plan to discuss ways of improving the travel environment to interest more tourists.(动词不定式表目的)
5.(2023·浙江杭州·中考真题)假定你是李平,请你对英国朋友Jack的邮件进行回复。词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
TO LiPing@mail.com
SUBJECT C U soon!
Hi Li Ping
Next week I’ll be with you in Hangzhou. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me? Is there a swimming pool or tennis center nearby?
I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you?
I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon.
Jack
Hi Jack,
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Li Ping
【答案】例文
Hi Jack,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can’t wait to see you, too.
It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. There is a big swimming pool near my house. We can swim in it for free. In addition, there is a tennis center three kilometers from my home, so we can also go to play tennis. I like English local products very much. If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件;
第二步,具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍家附近的游泳池或网球中心;
第三步,最后介绍自己想要对方带什么。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t wait to do迫不及待做
②as well as和,以及
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It will be very hot in Hangzhou next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. (so引导并列句)
②If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.(if引导的条件状语从句)
6.(2023·浙江金华·中考真题)假设你叫李华,你的英国朋友Alex很难读懂中国诗句“山重水复疑无路,柳岸花明又一村”(For every cloud, there is a silver lining),来信向你寻求帮助。请你根据表格信息,并结合自身例子给他回一封e-mail,谈谈你的理解。
内容要点
写作参考
About the sentence
written by Lu You
in English: For every cloud, there is a silver lining.
Your example
Any difficult situation that you experienced, and how did you get out?
Your understanding
never give up, find a way out, ...
注意:
1.文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;写作参考供选择使用;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数:80~100;
4.正文首句和尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my reply will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alex,
Glad to hear from you. It’s natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence. It’s written by Lu You and similar to “For every cloud, there’s a silver lining” in English. You’re encouraged to keep trying when meeting difficulties. My example may help you better understand it.
Once, I entered our school’s photo competition but couldn’t find a proper subject. I felt worried and hopeless. One day, my friend May gave me a big smile. Suddenly, I was hit and touched, feeling something bright. An idea came to me that I could bring the warmth to others through photos. After many tries, I took the subject—A Warm Hug. Finally, I got the prize. So we should never give up and try to find a way out.
I hope my reply will be helpful to you,
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍关于“山重水复疑无路,柳岸花明又一村”的基本信息;
第二步,结合自身例子说明这个诗句的含义;
第三步,最后说明自己的理解。
[亮点词汇]
①keep doing sth一直做某事
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
You’re encouraged to keep trying when meeting difficulties.(when引导的时间状语从句)
7.(2024·浙江温州·三模)英语项目化学习复盘阶段,你班就“如何解决英语资料阅读困难”这一问题进行了调查,请根据如图,介绍调查结果,并结合自身经历谈谈你的做法和体会。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
2. 词数:110词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
I am going to share the results of our survey about how students dealt with the difficulties when reading English materials.
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【答案】
例文:
Hello, everyone!
I am going to share the results of our survey about how students dealt with the difficulties when reading English materials.
57% of students ask teachers or group members for help. 34% of students use the Internet or dictionaries. Finally, 9% of the students give up. I also have difficulties in reading English materials. I solve them in the following ways. First, I expanded my English vocabulary. I usually read a lot of English articles or books. Second, break down sentences. I usually break down some long sentences into small sentences to understand their meaning step by step. Finally, I learned about the differences between different cultures, which helped me to better understand the culture and language of English.
