内容正文:
求助信
1、 Structure:
第一段(Beginning) : Background +Aim (因.....向对方求助)
第二段(Body): 1.详述问题 2. 提出具体需要的帮助
第三段(Ending):表达感谢
二、Useful and essential expressions:
1. ask sb. for help/ turn to sb. for help 向某人寻求帮助
2. be eager for / long for 渴望得到
3. be eager to do / long to do 渴望做某事
4. be confused about 对....感到困惑
5. be anxious about 对.....感到焦虑/焦急
6. be upset about 对....感到心烦意乱
7. encounter / come across / meet with a problem 遇到一个问题
8. be faced with problems/ difficulties 面对问题/ 困难
9. have difficulty/ trouble (in) doing sth / with sth. 在.....有困难
10. assist sb. in doing / assist sb. to do/ assist sb. with sth. 帮助某人做某事
11. help sb. (to) do / help sb. with sth. 帮助某人做某事
12. give sb. a (helping) hand/ do sb. a favor 给某人帮助
13. offer sb. guidance/ instruction 给....提供指导
14. be busy doing/ engage in / be engaged in 忙于,从事
15. prepare for sth. 为某事做准备
16. focus on/concentrate on 集中精力
17. let sb. down 让某人失望
18. overcome the fear 克服恐惧
三、Useful and essential sentences in each paragraph:
Paragraph 1:
1. Recently, I have difficulty in getting along well with my classmates, which bothers me a lot. Therefore, I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
最近,我在与同学相处方面有困难,这很困扰我。因此,我别无选择,只能向你求助。
2. I find it quite hard to prepare a good resume, so I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.
我发现准备一份好的简历很难,所以我写信是想寻求你的帮助。
3. I’m sorry to bother you, but I meet with some difficulties and I’m writing to turn to you for help.
很抱歉打扰你,但我遇到些困难,所以写信向你求助。
Paragraph 2:
1. Faced with so many difficulties, I’m at a loss and I’m anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on...?
面对如此多的困难,我不知所措,非常渴望得到你的帮助。你能给我一些关于……的建议吗?
2. What bothers me most is that it’s difficult for me to concentrate on my study.
最困扰我的是我很难集中精力学习。
3. I am eager to make greater progress in English, but I don’t know how, which makes me upset, so I long to get your timely help.
我渴望英语有较大进步,但我不知道怎么做,这使我很烦恼。所以我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
4. Would you be so kind as to assist me in preparing an English speech contest?
你能好心帮我准备英语演讲比赛吗?
5. I wonder whether you are so kind as to / kind enough to lend me your notebook.
不知你能不能好心借给我笔记本。
Paragraph 3:
1. I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and spare some time to polish my resume up.
如果你能花点时间帮我修改简历,我将不胜感激。
2. I will be extremely grateful if you can offer me a helping hand and reply to me at your earliest convenience.
如果你能帮我并尽早回复,我会非常感激。
3. Thank you for your kind consideration and I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.
谢谢你的关照,期待尽早收到你的回复。
范文1:
假定你是一名高三学生,你校将举办关于主题为”The Mental Health of Teenagers Deserves Attention.”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一封邮件告知你的外教Steven你要参加这次比赛,并请求帮助。内容包括:
1. 简要介绍比赛情况
2. 请求帮助
Dear Mr.Steven,
I’m Li Hua, a senior three student of yours. Since I am going to participate in an English speech contest, I’m writing to inform you of the news and meanwhile turn to you for some help.
As scheduled, the speech contest whose theme is “The Mental Health of Teenagers Deserves Attention” will be held on October 24th in the lecture hall of our school. As is known to all, senior three students study under great pressure every day. As a result, a lot of mental health issues arise. So it’s essential for us to pay attention to our mental health. Otherwise, it may affect our academic performance or even our overall well-being. Undoubtedly, not only will this event provide us with the chance to practice our speaking skills, but it will also raise our awareness of paying attention to mental health. However, I still have some difficulty in using proper English to express my thoughts and ideas. So I wonder whether it is kind of you to share with me your suggestions concerning it and sharpen my speech draft.
Your timely help will be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your early reply.
范文2 (2021年广州一模):
假定你是高三学生李华。你感到新作文题型——读后续写(extended writing)很具挑战性。请给外教 Mike 写一封信,咨询他的建议。内容包括:
1.写信原因;
2.题型简介;
3.你的困难。
Dear Mike,
I have some difficulty with my English study, so I’d like to turn to you for some advice on it.
Our new writing task, called “extended writing”, requires us to write a reasonable ending to an incomplete story we’re given. Obviously, this is a very open-ended task with multiple possibilities. While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending. I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary. I am eager to make greater progress in English writing, but I don’t know how, which makes me upset, so I long to get your timely help and guidance.
I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and reply to me at your earliest convenience.
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