第二章 话题45 动物有情 营救主人-【金版教程】2024-2025学年新教材高中英语读后续写高分设计word（基础版）

高中英语 读后续写高分设计　基础版 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·江苏省无锡市高二期末)One day in 1964, my mother came home from work and announced that she had found a pet for the family. My sister asked what it was. My mother said it was a poodle dog named Pepe. I couldn't believe my sister wanted a poodle dog—especially one with such a strange name. But she had made up her mind. Pepe arrived the next night, his short tail bobbing (摆动) happily. I remained distant, thinking poodles should have stayed in France. My sister played with him until bedtime, and he begged for more attention. I ignored him. He was a skilled digger, so our backyard fence wouldn't hold him. We tied him; he pulled out of his collar. We drove stakes (木桩) into the ground; he dug them up. We put a harness on him, staked the ground and tied him to the laundry pole; he was still waiting for me at the front door at the end of the day, smiling happily. Every day, he asked me with his eyes to play with him or take him somewhere. At night, he would wait until I fell asleep, leave his bed by the wall heater and jump onto the end of my bed. One night, I was in a half dream state. Suddenly, my throat and my eyes hurt, and some animal was whining (哀鸣) in my ear. I opened my eyes and saw fog in my room. I wondered who left the window open. Pepe whined and nibbled (咬) on my blouse. Then I woke up and realized that it wasn't fog in my room—it was smoke. I couldn't breathe standing up, so I got down on the floor and crawled beneath the smoke. Pepe followed my every move, his curly－haired stomach struggling on the ground. If I hadn't been so scared, I would have laughed. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 We finally reached in the kitchen, where the smoke was very thick. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 I turned off the burner (炉子) and crawled to open the back door. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Step 1　深入语篇，精准理解 1．语篇类型：记叙文 2．关键信息 when one night what One night, I was in a half dream state. Suddenly, my throat and my eyes hurt, and Pepe was whining in my ear. Pepe whined and nibbled on my blouse. Then I woke__up and realized that it wasn't fog in my room—it was smoke. who Pepe, the pet(活泼，好动，唤醒并营救主人) ①He was a__skilled__digger,__so our backyard fence wouldn't hold him. ②Every day, he asked me with his eyes to play with him or take him somewhere. ③Pepe whined__and__nibbled on my blouse. ④Pepe followed my every move, his curly－haired stomach struggling on the ground. I (忽略Pepe，睡梦中被Pepe唤醒，无法站立呼吸，艰难爬行) ①Pepe begged for more attention. I ignored him. ②One night, I was in a half dream state. Suddenly, my__throat__and__my__eyes__hurt. ③I woke up and realized that it wasn't fog in my room—it was smoke. ④I couldn't breathe__standing__up,__so I got down on the floor and crawled beneath the smoke. Step 2　理清思路，把握全局 作者不喜欢狗，所以刻意与小狗Pepe (佩佩)保持距离。一天晚上，作者被Pepe从睡梦中唤醒，并发现房间里弥漫着烟雾。他们无法站立呼吸，只能趴在地板上爬行。究竟发生了什么事？最后作者和Pepe顺利逃生了吗？ Step 3　推动情节，展开续写 1．问题解决 主要的问题/冲突：熟睡中的作者被小狗Pepe叫醒，房间里浓烟滚滚，他们无法站立呼吸。 合理的解决办法：在Pepe的陪伴下，作者立即采取行动，并和Pepe逃到屋外，消防员及时扑灭大火，作者对Pepe心怀感激。 2．情节发展 第一段：厨房发生火情→Pepe陪伴左右→作者采取行动 第二段：逃到屋外→大火扑灭→作者感悟 3．主旨升华 厨房发生火情，小狗Pepe提前感知并提醒作者，避免了灾难的发生，说明动物也有情，关键时刻能够救主人的生命。 Step 4　激活表达，精品输出 1．语言润色 ①使用无灵主语，增加主语多样性，丰富句式，使语言更具生命力，同时增加表达的客观性。例如：“Panic surged through me as I realized there was a fire.”。 ②通过使用强调句型，有效地突出特定的信息，提升文章的说服力和表达力。例如：“It was then that I understood the true bond that had formed between us.”。 2．结构衔接 通过介词短语衔接上下文，使得上下文过渡自然，让文章更具逻辑性。例如：“In the chaos”“From that day forward”。 3．高分范文赏读 We finally reached the kitchen, where the smoke was very thick. Panic surged through me as I realized there was a fire. In the chaos, Pepe, normally so lively, stood by my side, his eyes reflecting a mix of concern and loyalty. It was then that I understood the true bond that had formed between us. Ignoring my earlier hesitations, I knew I had to act swiftly. The fire was spreading, and the situation demanded quick thinking. I turned off the burner (炉子) and crawled to open the back door. Pepe, sensing the urgency, nudged my hand as if encouraging me to move faster. The smoke was suffocating, but Pepe's presence gave me the strength to persevere. Together, we stumbled out into the fresh air, gasping for breath. As the firefighters arrived to tackle the blaze, I couldn't help but feel grateful for Pepe. He had not only softened my initial resistance but also proved to be an unexpected hero. From that day forward, our connection deepened, and I learned that sometimes, true companionship comes in unexpected forms. 