第二章 话题50 尊重生命 保护动物-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语读后续写高分设计word（基础版）

高中英语 读后续写高分设计　基础版 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 There's a park close to my house, with a small lake in one corner that's home to many creatures. Every Sunday morning, I go jogging in this park. As I circle the lake, I notice an elderly woman sitting by the water with a metal cage beside her. Today, my curiosity made me stop and approach her. As I took a closer look, I saw that the cage was actually a small metal trap, and there were a few turtles walking around the trap, unharmed. The lady took one of the turtles in her hands and gently rubbed the shell with a sponge (海绵) brush. I came over to say hello to her politely. “Good morning，” I said, “I come here for jogging every Sunday morning and I see you sitting here by the lake. Please don't mind my curiosity and innocence, but I really want to know what you're doing to the turtles.” The lady smiled and said, “I am cleaning the turtle's shell. Turtles gradually get more and more algae (水藻) and other dirt on their shells, which weighs them down and prevents their swimming abilities. It also reduces their ability to absorb heat. Over time, their shells become weak and rot (腐烂) away.” “Oh wow! That's really thoughtful of you！” I shouted in shock. She continued, “Every Sunday morning, I spend a couple of hours by the lake to relax and help out these little guys stay clean. Strange as it sounds, this is my little way to make a difference in the world.” I thought for a while and said, “But all freshwater turtles have algae and other dirt on their shells. They live with that their whole lives, don't they？” “Yes, sadly, they can't help it，” she replied. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 However, I wasn't completely sure whether it was worthwhile. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 “Can I help you clean the turtles？” I asked the lady.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Step 1　深入语篇，精准理解 1．语篇类型：记叙文 2．关键信息 when I go jogging in the park. what I notice an elderly woman cleaning the turtle's shell. who I (每个星期六锻炼；看到一位老妇人清洗龟壳) ①Every Sunday morning, I go jogging in this park. ②I wanted to know what the elderly woman was doing to__the__turtles. The elderly woman (善良，考虑周到) ①Every Sunday morning, she spends a couple of hours by the lake to relax and help out these little guys stay__clean. ②Strange as it sounds, this is my little way to__make__a__difference in the world. Step 2　理清思路，把握全局 作者晨跑时偶遇一位女士在清洗龟壳，虽然听起来很奇怪，但这是她改变世界的小小方式。作者质疑这样做是否值得，女士告诉作者原因了吗？作者做了什么决定？ Step 3　推动情节，展开续写 1．问题解决 主要的问题/冲突：作者质疑女士帮忙清洗龟壳是否值得？ 合理的解决办法：那位女士的话打动了作者，使作者也决定加入这位女士，和她一起清洗龟壳。 2．情节发展 第一段：作者质疑女士帮忙清理龟壳是否值得→作者很好奇地询问这样做的原因→这位女士解释说是为了让乌龟能够更好地生活 第二段：作者请求一起清洗海龟壳→女士提醒→顺利完成 3．主旨升华 女士小小的善举感动了作者，作者加入了清洗海龟壳的活动，保护了海龟。 Step 4　激活表达，精品输出 1．语言润色 交替运用简单句和复杂句，不但可以增强文章的表现力，而且使文章富有节奏感。例如：“I appreciate your kind efforts, but don't you think your time could be better spent？”。 2．结构衔接 通过使用表示转折或时间顺序的连词或副词，使文章条理清晰，层次分明。例如：“but don't you think your time could be better spent” “then looked up at me and said”。 3．高分范文赏读 However, I wasn't completely sure whether it was worthwhile. “I appreciate your kind efforts, but don't you think your time could be better spent? And 99% of these turtles don't have kind people like you to help them clean off their shells, are your efforts really making an impact？” The lady laughed out loud, then looked up at me and said, “Dear, if this little one could speak, he'd gladly tell you that my care towards him makes a big difference in the world.” Her words made me understand one important lesson in life. Every little act of kindness counts. “Can I help you clean the turtles？” I asked the lady. “Of course, you can，” she nodded and said with pleasure. She taught me patiently and told me how to make the turtles clean again. “You should rub the shell of them gently, otherwise you will hurt them，” she reminded me. I picked up a little turtle, trying to imitate her and using the sponge brush to clean the shell. With the algae and other dirt got rid of, the turtle looked relaxed and joyful. The old woman and I smiled at each other. 写在最后的话： 小小的善举往往能为动物带去温暖和关怀，同时也能感化他人，从而凝聚成巨大的能量。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My aunt Sandy is a very kind－hearted woman. She loves animals so much that she found a job in an emergency vet clinic(兽医诊所) after graduating from college. There she could help a lot of injured pets. One day, a rescue worker brought in a homeless cat. The cat had numerous injuries and needed immediate medical aid. No one in the vet clinic wanted to rescue the cat but Sandy. All the others didn't think the cat would survive. And they suggested putting the cat to death. But Sandy didn't want to give up. She always believes that every animal deserves a chance. Holding the cat in her arms, she was determined to rescue her. Sandy was good at treating injured animals. Thanks to her, the cat survived. She took good care of the cat and she gradually recovered. However, it wasn't the end of the story. Because of the operation performed on her face, the cat always wore a sad expression and looked really ugly. Those who came to the clinic to adopt pets didn't want her. The staff at the vet clinic suggested getting rid of the cat. But Sandy didn't agree. She wanted to adopt the cat herself, but there was a problem—her husband was allergic (过敏) to cats. So Sandy couldn't take her home. Thinking the cat might have to be homeless, Sandy was very sad. She had tried very hard to rescue her so she didn't want to lose her. She tried to persuade people around her to adopt the cat, but they didn't show any interest in such an ugly cat. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 One day, a girl about ten years old entered the vet clinic and looked around. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 However, Sandy just didn't understand why the little girl wanted to have the cat.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。救援人员带来了一只受伤严重的猫，其他人认为应该对猫执行安乐死，只有Sandy (桑迪)决心要救这只猫，但做完手术后，这只猫变得很丑，没有人愿意收养它。一天，诊所来了一个小女孩，她会收养这只小猫吗？Sandy能理解小女孩的行为吗？ [精彩范文] One day, a girl about ten years old entered the vet clinic and looked around. Attracted by the special cat, she held her gently. “Do you like her？” Sandy came up to the girl and asked. To Sandy's surprise, the girl nodded. “Don't you think she's ugly? No one wants to take her home despite the fact that the ugliness is due to an operation to save her life，” Sandy asked. “I want to take care of her，” the girl responded firmly. However, Sandy just didn't understand why the little girl wanted to have the cat. When asked, the girl explained, “My mother told me never to judge a book by its cover, so I don't think we should judge a cat by its appearance. Though she looks ugly, it doesn't mean she doesn't deserve our love. I'll adopt her.” Sandy was so cheerful to meet such a kind－hearted girl. After checking the cat and adding some special details in caring for her, Sandy gratefully and happily handed over the animal. 1．Because of the operation performed on her face, the cat always wore a sad expression and looked really ugly. 译文：因为在她的脸上做了手术，猫总是带着悲伤的表情，看起来真的很丑。 亮点：①because__of后接名词(短语)、代词等作宾语，意为“由于，因为”；②wear a(n) ... expression意为“面带……的表情”。 2．She tried to persuade people around her to adopt the cat, but they didn't show any interest in such an ugly cat. 译文：她试图说服周围的人收养这只猫，但他们对这么丑的猫没有表现出任何兴趣。 亮点：①persuade sb to do sth意为“说服某人做某事”；②adopt意为“收养”；③show__interest__in意为“对……有兴趣；对……表示关心”。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$