Here are some of my ideas that I hope you’ll find helpful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图是分享关于“如何解决英语资料阅读困难”的调查结果;
第二步,介绍调查结果,并结合自身经历谈谈你的做法和体会;
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with解决
②give up放弃
③have difficulty in doing sth.做某事有困难
④break down拆解
[高分句型]
①Finally, I learned about the differences between different cultures, which helped me to better understand the culture and language of English. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Here are some of my ideas that I hope you’ll find helpful. (that引导定语从句)
8.(2024·浙江温州·三模)某国际学校正在向学生征集暑期社会实践方案。假设你是该学校的学生李明,请你从以下两个实践项目 Visit Children’s Home(拜访儿童福利院)和Care for City Cleaners(关爱环卫工人)之中选择一个,向负责人 Mr Miller介绍你的设计方案,并说明理由。
Project: Visit Children’s Home◆Place: The Children’s Home
◆Things to prepare:
_____________________
◆Activities:
_____________________
Project: Care for City Cleaners◆Place: Central Park
◆Things to prepare:
_____________________
◆Activities:
_____________________
注意:
①文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
②词数:100词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Miller,
I’m Li Ming. I’m happy to have the chance to introduce my plan for the project: _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Mr Miller,
I’m Li Ming. I’m happy to have the chance to introduce my plan for the project: Visit Children’s Home.
In Children’s Home, we’ll see many children who lost their family. So I think it’s important to show our love to those kids through this project. To get ready for this visit, we can prepare some presents for them, such as toys, books and clothes. I’m sure these presents will surprise them a lot.
As for what we can do during our visit, I’ve got a plan. First, we’ll give some performances to the children. We can sing songs and dance, which will make them happy. Then, we can play games together. Through games, we’ll know each other better and develop friendships with these children. At last, we’ll enjoy delicious food, such as cakes and fruits.
I’m sure these children will feel the warmth during that time. I hope my plan will be adopted.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,并给出开头和结尾,写作时注意连贯;适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。由“introduce my plan for the project”引出项目计划;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍设计方案:准备事项和活动内容;
第三步,书写结语。表达“方案被采纳”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① prepare sth. for sb. 为某人准备某物
② as for 至于,关于
③ develop friendships with... 与……发展友谊
[高分句型]
① To get ready for this visit, we can prepare some presents for them, such as toys, books and clothes. (动词不定式作目的状语)
② We can sing songs and dance, which will make them happy. (定语从句)
9.(2024·浙江金华·三模)假如你是李华,你校正举行以“用英语讲中国故事”为主题的征文比赛,请写一篇讲述与某位民族英雄相关的历史故事的短文参赛。
内容包括:故事的背景,故事的情节(起因、经过、结果),故事的意义。
注意:(1)文中不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息;(2)词数:80~100。
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【答案】例文
The Story of Zhao Yiman
On the way to realizing our national dream, there’re many heroes who devoted their lives. Among them, Zhao Yiman is such a person who is best-known for her tough attitude in face of enemies.
Since Anti-Japanese War broke out, people of all works had fought bravely against enemies. One day in 1935, Zhao Yiman was captured unfortunately. Despite of being cruelly treated in the prison, she never gave in. Before she died, she wrote a letter, expressing affectionate love to her son as well as fearless royalty to our country.
A hopeful nation can’t live without heroes and a promising country cannot live without pioneers. Following their footsteps, we should study hard to make our country more prosperous and powerful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先介绍在实现民族梦想的道路上,有许多英雄献出了自己的生命;
第二步,从故事的背景,故事的情节(起因、经过、结果),故事的意义等方面具体介绍民族英雄的事迹;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①break out爆发
②give in屈服
③as well as而且
[高分句型]
①Among them, Zhao Yiman is such a person who is best-known for her tough attitude in face of enemies.(定语从句)
②Following their footsteps, we should study hard to make our country more prosperous and powerful.(动词不定式作目的状语)
10.(2024·浙江杭州·三模)假设你是李华,作为学校英语阅读俱乐部活动的策划者,你计划给有丰富活动组织经验的外教Tom Smith写一封英语邮件,向他阐述计划并寻求建议,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.已有计划,如:share your favorite books, …;
3.寻求建议,如:how to choose books for different levels, …。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;抄写本试卷中的语篇不得分。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Smith,
How is everything going? Recently I have been chosen to take charge of the English Reading Club of our school. Here I’m writing for your help.
Our club is now making plans for an English Reading Festival to be held in the school next month. The activity is meant to cultivate students’ interest in learning English and, you know, good English books are of great significance. During the two-week festival, we encourage every student to share their favorite English books and write reviews.