写在最后的话： 动物是人类忠实的朋友，在关键时刻，它们会挺身而出，挡在我们前面，营救我们。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2024·云南省昆明市云南师范大学附属中学高二期末)Just as many families do at a point, Catherine chose to add a new family member by adopting a pet. Shortly after her daughter Kate's birth, Catherine decided she wanted a close bond with a dog for Kate. Thus, Catherine called the dog shelter close by to inquire about adoption. After hearing about the available animals, she chose a Doberman Pinscher. Once they signed adoption papers, they named the dog Khan. Catherine was hopeful this would provide valuable lessons for her baby, such as sharing, learning to love and responsibility to care for animals. She was looking forward to having the dog join the family. Hearing of Khan's rough background, Catherine immediately loved the dog. She was overjoyed to bring this special dog back to her family. Of course, she realized there were obvious risks of bringing a large, potentially dangerous animal to her young baby. But if she had not adopted Khan, he would have been killed just a week later. So, this was Khan's new life and second chance, and the family was hoping for the best. Everything began smoothly. They trained Khan during the first few days. However, something abnormal occurred on that fourth day when the dog acted completely out of character. It was a day that began with the usual playtime in the yard. Although baby Kate had her parents watching from a distance, they did not notice anything out of the ordinary. Kate and the new dog had been making a habit of playing out like this. They were playing merrily with each other. When Catherine raised her eyes to observe the two, she found something unusual. Kate and Khan paused suddenly, not being loud or crazy, and started to run through the backyard grass together. Catherine watched the two even closely. Surprisingly, things had changed within an instant. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Obviously, it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then fell down with dying eyes.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Catherine (凯瑟琳)选了一只杜宾犬作为女儿Kate (凯特)的玩伴，并给它取名Khan (卡恩)。Khan来的第四天，它像往常一样在院子里陪Kate玩耍时突然失控，究竟发生了什么事？Khan和Kate受伤了吗？ [精彩范文] Khan began acting wildly all of a sudden. With her mouth wide open, Catherine watched Khan dragging her child, hoping he would stop. Just as she was wondering how he could suddenly become this way, Khan put down Kate outside the yard. Catherine rushed to Kate and carried her to safety while Khan barked towards the yard wildly. Catherine returned, only to find a poisonous snake crawling in the yard and she drove it away. Obviously, it was Khan who saved her baby but he barked weakly and then fell down with dying eyes. Khan protected Kate from the poisonous creature and was attacked. Although living with the family for merely four days, he became the protector as Catherine had hoped. Catherine rushed Khan to the vet. “May God bless you，” Catherine murmured. The vet tried his best to save him. Eventually, he made it and Catherine shed a tear of relief. 1．With her mouth wide open, Catherine watched Khan dragging her child, hoping he would stop. 译文：凯瑟琳张着嘴，看着卡恩拖着她的孩子，希望他能停下来。 亮点：①with her mouth wide open为with的复合结构(with＋宾语＋宾语补足语)；②dragging her child为现在分词短语作宾语补足语；③hoping ... 为现在分词短语作状语；④he would stop为省略了引导词that的宾语从句。 2．Catherine returned, only to find a poisonous snake crawling in the yard and she drove it away. 译文：凯瑟琳返回院子，却发现一条毒蛇在院子里爬行，她就把它赶走了。 亮点：①only to ... in the yard为动词不定式短语作结果状语；only to do sth意为“结果却做了某事”，表示出乎意料的结果；②crawling in the yard为现在分词短语作宾语补足语；③and连接两个并列句：Catherine returned ... in the yard和she drove it away。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$