Unit 6 Writing 课件 2024-2025学年沪教版（2024）七年级英语上册

Lesson 4 Read the passage on page 92 and complete the mind map. Read the passage on page 92 and complete the mind map. Pay attention to the structure and the key points of the passage. Head (Introduction): Hangzhou, a long history, amazing views and delicious food Body (Things to see and to do): A must-see spot: West Lake; local food Ending (Conclusion): I am sure you will love Hangzhou. If you were invited to write a travel guide, what would you write about? Topic: What city or town will you write about? What will you write in your travel guide? Draw a mind-map about the writing structure: Key words and phrases 1. must-see spot 必看景点 Lian Hua Mountain is one of the must-see spots in Shenzhen. 2. in memory of 纪念 They built a park with the hero’s name in memory of him. Now write your travel guide. After you write Tick the chart to check your writing, and then revise it. 问题 是 否 如果为否，如何改进？ 1. 你是否推荐一个旅游地? 2. 你的旅游指南是否在每一段有清晰的主题? 3. 你在旅游指南中是否运用了本单元中学到的单词和短语？ 4. 你的旅游指南在拼写、语法和标点方面是否都正确？ Work in pairs or groups. Give scores to your partner’s or group member’s writing. 评价指标 得分 评分标准 1. 旅游指南是否包含了旅游地的介绍？ 5= Excellent 4= Good 3= Acceptable 2= Needs improvement 2. 旅游指南是否有清晰的开头和结尾？ 3. 旅游指南各段是否有足够的细节支撑？ 4. 旅游指南是否使用了恰当的句型和丰富的词汇？ 5. 旅游指南的拼写、语法和标点是否正确？ Homework 基础作业 1. 在小组内互读作文，用互评表互评作文，选出本组优秀作文。 2. 给自己写的旅游指南适当配上插图。 拓展作业 收集你曾经去过的地方的旅游指南，以及你想去的地方的旅游指南，找出它们的不同，选出你最喜欢的旅游指南，说出原因，与同学交流。 $$