Therefore, we need to introduce to our students some fantastic English books. But different students have different levels, could you please recommend to us how to choose books for different levels so that we can provide a broad choice for everyone?
Best regards,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:以一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,具体介绍这次活动的计划;
第三步,寻求对方的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①take charge of负责
②make plans for为……制定计划
③be of great significance具有重大意义
④need to do sth需要做某事
[高分句型]
①The activity is meant to cultivate students’ interest in learning English and, you know, good English books are of great significance. (并列句)
②But different students have different levels, could you please recommend to us how to choose books for different levels so that we can provide a broad choice for everyone? (so that引导的目的状语从句)
11.(2024·浙江金华·二模)最近,外教Tom正在策划以“SPORTS”为主题的校园英语角活动,请你根据下面的提示与要求,推荐1-2个与主题相关的topic,并以李华的名义投稿,说说你的理由。
要点
参考词汇
Time
On weekdays?/ On weekends? …
Place
Inside the school?/ Outside the school?…
Topics
Sports and health?/ Sports events?/ Sports heroes?/ Sports culture?…
Reasons
improve/benefit/open/increase/…
注意:
(1). 短文须包含所有要点;
(2). 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3). 词数:100左右;
(4). 短文首句已给,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that a sports-themed English Corner will be held next week. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope my advice can be helpful. Looking forward to our English corner!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that a sports-themed English Corner is around the corner. I really hope the event will go smoothly and the following are my suggestions.
I think it’s more appropriate to hold the event inside the school on weekdays because the English Corner is also part of the campus culture. As for the main topic, it’s a great option to give a speech on sports and health, which is close to to our daily life. We can share their favorite sports, how they develop the sports and get other benefits. This topic can surely help us live a healthier life. Moreover, why not add a bit of sports culture in your country? I believe we will be fond of it.
Hope my advice can be helpful. Looking forward to our English corner!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。引出校园英语角的话题;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。具体阐述校园英语角的活动内容;
第三步,书写结语。希望自己的建议能对大家有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①go smoothly 顺利进行
②help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
③why not do sth. 为什么不做某事
④be fond of 喜欢,钟爱
[高分句型]
①I think it’s more appropriate to hold the event inside the school on weekdays because the English Corner is also part of the campus culture. (省略that的宾语从句;because引导原因状语从句)
②As for the main topic, it’s a great option to give a speech on sports and health, which is close to to our daily life. (it作形式主语;which引导的非限定性定语从句)
12.(2024·浙江温州·三模)一个有意义的周末可以这样度过:你可以与家人共享美食,可以与朋友参加志愿活动,可以学习特长提升自我⋯⋯请你根据下面的评价量表写一篇短文,在班级“My Meaningful Weekend”英语沙龙上分享。
Checklist
Content
include:
specific information (time, places...)
meaningful activities
feelings
Language
Use proper expressions and correct sentences.
Hand-writing
Write clearly.
注意:①词数:110词左右;②文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
My Meaningful Weekend
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【答案】例文
As a student, life at weekends is an important part of my daily life.
Last weekend, I helped my parents do a lot of housework. My mother was very pleased with the work that I did. Besides that, I also cooked a delicious dinner for them. I felt very happy when I saw my parents eating the food. After dinner, we watched TV together. We spent a sweet family day.
In this way, I understand my parents better and show my love to them. This is the meaning of family: we help each other and care for each other.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作主题已给出,写作时主要围绕表格中的要点展开,合理组织语言,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引入主题;
第二步,具体介绍周末做的事情;
第三步,表达感受,结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
①be pleased with对……很满意
②eat out吃光
③in this way用这种方法
[高分句型]
①My mother was very pleased with the work that I did. (定语从句)
②I felt very happy when I saw my parents eating the food. (时间状语从句)
13.(2024·浙江台州·一模)中国古诗词是我们代代传承的文化瑰宝。假定你是李华,你校将举办中国古诗词文化节 (Chinese Ancient Poetry Day)。你想邀请对中国古诗词非常感兴趣的外教Mr. White参加本次活动,请根据下面提示给他写一封邮件。
Time
2:00 p.m., May 20th
Place
the school library
Activities
·chant poems
·watch the movie 30,000 Miles from Chang’an
·...
Purpose
·popularize Chinese poetry
·…
要求:
(1)短文必须包括所有提示内容,并适当发挥;
(2)词数80—100词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
To: Mr White
From: Li Hua
Hi, Mr White,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Hi, Mr White,
I am writing to invite you to the Chinese Ancient Poetry Day at our school because I know you have great interest in Chinese ancient poetry.
The festival will take place on May 20th in the school library and it will begin at 2:00 pm. On that day, there will be various activities. For example, students can admire the beauty of Chinese ancient poetry by chanting. Students can also learn more about some great poets like Li Bai by listening to their stories. Besides, school provides the movie 30,000 Miles from Chang’an, which enjoys popularity among Chinese people these days.
The festival is an excellent chance to popularize Chinese poetry. It can help us get a better understanding of Chinese culture as well.
Hope you can join us. Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:材料表格所给内容不得遗漏;注意邮件写作格式和时态切换。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,详细介绍古诗词文化节举行的时间、地点、活动内容及目的等;
第三步,书写结语,表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①take place举行
②for example例如
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I am writing to invite you to the Chinese Ancient Poetry Day at our school because I know you have great interest in Chinese ancient poetry.(原因状语从句)
②Besides, school provides the movie 30,000 Miles from Chang’an , which enjoys popularity among Chinese people these days(非限定性定语从句)
14.(2024·浙江温州·二模)你曾经为提升自己做过一些努力吗?请根据以下征文海报,写一篇英语短文投稿,分享你在提升自我方面的一次经历以及收获,并谈谈你在这方面的计划。
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数:100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
During the past three years, I have done a lot of things to be better. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
During the past three years, I have done a lot of things to be better. The most meaningful experience was joining an English speaking competition. Before the competition, I was not confident and was afraid to speak English in front of others. But my teacher encouraged me to challenge myself. So I practised again and again whenever I had time. During the competition, I did quite well and got the first prize. It was the experience that helped me become more confident in learning English. And I also learned that hard work pays off.
For the future, I plan to read more books and join an English club to improve myself. I believe every effort will take me closer to my goals.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你在提升自我方面的一次经历;
第二步,介绍你的收获;
第三步,最后谈谈你在这方面的计划。
[亮点词汇]
① be afraid to do害怕做
② encourage sb to do鼓励某人做
③ plan to do计划做
[高分句型]
① It was the experience that helped me become more confident in learning English.(强调句)
② I believe every effort will take me closer to my goals.(宾语从句)
15.(2024·浙江杭州·二模)文明社会,从我做起,请就下图的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一短文,向校刊English Garden投稿,倡导做文明人。
注意:
(1) 短文必须包括所给图片的信息,合理想象并补全第3幅图片的内容。 (以第三人称描述图片故事)
(2) 必须谈谈你对此事的看法,并说明原因。
(3) 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(4) 字数100词左右。短文首句已给,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:果皮 skin;踩在……上摔倒 slip on sth (slipped, slipped);救护车 ambulance;一些不文明行为 some uncivilized behaviour
To Be a Civilized Person
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin.
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【答案】例文
To Be a Civilized Person
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin. Everything was nice until I saw a man was eating a banana. When he finished it, looking around, then he dropped the skin to the ground. We were surprised at that moment, and my cousin wanted to pick it up right away. However, a girl ran so fast that she slipped on the skin by accident. At that time, we not only picked up the skin, but also helped the girl.
From this experience. I sincerely realized the importance of environmental protection and behaving politely. If the man took the skin to into the bin, the accident wouldn’t happen. It’s good for you and others.
In conclusion, to be a civilized person can not only lead to self-improvement, but also give the convenience to people around. Action from now on!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应对题干图片进行描述并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述事件的背景,包括事件,地点,人物等信息;
第二步,结合题干图片,描述事件的经过并合理想象,补全第3幅图片的内容;
第三步,谈谈对此事的看法,并说明原因。
[亮点词汇]
①so…that如此……以至于
②lead to导致
[高分句型]
①When he finished it, looking around, then he dropped the skin to the ground.(when引导时间状语从句)
②In conclusion, to be a civilized person can not only lead to self-improvement, but also give the convenience to people around.(not only…but also)
16.(2024·浙江·二模)阳光学校将于六月底举行 2024届九年级毕业典礼,学校英语周刊向全校学生征集典礼活动金点子。假设你是该校学生李华,请给负责人王老师写一封电子邮件,推荐你认为最合适的三至四项活动,并给出理由。
Activities
Reasons
give best wishes to our friends
help us a lot...
invite parents to the ceremony
share... with them
…
注意:
(1)邮件需包含表中所给的所有信息,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:80—100词。信件开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(4)邮件开头已给出,不计入总数。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am very glad to share my ideas about the graduation ceremony activities. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Wang,
I am very glad to share my ideas about the graduation ceremony activities. The graduation ceremony is considered as a time to say goodbye and thank you to the junior high school life and give wishes to the coming life as well. The following activities are probably some good choices.
The activity I want to recommend first is to say thanks to all the teachers who helped us and take a photo with them. When we were going through a difficult time or making progress, teachers are always with us, supporting and helping us. They are the ones we will never forget. Also, giving wishes to our friends is a good idea. Although we will part with each other, the friendship will last forever. Wha’s more, it could be a wonderful thing to invite parents to the ceremony. Parents will be glad to share your joy with you and also it is a proper time to show great thanks to them.
No matter what activities we will have, thank you for holding the ceremony for us. And wish everything goes well.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要有遗漏,可适当发挥,注意用词准确,语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出下文毕业典礼的活动;
第二步,具体介绍三到四个活动,并给出理由;
第三步,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be considered as被视为
②take a photo with sb和某人合影
③go through经历
④part with sb与某人分开
[高分句型]
① The graduation ceremony is considered as a time to say goodbye and thank you to the junior high school life and give wishes to the coming life as well.(被动语态)
②The activity I want to recommend first is to say thanks to all the teachers who helped us and take a photo with them.(定语从句)
③When we were going through a difficult time or making progress, teachers are always with us, supporting and helping us.(时间状语从句)
④Although we will part with each other, the friendship will last forever. (让步状语从句)
17.(2024·浙江绍兴·二模)假设你是李明,在世界读书日活动中,你对班级同学每年课外阅读的情况进行了问卷调查。请描述以下调查结果并提出你的建议,向Teenslife杂志投稿,以更好地推动校园读书活动。
Situation
Causes
Suggestions
1. don’t have enough time;
2. have little interest.
注意:
(1) 短文必须包括图表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;
(2) 你的建议至少两条;
(3) 词数: 80—100;
(4) 短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
I did a survey about after-school reading in my class last year. Here are the results.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Editor,
I did a survey about after-school reading in my class last month. Here are the results. 60% of my classmates read only one to three books every month. 25% read three to ten books monthly. However, only 15% read more than ten books. There are several reasons for this. Above all, there is so much homework that we don’t have enough time for reading. Besides, some of us have little interest in reading.
To improve the situation, I’d like to share my suggestions. Firstly, teachers should give us less homework so that we can spend more time reading. Secondly, our school can organize reading competitions which give us a good way to share our favourite books.
Yours
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍针对课外阅读情况的问卷调查结果并给出建议”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己的意图是介绍调查结果;
第二步,根据题干图片,详细描述调查结果;
第三步,给出自己的建议,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①more than超过
②so that以便
[高分句型]
①There are several reasons for this.(there be句型)
②Secondly, our school can organize reading competitions which give us a good way to share our favourite books.(定语从句)
18.(2024·浙江·二模)假设你是李华,请结合表格内容,用英语邮件向你的美国笔友Mike介绍你校本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的,并谈谈你选择的一门劳动课程及选择理由。
School Labor (劳动) Courses
The course you choose and your reason
Courses
Aims
…
Vegetable-planting
To study plants and know about farming
Cooking course:
making dumplings & Zongzi
To learn about traditional Chinese cultures
Chair-repairing
To learn and practice new skills
要求:
1. 必须包括表格中所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
2. 词数:100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名等有关信息。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going?
This term, we have three labor courses at school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
How is everything going?
This term, we have three labor courses at school. In the cooking course we learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on. In each kind of Chinese traditional food lie rich Chinese cultures. And we have chair-repairing course. It’s very interesting to learn new skills and practice them.
There is also a vegetable-planting course this term. I choose it this term. My classmates and I can plant tomatoes and have a lot of fun. We study plants and know about farming and get close to nature. I really enjoy vegetable-planting course as they not only enrich our school life but also offer us basic life skills.
Do you have labor courses? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍本学期开设的三门劳动课程及其目的;
第二步,介绍自己选择的劳动课程。
[亮点词汇]
①have a lot of fun玩得开心
②get close to亲近
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①In the cooking course we learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on.(疑问词+动词不定式结构)
②It’s very interesting to learn new skills and practice them.(动词不定式作主语)
19.(2024·浙江金华·二模)假定你是李华,请你对英国朋友Max的邮件进行回复。词数80左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua,
Long time no talk! I bet you are busy with your upcoming exams.
Big news—I’m moving to Zhejiang with my parents, starting Grade Two there next term. Can’t wait to see you! But I’m a bit nervous about my coming school life. Would you mind sharing your middle school experience and giving me some advice?
Hope you’re doing well. Thanks!
Yours,
Max
Dear Max,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
Dear Max,
Glad to hear from you! Yes, exams are keeping me on my toes, but I’m managing. Congratulations on your move to Zhejiang! It’ll be exciting to start a new school here.
Middle school was a mix of challenges and fun for me. At first, I felt a bit nervous, but I quickly found my way by making friends and joining interesting activities in school clubs.
My advice would be to get involved in activities you enjoy—it’s a great way to meet people. Also, hug the cultural differences, which will enrich your experience. You’ll get used to everything soon.
Looking forward to seeing you in Zhejiang!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据信中提到的问题写一封回信,给出自己的建议,注意语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直入主题,引出下文要给出的建议;
第二步,详细介绍自己的中学生活;
第三步,给出建议。
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……的信
②making friends交朋友
③get used to习惯于
④look forward to期待
[高分句型]
① At first, I felt a bit nervous, but I quickly found my way by making friends and joining interesting activities in school clubs.(but表示转折)
②Also, hug the cultural differences, which will enrich your experience.(which引导的定语从句)
③Looking forward to seeing you in Zhejiang!(动名词作宾语)
20.(2024·浙江杭州·一模)英语杂志社Sunday Mail正在开展以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题的英语征文活动。请根据广告中的信息用英语写一篇100 词左右的征文,分享一件你自己认为自豪的事情。开头已给出 (不计词数)。
Articles Wanted
One Thing I’m Proud of
What is the thing you are proud of?
When did it happen and what did you do?
Why does this thing make you feel proud? Or what important lesson did you learn from this thing?
Tell us what you think!
Write an article answering these questions and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
One Thing I’m Proud of
The thing I am proud of is that I visited some old people to make them happy.
It was on a fine autumn afternoon when I was still a teenager. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently under a tall tree in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely. I went to have a chat with her. After our short conversation, I got to know that all the old women’s sons and daughters were far away from her, making their lives in big cities and she felt lonely. I felt sympathetic for her, and I realized that there were actually many old people like her in the village. So a good idea occurred to me suddenly.
I gathered my friends, and organized them to visit these old people one by one. We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy. One of them was so moved that tears fell down. Caring for those around us and passing our happiness to others are what have learnt that day. I made it, and I feel really proud of myself that gave comfort to those who needed most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据所给广告中的信息完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,介绍事情发生的经过;
第三步,介绍这件事为什么使你感到骄傲或者从中学到什么重要的事情以及自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①silently静静地
②have a chat with sb.和某人聊天
③far away from…离……很远
④sympathetic同情的
⑤occur to被想起
[高分句型]
We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
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